Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Black Floyd
orchidee said:
Fido sings along with me. It drowns out a certain glugging sound from...... ohh, we know him, we\'ve mentioned him millions of times now! lol.
November 26th, 2025 16:03
orchidee said:
Fido sings along with me. It drowns out a certain glugging sound from...... ohh, we know him, we\'ve mentioned him millions of times now! lol.
November 26th, 2025 16:03
Black Floyd
Teddy.15 said:
What a creation, love pinks version it\'s one of my all time fave guitar features, yours is truly a chip off the old block in black. Brilliant vibes musical and inspiring. 🌹 🌈
November 26th, 2025 11:47
Teddy.15 said:
What a creation, love pinks version it\'s one of my all time fave guitar features, yours is truly a chip off the old block in black. Brilliant vibes musical and inspiring. 🌹 🌈
November 26th, 2025 11:47
Black Floyd
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the interplay between identity, existence, and the impact of external influences on the self. It presents a somewhat dark, existential perspective on how individuals are shaped by their surroundings and interactions, suggesting a sense of entrapment and conformity. The repeated refrain \"You’re just another\" emphasizes feelings of insignificance and the struggle for individuality amidst a crowd. The subject matter encompasses themes of creativity, isolation, and the weight of societal expectations.
November 26th, 2025 11:31
Friendship said:
This poem revolves around the interplay between identity, existence, and the impact of external influences on the self. It presents a somewhat dark, existential perspective on how individuals are shaped by their surroundings and interactions, suggesting a sense of entrapment and conformity. The repeated refrain \"You’re just another\" emphasizes feelings of insignificance and the struggle for individuality amidst a crowd. The subject matter encompasses themes of creativity, isolation, and the weight of societal expectations.
November 26th, 2025 11:31
Black Floyd
Paul Bell said:
That\'s strange, was playing dark side of the moon today. Best album ever.
Takes you down to the depths and brings you up again. Should be used in therapy.
November 26th, 2025 09:44
Paul Bell said:
That\'s strange, was playing dark side of the moon today. Best album ever.
Takes you down to the depths and brings you up again. Should be used in therapy.
November 26th, 2025 09:44
Black Floyd
sorenbarrett said:
Love Pink Floyd and Black Floyd echoes so many memories. Nicely worded with clue after clue. I was looking for a mother reference. A fave my friend
November 26th, 2025 09:20
sorenbarrett said:
Love Pink Floyd and Black Floyd echoes so many memories. Nicely worded with clue after clue. I was looking for a mother reference. A fave my friend
November 26th, 2025 09:20
The Burning Lye
Teddy.15 said:
So what I feel here is a song lyric for sure. 🌹
November 26th, 2025 06:00
Teddy.15 said:
So what I feel here is a song lyric for sure. 🌹
November 26th, 2025 06:00
Saint Expertise
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have many faults and one or two health problems, but (and feel free to correct me if you feel the need) I don\'t think a compulsion to please is one of them!
Great smooth read, Tristan.
November 25th, 2025 16:29
Doggerel Dave said:
I may have many faults and one or two health problems, but (and feel free to correct me if you feel the need) I don\'t think a compulsion to please is one of them!
Great smooth read, Tristan.
November 25th, 2025 16:29
Saint Expertise
arqios said:
Geez, Louise. An excellent piece of you please🕊️🙏🏻
November 25th, 2025 13:48
arqios said:
Geez, Louise. An excellent piece of you please🕊️🙏🏻
November 25th, 2025 13:48
Saint Expertise
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow cool fun poem in nice monorhyme. Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:22
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow cool fun poem in nice monorhyme. Thumbs up.
Plz also read and comment on my newest poem
November 25th, 2025 11:22
Saint Expertise
orchidee said:
Dang it! We know someone who has expertise. In what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 25th, 2025 10:28
orchidee said:
Dang it! We know someone who has expertise. In what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 25th, 2025 10:28
Saint Expertise
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The theme appears to be rare- the disease of compulsive pleasing. Very thought provoking. A wonderful write.
November 25th, 2025 10:22
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Stunning poem. The theme appears to be rare- the disease of compulsive pleasing. Very thought provoking. A wonderful write.
