Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Sunday Snakes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
Sunday Snakes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
Persons of Conviction
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Persons of Conviction
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
Persons of Conviction
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
Persons of Conviction
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Persons of Conviction
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
miracle man
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
miracle man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
miracle man
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
merciless
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
merciless
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
merciless
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
merciless
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
merciless
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
Butter in a Cup
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Butter in a Cup
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
Butter in a Cup
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
Butter in a Cup
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
monumental collapse
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
Neville said:
Nothing lasts forever does it .. thankfully .. tho\' darkness seems to have more than it\'s fair share of it .. 🏴🐧🏴🐦⬛🐈⬛🖤
August 5th, 2026 02:15
monumental collapse
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
Lorenz said:
The hardest part of hell is the path that leads there ...
August 4th, 2026 11:25
monumental collapse
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
Teddy.15 said:
Very dark and mysterious indeed, a metaphor worth reflecting on. Tristan you my friend are a rockstar! 🌹
August 4th, 2026 10:40
monumental collapse
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem reflects on the inevitability of decay and destruction, highlighting the fragility of human constructs and beliefs. The imagery you painted of stones worn down and temples toppling suggests a commentary on the transient nature of existence and the eventual downfall of even the most secure foundations.
August 4th, 2026 09:29
monumental collapse
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
Paul Bell said:
Every temple like every effigy has its day.
Strange thing power, it stays with you till a more powerful force comes along and takes it away.
August 4th, 2026 07:49
monumental collapse
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
sorenbarrett said:
\"all temples
come toppling
down.\"
What a powerful statement of truth and applies to more that the physical temples but the inner ones as well. As a child I wondered why they called it limestone I tasted it and it had no lime taste to me.
August 4th, 2026 07:45
monumental collapse
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
orchidee said:
Now a hymn has the lines:
\'What with care and toil he (mankind) buildeth / Tower and temple fall to dust\'.
That started me singing it, but everyone else wished i hadn\'t sung (screeched). lol.
August 4th, 2026 07:43
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