Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the cutting room floor
orchidee said:
Good write T. But heck, in a film about P & co, so much had to be cut out of the film that there\'s only 1% of it left - 1 minute of film, that is, as it was 100 minutes long originally! lol. They\'ve edited it to its full length though, with stores of knitting, spinach recipes, and sabre/sword fighting! lol.
What ARE we talking about? What an obscure comment. Sadly, don\'t answer that! lol.
February 13th, 2026 12:27
orchidee said:
Good write T. But heck, in a film about P & co, so much had to be cut out of the film that there\'s only 1% of it left - 1 minute of film, that is, as it was 100 minutes long originally! lol. They\'ve edited it to its full length though, with stores of knitting, spinach recipes, and sabre/sword fighting! lol.
What ARE we talking about? What an obscure comment. Sadly, don\'t answer that! lol.
February 13th, 2026 12:27
the cutting room floor
Friendship said:
Your poem magnificently captures the profound exploration of identity, memory, and the enthralling dance between personal history and societal expectations, boldly critiquing the superficial facade of happiness often portrayed in movies and poignantly suggesting that authentic experiences and emotions are frequently discarded, much like the powerful metaphor of footage on the cutting room floor serves to illuminate the often-overlooked yet vital aspects of life and identity.
February 13th, 2026 12:02
Friendship said:
Your poem magnificently captures the profound exploration of identity, memory, and the enthralling dance between personal history and societal expectations, boldly critiquing the superficial facade of happiness often portrayed in movies and poignantly suggesting that authentic experiences and emotions are frequently discarded, much like the powerful metaphor of footage on the cutting room floor serves to illuminate the often-overlooked yet vital aspects of life and identity.
February 13th, 2026 12:02
the cutting room floor
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem about the present state of affairs. It does seem that people are action, sex, blood thirsty, violent junkies. There is little interest of patience for anything else. Even in poetry my most highly rated poems by independent judges even AI are read the least while those catered to common interests with low ratings are read the most. It goes to show Tristan that marketing is everything and a flamboyant show of death, sex, violence and dark endings are what people want to see. A wonderful eye opening write
February 13th, 2026 11:21
sorenbarrett said:
A thought provoking poem about the present state of affairs. It does seem that people are action, sex, blood thirsty, violent junkies. There is little interest of patience for anything else. Even in poetry my most highly rated poems by independent judges even AI are read the least while those catered to common interests with low ratings are read the most. It goes to show Tristan that marketing is everything and a flamboyant show of death, sex, violence and dark endings are what people want to see. A wonderful eye opening write
February 13th, 2026 11:21
the cutting room floor
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I love the mystery left at the end, I would say that each individual has their own idea of what a happy ending should be. Dark or light nothing is wrong depends on our taste. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 11:09
Teddy.15 said:
Ah I love the mystery left at the end, I would say that each individual has their own idea of what a happy ending should be. Dark or light nothing is wrong depends on our taste. 🌹
February 13th, 2026 11:09
fire away
Paul Bell said:
I thought transparency had been removed from the dictionary, certainly been sidelined.
We live in a world of lies that takes half the day to decipher only to be replaced with more lies.
I\'m thinking this shield is nuclear proof.
February 13th, 2026 04:37
Paul Bell said:
I thought transparency had been removed from the dictionary, certainly been sidelined.
We live in a world of lies that takes half the day to decipher only to be replaced with more lies.
I\'m thinking this shield is nuclear proof.
February 13th, 2026 04:37
fire away
orchidee said:
Good write T. You\'ll need that shield if you hear a glugging sound. Why will you need a shield? Don\'t answer that! lol.
February 12th, 2026 11:06
orchidee said:
Good write T. You\'ll need that shield if you hear a glugging sound. Why will you need a shield? Don\'t answer that! lol.
February 12th, 2026 11:06
fire away
Friendship said:
Well written.Triatan.Your poem \"Part of the ongoing series: The Rutted Road\" revolves around the struggle for authenticity and resilience in a world that often feels confusing and oppressive. The poet explores themes of transparency, integrity, and hope, juxtaposed with the harsh realities of life that can feel like thorns or painful obstacles.
February 12th, 2026 10:39
Friendship said:
Well written.Triatan.Your poem \"Part of the ongoing series: The Rutted Road\" revolves around the struggle for authenticity and resilience in a world that often feels confusing and oppressive. The poet explores themes of transparency, integrity, and hope, juxtaposed with the harsh realities of life that can feel like thorns or painful obstacles.
