Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Spirit Moves
sorenbarrett said:
If one stretches a bit one sees the mount of olives. A world of self interest and hypocrisy Well written my friend.
June 14th, 2026 14:33
sorenbarrett said:
If one stretches a bit one sees the mount of olives. A world of self interest and hypocrisy Well written my friend.
June 14th, 2026 14:33
The Spirit Moves
orchidee said:
The proof in the spinach pudding, says one Mr P. Solus! lol.
June 14th, 2026 14:11
orchidee said:
The proof in the spinach pudding, says one Mr P. Solus! lol.
June 14th, 2026 14:11
The Spirit Moves
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this is so true and a fav my friend
June 14th, 2026 09:18
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this is so true and a fav my friend
June 14th, 2026 09:18
hoist(ed)
Thomas W Case said:
This is delightfully unhinged in the best way—like a sugar rush dream that keeps slipping its own logic.
Beneath the whimsy, there’s that quiet tug of wanting to stay lost in it, because waking up means facing whatever’s waiting outside the fog.
June 14th, 2026 07:15
Thomas W Case said:
This is delightfully unhinged in the best way—like a sugar rush dream that keeps slipping its own logic.
Beneath the whimsy, there’s that quiet tug of wanting to stay lost in it, because waking up means facing whatever’s waiting outside the fog.
June 14th, 2026 07:15
hoist(ed)
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, this is a well-pronounced expressive statement reflecting good sense of humor and understanding of the life. A fave, my friend)
June 14th, 2026 01:36
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, this is a well-pronounced expressive statement reflecting good sense of humor and understanding of the life. A fave, my friend)
June 14th, 2026 01:36
hoist(ed)
orchidee said:
Yes, the grog - or is it the glug?! The dreaded sound. lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:30
orchidee said:
Yes, the grog - or is it the glug?! The dreaded sound. lol.
June 13th, 2026 11:30
hoist(ed)
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Tristan that bounces from here to there in a surreal sense of absurdity that keeps the attention. Well done my friend
June 13th, 2026 09:09
sorenbarrett said:
A fun read Tristan that bounces from here to there in a surreal sense of absurdity that keeps the attention. Well done my friend
June 13th, 2026 09:09
hoist(ed)
arqios said:
A slice of apple pie with vanilla ice cream also does nicely 👍🏻🙏🕊️😊
June 13th, 2026 08:07
arqios said:
A slice of apple pie with vanilla ice cream also does nicely 👍🏻🙏🕊️😊
June 13th, 2026 08:07
memo
NafisaSB said:
That’s so challenging- it’s definitely time to prove the critics wrong 👍
June 13th, 2026 07:02
NafisaSB said:
That’s so challenging- it’s definitely time to prove the critics wrong 👍
June 13th, 2026 07:02
freedom\'s fun
arqios said:
paradox, irony, and disillusionment... what a state of all states... 🙏🕊️
June 12th, 2026 20:56
arqios said:
paradox, irony, and disillusionment... what a state of all states... 🙏🕊️
June 12th, 2026 20:56
freedom\'s fun
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Head Stard did shoot itself with America\'s gun. Well said my friend.
June 12th, 2026 12:42
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Head Stard did shoot itself with America\'s gun. Well said my friend.
June 12th, 2026 12:42
freedom\'s fun
orchidee said:
Good write T. Any TOM-foolery or gluggery abounding?! lol. \'Knitting\' you call it, Ol\'Tom? Why? Find out on WCAT which tells us no answers. lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:23
orchidee said:
Good write T. Any TOM-foolery or gluggery abounding?! lol. \'Knitting\' you call it, Ol\'Tom? Why? Find out on WCAT which tells us no answers. lol.
June 12th, 2026 10:23
freedom\'s fun
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
truth definitely applies in this piece, enjoyed
June 12th, 2026 09:48
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
truth definitely applies in this piece, enjoyed
June 12th, 2026 09:48
memo
sorenbarrett said:
Being part of an inverse barometer you are always right by being wrong. Short but well said
June 11th, 2026 07:50
sorenbarrett said:
Being part of an inverse barometer you are always right by being wrong. Short but well said
June 11th, 2026 07:50
Cream, Chocolate, and Cherries
Mirela said:
I liked this line: Dark star of death musing around. And also the ice cream bit
June 11th, 2026 02:52
Mirela said:
I liked this line: Dark star of death musing around. And also the ice cream bit
June 11th, 2026 02:52
bracing time
sorenbarrett said:
The words single file, trial, dial all bring images of being caught dominated into uniformity, judged, amplified and then the word hurt for a while pain and suffering not even quick electrocution. It is dystopian and dark with a promise of getting worse. Bad news on the doorstep. Well written my friend
June 10th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
The words single file, trial, dial all bring images of being caught dominated into uniformity, judged, amplified and then the word hurt for a while pain and suffering not even quick electrocution. It is dystopian and dark with a promise of getting worse. Bad news on the doorstep. Well written my friend
June 10th, 2026 10:16
bracing time
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re always bracing ourselves for the sound of the next glug, but it always seems to make us jump, and be jumpy! lol.
June 10th, 2026 10:13
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re always bracing ourselves for the sound of the next glug, but it always seems to make us jump, and be jumpy! lol.
June 10th, 2026 10:13
We Lose
Neville said:
Now aint that just the effin truth .. The world is sadly filled with BIG GOTS .. Neville 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🖤🐧👍
June 10th, 2026 09:45
Neville said:
Now aint that just the effin truth .. The world is sadly filled with BIG GOTS .. Neville 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🖤🐧👍
June 10th, 2026 09:45
We Lose
Paul Bell said:
You are not identifying as a plant pot and thats that.
No wearing dresses on a Tuesday, and definitely no kissing that guy with the weird moustache who is actually a girl.
Now remember. Your elected democratic government is looking out for you.
June 9th, 2026 14:48
Paul Bell said:
You are not identifying as a plant pot and thats that.
No wearing dresses on a Tuesday, and definitely no kissing that guy with the weird moustache who is actually a girl.
Now remember. Your elected democratic government is looking out for you.
June 9th, 2026 14:48
We Lose
orchidee said:
At one point I was gonna start a campaign of electing cabbages, with the slogan \'Cabbages rule OK!\'
Now it may have been \'Spinach rules OK\' but a certain one has glugged all the spinach! lol.
Ohh, let\'s keep talking rubbish. heehee.
June 9th, 2026 11:08
orchidee said:
At one point I was gonna start a campaign of electing cabbages, with the slogan \'Cabbages rule OK!\'
Now it may have been \'Spinach rules OK\' but a certain one has glugged all the spinach! lol.
Ohh, let\'s keep talking rubbish. heehee.
June 9th, 2026 11:08
We Lose
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an excellent write with a grave warning
June 9th, 2026 11:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
an excellent write with a grave warning
June 9th, 2026 11:08
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