Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



Cast Away
arqios said:

Every man is an island 🏝️ until they’re not, every man a garden πŸͺ΄ until they won’t πŸͺπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

August 1st, 2026 14:00

Cast Away
orchidee said:

Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.

August 1st, 2026 11:13

Cast Away
Paul Bell said:

We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.


August 1st, 2026 11:11

Cast Away
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

another fine write friend

August 1st, 2026 10:29

Cast Away
sorenbarrett said:

From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written

August 1st, 2026 08:43

mayday
cellinic said:

A very deep and sincere write, not at all casual)

July 31st, 2026 17:52

mayday
orchidee said:

No danger of the spinach market collapsing with Popeye around! lol.

July 31st, 2026 10:02

mayday
Friendship said:

A well-written poem.A powerful feeling trapped in one\'s mind with life. I know this so well, my friend. Your poem deals with themes of crisis, paralysis, and the overwhelming nature of negative emotions or situations. It evokes a sense of being trapped or overwhelmed, unable to take action or think clearly. God your not alone, my friend.πŸ™β€οΈπŸ™

July 31st, 2026 09:23

mayday
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Wonderful words my friend

July 31st, 2026 08:50

mayday
Demar Desu said:

I love how you always play with the structure and format of these things we call words and letters… great poem

July 31st, 2026 08:15

mayday
sorenbarrett said:

I have seen this mechanical as well as emotional. Nicely illustrated with your format. Well done Tristan

July 31st, 2026 08:04

mayday
arqios said:

When a sudden overwhelm hits so hard it can floor both mind and bodyπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 31st, 2026 07:57

Mirrors
orchidee said:

Noooo, Popeye, don\'t lend us a mirror so we can see your antics. Why not, he asks us? WCAT!!

July 31st, 2026 01:58

Mirrors
orchidee said:

Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.

July 30th, 2026 10:19

Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:

This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave

July 30th, 2026 08:29

Mirrors
Lorenz said:

I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...

July 30th, 2026 08:12

Mirrors
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

a deep probing piece my friend

July 30th, 2026 08:11

Mirrors
arqios said:

There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding πŸ•ŠοΈπŸ™πŸ»

July 30th, 2026 07:58

the pudding
David Wakeling said:

I also believe that rules were meant to be debated. Thoughtful piece here

July 29th, 2026 19:17

the pudding
GenXer Sharon πŸ™πŸ€ said:

Intriguing!! Well said!

July 29th, 2026 15:22

the pudding
Friendship said:

Well said

July 29th, 2026 08:48

the pudding
arqios said:

That’s proof enough, puddin all aroundπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 29th, 2026 08:39

the pudding
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

wonderful write with an open end for the reader to ponder

July 29th, 2026 08:26

the pudding
orchidee said:

We know Popeye is making that spinach pudding, though when they have it they say \'Blleeeuuurrgghh!\' lol. Does Popeye invite Mr Hunt to dinner? heehee.

July 29th, 2026 08:25

the pudding
sorenbarrett said:

This one can be taken either way and that is its strength. I love when a poem leaves it up to the reader to decide the outcome. Nicely done my friend

July 29th, 2026 08:17

The Great Delaware
Neville said:



This just hit me like an avalanche talk about floods .. it felt like I was being swept away by my own guilt .. talk about dark .. β–ͺοΈβ—Ύβ—ΌοΈβš«πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸ΄πŸ§

July 28th, 2026 23:29

The Great Delaware
David Wakeling said:

This is such a powerful piece amigo.As powerful as the mighty Delaware itself.I like the \"marching\" style text that commands the reader to pay attention.Well done a great piece

July 28th, 2026 22:33

The Great Delaware
Teddy.15 said:

There should never be guilt if one doesn\'t follow the other sheep, what a powerful piece, I almost want to rescue you Tristan, but I know you are a mighty force! πŸ’œ

July 28th, 2026 17:01

The Great Delaware
arqios said:

People who commit wrongdoing blame others for their own corruption, but truth and justice will eventually surge through and wash everything clean, violently, inevitably, like a river in flood.


July 28th, 2026 15:57

The Great Delaware
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

another fine write my friend, very much enjoyed

July 28th, 2026 12:30

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