Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Nigrum Pactum
orchidee said:
Me again - ooh!
I\'m not keen on \'dark\' genre poems myself, or at least I\'m not keen on writing in that genre. Not that I\'m \'holier than thou\' or \'super-spiritual\' but I start to feel uneasy or even a bit unwell if I dwell on \'dark\' things too much.
I suspect the devil is some beautiful being, though his is the kingdom of darkness. If he was ugly, we wouldn\'t be drawn to him but would run from him.
May 25th, 2025 09:54
orchidee said:
Me again - ooh!
I\'m not keen on \'dark\' genre poems myself, or at least I\'m not keen on writing in that genre. Not that I\'m \'holier than thou\' or \'super-spiritual\' but I start to feel uneasy or even a bit unwell if I dwell on \'dark\' things too much.
I suspect the devil is some beautiful being, though his is the kingdom of darkness. If he was ugly, we wouldn\'t be drawn to him but would run from him.
May 25th, 2025 09:54
Nigrum Pactum
orchidee said:
Ohh, it\'s only a relative of Darth Vader - or Obi! heehee.
Ahh, and a bit of French there - Nigrum wotsit. lol.
May 25th, 2025 09:38
orchidee said:
Ohh, it\'s only a relative of Darth Vader - or Obi! heehee.
Ahh, and a bit of French there - Nigrum wotsit. lol.
May 25th, 2025 09:38
Nigrum Pactum
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly welcome back hope all is well now and you have clearly been busy. A dark, satanic and incredibly deep read, this has alot to digest and for me needs many readings, I think you say back with a bang, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 09:32
Poetic Licence said:
Firstly welcome back hope all is well now and you have clearly been busy. A dark, satanic and incredibly deep read, this has alot to digest and for me needs many readings, I think you say back with a bang, wonderful write
May 25th, 2025 09:32
Nigrum Pactum
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem is highly complex in structure and meaning. I love the most artistic forms used in its lettering and flow they add a great deal of interest. The forward and backward reading is quite mystic and satanic as is the embedded which is common as a secretive form of magic meaning. Very nicely written
May 25th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem is highly complex in structure and meaning. I love the most artistic forms used in its lettering and flow they add a great deal of interest. The forward and backward reading is quite mystic and satanic as is the embedded which is common as a secretive form of magic meaning. Very nicely written
May 25th, 2025 08:21
Scars Like Fathers
Isabella Morgan said:
I very much like how this is written and how it is expressed that they only matured to be as bad as the adults that led them there. An excellent read!
May 20th, 2025 09:35
Isabella Morgan said:
I very much like how this is written and how it is expressed that they only matured to be as bad as the adults that led them there. An excellent read!
May 20th, 2025 09:35
Springtime Silence Stirs
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember Joseph Campbell saying one of Life\'s first commands is to feed on itself. The beauty of nature, and the horror!
May 16th, 2025 22:52
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember Joseph Campbell saying one of Life\'s first commands is to feed on itself. The beauty of nature, and the horror!
May 16th, 2025 22:52
Springtime Silence Stirs
sorenbarrett said:
A sequel and then a trilogy it is difficult to defeat trauma. Another good write Tristan
May 16th, 2025 11:08
sorenbarrett said:
A sequel and then a trilogy it is difficult to defeat trauma. Another good write Tristan
May 16th, 2025 11:08
Springtime Silence Stirs
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the write, wishing you well on your journey to recovery, take care
May 16th, 2025 10:47
Poetic Licence said:
Really enjoyed the write, wishing you well on your journey to recovery, take care
May 16th, 2025 10:47
Springtime Silence Stirs
orchidee said:
Erm, don\'t reply at length to this - Good write Popeye (?), erm Tristan! From Ken - I forget my surname. 😁
May 16th, 2025 10:10
orchidee said:
Erm, don\'t reply at length to this - Good write Popeye (?), erm Tristan! From Ken - I forget my surname. 😁
May 16th, 2025 10:10
Springtime\'s Maw
orchidee said:
Oh dear, poor things! Bit like our guinea pigs. I best not name them, erm, Popeye or Obi! 😁
May 15th, 2025 11:37
orchidee said:
Oh dear, poor things! Bit like our guinea pigs. I best not name them, erm, Popeye or Obi! 😁
May 15th, 2025 11:37
Springtime\'s Maw
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a sad and touching tale, but written so well, allowing us to clearly see how it happened. Hope the survivor went on to have a happy life, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
That\'s a sad and touching tale, but written so well, allowing us to clearly see how it happened. Hope the survivor went on to have a happy life, enjoyed the read
May 15th, 2025 09:51
Springtime\'s Maw
Teddy.15 said:
Stephen King in the woods your imagery is flawless, nature can really shake us up, but that\'s what makes it some enchanting. 🌹
May 15th, 2025 09:06
Teddy.15 said:
Stephen King in the woods your imagery is flawless, nature can really shake us up, but that\'s what makes it some enchanting. 🌹
May 15th, 2025 09:06
Springtime\'s Maw
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of tragic sadness from a human point of view of nature and its cycle that in our limited perspective seems unjust where nature\'s perspective is much broader. A lovly write Tristan.
