Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Oh Dear!
arqios said:
Fern and deer seem to go together in any scenario. But don’t mind me. Just a random thought.🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2026 08:12
arqios said:
Fern and deer seem to go together in any scenario. But don’t mind me. Just a random thought.🕊️🙏🏻
July 1st, 2026 08:12
Oh Dear!
Teddy.15 said:
Wait what???? Kudos love Sonnet and theses are fabulous 👏👏👏👏❤️
July 1st, 2026 07:41
Teddy.15 said:
Wait what???? Kudos love Sonnet and theses are fabulous 👏👏👏👏❤️
July 1st, 2026 07:41
damn
Mutley Ravishes said:
Your teeth and bones are going to rot too! You\'re f......!
June 30th, 2026 18:58
Mutley Ravishes said:
Your teeth and bones are going to rot too! You\'re f......!
June 30th, 2026 18:58
damn
Paul Bell said:
I tried being a man, but the council slapped me down with a fine, and now I must identify as number 97.
Got a feeling even tinkerbell is heading foir the hills.
June 30th, 2026 11:42
Paul Bell said:
I tried being a man, but the council slapped me down with a fine, and now I must identify as number 97.
Got a feeling even tinkerbell is heading foir the hills.
June 30th, 2026 11:42
damn
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the whole theme of Peter Pan was a boy that would not grow up. The idea of being a man is foiled by this. Tinkerbell the symbolism of imagination and the wonder of imagination of childhood. Peanut butter a childhood staple and the idea of it being stuck in a labeled can brings the thought of how we are all stuck with labels that we can not escape. So with all this how does one become a man? The note of her being a ginger speaks to creativity and passion, being unique and fiery. Damn is that an expression of disdain or a condition damned to this state? Very nice my friend
June 30th, 2026 08:30
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan the whole theme of Peter Pan was a boy that would not grow up. The idea of being a man is foiled by this. Tinkerbell the symbolism of imagination and the wonder of imagination of childhood. Peanut butter a childhood staple and the idea of it being stuck in a labeled can brings the thought of how we are all stuck with labels that we can not escape. So with all this how does one become a man? The note of her being a ginger speaks to creativity and passion, being unique and fiery. Damn is that an expression of disdain or a condition damned to this state? Very nice my friend
June 30th, 2026 08:30
damn
orchidee said:
A mild title compared to my poem beginning \'Ohh, F, F, and F\' and furthermore \'Grrr, F, F, F, and F\'! And Fido\'s ears are burning now. Tone it down, he says! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:27
orchidee said:
A mild title compared to my poem beginning \'Ohh, F, F, and F\' and furthermore \'Grrr, F, F, F, and F\'! And Fido\'s ears are burning now. Tone it down, he says! lol.
June 30th, 2026 08:27
damn
Thomas W Case said:
A hard swerve into absurdity, like identity slipping on a banana peel and landing in a punchline you didn’t plan.
It’s messy, funny, and a little desperate—the kind of humor that shows up when things stop making sense.
June 30th, 2026 08:25
Thomas W Case said:
A hard swerve into absurdity, like identity slipping on a banana peel and landing in a punchline you didn’t plan.
It’s messy, funny, and a little desperate—the kind of humor that shows up when things stop making sense.
June 30th, 2026 08:25
damn
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simple but highly effective piece my friend, much enjoyed read
June 30th, 2026 07:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
simple but highly effective piece my friend, much enjoyed read
June 30th, 2026 07:35
Hush Slushies
Paul Bell said:
Pray straight, stray gay, condense them together, the vicar\'s doing cartwheels.
This is why Alians get confused when they visit earth, and why I buy packet soup now.
June 29th, 2026 15:54
Paul Bell said:
Pray straight, stray gay, condense them together, the vicar\'s doing cartwheels.
This is why Alians get confused when they visit earth, and why I buy packet soup now.
June 29th, 2026 15:54
Hush Slushies
Friendship said:
Well expressed, your poem\'s informal tone suggests a personal narrative, you readers to connect with the poet\'s frustrations and desires for authenticity and freedom. Ultimately, the poem serves as a commentary on the complexity of identity in a world that often seeks to simplify and categorize individuals.
June 29th, 2026 15:41
Friendship said:
Well expressed, your poem\'s informal tone suggests a personal narrative, you readers to connect with the poet\'s frustrations and desires for authenticity and freedom. Ultimately, the poem serves as a commentary on the complexity of identity in a world that often seeks to simplify and categorize individuals.
