Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Rubric of Ridiculousness
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
orchidee said:
Good write T. This is ridiculous, P (we knows him) and must stop. What must stop? Don\'t answer that! lol.
December 9th, 2025 09:14
Rubric of Ridiculousness
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
sorenbarrett said:
Powerful words rock the stone tablets and shake loose the ten rules leaving only one might makes right. Cleverly worded and well constructed this one is a fave.
December 9th, 2025 08:57
what do i think?
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t seem to have access to Dixie Dodd Tristan, since she only seems to frequent those internet spaces I never do. This a shame as she\'s provoked you into a beautiful rant which I find my own image of society and the world perfectly in congruence with.
December 9th, 2025 01:10
what do i think?
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
arqios said:
Indeed! And at times it’s an imposition and intrusive pressure when one isn’t particularly stuffed about saying anything. 😜🤩🙏🏻🕊️
December 8th, 2025 19:27
what do i think?
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
NinjaGirl said:
Don\'t let that ice numb your lips too much...keep talking, we\'ll all keep talking, and not stop until it\'s fixed.
December 8th, 2025 15:04
what do i think?
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
Paul Bell said:
Capitalism exploits the poor, socialism pretends it\'s a level playing field, but it\'s not.
Is the world on the edge, I would say yes.
Governments have been found out, and now we see the stark consequences.
December 8th, 2025 14:45
what do i think?
Friendship said:
Whoa, this was a challenge for me, my friend. The poem addresses issues such as the societal consequences of capitalism, the plight of immigrants, the hypocrisy of political systems, and the overwhelming sense of despair in contemporary life. It evokes a visceral reaction against the status quo, suggesting that while the world continues to function, it does so in a state of moral and ethical decline.
December 8th, 2025 13:28
Friendship said:
Whoa, this was a challenge for me, my friend. The poem addresses issues such as the societal consequences of capitalism, the plight of immigrants, the hypocrisy of political systems, and the overwhelming sense of despair in contemporary life. It evokes a visceral reaction against the status quo, suggesting that while the world continues to function, it does so in a state of moral and ethical decline.
December 8th, 2025 13:28
what do i think?
orchidee said:
That sludgy slime reminded me of spinach. Oh no! Do we hear a glug?! lol.
December 8th, 2025 10:23
orchidee said:
That sludgy slime reminded me of spinach. Oh no! Do we hear a glug?! lol.
December 8th, 2025 10:23
what do i think?
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling those ice cubes a world gotten out of control like a cancerous cell. Multiplying taking over destroying all around it until it kills itself. Malignant might be a good word. Well written my friend
December 8th, 2025 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Chilling those ice cubes a world gotten out of control like a cancerous cell. Multiplying taking over destroying all around it until it kills itself. Malignant might be a good word. Well written my friend
December 8th, 2025 10:16
what do i think?
2781 said:
They could try beastiality porn, to get their pecker up!
If nothing else is working?
December 8th, 2025 09:45
2781 said:
They could try beastiality porn, to get their pecker up!
If nothing else is working?
December 8th, 2025 09:45
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
NinjaGirl said:
\"And Jesus embodied the divine feminine.\" Jesus was definitely a feminist! The bible teaches us so many stories of women and Christ, anyone who tries to say otherwise about women is certainly wrong! Fantastic poem of course!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
NinjaGirl said:
\"And Jesus embodied the divine feminine.\" Jesus was definitely a feminist! The bible teaches us so many stories of women and Christ, anyone who tries to say otherwise about women is certainly wrong! Fantastic poem of course!
December 7th, 2025 20:40
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
arqios said:
Scorched Sundays! Most of us have had those. And so eloquently expressed in poem🕊️🙏🏻
December 7th, 2025 19:29
arqios said:
Scorched Sundays! Most of us have had those. And so eloquently expressed in poem🕊️🙏🏻
December 7th, 2025 19:29
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
sorenbarrett said:
Deep and historical but pertinent today as well. A metaphor within metaphor here and I loved the reference to the Logos. Well done my friend a fave
December 7th, 2025 09:26
sorenbarrett said:
Deep and historical but pertinent today as well. A metaphor within metaphor here and I loved the reference to the Logos. Well done my friend a fave
December 7th, 2025 09:26
Torquemada\'s Trepidation
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of gender, power dynamics, religious authority, and the resilience of truth and feminine wisdom. It references historical figures and events, such as Torquemada and the Inquisition, to emphasize the struggle against oppression and the enduring
December 7th, 2025 08:21
Friendship said:
Your poem explores themes of gender, power dynamics, religious authority, and the resilience of truth and feminine wisdom. It references historical figures and events, such as Torquemada and the Inquisition, to emphasize the struggle against oppression and the enduring
December 7th, 2025 08:21
pig stye
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Congratulations Tristan. So happy I am for you!!!
December 7th, 2025 07:40
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
Congratulations Tristan. So happy I am for you!!!
