Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
come again?
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! π€£
July 25th, 2026 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! π€£
July 25th, 2026 00:50
come again?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
come again?
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium ππ»ποΈ
July 24th, 2026 08:48
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium ππ»ποΈ
July 24th, 2026 08:48
unequivocal unknowing
orchidee said:
All we know about is Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol. A Mr Hunt has joined them. Why? WCAT!
July 23rd, 2026 09:36
orchidee said:
All we know about is Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol. A Mr Hunt has joined them. Why? WCAT!
July 23rd, 2026 09:36
unequivocal unknowing
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great wording in this piece, sometimes the more we think we know we actually know less
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great wording in this piece, sometimes the more we think we know we actually know less
July 23rd, 2026 08:33
unequivocal unknowing
sorenbarrett said:
Irises that control the amount of light entering the eye may be metaphoric controlling the amount of light (knowledge or truth) entering what we can understand. North the Masonic direction from which comes all instinctual knowledge. The mention of liminal or boundary between to me signifies that fuzzy area of awareness where things seem instinct blending into common sense where things are felt but can not be rationalized and here is the unknowing for all things contain a bit of this. Clever wording makes this poem work well where the mind and the ear roll all into a polished ball that seems to roll off the tongue and into the brain. Nicely done my friend
July 23rd, 2026 08:09
sorenbarrett said:
Irises that control the amount of light entering the eye may be metaphoric controlling the amount of light (knowledge or truth) entering what we can understand. North the Masonic direction from which comes all instinctual knowledge. The mention of liminal or boundary between to me signifies that fuzzy area of awareness where things seem instinct blending into common sense where things are felt but can not be rationalized and here is the unknowing for all things contain a bit of this. Clever wording makes this poem work well where the mind and the ear roll all into a polished ball that seems to roll off the tongue and into the brain. Nicely done my friend
July 23rd, 2026 08:09
unequivocal unknowing
Teddy.15 said:
The iris is one of my favourite blooms, and the national flower of Firenze, this is really deeply beautiful as if you know someone so well, yet not at all. πΉ
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
Teddy.15 said:
The iris is one of my favourite blooms, and the national flower of Firenze, this is really deeply beautiful as if you know someone so well, yet not at all. πΉ
July 23rd, 2026 07:56
whichever precedes
arqios said:
Life is like a tooth! Needed, assaulted and measured by. Oh my. π¦·πποΈ
July 22nd, 2026 19:56
arqios said:
Life is like a tooth! Needed, assaulted and measured by. Oh my. π¦·πποΈ
July 22nd, 2026 19:56
whichever precedes
Teddy.15 said:
The force of being in the right place at the right time and in the right hands πΉ
July 22nd, 2026 08:59
Teddy.15 said:
The force of being in the right place at the right time and in the right hands πΉ
July 22nd, 2026 08:59
whichever precedes
sorenbarrett said:
Whether tooth, man, civilization it speaks to the corruption that leads to decay and the need for removal. It is a grim picture of what is and what needs to be done. Well written my friend
July 22nd, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
Whether tooth, man, civilization it speaks to the corruption that leads to decay and the need for removal. It is a grim picture of what is and what needs to be done. Well written my friend
July 22nd, 2026 08:15
whichever precedes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am due a dentist visit, lol, instilled the fear
July 22nd, 2026 08:05
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I am due a dentist visit, lol, instilled the fear
July 22nd, 2026 08:05
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
orchidee said:
Good write Mr Hunt, erm, Tristan. Why Mr H? Deffo don\'t answer that - WCAT! lol.
July 22nd, 2026 02:05
orchidee said:
Good write Mr Hunt, erm, Tristan. Why Mr H? Deffo don\'t answer that - WCAT! lol.
July 22nd, 2026 02:05
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
cellinic said:
Oh, that\'s a great work, well-rhymed with clearly cut conclusions and emotional background. A fave, my friend!
