Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the fading
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At the fading of the day will the morn on the morrow greet me once more, \'till then the fear. Such a wonderfully composed poem, succinct and yet august. Excellent!
Fond regards,
Tony.
September 30th, 2026 16:24
the fading
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
Teddy.15 said:
That famous line! Whether it\'s that that we don\'t cross or the thin one What a wonderful. A provocative creation you have 🌹 Wonderful dear Tristan.
September 30th, 2026 10:04
the fading
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
orchidee said:
Ain\'t nothing fading about certain spinach guzzling, knitting, and sabre wielding! Why not? WCAT!
September 30th, 2026 09:57
the fading
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
Paul Bell said:
OMG, not the computer.
If it dies, I die too.
Do people get buried with their computers these days. Is that allowed.
September 30th, 2026 09:23
the fading
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
sorenbarrett said:
Such fear of death and the desperate clinging to life emphasized by this write. Well done Tristan
September 30th, 2026 08:12
anyway
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
Mutley Ravishes said:
Self-doubt? Anyways, if it\'s true no one ever celebrates with \"you,\" doesn\'t that also mean that no one ever truly celebrates with anyone ?!
September 29th, 2026 18:40
anyway
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
When celebrated, lionized even, if one suffers from a lack of self confidence no applause can totally be accepted, there must be some mistake, some lie, white or otherwise creeping about. An intriguing passage, cleverly composed with your own stamp of uniqueness. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:28
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
When celebrated, lionized even, if one suffers from a lack of self confidence no applause can totally be accepted, there must be some mistake, some lie, white or otherwise creeping about. An intriguing passage, cleverly composed with your own stamp of uniqueness. Well done indeed.
Wishing you much happiness,
Tony.
September 29th, 2026 15:28
anyway
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. Welcome to reality. [Frankly, methinks I still prefer the oldie: https://youtu.be/yXoiRi6RP_k?is=b9zYen0utldPcbSV] You now make me wonder whether that is simply the predicament of--? I dunno. Beautifully rendered with a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 29th, 2026 13:32
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww. Welcome to reality. [Frankly, methinks I still prefer the oldie: https://youtu.be/yXoiRi6RP_k?is=b9zYen0utldPcbSV] You now make me wonder whether that is simply the predicament of--? I dunno. Beautifully rendered with a winsome poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
September 29th, 2026 13:32
anyway
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning word cry escalates the emotion of this piece and depending on how you read it means there is at least one that cheers one on or alone and the cheer comes only from oneself. Or it is a tearful cry that one is alone. Sad it seems.
September 29th, 2026 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
The beginning word cry escalates the emotion of this piece and depending on how you read it means there is at least one that cheers one on or alone and the cheer comes only from oneself. Or it is a tearful cry that one is alone. Sad it seems.
September 29th, 2026 10:18
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Corruption is always ptotected
September 28th, 2026 18:34
GenXer Sharon 🙏🍀 said:
Corruption is always ptotected
September 28th, 2026 18:34
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
Friendship said:
Well-written story. Your story revolves around themes of betrayal, revenge, and the complexities of morality. The narrator, who has been wronged and abused, navigates through feelings of anger and empowerment as they confront a figure who has caused them harm. Yet the story delves into the darker sides of human relationships, especially betrayal and manipulation within a corrupt system, while also exploring the struggle for identity and agency in a world full of deceit.
September 28th, 2026 13:07
Friendship said:
Well-written story. Your story revolves around themes of betrayal, revenge, and the complexities of morality. The narrator, who has been wronged and abused, navigates through feelings of anger and empowerment as they confront a figure who has caused them harm. Yet the story delves into the darker sides of human relationships, especially betrayal and manipulation within a corrupt system, while also exploring the struggle for identity and agency in a world full of deceit.
September 28th, 2026 13:07
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
Paul Bell said:
If only they did get killed in the end, it would be fitting.
Sadly they all seem to live forever, always protected by the same people as themselves.
Power, always the ultimate orgasm.
September 28th, 2026 09:53
Paul Bell said:
If only they did get killed in the end, it would be fitting.
Sadly they all seem to live forever, always protected by the same people as themselves.
