Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
method actors
arqios said:
Such is life! Honestly, most of it passes over my head. šš»šļø
November 4th, 2026 07:17
arqios said:
Such is life! Honestly, most of it passes over my head. šš»šļø
November 4th, 2026 07:17
method actors
sorenbarrett said:
It is the intricate rhyme woven with such succinct wording that gets the fave on this one my friend. It is cleverly done and poses a pertinent question as well.
November 4th, 2026 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is the intricate rhyme woven with such succinct wording that gets the fave on this one my friend. It is cleverly done and poses a pertinent question as well.
November 4th, 2026 07:08
the alternative iii
Lorenz said:
The time machiner will only encounter alternative historical realities.So ,you won\'t be able to kill your great grand father .
A fascinating topic to explore !
November 4th, 2026 03:48
Lorenz said:
The time machiner will only encounter alternative historical realities.So ,you won\'t be able to kill your great grand father .
A fascinating topic to explore !
November 4th, 2026 03:48
the alternative iii
arqios said:
An alternative to the burbling George III of Mirandaās āHamiltonā
November 3rd, 2026 19:44
arqios said:
An alternative to the burbling George III of Mirandaās āHamiltonā
November 3rd, 2026 19:44
the alternative iii
Kevin Hulme said:
Make you think. Alternative History is always Fascinating.
November 3rd, 2026 19:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Make you think. Alternative History is always Fascinating.
November 3rd, 2026 19:28
the alternative iii
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I advocate for History as a key to the current state of any of the worldās many problems, this is a topic about which I am abysmally ignorant in any depth; my deficiency, my apologies, Tristan. Awakening curiosity.
November 3rd, 2026 16:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I advocate for History as a key to the current state of any of the worldās many problems, this is a topic about which I am abysmally ignorant in any depth; my deficiency, my apologies, Tristan. Awakening curiosity.
November 3rd, 2026 16:02
the alternative iii
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most aptly put my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most aptly put my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:35
the alternative iii
sorenbarrett said:
Emancipation from before the emancipation declaration, freedom from before a civil war, equality before the eighteenth amendment. A beautiful gesture that made little difference from a power too far to have effect. Well done my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Emancipation from before the emancipation declaration, freedom from before a civil war, equality before the eighteenth amendment. A beautiful gesture that made little difference from a power too far to have effect. Well done my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:28
4th coming
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās an unsettling, apocalyptic urgency here, with the fractured spelling and broken spacing making the language itself seem to buckle under the weight of whatās approaching, while the speaker accuses us of celebrating our own undoing. āfailure freightingā / barrelingā2ward usā is the keeper for me, because it turns failure into something heavy and unstoppable, a freight train gathering speed while everyone carries on looking the other way.
November 3rd, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās an unsettling, apocalyptic urgency here, with the fractured spelling and broken spacing making the language itself seem to buckle under the weight of whatās approaching, while the speaker accuses us of celebrating our own undoing. āfailure freightingā / barrelingā2ward usā is the keeper for me, because it turns failure into something heavy and unstoppable, a freight train gathering speed while everyone carries on looking the other way.
November 3rd, 2026 07:36
4th coming
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
When Artificial Intelligence will be voting for the next robotic world leader - barreling 2ward us, indeed. What kind of finger will be on the red button? A sharp shot verse and on target. Well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 17:22
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
When Artificial Intelligence will be voting for the next robotic world leader - barreling 2ward us, indeed. What kind of finger will be on the red button? A sharp shot verse and on target. Well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 17:22
4th coming
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all imploding in the Whitehouse.
The Democrats have got their tails up, all is looking good.
The only ones hoping Trump does well is Iran, cos they know they\'re getting hammered if the mid terms go belly up.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all imploding in the Whitehouse.
The Democrats have got their tails up, all is looking good.
The only ones hoping Trump does well is Iran, cos they know they\'re getting hammered if the mid terms go belly up.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
4th coming
GenXer Sharon šš said:
Very creative here!!!! Sounds like a lot of whatās going on in the world. Politics. And all.
November 2nd, 2026 13:42
GenXer Sharon šš said:
Very creative here!!!! Sounds like a lot of whatās going on in the world. Politics. And all.
November 2nd, 2026 13:42
4th coming
sorenbarrett said:
Creative use of initialism as a touch in this piece my friend the message is powerful to open one\'s eyes to what is coming. Well done Tristan
November 2nd, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Creative use of initialism as a touch in this piece my friend the message is powerful to open one\'s eyes to what is coming. Well done Tristan
November 2nd, 2026 09:56
A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements everywhere, Tristan. Ignore the pea brains, unless violence is involved...