July 21st, 2026 19:53
cellinic said:
Oh, that\'s a great work, well-rhymed with clearly cut conclusions and emotional background. A fave, my friend!
July 21st, 2026 19:53
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Wonderfully funny friend
July 21st, 2026 12:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Wonderfully funny friend
July 21st, 2026 12:10
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
Kevin Hulme said:
Politicians get it all the time. Amusing Poem.
July 21st, 2026 10:00
Kevin Hulme said:
Politicians get it all the time. Amusing Poem.
July 21st, 2026 10:00
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little jab wrapped in rhyme, with a grin hiding behind the bite.
Funny, fast, and a little wickedβthis poem knows exactly where to stick the needle.
July 21st, 2026 08:16
Thomas W Case said:
A sharp little jab wrapped in rhyme, with a grin hiding behind the bite.
Funny, fast, and a little wickedβthis poem knows exactly where to stick the needle.
July 21st, 2026 08:16
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
arqios said:
Either that or knuckle in mouth π€£ππ»ποΈπ€©
July 21st, 2026 08:10
arqios said:
Either that or knuckle in mouth π€£ππ»ποΈπ€©
July 21st, 2026 08:10
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
sorenbarrett said:
In the mouth, up the ass feet get stuck in the strangest places. A fun read and the illustration fit well. Made me smile I guess I identify.
July 21st, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
In the mouth, up the ass feet get stuck in the strangest places. A fun read and the illustration fit well. Made me smile I guess I identify.
July 21st, 2026 08:07
Mouth, Ass, and Foot Disease
Teddy.15 said:
lol I know who I\'d aim this prognosis at if I was the author, π€£ excellent hilarious and I\'m pleased to say I\'ve never had this one yet, maybe it will spread π but I hope not. πΉ
July 21st, 2026 07:26
Teddy.15 said:
lol I know who I\'d aim this prognosis at if I was the author, π€£ excellent hilarious and I\'m pleased to say I\'ve never had this one yet, maybe it will spread π but I hope not. πΉ
July 21st, 2026 07:26
regression agression
Paul Bell said:
No antibiotics are going to heal this wound, its been open to long now.
It\'s a one way ticket to hell now, though something tells me, even hell isn\'t receiving.
July 21st, 2026 06:46
Paul Bell said:
No antibiotics are going to heal this wound, its been open to long now.
It\'s a one way ticket to hell now, though something tells me, even hell isn\'t receiving.
July 21st, 2026 06:46
high time
NafisaSB said:
The pleasure of smoking π¬ is so well expressed one can visualize the scene
July 21st, 2026 06:38
NafisaSB said:
The pleasure of smoking π¬ is so well expressed one can visualize the scene
July 21st, 2026 06:38
regression agression
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a goodbye or \"piss off!\" If the former, then please reconsider...
July 20th, 2026 17:23
Doggerel Dave said:
Feels like a goodbye or \"piss off!\" If the former, then please reconsider...
July 20th, 2026 17:23
regression agression
Syd said:
A delightfully dark de-evolution write Tristan. Very much enjoyed.
- Syd π
July 20th, 2026 12:26
Syd said:
A delightfully dark de-evolution write Tristan. Very much enjoyed.
- Syd π
July 20th, 2026 12:26
regression agression
orchidee said:
I\'m feeling bit woozy now. I\'m sure you\'ll send apologies that it had that effect on me. loll
July 20th, 2026 08:45
orchidee said:
I\'m feeling bit woozy now. I\'m sure you\'ll send apologies that it had that effect on me. loll
July 20th, 2026 08:45
regression agression
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
dark and to the point, great write
July 20th, 2026 07:58
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
dark and to the point, great write
July 20th, 2026 07:58
regression agression
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark bit I don\'t believe it for a minute you are far to sweet. π€
July 20th, 2026 07:44
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark bit I don\'t believe it for a minute you are far to sweet. π€
July 20th, 2026 07:44
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