Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
effecting a cause
sorenbarrett said:
Very psychological, the tendency for questioning and self blame on what one does not understand. Questioning, confusion. Certain stimuli trigger thoughts and emotions. Well written my friend the format emphasizes the message
April 9th, 2026 11:29
sorenbarrett said:
Very psychological, the tendency for questioning and self blame on what one does not understand. Questioning, confusion. Certain stimuli trigger thoughts and emotions. Well written my friend the format emphasizes the message
April 9th, 2026 11:29
effecting a cause
Teddy.15 said:
lol I find the funny side as I\'m the worst ever technology boff! But my husband on the other hand is an optical designer for space! So I do have some help setting stuff up. Your creativity today has given me a much deserved chuckle π€
April 9th, 2026 10:54
Teddy.15 said:
lol I find the funny side as I\'m the worst ever technology boff! But my husband on the other hand is an optical designer for space! So I do have some help setting stuff up. Your creativity today has given me a much deserved chuckle π€
April 9th, 2026 10:54
effecting a cause
orchidee said:
We know what cause Popeye & Co support. What is it? WCAT! lol.
April 9th, 2026 10:36
orchidee said:
We know what cause Popeye & Co support. What is it? WCAT! lol.
April 9th, 2026 10:36
effecting a cause
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep, and emotional poetic statement. best wishes and a fave, my friend!
April 9th, 2026 09:08
cellinic said:
A very nice, deep, and emotional poetic statement. best wishes and a fave, my friend!
April 9th, 2026 09:08
effecting a cause
arqios said:
Like a wheel within a wheel the butterflies in the tummy have butterflies in their tummy and the hamster at the wheel within another wheel spinning from its own hamster.... ad infinitum ποΈπ
April 9th, 2026 07:33
arqios said:
Like a wheel within a wheel the butterflies in the tummy have butterflies in their tummy and the hamster at the wheel within another wheel spinning from its own hamster.... ad infinitum ποΈπ
April 9th, 2026 07:33
effecting a cause
Friendship said:
OMG, well said.Your poem explores feelings of anxiety, uncertainty, and the impact of technology on communication. The poet grapples with an overwhelming sense of dread and confusion in response to incoming messages, suggesting a broader commentary on the pressures of modern life and the psychological toll of constant connectivity.
April 9th, 2026 07:22
Friendship said:
OMG, well said.Your poem explores feelings of anxiety, uncertainty, and the impact of technology on communication. The poet grapples with an overwhelming sense of dread and confusion in response to incoming messages, suggesting a broader commentary on the pressures of modern life and the psychological toll of constant connectivity.
April 9th, 2026 07:22
The Traitors
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"The Traitors\" explores themes of betrayal, secrecy, and the dynamics of loyalty among individuals. It suggests a tension between outward appearances of faithfulness and the hidden agendas that can lead to treachery.
April 8th, 2026 15:58
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem \"The Traitors\" explores themes of betrayal, secrecy, and the dynamics of loyalty among individuals. It suggests a tension between outward appearances of faithfulness and the hidden agendas that can lead to treachery.
April 8th, 2026 15:58
The Traitors
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a conspiracy in its own wordings. It is a bit dark and suspect. Well written my friend. Sorry for the late response but I have been traveling for the past two days and no access to wifi
April 8th, 2026 15:34
sorenbarrett said:
This sounds like a conspiracy in its own wordings. It is a bit dark and suspect. Well written my friend. Sorry for the late response but I have been traveling for the past two days and no access to wifi
April 8th, 2026 15:34
The Traitors
orchidee said:
That traitorous glugger. He was going to not glug for a week - but no, he failed! lol.
April 8th, 2026 14:10
orchidee said:
That traitorous glugger. He was going to not glug for a week - but no, he failed! lol.
April 8th, 2026 14:10
The Traitors
Neville said:
Ha I watched my first episode a little while back .. feels like another day in the office .. Nice One too my friend .. Neville π€π
April 8th, 2026 11:36
Neville said:
Ha I watched my first episode a little while back .. feels like another day in the office .. Nice One too my friend .. Neville π€π
April 8th, 2026 11:36
The Traitors
arqios said:
Betrayal fresh as each new day from others and even at times from selfππ»ποΈ
April 8th, 2026 07:57
arqios said:
Betrayal fresh as each new day from others and even at times from selfππ»ποΈ
April 8th, 2026 07:57
What They Called Her
Teddy.15 said:
Acknowledgement leads to healing, ain\'t that the truth. A great write. πΉ
April 8th, 2026 03:56
Teddy.15 said:
Acknowledgement leads to healing, ain\'t that the truth. A great write. πΉ
April 8th, 2026 03:56
within the obsidian turret
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, sound and imagery enriched. Love your last lines. πΉ
April 7th, 2026 11:28
Teddy.15 said:
So very powerful, sound and imagery enriched. Love your last lines. πΉ
April 7th, 2026 11:28
within the obsidian turret
orchidee said:
Further into depths of nuttiness.... it\'s a place where no-one dares to approach without ear-plugs. For one lives there, we knows him. The name of the place is Glug Towers. lol.
