Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Breathtaking
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating. Where the opening lines seemed promising a hopeful end, how the tale unfolds a dire spectacle which tugs at the soul thinking in chagrin to fly off into the ether, tying it down securely to the earth, nay, dragging it below in lieu of above until despair eats at complacency. Curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you for sharing.
February 13th, 2025 11:45
Breathtaking
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan such an engaging poem the raising tide and sand. I have felt that before but not to that extent. When sand starts to envelop the feet and water raises it becomes unnerving. Your form is most interesting and the theme seems one of being enveloped. This seems a slow process that at first is quite plesent and then becomes too much. Very nicely done
February 13th, 2025 11:05
Breathtaking
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
NinjaGirl said:
This is beautiful! And yes, who would\'ve guessed you\'d make a new form... haha! I love the creativity!
February 13th, 2025 09:16
The Window Between
Cheeky Missy said:
Are they stone statues?! Has Jaedis, the fabled White Witch of Narnia, visited ere the darling got to the window, leaving but echoes of what was, and nary breath of life?! The use of a refrain hammers home the deadly reality delineated while the answer hangs unresolved. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 14:19
Cheeky Missy said:
Are they stone statues?! Has Jaedis, the fabled White Witch of Narnia, visited ere the darling got to the window, leaving but echoes of what was, and nary breath of life?! The use of a refrain hammers home the deadly reality delineated while the answer hangs unresolved. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
February 12th, 2025 14:19
The Window Between
teardrop said:
This brought tears to my eyes. Maybe I am sensitive but it breaks my heart to se a dog oor any animal hurt or be abused. What is sad it there are people out there that actually do this. I\'m a firm believer, you get an animal, they become family no matter what. Some people don;t deserve pets. Again, great write. Hope your day is going good.
February 12th, 2025 12:30
teardrop said:
This brought tears to my eyes. Maybe I am sensitive but it breaks my heart to se a dog oor any animal hurt or be abused. What is sad it there are people out there that actually do this. I\'m a firm believer, you get an animal, they become family no matter what. Some people don;t deserve pets. Again, great write. Hope your day is going good.
February 12th, 2025 12:30
The Window Between
orchidee said:
From one angle in the picture it looks like the window is open! But a terrible situation in reality.
February 12th, 2025 11:36
orchidee said:
From one angle in the picture it looks like the window is open! But a terrible situation in reality.
February 12th, 2025 11:36
The Window Between
Poetic Licence said:
It should never to animals but equally i think this is about people as well, and how we all to easily banish and cast aside. Poignant and i feel touching read that makes a needed point. Enjoyed the poetry.
February 12th, 2025 10:25
Poetic Licence said:
It should never to animals but equally i think this is about people as well, and how we all to easily banish and cast aside. Poignant and i feel touching read that makes a needed point. Enjoyed the poetry.
February 12th, 2025 10:25
The Window Between
sorenbarrett said:
Exclusion like banishment more sever than a death sentece has been used from time immemorial as the harshist of punishments. Even now in prisons solitary confinement, being put in the hole is reserved for the greatest of offenses. We and dogs are social animals and need contact with our own. A heart wrenching read.
February 12th, 2025 09:42
sorenbarrett said:
Exclusion like banishment more sever than a death sentece has been used from time immemorial as the harshist of punishments. Even now in prisons solitary confinement, being put in the hole is reserved for the greatest of offenses. We and dogs are social animals and need contact with our own. A heart wrenching read.
February 12th, 2025 09:42
The Window Between
Caring dove said:
That’s sad .. animals should never be neglected or discarded like their nothing .
Good writing ..
Makes me feel sorry for the dog .. probably feels sad and unloved
February 12th, 2025 09:39
Caring dove said:
That’s sad .. animals should never be neglected or discarded like their nothing .
Good writing ..
Makes me feel sorry for the dog .. probably feels sad and unloved
February 12th, 2025 09:39
Turbulence
arqios said:
Hope your to and from from your holiday was turbulence free... and that you are just using this as a symbol/metaphor! Good to have you back here at MPS🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 17:33
arqios said:
Hope your to and from from your holiday was turbulence free... and that you are just using this as a symbol/metaphor! Good to have you back here at MPS🙏🏻🕊️
February 11th, 2025 17:33
Turbulence
Poetic Licence said:
Too many aeroplanes and not enough runways to land, enjoyed the read
February 11th, 2025 12:44
Poetic Licence said:
Too many aeroplanes and not enough runways to land, enjoyed the read
February 11th, 2025 12:44
Turbulence
Cassie58 said:
This poem conjures up many different images in my mind. It also evokes emotions of recent events. Full of metaphor it was a great read. Good to see you are back after your hols Tristen. Hope you had a fabulous time dear poet.
February 11th, 2025 12:07
Cassie58 said:
This poem conjures up many different images in my mind. It also evokes emotions of recent events. Full of metaphor it was a great read. Good to see you are back after your hols Tristen. Hope you had a fabulous time dear poet.
February 11th, 2025 12:07
Turbulence
aDarkerMind said:
dont worry abot the landing Tristan.
keep flying, keep writing....
and enjoy the applause my friend.
February 11th, 2025 11:01
aDarkerMind said:
dont worry abot the landing Tristan.
keep flying, keep writing....
and enjoy the applause my friend.
