Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Shape of Why
orchidee said:
Now don\'t answer this, nor finish the sentence - Why did Popeye........?! lol.
October 12th, 2025 11:43
orchidee said:
Now don\'t answer this, nor finish the sentence - Why did Popeye........?! lol.
October 12th, 2025 11:43
The Shape of Why
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this write starts right off with a puzzle and ends with a powerful statement that love won\'t wait. Emotions come and go unlike logic that only slowly erodes with additions to the puzzle with time.
October 12th, 2025 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical this write starts right off with a puzzle and ends with a powerful statement that love won\'t wait. Emotions come and go unlike logic that only slowly erodes with additions to the puzzle with time.
October 12th, 2025 08:40
The Shape of Why
Keyara S Trotman said:
“The Shape of Why”~ the title itself is mysterious, does it not make you think of letter “y” in itself ?
October 12th, 2025 07:34
Keyara S Trotman said:
“The Shape of Why”~ the title itself is mysterious, does it not make you think of letter “y” in itself ?
October 12th, 2025 07:34
The Shape of Why
Keyara S Trotman said:
I definitely loveeeee your picture choice Mr. Tristan. It represents you. The spiraling, etc it’s 👌🏼🥂. Appreciate your words. Your work here is splendid and inspiring work well done. 👏🏻✨
October 12th, 2025 07:32
Keyara S Trotman said:
I definitely loveeeee your picture choice Mr. Tristan. It represents you. The spiraling, etc it’s 👌🏼🥂. Appreciate your words. Your work here is splendid and inspiring work well done. 👏🏻✨
October 12th, 2025 07:32
imbued illumination
Friendship said:
Initially, this format drove me crazy, but I pushed myself to adapt to it. Although I\'m uncertain about the outcome, your poem skillfully explores themes of isolation, existential questioning, and the complexity of human emotions, particularly in the face of suffering and the pursuit of purity. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the search for understanding in a world that seems indifferent to their plight.
October 12th, 2025 07:17
Friendship said:
Initially, this format drove me crazy, but I pushed myself to adapt to it. Although I\'m uncertain about the outcome, your poem skillfully explores themes of isolation, existential questioning, and the complexity of human emotions, particularly in the face of suffering and the pursuit of purity. The speaker grapples with feelings of despair and the search for understanding in a world that seems indifferent to their plight.
October 12th, 2025 07:17
imbued illumination
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt it was describing how I feel during those extreme emotional short bursts. Some words stretch themselves, finally dissolving into- why were they at all important. I know I got it wrong. But I thought of sharing my unfiltered feeling.
A fave.
October 12th, 2025 07:16
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I felt it was describing how I feel during those extreme emotional short bursts. Some words stretch themselves, finally dissolving into- why were they at all important. I know I got it wrong. But I thought of sharing my unfiltered feeling.
A fave.
October 12th, 2025 07:16
imbued illumination
Paul Bell said:
If you were confessing impure thoughts to the priest, you would be doing hail Marys till the day\'s end.
Just remember, you can look, but you cannot touch, well, not to you put a ring on a finger.
Glad, lookings free.
October 12th, 2025 05:49
Paul Bell said:
If you were confessing impure thoughts to the priest, you would be doing hail Marys till the day\'s end.
Just remember, you can look, but you cannot touch, well, not to you put a ring on a finger.
Glad, lookings free.
October 12th, 2025 05:49
imbued illumination
Doggerel Dave said:
A little like my dreams - after they\'ve been extended, distorted, they are often enjoyable in their own right, so I just accept without understanding.
And so it is here. Though I doffs me cap at the amount of energy it must take to construct one of your word, or rather letter sculptures, Tristan.
October 11th, 2025 15:57
Doggerel Dave said:
A little like my dreams - after they\'ve been extended, distorted, they are often enjoyable in their own right, so I just accept without understanding.
And so it is here. Though I doffs me cap at the amount of energy it must take to construct one of your word, or rather letter sculptures, Tristan.
October 11th, 2025 15:57
imbued illumination
Poetic Licence said:
This is only my take, someone is laughing and mocking at the misery (possibly that they have caused), only to happy to highlight it to everyone. Then seen as damaged goods they walk away, apart from that I have no idea!!. A enjoyable mind bender this one
October 11th, 2025 14:59
Poetic Licence said:
This is only my take, someone is laughing and mocking at the misery (possibly that they have caused), only to happy to highlight it to everyone. Then seen as damaged goods they walk away, apart from that I have no idea!!. A enjoyable mind bender this one
October 11th, 2025 14:59
imbued illumination
orchidee said:
Not now Tom! How did he get on here? lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:03
orchidee said:
Not now Tom! How did he get on here? lol.
