Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Power is Not Proof
sorenbarrett said:
A truth seldom acknowledged in that people seek advice from those in power and the famous and rich. So much said in so few words my friend.
March 25th, 2026 10:25
sorenbarrett said:
A truth seldom acknowledged in that people seek advice from those in power and the famous and rich. So much said in so few words my friend.
March 25th, 2026 10:25
threshold
Kevin Hulme said:
This to me is describing a Baby being born.
Into the strange World. Maybe something to different people.
March 24th, 2026 20:16
Kevin Hulme said:
This to me is describing a Baby being born.
Into the strange World. Maybe something to different people.
March 24th, 2026 20:16
threshold
arqios said:
You catch a glimpse of another you until just before the unknown crowds that out🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 18:34
arqios said:
You catch a glimpse of another you until just before the unknown crowds that out🕊️🙏🏻
March 24th, 2026 18:34
threshold
orchidee said:
Now ya know I\'m gonna say this - my answer is: I dunno - it\'ll be dark; I won\'t see a thing; so put that light on! Who turned it off?! lol. Probably Popeye did, so we wouldn\'t see him...... and don\'t finish that! lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:00
orchidee said:
Now ya know I\'m gonna say this - my answer is: I dunno - it\'ll be dark; I won\'t see a thing; so put that light on! Who turned it off?! lol. Probably Popeye did, so we wouldn\'t see him...... and don\'t finish that! lol.
March 24th, 2026 12:00
threshold
Neville said:
I reckon its all to do with portals .. you know, like them round shaped little window things set in rows along the side of big ocean going ships 🚢⚓🛳️🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛😎🐧👍
March 24th, 2026 10:32
Neville said:
I reckon its all to do with portals .. you know, like them round shaped little window things set in rows along the side of big ocean going ships 🚢⚓🛳️🖤🐦⬛🐈⬛😎🐧👍
March 24th, 2026 10:32
threshold
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown is threatening to most thrilling to some and a regular part of life to a few. I tend to prefer the darkness where most everything is unknown. A lovely write my friend
March 24th, 2026 08:42
sorenbarrett said:
The unknown is threatening to most thrilling to some and a regular part of life to a few. I tend to prefer the darkness where most everything is unknown. A lovely write my friend
March 24th, 2026 08:42
light on the question
orchidee said:
Can we throw any light on why Popeye & Co............ Don\'t finish that. WCAT! lol.
March 24th, 2026 03:41
orchidee said:
Can we throw any light on why Popeye & Co............ Don\'t finish that. WCAT! lol.
March 24th, 2026 03:41
(un)held
NafisaSB said:
never fear- those who read and appreciate your verse will definitely miss it/you - so keep them coming, even if at longer intervals....
March 24th, 2026 01:01
NafisaSB said:
never fear- those who read and appreciate your verse will definitely miss it/you - so keep them coming, even if at longer intervals....
March 24th, 2026 01:01
light on the question
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem reflects a sense of existential questioning and uncertainty about the future of humanity. The phrase “what will become of us all?” suggests a deep concern for the collective fate of people, possibly in the context of environmental, social, or existential crises.
March 23rd, 2026 17:40
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem reflects a sense of existential questioning and uncertainty about the future of humanity. The phrase “what will become of us all?” suggests a deep concern for the collective fate of people, possibly in the context of environmental, social, or existential crises.
March 23rd, 2026 17:40
light on the question
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Abstract poem in brevity wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:28
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Abstract poem in brevity wow! Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
March 23rd, 2026 15:28
light on the question
sorenbarrett said:
Lábrea tar pits come to mind. We will all be frozen in time and what more appropriate way for a generation to be remembered but in petroleum products. Well written Tristen so brief but then so is life as well. Loved it
March 23rd, 2026 12:00
sorenbarrett said:
Lábrea tar pits come to mind. We will all be frozen in time and what more appropriate way for a generation to be remembered but in petroleum products. Well written Tristen so brief but then so is life as well. Loved it
March 23rd, 2026 12:00
light on the question
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
A rare short poem… might have to call you the prince of concise 😅. All jokes aside though, great poem and I love the question at the end. It’s something I think of often…
March 23rd, 2026 09:59
Demar Desu - 德马尔·德苏 said:
A rare short poem… might have to call you the prince of concise 😅. All jokes aside though, great poem and I love the question at the end. It’s something I think of often…
March 23rd, 2026 09:59
Orbit of Oblivion
Doggerel Dave said:
The political cliché, which over the years I\'ve heard more times than I care to count, \"the silent majority\" with it\'s connotations of virtue have had me shouting and climbing up walls...
