Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Passion\'s Paradox
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
sorenbarrett said:
This one turned from night\'s day to day\'s night. Bright and seductive to dark and destructive. A poem of opposites and duality yet more it speaks to two types of sex that of love and only self love giving and taking, the sharing and the selfish. A strong and powerful work.
January 17th, 2025 12:53
Passion\'s Paradox
LP2187 said:
I probably shouldn\'t read this as it\'s 18+ but it was too striking to ignore. A haunting and powerful poem, nice read.
January 17th, 2025 12:17
LP2187 said:
I probably shouldn\'t read this as it\'s 18+ but it was too striking to ignore. A haunting and powerful poem, nice read.
January 17th, 2025 12:17
Passion\'s Paradox
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
Is \'revelatory cascade\' a phrase one hears every day? As in \'There\'s a sentence/phrase/proverb/etc one doesn\'t hear every day\'. lol.
January 17th, 2025 10:40
Passion\'s Paradox
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
Neville said:
My word sir T you really are on good form lately .. and I am full of respect for you & your muse for daring to go where few have dared to go before .. Dark erotica is something I must explore further .. Neville
January 17th, 2025 09:24
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
Neville said:
Jeez mate, even the form n the meter had me bricking myself .. You also made me think back on when as kids we used to dare each other to enter old dead Betsy Drury\'s cottage hidden deep in the woods and where even on the brightest of days no one ever lingered for more than a few seconds ..
I would be very proud if I had poemed this one Tristan & no kidding .. Neville 👍😎👍
January 17th, 2025 04:10
The House at Demon\'s Alley
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😳
What a creepy and
scary good write!! 💯👍
I\'ll be dreaming \'bout those
buzzing yellow jackets tonight!! 😱
Awesome job with that form!!!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 16th, 2025 19:18
The House at Demon\'s Alley
LP2187 said:
The horror of an adventure goes wrong... A really effective poem which was so compelling and unsettling, I enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2025 14:42
LP2187 said:
The horror of an adventure goes wrong... A really effective poem which was so compelling and unsettling, I enjoyed the read! Thanks for sharing!
January 16th, 2025 14:42
The House at Demon\'s Alley
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
orchidee said:
Ooh yes, book a holiday for the mother-in-law to go there! heehee.
January 16th, 2025 11:45
The House at Demon\'s Alley
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds so much like a story that kids would tell and the fear they would try to put into other kids. When I was small there was an abandoned house in a field and we used to go there break in and invent stories like this. A fun read
January 16th, 2025 10:15
The Sound of Rain
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
Cassie58 said:
Beautifully penned. The imagery is top notch and I travelled in thought flight to Highgate Cemetery. Much enjoyed Tristen.
January 16th, 2025 01:22
The Sound of Rain
Thad Wilk said:
A very powerful
and poignant poem
of this graveyard of tears.. 😢
Hauntingly vivid imagery,
a superb read indeed!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 15th, 2025 23:06
Thad Wilk said:
A very powerful
and poignant poem
of this graveyard of tears.. 😢
Hauntingly vivid imagery,
a superb read indeed!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 15th, 2025 23:06
The Sound of Rain
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! C.S. Lewis\' white witch Jaedis has been passing through, leaving a veritable graveyard in her cold wake, no Dirgory nor his companion Polly able to break the spell, Tumnus and Lucy but characters in a story since neglected, despite the awful stickiness of--. Which is why we knew twas so. Eloquently rendered with heartbreaking poignancy and exquisite imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:10
Cheeky Missy said:
Aha! C.S. Lewis\' white witch Jaedis has been passing through, leaving a veritable graveyard in her cold wake, no Dirgory nor his companion Polly able to break the spell, Tumnus and Lucy but characters in a story since neglected, despite the awful stickiness of--. Which is why we knew twas so. Eloquently rendered with heartbreaking poignancy and exquisite imagery, thank you for sharing.
January 15th, 2025 14:10
The Sound of Rain
sorenbarrett said:
Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention of it. Nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
Death\'s sorrow reflected in this poem full of images of it but no mention of it. Nicely done
January 15th, 2025 10:25
The Sound of Rain
arqios said:
It’s almost like I am there! Visited the graveyard in the rain as well as attended an interment also in the rain and once in the snow. But it could also be the features of a graveyard statue in a downpour. Very visually potent. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 15th, 2025 07:43
arqios said:
It’s almost like I am there! Visited the graveyard in the rain as well as attended an interment also in the rain and once in the snow. But it could also be the features of a graveyard statue in a downpour. Very visually potent. 🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 15th, 2025 07:43
Closed Open in Bloom
Dan Williams said:
Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
January 15th, 2025 02:03
Dan Williams said:
Stylish, evocative. Rated PG? Nice work.