April 7th, 2026 11:00
orchidee said:
Further into depths of nuttiness.... it\'s a place where no-one dares to approach without ear-plugs. For one lives there, we knows him. The name of the place is Glug Towers. lol.
April 7th, 2026 11:00
within the obsidian turret
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst enemies and we build false imaged to take our blame in the form of what we perceive as evil. Well written my friend
April 7th, 2026 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
We are our own worst enemies and we build false imaged to take our blame in the form of what we perceive as evil. Well written my friend
April 7th, 2026 08:21
The Letter T
NafisaSB said:
Such powerful message in such few words. Commendable π
April 7th, 2026 03:19
NafisaSB said:
Such powerful message in such few words. Commendable π
April 7th, 2026 03:19
The Necromancer: A Return
Teddy.15 said:
Edgar Allen Poe vibes that\'s what I\'m getting! Very dark and so well rhymed. πΉ
April 6th, 2026 10:39
Teddy.15 said:
Edgar Allen Poe vibes that\'s what I\'m getting! Very dark and so well rhymed. πΉ
April 6th, 2026 10:39
The Necromancer: A Return
Abdullah123 said:
This piece feels so gothic and sinister. I can almost imagine it being a sort of introduction to a horror/fantasy movie, ifyk what i mean. I like it... Great write
April 6th, 2026 10:12
Abdullah123 said:
This piece feels so gothic and sinister. I can almost imagine it being a sort of introduction to a horror/fantasy movie, ifyk what i mean. I like it... Great write
April 6th, 2026 10:12
The Necromancer: A Return
orchidee said:
Oh no! We knows who that is in that clip, in disguise. He gave the game away with a glug! heehee.
April 6th, 2026 08:50
orchidee said:
Oh no! We knows who that is in that clip, in disguise. He gave the game away with a glug! heehee.
April 6th, 2026 08:50
The Necromancer: A Return
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this immediately brings visions of The Lord of the Rings. A lovely write so gothic in nature it pulls at the threads of internal fears of spiders, dark shadows, dank stone walls, dungeons and corroded iron bars. Well done my friend
April 6th, 2026 06:55
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this immediately brings visions of The Lord of the Rings. A lovely write so gothic in nature it pulls at the threads of internal fears of spiders, dark shadows, dank stone walls, dungeons and corroded iron bars. Well done my friend
April 6th, 2026 06:55
The Necromancer: A Return
Doggerel Dave said:
If I read much more of your poetry (and I compulsively feel I must ) I\'m going to end up with bloody nightmares, Tristan...how well do you sleep at nights, or is it all poured out onto the page, leaving you in complete tranquility?π
The poetry I would not dare fault!!
April 6th, 2026 06:43
Doggerel Dave said:
If I read much more of your poetry (and I compulsively feel I must ) I\'m going to end up with bloody nightmares, Tristan...how well do you sleep at nights, or is it all poured out onto the page, leaving you in complete tranquility?π
The poetry I would not dare fault!!
April 6th, 2026 06:43
What They Called Her
Neville said:
Go on, stick the boot in why don\'tcha .. so many of us deserve it .. I hope the lessons that might be learnt here are actually learned here not just ad about felt for but a moment then forgot .. Neville π€πββ¬π€π
April 6th, 2026 02:23
Neville said:
Go on, stick the boot in why don\'tcha .. so many of us deserve it .. I hope the lessons that might be learnt here are actually learned here not just ad about felt for but a moment then forgot .. Neville π€πββ¬π€π
April 6th, 2026 02:23
The Unlasting
arqios said:
As long as the air isn\'t stale it will be alright πποΈ
April 5th, 2026 17:44
arqios said:
As long as the air isn\'t stale it will be alright πποΈ
April 5th, 2026 17:44
What They Called Her
Abdullah123 said:
Brilliant write, and a haunting tone⦠great work
April 5th, 2026 15:00
Abdullah123 said:
Brilliant write, and a haunting tone⦠great work
April 5th, 2026 15:00
What They Called Her
arqios said:
The way she was treated by the scribes and Pharisees was atrocious, to say the least! ππ»ποΈπΉ
April 5th, 2026 12:05
arqios said:
The way she was treated by the scribes and Pharisees was atrocious, to say the least! ππ»ποΈπΉ
April 5th, 2026 12:05
What They Called Her
orchidee said:
What about me/him says a certain glugger? We just knew he would have to interfere and ruin everything! lol.
April 5th, 2026 09:41
orchidee said:
What about me/him says a certain glugger? We just knew he would have to interfere and ruin everything! lol.
April 5th, 2026 09:41
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