Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Demons
teardrop said:
Spooky, though I have had my times of dancing with the devil (shhh, don\'t tell anyone) Very enjoyable read1
December 18th, 2024 06:49
teardrop said:
Spooky, though I have had my times of dancing with the devil (shhh, don\'t tell anyone) Very enjoyable read1
December 18th, 2024 06:49
Fortress of Mountains
Dan Williams said:
It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls seem constantly under siege these days. Nice work.
December 18th, 2024 00:55
Dan Williams said:
It seems the mountain sees, and the mountain disapproves. Fortress walls seem constantly under siege these days. Nice work.
December 18th, 2024 00:55
Fortress of Mountains
cellinic said:
Very nice and exquisitely written, Liked and faved) Good sonography
December 18th, 2024 00:29
cellinic said:
Very nice and exquisitely written, Liked and faved) Good sonography
December 18th, 2024 00:29
Fortress of Mountains
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Tristan, it\'s a shame when humans spoil and take advantage of the gift of natural beauty and landscape, fortunately I live in a place where it\'s still unspoilt bit such an important message in here. Wonderful. 🌹
December 16th, 2024 20:24
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful dear Tristan, it\'s a shame when humans spoil and take advantage of the gift of natural beauty and landscape, fortunately I live in a place where it\'s still unspoilt bit such an important message in here. Wonderful. 🌹
December 16th, 2024 20:24
Fortress of Mountains
Thad Wilk said:
A brilliant poem
on the emotions felt
in the solitude being
I\'m the Rocky Mountains
that day! 😳
The imagery and use of
metaphor just blew me away!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 19:53
Thad Wilk said:
A brilliant poem
on the emotions felt
in the solitude being
I\'m the Rocky Mountains
that day! 😳
The imagery and use of
metaphor just blew me away!! 🏆
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 16th, 2024 19:53
Fortress of Mountains
Mutley Ravishes said:
Rocky Mountain Low, by John Denver-Lange!
December 16th, 2024 18:39
Mutley Ravishes said:
Rocky Mountain Low, by John Denver-Lange!
December 16th, 2024 18:39
Fortress of Mountains
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Stunning imagery.
December 16th, 2024 17:12
Thomas W Case said:
Beautiful work. Stunning imagery.
December 16th, 2024 17:12
Fortress of Mountains
Doggerel Dave said:
After the great conversations above I find myself with very little to add and feel very much inclined to follow Tony’s formula here.
To the participants arqios and Neville I would (as I have to Soren) ask you to consider sharing some of your diverse experience as pastes here.
Side issue, Tristan: possible to disclose the source of your rich visuals?
December 16th, 2024 16:30
Doggerel Dave said:
After the great conversations above I find myself with very little to add and feel very much inclined to follow Tony’s formula here.
To the participants arqios and Neville I would (as I have to Soren) ask you to consider sharing some of your diverse experience as pastes here.
Side issue, Tristan: possible to disclose the source of your rich visuals?
December 16th, 2024 16:30
Fortress of Mountains
Neville said:
I tried to read through these words slowly and to savour them but found myself freefalling and feeling like I needed to go with the flow .. I think it may have been the drip drip dripping format which worked well .. and was responsible for that .. I also believe that I know where you are coming from when you refer to solitude and isolation (the two are not necessarily synonymous though are they) and I have found and felt both independently of the other and also simultaneously while working both in India and in West Africa & while on retreat in Thailand & Malaysia .. An impressive and compelling read if I may say so .. Neville 😎👍
December 16th, 2024 13:12
Neville said:
I tried to read through these words slowly and to savour them but found myself freefalling and feeling like I needed to go with the flow .. I think it may have been the drip drip dripping format which worked well .. and was responsible for that .. I also believe that I know where you are coming from when you refer to solitude and isolation (the two are not necessarily synonymous though are they) and I have found and felt both independently of the other and also simultaneously while working both in India and in West Africa & while on retreat in Thailand & Malaysia .. An impressive and compelling read if I may say so .. Neville 😎👍
December 16th, 2024 13:12
Fortress of Mountains
TobaniNataiella said:
A very clever piece of writing with i feel an undercurrent of sadness, a very enjoyable read poetically.
