Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Original Sin
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Such a powerful reflection on pride, influence, and the ripple effects of one person’s choices. I love how the repetition and imagery bring the man’s journey and its consequences to life.
September 7th, 2025 09:18
Fina Elara 🌙 -Petra Patrice said:
Such a powerful reflection on pride, influence, and the ripple effects of one person’s choices. I love how the repetition and imagery bring the man’s journey and its consequences to life.
September 7th, 2025 09:18
Original Sin
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of how individuals interpretations distort and exaggerate over the years until the original is hardly recognizable. This happens unfortunately in the creation of myths, the passing on of religious beliefs and writings and history itself. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 08:14
sorenbarrett said:
A most interesting write of how individuals interpretations distort and exaggerate over the years until the original is hardly recognizable. This happens unfortunately in the creation of myths, the passing on of religious beliefs and writings and history itself. Nicely written
September 7th, 2025 08:14
The Sparsity of Sand
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Genuine question- how do you write things like \"Necrotic hopes buried in Aphrodite’s tomb\" or \"Sleepless are nights of a nighing soul\"?
Another question- except fave, what else can this poem be?
September 7th, 2025 02:25
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Genuine question- how do you write things like \"Necrotic hopes buried in Aphrodite’s tomb\" or \"Sleepless are nights of a nighing soul\"?
Another question- except fave, what else can this poem be?
September 7th, 2025 02:25
The Sparsity of Sand
arqios said:
I hear the stillness between your lines,
where even the wind forgets its name.
The cats keep their counsel,
eyes like coins from a currency no longer minted.
Somewhere, the goddess sleeps under stone,
and the sea has swallowed its own song.
You sift the dark for a single grain,
and the night, patient as a tide,
waits for your hands to open.
September 7th, 2025 01:39
arqios said:
I hear the stillness between your lines,
where even the wind forgets its name.
The cats keep their counsel,
eyes like coins from a currency no longer minted.
Somewhere, the goddess sleeps under stone,
and the sea has swallowed its own song.
You sift the dark for a single grain,
and the night, patient as a tide,
waits for your hands to open.
September 7th, 2025 01:39
The Sparsity of Sand
Neville said:
You rock Tristan .. this is amazing poetry .. write on .. Neville
September 6th, 2025 21:14
Neville said:
You rock Tristan .. this is amazing poetry .. write on .. Neville
September 6th, 2025 21:14
The Sparsity of Sand
Teddy.15 said:
Everyone always says I have cats eyes, and maybe that\'s how come I see you so well. A wonderful poem. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 17:25
Teddy.15 said:
Everyone always says I have cats eyes, and maybe that\'s how come I see you so well. A wonderful poem. 🌹
September 6th, 2025 17:25
The Sparsity of Sand
orchidee said:
Ain\'t any sparsity with Popeye. No sparsity of what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
orchidee said:
Ain\'t any sparsity with Popeye. No sparsity of what? Don\'t answer that! lol.
September 6th, 2025 14:38
The Sparsity of Sand
sorenbarrett said:
\"Chest\'s chambered millstone sinks\" What a great line with such metaphoric implication. Never thought of the heart as a millstone but it fits so well for many with a heavy heart especially when cast upon a sea of guilt. Most lovely tor that line alone a fave
September 6th, 2025 11:37
sorenbarrett said:
\"Chest\'s chambered millstone sinks\" What a great line with such metaphoric implication. Never thought of the heart as a millstone but it fits so well for many with a heavy heart especially when cast upon a sea of guilt. Most lovely tor that line alone a fave
September 6th, 2025 11:37
Falling, Failing
arqios said:
Hearing “Falling, Failing” as a song changes the feel completely. It’s not just a confession in ink, it’s a lived moment in sound.
The steady, blues‑tinged groove gives the verses a weary sway, like someone nursing a drink at closing time, while the chorus lands like a release: raw, simple, and aching in its repetition. The bridge, with “Your silence shocks me, like a violent shove”, cuts through the smoothness with a jolt, and in performance it feels like the emotional peak before sliding back into that resigned, late‑night refrain. It’s the kind of song you can imagine echoing in a dim bar, where the audience feels every drop of that slow fall.
