Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Great Delaware
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co cannot form such erudite comments - they\'re busy with spinach and stuff! But what stuff, WCAT!! Good write T.
July 28th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co cannot form such erudite comments - they\'re busy with spinach and stuff! But what stuff, WCAT!! Good write T.
July 28th, 2026 09:57
The Great Delaware
sorenbarrett said:
A sacrifical rite in this poem to atone and make right. It is the epitome of associational magic where synchronicity not causality becomes the method. Well written Tristan your formatting draws attention to the actions. Well done
July 28th, 2026 09:35
sorenbarrett said:
A sacrifical rite in this poem to atone and make right. It is the epitome of associational magic where synchronicity not causality becomes the method. Well written Tristan your formatting draws attention to the actions. Well done
July 28th, 2026 09:35
The Great Delaware
Friendship said:
Your words are so powerful. Your poem delves into the complexity of human morality, the consequences of neglecting ethical standards, and the desire for justice amidst chaos. It juxtaposes moments of urgency (halt, stall, blast off) with the weight of moral failures, suggesting an urgent need for introspection and accountability. So much pain, my friend.🙏
July 28th, 2026 09:11
Friendship said:
Your words are so powerful. Your poem delves into the complexity of human morality, the consequences of neglecting ethical standards, and the desire for justice amidst chaos. It juxtaposes moments of urgency (halt, stall, blast off) with the weight of moral failures, suggesting an urgent need for introspection and accountability. So much pain, my friend.🙏
July 28th, 2026 09:11
wood you?
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
wood you?
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
wood you?
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
wood you?
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope you’re doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope you’re doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Marooned
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Frisbee Golf
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
Frisbee Golf
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🤣
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Frisbee Golf
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
Frisbee Golf
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Frisbee Golf
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
Frisbee Golf
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
There’s a raw compassion here—a reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
There’s a raw compassion here—a reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Frisbee Golf
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Frisbee Golf
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
Marooned
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🌹🏴⚫🖤
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro 🐈⬛🐈⬛🐈⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🐦⬛🌹🏴⚫🖤
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Marooned
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
Marooned
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway 💜
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway 💜
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Marooned
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
Marooned
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
come again?
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! 🤣
July 25th, 2026 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! 🤣
July 25th, 2026 00:50
come again?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
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