November 1st, 2026 22:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements everywhere, Tristan. Ignore the pea brains, unless violence is involved...
November 1st, 2026 22:38
A Little Mad
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Intolerance\' I think is the Word here. Well Said.
November 1st, 2026 15:22
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Intolerance\' I think is the Word here. Well Said.
November 1st, 2026 15:22
A Little Mad
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the, John Candy documentary, I Like Me. How he was encouraged, threatened even to keep his weight as this was a part of his comedic and acting persona as perceived by the public, where as in fact, he was a wonderful actor/ comedian, be he overweight or not. A very fine poem, indeed, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 13:11
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the, John Candy documentary, I Like Me. How he was encouraged, threatened even to keep his weight as this was a part of his comedic and acting persona as perceived by the public, where as in fact, he was a wonderful actor/ comedian, be he overweight or not. A very fine poem, indeed, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 13:11
A Little Mad
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem aims to challenge readers to reconsider their judgments and embrace a more loving and accepting attitude towards others, highlighting the sacred worth of every individual, regardless of societal labels. That\'s why you like me, cause lam me.š¤£ā¤ļøš¹
November 1st, 2026 12:56
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem aims to challenge readers to reconsider their judgments and embrace a more loving and accepting attitude towards others, highlighting the sacred worth of every individual, regardless of societal labels. That\'s why you like me, cause lam me.š¤£ā¤ļøš¹
November 1st, 2026 12:56
A Little Mad
soheil khodaparasti said:
A defiant rejection of prejudice, affirming that human dignity transcends stereotypes and that love must confront, not accommodate, fear.
November 1st, 2026 12:19
soheil khodaparasti said:
A defiant rejection of prejudice, affirming that human dignity transcends stereotypes and that love must confront, not accommodate, fear.
November 1st, 2026 12:19
Devilishly Dreadful: Devilās Alley; or, The Last House on the Right
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
I\'m after reading this splendid piece of literature with great care and it is well worth publishing so much so that it doesn\'t need editing - straight to print it is that good. Much praise for this one, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:32
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
I\'m after reading this splendid piece of literature with great care and it is well worth publishing so much so that it doesn\'t need editing - straight to print it is that good. Much praise for this one, my friend.
Do take care now,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 11:32
A Little Mad
orchidee said:
I thought the only thing that inspired terror was a certain glugging sound! heehee. :)
November 1st, 2026 10:56
orchidee said:
I thought the only thing that inspired terror was a certain glugging sound! heehee. :)
November 1st, 2026 10:56
A Little Mad
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message in this poem I loved the line \"Retrobates chew on the cud of fear.\" Is the neologism retrobates purposeful here it seems appropriate as is or was it meant as reprobates. A lovely play. Nicely done my friend.
November 1st, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
A strong message in this poem I loved the line \"Retrobates chew on the cud of fear.\" Is the neologism retrobates purposeful here it seems appropriate as is or was it meant as reprobates. A lovely play. Nicely done my friend.
November 1st, 2026 10:06
A Little Mad
Teddy.15 said:
The Power of being original even if it\'s sometimes devastatingly awkward for the sake of peace is something I myself would never consider, the sheep can walk in groups I\'ll be walking on the edge originally me, and believe me being a foreigner in a small town is sometimes hard to do, just as well I\'m loved by most! š¤£ š š¹
November 1st, 2026 09:49
Teddy.15 said:
The Power of being original even if it\'s sometimes devastatingly awkward for the sake of peace is something I myself would never consider, the sheep can walk in groups I\'ll be walking on the edge originally me, and believe me being a foreigner in a small town is sometimes hard to do, just as well I\'m loved by most! š¤£ š š¹
November 1st, 2026 09:49
A Little Mad
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās a fierce moral urgency here, challenging the way fear turns human judgment into a kind of social violence, with the Norman Bates reference, angry birds, and biting language giving the poem an appropriately confrontational edge. āI would rather love than live in fear!ā is the keeper for me, because it cuts through the wordplay and accusation to reveal the poemās central conviction: a personās worth should never depend on how comfortably they fit someone elseās expectations.
November 1st, 2026 09:28
Thomas W Case said:
Thereās a fierce moral urgency here, challenging the way fear turns human judgment into a kind of social violence, with the Norman Bates reference, angry birds, and biting language giving the poem an appropriately confrontational edge. āI would rather love than live in fear!ā is the keeper for me, because it cuts through the wordplay and accusation to reveal the poemās central conviction: a personās worth should never depend on how comfortably they fit someone elseās expectations.
November 1st, 2026 09:28
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