Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Devilishly Dreadful: The Boy Detective; or, the Crimes of the Collective
orchidee said:
Ahh good - violence, transphobia...... etc. Doh! Written in one go, or in parts? Did any glugging distract you? lol.
October 5th, 2026 10:36
orchidee said:
Ahh good - violence, transphobia...... etc. Doh! Written in one go, or in parts? Did any glugging distract you? lol.
October 5th, 2026 10:36
Devilishly Dreadful: The Boy Detective; or, the Crimes of the Collective
sorenbarrett said:
A strong and powerful write my friend about church and state intertwine. Separated by founding fathers based on past history of problems in this area it is now brought back to reality. One\'s values imposed on another under the auspice of God\'s will is a problem especially for those that don\'t believe in God. Well done my friend.
October 5th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
A strong and powerful write my friend about church and state intertwine. Separated by founding fathers based on past history of problems in this area it is now brought back to reality. One\'s values imposed on another under the auspice of God\'s will is a problem especially for those that don\'t believe in God. Well done my friend.
October 5th, 2026 07:45
Hooking the Looking Glass
2781 said:
It reminds me of the parable of the tares.
I do believe our forefathers used nursery rhymes to ween the children though.
October 4th, 2026 09:12
2781 said:
It reminds me of the parable of the tares.
I do believe our forefathers used nursery rhymes to ween the children though.
October 4th, 2026 09:12
No Polite Society
orchidee said:
Wasn\'t it like that in some places in olden days - the priests were screened off; congregation couldn\'t see a thing. We know - they were secretly having a spinach party with Popeyeus & Co! lol.
October 4th, 2026 08:39
orchidee said:
Wasn\'t it like that in some places in olden days - the priests were screened off; congregation couldn\'t see a thing. We know - they were secretly having a spinach party with Popeyeus & Co! lol.
October 4th, 2026 08:39
No Polite Society
Paul Bell said:
History tells us, white man speak with a fork in his tongue, usually sponsored by others from the silver cutlery brigade.
Slavery built cities and no reparations will ever change that.
21st century, has the class system changed any.
Some might say the negro wears a suit now, but he would really need a million suits to catch up with his slavers.
October 4th, 2026 07:54
Paul Bell said:
History tells us, white man speak with a fork in his tongue, usually sponsored by others from the silver cutlery brigade.
Slavery built cities and no reparations will ever change that.
21st century, has the class system changed any.
Some might say the negro wears a suit now, but he would really need a million suits to catch up with his slavers.
October 4th, 2026 07:54
No Polite Society
Lorenz said:
There\'s no discrimination at the witching hour ! every one is welcome at black sabbath !
October 4th, 2026 07:01
Lorenz said:
There\'s no discrimination at the witching hour ! every one is welcome at black sabbath !
October 4th, 2026 07:01
No Polite Society
arqios said:
Reminds me of 12 years a slave with the blatant misuse of Bible Passages to justify immoral treatment of slaves.
October 4th, 2026 06:44
arqios said:
Reminds me of 12 years a slave with the blatant misuse of Bible Passages to justify immoral treatment of slaves.
October 4th, 2026 06:44
No Polite Society
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of discrimination that still persists in many even a president that feels all Hispanics are Mexicans and of a lower class of human than whites. Nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
A powerful write of discrimination that still persists in many even a president that feels all Hispanics are Mexicans and of a lower class of human than whites. Nicely done my friend
October 4th, 2026 06:30
No Polite Society
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another powerful piece my friend that those that govern us would like to be left in the ashes of history
October 4th, 2026 06:29
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another powerful piece my friend that those that govern us would like to be left in the ashes of history
October 4th, 2026 06:29
Fall Vespers
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
A delicately woven declaration of faith in an autumnal peacefulness. Just lovely.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 05:06
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
A delicately woven declaration of faith in an autumnal peacefulness. Just lovely.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
October 4th, 2026 05:06
Fall Vespers
Cheeky Missy said:
This is truly very lovely and so beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
October 3rd, 2026 19:38
Cheeky Missy said:
This is truly very lovely and so beautifully rendered. Thank you for sharing.
October 3rd, 2026 19:38
Fall Vespers
Paul Bell said:
What happened, one minute I\'m on my deck chair sipping Pina colada\'s.
Now I\'m fighting off polar bears.
Another year drawing in.
