Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
method actors
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
The fear of becoming that which one has destroyed - a hand-me-down from one greater, all be it, ill fitting. A short, sharp, shock hit of poetic brilliance, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 18:32
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
The fear of becoming that which one has destroyed - a hand-me-down from one greater, all be it, ill fitting. A short, sharp, shock hit of poetic brilliance, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 18:32
the alternative iii
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
One of the many great \'ifs\' of history. Speaking as an Irishman, I would have very little time for this king. My \'if\' would be; if he was never a king. LOL
Wishing you fine health and happiness,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 17:44
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
One of the many great \'ifs\' of history. Speaking as an Irishman, I would have very little time for this king. My \'if\' would be; if he was never a king. LOL
Wishing you fine health and happiness,
Tony.
November 4th, 2026 17:44
method actors
soheil khodaparasti said:
A sharp, thought-provoking poem that explores the dynamics of power, exclusion, and the fear of those who challenge established positions.
November 4th, 2026 15:00
soheil khodaparasti said:
A sharp, thought-provoking poem that explores the dynamics of power, exclusion, and the fear of those who challenge established positions.
November 4th, 2026 15:00
Masculation Strangulation
NafisaSB said:
A good satirical write exposing a lot of hollow assumptions đź‘Ť
November 4th, 2026 09:30
NafisaSB said:
A good satirical write exposing a lot of hollow assumptions đź‘Ť
November 4th, 2026 09:30
method actors
Lorenz said:
\'\" Unscanned phobia \'\' The topic sounds very impressing and inspiring !
November 4th, 2026 08:20
Lorenz said:
\'\" Unscanned phobia \'\' The topic sounds very impressing and inspiring !
November 4th, 2026 08:20
method actors
arqios said:
Such is life! Honestly, most of it passes over my head. 👍🏻🕊️
November 4th, 2026 07:17
arqios said:
Such is life! Honestly, most of it passes over my head. 👍🏻🕊️
November 4th, 2026 07:17
method actors
sorenbarrett said:
It is the intricate rhyme woven with such succinct wording that gets the fave on this one my friend. It is cleverly done and poses a pertinent question as well.
November 4th, 2026 07:08
sorenbarrett said:
It is the intricate rhyme woven with such succinct wording that gets the fave on this one my friend. It is cleverly done and poses a pertinent question as well.
November 4th, 2026 07:08
the alternative iii
Lorenz said:
The time machiner will only encounter alternative historical realities.So ,you won\'t be able to kill your great grand father .
A fascinating topic to explore !
November 4th, 2026 03:48
Lorenz said:
The time machiner will only encounter alternative historical realities.So ,you won\'t be able to kill your great grand father .
A fascinating topic to explore !
November 4th, 2026 03:48
the alternative iii
arqios said:
An alternative to the burbling George III of Miranda’s “Hamilton”
November 3rd, 2026 19:44
arqios said:
An alternative to the burbling George III of Miranda’s “Hamilton”
November 3rd, 2026 19:44
the alternative iii
Kevin Hulme said:
Make you think. Alternative History is always Fascinating.
November 3rd, 2026 19:28
Kevin Hulme said:
Make you think. Alternative History is always Fascinating.
November 3rd, 2026 19:28
the alternative iii
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I advocate for History as a key to the current state of any of the world’s many problems, this is a topic about which I am abysmally ignorant in any depth; my deficiency, my apologies, Tristan. Awakening curiosity.
November 3rd, 2026 16:02
Doggerel Dave said:
Although I advocate for History as a key to the current state of any of the world’s many problems, this is a topic about which I am abysmally ignorant in any depth; my deficiency, my apologies, Tristan. Awakening curiosity.
November 3rd, 2026 16:02
the alternative iii
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most aptly put my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Most aptly put my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:35
the alternative iii
sorenbarrett said:
Emancipation from before the emancipation declaration, freedom from before a civil war, equality before the eighteenth amendment. A beautiful gesture that made little difference from a power too far to have effect. Well done my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Emancipation from before the emancipation declaration, freedom from before a civil war, equality before the eighteenth amendment. A beautiful gesture that made little difference from a power too far to have effect. Well done my friend
November 3rd, 2026 09:28
4th coming
Thomas W Case said:
There’s an unsettling, apocalyptic urgency here, with the fractured spelling and broken spacing making the language itself seem to buckle under the weight of what’s approaching, while the speaker accuses us of celebrating our own undoing. “failure freighting— / barreling—2ward us” is the keeper for me, because it turns failure into something heavy and unstoppable, a freight train gathering speed while everyone carries on looking the other way.
