Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Widow Makers
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Tristan I could tell from the very first it had the same meter and well crafted at that. It maintains a spooky aura as well with the darkness of the Raven. The issue of reading scriptures to this beat and tone is a most interesting venture. Is it to ward off the demons or to call them up? A fave my friend.
May 15th, 2026 13:25
sorenbarrett said:
Very nicely done Tristan I could tell from the very first it had the same meter and well crafted at that. It maintains a spooky aura as well with the darkness of the Raven. The issue of reading scriptures to this beat and tone is a most interesting venture. Is it to ward off the demons or to call them up? A fave my friend.
May 15th, 2026 13:25
enjoy it!
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guv\'nor, I\'m trying desperately hard to develop a nut allergy .. Neville 😎🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧🎵🎵👍
May 15th, 2026 12:39
Neville said:
Cor blimey Guv\'nor, I\'m trying desperately hard to develop a nut allergy .. Neville 😎🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛🐧🐧🎵🎵👍
May 15th, 2026 12:39
Widow Makers
orchidee said:
Popeye may be a widower, but he brought it on himself, as Olive Oyl had to leave before the glugs drove her mad! lol. This is all true, of course. heehee. Or at least she spends 23h 59m out of the house, if she has not left altogether.
May 15th, 2026 09:32
orchidee said:
Popeye may be a widower, but he brought it on himself, as Olive Oyl had to leave before the glugs drove her mad! lol. This is all true, of course. heehee. Or at least she spends 23h 59m out of the house, if she has not left altogether.
May 15th, 2026 09:32
Widow Makers
Allie561 said:
This is such a powerful write Tristan. It reminds me of that Edgar Allen poem “The Raven” with the repeated mentions of the beating heart as said in your comment. It starts off slow but you can feel the panic arise in that first line, it then progresses into a quicker panic. The imagery of flipping the pages faster adds a suspense that keeps me holding my breath. And then finally the realization that there is no escape as we’ve blocked the exit. This is truly wonderful and so much deeper than the words. Great job my friend.
May 15th, 2026 09:28
Allie561 said:
This is such a powerful write Tristan. It reminds me of that Edgar Allen poem “The Raven” with the repeated mentions of the beating heart as said in your comment. It starts off slow but you can feel the panic arise in that first line, it then progresses into a quicker panic. The imagery of flipping the pages faster adds a suspense that keeps me holding my breath. And then finally the realization that there is no escape as we’ve blocked the exit. This is truly wonderful and so much deeper than the words. Great job my friend.
May 15th, 2026 09:28
enjoy it!
Kevin Hulme said:
Never had Peanut butter. People in old adds all look the same. A fine write.
May 14th, 2026 18:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Never had Peanut butter. People in old adds all look the same. A fine write.
May 14th, 2026 18:28
presence
David Wakeling said:
nice haiku.The routine of those who worship.Well done
May 14th, 2026 17:23
David Wakeling said:
nice haiku.The routine of those who worship.Well done
May 14th, 2026 17:23
presence
Katie B. said:
Beautiful! Love stillness fills the space. Well done my friend.
May 14th, 2026 16:26
Katie B. said:
Beautiful! Love stillness fills the space. Well done my friend.
May 14th, 2026 16:26
presence
orchidee said:
Clang! That bell ringing woke me up. I was asleep in the sermon. lol. Or was it a glug woke me up? heehee.
May 14th, 2026 10:52
orchidee said:
Clang! That bell ringing woke me up. I was asleep in the sermon. lol. Or was it a glug woke me up? heehee.
May 14th, 2026 10:52
presence
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m going to go way off the beaten path with this one my friend. Each line contains five syllables and five is a feminine number in numerology. Communities are basically feminine in nature with women being more communal in nature, stillness fills the space, this gives the sense of peace with women being of nature more peaceful, bell tolls, breaks the silence (a form of communication) women more verbal and communicative. This poem feels feminine to me Tristan. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
I\'m going to go way off the beaten path with this one my friend. Each line contains five syllables and five is a feminine number in numerology. Communities are basically feminine in nature with women being more communal in nature, stillness fills the space, this gives the sense of peace with women being of nature more peaceful, bell tolls, breaks the silence (a form of communication) women more verbal and communicative. This poem feels feminine to me Tristan. Nicely done
May 14th, 2026 08:07
enjoy it!
