Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
thrash your spine
Teddy.15 said:
If I didn\'t know you better I\'d say ouch! now if you would have mentioned tetanus I may have come to the conclusion like the rest 🤣 superb, made me go check out some words. 🌹
September 18th, 2026 13:26
Teddy.15 said:
If I didn\'t know you better I\'d say ouch! now if you would have mentioned tetanus I may have come to the conclusion like the rest 🤣 superb, made me go check out some words. 🌹
September 18th, 2026 13:26
thrash your spine
orchidee said:
Good write T. Glad Friendship has explained it, cos I rarely understand any cryptic stuff. lol.
September 18th, 2026 11:00
orchidee said:
Good write T. Glad Friendship has explained it, cos I rarely understand any cryptic stuff. lol.
September 18th, 2026 11:00
thrash your spine
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A heavy metal jamboree
September 18th, 2026 10:41
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A heavy metal jamboree
September 18th, 2026 10:41
thrash your spine
Paul Bell said:
Heavy metal, Rap, Jazz, just couldn\'t get into them.
In saying that. I did like some of Metallica\'s stuff. The four horsemen being one of them.
September 18th, 2026 09:09
Paul Bell said:
Heavy metal, Rap, Jazz, just couldn\'t get into them.
In saying that. I did like some of Metallica\'s stuff. The four horsemen being one of them.
September 18th, 2026 09:09
thrash your spine
arqios said:
It’s a sure destination unless the ticket’s changed!
September 18th, 2026 08:53
arqios said:
It’s a sure destination unless the ticket’s changed!
September 18th, 2026 08:53
thrash your spine
sorenbarrett said:
Metal music invented to encapsulate rebellion against society, rules and God. It screams its message in words often not heard above the beat and amplified metal sound of strings of an electric guitar. An in your face art that has evolved into heavy, thrash and death metal. Nicely written my friend I expected hell to come from the North but I suppose that is where ignorance resides.
September 18th, 2026 08:47
sorenbarrett said:
Metal music invented to encapsulate rebellion against society, rules and God. It screams its message in words often not heard above the beat and amplified metal sound of strings of an electric guitar. An in your face art that has evolved into heavy, thrash and death metal. Nicely written my friend I expected hell to come from the North but I suppose that is where ignorance resides.
September 18th, 2026 08:47
thrash your spine
Friendship said:
A powerful write, my friend. Your poem explores the themes of chaos, rebellion, and existential dread through the lens of heavy metal music. The poet highlights the aggressive nature of thrash metal, using it as a metaphor for confrontation with societal and spiritual issues, particularly the dichotomy between good and evil.
September 18th, 2026 08:08
Friendship said:
A powerful write, my friend. Your poem explores the themes of chaos, rebellion, and existential dread through the lens of heavy metal music. The poet highlights the aggressive nature of thrash metal, using it as a metaphor for confrontation with societal and spiritual issues, particularly the dichotomy between good and evil.
September 18th, 2026 08:08
bitter herbs
NafisaSB said:
An outstanding outpouring of grief and sadness at lack of care and compassion. Well done 👍
September 18th, 2026 00:54
NafisaSB said:
An outstanding outpouring of grief and sadness at lack of care and compassion. Well done 👍
September 18th, 2026 00:54
domination
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it quite easy to not worship any of the choices you provide Tristan. Extend your list if you wish, but I doubt you will find a different answer from me.
A challenge?
September 17th, 2026 22:19
Doggerel Dave said:
I find it quite easy to not worship any of the choices you provide Tristan. Extend your list if you wish, but I doubt you will find a different answer from me.
A challenge?
September 17th, 2026 22:19
domination
arqios said:
Who indeed! And the why cold also be very revealing.
September 17th, 2026 17:02
arqios said:
Who indeed! And the why cold also be very revealing.
September 17th, 2026 17:02
domination
Fränz Müller said:
Most people just worship themselves, putting the I in idolatry…
September 17th, 2026 09:05
Fränz Müller said:
Most people just worship themselves, putting the I in idolatry…
September 17th, 2026 09:05
domination
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now your next Macabre poem - about mysterious glugs, sounds of knitting needles, and clashes of sabres in duelling - Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol.
September 17th, 2026 08:36
orchidee said:
Good write T. And now your next Macabre poem - about mysterious glugs, sounds of knitting needles, and clashes of sabres in duelling - Popeye & Co\'s antics! lol.