October 11th, 2025 13:03
imbued illumination
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting shape and manner of format. As direction changes and one letter runs into another. As the use special characters replace a normal letter they take on new meaning. To an obtuse soul like me a bit obscure. Mind provoking none the less. If I were to put myself in the place of the writer with no one touching impurity I would be left a lonely soul with no human touch.
October 11th, 2025 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting shape and manner of format. As direction changes and one letter runs into another. As the use special characters replace a normal letter they take on new meaning. To an obtuse soul like me a bit obscure. Mind provoking none the less. If I were to put myself in the place of the writer with no one touching impurity I would be left a lonely soul with no human touch.
October 11th, 2025 08:43
Bed of My Beloved
arqios said:
This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you cared” works like a haunting echo, turning tenderness into something macabre. The imagery of coldness, rigor, and ghostly return makes the poem feel like a gothic ballad of love and possession. It’s unsettling, but in the best way possible, the kind of poem that lingers long after reading.
October 10th, 2025 20:25
arqios said:
This piece is chilling and unforgettable and its refrain of “you cared” works like a haunting echo, turning tenderness into something macabre. The imagery of coldness, rigor, and ghostly return makes the poem feel like a gothic ballad of love and possession. It’s unsettling, but in the best way possible, the kind of poem that lingers long after reading.
October 10th, 2025 20:25
Bed of My Beloved
Poetic Licence said:
That is one hell of a way to describe a relationship that died a slow painful death. The coldness and despair that descended on the emotions until everything fell apart. even after experiencing that kind of emotional torment some will still carry the torch of love to their grave and beyond. Right i have finished waffling, great write, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 13:44
Poetic Licence said:
That is one hell of a way to describe a relationship that died a slow painful death. The coldness and despair that descended on the emotions until everything fell apart. even after experiencing that kind of emotional torment some will still carry the torch of love to their grave and beyond. Right i have finished waffling, great write, enjoyed the read
October 10th, 2025 13:44
Bed of My Beloved
Neville said:
I was contemplating trying to poem something witty about form .. but then realised you know far more about that than yours truly .. and so instead I\'ll just nod my head and write Spooky or wot .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤😎now if that aint a murder, I\'ll be flocked .. 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:33
Neville said:
I was contemplating trying to poem something witty about form .. but then realised you know far more about that than yours truly .. and so instead I\'ll just nod my head and write Spooky or wot .. 🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🖤😎now if that aint a murder, I\'ll be flocked .. 👍👍
October 10th, 2025 06:33
Grande Gauleiter of Grotesquery
David Hopkins said:
So appropriate for this day of age and I hope the people hear it well …as everyone needs to acknowledge this bad hair day .
October 9th, 2025 20:55
David Hopkins said:
So appropriate for this day of age and I hope the people hear it well …as everyone needs to acknowledge this bad hair day .
October 9th, 2025 20:55
Bed of My Beloved
Doggerel Dave said:
Tristan -when I first looked, I misread ‘ghazal form’ as ‘ghastly form’ 😅(You said it first!)
Do you need me to acknowledge the amount of sweat, energy and time you put into that, me old mate?
October 9th, 2025 17:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Tristan -when I first looked, I misread ‘ghazal form’ as ‘ghastly form’ 😅(You said it first!)
Do you need me to acknowledge the amount of sweat, energy and time you put into that, me old mate?
October 9th, 2025 17:09
Bed of My Beloved
vicecream said:
i love that the order of reflection/ realization seems to be the reverse of how it happened chronologically. really cool!
October 9th, 2025 11:37
vicecream said:
i love that the order of reflection/ realization seems to be the reverse of how it happened chronologically. really cool!
October 9th, 2025 11:37
Bed of My Beloved
orchidee said:
Ohh, she\'s only swooned really - she read a hot poem! heehee.
October 9th, 2025 09:21
orchidee said:
Ohh, she\'s only swooned really - she read a hot poem! heehee.
