Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Catalyst
Poetic Licence said:
It is in all of us, some don\'t know until provoke, some are scared of it and some enjoy it, have enjoyed another trip to the dark side.
March 19th, 2025 09:20
Poetic Licence said:
It is in all of us, some don\'t know until provoke, some are scared of it and some enjoy it, have enjoyed another trip to the dark side.
March 19th, 2025 09:20
Catalyst
arqios said:
That was like looking deep into my soul, so intricately worded. Had to remind myself to breathe 🙏🏻🕊
March 19th, 2025 08:07
arqios said:
That was like looking deep into my soul, so intricately worded. Had to remind myself to breathe 🙏🏻🕊
March 19th, 2025 08:07
Surrounded by Stones
Salvia.S said:
A profound poem that humorously highlights the human quest for meaning and connection, even in the face of indifference. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 07:42
Salvia.S said:
A profound poem that humorously highlights the human quest for meaning and connection, even in the face of indifference. Well written!
March 19th, 2025 07:42
Surrounded by Stones
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write that works on so many levels. Surrounded by stones, as you say. Nicely done.
March 19th, 2025 04:25
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write that works on so many levels. Surrounded by stones, as you say. Nicely done.
March 19th, 2025 04:25
Surrounded by Stones
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m sure the rock people are appreciative of you talking to them!
March 18th, 2025 18:49
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m sure the rock people are appreciative of you talking to them!
March 18th, 2025 18:49
Surrounded by Stones
arqios said:
A very curious feeling arises out of this situation with the stones 🙏🏻🕊
March 18th, 2025 15:59
arqios said:
A very curious feeling arises out of this situation with the stones 🙏🏻🕊
March 18th, 2025 15:59
Surrounded by Stones
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write i correlate it to people, a bunch sitting around with no care for anyone except themselves, and if they had any empathy they would be to scared to tell the rock, enjoyed this very much
March 18th, 2025 11:04
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write i correlate it to people, a bunch sitting around with no care for anyone except themselves, and if they had any empathy they would be to scared to tell the rock, enjoyed this very much
March 18th, 2025 11:04
Surrounded by Stones
orchidee said:
How do they do acting, some of these actors/actresses? It\'s like talking to wood. Wooden acting. heehee.
March 18th, 2025 10:57
orchidee said:
How do they do acting, some of these actors/actresses? It\'s like talking to wood. Wooden acting. heehee.
March 18th, 2025 10:57
Surrounded by Stones
aDarkerMind said:
there\'s enough here to keep my mind fully occupied for a week Tristan!
a write to applaud and savour.
and as Tony said, an excellent write;
March 18th, 2025 09:47
aDarkerMind said:
there\'s enough here to keep my mind fully occupied for a week Tristan!
a write to applaud and savour.
and as Tony said, an excellent write;
March 18th, 2025 09:47
Surrounded by Stones
sorenbarrett said:
You already advised that it can not be interpreted and yet my mind keeps working in futility. Stones, rocks so much like people with no empathy and apathetic no mouth. Just sitting and taking it. A thought provoking write Tristan
March 18th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
You already advised that it can not be interpreted and yet my mind keeps working in futility. Stones, rocks so much like people with no empathy and apathetic no mouth. Just sitting and taking it. A thought provoking write Tristan
March 18th, 2025 09:10
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that the \"Celtic Christianity\" practiced in Ireland before the \"Roman\" version was introduced was of a different hue to the later version. so many mysteries!
March 17th, 2025 18:35
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read that the \"Celtic Christianity\" practiced in Ireland before the \"Roman\" version was introduced was of a different hue to the later version. so many mysteries!
March 17th, 2025 18:35
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
whats write for me said:
That is truly great prose Tristan, magnificent!
March 17th, 2025 16:39
whats write for me said:
That is truly great prose Tristan, magnificent!
March 17th, 2025 16:39
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, more especially since I never yet have heard why there\'s such a character as \"saint Patrick,\" just knew we celebrated him annually. Why I thought joining in the festivities was worthwhile is owing to my propensity to love nearly any excuse for a party. Thank you for giving me a perspective. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a definitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and intriguing, more especially since I never yet have heard why there\'s such a character as \"saint Patrick,\" just knew we celebrated him annually. Why I thought joining in the festivities was worthwhile is owing to my propensity to love nearly any excuse for a party. Thank you for giving me a perspective. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a definitely haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 17th, 2025 16:10
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is certainly an alternative vision of St Patrick to the others i have read today, an interesting take on history and myth.
March 17th, 2025 08:35
Poetic Licence said:
Well that is certainly an alternative vision of St Patrick to the others i have read today, an interesting take on history and myth.
