Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Juvenile Sprinter
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Falls so well line after line, much enjoyed
September 26th, 2026 08:38
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Falls so well line after line, much enjoyed
September 26th, 2026 08:38
missing wings
Teddy.15 said:
How very clever a word I dislike too but in our current world it has to be used if not to demonstrate one\'s feelings. Brilliant and beautifully crafted. 🌹
September 26th, 2026 02:37
Teddy.15 said:
How very clever a word I dislike too but in our current world it has to be used if not to demonstrate one\'s feelings. Brilliant and beautifully crafted. 🌹
September 26th, 2026 02:37
missing wings
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The silence of nothingness and nothing is no godd to no one as in apathy, A dangerous silence, can give hopelessness to hope and the death of life. Very well done, my friend, top drawer.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 25th, 2026 12:51
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
The silence of nothingness and nothing is no godd to no one as in apathy, A dangerous silence, can give hopelessness to hope and the death of life. Very well done, my friend, top drawer.
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 25th, 2026 12:51
missing wings
Syd said:
I really like this Tristan.
It made me think of these lines
“The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing.”
- Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:10
Syd said:
I really like this Tristan.
It made me think of these lines
“The only thing necessary for the triumph of evil is for good men to do nothing.”
- Syd 🍄
September 25th, 2026 12:10
missing wings
sorenbarrett said:
I love the contradictive paired words used in this piece it gives it spice. The message itself is a powerful one disguised under the cover of what many take to be a middle road but apathy is not a middle road but a opposition in the triad of love, hate and apathy. Nicely written my friend.
September 25th, 2026 08:45
sorenbarrett said:
I love the contradictive paired words used in this piece it gives it spice. The message itself is a powerful one disguised under the cover of what many take to be a middle road but apathy is not a middle road but a opposition in the triad of love, hate and apathy. Nicely written my friend.
September 25th, 2026 08:45
missing wings
orchidee said:
Getting nearer to Saint S......... poem. Popeye & Co meanwhile battling with spinach cans, sabres, and knitting needles! lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:43
orchidee said:
Getting nearer to Saint S......... poem. Popeye & Co meanwhile battling with spinach cans, sabres, and knitting needles! lol.
September 25th, 2026 08:43
meaning to harp
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude, what I love is the photo, your lines a lovely accompaniment. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 24th, 2026 20:27
Cheeky Missy said:
Dude, what I love is the photo, your lines a lovely accompaniment. Thank you so very much for sharing.
September 24th, 2026 20:27
meaning to harp
Kevin Hulme said:
Had to Google Bob Harper. I assume it the same fella. Once TV Fitness guy.
Haters ? A Pain in the Nether- Regions.
September 24th, 2026 10:12
Kevin Hulme said:
Had to Google Bob Harper. I assume it the same fella. Once TV Fitness guy.
Haters ? A Pain in the Nether- Regions.
September 24th, 2026 10:12
meaning to harp
orchidee said:
I\'ve not heard of Lord S....... for next Monday. Does Popeye know him? Dang it, Popeyeus got in again. lol.
September 24th, 2026 09:12
orchidee said:
I\'ve not heard of Lord S....... for next Monday. Does Popeye know him? Dang it, Popeyeus got in again. lol.
September 24th, 2026 09:12
meaning to harp
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I also dont know him but you put it crisp and fresh my friend
September 24th, 2026 08:42
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I also dont know him but you put it crisp and fresh my friend
September 24th, 2026 08:42
meaning to harp
arqios said:
ah what to do with haters... they influence us too! And with everything accessible at all times and everywhere, exacerbates it all. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 24th, 2026 08:42
arqios said:
ah what to do with haters... they influence us too! And with everything accessible at all times and everywhere, exacerbates it all. 🙏🏻🕊️
September 24th, 2026 08:42
meaning to harp
sorenbarrett said:
Have to say Tristan that I know nothing about him since I watch next to no \'TV and haven\'t ventured into that area he promotes. Not a vegan or into training anymore. Well written and expresses the feeling well.
September 24th, 2026 08:32
sorenbarrett said:
Have to say Tristan that I know nothing about him since I watch next to no \'TV and haven\'t ventured into that area he promotes. Not a vegan or into training anymore. Well written and expresses the feeling well.
September 24th, 2026 08:32
sad song
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. I know this feels so well; I live it every day. Well express ones feling in a poem. Your poem delves into emotional desolation and the inadequacy of societal responses to such feelings, highlighting how the poet feels misunderstood and invalidated by others. You\'re not alone; I am here for you, my friend.🙏🌹🙏❤️
September 23rd, 2026 09:35
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. I know this feels so well; I live it every day. Well express ones feling in a poem. Your poem delves into emotional desolation and the inadequacy of societal responses to such feelings, highlighting how the poet feels misunderstood and invalidated by others. You\'re not alone; I am here for you, my friend.🙏🌹🙏❤️
September 23rd, 2026 09:35
sad song
Lorenz said:
Surrounded from all sides by the unbearable clamor of the crowd ,solitude seems to me to be a precious autistic privilege ...
September 23rd, 2026 09:29
Lorenz said:
Surrounded from all sides by the unbearable clamor of the crowd ,solitude seems to me to be a precious autistic privilege ...
September 23rd, 2026 09:29
sad song
orchidee said:
Good write T. Alas, it\'s sad, say Popeye and Co - is there more spinach, wool for knitting, and sabres around!? lol. Dunno how they keep sneaking in everywhere. lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:15
orchidee said:
Good write T. Alas, it\'s sad, say Popeye and Co - is there more spinach, wool for knitting, and sabres around!? lol. Dunno how they keep sneaking in everywhere. lol.
