Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
persona non grata
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning to not allow others to hold you back from being who you are. Don\'t anchor your hopes and beliefs on someone that does not accept you. Nicely done Tristan
January 14th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning to not allow others to hold you back from being who you are. Don\'t anchor your hopes and beliefs on someone that does not accept you. Nicely done Tristan
January 14th, 2026 11:20
persona non grata
orchidee said:
There\'s one who\'s never persona non grata. He\'s always there, or if we can\'t see him we always hear him - glug! lol.
January 14th, 2026 10:37
orchidee said:
There\'s one who\'s never persona non grata. He\'s always there, or if we can\'t see him we always hear him - glug! lol.
January 14th, 2026 10:37
Inheritor Worm
cellinic said:
This is a very impressive and persuading piece of poetic work with strong emotional and meaningful overtones. I enjoyed the read although it was not easy in fact:) Best regards, my friend...
January 14th, 2026 02:12
cellinic said:
This is a very impressive and persuading piece of poetic work with strong emotional and meaningful overtones. I enjoyed the read although it was not easy in fact:) Best regards, my friend...
January 14th, 2026 02:12
Inheritor Worm
Doggerel Dave said:
Technically brilliant, Tristan - how do you find the time?
January 13th, 2026 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Technically brilliant, Tristan - how do you find the time?
January 13th, 2026 18:39
Inheritor Worm
orchidee said:
Someone worms their way in everywhere! We knows him! lol.
January 13th, 2026 10:43
orchidee said:
Someone worms their way in everywhere! We knows him! lol.
January 13th, 2026 10:43
Inheritor Worm
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical with a bit of playfulness (loved the term leadershit) A towering dark shadow of realities burning light of life and dark death. A Gothic existentialism that requires that resting time before the dough is cooked, enough time for it to raise. Fermentation a form of rot. Nicely done Tristan
January 13th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical with a bit of playfulness (loved the term leadershit) A towering dark shadow of realities burning light of life and dark death. A Gothic existentialism that requires that resting time before the dough is cooked, enough time for it to raise. Fermentation a form of rot. Nicely done Tristan
January 13th, 2026 10:02
Never Done
Teddy.15 said:
And the music never done, I find the best lyrics are the ones written from the soul, and here your soul comes out fighting! 🌹
January 13th, 2026 06:06
Teddy.15 said:
And the music never done, I find the best lyrics are the ones written from the soul, and here your soul comes out fighting! 🌹
January 13th, 2026 06:06
do i?
NafisaSB said:
this comes straight from the heart - and I sincerely hope the response is honest and liberating....
January 13th, 2026 02:30
NafisaSB said:
this comes straight from the heart - and I sincerely hope the response is honest and liberating....
January 13th, 2026 02:30
Never Done
Doggerel Dave said:
A transcendental trance I can almost experience through your words, Tristan. The sitar was certainly in my head as I read it. I\'m back in the sixties.
January 13th, 2026 00:09
Doggerel Dave said:
A transcendental trance I can almost experience through your words, Tristan. The sitar was certainly in my head as I read it. I\'m back in the sixties.
January 13th, 2026 00:09
Never Done
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard Quasar stars emit music! Tolkien wrote about it, too.
\"No longer shamed by sin.\" Love it!
January 12th, 2026 19:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard Quasar stars emit music! Tolkien wrote about it, too.
\"No longer shamed by sin.\" Love it!
January 12th, 2026 19:58
Never Done
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easy to be no longer ashamed when it gets so so tempting... But when the bright sun leaves, and we\'re left in the cold night, there\'s no more comfort, and no more brightness.
January 12th, 2026 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easy to be no longer ashamed when it gets so so tempting... But when the bright sun leaves, and we\'re left in the cold night, there\'s no more comfort, and no more brightness.
January 12th, 2026 16:44
Never Done
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all about the music, soulful and mystical, uninhibited.
It\'s the trip we all want to be on at some point in our lives.
January 12th, 2026 11:21
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all about the music, soulful and mystical, uninhibited.