December 16th, 2024 10:09
TobaniNataiella said:
A very clever piece of writing with i feel an undercurrent of sadness, a very enjoyable read poetically.
December 16th, 2024 10:09
Fortress of Mountains
sorenbarrett said:
A sad message of how we as people take nature out of its place and put in on display for our entertainment. Nicely done
December 16th, 2024 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
A sad message of how we as people take nature out of its place and put in on display for our entertainment. Nicely done
December 16th, 2024 09:39
Fortress of Mountains
arqios said:
Remember driving around between there and the Appalachian, with Rocky Top blaring from the car stereo. Using those feelings to frame this poem. The carnival image brought a quite claustrophobic, caged feel; strong light and shade contrast between the two halves of the poem. Powerful.
December 16th, 2024 08:12
arqios said:
Remember driving around between there and the Appalachian, with Rocky Top blaring from the car stereo. Using those feelings to frame this poem. The carnival image brought a quite claustrophobic, caged feel; strong light and shade contrast between the two halves of the poem. Powerful.
December 16th, 2024 08:12
Cryogenic Catharsis
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"My voice is the murder of my throat\" - never came across something so profound. \"coals of rigidity burn\" another rare gem. Exceptional work in my humble opinion
December 16th, 2024 07:20
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"My voice is the murder of my throat\" - never came across something so profound. \"coals of rigidity burn\" another rare gem. Exceptional work in my humble opinion
December 16th, 2024 07:20
Demons
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
A scary and creepy good write!😈
Awesome poetic visual,
a fright filled delight! 😱
Made me swoon and want to
dance to that
Vampiric tune! 🎵🎶🎶 🦇🦇
A superb read indeed!! 😍 Loved it!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 21:06
Thad Wilk said:
Wow! 😳
A scary and creepy good write!😈
Awesome poetic visual,
a fright filled delight! 😱
Made me swoon and want to
dance to that
Vampiric tune! 🎵🎶🎶 🦇🦇
A superb read indeed!! 😍 Loved it!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 15th, 2024 21:06
Demons
NinjaGirl said:
The image is very cool looking, first of all. second--they dance so well you just don\'t want to stop... dance until you drop, even if its dead at least you\'d\'ve had the company
December 15th, 2024 20:11
NinjaGirl said:
The image is very cool looking, first of all. second--they dance so well you just don\'t want to stop... dance until you drop, even if its dead at least you\'d\'ve had the company
December 15th, 2024 20:11
Demons
arqios said:
I’ve been through Valhalla with a corpse with no name… it’s so good to be out of the flames… in Valhalla you can’t remember your frame… lalalalala….
December 15th, 2024 18:27
arqios said:
I’ve been through Valhalla with a corpse with no name… it’s so good to be out of the flames… in Valhalla you can’t remember your frame… lalalalala….
December 15th, 2024 18:27
Demons
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Profound questions for the current times. Should we indulge - life is short, isn\'t it? Should I yield to temptation - without yielding to greed there is no success (the earthly salvation). An existential quandary we face each day. Thought provoking at its best.
December 15th, 2024 09:46
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Profound questions for the current times. Should we indulge - life is short, isn\'t it? Should I yield to temptation - without yielding to greed there is no success (the earthly salvation). An existential quandary we face each day. Thought provoking at its best.
