Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Caged Dancers
sorenbarrett said:
I’d rather dark poem with a utopian almost feel. Well written and somewhat mine puzzling.
November 10th, 2024 12:10
sorenbarrett said:
I’d rather dark poem with a utopian almost feel. Well written and somewhat mine puzzling.
November 10th, 2024 12:10
CHILDREN
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat and concise is something I can handle - many thanks.
Sometimes it does happen, children act on their judgement, and thus we have progress, but improvements forward are patchy in the extreme.
November 9th, 2024 15:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Neat and concise is something I can handle - many thanks.
Sometimes it does happen, children act on their judgement, and thus we have progress, but improvements forward are patchy in the extreme.
November 9th, 2024 15:58
CHILDREN
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought that’s all too true well written and nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing.
November 9th, 2024 15:30
sorenbarrett said:
A frightening thought that’s all too true well written and nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing.
November 9th, 2024 15:30
CHILDREN
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome Acrostic
poem, strong feelings
and message indeed! 💯
Short yet succinct
and my pleasure to read!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 9th, 2024 12:57
Thad Wilk said:
An awesome Acrostic
poem, strong feelings
and message indeed! 💯
Short yet succinct
and my pleasure to read!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ peace. Thad
November 9th, 2024 12:57
ANTICHRIST
MR.apocalypse said:
no fight ever is just one sided. no atack is without meaning. common opinions are the ones that are the most misguided
November 8th, 2024 14:58
MR.apocalypse said:
no fight ever is just one sided. no atack is without meaning. common opinions are the ones that are the most misguided
November 8th, 2024 14:58
ANTICHRIST
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
and thought provoking i\'d say!! 🤔
Awesome presentation,
just blew me away! 💯
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 8th, 2024 14:56
Thad Wilk said:
Powerful penning
and thought provoking i\'d say!! 🤔
Awesome presentation,
just blew me away! 💯
Much enjoyed my friend!! 👍
Best regards ✌️ Thad
November 8th, 2024 14:56
ANTICHRIST
orchidee said:
I don\'t know what we gonna do now that they\'ve trusted someone that has such a dodgy hairstyle. Doh!
November 8th, 2024 12:55
orchidee said:
I don\'t know what we gonna do now that they\'ve trusted someone that has such a dodgy hairstyle. Doh!
November 8th, 2024 12:55
ANTICHRIST
Neville said:
Very cleva & on so very many different levels .. sign of the times .. perhaps .. Nice one sir T ..
November 8th, 2024 12:36
Neville said:
Very cleva & on so very many different levels .. sign of the times .. perhaps .. Nice one sir T ..
November 8th, 2024 12:36
ANTICHRIST
Teddy.15 said:
Brilliant and powerful, I\'ve never been one to follow the crowd, sometimes making me an easy target but most times keeping myself real and in control, which keeps the power in my pocket, evil can to take everything if you let it. Kudos. 🌹
November 8th, 2024 12:28
Teddy.15 said:
Brilliant and powerful, I\'ve never been one to follow the crowd, sometimes making me an easy target but most times keeping myself real and in control, which keeps the power in my pocket, evil can to take everything if you let it. Kudos. 🌹
November 8th, 2024 12:28
ANTICHRIST
sorenbarrett said:
This has the most classical field to it. It seems to have come right out of a Treaties. I love the dark, feel of it and it rings of poetry.
November 8th, 2024 12:20
sorenbarrett said:
This has the most classical field to it. It seems to have come right out of a Treaties. I love the dark, feel of it and it rings of poetry.
November 8th, 2024 12:20
TYRANT
Dan Williams said:
This accurately describes the chaos I am sometimes quite certain, hoping for fiction.Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:20
Dan Williams said:
This accurately describes the chaos I am sometimes quite certain, hoping for fiction.Well done.
November 8th, 2024 01:20
Frayed Feelings
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing quite like expression taking the form thus given here. Fascinating and a tad intriguing. Very interesting. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:33
Cheeky Missy said:
Nothing quite like expression taking the form thus given here. Fascinating and a tad intriguing. Very interesting. Thank you for sharing.