January 15th, 2025 02:03
Closed Open in Bloom
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem love
the form;
the rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 🤩
A very touching piece
thanks for sharing I
just loved it so!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:53
Thad Wilk said:
A great poem love
the form;
the rhyme, rhythm and flow!! 🤩
A very touching piece
thanks for sharing I
just loved it so!😍
Best regards ✌️ peace Thad
January 14th, 2025 20:53
Closed Open in Bloom
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I\'ve thought of that angle when tending a huge flower garden years ago and watching those almost exotic ladies offer themselves. How superbly handled and with such ease to boot! My la! I so love this pretty number! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a passionate poignancy, thank you so much for sharing!
January 14th, 2025 16:13
Cheeky Missy said:
Whoa! I\'ve thought of that angle when tending a huge flower garden years ago and watching those almost exotic ladies offer themselves. How superbly handled and with such ease to boot! My la! I so love this pretty number! Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a passionate poignancy, thank you so much for sharing!
January 14th, 2025 16:13
Closed Open in Bloom
LP2187 said:
A really evocative poem of love as well as loss, I enjoyed the read!
January 14th, 2025 15:26
LP2187 said:
A really evocative poem of love as well as loss, I enjoyed the read!
January 14th, 2025 15:26
crested
Cassie58 said:
Funny. The timing wasn’t very convenient though. Lovely sunrise, I wonder if doggie noticed Tristen lol.
January 14th, 2025 13:21
Cassie58 said:
Funny. The timing wasn’t very convenient though. Lovely sunrise, I wonder if doggie noticed Tristen lol.
January 14th, 2025 13:21
Closed Open in Bloom
Cassie58 said:
Very sensual Tristen. The flower metaphor works very well. Who would have thought that the parts of a flower could be so sexy. Hot fiery love of youth before a cool breeze set in over time. Very well composed.
January 14th, 2025 13:01
Cassie58 said:
Very sensual Tristen. The flower metaphor works very well. Who would have thought that the parts of a flower could be so sexy. Hot fiery love of youth before a cool breeze set in over time. Very well composed.
January 14th, 2025 13:01
Closed Open in Bloom
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d have never given a thought to write sexually about flowers 😂😂😂 Very creative write!
January 14th, 2025 12:57
NinjaGirl said:
I\'d have never given a thought to write sexually about flowers 😂😂😂 Very creative write!
January 14th, 2025 12:57
Closed Open in Bloom
aDarkerMind said:
a talent indeed Tristan.
Bravo my friend.
outstanding poetry!
January 14th, 2025 10:24
aDarkerMind said:
a talent indeed Tristan.
Bravo my friend.
outstanding poetry!
January 14th, 2025 10:24
Closed Open in Bloom
arqios said:
Who knew that flower anatomy could deliver in such manner! We were just bantering in our friend group the other day about anthers and sepals, etc. As you can tell this has been thoroughly enjoyed. 🌷🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 09:16
arqios said:
Who knew that flower anatomy could deliver in such manner! We were just bantering in our friend group the other day about anthers and sepals, etc. As you can tell this has been thoroughly enjoyed. 🌷🙏🏻🕊👍🏻
January 14th, 2025 09:16
Closed Open in Bloom
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensual and errotic poem about flowers. The metaphor is strong and this well could be a song although it might be banned for its botanical sexual content. Loved the perfume of this poem
January 14th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
A most sensual and errotic poem about flowers. The metaphor is strong and this well could be a song although it might be banned for its botanical sexual content. Loved the perfume of this poem
January 14th, 2025 09:07
crested
Thad Wilk said:
Haahaahaaaaa! 🤣
Hilarious haiku!!!
I spilt my beer 🍺
reading it thank you!! 😁
Thanks fur the
laughs and chuckles!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 13th, 2025 23:24
Thad Wilk said:
Haahaahaaaaa! 🤣
Hilarious haiku!!!
I spilt my beer 🍺
reading it thank you!! 😁
Thanks fur the
laughs and chuckles!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 13th, 2025 23:24
crested
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but what a charming image with the pretty little senryu! The pictures coincide beautifully. Lovely! Rendered to effect with fitting imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
January 13th, 2025 21:26
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh, but what a charming image with the pretty little senryu! The pictures coincide beautifully. Lovely! Rendered to effect with fitting imagery and a teasing poignancy, thank you very much for sharing.
January 13th, 2025 21:26
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