Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
A Rope Is Not a Rebuttal
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Fight the good fight. a favourite my friend
November 8th, 2026 08:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Fight the good fight. a favourite my friend
November 8th, 2026 08:09
A Rope Is Not a Rebuttal
orchidee said:
Yes, great minds think alike - so do Popeye and friends. They think about, ohh, spinach and stuff! lol. What stuff? WCAT!!
November 8th, 2026 07:59
orchidee said:
Yes, great minds think alike - so do Popeye and friends. They think about, ohh, spinach and stuff! lol. What stuff? WCAT!!
November 8th, 2026 07:59
A Rope Is Not a Rebuttal
sorenbarrett said:
Slavery physical or economic is a sad history and there are many points of view. A wonderful write my friend.
November 8th, 2026 07:35
sorenbarrett said:
Slavery physical or economic is a sad history and there are many points of view. A wonderful write my friend.
November 8th, 2026 07:35
A Rope Is Not a Rebuttal
Lorenz said:
That\'s strangely in line with the text I just finished ! Great minds think alike !
November 8th, 2026 07:33
Lorenz said:
That\'s strangely in line with the text I just finished ! Great minds think alike !
November 8th, 2026 07:33
obligation
orchidee said:
And - we would be much obliged if that awful glugging sound stopped, but we know, no chance of that! lol.
November 8th, 2026 03:27
orchidee said:
And - we would be much obliged if that awful glugging sound stopped, but we know, no chance of that! lol.
November 8th, 2026 03:27
obligation
Kevin Hulme said:
A Person starts out with good Intentions and Wishes their never Bothered. Better to have Boiled Two Eggs in that Time.
Good Write.
November 7th, 2026 16:40
Kevin Hulme said:
A Person starts out with good Intentions and Wishes their never Bothered. Better to have Boiled Two Eggs in that Time.
Good Write.
November 7th, 2026 16:40
obligation
orchidee said:
Six minutes? The time it takes for Popeye to eat 100 cans of spinach; or Ol\'Tom to \'knit\' 100 pairs of socks; or Obi to wave 100 sabres! lol. Why this random collection? WCAT!!
November 7th, 2026 12:53
orchidee said:
Six minutes? The time it takes for Popeye to eat 100 cans of spinach; or Ol\'Tom to \'knit\' 100 pairs of socks; or Obi to wave 100 sabres! lol. Why this random collection? WCAT!!
November 7th, 2026 12:53
obligation
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece my friend, 3 minutes of someones time
November 7th, 2026 09:08
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
well written piece my friend, 3 minutes of someones time
November 7th, 2026 09:08
obligation
sorenbarrett said:
One tenth of an hour, the length of a long song. Other than that you got me my friend.
November 7th, 2026 08:37
sorenbarrett said:
One tenth of an hour, the length of a long song. Other than that you got me my friend.
November 7th, 2026 08:37
obligation
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, well written. Your poem addresses the poet\'s feelings about asking for “six minutes” of someone’s time, which leads to a sense of guilt or disappointment. It captures the tension between the desire for connection and the realization that such requests can sometimes be burdensome to others.
November 7th, 2026 08:31
Friendship said:
A powerful poem, well written. Your poem addresses the poet\'s feelings about asking for “six minutes” of someone’s time, which leads to a sense of guilt or disappointment. It captures the tension between the desire for connection and the realization that such requests can sometimes be burdensome to others.
November 7th, 2026 08:31
the other god
Teddy.15 said:
Dante said paradise for the climate but hell for the company. 🌹 Brilliant dear Tristan.
November 7th, 2026 00:11
Teddy.15 said:
Dante said paradise for the climate but hell for the company. 🌹 Brilliant dear Tristan.
November 7th, 2026 00:11
the other god
Friendship said:
Well written, you did a lot of thinking on this one, Tristan. Your poem critiques a misplaced focus on negative influences, represented by the \"devil,\" while emphasizing the importance of divine love and positivity, represented by God. To me, the poet questions why individuals devote their attention and energy to darker forces instead of embracing the love and guidance of a higher power.