You\'ve cracked that one, Tristan.
March 22nd, 2026 16:23
Doggerel Dave said:
The political cliché, which over the years I\'ve heard more times than I care to count, \"the silent majority\" with it\'s connotations of virtue have had me shouting and climbing up walls...
You\'ve cracked that one, Tristan.
March 22nd, 2026 16:23
Orbit of Oblivion
orchidee said:
Good write T. And so - browsing poems, and even to oblivion, we hear - we know it - that glugging sound! heehee. :)
March 22nd, 2026 11:44
orchidee said:
Good write T. And so - browsing poems, and even to oblivion, we hear - we know it - that glugging sound! heehee. :)
March 22nd, 2026 11:44
Orbit of Oblivion
Neville said:
Still spot on and long may it reign so 🖤🖤🐈⬛😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Neville said:
Still spot on and long may it reign so 🖤🖤🐈⬛😎⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👍
March 22nd, 2026 09:33
Orbit of Oblivion
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the interaction of action and nonaction in regard to values. Sometimes inaction places you on the other side. If you wish to remain loyal to your values action is required. Well said Tristan clever Acrostic
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
sorenbarrett said:
A deep dive into the interaction of action and nonaction in regard to values. Sometimes inaction places you on the other side. If you wish to remain loyal to your values action is required. Well said Tristan clever Acrostic
March 22nd, 2026 09:25
control burn
orchidee said:
Popeye getting a bit \'hot\'?! heehee. But why? WCAT.
March 21st, 2026 12:44
orchidee said:
Popeye getting a bit \'hot\'?! heehee. But why? WCAT.
March 21st, 2026 12:44
control burn
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write, however brief it were. Well-done. A fave, my dear friend!
March 21st, 2026 08:57
cellinic said:
Rather a serious write, however brief it were. Well-done. A fave, my dear friend!
March 21st, 2026 08:57
control burn
sorenbarrett said:
All about fire one of the four basic elements associated with energy, assertiveness and passion. Can tell you from first hand experience Tristan that fire did not do that for me when I set myself on fire. Maybe the energy to roll around on the ground trying to put it out it certainly did not make me more passionate as all the skin peeled off and the sting made touch unbearable. This poem brought back memories of a rather difficult time.
March 21st, 2026 08:35
sorenbarrett said:
All about fire one of the four basic elements associated with energy, assertiveness and passion. Can tell you from first hand experience Tristan that fire did not do that for me when I set myself on fire. Maybe the energy to roll around on the ground trying to put it out it certainly did not make me more passionate as all the skin peeled off and the sting made touch unbearable. This poem brought back memories of a rather difficult time.
March 21st, 2026 08:35
Abstraction Traction
arqios said:
The power of truth unadorned but always at the ready 🕊️🙏🏻
March 20th, 2026 16:17
arqios said:
The power of truth unadorned but always at the ready 🕊️🙏🏻
March 20th, 2026 16:17
Abstraction Traction
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward truth (inasmuch as I can know it) wins the day every time for me, Tristan.
Neatly put.
March 20th, 2026 12:08
Doggerel Dave said:
Straightforward truth (inasmuch as I can know it) wins the day every time for me, Tristan.
Neatly put.
March 20th, 2026 12:08
Abstraction Traction
orchidee said:
Nothing abstract about Popeye & Co. Why not? WCAT! lol.
March 20th, 2026 10:51
orchidee said:
Nothing abstract about Popeye & Co. Why not? WCAT! lol.
March 20th, 2026 10:51
Abstraction Traction
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept. Abstraction a pattern that attracts our attention to something familiar but unidentifiable something similar to the familiar. It holds our brain for an instant in time just long enough to be aware of it as a pattern different than the background yet it is not anything that can be applied and holds no identifiable truth. But then truth itself as a concept is an abstraction. Clever wording and rhyme make this whole poem an abstract work of art.
March 20th, 2026 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting concept. Abstraction a pattern that attracts our attention to something familiar but unidentifiable something similar to the familiar. It holds our brain for an instant in time just long enough to be aware of it as a pattern different than the background yet it is not anything that can be applied and holds no identifiable truth. But then truth itself as a concept is an abstraction. Clever wording and rhyme make this whole poem an abstract work of art.
March 20th, 2026 09:10
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