Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Cast Away
arqios said:
Every man is an island ποΈ until theyβre not, every man a garden πͺ΄ until they wonβt πͺππ»ποΈ
August 1st, 2026 14:00
arqios said:
Every man is an island ποΈ until theyβre not, every man a garden πͺ΄ until they wonβt πͺππ»ποΈ
August 1st, 2026 14:00
Cast Away
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Cast away on an island somewhere, Popeye & Co made it civilised - with spinach, knitting, and wielding sabers! A Mr M Hunt joined them too. lol.
August 1st, 2026 11:13
Cast Away
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Paul Bell said:
We all do it, leave it for another day, and another.
A bit like war abroad. If it doesn\'t affect us, we don\'t care.
August 1st, 2026 11:11
Cast Away
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
sorenbarrett said:
From this poem I draw procrastination do not do today what you can do tomorrow. Indeed my friend I have to claim guilt in this many times. Nicely written
August 1st, 2026 08:43
mayday
orchidee said:
No danger of the spinach market collapsing with Popeye around! lol.
July 31st, 2026 10:02
orchidee said:
No danger of the spinach market collapsing with Popeye around! lol.
July 31st, 2026 10:02
mayday
Friendship said:
A well-written poem.A powerful feeling trapped in one\'s mind with life. I know this so well, my friend. Your poem deals with themes of crisis, paralysis, and the overwhelming nature of negative emotions or situations. It evokes a sense of being trapped or overwhelmed, unable to take action or think clearly. God your not alone, my friend.πβ€οΈπ
July 31st, 2026 09:23
Friendship said:
A well-written poem.A powerful feeling trapped in one\'s mind with life. I know this so well, my friend. Your poem deals with themes of crisis, paralysis, and the overwhelming nature of negative emotions or situations. It evokes a sense of being trapped or overwhelmed, unable to take action or think clearly. God your not alone, my friend.πβ€οΈπ
July 31st, 2026 09:23
mayday
Demar Desu said:
I love how you always play with the structure and format of these things we call words and letters⦠great poem
July 31st, 2026 08:15
Demar Desu said:
I love how you always play with the structure and format of these things we call words and letters⦠great poem
July 31st, 2026 08:15
mayday
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen this mechanical as well as emotional. Nicely illustrated with your format. Well done Tristan
July 31st, 2026 08:04
sorenbarrett said:
I have seen this mechanical as well as emotional. Nicely illustrated with your format. Well done Tristan
July 31st, 2026 08:04
mayday
arqios said:
When a sudden overwhelm hits so hard it can floor both mind and bodyππ»ποΈ
July 31st, 2026 07:57
arqios said:
When a sudden overwhelm hits so hard it can floor both mind and bodyππ»ποΈ
July 31st, 2026 07:57
Mirrors
orchidee said:
Noooo, Popeye, don\'t lend us a mirror so we can see your antics. Why not, he asks us? WCAT!!
July 31st, 2026 01:58
orchidee said:
Noooo, Popeye, don\'t lend us a mirror so we can see your antics. Why not, he asks us? WCAT!!
July 31st, 2026 01:58
Mirrors
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
orchidee said:
Good write T. I wrote something from 1998 - a blank page, as I hadn\'t done any poems then - or hardly any. lol. I could have written more on the antics of Popeye & Co. lol.
July 30th, 2026 10:19
Mirrors
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
sorenbarrett said:
This is a sensually sad poem that bleeds on the page. Those mirrors are reflections of passion good or bad. Where a siren comes from the sea to enchant and then drown the living. Well written my friend and a definite fave
July 30th, 2026 08:29
Mirrors
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Lorenz said:
I went through the mirror go looking for pain and never came back ...I\'m writing to you from there ...
July 30th, 2026 08:12
Mirrors
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding ποΈππ»
July 30th, 2026 07:58
arqios said:
There is that intimate power which can be abused and weaponised, the betrayal from which transforms ruinously from careless wielding ποΈππ»
July 30th, 2026 07:58
the pudding
David Wakeling said:
I also believe that rules were meant to be debated. Thoughtful piece here
July 29th, 2026 19:17
David Wakeling said:
I also believe that rules were meant to be debated. Thoughtful piece here
July 29th, 2026 19:17
the pudding
arqios said:
Thatβs proof enough, puddin all aroundππ»ποΈ
July 29th, 2026 08:39
arqios said:
Thatβs proof enough, puddin all aroundππ»ποΈ
July 29th, 2026 08:39
the pudding
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write with an open end for the reader to ponder
July 29th, 2026 08:26
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderful write with an open end for the reader to ponder
July 29th, 2026 08:26
the pudding
orchidee said:
We know Popeye is making that spinach pudding, though when they have it they say \'Blleeeuuurrgghh!\' lol. Does Popeye invite Mr Hunt to dinner? heehee.
July 29th, 2026 08:25
orchidee said:
We know Popeye is making that spinach pudding, though when they have it they say \'Blleeeuuurrgghh!\' lol. Does Popeye invite Mr Hunt to dinner? heehee.
July 29th, 2026 08:25
the pudding
sorenbarrett said:
This one can be taken either way and that is its strength. I love when a poem leaves it up to the reader to decide the outcome. Nicely done my friend
July 29th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
This one can be taken either way and that is its strength. I love when a poem leaves it up to the reader to decide the outcome. Nicely done my friend
July 29th, 2026 08:17
The Great Delaware
Neville said:
This just hit me like an avalanche talk about floods .. it felt like I was being swept away by my own guilt .. talk about dark .. βͺοΈβΎβΌοΈβ«πββ¬π¦ββ¬π΄π§
July 28th, 2026 23:29
Neville said:
This just hit me like an avalanche talk about floods .. it felt like I was being swept away by my own guilt .. talk about dark .. βͺοΈβΎβΌοΈβ«πββ¬π¦ββ¬π΄π§
July 28th, 2026 23:29
The Great Delaware
David Wakeling said:
This is such a powerful piece amigo.As powerful as the mighty Delaware itself.I like the \"marching\" style text that commands the reader to pay attention.Well done a great piece
July 28th, 2026 22:33
David Wakeling said:
This is such a powerful piece amigo.As powerful as the mighty Delaware itself.I like the \"marching\" style text that commands the reader to pay attention.Well done a great piece
July 28th, 2026 22:33
The Great Delaware
Teddy.15 said:
There should never be guilt if one doesn\'t follow the other sheep, what a powerful piece, I almost want to rescue you Tristan, but I know you are a mighty force! π
July 28th, 2026 17:01
Teddy.15 said:
There should never be guilt if one doesn\'t follow the other sheep, what a powerful piece, I almost want to rescue you Tristan, but I know you are a mighty force! π
July 28th, 2026 17:01
The Great Delaware
arqios said:
People who commit wrongdoing blame others for their own corruption, but truth and justice will eventually surge through and wash everything clean, violently, inevitably, like a river in flood.
July 28th, 2026 15:57
arqios said:
People who commit wrongdoing blame others for their own corruption, but truth and justice will eventually surge through and wash everything clean, violently, inevitably, like a river in flood.
July 28th, 2026 15:57
The Great Delaware
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend, very much enjoyed
July 28th, 2026 12:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another fine write my friend, very much enjoyed
July 28th, 2026 12:30
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