David Wakeling said:
Progress according to Sigmund Freud.A fascinating poem filled with strength and vigar. Well done
May 13th, 2026 17:51
David Wakeling said:
Progress according to Sigmund Freud.A fascinating poem filled with strength and vigar. Well done
May 13th, 2026 17:51
enjoy it!
sorenbarrett said:
Political possibly? Metaphor maybe? Symbolic ....... Good one my friend
May 13th, 2026 16:25
sorenbarrett said:
Political possibly? Metaphor maybe? Symbolic ....... Good one my friend
May 13th, 2026 16:25
enjoy it!
Teddy.15 said:
You wrote erect! 🤣 lol oh Tristan you are a great sport. 🌹
May 13th, 2026 14:26
Teddy.15 said:
You wrote erect! 🤣 lol oh Tristan you are a great sport. 🌹
May 13th, 2026 14:26
enjoy it!
Paul Bell said:
That picture has it all. Unity, Pride, Faith, throw in the family, and that peanut butter will fly.
Or you\'ll buy it and their profits will fly up.
May 13th, 2026 10:36
Paul Bell said:
That picture has it all. Unity, Pride, Faith, throw in the family, and that peanut butter will fly.
Or you\'ll buy it and their profits will fly up.
May 13th, 2026 10:36
enjoy it!
orchidee said:
Mr P. Solus or whatever his name is - spinach and peanut butter does he want?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 08:40
orchidee said:
Mr P. Solus or whatever his name is - spinach and peanut butter does he want?! lol.
May 13th, 2026 08:40
Welcome to The World™
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, the myths of landmark birthdays. At least for me, none turned out to be very memorable. Too many American Greetings invented anniversaries. Good job.
May 13th, 2026 02:25
Dan Williams said:
Ahh, the myths of landmark birthdays. At least for me, none turned out to be very memorable. Too many American Greetings invented anniversaries. Good job.
May 13th, 2026 02:25
grace
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful Haiku style.I enjoyed reading.Birds are always inspirational
May 12th, 2026 17:36
David Wakeling said:
Wonderful Haiku style.I enjoyed reading.Birds are always inspirational
May 12th, 2026 17:36
grace
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
Meanwhile, a distraction - Ohhh, it don\'t matter wot weather it is - Popeye\'s still glugging, come sun, rain, wind, whatever! lol. I blame Mr Ken Obi for starting all this. lol. I mean why would his first AND last name be Obi?
May 12th, 2026 10:15
orchidee said:
A fine write T.
Meanwhile, a distraction - Ohhh, it don\'t matter wot weather it is - Popeye\'s still glugging, come sun, rain, wind, whatever! lol. I blame Mr Ken Obi for starting all this. lol. I mean why would his first AND last name be Obi?
May 12th, 2026 10:15
They Stopped Asking
Waiting for Silence said:
This feels painfully real — like someone trying to stay strong while quietly drowning in disappointment and detachment.
Good write
May 12th, 2026 07:40
Waiting for Silence said:
This feels painfully real — like someone trying to stay strong while quietly drowning in disappointment and detachment.
Good write
May 12th, 2026 07:40
Welcome to The World™
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing depiction of the terrifying \"coming of age\" joutney we all go through.Well done
May 11th, 2026 21:46
David Wakeling said:
This is an amazing depiction of the terrifying \"coming of age\" joutney we all go through.Well done
May 11th, 2026 21:46
Welcome to The World™
sorenbarrett said:
Here the progression of maturing and becoming an adult whatever that is. It carries with it a bit of satire as one is allowed sex then alcohol and finally the ability to kill one\'s fellow men. What a sad situation it is.
May 11th, 2026 21:29
sorenbarrett said:
Here the progression of maturing and becoming an adult whatever that is. It carries with it a bit of satire as one is allowed sex then alcohol and finally the ability to kill one\'s fellow men. What a sad situation it is.
May 11th, 2026 21:29
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