Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
high time
Lorenz said:
I love these few lines that add a little click and spark to life !
July 16th, 2026 08:38
Lorenz said:
I love these few lines that add a little click and spark to life !
July 16th, 2026 08:38
high time
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece draws you in as the smoke itself inhaled
July 16th, 2026 08:37
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
This piece draws you in as the smoke itself inhaled
July 16th, 2026 08:37
high time
sorenbarrett said:
The action, the reaction, a flash and moment in time expanded. Well written my friend what is obvious is not always so and with that the high could be just high living or spending. I have smoked a seventy five dollar cigar before and the aroma leaves one high.
July 16th, 2026 08:15
sorenbarrett said:
The action, the reaction, a flash and moment in time expanded. Well written my friend what is obvious is not always so and with that the high could be just high living or spending. I have smoked a seventy five dollar cigar before and the aroma leaves one high.
July 16th, 2026 08:15
high time
Teddy.15 said:
I like your play on words and imagery very clever and brings a peaceful picture of simple relaxation and happiness. I\'m not a smoker though, I feel this could be a very nice Cuban. 🌹
July 16th, 2026 08:01
Teddy.15 said:
I like your play on words and imagery very clever and brings a peaceful picture of simple relaxation and happiness. I\'m not a smoker though, I feel this could be a very nice Cuban. 🌹
July 16th, 2026 08:01
crowd pleaser
cellinic said:
serious, sincere, deep and rather resonating lyrics. Best wishes and a fave, my friend
July 16th, 2026 06:15
cellinic said:
serious, sincere, deep and rather resonating lyrics. Best wishes and a fave, my friend
July 16th, 2026 06:15
crowd pleaser
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m allergic to crowds, no matter what their purpose. But differentiate that from a well organised collective.
Keep it flowing, Tristan.
July 15th, 2026 18:29
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'m allergic to crowds, no matter what their purpose. But differentiate that from a well organised collective.
Keep it flowing, Tristan.
July 15th, 2026 18:29
crowd pleaser
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem revolves around the concept of sacrifice and the darker aspects of human nature, particularly how society often demands brutal solutions to its problems. The imagery you painted of flaying serves as a metaphor for the pain and suffering inflicted upon individuals to satisfy the collective desires of a community. You highlight the conflict between individual suffering and societal expectations.
July 15th, 2026 13:13
Friendship said:
Well written, my friend. Your poem revolves around the concept of sacrifice and the darker aspects of human nature, particularly how society often demands brutal solutions to its problems. The imagery you painted of flaying serves as a metaphor for the pain and suffering inflicted upon individuals to satisfy the collective desires of a community. You highlight the conflict between individual suffering and societal expectations.
July 15th, 2026 13:13
crowd pleaser
Paul Bell said:
Hang them all i say, hang them high, especially in they\'re Politicians.
Did television make the flayers redundant, I wonder.
Our sacrificial lamb, Starmer is gone this Monday, to be replaced by the next sacrificial lamb.
July 15th, 2026 11:16
Paul Bell said:
Hang them all i say, hang them high, especially in they\'re Politicians.
Did television make the flayers redundant, I wonder.
Our sacrificial lamb, Starmer is gone this Monday, to be replaced by the next sacrificial lamb.
July 15th, 2026 11:16
crowd pleaser
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the baying crowd, who is next ? good write my friend
July 15th, 2026 11:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
the baying crowd, who is next ? good write my friend
July 15th, 2026 11:07
crowd pleaser
orchidee said:
Does Popeye always get what he wants - spinach?! lol.
July 15th, 2026 10:08
orchidee said:
Does Popeye always get what he wants - spinach?! lol.
July 15th, 2026 10:08
crowd pleaser
sorenbarrett said:
The sacrifical lamb, the scape goat, the whipping boy taking the blame from the masses and the noble. Today it seems this painful metaphor is enacted on the masses themselves in taxes, burdensome laws, eminent domain and a prejudiced judicial system. It also applies on an individual level where a pecking order places one person to blame for another individual or the group. Well written my friend and a fave
July 15th, 2026 08:05
sorenbarrett said:
The sacrifical lamb, the scape goat, the whipping boy taking the blame from the masses and the noble. Today it seems this painful metaphor is enacted on the masses themselves in taxes, burdensome laws, eminent domain and a prejudiced judicial system. It also applies on an individual level where a pecking order places one person to blame for another individual or the group. Well written my friend and a fave
July 15th, 2026 08:05
crowd pleaser
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent powerful and just to say I could never ever be in that crowd 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:47
Teddy.15 said:
Wow magnificent powerful and just to say I could never ever be in that crowd 🌹
July 15th, 2026 07:47
crowd pleaser
arqios said:
Begs the question who the next sacrificial lamb is gonna be?🙏🏻🕊️
July 15th, 2026 07:26
arqios said:
Begs the question who the next sacrificial lamb is gonna be?🙏🏻🕊️
July 15th, 2026 07:26
the tao of burritos
NafisaSB said:
Differently people and different perceptions. Good one.
July 15th, 2026 06:07
NafisaSB said:
Differently people and different perceptions. Good one.