February 11th, 2025 11:01
Turbulence
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor. Our mind flies from place to place often through dangerous thoughts and there is no landing with some thoughts only a crash. Nicely done
February 11th, 2025 09:33
sorenbarrett said:
What a great metaphor. Our mind flies from place to place often through dangerous thoughts and there is no landing with some thoughts only a crash. Nicely done
February 11th, 2025 09:33
Midwinter Vacation
Simurgh said:
I enjoyed it truly, what a wonderful twist of words!!
Wait for my haiku, coming after few hours only.
February 10th, 2025 08:58
Simurgh said:
I enjoyed it truly, what a wonderful twist of words!!
Wait for my haiku, coming after few hours only.
February 10th, 2025 08:58
Midwinter Vacation
Simurgh said:
Wonderful haiku, Tristan!!
Much appreciated.🌹🌹❤️
With regards
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 10th, 2025 08:56
Simurgh said:
Wonderful haiku, Tristan!!
Much appreciated.🌹🌹❤️
With regards
Simurgh
A poetic bard from India
February 10th, 2025 08:56
The Man I Cannot Hear
teardrop said:
Excellent write of lonliness (if I read this right) Love your format, made it interesting even more. Thanks for the read, I truly enjoyed it.
February 10th, 2025 03:05
teardrop said:
Excellent write of lonliness (if I read this right) Love your format, made it interesting even more. Thanks for the read, I truly enjoyed it.
February 10th, 2025 03:05
Depth of Height
Simurgh said:
Beautiful Haiku that instantly touched my poetic self, Tristan!❤️🌹🌹
Excellent work here. Much appreciated!
With regards,
Simurgh
February 9th, 2025 08:36
Simurgh said:
Beautiful Haiku that instantly touched my poetic self, Tristan!❤️🌹🌹
Excellent work here. Much appreciated!
With regards,
Simurgh
February 9th, 2025 08:36
The Gaza Plaza
Simurgh said:
Very relevant poem in the present context. Wonderfully executed words, beautiful Tristan! I enjoyed reading your poem.
Dangerous and insane proposals for Gaza by Donald Trump is perfect madness.
They are trying to create the world of haters. Alas! What a pity!
Happy holiday my friend. Hope you enjoy your time!
February 7th, 2025 03:31
Simurgh said:
Very relevant poem in the present context. Wonderfully executed words, beautiful Tristan! I enjoyed reading your poem.
Dangerous and insane proposals for Gaza by Donald Trump is perfect madness.
They are trying to create the world of haters. Alas! What a pity!
Happy holiday my friend. Hope you enjoy your time!
February 7th, 2025 03:31
The Gaza Plaza
Doggerel Dave said:
A shout, a scream. Should be more of it, Tristan.
February 6th, 2025 01:28
Doggerel Dave said:
A shout, a scream. Should be more of it, Tristan.
February 6th, 2025 01:28
The Gaza Plaza
NinjaGirl said:
Yes of course, the most logical thing is to just take over the Gaza strip and turn it into part of the U.S....
February 5th, 2025 18:48
NinjaGirl said:
Yes of course, the most logical thing is to just take over the Gaza strip and turn it into part of the U.S....
February 5th, 2025 18:48
The Gaza Plaza
Mutley Ravishes said:
Don Orange and Sleepy Joe
Put on a show
Called \"Triumphant Road to Woe\"
Who\'s willing to follow
Them into arms
Of Ahri____?
Great write, Tristan
February 5th, 2025 18:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
Don Orange and Sleepy Joe
Put on a show
Called \"Triumphant Road to Woe\"
Who\'s willing to follow
Them into arms
Of Ahri____?
Great write, Tristan
February 5th, 2025 18:32
The Gaza Plaza
Cassie58 said:
A well executed poem dear Tristen. I think Trumps suggestions for Gaza are madness and should be executed too. (In a different way). Whatever is he thinking of? Happy holiday my friend.
February 5th, 2025 15:05
Cassie58 said:
A well executed poem dear Tristen. I think Trumps suggestions for Gaza are madness and should be executed too. (In a different way). Whatever is he thinking of? Happy holiday my friend.
February 5th, 2025 15:05
The Gaza Plaza
arqios said:
Like a political correspondent living in dangerous times! Gives the feel of a real Indiana Jones, minus the archeology ✌🏼🕊️
February 5th, 2025 12:49
arqios said:
Like a political correspondent living in dangerous times! Gives the feel of a real Indiana Jones, minus the archeology ✌🏼🕊️
February 5th, 2025 12:49
The Gaza Plaza
Poetic Licence said:
There is no hope for the criminally insane !!!, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 10:37
Poetic Licence said:
There is no hope for the criminally insane !!!, enjoyed the read
February 5th, 2025 10:37
The Gaza Plaza
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim Jones, David Koresh or savior god. What need fixing are the supporters that are willing to follow fanatics into hell. A heart felt write
February 5th, 2025 10:33
sorenbarrett said:
Unfortunatly you can\'t fix stupid especially when they follow a Jim Jones, David Koresh or savior god. What need fixing are the supporters that are willing to follow fanatics into hell. A heart felt write
February 5th, 2025 10:33
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