November 6th, 2026 19:12
Friendship said:
Well written, you did a lot of thinking on this one, Tristan. Your poem critiques a misplaced focus on negative influences, represented by the \"devil,\" while emphasizing the importance of divine love and positivity, represented by God. To me, the poet questions why individuals devote their attention and energy to darker forces instead of embracing the love and guidance of a higher power.
November 6th, 2026 19:12
the other god
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said and rhymed. Great message a focus on the negative brings more negative
November 6th, 2026 10:16
sorenbarrett said:
Nicely said and rhymed. Great message a focus on the negative brings more negative
November 6th, 2026 10:16
the other god
orchidee said:
Are ya from the y\'all area?! Heehee. Popeye says \'y\'all spinach\'; Ol\' Tom says \'y\'all knittign\' and Obi says \'ya\'ll sabre-wielding\'. What will they get up to next? WCAT!
But hypocrisy is not a feature of ALL believers. Yet it was the \'religious\' leaders of Jesus\' days that received the sharpest rebukes.
November 6th, 2026 09:58
orchidee said:
Are ya from the y\'all area?! Heehee. Popeye says \'y\'all spinach\'; Ol\' Tom says \'y\'all knittign\' and Obi says \'ya\'ll sabre-wielding\'. What will they get up to next? WCAT!
But hypocrisy is not a feature of ALL believers. Yet it was the \'religious\' leaders of Jesus\' days that received the sharpest rebukes.
November 6th, 2026 09:58
the other god
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The hypocrisy rises again, well said my friend
November 6th, 2026 09:34
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
The hypocrisy rises again, well said my friend
November 6th, 2026 09:34
don’t fuck this up, blue
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
What is red and orange and blue all over? LOL! My only concern, they should hold back on revenge and govern first, plenty of time to right the wrongs. A profanity laden verse that gives power and grit to your wonderful outburst. Congratulations on a splendid and overwhelming win, my friend.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
November 6th, 2026 08:25
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
What is red and orange and blue all over? LOL! My only concern, they should hold back on revenge and govern first, plenty of time to right the wrongs. A profanity laden verse that gives power and grit to your wonderful outburst. Congratulations on a splendid and overwhelming win, my friend.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
November 6th, 2026 08:25
don’t fuck this up, blue
Mutley Ravishes said:
As Jason B. so succinctly put it, \" We\'ve been given two candidates to choose from here in Texas. And they\'re both evil.\"
November 5th, 2026 18:32
Mutley Ravishes said:
As Jason B. so succinctly put it, \" We\'ve been given two candidates to choose from here in Texas. And they\'re both evil.\"
November 5th, 2026 18:32
don’t fuck this up, blue
Doggerel Dave said:
Comprehension sometimes difficult, particularly on the underside of Earth where political colours are reversed.
However, away from politics, blue represens for me cool and tranquil, in contrast to flaming red.
And beyond that, now a more hopeful existence... perhaps...
Go for it, Tristan.
November 5th, 2026 18:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Comprehension sometimes difficult, particularly on the underside of Earth where political colours are reversed.
However, away from politics, blue represens for me cool and tranquil, in contrast to flaming red.
And beyond that, now a more hopeful existence... perhaps...
Go for it, Tristan.
