Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Will He Return?
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like a great guy, and one that can give good pointers to your poem.
Hopefully doing well.
December 12th, 2025 12:30
Paul Bell said:
Sounds like a great guy, and one that can give good pointers to your poem.
Hopefully doing well.
December 12th, 2025 12:30
Will He Return?
Teddy.15 said:
I hope where ever he is, he is well my best regards to you both, big hugs dearest Tristan, a wonderful touch of compassion 🤗
December 12th, 2025 11:33
Teddy.15 said:
I hope where ever he is, he is well my best regards to you both, big hugs dearest Tristan, a wonderful touch of compassion 🤗
December 12th, 2025 11:33
Will He Return?
Neville said:
Indeed missed .. like so many others who once graced these pages .. gone but not forgotten & in many cases, their work lives on .. Congratulations & good luck with that anthology Tristan, I shall try to lay my hands on a copy .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 09:48
Neville said:
Indeed missed .. like so many others who once graced these pages .. gone but not forgotten & in many cases, their work lives on .. Congratulations & good luck with that anthology Tristan, I shall try to lay my hands on a copy .. Neville
December 12th, 2025 09:48
Will He Return?
orchidee said:
Thank you T. I dunno about return, but we know someone (& Co) who never leave. That pesky glugger! lol. That\'s weighing on us too - like a ton of sewage load we wish we didn\'t have! heehee.
December 12th, 2025 09:37
orchidee said:
Thank you T. I dunno about return, but we know someone (& Co) who never leave. That pesky glugger! lol. That\'s weighing on us too - like a ton of sewage load we wish we didn\'t have! heehee.
December 12th, 2025 09:37
Will He Return?
sorenbarrett said:
I too have wondered where he has gone, and this is a wonderful tribute to his past presence very nicely done Tristan
December 12th, 2025 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
I too have wondered where he has gone, and this is a wonderful tribute to his past presence very nicely done Tristan
December 12th, 2025 08:45
Will He Return?
arqios said:
Yeah, where is Tony? It’s been a long while🙏🏻🕊️
December 12th, 2025 08:43
arqios said:
Yeah, where is Tony? It’s been a long while🙏🏻🕊️
December 12th, 2025 08:43
Will He Return?
Friendship said:
Well-written, Tristan. Your poem reflects on the memory and impact of a beloved figure, likely a mentor or artist, who has passed away. It conveys a sense of loss and nostalgia while also expressing gratitude for the magic and influence this person brought into the lives of those who remain.
December 12th, 2025 08:37
Friendship said:
Well-written, Tristan. Your poem reflects on the memory and impact of a beloved figure, likely a mentor or artist, who has passed away. It conveys a sense of loss and nostalgia while also expressing gratitude for the magic and influence this person brought into the lives of those who remain.
December 12th, 2025 08:37
pig stye
NafisaSB said:
a truly emotional outpouring of innermost feelings of repression and depression - that is how i read it..
well done
December 12th, 2025 01:36
NafisaSB said:
a truly emotional outpouring of innermost feelings of repression and depression - that is how i read it..
well done
December 12th, 2025 01:36
the little horn
arqios said:
The horrors of middle school until equilibrium and \'sanity\' is found, a rarity it would appear. 🕊️🙏
December 11th, 2025 21:50
arqios said:
The horrors of middle school until equilibrium and \'sanity\' is found, a rarity it would appear. 🕊️🙏
December 11th, 2025 21:50
the line
Doggerel Dave said:
Apprentice labyrinth (content though very relatable for me) Keep up the good work!😂😊
December 11th, 2025 16:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Apprentice labyrinth (content though very relatable for me) Keep up the good work!😂😊
December 11th, 2025 16:51
the line
PerditaRose said:
I liked the image that went with your poem (as well as your poem).
December 11th, 2025 15:10
PerditaRose said:
I liked the image that went with your poem (as well as your poem).
December 11th, 2025 15:10
the line
orchidee said:
Good write T. Let\'s draw the line - or a barrier - to stop the glugging one getting in. Ol\' Tom or Obi got anything to say?! lol.
December 11th, 2025 10:38
orchidee said:
Good write T. Let\'s draw the line - or a barrier - to stop the glugging one getting in. Ol\' Tom or Obi got anything to say?! lol.
December 11th, 2025 10:38
the line
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one my friend. Loved (str8) very creative. And the straight line of words emphasizes it. You are right no one cares if the line is straight or not in a narrative.
