Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
disco fries
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Well written my friend, ghoulishly tasty
October 30th, 2026 11:07
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Well written my friend, ghoulishly tasty
October 30th, 2026 11:07
disco fries
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem reflects on the unsettling nature of a man who, despite engaging in a horrific act, maintains a facade of normalcy by joking with his family and ordering food.
October 30th, 2026 10:38
Friendship said:
Nicely written. Your poem reflects on the unsettling nature of a man who, despite engaging in a horrific act, maintains a facade of normalcy by joking with his family and ordering food.
October 30th, 2026 10:38
the picture window
cellinic said:
Genuinely a wonderful and a bit enigmatic piece of work evoking diverse complex feelings and sensations, that are deep inside... blended with marvellous rhythmic and general poetic values. A fave, my friend!
October 29th, 2026 21:28
cellinic said:
Genuinely a wonderful and a bit enigmatic piece of work evoking diverse complex feelings and sensations, that are deep inside... blended with marvellous rhythmic and general poetic values. A fave, my friend!
October 29th, 2026 21:28
the picture window
arqios said:
Now a poem that has to last forever! Nice one, Tittu 👍🏻🕊️
October 29th, 2026 19:21
arqios said:
Now a poem that has to last forever! Nice one, Tittu 👍🏻🕊️
October 29th, 2026 19:21
the picture window
Teddy.15 said:
This is gorgeous, your imagery Tristan is fabulous I could hear the music and feel the pain by the end. Love it 🌹
October 29th, 2026 11:26
Teddy.15 said:
This is gorgeous, your imagery Tristan is fabulous I could hear the music and feel the pain by the end. Love it 🌹
October 29th, 2026 11:26
the picture window
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I\'m scared of Saturdays too - your next poem in the series! Argh! lol.
October 29th, 2026 10:34
orchidee said:
Doh! Now I\'m scared of Saturdays too - your next poem in the series! Argh! lol.
October 29th, 2026 10:34
the picture window
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece my friend
October 29th, 2026 09:10
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
An enchanting piece my friend
October 29th, 2026 09:10
the picture window
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on Memory and the Past.
October 29th, 2026 08:53
Kevin Hulme said:
An enjoyable Poem on Memory and the Past.
October 29th, 2026 08:53
season of the living dead
Syd said:
I love this Tristan 👏
Most hearts certainly do stay hardened and zombies definitely seek your vote.
- Syd 🍄
October 29th, 2026 06:42
Syd said:
I love this Tristan 👏
Most hearts certainly do stay hardened and zombies definitely seek your vote.
- Syd 🍄
October 29th, 2026 06:42
season of the living dead
Doggerel Dave said:
This about Halloween? Nah, more to it than that! \"Get out the vote, it’s bound to change everything\". Perfect irony and cynicism.
October 28th, 2026 22:52
Doggerel Dave said:
This about Halloween? Nah, more to it than that! \"Get out the vote, it’s bound to change everything\". Perfect irony and cynicism.
October 28th, 2026 22:52
season of the living dead
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Contrasting Ideas of Nature and the Dark side of Man .
Enjoyed.
October 28th, 2026 19:22
Kevin Hulme said:
Good Contrasting Ideas of Nature and the Dark side of Man .
Enjoyed.
October 28th, 2026 19:22
season of the living dead
Paul Bell said:
I used to love the dark as a kid.
During summer months, you couldn\'t walk down the street without having to talk to every neighbour.
Come autumn, they stayed indoors. lol
October 28th, 2026 13:05
Paul Bell said:
I used to love the dark as a kid.
During summer months, you couldn\'t walk down the street without having to talk to every neighbour.
Come autumn, they stayed indoors. lol
October 28th, 2026 13:05
season of the living dead
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I thought you were refering to the White House 🤣 very seasonal and very creepy! I can tell you love the pumpkin vibes lol 🧹 👻 🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃
October 28th, 2026 11:42
Teddy.15 said:
Gosh, I thought you were refering to the White House 🤣 very seasonal and very creepy! I can tell you love the pumpkin vibes lol 🧹 👻 🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃🎃
October 28th, 2026 11:42
Good Christian Folk
NafisaSB said:
The fanatics always feel self righteous and brand any person who doesn’t agree with them wicked. A good write ✍️
October 28th, 2026 10:21
NafisaSB said:
The fanatics always feel self righteous and brand any person who doesn’t agree with them wicked. A good write ✍️
October 28th, 2026 10:21
season of the living dead
orchidee said:
That\'ll be \'Fall\' to you, yes? And \'Autumn\' to the UK. And as I, from the UK, said to an Australian: one of us is living upside down! lol.
October 28th, 2026 10:04
orchidee said:
That\'ll be \'Fall\' to you, yes? And \'Autumn\' to the UK. And as I, from the UK, said to an Australian: one of us is living upside down! lol.