November 5th, 2026 18:10
don’t fuck this up, blue
Teddy.15 said:
They won\'t fuck it up in some states it hasn\'t been blue for 40 years Tristan a new era is arriving and ICE will be the ones running for their lives, trump will be impeached and no one in the Trump team should ever feel safe, let them have some of their own medicine đź’Š
November 5th, 2026 16:50
Teddy.15 said:
They won\'t fuck it up in some states it hasn\'t been blue for 40 years Tristan a new era is arriving and ICE will be the ones running for their lives, trump will be impeached and no one in the Trump team should ever feel safe, let them have some of their own medicine đź’Š
November 5th, 2026 16:50
don’t fuck this up, blue
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
It was a pleasure to see the blue pull through by friend, hope at last, its an opportunity not to be wasted
November 5th, 2026 11:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
It was a pleasure to see the blue pull through by friend, hope at last, its an opportunity not to be wasted
November 5th, 2026 11:56
don’t fuck this up, blue
sorenbarrett said:
Blue has always been my favorite color except when it comes to politics then it is transparent. Caught the hook from first look a good song my friend and loved the way you used the homograph of blue for mood, color and political party. Very nice my friend
November 5th, 2026 10:41
sorenbarrett said:
Blue has always been my favorite color except when it comes to politics then it is transparent. Caught the hook from first look a good song my friend and loved the way you used the homograph of blue for mood, color and political party. Very nice my friend
November 5th, 2026 10:41
don’t fuck this up, blue
orchidee said:
You\'ve forgotten about Mondays, until they come round again. Every 7 days, I think it is! lol. I voted for the Cabbage Party. Let\'s have a cabbage in charge. Wot? You already have there?! lol. We know who voted for the Spinach Party, and forged the votes to 10 million!
November 5th, 2026 10:35
orchidee said:
You\'ve forgotten about Mondays, until they come round again. Every 7 days, I think it is! lol. I voted for the Cabbage Party. Let\'s have a cabbage in charge. Wot? You already have there?! lol. We know who voted for the Spinach Party, and forged the votes to 10 million!
November 5th, 2026 10:35
don’t fuck this up, blue
Paul Bell said:
Okay, I\'ve been checking the votes, and I\'m a bit concerned with how many Smiths and Jones live in America.
So I\'m going to be doing a deal with them all, a big deal.
No way am I sitting on my ass for the next two years doing nothing. Me and JD will be plotting something big, won\'t we JD.
Where the hell is, JD.
November 5th, 2026 10:28
Paul Bell said:
Okay, I\'ve been checking the votes, and I\'m a bit concerned with how many Smiths and Jones live in America.
So I\'m going to be doing a deal with them all, a big deal.
No way am I sitting on my ass for the next two years doing nothing. Me and JD will be plotting something big, won\'t we JD.
Where the hell is, JD.
November 5th, 2026 10:28
method actors
Paul Bell said:
To be or not to be, that is the something or the other I say in my role of not being very good at acting.
In saying that, is there any greater than me, rise I say.
Okay, no need for the feckin lot of you to get up, I take the hint.
November 5th, 2026 07:52
Paul Bell said:
To be or not to be, that is the something or the other I say in my role of not being very good at acting.
In saying that, is there any greater than me, rise I say.
Okay, no need for the feckin lot of you to get up, I take the hint.
November 5th, 2026 07:52
method actors
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember reading a Story about the Actress Patricia Neal while making the film \'Hud\' with Paul Newman. She told Newman of the Death of one of her Children, and Newman just said: \'Tough\' and walk off. Apparently he was still deep in his role as his Character.
November 4th, 2026 19:39
Kevin Hulme said:
I remember reading a Story about the Actress Patricia Neal while making the film \'Hud\' with Paul Newman. She told Newman of the Death of one of her Children, and Newman just said: \'Tough\' and walk off. Apparently he was still deep in his role as his Character.
November 4th, 2026 19:39
method actors
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
The fear of becoming that which one has destroyed - a hand-me-down from one greater, all be it, ill fitting. A short, sharp, shock hit of poetic brilliance, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 18:32
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
The fear of becoming that which one has destroyed - a hand-me-down from one greater, all be it, ill fitting. A short, sharp, shock hit of poetic brilliance, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 18:32
the alternative iii
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
One of the many great \'ifs\' of history. Speaking as an Irishman, I would have very little time for this king. My \'if\' would be; if he was never a king. LOL
Wishing you fine health and happiness,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 17:44
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
One of the many great \'ifs\' of history. Speaking as an Irishman, I would have very little time for this king. My \'if\' would be; if he was never a king. LOL
Wishing you fine health and happiness,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 17:44
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