December 15th, 2024 09:46
Demons
Neville said:
I think we all have them .. correction, I know we do .. a moment of indiscretion fuels a lifetime of regret .. not to mention them bloody vampires that want to bleed us dry .. darker than the blinkered blinds of Hades & stuffed to the gills with what Halloween couldn\'t stomach .. & if that aint something to be smug about I dunno what is .. 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛😎👍
December 15th, 2024 08:51
Neville said:
I think we all have them .. correction, I know we do .. a moment of indiscretion fuels a lifetime of regret .. not to mention them bloody vampires that want to bleed us dry .. darker than the blinkered blinds of Hades & stuffed to the gills with what Halloween couldn\'t stomach .. & if that aint something to be smug about I dunno what is .. 🖤🐈⬛🐦⬛😎👍
December 15th, 2024 08:51
Demons
orchidee said:
Argh no! Let\'s not dance with them. \'He/she who sups with the devil needs a long spoon\', i.e. keep your distance. From Geoffrey Chaucer maybe, circa 1390.
Meanwhile will ya roll round the floor in laughter, as I say? - I didn\'t know ya had that pic of ya mother-in-law there!\' Heehee.
\'Succumb\' linked to \'succubus\'? - a naughty female demon.
December 15th, 2024 08:37
orchidee said:
Argh no! Let\'s not dance with them. \'He/she who sups with the devil needs a long spoon\', i.e. keep your distance. From Geoffrey Chaucer maybe, circa 1390.
Meanwhile will ya roll round the floor in laughter, as I say? - I didn\'t know ya had that pic of ya mother-in-law there!\' Heehee.
\'Succumb\' linked to \'succubus\'? - a naughty female demon.
December 15th, 2024 08:37
Demons
TobaniNataiella said:
Well as someone who has danced with many devils i really like this poem, and highlights the fact we have all danced at some stage, some who did not choose to and those who did, Very enjoyable read.
December 15th, 2024 08:26
TobaniNataiella said:
Well as someone who has danced with many devils i really like this poem, and highlights the fact we have all danced at some stage, some who did not choose to and those who did, Very enjoyable read.
December 15th, 2024 08:26
Demons
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderful write indeed Tristan.
we eat from the same table my friend.
December 15th, 2024 07:37
aDarkerMind said:
a wonderful write indeed Tristan.
we eat from the same table my friend.
December 15th, 2024 07:37
Demons
sorenbarrett said:
We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all succumb to the call. A wonderfull write my friend
December 15th, 2024 07:34
sorenbarrett said:
We all are tempted to dance with sirens and at one time or another we all succumb to the call. A wonderfull write my friend
December 15th, 2024 07:34
Doors
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to doors - well, I know now! lol.
December 15th, 2024 03:47
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much to doors - well, I know now! lol.
December 15th, 2024 03:47
The Key
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm, I might be tempted to say you\'re worth the trouble, depends. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 14th, 2024 17:48
Cheeky Missy said:
Mmm, I might be tempted to say you\'re worth the trouble, depends. Beautifully rendered with a delightfully haunting poignancy and excellent imagery. Thank you for sharing.
December 14th, 2024 17:48
Doors
Cassie58 said:
Much to contemplate in this superbly crafted poem Tristan. We are all on a journey. I guess most will say ‘ I did it my way’. A long time since I listened to the Doors. Time to change that. Have a good rest of weekend dear poet.
December 14th, 2024 17:40
Cassie58 said:
Much to contemplate in this superbly crafted poem Tristan. We are all on a journey. I guess most will say ‘ I did it my way’. A long time since I listened to the Doors. Time to change that. Have a good rest of weekend dear poet.
December 14th, 2024 17:40
Doors
Neville said:
When you put it like that, the light seems to flicker more brightly & come on which in turn, shows one the way .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:32
Neville said:
When you put it like that, the light seems to flicker more brightly & come on which in turn, shows one the way .. Neville 👍
December 14th, 2024 12:32
Doors
TobaniNataiella said:
Those with closed minds only hear what they want to hear ( especially if the truth effects them), those with open minds may not agree but will listen. Great read, Thank you Tristan
December 14th, 2024 12:17
TobaniNataiella said:
Those with closed minds only hear what they want to hear ( especially if the truth effects them), those with open minds may not agree but will listen. Great read, Thank you Tristan
December 14th, 2024 12:17
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