Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Fallacy of Forgery
arqios said:
To be delusional about our pain is often the result of being gaslit - a cancer to the soul and the best parts of ourselves 🙏🏻🕊️
January 15th, 2026 20:49
arqios said:
To be delusional about our pain is often the result of being gaslit - a cancer to the soul and the best parts of ourselves 🙏🏻🕊️
January 15th, 2026 20:49
The Fallacy of Forgery
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t even think people realise they\'re abusing you now, it\'s ingrained.
Escalators are a prime example, the amount of people who crack up when you\'re not running down them is amazing. My usual retort is. It\'s a machine that takes you up and down, moron. Abuse back and forth, it\'s like a starter for ten
January 15th, 2026 12:08
Paul Bell said:
I don\'t even think people realise they\'re abusing you now, it\'s ingrained.
Escalators are a prime example, the amount of people who crack up when you\'re not running down them is amazing. My usual retort is. It\'s a machine that takes you up and down, moron. Abuse back and forth, it\'s like a starter for ten
January 15th, 2026 12:08
The Fallacy of Forgery
orchidee said:
Gosh, that sounds like my F poem - Fallacy of Forgery. Here\'s a bit of my 18+ F poem. lol
Ohhh, F, F, F, F, and F.
And furthermore F, F, F, F, and F.......etc.
January 15th, 2026 10:26
orchidee said:
Gosh, that sounds like my F poem - Fallacy of Forgery. Here\'s a bit of my 18+ F poem. lol
Ohhh, F, F, F, F, and F.
And furthermore F, F, F, F, and F.......etc.
January 15th, 2026 10:26
The Fallacy of Forgery
sorenbarrett said:
This seems very emotional and strongly felt transmitting powerfully its message. I would never wish harm upon another nor willingly subject myself to undue abuse I do use the calluses that I\'ve earned to prevent further injury. Nature does provide protection to repeated wear and tear. A great write Tristan
January 15th, 2026 09:29
sorenbarrett said:
This seems very emotional and strongly felt transmitting powerfully its message. I would never wish harm upon another nor willingly subject myself to undue abuse I do use the calluses that I\'ve earned to prevent further injury. Nature does provide protection to repeated wear and tear. A great write Tristan
January 15th, 2026 09:29
The Fallacy of Forgery
Katie B. said:
Nicely done! Heavy, intense write which makes all the better.
January 15th, 2026 09:22
Katie B. said:
Nicely done! Heavy, intense write which makes all the better.
January 15th, 2026 09:22
persona non grata
Doggerel Dave said:
I wouldn’t call myself fearless by any means, but if a relationship/friendship/association means too much diminishment of myself, then......
This rang very true, Tristan.
January 14th, 2026 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
I wouldn’t call myself fearless by any means, but if a relationship/friendship/association means too much diminishment of myself, then......
This rang very true, Tristan.
January 14th, 2026 19:38
persona non grata
arqios said:
To whom that we may not BE, shall ever refuse us constantly. Their insistence on our non-existence is an idiotic persistence 🕊️👍🏻
January 14th, 2026 16:37
arqios said:
To whom that we may not BE, shall ever refuse us constantly. Their insistence on our non-existence is an idiotic persistence 🕊️👍🏻
January 14th, 2026 16:37
persona non grata
Teddy.15 said:
I always tell my son to be himself and never change for anyone, this is powerful and very much enjoyed. 🌹
January 14th, 2026 13:04
Teddy.15 said:
I always tell my son to be himself and never change for anyone, this is powerful and very much enjoyed. 🌹
January 14th, 2026 13:04
persona non grata
Paul Bell said:
In the end, it\'s all about yourself.
People will come and go, some will be helpful, some will help themselves on your behalf.
That\'s why when you look behind to see who\'s following, you realise, no one is.
January 14th, 2026 12:48
Paul Bell said:
In the end, it\'s all about yourself.
People will come and go, some will be helpful, some will help themselves on your behalf.
