Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the little horn
Friendship said:
The poem appears to critique power dynamics and the often absurd nature of authority figures, particularly in a political context. The imagery of the \"little horn\" suggests something that is both insignificant and yet adorned or celebrated, perhaps pointing to the inflated egos and aspirations of those in power who may not have the substance or capability to match their positions.
December 10th, 2025 10:22
Friendship said:
The poem appears to critique power dynamics and the often absurd nature of authority figures, particularly in a political context. The imagery of the \"little horn\" suggests something that is both insignificant and yet adorned or celebrated, perhaps pointing to the inflated egos and aspirations of those in power who may not have the substance or capability to match their positions.
December 10th, 2025 10:22
the little horn
orchidee said:
Some images from Old Testament book of Daniel here. P is in disguise - looks a bit like a rhino, as in that pic there! lol.
December 10th, 2025 10:19
orchidee said:
Some images from Old Testament book of Daniel here. P is in disguise - looks a bit like a rhino, as in that pic there! lol.
December 10th, 2025 10:19
The Satan is in the System
coracaodacripta said:
I quite like the implication that evil is present in the person who can\'t see or act clearly, but I do suppose that the Devil is in the details.
December 10th, 2025 09:51
coracaodacripta said:
I quite like the implication that evil is present in the person who can\'t see or act clearly, but I do suppose that the Devil is in the details.
December 10th, 2025 09:51
the little horn
coracaodacripta said:
I wish I could support the cause financially, or at least purchase a copy, but I\'m hopeful that this movement will prosper. You definitely caught my attention with the cussing - very seldom do we have writers with enough guts. Even less do we have writers willing to challenge the status quo. Very nice.
December 10th, 2025 09:27
coracaodacripta said:
I wish I could support the cause financially, or at least purchase a copy, but I\'m hopeful that this movement will prosper. You definitely caught my attention with the cussing - very seldom do we have writers with enough guts. Even less do we have writers willing to challenge the status quo. Very nice.
December 10th, 2025 09:27
the little horn
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this one is already labeled and clear to what it applies. Unfortunate that it is all too true.
December 10th, 2025 09:21
sorenbarrett said:
I think that this one is already labeled and clear to what it applies. Unfortunate that it is all too true.
December 10th, 2025 09:21
Rubric of Ridiculousness
Salvia.S said:
This is 🔥! It is a powerful critique of societal values, highlighting the tension between productivity and humanity. The language is sharp, and the imagery is striking. Very well written dearest Tittu!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:20
Salvia.S said:
This is 🔥! It is a powerful critique of societal values, highlighting the tension between productivity and humanity. The language is sharp, and the imagery is striking. Very well written dearest Tittu!!!
December 10th, 2025 05:20
Rubric of Ridiculousness
Friendship said:
Strong words, my friend, well done. The poem addresses themes of productivity, conformity, and the consequences of a meritocratic society. The poet explores the idea that effectiveness is often misdefined and serves to marginalize true creative expression.
December 9th, 2025 10:08
Friendship said:
Strong words, my friend, well done. The poem addresses themes of productivity, conformity, and the consequences of a meritocratic society. The poet explores the idea that effectiveness is often misdefined and serves to marginalize true creative expression.
December 9th, 2025 10:08
Rubric of Ridiculousness
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
Rubric of Ridiculousness
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
what do i think?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
what do i think?
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
what do i think?
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
what do i think?
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
what do i think?
Friendship said:
Whoa, this was a challenge for me, my friend. The poem addresses issues such as the societal consequences of capitalism, the plight of immigrants, the hypocrisy of political systems, and the overwhelming sense of despair in contemporary life. It evokes a visceral reaction against the status quo, suggesting that while the world continues to function, it does so in a state of moral and ethical decline.
December 8th, 2025 13:28
Friendship said:
Whoa, this was a challenge for me, my friend. The poem addresses issues such as the societal consequences of capitalism, the plight of immigrants, the hypocrisy of political systems, and the overwhelming sense of despair in contemporary life. It evokes a visceral reaction against the status quo, suggesting that while the world continues to function, it does so in a state of moral and ethical decline.
December 8th, 2025 13:28
what do i think?
orchidee said:
That sludgy slime reminded me of spinach. Oh no! Do we hear a glug?! lol.
