Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Butter in a Cup
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
Butter in a Cup
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
Butter in a Cup
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
monumental collapse
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
monumental collapse
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
monumental collapse
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
monumental collapse
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
monumental collapse
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
monumental collapse
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
monumental collapse
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
monumental collapse
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so aptly put my friend, much enjoyed
August 4th, 2026 07:43
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
so aptly put my friend, much enjoyed
August 4th, 2026 07:43
sporegasm
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is a wild collision of biology, technology, and raw imagination, creating a strange but vivid inner landscape. The unexpected imagery jolts the reader awake, capturing creativity as something chaotic, physical, and impossible to contain.
August 4th, 2026 06:35
Thomas W Case said:
This poem is a wild collision of biology, technology, and raw imagination, creating a strange but vivid inner landscape. The unexpected imagery jolts the reader awake, capturing creativity as something chaotic, physical, and impossible to contain.
August 4th, 2026 06:35
sporegasm
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
orchidee said:
Someone blown a fuse?! Popeye would if he runs out of spinach. lol
August 3rd, 2026 11:16
sporegasm
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
sorenbarrett said:
From fungus to neural to internet all seem to have electrical a shocking discovery of what we hold in common. Webs and fibers hold us all together and bond us as one. A most interesting write where the sexual becomes not only physical creation of new cells but mental and emotional creation of new thoughts and feelings. Well done my friend
August 3rd, 2026 10:52
The Middle-Finger Christ
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem explores themes of moral hypocrisy, spiritual conflict, and the clash between righteousness and self-righteousness. It suggests that those who claim to be virtuous may actually embody evil, particularly when they distort or misuse religious beliefs.
August 2nd, 2026 17:32
The Middle-Finger Christ
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
orchidee said:
What Popeye does if we got no spinach for him! lol.
August 2nd, 2026 13:16
The Middle-Finger Christ
Paul Bell said:
A twelve disciple metal band would certainly get me back to church.
More noise the better I say, maybe a roman back-up band to keep people on their toes.
August 2nd, 2026 10:25
Paul Bell said:
A twelve disciple metal band would certainly get me back to church.
More noise the better I say, maybe a roman back-up band to keep people on their toes.
August 2nd, 2026 10:25
The Middle-Finger Christ
Thomas W Case said:
This piece crackles with defiance and urgency, its voice bold and unafraid to confront hypocrisy head-on. There’s a fierce energy here that feels almost prophetic, surging forward with conviction and fire.
August 2nd, 2026 07:18
Thomas W Case said:
This piece crackles with defiance and urgency, its voice bold and unafraid to confront hypocrisy head-on. There’s a fierce energy here that feels almost prophetic, surging forward with conviction and fire.
August 2nd, 2026 07:18
The Middle-Finger Christ
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed piece my friend
August 2nd, 2026 07:14
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much enjoyed piece my friend
August 2nd, 2026 07:14
The Middle-Finger Christ
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We live in dreadful times, may God save us from all evil and from lies!
August 2nd, 2026 07:09
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
We live in dreadful times, may God save us from all evil and from lies!
August 2nd, 2026 07:09
The Middle-Finger Christ
sorenbarrett said:
A Christian metal band but I kind of took this another way my friend. There are those and have been those that as a false messiah and or prophet lead others like Jim Jones and David Koresh lead others down dark paths. A lovely poem Tristan
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
sorenbarrett said:
A Christian metal band but I kind of took this another way my friend. There are those and have been those that as a false messiah and or prophet lead others like Jim Jones and David Koresh lead others down dark paths. A lovely poem Tristan
August 2nd, 2026 06:53
Cast Away
arqios said:
Every man is an island 🏝️ until they’re not, every man a garden 🪴 until they won’t 🙏🏻🕊️
August 1st, 2026 14:00
arqios said:
Every man is an island 🏝️ until they’re not, every man a garden 🪴 until they won’t 🙏🏻🕊️
August 1st, 2026 14:00
Cast Away
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
Cast Away
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Cast Away
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
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