Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
o, stuff it, shall you?
Teddy.15 said:
At first I thought this was playful, but after a second read it\'s the cell phones here, they stick them up to their mouths to use vocal Wasaap now. I was taught to keep two hands on the wheel. 💜
June 5th, 2026 15:34
Teddy.15 said:
At first I thought this was playful, but after a second read it\'s the cell phones here, they stick them up to their mouths to use vocal Wasaap now. I was taught to keep two hands on the wheel. 💜
June 5th, 2026 15:34
o, stuff it, shall you?
Teddy.15 said:
lol I used to eat my tuna sandwich all the time whilst driving around London 🤣 yes stuff it in lol oh you are very entertaining my dear Tristan. 💜
June 5th, 2026 15:31
Teddy.15 said:
lol I used to eat my tuna sandwich all the time whilst driving around London 🤣 yes stuff it in lol oh you are very entertaining my dear Tristan. 💜
June 5th, 2026 15:31
o, stuff it, shall you?
Paul Bell said:
I like the last bit of getting pulled over, and I hope she\'s hot.
Car drivers keep the country running with the amount of fines they pay.
Mind you, the ones that drive on the motorways at 20 mph, what are they doing.
June 5th, 2026 10:35
Paul Bell said:
I like the last bit of getting pulled over, and I hope she\'s hot.
Car drivers keep the country running with the amount of fines they pay.
Mind you, the ones that drive on the motorways at 20 mph, what are they doing.
June 5th, 2026 10:35
o, stuff it, shall you?
orchidee said:
On the road, a mysterious sound - a glug..... lol.
June 5th, 2026 10:19
orchidee said:
On the road, a mysterious sound - a glug..... lol.
June 5th, 2026 10:19
o, stuff it, shall you?
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much ignored piece of advise well written
June 5th, 2026 07:53
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a much ignored piece of advise well written
June 5th, 2026 07:53
o, stuff it, shall you?
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and true write Tristan and it seems true for much more than literal traffic. Life itself behaves this way. Been pulled over many times in the distant past. Once three tickets in one day.
June 5th, 2026 07:51
sorenbarrett said:
A fun and true write Tristan and it seems true for much more than literal traffic. Life itself behaves this way. Been pulled over many times in the distant past. Once three tickets in one day.
June 5th, 2026 07:51
o, stuff it, shall you?
arqios said:
Careless and reckless driving wrecks too many lives. Sobering read. 🕊️🙏
June 5th, 2026 07:05
arqios said:
Careless and reckless driving wrecks too many lives. Sobering read. 🕊️🙏
June 5th, 2026 07:05
Thirty Seconds
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.A light and sacred journey.An enjoyable read mi aamigo.
June 4th, 2026 18:25
David Wakeling said:
I can relate to this.A light and sacred journey.An enjoyable read mi aamigo.
June 4th, 2026 18:25
Thirty Seconds
arqios said:
Quick thoughts: Bed wetting will never be the same again; there\'s a niche for adult nappies business; age brings inconvenient toilet break timing; et al... and dreams are almost always interrupted. 🙏🕊️🌊🤣🚽🪠🧻🚾
June 4th, 2026 16:41
arqios said:
Quick thoughts: Bed wetting will never be the same again; there\'s a niche for adult nappies business; age brings inconvenient toilet break timing; et al... and dreams are almost always interrupted. 🙏🕊️🌊🤣🚽🪠🧻🚾
June 4th, 2026 16:41
Thirty Seconds
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams can be confusing. I love the bends from the machine to the sea. Continual internal repetitive rhyme then the confusion of the right box and is it to be read first of after or just independent. Then there is the question of whether one has been asleep or not and is it a dream or hallucination. Well done Tristan
June 4th, 2026 12:34
sorenbarrett said:
Dreams can be confusing. I love the bends from the machine to the sea. Continual internal repetitive rhyme then the confusion of the right box and is it to be read first of after or just independent. Then there is the question of whether one has been asleep or not and is it a dream or hallucination. Well done Tristan
June 4th, 2026 12:34
Thirty Seconds
Teddy.15 said:
lol hey I almost went into a trance, very cool until the last line 🤣 what a wonderful poem and structure, making me work for my supper aren\'t you! 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:21
Teddy.15 said:
lol hey I almost went into a trance, very cool until the last line 🤣 what a wonderful poem and structure, making me work for my supper aren\'t you! 🌹
June 4th, 2026 12:21
Thirty Seconds
orchidee said:
Yes, a Mr P. Solus takes 30 seconds to eat a can of spinach! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Yes, a Mr P. Solus takes 30 seconds to eat a can of spinach! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:41
the road to unknowing
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like the title, the image of Bilbo setting out coming to mind, then I find out it\'s Odysseus!