That\'s why when you look behind to see who\'s following, you realise, no one is.
January 14th, 2026 12:48
persona non grata
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning to not allow others to hold you back from being who you are. Don\'t anchor your hopes and beliefs on someone that does not accept you. Nicely done Tristan
January 14th, 2026 11:20
sorenbarrett said:
A poetic warning to not allow others to hold you back from being who you are. Don\'t anchor your hopes and beliefs on someone that does not accept you. Nicely done Tristan
January 14th, 2026 11:20
persona non grata
orchidee said:
There\'s one who\'s never persona non grata. He\'s always there, or if we can\'t see him we always hear him - glug! lol.
January 14th, 2026 10:37
orchidee said:
There\'s one who\'s never persona non grata. He\'s always there, or if we can\'t see him we always hear him - glug! lol.
January 14th, 2026 10:37
Inheritor Worm
cellinic said:
This is a very impressive and persuading piece of poetic work with strong emotional and meaningful overtones. I enjoyed the read although it was not easy in fact:) Best regards, my friend...
January 14th, 2026 02:12
cellinic said:
This is a very impressive and persuading piece of poetic work with strong emotional and meaningful overtones. I enjoyed the read although it was not easy in fact:) Best regards, my friend...
January 14th, 2026 02:12
Inheritor Worm
Doggerel Dave said:
Technically brilliant, Tristan - how do you find the time?
January 13th, 2026 18:39
Doggerel Dave said:
Technically brilliant, Tristan - how do you find the time?
January 13th, 2026 18:39
Inheritor Worm
orchidee said:
Someone worms their way in everywhere! We knows him! lol.
January 13th, 2026 10:43
orchidee said:
Someone worms their way in everywhere! We knows him! lol.
January 13th, 2026 10:43
Inheritor Worm
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical with a bit of playfulness (loved the term leadershit) A towering dark shadow of realities burning light of life and dark death. A Gothic existentialism that requires that resting time before the dough is cooked, enough time for it to raise. Fermentation a form of rot. Nicely done Tristan
January 13th, 2026 10:02
sorenbarrett said:
Deeply philosophical with a bit of playfulness (loved the term leadershit) A towering dark shadow of realities burning light of life and dark death. A Gothic existentialism that requires that resting time before the dough is cooked, enough time for it to raise. Fermentation a form of rot. Nicely done Tristan
January 13th, 2026 10:02
Never Done
Teddy.15 said:
And the music never done, I find the best lyrics are the ones written from the soul, and here your soul comes out fighting! 🌹
January 13th, 2026 06:06
Teddy.15 said:
And the music never done, I find the best lyrics are the ones written from the soul, and here your soul comes out fighting! 🌹
January 13th, 2026 06:06
do i?
NafisaSB said:
this comes straight from the heart - and I sincerely hope the response is honest and liberating....
January 13th, 2026 02:30
NafisaSB said:
this comes straight from the heart - and I sincerely hope the response is honest and liberating....
January 13th, 2026 02:30
Never Done
Doggerel Dave said:
A transcendental trance I can almost experience through your words, Tristan. The sitar was certainly in my head as I read it. I\'m back in the sixties.
January 13th, 2026 00:09
Doggerel Dave said:
A transcendental trance I can almost experience through your words, Tristan. The sitar was certainly in my head as I read it. I\'m back in the sixties.
January 13th, 2026 00:09
Never Done
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard Quasar stars emit music! Tolkien wrote about it, too.
\"No longer shamed by sin.\" Love it!
January 12th, 2026 19:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
I heard Quasar stars emit music! Tolkien wrote about it, too.
\"No longer shamed by sin.\" Love it!
January 12th, 2026 19:58
Never Done
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easy to be no longer ashamed when it gets so so tempting... But when the bright sun leaves, and we\'re left in the cold night, there\'s no more comfort, and no more brightness.