June 29th, 2026 15:41
Hush Slushies
orchidee said:
That\'s art that is, that pic - probably worth millions of pounds (UK) / dollars (US). Mr P Solus said it would be worth even more if they were cans of spinach - empty ones of course as he will have glugged them all. lol.
June 29th, 2026 10:40
orchidee said:
That\'s art that is, that pic - probably worth millions of pounds (UK) / dollars (US). Mr P Solus said it would be worth even more if they were cans of spinach - empty ones of course as he will have glugged them all. lol.
June 29th, 2026 10:40
Hush Slushies
sorenbarrett said:
I do like chili con carne but not from a can. Home made please and the same with sexual orientation not from a can please, birthed from a homemade recipe is the only way to go. Great write and most interesting metaphor my friend.
June 29th, 2026 08:44
sorenbarrett said:
I do like chili con carne but not from a can. Home made please and the same with sexual orientation not from a can please, birthed from a homemade recipe is the only way to go. Great write and most interesting metaphor my friend.
June 29th, 2026 08:44
Remember the Organizer
Demar Desu said:
Wow! It only makes sense that the poets blossoms into music! I’m definitely going to check it out, I’m also looking to buy that book you’ve been advertising soon. I apologize for not being as supportive as I should be… especially knowing how important art is. Thank you for continuing and metamorphosing… you inspire..
June 29th, 2026 06:13
Demar Desu said:
Wow! It only makes sense that the poets blossoms into music! I’m definitely going to check it out, I’m also looking to buy that book you’ve been advertising soon. I apologize for not being as supportive as I should be… especially knowing how important art is. Thank you for continuing and metamorphosing… you inspire..
June 29th, 2026 06:13
Remember the Organizer
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind the writer (organiser), the only question for me is: does the argument hold? After a reasonably long life, having been confronted with so many questions, arguments, propositions and learnt much from them, I\'ve developed a filter which excludes all considerations relating to the author unless I can identify their underlying ideology.
Thanks for pinning the topic up Tristan.
June 28th, 2026 18:59
Doggerel Dave said:
Never mind the writer (organiser), the only question for me is: does the argument hold? After a reasonably long life, having been confronted with so many questions, arguments, propositions and learnt much from them, I\'ve developed a filter which excludes all considerations relating to the author unless I can identify their underlying ideology.
Thanks for pinning the topic up Tristan.
June 28th, 2026 18:59
Remember the Organizer
orchidee said:
Good write T. There\'s some we can\'t forget - Popeye & Co! lol.
June 28th, 2026 12:47
orchidee said:
Good write T. There\'s some we can\'t forget - Popeye & Co! lol.
June 28th, 2026 12:47
Remember the Organizer
Teddy.15 said:
Such an important piece quaking Faith, I\'m lucky I was never part of the faith path, I\'m an unbeliever however I do have much sympathy for those forced to study a religion when they have no interest simply because it is family tradition, love your last stanza too. Kudos my dear Tristan. 🌹
June 28th, 2026 11:14
Teddy.15 said:
Such an important piece quaking Faith, I\'m lucky I was never part of the faith path, I\'m an unbeliever however I do have much sympathy for those forced to study a religion when they have no interest simply because it is family tradition, love your last stanza too. Kudos my dear Tristan. 🌹
June 28th, 2026 11:14
Remember the Organizer
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write and a fav
June 28th, 2026 10:09
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
great write and a fav
June 28th, 2026 10:09
Remember the Organizer
sorenbarrett said:
Your opening lines set the tone. A quaking faith so are most if a person is honest. That fire often consumes both faith and belief turning them to ashes. Words and people, be they prophets or political leaders or financial gurus leave them demigods an Achilles with a vulnerable heel. Words of those with a cause are not to be taken wholeheartedly. Gandhi techniques are noble but do not always work. A great acrostic my friend
June 28th, 2026 09:52
sorenbarrett said:
Your opening lines set the tone. A quaking faith so are most if a person is honest. That fire often consumes both faith and belief turning them to ashes. Words and people, be they prophets or political leaders or financial gurus leave them demigods an Achilles with a vulnerable heel. Words of those with a cause are not to be taken wholeheartedly. Gandhi techniques are noble but do not always work. A great acrostic my friend
June 28th, 2026 09:52
chicken liver pâté
Thomas W Case said:
A barroom snarl wrapped in rhyme—messy, loud, and grinning while it throws the punch.