December 8th, 2025 10:23
orchidee said:
That sludgy slime reminded me of spinach. Oh no! Do we hear a glug?! lol.
December 8th, 2025 10:23
what do i think?
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling those ice cubes a world gotten out of control like a cancerous cell. Multiplying taking over destroying all around it until it kills itself. Malignant might be a good word. Well written my friend
December 8th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling those ice cubes a world gotten out of control like a cancerous cell. Multiplying taking over destroying all around it until it kills itself. Malignant might be a good word. Well written my friend
December 8th, 2025 10:16
what do i think?
2781 said:
They could try beastiality porn, to get their pecker up!
If nothing else is working?
December 8th, 2025 09:45
2781 said:
They could try beastiality porn, to get their pecker up!
If nothing else is working?
December 8th, 2025 09:45
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
NinjaGirl said:
\"And Jesus embodied the divine feminine.\" Jesus was definitely a feminist! The bible teaches us so many stories of women and Christ, anyone who tries to say otherwise about women is certainly wrong! Fantastic poem of course!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
NinjaGirl said:
\"And Jesus embodied the divine feminine.\" Jesus was definitely a feminist! The bible teaches us so many stories of women and Christ, anyone who tries to say otherwise about women is certainly wrong! Fantastic poem of course!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
arqios said:
Scorched Sundays! Most of us have had those. And so eloquently expressed in poem🕊️🙏🏻
December 7th, 2025 19:29
arqios said:
Scorched Sundays! Most of us have had those. And so eloquently expressed in poem🕊️🙏🏻
December 7th, 2025 19:29
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
sorenbarrett said:
Deep and historical but pertinent today as well. A metaphor within metaphor here and I loved the reference to the Logos. Well done my friend a fave
December 7th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Deep and historical but pertinent today as well. A metaphor within metaphor here and I loved the reference to the Logos. Well done my friend a fave
December 7th, 2025 09:26
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of gender, power dynamics, religious authority, and the resilience of truth and feminine wisdom. It references historical figures and events, such as Torquemada and the Inquisition, to emphasize the struggle against oppression and the enduring
December 7th, 2025 08:21
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of gender, power dynamics, religious authority, and the resilience of truth and feminine wisdom. It references historical figures and events, such as Torquemada and the Inquisition, to emphasize the struggle against oppression and the enduring
December 7th, 2025 08:21
pig stye
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Congratulations Tristan. So happy I am for you!!!
December 7th, 2025 07:40
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Congratulations Tristan. So happy I am for you!!!
December 7th, 2025 07:40
pig stye
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan, you know I have a dry dark humour funny bone, and this made me Chuckle 🤭, not that I like to know you suffer but your imagery is always fabulous 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan, you know I have a dry dark humour funny bone, and this made me Chuckle 🤭, not that I like to know you suffer but your imagery is always fabulous 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:53
pig stye
arqios said:
A mighty addition to the saying \"digging our own grave\" with making our own stye to wallow in. 🕊️🙏
December 6th, 2025 22:51
arqios said:
A mighty addition to the saying \"digging our own grave\" with making our own stye to wallow in. 🕊️🙏
December 6th, 2025 22:51
pig stye
orchidee said:
Argh!! A very dark poem - put that light on there! Arghhh! Just fell down the stairs - no light on. lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:21
orchidee said:
Argh!! A very dark poem - put that light on there! Arghhh! Just fell down the stairs - no light on. lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:21
pig stye
sorenbarrett said:
Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where it begins as a nursery rhyme and ends a rather dark existential tale. Well done my friend
December 6th, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where it begins as a nursery rhyme and ends a rather dark existential tale. Well done my friend
December 6th, 2025 11:31
pig stye
Bella Shepard said:
We are encased in a body which encapsulates us whether living or dead, holds all that we are, holds all that we\'ve dreamt, holds a past that is best left in check. Can anyone ever, truly see us? You ask a very profound question in exquisite verse, this goes deep into the soul. Remarkable!
December 6th, 2025 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
We are encased in a body which encapsulates us whether living or dead, holds all that we are, holds all that we\'ve dreamt, holds a past that is best left in check. Can anyone ever, truly see us? You ask a very profound question in exquisite verse, this goes deep into the soul. Remarkable!
December 6th, 2025 11:19
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