November 25th, 2025 10:22
Saint Expertise
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem seems to have been written with ease like a gentle breeze the mind does seize and by degrees the heart does please. Well done my friend
November 25th, 2025 08:56
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this poem seems to have been written with ease like a gentle breeze the mind does seize and by degrees the heart does please. Well done my friend
November 25th, 2025 08:56
God Knows
NafisaSB said:
and your answer is there- God knows, and maybe the person who caused ,and the one who cried does too....but you have left it hanging beautifully in the air - open to personal introspection and interpretation - short but immensely powerful..
November 25th, 2025 06:39
NafisaSB said:
and your answer is there- God knows, and maybe the person who caused ,and the one who cried does too....but you have left it hanging beautifully in the air - open to personal introspection and interpretation - short but immensely powerful..
November 25th, 2025 06:39
The Burning Lye
orchidee said:
Someone\'s popped in - he\'s only got one word to say, well, a repetition of one word, and that\'s....... glug! Wonder who that guy could be?! lol.
November 25th, 2025 03:42
orchidee said:
Someone\'s popped in - he\'s only got one word to say, well, a repetition of one word, and that\'s....... glug! Wonder who that guy could be?! lol.
November 25th, 2025 03:42
The Burning Lye
arqios said:
I remember as a young teen learning the word desensitization and how it had applied to the scouring away of a person\'s insides, numbing them to what surrounds; the music and drink became louder and stronger furthering the distance and the reach. These days everything seems bubble-wrapped. But that\'s just me off on a tangent.
November 24th, 2025 23:27
arqios said:
I remember as a young teen learning the word desensitization and how it had applied to the scouring away of a person\'s insides, numbing them to what surrounds; the music and drink became louder and stronger furthering the distance and the reach. These days everything seems bubble-wrapped. But that\'s just me off on a tangent.
November 24th, 2025 23:27
The Burning Lye
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lye or lie this works out the same. We used to use lye soap and it worked pretty well I guess that\'s why they used to wash the mouth out with lye soap when one lied. Good write Tristan
November 24th, 2025 15:38
sorenbarrett said:
Whether lye or lie this works out the same. We used to use lye soap and it worked pretty well I guess that\'s why they used to wash the mouth out with lye soap when one lied. Good write Tristan
November 24th, 2025 15:38
The Burning Lye
orchidee said:
Now, Popeye, don\'t lie (not lye!) about that. Lie about what, he asks. Erm, don\'t answer that P. lol. Dang it if he ain\'t crept in again.
And since when was I insightful, as in some others comments? It\'s that pesky P distracts us from anything sensible. Glug-glug!
November 24th, 2025 12:24
orchidee said:
Now, Popeye, don\'t lie (not lye!) about that. Lie about what, he asks. Erm, don\'t answer that P. lol. Dang it if he ain\'t crept in again.
And since when was I insightful, as in some others comments? It\'s that pesky P distracts us from anything sensible. Glug-glug!
November 24th, 2025 12:24
Burned for a Better God
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t step off religion\'s straight line, or the wrath of god will hit you with all his might.
One man\'s interpretation is another man\'s folly.
I suppose through time people have taken a bit of Jesus, added their own mix and preached it.
Both betrayed mind you by the people by their side, which is always telling.
November 24th, 2025 09:06
Paul Bell said:
Don\'t step off religion\'s straight line, or the wrath of god will hit you with all his might.
One man\'s interpretation is another man\'s folly.
I suppose through time people have taken a bit of Jesus, added their own mix and preached it.
Both betrayed mind you by the people by their side, which is always telling.
November 24th, 2025 09:06
The Burning Lye
Friendship said:
Your poem. revolves around the experience of being dejected and feeling worthless, often likened to a performative aspect of life where one is cast aside after serving a purpose. The imagery of lye and burns suggests pain and suffering, but the closing lines emphasize a refusal to accept a disposable identity.
November 24th, 2025 09:03
Friendship said:
Your poem. revolves around the experience of being dejected and feeling worthless, often likened to a performative aspect of life where one is cast aside after serving a purpose. The imagery of lye and burns suggests pain and suffering, but the closing lines emphasize a refusal to accept a disposable identity.