September 5th, 2025 23:58
arqios said:
Hearing “Falling, Failing” as a song changes the feel completely. It’s not just a confession in ink, it’s a lived moment in sound.
The steady, blues‑tinged groove gives the verses a weary sway, like someone nursing a drink at closing time, while the chorus lands like a release: raw, simple, and aching in its repetition. The bridge, with “Your silence shocks me, like a violent shove”, cuts through the smoothness with a jolt, and in performance it feels like the emotional peak before sliding back into that resigned, late‑night refrain. It’s the kind of song you can imagine echoing in a dim bar, where the audience feels every drop of that slow fall.
September 5th, 2025 23:58
Falling, Failing
Bella Shepard said:
Remarkable poetry in musical form, how many of our most beloved songwriters are poets at heart. You\'re right up there my friend. Kudos, beautifully done!
September 5th, 2025 14:51
Bella Shepard said:
Remarkable poetry in musical form, how many of our most beloved songwriters are poets at heart. You\'re right up there my friend. Kudos, beautifully done!
September 5th, 2025 14:51
Falling, Failing
NinjaGirl said:
This is so lovely. I find it difficult to separate music from poetry...they were meant to be together it seems. Well done!
September 5th, 2025 14:20
NinjaGirl said:
This is so lovely. I find it difficult to separate music from poetry...they were meant to be together it seems. Well done!
September 5th, 2025 14:20
Falling, Failing
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Tristan you won me at your first verse which In lyric is incredibly important, a super beautiful song from the soul, I felt you falling my friend. 🌹
September 5th, 2025 12:53
Teddy.15 said:
Oh Tristan you won me at your first verse which In lyric is incredibly important, a super beautiful song from the soul, I felt you falling my friend. 🌹
September 5th, 2025 12:53
Falling, Failing
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of heartbreak, longing, and emotional turmoil in the context of a romantic relationship that is fading. It conveys a sense of desperation and a yearning for reconnection, highlighting the pain that often accompanies love. Yet it deals with feelings of loneliness and sadness, as the speaker grapples with the decline of a once-strong relationship. It reflects on the struggle to cope with love\'s challenges and the desire to rekindle a lost connection.
September 5th, 2025 10:51
Friendship said:
The poem explores themes of heartbreak, longing, and emotional turmoil in the context of a romantic relationship that is fading. It conveys a sense of desperation and a yearning for reconnection, highlighting the pain that often accompanies love. Yet it deals with feelings of loneliness and sadness, as the speaker grapples with the decline of a once-strong relationship. It reflects on the struggle to cope with love\'s challenges and the desire to rekindle a lost connection.
September 5th, 2025 10:51
Falling, Failing
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not going to forget “Just pour me a glass
Of rocks without love.\" anything soon. Nicely written đź‘Ź
September 5th, 2025 10:13
rebellion_in_sanity said:
Not going to forget “Just pour me a glass
Of rocks without love.\" anything soon. Nicely written đź‘Ź
September 5th, 2025 10:13
Falling, Failing
sorenbarrett said:
Another good song I would love to hear. Well done Tristan
September 5th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Another good song I would love to hear. Well done Tristan
September 5th, 2025 08:13
To Death I Am Bound
arqios said:
Sounds like many a day that I have lived through, barely getting by! That exhausted despair is so familiar...
September 4th, 2025 18:58
arqios said:
Sounds like many a day that I have lived through, barely getting by! That exhausted despair is so familiar...
