Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Every Fiber
arqios said:
Sometimes it\'s so curious how history folds into itself as justice unfolds. And without this poem James Reeb would continue to be a lesser known light in the aftermath of the 1965 Bloody Sunday. 🙏🕊️(And it isn\'t just beer spelt backwards)
July 5th, 2026 05:31
arqios said:
Sometimes it\'s so curious how history folds into itself as justice unfolds. And without this poem James Reeb would continue to be a lesser known light in the aftermath of the 1965 Bloody Sunday. 🙏🕊️(And it isn\'t just beer spelt backwards)
July 5th, 2026 05:31
Let Freedom Ring
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Freedom to conform\'. Never a better point made. Each and every word has many different connotations attached to it, and each should be clearly defined, as you have here with \'freedom\'. And to rant on a little - This is where I stumble when reading poetry at times.
Anyway, thanks for a good \'un, Tristan.
July 4th, 2026 21:25
Doggerel Dave said:
\'Freedom to conform\'. Never a better point made. Each and every word has many different connotations attached to it, and each should be clearly defined, as you have here with \'freedom\'. And to rant on a little - This is where I stumble when reading poetry at times.
Anyway, thanks for a good \'un, Tristan.
July 4th, 2026 21:25
Let Freedom Ring
orchidee said:
Good write T. And one says - we knows him - let spinach ring! lol.
July 4th, 2026 11:06
orchidee said:
Good write T. And one says - we knows him - let spinach ring! lol.
July 4th, 2026 11:06
Let Freedom Ring
freyaaa said:
This poem brings a light to a message all need to hear. Definitely a fav
July 4th, 2026 10:27
freyaaa said:
This poem brings a light to a message all need to hear. Definitely a fav
July 4th, 2026 10:27
Let Freedom Ring
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write and a fav, the message rings clear to those willing to hear
July 4th, 2026 09:54
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write and a fav, the message rings clear to those willing to hear
July 4th, 2026 09:54
Let Freedom Ring
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately this poem is all too true. It rings of what little truth remains in a land of the free to comply and no privacy a fave my friend
July 4th, 2026 09:17
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunately this poem is all too true. It rings of what little truth remains in a land of the free to comply and no privacy a fave my friend
July 4th, 2026 09:17
The Right
arqios said:
Reminds me of a street in middle Ohio where a friend took us through their childhood neighbourhood, similar house types and their location was one side coloured and the other side white. It was an eerie excursion, and felt like driving through the location set of Hair Spray. 🙏🕊️
July 3rd, 2026 19:52
arqios said:
Reminds me of a street in middle Ohio where a friend took us through their childhood neighbourhood, similar house types and their location was one side coloured and the other side white. It was an eerie excursion, and felt like driving through the location set of Hair Spray. 🙏🕊️
July 3rd, 2026 19:52
The Right
Doggerel Dave said:
Your white (I mean write) delivers, as you might say, an utterly satirical but complete account of what the many might say, in the US of A, Tristan.
Enjoyed.
July 3rd, 2026 18:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Your white (I mean write) delivers, as you might say, an utterly satirical but complete account of what the many might say, in the US of A, Tristan.
Enjoyed.
July 3rd, 2026 18:36
The Right
Mutley Ravishes said:
Archaix
Has some eye-opening info
On the \"races\"
July 3rd, 2026 10:50
Mutley Ravishes said:
Archaix
Has some eye-opening info
On the \"races\"
July 3rd, 2026 10:50
The Right
Teddy.15 said:
Very powerful and I\'m afraid America is living this moment right now once again. 🌹white Supremes and we all know who\'s to blame.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
Teddy.15 said:
Very powerful and I\'m afraid America is living this moment right now once again. 🌹white Supremes and we all know who\'s to blame.
July 3rd, 2026 10:29
The Right
sorenbarrett said:
We are all trapped within our culture and past. We see black and white and wrong and right, there is no gray. This poem in its repetition is powerful. The rhyme both internal and ending is a mocking of this world view. Very creative Tristan and well done with a powerful message a fave
July 3rd, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
We are all trapped within our culture and past. We see black and white and wrong and right, there is no gray. This poem in its repetition is powerful. The rhyme both internal and ending is a mocking of this world view. Very creative Tristan and well done with a powerful message a fave
July 3rd, 2026 08:30
cursing the prig tree
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the truth hurts the righteous now and again
July 2nd, 2026 13:55
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the truth hurts the righteous now and again
July 2nd, 2026 13:55
cursing the prig tree
sorenbarrett said:
The hypocrisy of what one professes as their belief contrasted with how one lives their life and what they do. It raises both contempt and recognition of our own similarities. Very nicely done Tristan
July 2nd, 2026 08:55
sorenbarrett said:
The hypocrisy of what one professes as their belief contrasted with how one lives their life and what they do. It raises both contempt and recognition of our own similarities. Very nicely done Tristan
July 2nd, 2026 08:55
cursing the prig tree
orchidee said:
We can\'t say we never, ever knew Popeye &Co. We always know them! lol.
July 2nd, 2026 08:38
orchidee said:
We can\'t say we never, ever knew Popeye &Co. We always know them! lol.