July 15th, 2026 06:07
in the loop
Neville said:
it\'s the place to be .. checked out n knocked out .. phew survived .. Neville 🐦⬛🐧🖤🐈⬛🏴
July 15th, 2026 01:44
Neville said:
it\'s the place to be .. checked out n knocked out .. phew survived .. Neville 🐦⬛🐧🖤🐈⬛🏴
July 15th, 2026 01:44
no thing
Cheeky Missy said:
Maybe you\'re trying too hard. I\'m probably downright terrible for contentedly being myself, perpetually needing excuses, but you know. If you\'re truly you, what more do you need except salvation? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy.
July 14th, 2026 18:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Maybe you\'re trying too hard. I\'m probably downright terrible for contentedly being myself, perpetually needing excuses, but you know. If you\'re truly you, what more do you need except salvation? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy.
July 14th, 2026 18:56
in the loop
RSM0812 said:
This give me a message of power and control. Nice write.
July 14th, 2026 11:08
RSM0812 said:
This give me a message of power and control. Nice write.
July 14th, 2026 11:08
in the loop
orchidee said:
Good write T. P. Solus is in the loop for spinach supplies! lol.
July 14th, 2026 10:52
orchidee said:
Good write T. P. Solus is in the loop for spinach supplies! lol.
July 14th, 2026 10:52
in the loop
Salvia.S said:
A dizzying stream of wordplay and wild visuals, it pulls you into its loop and keeps spinning with energy. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 14th, 2026 08:41
Salvia.S said:
A dizzying stream of wordplay and wild visuals, it pulls you into its loop and keeps spinning with energy. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ A fave 🌹
July 14th, 2026 08:41
in the loop
sorenbarrett said:
I love the style of music from my era. White rabbit, purple haze, strawberry fields forever. Not familiar with this one though. A fun write with the rhyme that bounced it along to the end. Well done my friend.
July 14th, 2026 07:55
sorenbarrett said:
I love the style of music from my era. White rabbit, purple haze, strawberry fields forever. Not familiar with this one though. A fun write with the rhyme that bounced it along to the end. Well done my friend.
July 14th, 2026 07:55
in the loop
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a helter skelter of a read my friend
July 14th, 2026 07:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a helter skelter of a read my friend
July 14th, 2026 07:27
Death is Our Speed
Salvia.S said:
A strong, thought-provoking poem. Title is striking and that reinforces the central message, and the contrast between the poem\'s rhythmic flow and its dark critique of greed, colonization, and environmental destruction makes it especially impactful. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
July 14th, 2026 05:55
Salvia.S said:
A strong, thought-provoking poem. Title is striking and that reinforces the central message, and the contrast between the poem\'s rhythmic flow and its dark critique of greed, colonization, and environmental destruction makes it especially impactful. Very well written dearest Tittu ❤️ a fave 🌹
July 14th, 2026 05:55
Death is Our Speed
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m coming to the conclusion
That as long as we remain in \"separation\"
Which is limitation
Then the insatiable consumption
Will refuse to exit the building
Even if it means our own destruction!
July 13th, 2026 18:24
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'m coming to the conclusion
That as long as we remain in \"separation\"
Which is limitation
Then the insatiable consumption
Will refuse to exit the building
Even if it means our own destruction!
July 13th, 2026 18:24
Death is Our Speed
Lorenz said:
Do these fools really think they can master the geography of the infinity ?
July 13th, 2026 12:29
Lorenz said:
Do these fools really think they can master the geography of the infinity ?
July 13th, 2026 12:29
Death is Our Speed
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos my dear friend. A very important theme indeed.🌹
July 13th, 2026 10:17
Teddy.15 said:
Kudos my dear friend. A very important theme indeed.🌹
July 13th, 2026 10:17
Death is Our Speed
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s munching the planet now - hoping to find spinach?! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:48
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s munching the planet now - hoping to find spinach?! lol.
July 13th, 2026 08:48
Death is Our Speed
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Tristan we continue to expand and wish to colonize new frontiers when all we do is use up all the resources on the ones we inhabit. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 08:41
sorenbarrett said:
So true it is Tristan we continue to expand and wish to colonize new frontiers when all we do is use up all the resources on the ones we inhabit. Well written my friend
July 13th, 2026 08:41
Icon Appropriation
orchidee said:
Good write T. Mary\'s never answered any of my prayers - cos I\'ve never prayed to her, not being Roman Catholic nor of other denominations that are into Maryolatry - or Mariolatry!
It\'s idolatry Popeye - Spinach-olatry! lol.
July 12th, 2026 11:17
orchidee said:
Good write T. Mary\'s never answered any of my prayers - cos I\'ve never prayed to her, not being Roman Catholic nor of other denominations that are into Maryolatry - or Mariolatry!
It\'s idolatry Popeye - Spinach-olatry! lol.
July 12th, 2026 11:17
Icon Appropriation
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a haunting spiritual weight here, where guilt, grace, and consequence wrestle beneath the surface.
The poem feels like a reckoning with the past, searching for resurrection after everything has been stripped away.
July 12th, 2026 09:42
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a haunting spiritual weight here, where guilt, grace, and consequence wrestle beneath the surface.
The poem feels like a reckoning with the past, searching for resurrection after everything has been stripped away.
July 12th, 2026 09:42
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