Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dimebags and Diamonds
Teddy.15 said:
Powerfully written, let\'s all put mother fucker guns down. My deepest condolences for Darrell. Tristan I fear for the USA right now. 💜
September 14th, 2026 08:04
Teddy.15 said:
Powerfully written, let\'s all put mother fucker guns down. My deepest condolences for Darrell. Tristan I fear for the USA right now. 💜
September 14th, 2026 08:04
Dimebags and Diamonds
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading the dark poems to appear. Are they about Popeye & Co?! lol.
September 13th, 2026 09:11
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading the dark poems to appear. Are they about Popeye & Co?! lol.
September 13th, 2026 09:11
Dimebags and Diamonds
sorenbarrett said:
Here intended or not lay many clues dime bags known to any that purchase, diamonds crystalline THC, cut, what dealers do to increase profit and decrease lethal dosages, steel a drug to treat major depressive disorder although not commonly abused an artifact of abuse. rock slang for crack cocaine and crystal meth. Where there is money to be made there are guns to protect and wars to be fought. Good one my friend
September 13th, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
Here intended or not lay many clues dime bags known to any that purchase, diamonds crystalline THC, cut, what dealers do to increase profit and decrease lethal dosages, steel a drug to treat major depressive disorder although not commonly abused an artifact of abuse. rock slang for crack cocaine and crystal meth. Where there is money to be made there are guns to protect and wars to be fought. Good one my friend
September 13th, 2026 07:38
Dimebags and Diamonds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Its a culture that seems here to stay my friend, money to be made
September 13th, 2026 07:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Its a culture that seems here to stay my friend, money to be made
September 13th, 2026 07:05
A Fine and Good Man
arqios said:
Not all men are equal, in a sense. Mustn’t be the tack that the forefathers were thinking of when they wrote their great writ. (an aside) 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
September 12th, 2026 14:17
arqios said:
Not all men are equal, in a sense. Mustn’t be the tack that the forefathers were thinking of when they wrote their great writ. (an aside) 🙏🏻👍🏻🕊️
September 12th, 2026 14:17
A Fine and Good Man
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of fidelity where upbringing may set the standards but nature has a stronger hand. Curious though my friend how can one be trained to be hansom someone dropped the bar on that one with me.
September 12th, 2026 10:59
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of fidelity where upbringing may set the standards but nature has a stronger hand. Curious though my friend how can one be trained to be hansom someone dropped the bar on that one with me.
September 12th, 2026 10:59
A Fine and Good Man
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading the gothic dread! Well, Fido says to me, write more hymn-poems to spread more light. lol.
September 12th, 2026 10:42
orchidee said:
I\'m dreading the gothic dread! Well, Fido says to me, write more hymn-poems to spread more light. lol.
September 12th, 2026 10:42
for the birds
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, hell, I cannot resist:
HAIL CORMORANT! 🐦⬛🤘
Prof(ane/ound)? revealer of human stupidity...nature’s black-robed prophet, molting without shame, perched at the tip of a sanctified dickhead while humanity rusts behind its own fucking gate. (was this in my outside voice? 🤣).
September 11th, 2026 13:36
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Oh, hell, I cannot resist:
HAIL CORMORANT! 🐦⬛🤘
Prof(ane/ound)? revealer of human stupidity...nature’s black-robed prophet, molting without shame, perched at the tip of a sanctified dickhead while humanity rusts behind its own fucking gate. (was this in my outside voice? 🤣).
September 11th, 2026 13:36
for the birds
Kevin Hulme said:
I prefer the Old Testament with it\'s Oscar Winning Special Effects. Better than the New Testament.
That\'s got nothing to do with the Poem. Just thought I\'d mention it.
Although a very Cryptic and Clever Write.
September 11th, 2026 11:40
Kevin Hulme said:
I prefer the Old Testament with it\'s Oscar Winning Special Effects. Better than the New Testament.
That\'s got nothing to do with the Poem. Just thought I\'d mention it.
Although a very Cryptic and Clever Write.
September 11th, 2026 11:40
firefly
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely. How on earth did I miss this pretty number? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting yet charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2026 11:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Very, very lovely. How on earth did I miss this pretty number? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting yet charming poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 11th, 2026 11:14
for the birds
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 11th, 2026 07:50
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so very well put my friend
September 11th, 2026 07:50
for the birds
sorenbarrett said:
And why is religion so against sex? Did not god say be fruitful? So many sexual images buried in this poem the pier, the gate and then the introduction of the cross on the pier canceling it, the gate rusted and barring entry. I heard Freud mumble in his grave. Oh but that is but a hole as well. But what sums it up well is the final line idols are for the birds. A fave my friend this one was tight.
September 11th, 2026 07:42
sorenbarrett said:
And why is religion so against sex? Did not god say be fruitful? So many sexual images buried in this poem the pier, the gate and then the introduction of the cross on the pier canceling it, the gate rusted and barring entry. I heard Freud mumble in his grave. Oh but that is but a hole as well. But what sums it up well is the final line idols are for the birds. A fave my friend this one was tight.
September 11th, 2026 07:42
Aftershock
Paul Bell said:
This is me, knowing that hallowean is round the corner and the kids are going to be ringing my bell demanding sweeties with menacing looks.
September 10th, 2026 15:25
Paul Bell said:
This is me, knowing that hallowean is round the corner and the kids are going to be ringing my bell demanding sweeties with menacing looks.