I mention Jesus in dulcet tones.
October 3rd, 2026 12:15
Paul Bell said:
What happened, one minute I\'m on my deck chair sipping Pina colada\'s.
Now I\'m fighting off polar bears.
Another year drawing in.
I mention Jesus in dulcet tones.
October 3rd, 2026 12:15
Fall Vespers
orchidee said:
Good write T. You turning to the way of light? I\'m dreading those Monday poems. lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:52
orchidee said:
Good write T. You turning to the way of light? I\'m dreading those Monday poems. lol.
October 3rd, 2026 10:52
Fall Vespers
Friendship said:
Lovely writing. I wish it were fall here, high 90s. Enjoy your fall nights
October 3rd, 2026 10:34
Friendship said:
Lovely writing. I wish it were fall here, high 90s. Enjoy your fall nights
October 3rd, 2026 10:34
Fall Vespers
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one. And that Rocking Chair looks inviting.
October 3rd, 2026 07:59
Kevin Hulme said:
Nice one. And that Rocking Chair looks inviting.
October 3rd, 2026 07:59
Fall Vespers
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Short, sharp and so sweet my friend
October 3rd, 2026 07:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Short, sharp and so sweet my friend
October 3rd, 2026 07:50
Fall Vespers
arqios said:
So true about that closeness/nearness at certain points in time/seasons! 👍🏻🤩🙏🏻🕊️
October 3rd, 2026 07:20
arqios said:
So true about that closeness/nearness at certain points in time/seasons! 👍🏻🤩🙏🏻🕊️
October 3rd, 2026 07:20
Fall Vespers
sorenbarrett said:
So short but lovely in wording and feeling. This one hits home
October 3rd, 2026 06:46
sorenbarrett said:
So short but lovely in wording and feeling. This one hits home
October 3rd, 2026 06:46
Hooking the Looking Glass
Paul Bell said:
I suppose when you start with the basis, everyone is forgiven, it opens the door to the dark.
In saying that, the church has looked after itself for thousands of years, and you don\'t do that without someone dying.
October 3rd, 2026 04:13
Paul Bell said:
I suppose when you start with the basis, everyone is forgiven, it opens the door to the dark.
In saying that, the church has looked after itself for thousands of years, and you don\'t do that without someone dying.
October 3rd, 2026 04:13
Hooking the Looking Glass
arqios said:
Historically, institutional hypocrisy trumps religion itself. What makes it so intense is that the primary internal mechanism of religion is the most intimate expression of the inner self in both personal and societal milieus.
October 2nd, 2026 16:56
arqios said:
Historically, institutional hypocrisy trumps religion itself. What makes it so intense is that the primary internal mechanism of religion is the most intimate expression of the inner self in both personal and societal milieus.
October 2nd, 2026 16:56
Hooking the Looking Glass
Teddy.15 said:
Devilishly dreadful indeed, hey you should know Steven King this is haunting. 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 13:58
Teddy.15 said:
Devilishly dreadful indeed, hey you should know Steven King this is haunting. 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 13:58
Hooking the Looking Glass
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most finely put my friend
October 2nd, 2026 11:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most finely put my friend
October 2nd, 2026 11:34
Hooking the Looking Glass
Salvia.S said:
Love the title \" Hooking\" the Looking Glass\", not just looking. Like you\'re forcing it to see. The last 2 lines stayed with me. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 11:13
Salvia.S said:
Love the title \" Hooking\" the Looking Glass\", not just looking. Like you\'re forcing it to see. The last 2 lines stayed with me. Well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
October 2nd, 2026 11:13
Hooking the Looking Glass
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now a horror story about spinach, knitting needles, and sabres. Or a film starring........ oh, we knows them! lol.
October 2nd, 2026 11:12
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now a horror story about spinach, knitting needles, and sabres. Or a film starring........ oh, we knows them! lol.
October 2nd, 2026 11:12
Hooking the Looking Glass
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now this one can be taken two ways my friend. Were the devils residents welcome in the church before the destruction or did the church bring on the tempest to rid itself of them. A good read Tristan
October 2nd, 2026 10:36
sorenbarrett said:
Ah now this one can be taken two ways my friend. Were the devils residents welcome in the church before the destruction or did the church bring on the tempest to rid itself of them. A good read Tristan
October 2nd, 2026 10:36
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