Power, always the ultimate orgasm.
September 28th, 2026 09:53
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
orchidee said:
Ahh, indirect reference(s) to a Mr Hunt here? Popeye may be in it too somewhere. lol.
September 28th, 2026 09:44
orchidee said:
Ahh, indirect reference(s) to a Mr Hunt here? Popeye may be in it too somewhere. lol.
September 28th, 2026 09:44
Jah\'s Eyes
Teddy.15 said:
Two lines that are truly magnificent
Only innocence will
Die conscience free
Kuuudos! Powerful as hell itself. 🌹
September 28th, 2026 07:29
Teddy.15 said:
Two lines that are truly magnificent
Only innocence will
Die conscience free
Kuuudos! Powerful as hell itself. 🌹
September 28th, 2026 07:29
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
sorenbarrett said:
Sex a primary force in the hands of power, rape legitimized by force of the law. Might makes right a rule of nature to be overthrown by the revolution of entropy a greater force still. Age takes all in the end. Sex and abuse fall by the wayside to be swept away by time in its forgetfulness. Well written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:29
sorenbarrett said:
Sex a primary force in the hands of power, rape legitimized by force of the law. Might makes right a rule of nature to be overthrown by the revolution of entropy a greater force still. Age takes all in the end. Sex and abuse fall by the wayside to be swept away by time in its forgetfulness. Well written my friend
September 28th, 2026 06:29
Devilishly Dreadful: Saint Sorebones
arqios said:
Us invisibles are disposable outside of our usefulness to those sat in power and those rising above us.
September 28th, 2026 06:03
arqios said:
Us invisibles are disposable outside of our usefulness to those sat in power and those rising above us.
September 28th, 2026 06:03
Jah\'s Eyes
Neville said:
Very catchy .. like an addiction but more clever and packs an almighty but obscenic kidney punch before the encore .. Neville 🖤🖤🏴⚫👍
September 28th, 2026 01:58
Neville said:
Very catchy .. like an addiction but more clever and packs an almighty but obscenic kidney punch before the encore .. Neville 🖤🖤🏴⚫👍
September 28th, 2026 01:58
Jah\'s Eyes
soheil khodaparasti said:
Provocative and layered, with imagery that feels deliberately ambiguous—part critique, part cultural confrontation, leaving room for different readings of faith, race, and identity.
September 27th, 2026 13:15
soheil khodaparasti said:
Provocative and layered, with imagery that feels deliberately ambiguous—part critique, part cultural confrontation, leaving room for different readings of faith, race, and identity.
September 27th, 2026 13:15
Jah\'s Eyes
sorenbarrett said:
True God does not reside in race, gender, or species. God has no religion speaks all tongues and does not judge. A lovely write my friend that makes its point musically as does nature in its own way. Harmonics a key to love.
September 27th, 2026 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
True God does not reside in race, gender, or species. God has no religion speaks all tongues and does not judge. A lovely write my friend that makes its point musically as does nature in its own way. Harmonics a key to love.
September 27th, 2026 08:07
Jah\'s Eyes
arqios said:
Intense. Everyone expresses their faith in diverse manners and language. I admit to not understanding some of them but that doesn\'t mean that their faith is demeaned. YHWH\'s eyes see all and knows all!
September 27th, 2026 07:06
arqios said:
Intense. Everyone expresses their faith in diverse manners and language. I admit to not understanding some of them but that doesn\'t mean that their faith is demeaned. YHWH\'s eyes see all and knows all!
September 27th, 2026 07:06
Jah\'s Eyes
Paul Bell said:
Have you just invented a new word, Religiopiod.
The two Js, junkies and jesus, both bled, but only one came back to life.
Like the jah eyes reference, sure god liked a bit of reggie.
September 27th, 2026 06:50
Paul Bell said:
Have you just invented a new word, Religiopiod.
The two Js, junkies and jesus, both bled, but only one came back to life.
Like the jah eyes reference, sure god liked a bit of reggie.
September 27th, 2026 06:50
Jah\'s Eyes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short sweet but powerful my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:40
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
short sweet but powerful my friend
September 27th, 2026 06:40
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