September 10th, 2026 15:25
Aftershock
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan with the archetypal image of a snake one falls into the alliteration of the last line. A frightful image indeed.
September 10th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan with the archetypal image of a snake one falls into the alliteration of the last line. A frightful image indeed.
September 10th, 2026 08:12
Aftershock
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
its power impresses my friend
September 10th, 2026 07:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
its power impresses my friend
September 10th, 2026 07:58
Aftershock
arqios said:
Superlative descriptivist brevity. Packs a supreme punch, Tittu 👍🏻🙏🏻
September 10th, 2026 07:47
arqios said:
Superlative descriptivist brevity. Packs a supreme punch, Tittu 👍🏻🙏🏻
September 10th, 2026 07:47
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
Cheeky Missy said:
Have you ever indulged in watching [oh dear, what am I suggesting here?!] 007? You\'re likely more cognizant of the thread messages than I shall be since I\'ve not watched enough flicks.
September 9th, 2026 16:07
Cheeky Missy said:
Have you ever indulged in watching [oh dear, what am I suggesting here?!] 007? You\'re likely more cognizant of the thread messages than I shall be since I\'ve not watched enough flicks.
September 9th, 2026 16:07
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice parallel between the Salem witch trials of 1692–1693 and modern conspiracy theories, criticizing the mentality of fear-driven, conspiratorial thinking and the certainty that comes from believing one has discovered a hidden enemy.
September 9th, 2026 12:48
soheil khodaparasti said:
A nice parallel between the Salem witch trials of 1692–1693 and modern conspiracy theories, criticizing the mentality of fear-driven, conspiratorial thinking and the certainty that comes from believing one has discovered a hidden enemy.
September 9th, 2026 12:48
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
Paul Bell said:
Start your day on social media with. They\'re lying to you.
This is why yoiu check everything.
In saying that, I blame everything on others, otherwise the conspiracy stops with me.
September 9th, 2026 11:12
Paul Bell said:
Start your day on social media with. They\'re lying to you.
This is why yoiu check everything.
In saying that, I blame everything on others, otherwise the conspiracy stops with me.
September 9th, 2026 11:12
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
Lorenz said:
On september 18/1692 Belgium was struck by a major earthquake .
The fateful date is drawing near ...
September 9th, 2026 10:56
Lorenz said:
On september 18/1692 Belgium was struck by a major earthquake .
The fateful date is drawing near ...
September 9th, 2026 10:56
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
Neville said:
Passing the buck and pointing the finger are very often cop outs borne out of ignorance and or fear .. scapegoats come in all shapes n sizes .. all they have to be is convenient .. or am I just a black dog barking up the wrong tree .. 🐈⬛🐈⬛🏴🖤⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
September 9th, 2026 09:31
Neville said:
Passing the buck and pointing the finger are very often cop outs borne out of ignorance and or fear .. scapegoats come in all shapes n sizes .. all they have to be is convenient .. or am I just a black dog barking up the wrong tree .. 🐈⬛🐈⬛🏴🖤⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
September 9th, 2026 09:31
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good topic where we all look for something external to blame and why not music the one thing that moves the soul more than anything else. I love the final lines yes blame was shifted onto the defenseless that mentally diminished the odd the women and a scapegoat was had. We still do it today blaming others for our mistakes. A fave my friend
September 9th, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
Such a good topic where we all look for something external to blame and why not music the one thing that moves the soul more than anything else. I love the final lines yes blame was shifted onto the defenseless that mentally diminished the odd the women and a scapegoat was had. We still do it today blaming others for our mistakes. A fave my friend
September 9th, 2026 08:29
Heavy Metal Made Me Do It
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Q in James Bond was so devilish! Do we know B too - yes, millions of them, the Baters! lol. Got brolly ready? lol.
I better spread more light and write more \'lighter\' spiritual poems!
September 9th, 2026 08:15
orchidee said:
I didn\'t know Q in James Bond was so devilish! Do we know B too - yes, millions of them, the Baters! lol. Got brolly ready? lol.
I better spread more light and write more \'lighter\' spiritual poems!
September 9th, 2026 08:15
bitter herbs
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s only one course of action for me, Tristan. I will absent myself immediately. This is far too raw and painful to witness. Bitter family disputes cause so much grief clearly extracted here – which speaks to the quality of your writing.
September 8th, 2026 17:33
Doggerel Dave said:
There’s only one course of action for me, Tristan. I will absent myself immediately. This is far too raw and painful to witness. Bitter family disputes cause so much grief clearly extracted here – which speaks to the quality of your writing.
September 8th, 2026 17:33
bitter herbs
Paul Bell said:
They always say, you can choose your friends but you can\'t choose your family.
I would imagine no one mourns this man, and why would you.
We all have collections of relics that we keep locked away, and your poem highlights why.
September 8th, 2026 12:42
Paul Bell said:
They always say, you can choose your friends but you can\'t choose your family.
I would imagine no one mourns this man, and why would you.
We all have collections of relics that we keep locked away, and your poem highlights why.
September 8th, 2026 12:42
bitter herbs
soheil khodaparasti said:
This is heartbreaking and deeply moving. The final question is especially powerful—a painful reflection on love denied, wounds carried, and the daughter he might have truly seen if he had loved her as she deserved.
September 8th, 2026 11:07
soheil khodaparasti said:
This is heartbreaking and deeply moving. The final question is especially powerful—a painful reflection on love denied, wounds carried, and the daughter he might have truly seen if he had loved her as she deserved.
September 8th, 2026 11:07
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