Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Enough
Thad Wilk said:
👏 👏 Clapping!
Living can sometimes
be rough! 😔
Like the
hope filled ending and
that you found, you were enough! 😀
Eloquently expressed my friend!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 24th, 2024 17:09
Thad Wilk said:
👏 👏 Clapping!
Living can sometimes
be rough! 😔
Like the
hope filled ending and
that you found, you were enough! 😀
Eloquently expressed my friend!💯
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 24th, 2024 17:09
Enough
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and thank goodness for your last line as you are definitely enough, and then some. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:32
Teddy.15 said:
Superb and thank goodness for your last line as you are definitely enough, and then some. 🌹
November 24th, 2024 10:32
Enough
Caring dove said:
I wrote poem the other day about feeling insecure and not enough .. yeah we can all feel like that sometimes, I think
A well written poem like how it started off with ‘ not being enough ‘ to realising she is enough
November 24th, 2024 07:47
Caring dove said:
I wrote poem the other day about feeling insecure and not enough .. yeah we can all feel like that sometimes, I think
A well written poem like how it started off with ‘ not being enough ‘ to realising she is enough
November 24th, 2024 07:47
Enough
arqios said:
Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking, otherwise all other things are fleeting and inessential.
November 24th, 2024 07:35
arqios said:
Only to me and that is the sad point where a sharedness can be lacking, otherwise all other things are fleeting and inessential.
November 24th, 2024 07:35
Enough
sorenbarrett said:
Greed versus gratitude has always been a continual strife. This is nicely expressed in this poem and as well resolved by finding one self as enough. Well expressed.
November 24th, 2024 07:24
sorenbarrett said:
Greed versus gratitude has always been a continual strife. This is nicely expressed in this poem and as well resolved by finding one self as enough. Well expressed.
November 24th, 2024 07:24
First
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you, Tristan I appreciate so much your comments. They are very helpful.
November 23rd, 2024 19:05
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you, Tristan I appreciate so much your comments. They are very helpful.
November 23rd, 2024 19:05
First
Teddy.15 said:
LOL so creative and as i almost only ever write in free verse I say I absolutely love this. Kudos a very creative piece. ☘️ 💙
November 23rd, 2024 17:35
Teddy.15 said:
LOL so creative and as i almost only ever write in free verse I say I absolutely love this. Kudos a very creative piece. ☘️ 💙
November 23rd, 2024 17:35
First
orchidee said:
There\'s a little bridge called Troll Bridge, but I\'ve not seen one yet! lol.
November 23rd, 2024 12:57
orchidee said:
There\'s a little bridge called Troll Bridge, but I\'ve not seen one yet! lol.
November 23rd, 2024 12:57
First
Neville said:
This would appear crammed with truths that I am not afraid to admit I share .. 👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:47
Neville said:
This would appear crammed with truths that I am not afraid to admit I share .. 👍
November 23rd, 2024 10:47
First
arqios said:
The digital word processor saved me! Actual physical pages always challenge me to first time perfection, to write only when I was at the point of a near polished draft, never earlier than that. Your success and situation is enviable!
November 23rd, 2024 08:34
arqios said:
The digital word processor saved me! Actual physical pages always challenge me to first time perfection, to write only when I was at the point of a near polished draft, never earlier than that. Your success and situation is enviable!
November 23rd, 2024 08:34
Personal Paroxysm
Thad Wilk said:
A terrorIFIC chain of
haiku\'s thank you!! 👍
Love the 4th one,
so hope filled and
uplifting too!! 🙏
Much enjoyed poet!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 22nd, 2024 17:58
Thad Wilk said:
A terrorIFIC chain of
haiku\'s thank you!! 👍
Love the 4th one,
so hope filled and
uplifting too!! 🙏
Much enjoyed poet!! 💯
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 22nd, 2024 17:58
Personal Paroxysm
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Doggerel Dave said:
Salutations for great haikus, their interconnectedness and the account of the process they convey. 👍
November 22nd, 2024 16:57
Personal Paroxysm
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
Cassie58 said:
Give me the serenity, the rest is too mind blowing. I don’t fancy the lava fllows after seeing stuff on Pompeii. Having said that, your haikus are awesome Tristan.
November 22nd, 2024 15:56
Personal Paroxysm
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life, a wonderful thing well expressed in this poem
November 22nd, 2024 12:46
sorenbarrett said:
The cycle of life, a wonderful thing well expressed in this poem
November 22nd, 2024 12:46
Personal Paroxysm
orchidee said:
Good write T. To pinch a poet\'s saying (not plagiarising though): \'You can beat an egg, but can ya beat a bit of... a paroxysm?\' [Or fill in blank of whatever you wish]. I\'m talking utter rubbish now. lol.