March 17th, 2025 08:35
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
arqios said:
Now that is a poem for St Patrick’s, my one went the opposite direction, lol☘️
March 17th, 2025 07:51
arqios said:
Now that is a poem for St Patrick’s, my one went the opposite direction, lol☘️
March 17th, 2025 07:51
Saint Patrick\'s Brood
sorenbarrett said:
A spear through the saint\'s heart. A pome to elucidate the fabricated myth where like tigers driven from the arctic, snakes were driven from an isle. Maybe it was culture put by Catholic enchanters in the form of a snake that was driven out. A great read from the other side on this day
March 17th, 2025 07:49
sorenbarrett said:
A spear through the saint\'s heart. A pome to elucidate the fabricated myth where like tigers driven from the arctic, snakes were driven from an isle. Maybe it was culture put by Catholic enchanters in the form of a snake that was driven out. A great read from the other side on this day
March 17th, 2025 07:49
Heart of Deception
Cheeky Missy said:
With echoes of Poe\'s familiar Tell-Tale Heart, too pointedly by the by, this unravels its devilish story with a modern spin on the same. Excellently rendered with graphic imagery and a demonic poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:15
Cheeky Missy said:
With echoes of Poe\'s familiar Tell-Tale Heart, too pointedly by the by, this unravels its devilish story with a modern spin on the same. Excellently rendered with graphic imagery and a demonic poignancy which grapples for the soul. Thank you for sharing.
March 16th, 2025 12:15
Give and Take
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s an unsettling reality to grapple with, this seeming recognition we\'ve been deceived and following what or whom was false. And the beauty of the printed page is what cannot quite be expressed as effectively in spoken words. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:22
Cheeky Missy said:
It\'s an unsettling reality to grapple with, this seeming recognition we\'ve been deceived and following what or whom was false. And the beauty of the printed page is what cannot quite be expressed as effectively in spoken words. Excellently rendered with grand imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 15th, 2025 19:22
Heart of Deception
Poetic Licence said:
It goes from Quincy, columbo to Jack the ripper in a really dark write.a gruesome story however it raises several points and questions as you are drawn into the read, worth all the work
March 15th, 2025 12:05
Poetic Licence said:
It goes from Quincy, columbo to Jack the ripper in a really dark write.a gruesome story however it raises several points and questions as you are drawn into the read, worth all the work
March 15th, 2025 12:05
Heart of Deception
orchidee said:
It\'s such a dark poem, I can\'t see to read it. Doh!
March 15th, 2025 10:26
orchidee said:
It\'s such a dark poem, I can\'t see to read it. Doh!
March 15th, 2025 10:26
Heart of Deception
sorenbarrett said:
The first shape appeared the box the second the half eaten heart. The work has elements of Poe, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, and Jack the Ripper. A gruesome story with a meaning. Metaphor galore in this piece. Vivid imagery and nicely worded it pulls the reader on.
March 15th, 2025 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
The first shape appeared the box the second the half eaten heart. The work has elements of Poe, Sir Arthur Conan Doyle, and Jack the Ripper. A gruesome story with a meaning. Metaphor galore in this piece. Vivid imagery and nicely worded it pulls the reader on.
March 15th, 2025 07:35
Heart of Deception
arqios said:
The shape of this poem is quite enticing 🙏🏻🕊📦💔
March 15th, 2025 06:36
arqios said:
The shape of this poem is quite enticing 🙏🏻🕊📦💔
March 15th, 2025 06:36
Adoration\'s Eyes
Caring dove said:
An engaging and nicely expressed poem .. I liked the read .. I like how you have repeated certain words in this
Love the line ‘ my eyes are adoration.
my adoration eyes
Meet her deep and loving gaze.
A lovely poem
March 14th, 2025 17:42
Caring dove said:
An engaging and nicely expressed poem .. I liked the read .. I like how you have repeated certain words in this
Love the line ‘ my eyes are adoration.
my adoration eyes
Meet her deep and loving gaze.
A lovely poem
March 14th, 2025 17:42
The Devil\'s Design
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all have sinned, and come short of the glory of God;...the wages of sin is death; but the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord.\" (Rom 3:23;6:23) Eerily sinister and rendered to effect with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:04
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...all have sinned, and come short of the glory of God;...the wages of sin is death; but the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord.\" (Rom 3:23;6:23) Eerily sinister and rendered to effect with haunting imagery and a damning poignancy, thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 13:04
light & shadow
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I caught Cynthia perched high overhead ere dawn revealed her lover, knowing she would be at her peak momentarily, forgetting by then to seek her when she truly was. Argh. Thank you for reminding me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Dang! I caught Cynthia perched high overhead ere dawn revealed her lover, knowing she would be at her peak momentarily, forgetting by then to seek her when she truly was. Argh. Thank you for reminding me. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:56
Caged in Lilacs
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to reality, we are crowning thee with the laudable bays, take thy seat? [Funny that was the prompt, my close friend\'s original doubtless spurred it.] Exquisitely rendered with gorgeous imagery and an intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:54
Cheeky Missy said:
Welcome to reality, we are crowning thee with the laudable bays, take thy seat? [Funny that was the prompt, my close friend\'s original doubtless spurred it.] Exquisitely rendered with gorgeous imagery and an intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
March 14th, 2025 12:54
Caged in Lilacs
orchidee said:
Are you a wooden actor, like in some TV shows? lol.
March 14th, 2025 12:12
orchidee said:
Are you a wooden actor, like in some TV shows? lol.
March 14th, 2025 12:12
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