Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Fire, This Time
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic my friend I have for a long time proclaimed that church is the devils house that the true meaning is within each person\'s house of flesh. From prehistory to today churches exist for money and the imposition of hatred toward others that believe differently. Not, Buddha, Krishna, Christ, Mohamud, Lao Tzu established a church.
June 21st, 2026 08:36
sorenbarrett said:
A great acrostic my friend I have for a long time proclaimed that church is the devils house that the true meaning is within each person\'s house of flesh. From prehistory to today churches exist for money and the imposition of hatred toward others that believe differently. Not, Buddha, Krishna, Christ, Mohamud, Lao Tzu established a church.
June 21st, 2026 08:36
The Fire, This Time
Thomas W Case said:
Hard lines, brother—Christ walking you out of the building while the sellers lock the doors behind Him.
There’s fire in this, the kind that don’t wait for Sunday or permission.
You cut clean through the varnish—truth ain’t the problem, it’s who’s pricing it.
That last line don’t warn—it declares; the blaze already licking at the rafters.
June 21st, 2026 08:09
Thomas W Case said:
Hard lines, brother—Christ walking you out of the building while the sellers lock the doors behind Him.
There’s fire in this, the kind that don’t wait for Sunday or permission.
You cut clean through the varnish—truth ain’t the problem, it’s who’s pricing it.
That last line don’t warn—it declares; the blaze already licking at the rafters.
June 21st, 2026 08:09
The Fire, This Time
orchidee said:
Sitting around the fire with spinach soup to warm us, prepared by a glugger! lol. How come he always sneaks in? lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:06
orchidee said:
Sitting around the fire with spinach soup to warm us, prepared by a glugger! lol. How come he always sneaks in? lol.
June 21st, 2026 08:06
The Fire, This Time
arqios said:
This is happening all over the globe. And the establishment is grasping for control and the heavy foot of authority is shaking the ground.
June 21st, 2026 08:01
arqios said:
This is happening all over the globe. And the establishment is grasping for control and the heavy foot of authority is shaking the ground.
June 21st, 2026 08:01
The Fire, This Time
Paul Bell said:
Yes, blind faith is the way to go.
Never argue with the man above when heaven awaits you.
Now, if you just pop a large cheque into my hand, I\'ll prepare your comfy cloud.
June 21st, 2026 07:29
Paul Bell said:
Yes, blind faith is the way to go.
Never argue with the man above when heaven awaits you.
Now, if you just pop a large cheque into my hand, I\'ll prepare your comfy cloud.
June 21st, 2026 07:29
who ordered the milk?
arqios said:
I found myself more drawn to the sound and momentum of the language than to any single interpretation. The contrast between words like \"formaldehyde\" and \"copacetic copulation\" creates a strange, almost dreamlike atmosphere, and the ending gave it a darkly humorous touch.
June 21st, 2026 05:49
arqios said:
I found myself more drawn to the sound and momentum of the language than to any single interpretation. The contrast between words like \"formaldehyde\" and \"copacetic copulation\" creates a strange, almost dreamlike atmosphere, and the ending gave it a darkly humorous touch.
June 21st, 2026 05:49
who ordered the milk?
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
orchidee said:
Dunno who ordered the milk but we know who ordered the spinach. It can only be one person. lol.
June 20th, 2026 11:13
who ordered the milk?
sorenbarrett said:
If anyone has gum I hope it is enough for everyone. Don\'t drink milk anymore only heavy cream and loads of butter. As for formaldehyde they put enough of that in the food to preserve any corpse for a lifetime. Maybe it will keep the sexual experience long enough to not be premature ejaculation. My mind is wandering again. Good write my friend
June 20th, 2026 09:03
sorenbarrett said:
If anyone has gum I hope it is enough for everyone. Don\'t drink milk anymore only heavy cream and loads of butter. As for formaldehyde they put enough of that in the food to preserve any corpse for a lifetime. Maybe it will keep the sexual experience long enough to not be premature ejaculation. My mind is wandering again. Good write my friend
June 20th, 2026 09:03
who ordered the milk?
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of intimacy, chaos, and the absurdity of existence, juxtaposing mundane elements of life with darker undertones. The imagery and references suggest a commentary on human relationships and societal norms, hinting at both pleasure and discomfort in the act of connection.
June 20th, 2026 08:05
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores themes of intimacy, chaos, and the absurdity of existence, juxtaposing mundane elements of life with darker undertones. The imagery and references suggest a commentary on human relationships and societal norms, hinting at both pleasure and discomfort in the act of connection.
June 20th, 2026 08:05
woke to the broke
cellinic said:
A wonderful write, historically based, yet with some hidden humour, like in the wording\" silly crocodiles\", best wishes and a fave, my dear friend
June 20th, 2026 03:10
cellinic said:
A wonderful write, historically based, yet with some hidden humour, like in the wording\" silly crocodiles\", best wishes and a fave, my dear friend
June 20th, 2026 03:10
woke to the broke
Teddy.15 said:
I got the colour purple vibes in this. Powerful and brilliant. 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:57
Teddy.15 said:
I got the colour purple vibes in this. Powerful and brilliant. 🌹
June 19th, 2026 23:57
woke to the broke
arqios said:
Just because it\'s on paper don\'t guarantee execution/espousing of intent. A nod to this excellent poetic sigh. Well, I sigh, this is more of a potent expression!