September 23rd, 2026 09:15
sad song
sorenbarrett said:
We are indeed all of us alone even when in a crowd of friends. For none can think our thoughts or feel our feelings. Prisoners sentenced to solitary confinement in cell of flesh and bone. Well written my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:46
sorenbarrett said:
We are indeed all of us alone even when in a crowd of friends. For none can think our thoughts or feel our feelings. Prisoners sentenced to solitary confinement in cell of flesh and bone. Well written my friend.
September 23rd, 2026 08:46
sad song
arqios said:
Perhaps that\'s one of the reasons that poetry has remained, it is myself outside of myself and very companionable. A fave!🙏🏻🕊️
September 23rd, 2026 08:31
arqios said:
Perhaps that\'s one of the reasons that poetry has remained, it is myself outside of myself and very companionable. A fave!🙏🏻🕊️
September 23rd, 2026 08:31
oh!—my!
Neville said:
I concur .. but believe it should be re-branded .. hey let\'s all start calling it SI .. because not even AI could come up with something quite so banal & you would have to be a SI to have 1) thought of it & 2) mentioned it on a world stage ........... SI in my book = STUPID IDIOT 🏴⚫🖤🐧👍
September 23rd, 2026 02:02
Neville said:
I concur .. but believe it should be re-branded .. hey let\'s all start calling it SI .. because not even AI could come up with something quite so banal & you would have to be a SI to have 1) thought of it & 2) mentioned it on a world stage ........... SI in my book = STUPID IDIOT 🏴⚫🖤🐧👍
September 23rd, 2026 02:02
oh!—my!
Doggerel Dave said:
The AI guy is here at last;
Didn\'t know his reach was so vast.
Talking poetesses is a different matter,
You are always careful and avoid a splatter.
September 22nd, 2026 19:04
Doggerel Dave said:
The AI guy is here at last;
Didn\'t know his reach was so vast.
Talking poetesses is a different matter,
You are always careful and avoid a splatter.
September 22nd, 2026 19:04
oh!—my!
Kevin Hulme said:
This AI Gentleman seems to be getting about alot. Causing trouble. Disrupting day to day activities. Looking for a Bruising I think.
September 22nd, 2026 18:52
Kevin Hulme said:
This AI Gentleman seems to be getting about alot. Causing trouble. Disrupting day to day activities. Looking for a Bruising I think.
September 22nd, 2026 18:52
oh!—my!
arqios said:
An authentic demonstration of circular argument by information technology. We truly live in the information age! 👍🏻🤣🕊️
September 22nd, 2026 17:22
arqios said:
An authentic demonstration of circular argument by information technology. We truly live in the information age! 👍🏻🤣🕊️
September 22nd, 2026 17:22
oh!—my!
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sums the lunacy up well my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
sums the lunacy up well my friend
September 22nd, 2026 11:43
oh!—my!
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, I take it that this was the Instagram post you were telling me about?
I once had a write score 38% AI likelihood which stung a little. If AI is mentioned in the writing it actually bumps your score up. So does writing in 4 line stanzas, which I mostly do anyway.
Chin up mate.
- Syd 🍄
September 22nd, 2026 10:15
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, I take it that this was the Instagram post you were telling me about?
I once had a write score 38% AI likelihood which stung a little. If AI is mentioned in the writing it actually bumps your score up. So does writing in 4 line stanzas, which I mostly do anyway.
Chin up mate.
- Syd 🍄
September 22nd, 2026 10:15
oh!—my!
sorenbarrett said:
Just what we needed further suspicion of humanness. I already thought that a teacher I had was an alien now this. Nicely done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 09:08
sorenbarrett said:
Just what we needed further suspicion of humanness. I already thought that a teacher I had was an alien now this. Nicely done my friend
September 22nd, 2026 09:08
oh!—my!
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol. I\'ve not heard of Saint S................ lol.
September 22nd, 2026 08:56
orchidee said:
Good write T. lol. I\'ve not heard of Saint S................ lol.
September 22nd, 2026 08:56
Devilishly Dreadful: The Mysteries of Washington
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn deliberately tangled, oppressive feeling here, with the repeated language of freedom, prosperity, grace, and Washington slowly mutating into images of blood, chains, barbed wire, and a noose. The repetition is the engine of the poem, because the familiar patriotic phrases keep coming back warped and corrupted, making the reader feel the speaker’s growing sense that the promise of freedom has become something much darker.
September 22nd, 2026 07:16
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a damn deliberately tangled, oppressive feeling here, with the repeated language of freedom, prosperity, grace, and Washington slowly mutating into images of blood, chains, barbed wire, and a noose. The repetition is the engine of the poem, because the familiar patriotic phrases keep coming back warped and corrupted, making the reader feel the speaker’s growing sense that the promise of freedom has become something much darker.
September 22nd, 2026 07:16
Devilishly Dreadful: The Mysteries of Washington
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
The illustration of your poem reminded me of the images from the movie Logan\'s Run; we are in dreadful times, where freedom is increasingly scarce. Well written.
https://youtu.be/oQbdIRc16As?si=ser1qjHXWJmQ88s9
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https://youtu.be/_flsYtL9gaU?si=x3jkpvvOyby84Hnd
September 22nd, 2026 03:38
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
The illustration of your poem reminded me of the images from the movie Logan\'s Run; we are in dreadful times, where freedom is increasingly scarce. Well written.
https://youtu.be/oQbdIRc16As?si=ser1qjHXWJmQ88s9
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https://youtu.be/_flsYtL9gaU?si=x3jkpvvOyby84Hnd
September 22nd, 2026 03:38
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