September 4th, 2025 18:58
To Death I Am Bound
Friendship said:
This poem conveys a profound emotional drain and a sense of isolation in their struggles, leaving them feeling that there are no solutions to their pain. The poet includes themes of existential crisis, the burden of unanswered questions, and a disconnection from faith and spiritual support, as represented by the \"angels,\" \"saints,\" and \"the church.\" very heavy on my heart. Well written my friend,
September 4th, 2025 18:43
Friendship said:
This poem conveys a profound emotional drain and a sense of isolation in their struggles, leaving them feeling that there are no solutions to their pain. The poet includes themes of existential crisis, the burden of unanswered questions, and a disconnection from faith and spiritual support, as represented by the \"angels,\" \"saints,\" and \"the church.\" very heavy on my heart. Well written my friend,
September 4th, 2025 18:43
To Death I Am Bound
Teddy.15 said:
Baby, you need move, 🤣 ah we all have these type years or moments I know I have. 🌹
September 4th, 2025 15:38
Teddy.15 said:
Baby, you need move, 🤣 ah we all have these type years or moments I know I have. 🌹
September 4th, 2025 15:38
To Death I Am Bound
NinjaGirl said:
Death is so imminent, and we know its destiny. That often either brings hope or despair. Well-written poem from many years ago!
September 4th, 2025 11:04
NinjaGirl said:
Death is so imminent, and we know its destiny. That often either brings hope or despair. Well-written poem from many years ago!
September 4th, 2025 11:04
To Death I Am Bound
RSM0812 said:
Your message is one of sadness and despair put in words that create clear imagery of hoplessness. I liked this write very much. Nice job.
September 4th, 2025 10:12
RSM0812 said:
Your message is one of sadness and despair put in words that create clear imagery of hoplessness. I liked this write very much. Nice job.
September 4th, 2025 10:12
To Death I Am Bound
sorenbarrett said:
Religion often does not offer the answers to temporal questions and in practicality seems an obstacle rather than a way. Nicely worded
September 4th, 2025 09:10
sorenbarrett said:
Religion often does not offer the answers to temporal questions and in practicality seems an obstacle rather than a way. Nicely worded
September 4th, 2025 09:10
Bird\'s Eye View
rebellion_in_sanity said:
At times those not said become vivid with those that are said. Perhaps, I didn\'t make sense.
Loved it!
September 4th, 2025 03:33
rebellion_in_sanity said:
At times those not said become vivid with those that are said. Perhaps, I didn\'t make sense.
Loved it!
September 4th, 2025 03:33
Bird\'s Eye View
Teddy.15 said:
I see inspiration here, isn\'t it amazing where a place can take us. 🌹
September 3rd, 2025 12:26
Teddy.15 said:
I see inspiration here, isn\'t it amazing where a place can take us. 🌹
September 3rd, 2025 12:26
Bird\'s Eye View
NinjaGirl said:
Seems like a good spot for inspiration, love it!
September 3rd, 2025 12:10
NinjaGirl said:
Seems like a good spot for inspiration, love it!
September 3rd, 2025 12:10
Bird\'s Eye View
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s sneaked in again, but - not now, Popeye, we don\'t want a bird\'s eye view of...... *chokes and splutters over me cocoa*. lol.
September 3rd, 2025 11:47
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s sneaked in again, but - not now, Popeye, we don\'t want a bird\'s eye view of...... *chokes and splutters over me cocoa*. lol.
September 3rd, 2025 11:47
Bird\'s Eye View
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and scenic and I am left wondering if those vultures circling have a meaning. Gettysburg the battlefield and a cemetary come to mind.
September 3rd, 2025 09:04
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful and scenic and I am left wondering if those vultures circling have a meaning. Gettysburg the battlefield and a cemetary come to mind.
September 3rd, 2025 09:04
Unknown
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Really moving stuff. Thanks for sharing.
September 3rd, 2025 01:54
Tom Dylan said:
A fine write. Really moving stuff. Thanks for sharing.
September 3rd, 2025 01:54
The Obscuration of Salvation
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Tristan. Mountains and large rocks will make you feel like something is there other than you.
September 2nd, 2025 15:55
Jerry Reynolds said:
A fine write, Tristan. Mountains and large rocks will make you feel like something is there other than you.
September 2nd, 2025 15:55
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