June 19th, 2026 21:00
arqios said:
Just because it\'s on paper don\'t guarantee execution/espousing of intent. A nod to this excellent poetic sigh. Well, I sigh, this is more of a potent expression!
June 19th, 2026 21:00
woke to the broke
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Write. A lot of suffering still goes on .
June 19th, 2026 18:46
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Write. A lot of suffering still goes on .
June 19th, 2026 18:46
woke to the broke
sorenbarrett said:
Lincoln got the credit but he was not the author but had his arm twisted into signing earlier than he intended by Cassius Clay the namesake for the boxer. A good write my friend.
June 19th, 2026 09:39
sorenbarrett said:
Lincoln got the credit but he was not the author but had his arm twisted into signing earlier than he intended by Cassius Clay the namesake for the boxer. A good write my friend.
June 19th, 2026 09:39
woke to the broke
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great piece my friend, free in declaration but not in reality
June 19th, 2026 09:30
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a great piece my friend, free in declaration but not in reality
June 19th, 2026 09:30
We Lose
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, agree with you wholeheartedly on this topic...
June 19th, 2026 07:05
NafisaSB said:
yes indeed, agree with you wholeheartedly on this topic...
June 19th, 2026 07:05
countdown
Mutley Ravishes said:
Could be one second, one year, or 2040, or 2046, or an Exodus, there`s no telling!
\"Another ascent to death!\" Transcen-
-dent writing, Tristan!
June 19th, 2026 07:01
Mutley Ravishes said:
Could be one second, one year, or 2040, or 2046, or an Exodus, there`s no telling!
\"Another ascent to death!\" Transcen-
-dent writing, Tristan!
June 19th, 2026 07:01
countdown
sorenbarrett said:
This has several aspects to it wordplay and tension that comes in a countdown. I hope this was not a fuse Tristan. Well written my friend.
June 18th, 2026 12:44
sorenbarrett said:
This has several aspects to it wordplay and tension that comes in a countdown. I hope this was not a fuse Tristan. Well written my friend.
June 18th, 2026 12:44
countdown
orchidee said:
Sounds like the countdown to Popeye opening yet another can of spinach! lol.
June 18th, 2026 12:27
orchidee said:
Sounds like the countdown to Popeye opening yet another can of spinach! lol.
June 18th, 2026 12:27
countdown
Friendship said:
A powerful statement. Your poem revolves around the themes of anxiety, existential dread, and the confrontation with mortality. The countdown format suggests a sense of urgency and impending doom, while the expressions of breathlessness and the quest for life emphasize a struggle against despair. Yet your poem captures the tension between life and death, ultimately conveying feelings of isolation and the inevitability of fate. So strong in feelings
June 18th, 2026 12:09
Friendship said:
A powerful statement. Your poem revolves around the themes of anxiety, existential dread, and the confrontation with mortality. The countdown format suggests a sense of urgency and impending doom, while the expressions of breathlessness and the quest for life emphasize a struggle against despair. Yet your poem captures the tension between life and death, ultimately conveying feelings of isolation and the inevitability of fate. So strong in feelings
June 18th, 2026 12:09
nineteen ninety-five
Paul Bell said:
What would we change in our past, probably everything.
If we could, we\'d tweak here, tweak there, tweak everywhere.
Always think, as long as you only murder yourself in your youth, the courts can\'t jail you.
June 18th, 2026 07:58
Paul Bell said:
What would we change in our past, probably everything.
If we could, we\'d tweak here, tweak there, tweak everywhere.
Always think, as long as you only murder yourself in your youth, the courts can\'t jail you.
June 18th, 2026 07:58
nineteen ninety-five
arqios said:
Reminiscent hindsight. Excellent hairstyles as well. 🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. was there a background sound effect of a colour slide carousel? (it\'s meant to be the SNAPSHOT in the transcript, correct?)
June 17th, 2026 22:45
arqios said:
Reminiscent hindsight. Excellent hairstyles as well. 🙏🏻🕊️
P.S. was there a background sound effect of a colour slide carousel? (it\'s meant to be the SNAPSHOT in the transcript, correct?)
June 17th, 2026 22:45
nineteen ninety-five
Kevin Hulme said:
I love Alice Cooper\'s Album \'School\'s Out\'. Always reminds me of leaving School.
Good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:51
Kevin Hulme said:
I love Alice Cooper\'s Album \'School\'s Out\'. Always reminds me of leaving School.
Good Write.
June 17th, 2026 18:51
nineteen ninety-five
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic look back to days of schools graduation and dying youth. Memories frozen in snapshots. A time of drugs and yet the year of graduation is not the end. It has a feeling of young life now gone but yet not. Well written my friend
June 17th, 2026 13:45
sorenbarrett said:
A nostalgic look back to days of schools graduation and dying youth. Memories frozen in snapshots. A time of drugs and yet the year of graduation is not the end. It has a feeling of young life now gone but yet not. Well written my friend
June 17th, 2026 13:45
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