December 7th, 2025 07:40
pig stye
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan, you know I have a dry dark humour funny bone, and this made me Chuckle 🤭, not that I like to know you suffer but your imagery is always fabulous 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:53
Teddy.15 said:
Tristan, you know I have a dry dark humour funny bone, and this made me Chuckle 🤭, not that I like to know you suffer but your imagery is always fabulous 🌹
December 7th, 2025 05:53
pig stye
arqios said:
A mighty addition to the saying \"digging our own grave\" with making our own stye to wallow in. 🕊️🙏
December 6th, 2025 22:51
arqios said:
A mighty addition to the saying \"digging our own grave\" with making our own stye to wallow in. 🕊️🙏
December 6th, 2025 22:51
pig stye
orchidee said:
Argh!! A very dark poem - put that light on there! Arghhh! Just fell down the stairs - no light on. lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:21
orchidee said:
Argh!! A very dark poem - put that light on there! Arghhh! Just fell down the stairs - no light on. lol.
December 6th, 2025 12:21
pig stye
sorenbarrett said:
Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where it begins as a nursery rhyme and ends a rather dark existential tale. Well done my friend
December 6th, 2025 11:31
sorenbarrett said:
Why are we always picking at scabs? A most interesting write Tristan where it begins as a nursery rhyme and ends a rather dark existential tale. Well done my friend
December 6th, 2025 11:31
pig stye
Bella Shepard said:
We are encased in a body which encapsulates us whether living or dead, holds all that we are, holds all that we\'ve dreamt, holds a past that is best left in check. Can anyone ever, truly see us? You ask a very profound question in exquisite verse, this goes deep into the soul. Remarkable!
December 6th, 2025 11:19
Bella Shepard said:
We are encased in a body which encapsulates us whether living or dead, holds all that we are, holds all that we\'ve dreamt, holds a past that is best left in check. Can anyone ever, truly see us? You ask a very profound question in exquisite verse, this goes deep into the soul. Remarkable!
December 6th, 2025 11:19
pig stye
Friendship said:
This poem really had me thinking very hard. It\'s very, very dark! This poem revolves around the themes of confinement, emotional struggle, and the tension between reality and self-delusion. The Poet metaphorically describes their situation as being in a \"casket, \"It\'s suggesting feelings of entrapment and despair. Despite this, there is a conflict between the desire to express sorrow and the impulse to mask pain with denial (\"I was born with wings—can fly—\"). It seems to me that the matter touches on coping mechanisms in the face of trauma, the complications of past scars, and the challenges of confronting one’s emotional state.
December 6th, 2025 11:17
Friendship said:
This poem really had me thinking very hard. It\'s very, very dark! This poem revolves around the themes of confinement, emotional struggle, and the tension between reality and self-delusion. The Poet metaphorically describes their situation as being in a \"casket, \"It\'s suggesting feelings of entrapment and despair. Despite this, there is a conflict between the desire to express sorrow and the impulse to mask pain with denial (\"I was born with wings—can fly—\"). It seems to me that the matter touches on coping mechanisms in the face of trauma, the complications of past scars, and the challenges of confronting one’s emotional state.
December 6th, 2025 11:17
Ready?
arqios said:
Oh my, it makes one feel torn and exhausted and forever anxious 🕊️🙏
December 5th, 2025 21:44
arqios said:
Oh my, it makes one feel torn and exhausted and forever anxious 🕊️🙏
December 5th, 2025 21:44
am i here?
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan, this is definitely a great write. 🥂
December 5th, 2025 15:31
Keyara S Trotman said:
Dearest Tristan, this is definitely a great write. 🥂
December 5th, 2025 15:31
Ready?
Friendship said:
Well written, true, and honest . The poem explores the pervasive and cyclical nature of depression, illustrating its impact on the poet\'s life. It depicts how depression can fluctuate in intensity and form, yet remains a constant presence that is difficult to escape. And yet you are painting and seeking to articulate the often unspoken reality of depression, raising awareness of its impact and providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their experiences. It serves as both a personal reflection and a collective acknowledgment of mental health challenges. You\'re not alone; we all go through this in our lives.
December 5th, 2025 12:50
Friendship said:
Well written, true, and honest . The poem explores the pervasive and cyclical nature of depression, illustrating its impact on the poet\'s life. It depicts how depression can fluctuate in intensity and form, yet remains a constant presence that is difficult to escape. And yet you are painting and seeking to articulate the often unspoken reality of depression, raising awareness of its impact and providing a voice to those who may feel isolated in their experiences. It serves as both a personal reflection and a collective acknowledgment of mental health challenges. You\'re not alone; we all go through this in our lives.
December 5th, 2025 12:50
Ready?
orchidee said:
We know someone (or two or three) who\'s never depressed. A certain glugger! lol.
December 5th, 2025 11:33
orchidee said:
We know someone (or two or three) who\'s never depressed. A certain glugger! lol.
December 5th, 2025 11:33
Ready?
sorenbarrett said:
All so true and more for some people than others. So well described in color no less. Can\'t say I love depression but loved the poem
December 5th, 2025 10:12
sorenbarrett said:
All so true and more for some people than others. So well described in color no less. Can\'t say I love depression but loved the poem
December 5th, 2025 10:12
am i here?
orchidee said:
Someone\'s still here, ruining the sensible comments, interfering, etc. All we hear is, not Santa\'s sleigh bells, but an awful glugging sound! heehee. Awful as in \'ghastly\', not as in \'awe-full\'.
December 5th, 2025 09:09
orchidee said:
Someone\'s still here, ruining the sensible comments, interfering, etc. All we hear is, not Santa\'s sleigh bells, but an awful glugging sound! heehee. Awful as in \'ghastly\', not as in \'awe-full\'.
December 5th, 2025 09:09
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