It\'s the trip we all want to be on at some point in our lives.
January 12th, 2026 11:21
Never Done
sorenbarrett said:
If it was here in October saw it. A seductive siren is always welcome. A fun read Tristan who would not shed their skin for a siren?
January 12th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
If it was here in October saw it. A seductive siren is always welcome. A fun read Tristan who would not shed their skin for a siren?
January 12th, 2026 08:24
Never Done
orchidee said:
Never done? Never finished, says..... we knows \'em, P & Co. Never finished what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
January 12th, 2026 07:43
orchidee said:
Never done? Never finished, says..... we knows \'em, P & Co. Never finished what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
January 12th, 2026 07:43
The Scandal of Honesty
Doggerel Dave said:
Good read, Tristan. Organizations, corporations are mostly like that with power plays etc in all directions. Why Christianity via its earthly embodiment a/the church should be any different, I have no idea.
January 12th, 2026 02:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Good read, Tristan. Organizations, corporations are mostly like that with power plays etc in all directions. Why Christianity via its earthly embodiment a/the church should be any different, I have no idea.
January 12th, 2026 02:06
The Scandal of Honesty
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s interesting to ponder on a woman\'s place in religion. \"Heaven forgive us all for our judgment—\" now isn\'t that the truth!
January 11th, 2026 23:56
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s interesting to ponder on a woman\'s place in religion. \"Heaven forgive us all for our judgment—\" now isn\'t that the truth!
January 11th, 2026 23:56
The Scandal of Honesty
orchidee said:
Good write T. Now in the unending series \'Don\'t answer / finish that\' - since when was Popeye honest about............! lol.
January 11th, 2026 09:39
orchidee said:
Good write T. Now in the unending series \'Don\'t answer / finish that\' - since when was Popeye honest about............! lol.
January 11th, 2026 09:39
The Scandal of Honesty
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you and I both chose the theme of religion today. A mind bond I would assume. This poem sends a message so neglected in religion and often myth as well in a male dominated history and society. A wonderful write with a powerful message and a fave
January 11th, 2026 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you and I both chose the theme of religion today. A mind bond I would assume. This poem sends a message so neglected in religion and often myth as well in a male dominated history and society. A wonderful write with a powerful message and a fave
January 11th, 2026 09:05
The Parallax of Presentation
Thomas W Case said:
Truth hits like a bat to the skull—raw, unflinching, and exactly what writing should do.
The Biaxial Parallax form suits this: chaotic, precise, and unapologetically alive.
January 11th, 2026 08:50
Thomas W Case said:
Truth hits like a bat to the skull—raw, unflinching, and exactly what writing should do.
The Biaxial Parallax form suits this: chaotic, precise, and unapologetically alive.
January 11th, 2026 08:50
The Parallax of Presentation
Doggerel Dave said:
Not going to investigate the mechanics of form, Tristan, as I don\'t think I\'ll be utilising it. But that doesn\'t mean that it did not serve your message well, for I understood it clearly; this also attributable to the fact that I agree with every word (or did after I found out what \'Nugatory\' meant and acquainted myself with Kali.🙃👍
January 10th, 2026 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Not going to investigate the mechanics of form, Tristan, as I don\'t think I\'ll be utilising it. But that doesn\'t mean that it did not serve your message well, for I understood it clearly; this also attributable to the fact that I agree with every word (or did after I found out what \'Nugatory\' meant and acquainted myself with Kali.🙃👍
January 10th, 2026 19:38
The Parallax of Presentation
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oohhh, someone don\'t know about Biaxial Parallax stuff, but he\'s an expert on glugging! heehee.
January 10th, 2026 11:10
orchidee said:
Good write T. Oohhh, someone don\'t know about Biaxial Parallax stuff, but he\'s an expert on glugging! heehee.