November 7th, 2024 20:33
Frayed Feelings
NinjaGirl said:
I like the use of more than just the art of writing
November 7th, 2024 20:06
NinjaGirl said:
I like the use of more than just the art of writing
November 7th, 2024 20:06
TYRANT
Doggerel Dave said:
Wilful ignorance and no fear - yet! Yes: Tyrant.
Thanks for the short polished truth.
PS: I would not mind in the least to be proven wrong!
November 6th, 2024 15:37
Doggerel Dave said:
Wilful ignorance and no fear - yet! Yes: Tyrant.
Thanks for the short polished truth.
PS: I would not mind in the least to be proven wrong!
November 6th, 2024 15:37
TYRANT
sorenbarrett said:
Timely and what all fear we will have to wait and see. Hope things go better than I fear. An ominus write
November 6th, 2024 13:50
sorenbarrett said:
Timely and what all fear we will have to wait and see. Hope things go better than I fear. An ominus write
November 6th, 2024 13:50
The ABCs of SAD
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious and real, I would say - ahh, a bad hair day then?! lol (oops).
November 6th, 2024 03:26
orchidee said:
If it wasn\'t so serious and real, I would say - ahh, a bad hair day then?! lol (oops).
November 6th, 2024 03:26
The ABCs of SAD
NafisaSB said:
hopefully better days will follow - the circle is still not complete
good write, even if so sombre
November 6th, 2024 00:06
NafisaSB said:
hopefully better days will follow - the circle is still not complete
good write, even if so sombre
November 6th, 2024 00:06
The ABCs of SAD
NinjaGirl said:
it wasn\'t until X when I realized what you were doing! very clever! I specifically appreciate that you didn\'t use the letter once, but sometimes twice as well for alliteration\'s sake. butterflies of dread and fearful flutters certainly sound relatable, though in this season i\'d say sickly spiders, I think it feels as though spiders are in my own body--crawling everywhere. a bit less gentle than butterflies :)
November 5th, 2024 21:24
NinjaGirl said:
it wasn\'t until X when I realized what you were doing! very clever! I specifically appreciate that you didn\'t use the letter once, but sometimes twice as well for alliteration\'s sake. butterflies of dread and fearful flutters certainly sound relatable, though in this season i\'d say sickly spiders, I think it feels as though spiders are in my own body--crawling everywhere. a bit less gentle than butterflies :)
November 5th, 2024 21:24
The ABCs of SAD
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Wow what a captivating,
poignant 😢 and dark
alphabet poem indeed!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed and
a real delight to read!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 5th, 2024 17:42
Thad Wilk said:
👏👏 Clapping!
Wow what a captivating,
poignant 😢 and dark
alphabet poem indeed!! ⭐⭐⭐
Brilliantly composed and
a real delight to read!!
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
November 5th, 2024 17:42
The ABCs of SAD
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a bad day. Graphic images of depression fill this piece and give it a darkness like midnight.
November 5th, 2024 14:32
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a bad day. Graphic images of depression fill this piece and give it a darkness like midnight.
November 5th, 2024 14:32
Non-Event Horizon
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great approach to get a bigger picture as the distance is increased and what was at first seen as something different now becomes clear as something else.Ingenious
November 4th, 2024 04:29
sorenbarrett said:
This was a great approach to get a bigger picture as the distance is increased and what was at first seen as something different now becomes clear as something else.Ingenious
November 4th, 2024 04:29
Non-Event Horizon
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
orchidee said:
I was \'The Birdman\' until I flew into a black hole! lol.
November 4th, 2024 03:20
Terzenelle of Turmoil
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
sorenbarrett said:
I think that all of us at one time or another have felt this way. The poem itself leads to this conclusion as the perfect rhyme ends in the last line deliberately not rhymed. Good write Tristan
November 3rd, 2024 03:46
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