January 12th, 2026 16:44
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s easy to be no longer ashamed when it gets so so tempting... But when the bright sun leaves, and we\'re left in the cold night, there\'s no more comfort, and no more brightness.
January 12th, 2026 16:44
Never Done
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all about the music, soulful and mystical, uninhibited.
It\'s the trip we all want to be on at some point in our lives.
January 12th, 2026 11:21
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all about the music, soulful and mystical, uninhibited.
It\'s the trip we all want to be on at some point in our lives.
January 12th, 2026 11:21
Never Done
sorenbarrett said:
If it was here in October saw it. A seductive siren is always welcome. A fun read Tristan who would not shed their skin for a siren?
January 12th, 2026 08:24
sorenbarrett said:
If it was here in October saw it. A seductive siren is always welcome. A fun read Tristan who would not shed their skin for a siren?
January 12th, 2026 08:24
Never Done
orchidee said:
Never done? Never finished, says..... we knows \'em, P & Co. Never finished what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
January 12th, 2026 07:43
orchidee said:
Never done? Never finished, says..... we knows \'em, P & Co. Never finished what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
January 12th, 2026 07:43
The Scandal of Honesty
Doggerel Dave said:
Good read, Tristan. Organizations, corporations are mostly like that with power plays etc in all directions. Why Christianity via its earthly embodiment a/the church should be any different, I have no idea.
January 12th, 2026 02:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Good read, Tristan. Organizations, corporations are mostly like that with power plays etc in all directions. Why Christianity via its earthly embodiment a/the church should be any different, I have no idea.
January 12th, 2026 02:06
The Scandal of Honesty
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s interesting to ponder on a woman\'s place in religion. \"Heaven forgive us all for our judgment—\" now isn\'t that the truth!
January 11th, 2026 23:56
NinjaGirl said:
It\'s interesting to ponder on a woman\'s place in religion. \"Heaven forgive us all for our judgment—\" now isn\'t that the truth!
January 11th, 2026 23:56
The Scandal of Honesty
orchidee said:
Good write T. Now in the unending series \'Don\'t answer / finish that\' - since when was Popeye honest about............! lol.
January 11th, 2026 09:39
orchidee said:
Good write T. Now in the unending series \'Don\'t answer / finish that\' - since when was Popeye honest about............! lol.
January 11th, 2026 09:39
The Scandal of Honesty
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you and I both chose the theme of religion today. A mind bond I would assume. This poem sends a message so neglected in religion and often myth as well in a male dominated history and society. A wonderful write with a powerful message and a fave
January 11th, 2026 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan you and I both chose the theme of religion today. A mind bond I would assume. This poem sends a message so neglected in religion and often myth as well in a male dominated history and society. A wonderful write with a powerful message and a fave
January 11th, 2026 09:05
The Parallax of Presentation
Thomas W Case said:
Truth hits like a bat to the skull—raw, unflinching, and exactly what writing should do.
The Biaxial Parallax form suits this: chaotic, precise, and unapologetically alive.
January 11th, 2026 08:50
Thomas W Case said:
Truth hits like a bat to the skull—raw, unflinching, and exactly what writing should do.
The Biaxial Parallax form suits this: chaotic, precise, and unapologetically alive.
January 11th, 2026 08:50
The Parallax of Presentation
Doggerel Dave said:
Not going to investigate the mechanics of form, Tristan, as I don\'t think I\'ll be utilising it. But that doesn\'t mean that it did not serve your message well, for I understood it clearly; this also attributable to the fact that I agree with every word (or did after I found out what \'Nugatory\' meant and acquainted myself with Kali.🙃👍
January 10th, 2026 19:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Not going to investigate the mechanics of form, Tristan, as I don\'t think I\'ll be utilising it. But that doesn\'t mean that it did not serve your message well, for I understood it clearly; this also attributable to the fact that I agree with every word (or did after I found out what \'Nugatory\' meant and acquainted myself with Kali.🙃👍
January 10th, 2026 19:38
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