There’s grit in the absurdity, like you’re flipping the table just to prove it was never worth setting.
June 28th, 2026 08:23
Thomas W Case said:
A barroom snarl wrapped in rhyme—messy, loud, and grinning while it throws the punch.
There’s grit in the absurdity, like you’re flipping the table just to prove it was never worth setting.
June 28th, 2026 08:23
chicken liver pâté
orchidee said:
Good write T. In some tomfoolery, no, tomgluggery (Popeye and Ol\'Tom both got in there!) they say \'What? No spinach pate?!\' lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:15
orchidee said:
Good write T. In some tomfoolery, no, tomgluggery (Popeye and Ol\'Tom both got in there!) they say \'What? No spinach pate?!\' lol.
June 28th, 2026 03:15
chicken liver pâté
Doggerel Dave said:
Yuck !
Not only but also a bonus lesson on extreme assertiveness, Tristan...
June 28th, 2026 00:42
Doggerel Dave said:
Yuck !
Not only but also a bonus lesson on extreme assertiveness, Tristan...
June 28th, 2026 00:42
chicken liver pâté
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan I do not like chicken livers or pate but in this sense it is the expectation of something better for something undesirable. It sees like being promised steak and getting tube steak (hot dogs) You never know what is inside. Had a neighbor that owned a hot dog industry and none of his family would eat them a sign. A lovely message set in this poem of metaphor Tristan.
June 27th, 2026 11:35
sorenbarrett said:
Well Tristan I do not like chicken livers or pate but in this sense it is the expectation of something better for something undesirable. It sees like being promised steak and getting tube steak (hot dogs) You never know what is inside. Had a neighbor that owned a hot dog industry and none of his family would eat them a sign. A lovely message set in this poem of metaphor Tristan.
June 27th, 2026 11:35
chicken liver pâté
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Fun write with a clear message
June 27th, 2026 11:20
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Fun write with a clear message
June 27th, 2026 11:20
chicken liver pâté
arqios said:
Sounds like someone is mounting and over promising; I always was of the notion that pâté was from duck liver. And that kind of racket is a scam and a con job, any which angle looked at 🕊️🙏🏻👍🏻
June 27th, 2026 09:09
arqios said:
Sounds like someone is mounting and over promising; I always was of the notion that pâté was from duck liver. And that kind of racket is a scam and a con job, any which angle looked at 🕊️🙏🏻👍🏻
June 27th, 2026 09:09
chicken liver pâté
Friendship said:
Well put. Your poem reflects a deep sense of frustration and disappointment with unmet expectations and superficiality in relationships or interactions. It juxtaposes the idea of high aspirations (symbolized by \"paté\") with the mundane or disappointing reality (represented by \"chicken livers\"). Your poem conveys a feeling of being trapped in a situation that feels insincere or unfulfilling. Well, your feelings are all over in this situation.🌹❤️I love chicken live and chicken pate married to a Jewish man; it\'s one of their main course in the holidays
June 27th, 2026 09:01
Friendship said:
Well put. Your poem reflects a deep sense of frustration and disappointment with unmet expectations and superficiality in relationships or interactions. It juxtaposes the idea of high aspirations (symbolized by \"paté\") with the mundane or disappointing reality (represented by \"chicken livers\"). Your poem conveys a feeling of being trapped in a situation that feels insincere or unfulfilling. Well, your feelings are all over in this situation.🌹❤️I love chicken live and chicken pate married to a Jewish man; it\'s one of their main course in the holidays
June 27th, 2026 09:01
thirst quencher
orchidee said:
Good write T. One has a thirst for spinach - we knows him! lol.
June 26th, 2026 11:09
orchidee said:
Good write T. One has a thirst for spinach - we knows him! lol.
June 26th, 2026 11:09
thirst quencher
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another good write my friend, much enjoyed
June 26th, 2026 10:56
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
another good write my friend, much enjoyed
June 26th, 2026 10:56
thirst quencher
Friendship said:
A strong poem. The poet likely aims to provoke thought about the nature of safety and existence, encouraging me as the reader to consider how my perceptions are shaped by societal pressures and personal fears.
June 26th, 2026 10:32
Friendship said:
A strong poem. The poet likely aims to provoke thought about the nature of safety and existence, encouraging me as the reader to consider how my perceptions are shaped by societal pressures and personal fears.
June 26th, 2026 10:32
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