July 2nd, 2026 08:38
cursing the prig tree
Salvia.S said:
No notes. Just conviction. That ending will haunt the right people. Keep writing truth like this. Well done dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 07:49
Salvia.S said:
No notes. Just conviction. That ending will haunt the right people. Keep writing truth like this. Well done dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 2nd, 2026 07:49
cursing the prig tree
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem addresses issues of social isolation, misunderstanding, and the superficiality of some expressions of faith. The juxtaposition between the shy individual\'s reality and the harsh judgments of others serves as a focal point for the poem\'s critique of societal attitudes.
July 2nd, 2026 07:47
Friendship said:
Lovely written. Your poem addresses issues of social isolation, misunderstanding, and the superficiality of some expressions of faith. The juxtaposition between the shy individual\'s reality and the harsh judgments of others serves as a focal point for the poem\'s critique of societal attitudes.
July 2nd, 2026 07:47
Oh Dear!
orchidee said:
And Wait. What? A sound of Mr P Solus, a certain glugging sound.....lol. What ARE we talking about? WCAT!
July 1st, 2026 11:00
orchidee said:
And Wait. What? A sound of Mr P Solus, a certain glugging sound.....lol. What ARE we talking about? WCAT!
July 1st, 2026 11:00
Oh Dear!
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this is quite a story in poetic form told in the first person that makes it more impactful. It takes us on a journey from the animal point of view personified. The reader is placed in the position of thinking how they would feel being invaded by another species their home taken, property altered and young killed. It provokes a sense of empathy and reflection upon what we are doing and have done to nature. It is brutal as nature and soft as maternal love. Well written it in metaphor tells us of what we are doing to ourselves, making the earth more dangerous and killing ourselves with our self perceived progress. A most powerful write my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:01
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this is quite a story in poetic form told in the first person that makes it more impactful. It takes us on a journey from the animal point of view personified. The reader is placed in the position of thinking how they would feel being invaded by another species their home taken, property altered and young killed. It provokes a sense of empathy and reflection upon what we are doing and have done to nature. It is brutal as nature and soft as maternal love. Well written it in metaphor tells us of what we are doing to ourselves, making the earth more dangerous and killing ourselves with our self perceived progress. A most powerful write my friend.
July 1st, 2026 09:01
Oh Dear!
arqios said:
Fern and deer seem to go together in any scenario. But don’t mind me. Just a random thought.🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2026 08:12
arqios said:
Fern and deer seem to go together in any scenario. But don’t mind me. Just a random thought.🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2026 08:12
Oh Dear!
Teddy.15 said:
Wait what???? Kudos love Sonnet and theses are fabulous 👏👏👏👏❤️
July 1st, 2026 07:41
Teddy.15 said:
Wait what???? Kudos love Sonnet and theses are fabulous 👏👏👏👏❤️
July 1st, 2026 07:41
damn
Mutley Ravishes said:
Your teeth and bones are going to rot too! You\'re f......!
June 30th, 2026 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Your teeth and bones are going to rot too! You\'re f......!
June 30th, 2026 18:58
damn
Paul Bell said:
I tried being a man, but the council slapped me down with a fine, and now I must identify as number 97.
Got a feeling even tinkerbell is heading foir the hills.
June 30th, 2026 11:42
Paul Bell said:
I tried being a man, but the council slapped me down with a fine, and now I must identify as number 97.
Got a feeling even tinkerbell is heading foir the hills.
June 30th, 2026 11:42
damn
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the whole theme of Peter Pan was a boy that would not grow up. The idea of being a man is foiled by this. Tinkerbell the symbolism of imagination and the wonder of imagination of childhood. Peanut butter a childhood staple and the idea of it being stuck in a labeled can brings the thought of how we are all stuck with labels that we can not escape. So with all this how does one become a man? The note of her being a ginger speaks to creativity and passion, being unique and fiery. Damn is that an expression of disdain or a condition damned to this state? Very nice my friend
June 30th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the whole theme of Peter Pan was a boy that would not grow up. The idea of being a man is foiled by this. Tinkerbell the symbolism of imagination and the wonder of imagination of childhood. Peanut butter a childhood staple and the idea of it being stuck in a labeled can brings the thought of how we are all stuck with labels that we can not escape. So with all this how does one become a man? The note of her being a ginger speaks to creativity and passion, being unique and fiery. Damn is that an expression of disdain or a condition damned to this state? Very nice my friend
June 30th, 2026 08:30
damn
orchidee said:
A mild title compared to my poem beginning \'Ohh, F, F, and F\' and furthermore \'Grrr, F, F, F, and F\'! And Fido\'s ears are burning now. Tone it down, he says! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:27
orchidee said:
A mild title compared to my poem beginning \'Ohh, F, F, and F\' and furthermore \'Grrr, F, F, F, and F\'! And Fido\'s ears are burning now. Tone it down, he says! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:27
damn
Thomas W Case said:
A hard swerve into absurdity, like identity slipping on a banana peel and landing in a punchline you didn’t plan.
It’s messy, funny, and a little desperate—the kind of humor that shows up when things stop making sense.
June 30th, 2026 08:25
Thomas W Case said:
A hard swerve into absurdity, like identity slipping on a banana peel and landing in a punchline you didn’t plan.
It’s messy, funny, and a little desperate—the kind of humor that shows up when things stop making sense.
June 30th, 2026 08:25
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