November 3rd, 2026 07:36
Thomas W Case said:
There’s an unsettling, apocalyptic urgency here, with the fractured spelling and broken spacing making the language itself seem to buckle under the weight of what’s approaching, while the speaker accuses us of celebrating our own undoing. “failure freighting— / barreling—2ward us” is the keeper for me, because it turns failure into something heavy and unstoppable, a freight train gathering speed while everyone carries on looking the other way.
November 3rd, 2026 07:36
4th coming
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
When Artificial Intelligence will be voting for the next robotic world leader - barreling 2ward us, indeed. What kind of finger will be on the red button? A sharp shot verse and on target. Well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 17:22
Tony Grannell said:
Greetings, Tristan,
When Artificial Intelligence will be voting for the next robotic world leader - barreling 2ward us, indeed. What kind of finger will be on the red button? A sharp shot verse and on target. Well said, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 2nd, 2026 17:22
4th coming
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all imploding in the Whitehouse.
The Democrats have got their tails up, all is looking good.
The only ones hoping Trump does well is Iran, cos they know they\'re getting hammered if the mid terms go belly up.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
Paul Bell said:
It\'s all imploding in the Whitehouse.
The Democrats have got their tails up, all is looking good.
The only ones hoping Trump does well is Iran, cos they know they\'re getting hammered if the mid terms go belly up.
November 2nd, 2026 14:03
4th coming
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Very creative here!!!! Sounds like a lot of what’s going on in the world. Politics. And all.
November 2nd, 2026 13:42
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Very creative here!!!! Sounds like a lot of what’s going on in the world. Politics. And all.
November 2nd, 2026 13:42
4th coming
sorenbarrett said:
Creative use of initialism as a touch in this piece my friend the message is powerful to open one\'s eyes to what is coming. Well done Tristan
November 2nd, 2026 09:56
sorenbarrett said:
Creative use of initialism as a touch in this piece my friend the message is powerful to open one\'s eyes to what is coming. Well done Tristan
November 2nd, 2026 09:56
A Little Mad
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements everywhere, Tristan. Ignore the pea brains, unless violence is involved...
November 1st, 2026 22:38
Doggerel Dave said:
Judgements everywhere, Tristan. Ignore the pea brains, unless violence is involved...
November 1st, 2026 22:38
A Little Mad
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Intolerance\' I think is the Word here. Well Said.
November 1st, 2026 15:22
Kevin Hulme said:
\'Intolerance\' I think is the Word here. Well Said.
November 1st, 2026 15:22
A Little Mad
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the, John Candy documentary, I Like Me. How he was encouraged, threatened even to keep his weight as this was a part of his comedic and acting persona as perceived by the public, where as in fact, he was a wonderful actor/ comedian, be he overweight or not. A very fine poem, indeed, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 13:11
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
This poem reminds me of the, John Candy documentary, I Like Me. How he was encouraged, threatened even to keep his weight as this was a part of his comedic and acting persona as perceived by the public, where as in fact, he was a wonderful actor/ comedian, be he overweight or not. A very fine poem, indeed, my friend.
Fond regards,
Tony.
November 1st, 2026 13:11
A Little Mad
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem aims to challenge readers to reconsider their judgments and embrace a more loving and accepting attitude towards others, highlighting the sacred worth of every individual, regardless of societal labels. That\'s why you like me, cause lam me.🤣❤️🌹
November 1st, 2026 12:56
Friendship said:
A powerful poem. Your poem aims to challenge readers to reconsider their judgments and embrace a more loving and accepting attitude towards others, highlighting the sacred worth of every individual, regardless of societal labels. That\'s why you like me, cause lam me.🤣❤️🌹
November 1st, 2026 12:56
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