June 3rd, 2026 18:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like the title, the image of Bilbo setting out coming to mind, then I find out it\'s Odysseus!
June 3rd, 2026 18:33
the road to unknowing
orchidee said:
And now my poem, inspired by your pic in this poem. It begins: \'Out of the night, A sound of gluggery, An ominous sound - We knows who it is...\' Further verses mention Mr O.W. Kenobi and Ol\' Tom. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:49
orchidee said:
And now my poem, inspired by your pic in this poem. It begins: \'Out of the night, A sound of gluggery, An ominous sound - We knows who it is...\' Further verses mention Mr O.W. Kenobi and Ol\' Tom. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:49
the road to unknowing
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on a mythical journey into the depths of existence, where one encounters profound truths and specters of the past, as embodied by Achilles\' shade.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on a mythical journey into the depths of existence, where one encounters profound truths and specters of the past, as embodied by Achilles\' shade.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
the road to unknowing
orchidee said:
I\'m unknowing this - a spot of apophatic-ism. A non-existent word there? lol.
I dunno wot I\'m on about. Popeye asks - is it related to spinach? He asks that about everything, of course! lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:39
orchidee said:
I\'m unknowing this - a spot of apophatic-ism. A non-existent word there? lol.
I dunno wot I\'m on about. Popeye asks - is it related to spinach? He asks that about everything, of course! lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:39
the road to unknowing
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from horses and protect my shins at all costs.
Beware of Greeks baring gifts come to mind.
June 3rd, 2026 10:07
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from horses and protect my shins at all costs.
Beware of Greeks baring gifts come to mind.
June 3rd, 2026 10:07
the road to unknowing
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Odyssues had quite a trip on a ship while Achilles had to see a pediatrist good write my friend
June 3rd, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Odyssues had quite a trip on a ship while Achilles had to see a pediatrist good write my friend
June 3rd, 2026 10:06
Renewable Hope
Waiting for Silence said:
I really like the passion and honesty in your voice—it feels personal and sincere. With a bit more simplicity and flow, the message could connect even more deeply. good one
June 3rd, 2026 06:32
Waiting for Silence said:
I really like the passion and honesty in your voice—it feels personal and sincere. With a bit more simplicity and flow, the message could connect even more deeply. good one
June 3rd, 2026 06:32
Nightingale
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful cry for help.An enjoyable read mi amigo
June 2nd, 2026 20:50
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful cry for help.An enjoyable read mi amigo
June 2nd, 2026 20:50
Nightingale
arqios said:
Several points of view and experiences threading along almost simultaneously. 🙏🕊️
June 2nd, 2026 20:43
arqios said:
Several points of view and experiences threading along almost simultaneously. 🙏🕊️
June 2nd, 2026 20:43
Nightingale
orchidee said:
Doh! The sound of a glug drowned out the poor nightingale! lol.
June 2nd, 2026 13:02
orchidee said:
Doh! The sound of a glug drowned out the poor nightingale! lol.
June 2nd, 2026 13:02
Nightingale
sorenbarrett said:
Ah my friend here we have a great example of a contradiction \"as blank as a cloud-filled sky\" Led astray, the reader goes on. But is not a cloud filled sky full not blank? Is it you that can not sing freely or is it that you are feely perched up in the sky. I love such ambiguities for it gives such freedom of interpretation. Well done Tristan
June 2nd, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Ah my friend here we have a great example of a contradiction \"as blank as a cloud-filled sky\" Led astray, the reader goes on. But is not a cloud filled sky full not blank? Is it you that can not sing freely or is it that you are feely perched up in the sky. I love such ambiguities for it gives such freedom of interpretation. Well done Tristan
June 2nd, 2026 09:36
simply because
NafisaSB said:
people jump to conclusions so easily, and are quick to brand the unsuccessful and homeless as vagrants - what a pity they are unable to penetrate through the deep layers..good write up on security and its different layers...
June 2nd, 2026 02:24
NafisaSB said:
people jump to conclusions so easily, and are quick to brand the unsuccessful and homeless as vagrants - what a pity they are unable to penetrate through the deep layers..good write up on security and its different layers...
June 2nd, 2026 02:24
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