February 12th, 2026 10:39
fire away
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I think this is one of my favourites from you,
Love the fact you are never giving up.
but my hope is a
shield
built for missile
deflection.
fire away
Wonderful words. 🌹
February 12th, 2026 10:33
Teddy.15 said:
Oh I think this is one of my favourites from you,
Love the fact you are never giving up.
but my hope is a
shield
built for missile
deflection.
fire away
Wonderful words. 🌹
February 12th, 2026 10:33
fire away
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed in this world of enigma we are asked to be ourselves and honest at that in a society of lies. Hope so easily dashed in some is a shield indeed. Some are not to be overthrown and succumb to such threats but will stand in the face of adversity, opposition and denial they are the strong and true heroes
February 12th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed in this world of enigma we are asked to be ourselves and honest at that in a society of lies. Hope so easily dashed in some is a shield indeed. Some are not to be overthrown and succumb to such threats but will stand in the face of adversity, opposition and denial they are the strong and true heroes
February 12th, 2026 10:26
A Measured Mirror
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds dramatic but the mirror is one of the hardest things a human can face at least at times. Most wonderful poem. 🌹
February 12th, 2026 09:40
Teddy.15 said:
Sounds dramatic but the mirror is one of the hardest things a human can face at least at times. Most wonderful poem. 🌹
February 12th, 2026 09:40
A Measured Mirror
NinjaGirl said:
I can always count on you to teach me at least one new vocabulary word...! \"to speak truth is to speak violence against oneself in a world of dishonest delusions\" I like this line a lot, I interpret it as speaking the truth will bring the violence of others upon us. In a poem that leaves me wondering what the truth is...truly fantastic work!
February 11th, 2026 22:16
NinjaGirl said:
I can always count on you to teach me at least one new vocabulary word...! \"to speak truth is to speak violence against oneself in a world of dishonest delusions\" I like this line a lot, I interpret it as speaking the truth will bring the violence of others upon us. In a poem that leaves me wondering what the truth is...truly fantastic work!
February 11th, 2026 22:16
A Measured Mirror
Neville said:
Your medusa oblongata just made my medulla oblongata wince big time .. but if you are write, then I shall have to re-think where I hid my serpentine straws 🪰🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤🐧👍
February 11th, 2026 11:53
Neville said:
Your medusa oblongata just made my medulla oblongata wince big time .. but if you are write, then I shall have to re-think where I hid my serpentine straws 🪰🐈⬛🐦⬛🖤🐧👍
February 11th, 2026 11:53
A Measured Mirror
sorenbarrett said:
Love the visual with this that is as complex as the poem itself. They appear human shadow hour glasses draining words to mark the time. This one Tristan holds so many metaphors and symbols that it boggles the mind much as modern society does. This image then might be a mirror image as well where truth becomes its obverse and one can not be told from another. I\'m giving a fave for the ingenious design of this whole poem
February 11th, 2026 10:26
sorenbarrett said:
Love the visual with this that is as complex as the poem itself. They appear human shadow hour glasses draining words to mark the time. This one Tristan holds so many metaphors and symbols that it boggles the mind much as modern society does. This image then might be a mirror image as well where truth becomes its obverse and one can not be told from another. I\'m giving a fave for the ingenious design of this whole poem
February 11th, 2026 10:26
A Measured Mirror
Friendship said:
You really made me think about this poem. Well done. This poem explores the complexity of truth, memory, and the struggle for clarity in a world filled with deception and ambiguity. It contrasts the weight of buried memories and the inevitability of facing uncomfortable truths with the illusions and lies that often dominate human experience. Yet the poet delves into existential themes of knowledge, self-awareness, and the consequences of disregarding truth in favor of comfort.
February 11th, 2026 10:26
Friendship said:
You really made me think about this poem. Well done. This poem explores the complexity of truth, memory, and the struggle for clarity in a world filled with deception and ambiguity. It contrasts the weight of buried memories and the inevitability of facing uncomfortable truths with the illusions and lies that often dominate human experience. Yet the poet delves into existential themes of knowledge, self-awareness, and the consequences of disregarding truth in favor of comfort.
February 11th, 2026 10:26
skipping stones
Mutley Ravishes said:
You`re on an Odyssey, Tristan! Ain`t that a trip? Gotta admit, I like it, when you venture down these paths.
February 10th, 2026 20:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
You`re on an Odyssey, Tristan! Ain`t that a trip? Gotta admit, I like it, when you venture down these paths.
February 10th, 2026 20:25
skipping stones
orchidee said:
Good write T. That glugger been exiled?! lol.
February 10th, 2026 10:55
orchidee said:
Good write T. That glugger been exiled?! lol.
February 10th, 2026 10:55
skipping stones
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around feelings of despair, existential questioning, and the search for faith during difficult times. The poet grapples with feelings of abandonment and confusion, wondering about their purpose and the reasons behind their suffering. Yet a feeling that reflects a deep internal conflict and a yearning for reassurance and understanding, indicating a struggle between faith and doubt.