October 28th, 2026 10:04
season of the living dead
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and seasonal nicely constructed my friend
October 28th, 2026 09:45
sorenbarrett said:
Creative and seasonal nicely constructed my friend
October 28th, 2026 09:45
Masculation Strangulation
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Disturbing poem, but more disturbing is reality...
October 28th, 2026 06:59
Carlos Alberto BUSTILLOS said:
Disturbing poem, but more disturbing is reality...
October 28th, 2026 06:59
Masculation Strangulation
Paul Bell said:
Zena warrior princess, what that girl could do with a sword.
Actually, nobody gave a shit about her sword, only how she got hormones jumping.
Now we have to inject hormone baked beans just to lick her shield.
The world has created a monster, the jenie nearly came out of the bottle, but because the bottle identified as transtree, the jenie jumped straight back into the fable it came out off, wondering what the fuck humans had become.
October 27th, 2026 14:31
Paul Bell said:
Zena warrior princess, what that girl could do with a sword.
Actually, nobody gave a shit about her sword, only how she got hormones jumping.
Now we have to inject hormone baked beans just to lick her shield.
The world has created a monster, the jenie nearly came out of the bottle, but because the bottle identified as transtree, the jenie jumped straight back into the fable it came out off, wondering what the fuck humans had become.
October 27th, 2026 14:31
Masculation Strangulation
orchidee said:
Popeye won any of those Awards? lol.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
orchidee said:
Popeye won any of those Awards? lol.
October 27th, 2026 10:21
Masculation Strangulation
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written piece my friend, what has the world become ?
October 27th, 2026 09:52
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A well written piece my friend, what has the world become ?
October 27th, 2026 09:52
Masculation Strangulation
Lorenz said:
The most important thing is to have a musculated brain !
October 27th, 2026 09:32
Lorenz said:
The most important thing is to have a musculated brain !
October 27th, 2026 09:32
Masculation Strangulation
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a ferocious satirical engine here, using repetition, deliberately mangled logic, and the obsessive return to “masculinity” to expose how fragile manhood becomes when it has to be constantly policed through fear, insults, and demands for conformity. “we’ll inject you up with testosterone, / instill fear you’ll be emasculated” is the keeper for me, because it reveals the coercion beneath all the bluster: the supposed defense of masculinity becomes a threat to men themselves, forcing them to perform the very identity they’re told should come naturally.
October 27th, 2026 08:47
Thomas W Case said:
There’s a ferocious satirical engine here, using repetition, deliberately mangled logic, and the obsessive return to “masculinity” to expose how fragile manhood becomes when it has to be constantly policed through fear, insults, and demands for conformity. “we’ll inject you up with testosterone, / instill fear you’ll be emasculated” is the keeper for me, because it reveals the coercion beneath all the bluster: the supposed defense of masculinity becomes a threat to men themselves, forcing them to perform the very identity they’re told should come naturally.
October 27th, 2026 08:47
Masculation Strangulation
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a world that thinks that equality of rights equals equality of the physical and emotional. Nature made male and female different for a reason and who are we to change that. Viva la differance. Well penned my friend
October 27th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful write in a world that thinks that equality of rights equals equality of the physical and emotional. Nature made male and female different for a reason and who are we to change that. Viva la differance. Well penned my friend
October 27th, 2026 08:40
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At breakneck speed, the words gurgling from the ventriloquist\'s mouth in an unstoppable mad diatribe. The makings of a wonderful stage play the narritive being what it is. Wonderful stuff, my fine fellow.
All the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:00
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
At breakneck speed, the words gurgling from the ventriloquist\'s mouth in an unstoppable mad diatribe. The makings of a wonderful stage play the narritive being what it is. Wonderful stuff, my fine fellow.
All the best,
Tony.
October 27th, 2026 07:00
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Novaselic said:
Well this was a fun read. I bet it was just as fun writing lol.
October 26th, 2026 17:02
Novaselic said:
Well this was a fun read. I bet it was just as fun writing lol.
October 26th, 2026 17:02
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
Lorenz said:
This ventriloquist leaves me voiceless !
October 26th, 2026 13:27
Lorenz said:
This ventriloquist leaves me voiceless !
October 26th, 2026 13:27
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
sorenbarrett said:
Highly creative and a fun read with crazy rhyme that bounces from one line to the next rotating and revolving it was a blast a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 13:19
sorenbarrett said:
Highly creative and a fun read with crazy rhyme that bounces from one line to the next rotating and revolving it was a blast a fave my friend
October 26th, 2026 13:19
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
orchidee said:
Aghh! Mondays! lol. A glugging sound, scary, terrifying,.... lol.
October 26th, 2026 12:04
orchidee said:
Aghh! Mondays! lol. A glugging sound, scary, terrifying,.... lol.
October 26th, 2026 12:04
Devilishly Dreadful: Valentine\'s Voice
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully Gothic my friend
October 26th, 2026 10:59
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
wonderfully Gothic my friend
October 26th, 2026 10:59
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