May 15th, 2025 08:59
sorenbarrett said:
Another poem of tragic sadness from a human point of view of nature and its cycle that in our limited perspective seems unjust where nature\'s perspective is much broader. A lovly write Tristan.
May 15th, 2025 08:59
Springtime\'s Maw
arqios said:
I could feel the mum’s shock and grief the whole way. Crafted to moisten cheeks🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 08:57
arqios said:
I could feel the mum’s shock and grief the whole way. Crafted to moisten cheeks🙏🏻🕊️
May 15th, 2025 08:57
The Carousel of Critics
Dan Williams said:
I can only hope you are right about it ceasing. Politicians are, after all, professional liars.
May 15th, 2025 00:43
Dan Williams said:
I can only hope you are right about it ceasing. Politicians are, after all, professional liars.
May 15th, 2025 00:43
Springtime Silence
arqios said:
A moment alive, Spring\'s tender whisper breathes new. Wesley\'s paws, soft on Verdant blades—his world begins.
A break in the air, Scent shifts. Shadows swell heavy, Instinct falters.
Jaws crush the soft dawn, Rapture\'s song, devoured whole. Silence consumes day.
May 14th, 2025 16:56
arqios said:
A moment alive, Spring\'s tender whisper breathes new. Wesley\'s paws, soft on Verdant blades—his world begins.
A break in the air, Scent shifts. Shadows swell heavy, Instinct falters.
Jaws crush the soft dawn, Rapture\'s song, devoured whole. Silence consumes day.
May 14th, 2025 16:56
The Carousel of Critics
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh so clever, actually opinions are worth everything and nothing depending of the person recieving the words. Personally I have learnt that the people I\'ve met in London are the same as in Italy, different accents but the same ways. Such a fun and interesting subject 🌹
May 14th, 2025 16:38
Teddy.15 said:
lol oh so clever, actually opinions are worth everything and nothing depending of the person recieving the words. Personally I have learnt that the people I\'ve met in London are the same as in Italy, different accents but the same ways. Such a fun and interesting subject 🌹
May 14th, 2025 16:38
Springtime Silence
Muse of Calliope said:
Oh no! How sad for the poor little groundhog family 😢 I love the chameleon cantos form though! ✨
May 14th, 2025 11:20
Muse of Calliope said:
Oh no! How sad for the poor little groundhog family 😢 I love the chameleon cantos form though! ✨
May 14th, 2025 11:20
Springtime Silence
orchidee said:
Tricky to \'like\' this in a way, if you see what I mean, erm, Obi, erm Tristan! :)
May 14th, 2025 11:16
orchidee said:
Tricky to \'like\' this in a way, if you see what I mean, erm, Obi, erm Tristan! :)
May 14th, 2025 11:16
Springtime Silence
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened with my dog that used to root up moles and bring them to me and once he killed a racoon. My cat would bring in birds and baby rabbits. Sad but it is nature. Loved the poem Tristan
May 14th, 2025 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
This has happened with my dog that used to root up moles and bring them to me and once he killed a racoon. My cat would bring in birds and baby rabbits. Sad but it is nature. Loved the poem Tristan
May 14th, 2025 10:36
The Carousel of Critics
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of the criticism cycle! Your words hit hard and resonate.
May 14th, 2025 09:31
Salvia.S said:
Powerful critique of the criticism cycle! Your words hit hard and resonate.
May 14th, 2025 09:31
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