December 11th, 2025 10:29
sorenbarrett said:
Loved this one my friend. Loved (str8) very creative. And the straight line of words emphasizes it. You are right no one cares if the line is straight or not in a narrative.
December 11th, 2025 10:29
the little horn
NinjaGirl said:
I choked on my chocolate while reading this one!! fantastic wordplay and political commentary!
December 10th, 2025 21:19
NinjaGirl said:
I choked on my chocolate while reading this one!! fantastic wordplay and political commentary!
December 10th, 2025 21:19
the little horn
Paul Bell said:
Friends like big D, who needs enemies.
Always thought little Zenlenk should have slapped him a few times, just in a harmonious sort of way.
Still, the wee guy has Europe behind him. Did I actually say that? Somebody slap me hard now.
December 10th, 2025 13:30
Paul Bell said:
Friends like big D, who needs enemies.
Always thought little Zenlenk should have slapped him a few times, just in a harmonious sort of way.
Still, the wee guy has Europe behind him. Did I actually say that? Somebody slap me hard now.
December 10th, 2025 13:30
the little horn
Friendship said:
The poem appears to critique power dynamics and the often absurd nature of authority figures, particularly in a political context. The imagery of the \"little horn\" suggests something that is both insignificant and yet adorned or celebrated, perhaps pointing to the inflated egos and aspirations of those in power who may not have the substance or capability to match their positions.
December 10th, 2025 10:22
Friendship said:
The poem appears to critique power dynamics and the often absurd nature of authority figures, particularly in a political context. The imagery of the \"little horn\" suggests something that is both insignificant and yet adorned or celebrated, perhaps pointing to the inflated egos and aspirations of those in power who may not have the substance or capability to match their positions.
December 10th, 2025 10:22
the little horn
orchidee said:
Some images from Old Testament book of Daniel here. P is in disguise - looks a bit like a rhino, as in that pic there! lol.
December 10th, 2025 10:19
orchidee said:
Some images from Old Testament book of Daniel here. P is in disguise - looks a bit like a rhino, as in that pic there! lol.
December 10th, 2025 10:19
The Satan is in the System
coracaodacripta said:
I quite like the implication that evil is present in the person who can\'t see or act clearly, but I do suppose that the Devil is in the details.
December 10th, 2025 09:51
coracaodacripta said:
I quite like the implication that evil is present in the person who can\'t see or act clearly, but I do suppose that the Devil is in the details.
December 10th, 2025 09:51
the little horn
coracaodacripta said:
I wish I could support the cause financially, or at least purchase a copy, but I\'m hopeful that this movement will prosper. You definitely caught my attention with the cussing - very seldom do we have writers with enough guts. Even less do we have writers willing to challenge the status quo. Very nice.
December 10th, 2025 09:27
coracaodacripta said:
I wish I could support the cause financially, or at least purchase a copy, but I\'m hopeful that this movement will prosper. You definitely caught my attention with the cussing - very seldom do we have writers with enough guts. Even less do we have writers willing to challenge the status quo. Very nice.
December 10th, 2025 09:27
the little horn
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this one is already labeled and clear to what it applies. Unfortunate that it is all too true.
December 10th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this one is already labeled and clear to what it applies. Unfortunate that it is all too true.
December 10th, 2025 09:21
Rubric of Ridiculousness
Salvia.S said:
This is 🔥! It is a powerful critique of societal values, highlighting the tension between productivity and humanity. The language is sharp, and the imagery is striking. Very well written dearest Tittu!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:20
Salvia.S said:
This is 🔥! It is a powerful critique of societal values, highlighting the tension between productivity and humanity. The language is sharp, and the imagery is striking. Very well written dearest Tittu!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:20
Rubric of Ridiculousness
Friendship said:
Strong words, my friend, well done. The poem addresses themes of productivity, conformity, and the consequences of a meritocratic society. The poet explores the idea that effectiveness is often misdefined and serves to marginalize true creative expression.
December 9th, 2025 10:08
Friendship said:
Strong words, my friend, well done. The poem addresses themes of productivity, conformity, and the consequences of a meritocratic society. The poet explores the idea that effectiveness is often misdefined and serves to marginalize true creative expression.
December 9th, 2025 10:08
Rubric of Ridiculousness
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
Rubric of Ridiculousness
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
what do i think?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
what do i think?
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
what do i think?
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
what do i think?
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
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