November 22nd, 2024 09:32
orchidee said:
Good write T. To pinch a poet\'s saying (not plagiarising though): \'You can beat an egg, but can ya beat a bit of... a paroxysm?\' [Or fill in blank of whatever you wish]. I\'m talking utter rubbish now. lol.
November 22nd, 2024 09:32
Personal Paroxysm
arqios said:
Pyroclastic displays are both awe-inspiring and terrifying in the same breath!
November 22nd, 2024 09:04
arqios said:
Pyroclastic displays are both awe-inspiring and terrifying in the same breath!
November 22nd, 2024 09:04
Architecture of Artifice
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Bravo!
Wow, powerful penning my friend!
Much enjoyed beginning to end. 👍
I loved the rhyme, the flow and blend.
Much praise I send, much praise I send.💯
Rock on poet!! ✌️ Thad
November 22nd, 2024 00:02
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Bravo!
Wow, powerful penning my friend!
Much enjoyed beginning to end. 👍
I loved the rhyme, the flow and blend.
Much praise I send, much praise I send.💯
Rock on poet!! ✌️ Thad
November 22nd, 2024 00:02
Architecture of Artifice
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows what to believe anymore. Whether the Internet, social media national news, all affected ending infected. Nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 22:56
sorenbarrett said:
No one knows what to believe anymore. Whether the Internet, social media national news, all affected ending infected. Nicely written.
November 21st, 2024 22:56
Architecture of Artifice
Doggerel Dave said:
Prompts are something I\'ve never felt inclined to try. Can you convince me? Inspiration? Extension of the poetic muscle? Quite possibly it would save me from the need to scratch up a lengthy piece proclaiming my muse is AWOL...\' Interesting write Tristan.
November 21st, 2024 17:36
Doggerel Dave said:
Prompts are something I\'ve never felt inclined to try. Can you convince me? Inspiration? Extension of the poetic muscle? Quite possibly it would save me from the need to scratch up a lengthy piece proclaiming my muse is AWOL...\' Interesting write Tristan.
November 21st, 2024 17:36
Architecture of Artifice
Neville said:
Do you know what Tristan .. I have a ton of respect for anyone that sets themself a task, or who agrees to stick withing the parameters of a given task set by someone else and goes on to achieve it like you have so obviously done here .. I wouldn\'t even dare attempt it .. so please accept these from me 👍👍
November 21st, 2024 11:41
Neville said:
Do you know what Tristan .. I have a ton of respect for anyone that sets themself a task, or who agrees to stick withing the parameters of a given task set by someone else and goes on to achieve it like you have so obviously done here .. I wouldn\'t even dare attempt it .. so please accept these from me 👍👍
November 21st, 2024 11:41
CHANGE
NinjaGirl said:
it\'s interesting - one cannot just want something to be better without working to change it, but many of us think that way
November 20th, 2024 22:37
NinjaGirl said:
it\'s interesting - one cannot just want something to be better without working to change it, but many of us think that way
November 20th, 2024 22:37
CHANGE
sorenbarrett said:
Change what most people find most difficult yet in nature, it is constantly occurring. A beautiful poem, Tristan.
November 20th, 2024 19:54
sorenbarrett said:
Change what most people find most difficult yet in nature, it is constantly occurring. A beautiful poem, Tristan.
November 20th, 2024 19:54
INTENTIONS
Hanna_love said:
Вау, ви гарно пишете, тут закладено дуже глибокий сенс. Основний посил, ймовірно, полягає в тому, що егоїзм, невігластво і відсутність глибокого розуміння того, що відбувається навколо можуть призвести до морального та соціального занепаду та руйнівних наслідків суспільству. Браво!👏
November 20th, 2024 16:12
Hanna_love said:
Вау, ви гарно пишете, тут закладено дуже глибокий сенс. Основний посил, ймовірно, полягає в тому, що егоїзм, невігластво і відсутність глибокого розуміння того, що відбувається навколо можуть призвести до морального та соціального занепаду та руйнівних наслідків суспільству. Браво!👏
November 20th, 2024 16:12
CHANGE
Neville said:
I must congratulate you on completion of the task you set for yourself .. not an easy one I\'m sure maybe you could make it an annual event .. we sure as hell could use some good advice and pointing in the write direction .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 08:17
Neville said:
I must congratulate you on completion of the task you set for yourself .. not an easy one I\'m sure maybe you could make it an annual event .. we sure as hell could use some good advice and pointing in the write direction .. Neville
November 20th, 2024 08:17
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