September 17th, 2026 08:36
domination
Teddy.15 said:
We should worship ourselves and our families, everything else is smoke! Oh Tristan I feel your pain in these months, especially politically, as you know I\'m not religious I believe, all preach to the same figure in the end but it won\'t help us we have to help ourselves. 💜
September 17th, 2026 08:06
Teddy.15 said:
We should worship ourselves and our families, everything else is smoke! Oh Tristan I feel your pain in these months, especially politically, as you know I\'m not religious I believe, all preach to the same figure in the end but it won\'t help us we have to help ourselves. 💜
September 17th, 2026 08:06
domination
sorenbarrett said:
God, nation, family, self what order do we put them or do we even believe in them. Well written my friend
September 17th, 2026 08:01
sorenbarrett said:
God, nation, family, self what order do we put them or do we even believe in them. Well written my friend
September 17th, 2026 08:01
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
Teddy.15 said:
LoL as much as I adore peace and quiet man, that town would be too much for me. 🤣
September 17th, 2026 07:24
Teddy.15 said:
LoL as much as I adore peace and quiet man, that town would be too much for me. 🤣
September 17th, 2026 07:24
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
Friendship said:
Oh my goodness, you are so correct in what you wrote about the New Jersey Shore. Growing up on Long Island in Southampton, we occasionally went there, but we never figured out why people were so rude, even to locals. They degraded people; we always called it the wannabe Place! And yet they still wipe their butts as we do.😅😂Your poem addresses themes of class disparity, societal expectations, and the tensions between wealth and genuine human connection. I loved how you painted a picture of a society that prioritizes appearances and materialism, while critiquing the lack of authenticity and empathy among its members.
September 16th, 2026 11:10
Friendship said:
Oh my goodness, you are so correct in what you wrote about the New Jersey Shore. Growing up on Long Island in Southampton, we occasionally went there, but we never figured out why people were so rude, even to locals. They degraded people; we always called it the wannabe Place! And yet they still wipe their butts as we do.😅😂Your poem addresses themes of class disparity, societal expectations, and the tensions between wealth and genuine human connection. I loved how you painted a picture of a society that prioritizes appearances and materialism, while critiquing the lack of authenticity and empathy among its members.
September 16th, 2026 11:10
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
sorenbarrett said:
A purchased and sanitized Jesus appears only to those who have the money. Nicely written Tristian. Some churches pass the hat, others have a box, others take checks and some credit cards but I have only been to one that asked only for rice and beans to feed the poor. A spiritualist church.
September 16th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
A purchased and sanitized Jesus appears only to those who have the money. Nicely written Tristian. Some churches pass the hat, others have a box, others take checks and some credit cards but I have only been to one that asked only for rice and beans to feed the poor. A spiritualist church.
September 16th, 2026 09:45
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write friend
September 16th, 2026 09:44
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Another fine write friend
September 16th, 2026 09:44
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
orchidee said:
Erm, any spinach, wool for knitting, or sabres there?! lol. Popeye & Co want to know. But why? WCAT!!
September 16th, 2026 08:40
orchidee said:
Erm, any spinach, wool for knitting, or sabres there?! lol. Popeye & Co want to know. But why? WCAT!!
September 16th, 2026 08:40
Welcome to Ocean Grove, New Jersey
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan.
September 16th, 2026 08:32
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, Tristan.
September 16th, 2026 08:32
Just Like AI
soheil khodaparasti said:
A clear and timely message: people deserve to know what is real before they consume it, and anything fabricated should be clearly labeled.
September 16th, 2026 02:30
soheil khodaparasti said:
A clear and timely message: people deserve to know what is real before they consume it, and anything fabricated should be clearly labeled.
September 16th, 2026 02:30
Just Like AI
Kevin Hulme said:
AI is like a Politicians smile on the Election Trail: False and Creepy.
Short but well Said.
September 15th, 2026 19:16
Kevin Hulme said:
AI is like a Politicians smile on the Election Trail: False and Creepy.
Short but well Said.
September 15th, 2026 19:16
Just Like AI
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed Tristan, but who or what does the labeling?
September 15th, 2026 18:01
Doggerel Dave said:
Agreed Tristan, but who or what does the labeling?
September 15th, 2026 18:01
Just Like AI
Syd said:
Hi Tristan,
I like this. Short and not so sweet. I\'ve been putting off writing about AI and fakery myself, but you may have just inspired me.
I openly use it for images and videos and such, but I wish fellow writers would realise that all you have to do is copy and paste a poem, drop it into AI and ask for an AI likelihood score and it gives you one.
Some I\'ve encountered on MPS are as high as 95% likely AI generated. This goes for comments on poems too. I\'d rather have a genuine comment than an AI one.
- Syd 🍄
September 15th, 2026 15:25
Syd said:
Hi Tristan,
I like this. Short and not so sweet. I\'ve been putting off writing about AI and fakery myself, but you may have just inspired me.
I openly use it for images and videos and such, but I wish fellow writers would realise that all you have to do is copy and paste a poem, drop it into AI and ask for an AI likelihood score and it gives you one.
Some I\'ve encountered on MPS are as high as 95% likely AI generated. This goes for comments on poems too. I\'d rather have a genuine comment than an AI one.
- Syd 🍄
September 15th, 2026 15:25
Just Like AI
Paul Bell said:
Yes, don\'t believe it till you believe it.
America has weapons on the moon.
China is staying quiet on their weapons.
Is the moon made of cheese, that is the question.
September 15th, 2026 10:56
Paul Bell said:
Yes, don\'t believe it till you believe it.
America has weapons on the moon.
China is staying quiet on their weapons.
Is the moon made of cheese, that is the question.
September 15th, 2026 10:56
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