Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh. I\'m with Tony (above) here. I have a frozen right shoulder which sends my head and kneck to the riight where they get buffeted by a permant twitch.
Lighten up a little, please Tristan...🙃
October 1st, 2026 20:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Yeh. I\'m with Tony (above) here. I have a frozen right shoulder which sends my head and kneck to the riight where they get buffeted by a permant twitch.
Lighten up a little, please Tristan...🙃
October 1st, 2026 20:39
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Tony Grannell said:
Enough of this now, Tristan, I nearly soiled myself. Yoy\'re too good at this, such horror, a creeping horror and no let up, no popcorn break. I\'m out of here!
Fond regards from under the bed,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:13
Tony Grannell said:
Enough of this now, Tristan, I nearly soiled myself. Yoy\'re too good at this, such horror, a creeping horror and no let up, no popcorn break. I\'m out of here!
Fond regards from under the bed,
Tony.
October 1st, 2026 15:13
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year again when the heavy machine gun comes out.
They keep saying you can\'t kill a Zombie, but that doesn\'t mean I shouldn\'t try.
Mind you, could kill them with sugar with the amount of sweeties they get.
October 1st, 2026 14:34
Paul Bell said:
Is it that time of the year again when the heavy machine gun comes out.
They keep saying you can\'t kill a Zombie, but that doesn\'t mean I shouldn\'t try.
Mind you, could kill them with sugar with the amount of sweeties they get.
October 1st, 2026 14:34
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Teddy.15 said:
Move over blare witch project here come Tristan 🤣 what a spooky read my friend. Loved your ending it\'s hilarious! 🌹
October 1st, 2026 13:24
Teddy.15 said:
Move over blare witch project here come Tristan 🤣 what a spooky read my friend. Loved your ending it\'s hilarious! 🌹
October 1st, 2026 13:24
The Last Trick-or-Treater
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s in on it too of course, with the green stuff - spinach - and scaring us with glugging sounds! lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:17
orchidee said:
Popeye\'s in on it too of course, with the green stuff - spinach - and scaring us with glugging sounds! lol.
October 1st, 2026 09:17
The Last Trick-or-Treater
arqios said:
Oh it’s that month again. The shops are beginning to display their ghoulish stock, again!
October 1st, 2026 08:13
arqios said:
Oh it’s that month again. The shops are beginning to display their ghoulish stock, again!
October 1st, 2026 08:13
The Last Trick-or-Treater
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn nasty Halloween turn here, because the poem keeps shifting the reader’s perception from ordinary shadows and tricks of the dark toward something increasingly personal and genuinely horrifying. The final reveal is the killer—after all the red eyes, dead voices, and green teeth, discovering that the thing on the porch is the very person he buried gives the whole poem one hell of a satisfying, macabre snap.
October 1st, 2026 07:53
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn nasty Halloween turn here, because the poem keeps shifting the reader’s perception from ordinary shadows and tricks of the dark toward something increasingly personal and genuinely horrifying. The final reveal is the killer—after all the red eyes, dead voices, and green teeth, discovering that the thing on the porch is the very person he buried gives the whole poem one hell of a satisfying, macabre snap.
October 1st, 2026 07:53
The Last Trick-or-Treater
sorenbarrett said:
The question Tristan is whether the one buried is friend or foe, a real or imagined soul, one once out or within. A lovely start to that month of Halloween
October 1st, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
The question Tristan is whether the one buried is friend or foe, a real or imagined soul, one once out or within. A lovely start to that month of Halloween
October 1st, 2026 07:42
The Last Trick-or-Treater
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I bet theres a few under the porches my friend, enjoyed
October 1st, 2026 07:36
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I bet theres a few under the porches my friend, enjoyed
October 1st, 2026 07:36
anyway
arqios said:
Much like the anticlimax and the antihero, the anti-celebration! 👍🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 17:51
arqios said:
Much like the anticlimax and the antihero, the anti-celebration! 👍🏻🕊️
September 30th, 2026 17:51
the fading
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
the fading
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
the fading
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
the fading
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
the fading
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
anyway
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
anyway
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
When celebrated, lionized even, if one suffers from a lack of self confidence no applause can totally be accepted, there must be some mistake, some lie, white or otherwise creeping about. An intriguing passage, cleverly composed with your own stamp of uniqueness. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
When celebrated, lionized even, if one suffers from a lack of self confidence no applause can totally be accepted, there must be some mistake, some lie, white or otherwise creeping about. An intriguing passage, cleverly composed with your own stamp of uniqueness. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:28
anyway
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. Welcome to reality. [Frankly, methinks I still prefer the oldie: https://youtu.be/yXoiRi6RP_k?is=b9zYen0utldPcbSV] You now make me wonder whether that is simply the predicament of--? I dunno. Beautifully rendered with a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 29th, 2026 13:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. Welcome to reality. [Frankly, methinks I still prefer the oldie: https://youtu.be/yXoiRi6RP_k?is=b9zYen0utldPcbSV] You now make me wonder whether that is simply the predicament of--? I dunno. Beautifully rendered with a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 29th, 2026 13:32
anyway
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning word cry escalates the emotion of this piece and depending on how you read it means there is at least one that cheers one on or alone and the cheer comes only from oneself. Or it is a tearful cry that one is alone. Sad it seems.
September 29th, 2026 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning word cry escalates the emotion of this piece and depending on how you read it means there is at least one that cheers one on or alone and the cheer comes only from oneself. Or it is a tearful cry that one is alone. Sad it seems.
September 29th, 2026 10:18
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Corruption is always ptotected
September 28th, 2026 18:34
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Corruption is always ptotected
September 28th, 2026 18:34
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
Friendship said:
Well-written story. Your story revolves around themes of betrayal, revenge, and the complexities of morality. The narrator, who has been wronged and abused, navigates through feelings of anger and empowerment as they confront a figure who has caused them harm. Yet the story delves into the darker sides of human relationships, especially betrayal and manipulation within a corrupt system, while also exploring the struggle for identity and agency in a world full of deceit.
September 28th, 2026 13:07
Friendship said:
Well-written story. Your story revolves around themes of betrayal, revenge, and the complexities of morality. The narrator, who has been wronged and abused, navigates through feelings of anger and empowerment as they confront a figure who has caused them harm. Yet the story delves into the darker sides of human relationships, especially betrayal and manipulation within a corrupt system, while also exploring the struggle for identity and agency in a world full of deceit.
September 28th, 2026 13:07
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
Paul Bell said:
If only they did get killed in the end, it would be fitting.
Sadly they all seem to live forever, always protected by the same people as themselves.
Power, always the ultimate orgasm.
September 28th, 2026 09:53
Paul Bell said:
If only they did get killed in the end, it would be fitting.
Sadly they all seem to live forever, always protected by the same people as themselves.
Power, always the ultimate orgasm.
September 28th, 2026 09:53
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