Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



no thing
Friendship said:

Your poem beautifully captures the transformative journey of self-acceptance, illuminating the struggle for validation and the liberating realization that true worth emerges from embracing one\'s authentic self, tapping into themes of identity, vulnerability, and the profound desire for meaningful connection.๐Ÿ™โค๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน

July 8th, 2026 12:07

no thing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

we cant change our nature, nor should we my friend

July 8th, 2026 11:52

no thing
Paul Bell said:

I think we spend our life reinventing ourselves.
January the 1st, is our ultimate reinventing time, usually finished by January the 2nd.
Why are we never content.

July 8th, 2026 11:27

no thing
orchidee said:

A Mr P Solus poem is: \'Something\' - a 3,476 verse poem on spinach, of course! lol.

July 8th, 2026 10:12

no thing
sorenbarrett said:

So much time spent on being something that we are not when all we need to realize is that we are who we are and though we may polish it the stone is set with its flaws and beauty. Well written my friend

July 8th, 2026 08:56

no thing
Demar Desu said:

All we need is you TRL, exactly how God made you

July 8th, 2026 08:15

no thing
Teddy.15 said:

The problem is you tried in the first place, being you is what makes you special! ๐ŸŒน

July 8th, 2026 07:26

no thing
arqios said:

And you are to those that truly accept you all that you ever need to be. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 8th, 2026 06:46

every. single. day
Friendship said:

Your poem resonates deeply as a profound journey of self-discovery intertwined with unbridled optimism, and yet, it inspires a sense of hopeful anticipation within me. You eloquently convey a powerful message of unwavering hope and resilience, gently reminding readers that even amidst life\'s darkest moments, there is always a radiant possibility of joy and illumination on the horizon.

July 7th, 2026 21:15

every. single. day
arqios said:

everyday, my friend. S.A.D. has been somewhat turbulent this winter/year ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ

July 7th, 2026 14:38

every. single. day
orchidee said:

Yes, and every single day, Popeye says \'Spinach, please!\' lol.

July 7th, 2026 09:35

every. single. day
sorenbarrett said:

A poem that to me says there is light at the end of the tunnel that beyond the darkness there is hope. Well written my friend.

July 7th, 2026 09:04

every. single. day
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

every cloud has a silver lining my friend

July 7th, 2026 08:23

mountain fox
Thomas W Case said:

Thereโ€™s a lonely weight in these few lines, capturing that strange feeling of being caught between leaving and belonging.
The cardboard mountain is a powerful imageโ€”temporary walls holding the heavy search for a place to finally call home.

July 7th, 2026 07:58

mountain fox
arqios said:

All i could think of was poor old Captain Hook! โฐ

July 6th, 2026 22:25

mountain fox
Kevin Hulme said:

Moving can be Traumatic. Like this.

July 6th, 2026 18:36

mountain fox
Friendship said:

Well written. Your poem is about your own experience of being out of place or disconnected from a sense of home. The imagery you painted of a \"cardboard mountain fox\" suggests fragility and artificiality, emphasizing themes of impermanence and the longing for stability amid the relentless passage of time. I am here for you, my friend. Hang in there, it will work out over time.โค๏ธ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŒน๐Ÿ™


July 6th, 2026 16:43

mountain fox
Syd said:

Hi Tristan, this is quite clever. I really like it.

I had to read it twice, then I read your absence note. After that, the penny dropped, and scrolling further down confirmed that the poem was about moving house and packing your life away into cardboard boxes.

I\'ve only ever moved once in my adult life, and it was incredibly stressful. I don\'t envy you at all.

A very clever, concise poem.

โ€“ Syd ๐Ÿ„

July 6th, 2026 15:21

mountain fox
Paul Bell said:

You label those boxes to make things easy at the other side.
Yet for some reason, cutlery isn\'t in the box marked cutlery, and nothing else is either.
Stressed out already.

July 6th, 2026 13:42

mountain fox
sorenbarrett said:

Whether those boxes are your moving or for shipping they do have clocks ticking. The transient life of person or belongings is a stress. Well done my friend.

July 6th, 2026 12:13

damn
NafisaSB said:

Will she ever be released ๐Ÿค”nice one

July 6th, 2026 11:38

mountain fox
Teddy.15 said:

Time stands still for no man nor fox. ๐ŸŒน

July 6th, 2026 10:25

mountain fox
orchidee said:

Good write T.

July 6th, 2026 09:49

mountain fox
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend

July 6th, 2026 08:45

Every Fiber
GenXer Sharon ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ€ said:

A path one walks alone. To lay oneโ€™s life down. A beautiful write.

July 5th, 2026 16:17

Every Fiber
orchidee said:

Good write T. That\'ll be \'fibre\' (fib-ree) in the UK. Every fibre of Popeye filled with spinach! lol.

July 5th, 2026 10:19

Every Fiber
Thomas W Case said:

Powerful and poignant.

July 5th, 2026 07:51

Every Fiber
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

all martyrs live on. great write

July 5th, 2026 05:39

Every Fiber
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful poem of giving all, which is what is required to resurrect for until one lays down the old (body or beliefs) no new can arise. Raising the old creates a zombie it takes the fire of destruction of the old to raise a phoenix. The symbolism of Christ required crucifixion and death for there to be a resurrection. All martyrs must die literally or metaphorically to be one. Nicely written my friend

July 5th, 2026 05:35

Every Fiber
arqios said:

Sometimes it\'s so curious how history folds into itself as justice unfolds. And without this poem James Reeb would continue to be a lesser known light in the aftermath of the 1965 Bloody Sunday. ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ•Š๏ธ(And it isn\'t just beer spelt backwards)

July 5th, 2026 05:31

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