January 10th, 2026 11:10
The Parallax of Presentation
sorenbarrett said:
I like the presentation of his poem as if on the right is the voice of truth. It speaks with authority and confirms the value of individuality despite its banishment from social acceptance. A world of veneers and polish hides true value beneath its gilded shine. A rusted ax has more value than a gilded one of tin. A fave
January 10th, 2026 10:47
sorenbarrett said:
I like the presentation of his poem as if on the right is the voice of truth. It speaks with authority and confirms the value of individuality despite its banishment from social acceptance. A world of veneers and polish hides true value beneath its gilded shine. A rusted ax has more value than a gilded one of tin. A fave
January 10th, 2026 10:47
The Death of I
cellinic said:
I fully agree with your idea, that there are countless ways to die and to have your life finished, both mentally-emotionally and physically. Best wishes,
January 10th, 2026 08:20
cellinic said:
I fully agree with your idea, that there are countless ways to die and to have your life finished, both mentally-emotionally and physically. Best wishes,
January 10th, 2026 08:20
The Death of I
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember a friend telling me that George Harrison used to say to people when they were telling him about someone who\'d just died, \"I bet your glad it wasn\'t you\"!
January 10th, 2026 04:03
Mutley Ravishes said:
I remember a friend telling me that George Harrison used to say to people when they were telling him about someone who\'d just died, \"I bet your glad it wasn\'t you\"!
January 10th, 2026 04:03
The Death of I
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and haunting. The way you explore the multifaceted nature of death, culminating in the chilling \'death of I\', leaves a lasting impact. The Prometheus reference 🔥 adds depth to the existential dread. Loved the line \'Who am I to write down a lie?\' 🤔 - a poignant reflection on authenticity in mortality. Very well written dearest Tittu!!! A fave🌹
January 10th, 2026 00:08
Salvia.S said:
Powerful and haunting. The way you explore the multifaceted nature of death, culminating in the chilling \'death of I\', leaves a lasting impact. The Prometheus reference 🔥 adds depth to the existential dread. Loved the line \'Who am I to write down a lie?\' 🤔 - a poignant reflection on authenticity in mortality. Very well written dearest Tittu!!! A fave🌹
January 10th, 2026 00:08
The Death of I
NinjaGirl said:
I like the rhyme and structure of this one! Rhyming with another stanza is entertaining! And as for death, he does succeed in many ways, but the emotional death of ourselves, perhaps it\'s something that can be undone.
January 9th, 2026 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
I like the rhyme and structure of this one! Rhyming with another stanza is entertaining! And as for death, he does succeed in many ways, but the emotional death of ourselves, perhaps it\'s something that can be undone.
January 9th, 2026 16:44
The Death of I
Doggerel Dave said:
(It is being so cheerful wot keep you going, Tristan😂) Your structure muscled me through to the end. But frankly, after I\'m gone I won\'t care. However it maintained my interest in a perverse kind of way.
January 9th, 2026 15:59
Doggerel Dave said:
(It is being so cheerful wot keep you going, Tristan😂) Your structure muscled me through to the end. But frankly, after I\'m gone I won\'t care. However it maintained my interest in a perverse kind of way.
January 9th, 2026 15:59
The Death of I
orchidee said:
I is - a very ungrammatical start from me there - I is saying this is a good write T.
Erm, I experienced a death of I - summat like this: * was go*ng to s*t r*ght here and wr*te a w*tty poem about Ob* and the * key on me keyboard jammed. Doh!
January 9th, 2026 12:50
orchidee said:
I is - a very ungrammatical start from me there - I is saying this is a good write T.
Erm, I experienced a death of I - summat like this: * was go*ng to s*t r*ght here and wr*te a w*tty poem about Ob* and the * key on me keyboard jammed. Doh!
January 9th, 2026 12:50
The Death of I
Paul Bell said:
There really should be a pill against dying.
Now other people wanting you dead, that\'s different.
Still, immortality is quite nice too.
I\'ll be happy to get buried in a hot country.
January 9th, 2026 12:03
Paul Bell said:
There really should be a pill against dying.
Now other people wanting you dead, that\'s different.
Still, immortality is quite nice too.
I\'ll be happy to get buried in a hot country.
January 9th, 2026 12:03
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