February 10th, 2026 10:53
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem revolves around feelings of despair, existential questioning, and the search for faith during difficult times. The poet grapples with feelings of abandonment and confusion, wondering about their purpose and the reasons behind their suffering. Yet a feeling that reflects a deep internal conflict and a yearning for reassurance and understanding, indicating a struggle between faith and doubt.
February 10th, 2026 10:53
skipping stones
sorenbarrett said:
For those that don\'t understand who are narrow minded, that lack the ability to see beyond their nose then such stones are not stones but cow dung. Some can not see the diamond in the coal. Well written my friend
February 10th, 2026 10:45
sorenbarrett said:
For those that don\'t understand who are narrow minded, that lack the ability to see beyond their nose then such stones are not stones but cow dung. Some can not see the diamond in the coal. Well written my friend
February 10th, 2026 10:45
diminishing returns
Thomas W Case said:
Righteous and raw — your words don’t flinch from the cost of truth.
Freedom never whispers; it shouts through the cracks you’ve carved here.
February 10th, 2026 07:20
Thomas W Case said:
Righteous and raw — your words don’t flinch from the cost of truth.
Freedom never whispers; it shouts through the cracks you’ve carved here.
February 10th, 2026 07:20
obstruction
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes - but don\'t give up in despair - wait some more...miracles do happen
February 10th, 2026 00:13
NafisaSB said:
happens sometimes - but don\'t give up in despair - wait some more...miracles do happen
February 10th, 2026 00:13
diminishing returns
arqios said:
The “erasure of diminishment” now that’s what I like 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2026 20:56
arqios said:
The “erasure of diminishment” now that’s what I like 🙏🏻🕊️
February 9th, 2026 20:56
diminishing returns
Doggerel Dave said:
Perspective – the ability to know which battles are worth the pursuit, and which should be abandoned, because they aren’t worth a candle…….. wish I had that ability…..
Thanks Tristan.
February 9th, 2026 17:44
Doggerel Dave said:
Perspective – the ability to know which battles are worth the pursuit, and which should be abandoned, because they aren’t worth a candle…….. wish I had that ability…..
Thanks Tristan.
February 9th, 2026 17:44
diminishing returns
Paul Bell said:
Should you call it out? Will it make a difference if you do?
Does it affect others? Always a tough decision that can work one or both ways.
Some see it as duty, others can\'t live with themselves if they don\'t call it out.
February 9th, 2026 15:51
Paul Bell said:
Should you call it out? Will it make a difference if you do?
Does it affect others? Always a tough decision that can work one or both ways.
Some see it as duty, others can\'t live with themselves if they don\'t call it out.
February 9th, 2026 15:51
diminishing returns
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no diminishing for that glugging one and his mates. No diminishing of what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
February 9th, 2026 12:41
orchidee said:
Ain\'t no diminishing for that glugging one and his mates. No diminishing of what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
February 9th, 2026 12:41
diminishing returns
sorenbarrett said:
Neither diminishment nor exaggeration serves in media, government, or conversation it destroys belief, trust, relationships. Leave it for fishermen. A fave
February 9th, 2026 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
Neither diminishment nor exaggeration serves in media, government, or conversation it destroys belief, trust, relationships. Leave it for fishermen. A fave
February 9th, 2026 10:15
diminishing returns
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of truth, freedom, and self-identity, exploring the tension between the desire for comfort and the necessity of confronting one\'s true self, even at the risk of facing challenges or rejection.
February 9th, 2026 10:06
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem addresses themes of truth, freedom, and self-identity, exploring the tension between the desire for comfort and the necessity of confronting one\'s true self, even at the risk of facing challenges or rejection.
February 9th, 2026 10:06
The Indecency Index
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps only it\'s you who can write \"Litigious liturgies leave little room for grace.\" or \"Inclusive theology is only indecent to systems
Dominating the oppressed.\"
The poem conveyed a deep love for religion with a deep desparation to allow it to maintain the true human spirit.
February 9th, 2026 05:37
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Perhaps only it\'s you who can write \"Litigious liturgies leave little room for grace.\" or \"Inclusive theology is only indecent to systems
Dominating the oppressed.\"
The poem conveyed a deep love for religion with a deep desparation to allow it to maintain the true human spirit.
February 9th, 2026 05:37
The Indecency Index
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
The importance of belonging is what I sensed here. Great work Tristan! As always!
February 8th, 2026 15:15
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
The importance of belonging is what I sensed here. Great work Tristan! As always!
February 8th, 2026 15:15
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