November 24th, 2025 09:03
Burned for a Better God
NinjaGirl said:
This is really interesting! I like the \"codified in tulips\" bit especially!
November 23rd, 2025 18:59
NinjaGirl said:
This is really interesting! I like the \"codified in tulips\" bit especially!
November 23rd, 2025 18:59
Burned for a Better God
Bella Shepard said:
You have not only penned a remarkable poem, but shed light upon an historical figure I was not aware of. In googling Arminius I found a theological system that resonates in a very profound way. Jesus brought unconditional love and acceptance of everyone into this world, something that should be so easy for us to understand, and yet we are stifled all too often by rigidity and convention. This is a wonderful reflection for this Sunday morning. Thank You!
November 23rd, 2025 10:52
Bella Shepard said:
You have not only penned a remarkable poem, but shed light upon an historical figure I was not aware of. In googling Arminius I found a theological system that resonates in a very profound way. Jesus brought unconditional love and acceptance of everyone into this world, something that should be so easy for us to understand, and yet we are stifled all too often by rigidity and convention. This is a wonderful reflection for this Sunday morning. Thank You!
November 23rd, 2025 10:52
Burned for a Better God
sorenbarrett said:
Rigidity has always been a problem. A poem of tolerance to stretch visions of possibilities only to be bit by the hand it tried to help. Well written Tristan
November 23rd, 2025 10:42
sorenbarrett said:
Rigidity has always been a problem. A poem of tolerance to stretch visions of possibilities only to be bit by the hand it tried to help. Well written Tristan
November 23rd, 2025 10:42
Burned for a Better God
orchidee said:
These Sundays are too hot for a certain glugging guy - he keeps getting scorched! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 10:24
orchidee said:
These Sundays are too hot for a certain glugging guy - he keeps getting scorched! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 10:24
you know what to paint it
orchidee said:
Oh no! A certain glugging guy has popped in again to one of your recent poems. He knows what to paint. What is it? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 03:26
orchidee said:
Oh no! A certain glugging guy has popped in again to one of your recent poems. He knows what to paint. What is it? Don\'t answer that! lol.
November 23rd, 2025 03:26
Succubus Affixation
Friendship said:
Your poem explores feelings of despair, isolation, and the futility of love in a world that appears devoid of truth and genuine connection. The speaker grapples with the notion that not only have they been abandoned in their struggles but also that love itself has become a source of lamentation.
November 21st, 2025 16:08
Friendship said:
Your poem explores feelings of despair, isolation, and the futility of love in a world that appears devoid of truth and genuine connection. The speaker grapples with the notion that not only have they been abandoned in their struggles but also that love itself has become a source of lamentation.
November 21st, 2025 16:08
Succubus Affixation
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes the crown here. A poem of darker issues where one is sucked dry of courage and love. The one portion reminded me of V for vendeta with all the v\'s being used. Well done my friend
November 21st, 2025 14:22
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration takes the crown here. A poem of darker issues where one is sucked dry of courage and love. The one portion reminded me of V for vendeta with all the v\'s being used. Well done my friend
November 21st, 2025 14:22
Succubus Affixation
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. Congrats, my friend.
November 21st, 2025 14:12
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant work. Congrats, my friend.
November 21st, 2025 14:12
Succubus Affixation
orchidee said:
Apology - if needed - that I don\'t tend to write on \'dark\' themes. Erm, I tried writing in the dark, but couldn\'t see a thing! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:32
orchidee said:
Apology - if needed - that I don\'t tend to write on \'dark\' themes. Erm, I tried writing in the dark, but couldn\'t see a thing! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:32
Succubus Affixation
orchidee said:
Ohhh, doh! Ol\' Popeye\' not interested in succubuses - or succubi (plural?)! He\'s too busy........ don\'t finish that! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:30
orchidee said:
Ohhh, doh! Ol\' Popeye\' not interested in succubuses - or succubi (plural?)! He\'s too busy........ don\'t finish that! lol.
November 21st, 2025 10:30
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