October 9th, 2025 09:21
Bed of My Beloved
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this could be called a murder love ballad it has a gothic flavor but at the same time could be taken as totally metaphoric and speaking of the death of the relationship not the person per say . The rigor mortis being nothing more that the stiffness of touch in a cold relationship. the pale and blackening face nothing more that change of emotions on the face of one that is dreading the view of the other or black anger at their continued presence. A relationship where one once cared but no more. Either way it is a descriptive poem of death either of the person or relationship or both. Ghostly indeed. Very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 08:18
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this could be called a murder love ballad it has a gothic flavor but at the same time could be taken as totally metaphoric and speaking of the death of the relationship not the person per say . The rigor mortis being nothing more that the stiffness of touch in a cold relationship. the pale and blackening face nothing more that change of emotions on the face of one that is dreading the view of the other or black anger at their continued presence. A relationship where one once cared but no more. Either way it is a descriptive poem of death either of the person or relationship or both. Ghostly indeed. Very nicely written
October 9th, 2025 08:18
Bed of My Beloved
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the themes of lost love, betrayal, and the haunting nature of memory. It depicts a relationship that has soured, leaving the speaker in a state of despair and emotional coldness, even after death.
October 9th, 2025 07:56
Friendship said:
Well written, your poem explores the themes of lost love, betrayal, and the haunting nature of memory. It depicts a relationship that has soured, leaving the speaker in a state of despair and emotional coldness, even after death.
October 9th, 2025 07:56
Eidolon\'s Estate
NinjaGirl said:
What a cool form! I will need to try sometime. It\'s so intricate and I like it a lot! As for the experience, certainly a message that shows trust issues on one part.
October 8th, 2025 20:21
NinjaGirl said:
What a cool form! I will need to try sometime. It\'s so intricate and I like it a lot! As for the experience, certainly a message that shows trust issues on one part.
October 8th, 2025 20:21
Eidolon\'s Estate
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting dialog where absolute truth only exists in the mind and trust seen by one may be deception seen by another. In fine there is no truth only belief and trust is relative to perception and faith. A lovely wirte Tristan, thought provoking
October 8th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting dialog where absolute truth only exists in the mind and trust seen by one may be deception seen by another. In fine there is no truth only belief and trust is relative to perception and faith. A lovely wirte Tristan, thought provoking
October 8th, 2025 09:34
Eidolon\'s Estate
orchidee said:
Does Popeye know any Eidolons? Dang it, he sneaked in again. We can\'t get rid of him! lol.
October 8th, 2025 09:16
orchidee said:
Does Popeye know any Eidolons? Dang it, he sneaked in again. We can\'t get rid of him! lol.
October 8th, 2025 09:16
Grande Gauleiter of Grotesquery
NafisaSB said:
whether you believe in it or not, it is affecting the lives of those around for sure, and that\'s really scary and sad to note
October 8th, 2025 00:50
NafisaSB said:
whether you believe in it or not, it is affecting the lives of those around for sure, and that\'s really scary and sad to note
October 8th, 2025 00:50
squoting slugs
NinjaGirl said:
I hate slugs...but I love alliteration. And the message, of course. Well done!
October 7th, 2025 12:24
NinjaGirl said:
I hate slugs...but I love alliteration. And the message, of course. Well done!
October 7th, 2025 12:24
squoting slugs
orchidee said:
I missed the 11th one then - wot is it? Probably related to Popeye. In which case, don\'t tell me the 11th one. Oops!
October 7th, 2025 11:22
orchidee said:
I missed the 11th one then - wot is it? Probably related to Popeye. In which case, don\'t tell me the 11th one. Oops!
October 7th, 2025 11:22
squoting slugs
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a putrid group that in their slime of a world of filth proclaim it as the only worthy measure of reality. Well written and nicely worded to give the feel of sticky ooze that it is. Also applies to politicians and rabid followers. A fave my friend
October 7th, 2025 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
A lovely write of a putrid group that in their slime of a world of filth proclaim it as the only worthy measure of reality. Well written and nicely worded to give the feel of sticky ooze that it is. Also applies to politicians and rabid followers. A fave my friend
October 7th, 2025 08:37
squoting slugs
arqios said:
Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain. That’s abuse and misuse.
October 7th, 2025 07:48
arqios said:
Agree totally. It also closely mirrors not taking authority in vain. That’s abuse and misuse.
October 7th, 2025 07:48
Devilishly Dreadful: God Save the Jack
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant write I more than enjoyed, Tristan. With you on your commentary when \'hypocrisy wears a noble mask\" . Not going near the sound cloud...😂😊
October 6th, 2025 18:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Brilliant write I more than enjoyed, Tristan. With you on your commentary when \'hypocrisy wears a noble mask\" . Not going near the sound cloud...😂😊
October 6th, 2025 18:37
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