Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
August 14, 1996
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem reflects the contrast between the desire for joy and financial constraints. It speaks to the universal experience of children longing for experiences that bring them happiness, often complicated by their parents’ economic realities. The act of asking \"Can we, dad, can we?\" encapsulates the innocence of childhood hope in the face of adult responsibilities.
June 16th, 2026 08:41
Friendship said:
Well written . Your poem reflects the contrast between the desire for joy and financial constraints. It speaks to the universal experience of children longing for experiences that bring them happiness, often complicated by their parents’ economic realities. The act of asking \"Can we, dad, can we?\" encapsulates the innocence of childhood hope in the face of adult responsibilities.
June 16th, 2026 08:41
bad precedent
cellinic said:
A wisely penned work with deep and expressive sense of humour, A fave, my dear friend
June 16th, 2026 02:42
cellinic said:
A wisely penned work with deep and expressive sense of humour, A fave, my dear friend
June 16th, 2026 02:42
bad precedent
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, Ive never seen a worst one 🤣 let\'s hope America can learn from this. An excellent piece sobering 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:26
Teddy.15 said:
Wow, Ive never seen a worst one 🤣 let\'s hope America can learn from this. An excellent piece sobering 🌹
June 15th, 2026 14:26
bad precedent
orchidee said:
\'The History of Spinach\' book, by one Mr....... we knows him! lol.
June 15th, 2026 11:10
orchidee said:
\'The History of Spinach\' book, by one Mr....... we knows him! lol.
June 15th, 2026 11:10
bad precedent
sorenbarrett said:
A clever political strike not sure if it was a jab or a hook maybe an uppercut. Regardless cage fighting on the white house lawn is something only Andrew Jackson could have thought of. Why not change the name of the country to Trumpland. When a man\'s head grows too big for his body Macrocephaly and hydrocephalus for a man with water on the brain. Well written Tristan
June 15th, 2026 08:31
sorenbarrett said:
A clever political strike not sure if it was a jab or a hook maybe an uppercut. Regardless cage fighting on the white house lawn is something only Andrew Jackson could have thought of. Why not change the name of the country to Trumpland. When a man\'s head grows too big for his body Macrocephaly and hydrocephalus for a man with water on the brain. Well written Tristan
June 15th, 2026 08:31
bad precedent
Friendship said:
That was a joke last night. Well said, my friend. Your poem revolves around themes of privilege, societal struggle, and the absurdity of leadership that is out of touch with reality.
June 15th, 2026 07:54
Friendship said:
That was a joke last night. Well said, my friend. Your poem revolves around themes of privilege, societal struggle, and the absurdity of leadership that is out of touch with reality.
June 15th, 2026 07:54
The Spirit Moves
arqios said:
In every age and every generation the ruach hakodesh moves as the wind that moves the limbs of trees, surrounding us all.
June 14th, 2026 21:44
arqios said:
In every age and every generation the ruach hakodesh moves as the wind that moves the limbs of trees, surrounding us all.
June 14th, 2026 21:44
The Spirit Moves
sorenbarrett said:
If one stretches a bit one sees the mount of olives. A world of self interest and hypocrisy Well written my friend.
June 14th, 2026 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
If one stretches a bit one sees the mount of olives. A world of self interest and hypocrisy Well written my friend.
June 14th, 2026 14:33
The Spirit Moves
orchidee said:
The proof in the spinach pudding, says one Mr P. Solus! lol.
June 14th, 2026 14:11
orchidee said:
The proof in the spinach pudding, says one Mr P. Solus! lol.
June 14th, 2026 14:11
The Spirit Moves
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this is so true and a fav my friend
June 14th, 2026 09:18
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this is so true and a fav my friend
June 14th, 2026 09:18
hoist(ed)
Thomas W Case said:
This is delightfully unhinged in the best way—like a sugar rush dream that keeps slipping its own logic.
Beneath the whimsy, there’s that quiet tug of wanting to stay lost in it, because waking up means facing whatever’s waiting outside the fog.
June 14th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
This is delightfully unhinged in the best way—like a sugar rush dream that keeps slipping its own logic.
Beneath the whimsy, there’s that quiet tug of wanting to stay lost in it, because waking up means facing whatever’s waiting outside the fog.
June 14th, 2026 07:15
hoist(ed)
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, this is a well-pronounced expressive statement reflecting good sense of humor and understanding of the life. A fave, my friend)
June 14th, 2026 01:36
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, this is a well-pronounced expressive statement reflecting good sense of humor and understanding of the life. A fave, my friend)
June 14th, 2026 01:36
hoist(ed)
orchidee said:
Yes, the grog - or is it the glug?! The dreaded sound. lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:30
orchidee said:
Yes, the grog - or is it the glug?! The dreaded sound. lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:30
hoist(ed)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Tristan that bounces from here to there in a surreal sense of absurdity that keeps the attention. Well done my friend
June 13th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Tristan that bounces from here to there in a surreal sense of absurdity that keeps the attention. Well done my friend
June 13th, 2026 09:09
hoist(ed)
arqios said:
A slice of apple pie with vanilla ice cream also does nicely 👍🏻🙏🕊️😊
June 13th, 2026 08:07
arqios said:
A slice of apple pie with vanilla ice cream also does nicely 👍🏻🙏🕊️😊
June 13th, 2026 08:07
memo
NafisaSB said:
That’s so challenging- it’s definitely time to prove the critics wrong 👍
June 13th, 2026 07:02
NafisaSB said:
That’s so challenging- it’s definitely time to prove the critics wrong 👍
June 13th, 2026 07:02
freedom\'s fun
arqios said:
paradox, irony, and disillusionment... what a state of all states... 🙏🕊️
June 12th, 2026 20:56
arqios said:
paradox, irony, and disillusionment... what a state of all states... 🙏🕊️
June 12th, 2026 20:56
freedom\'s fun
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Head Stard did shoot itself with America\'s gun. Well said my friend.
June 12th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Head Stard did shoot itself with America\'s gun. Well said my friend.
June 12th, 2026 12:42
freedom\'s fun
orchidee said:
Good write T. Any TOM-foolery or gluggery abounding?! lol. \'Knitting\' you call it, Ol\'Tom? Why? Find out on WCAT which tells us no answers. lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:23
orchidee said:
Good write T. Any TOM-foolery or gluggery abounding?! lol. \'Knitting\' you call it, Ol\'Tom? Why? Find out on WCAT which tells us no answers. lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:23
freedom\'s fun
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
truth definitely applies in this piece, enjoyed
June 12th, 2026 09:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
truth definitely applies in this piece, enjoyed
June 12th, 2026 09:48
memo
sorenbarrett said:
Being part of an inverse barometer you are always right by being wrong. Short but well said
June 11th, 2026 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
Being part of an inverse barometer you are always right by being wrong. Short but well said
June 11th, 2026 07:50
Cream, Chocolate, and Cherries
Mirela said:
I liked this line: Dark star of death musing around. And also the ice cream bit
June 11th, 2026 02:52
Mirela said:
I liked this line: Dark star of death musing around. And also the ice cream bit
June 11th, 2026 02:52
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