Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Thirty Seconds
orchidee said:
Yes, a Mr P. Solus takes 30 seconds to eat a can of spinach! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:41
orchidee said:
Yes, a Mr P. Solus takes 30 seconds to eat a can of spinach! lol.
June 4th, 2026 10:41
the road to unknowing
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like the title, the image of Bilbo setting out coming to mind, then I find out it\'s Odysseus!
June 3rd, 2026 18:33
Mutley Ravishes said:
I like the title, the image of Bilbo setting out coming to mind, then I find out it\'s Odysseus!
June 3rd, 2026 18:33
the road to unknowing
orchidee said:
And now my poem, inspired by your pic in this poem. It begins: \'Out of the night, A sound of gluggery, An ominous sound - We knows who it is...\' Further verses mention Mr O.W. Kenobi and Ol\' Tom. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:49
orchidee said:
And now my poem, inspired by your pic in this poem. It begins: \'Out of the night, A sound of gluggery, An ominous sound - We knows who it is...\' Further verses mention Mr O.W. Kenobi and Ol\' Tom. lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:49
the road to unknowing
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on a mythical journey into the depths of existence, where one encounters profound truths and specters of the past, as embodied by Achilles\' shade.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
Friendship said:
Well written. Your poem focuses on a mythical journey into the depths of existence, where one encounters profound truths and specters of the past, as embodied by Achilles\' shade.
June 3rd, 2026 11:42
the road to unknowing
orchidee said:
I\'m unknowing this - a spot of apophatic-ism. A non-existent word there? lol.
I dunno wot I\'m on about. Popeye asks - is it related to spinach? He asks that about everything, of course! lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:39
orchidee said:
I\'m unknowing this - a spot of apophatic-ism. A non-existent word there? lol.
I dunno wot I\'m on about. Popeye asks - is it related to spinach? He asks that about everything, of course! lol.
June 3rd, 2026 11:39
the road to unknowing
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from horses and protect my shins at all costs.
Beware of Greeks baring gifts come to mind.
June 3rd, 2026 10:07
Paul Bell said:
This is why I stay away from horses and protect my shins at all costs.
Beware of Greeks baring gifts come to mind.
June 3rd, 2026 10:07
the road to unknowing
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Odyssues had quite a trip on a ship while Achilles had to see a pediatrist good write my friend
June 3rd, 2026 10:06
sorenbarrett said:
Indeed Odyssues had quite a trip on a ship while Achilles had to see a pediatrist good write my friend
June 3rd, 2026 10:06
Renewable Hope
Waiting for Silence said:
I really like the passion and honesty in your voice—it feels personal and sincere. With a bit more simplicity and flow, the message could connect even more deeply. good one
June 3rd, 2026 06:32
Waiting for Silence said:
I really like the passion and honesty in your voice—it feels personal and sincere. With a bit more simplicity and flow, the message could connect even more deeply. good one
June 3rd, 2026 06:32
Nightingale
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful cry for help.An enjoyable read mi amigo
June 2nd, 2026 20:50
David Wakeling said:
A beautiful cry for help.An enjoyable read mi amigo
June 2nd, 2026 20:50
Nightingale
arqios said:
Several points of view and experiences threading along almost simultaneously. 🙏🕊️
June 2nd, 2026 20:43
arqios said:
Several points of view and experiences threading along almost simultaneously. 🙏🕊️
June 2nd, 2026 20:43
Nightingale
orchidee said:
Doh! The sound of a glug drowned out the poor nightingale! lol.
June 2nd, 2026 13:02
orchidee said:
Doh! The sound of a glug drowned out the poor nightingale! lol.
June 2nd, 2026 13:02
Nightingale
sorenbarrett said:
Ah my friend here we have a great example of a contradiction \"as blank as a cloud-filled sky\" Led astray, the reader goes on. But is not a cloud filled sky full not blank? Is it you that can not sing freely or is it that you are feely perched up in the sky. I love such ambiguities for it gives such freedom of interpretation. Well done Tristan
June 2nd, 2026 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
Ah my friend here we have a great example of a contradiction \"as blank as a cloud-filled sky\" Led astray, the reader goes on. But is not a cloud filled sky full not blank? Is it you that can not sing freely or is it that you are feely perched up in the sky. I love such ambiguities for it gives such freedom of interpretation. Well done Tristan
June 2nd, 2026 09:36
simply because
NafisaSB said:
people jump to conclusions so easily, and are quick to brand the unsuccessful and homeless as vagrants - what a pity they are unable to penetrate through the deep layers..good write up on security and its different layers...
June 2nd, 2026 02:24
NafisaSB said:
people jump to conclusions so easily, and are quick to brand the unsuccessful and homeless as vagrants - what a pity they are unable to penetrate through the deep layers..good write up on security and its different layers...
June 2nd, 2026 02:24
Renewable Hope
cellinic said:
A deep and sincere write with sensible and well-based meanings and emotional background. A fave, my friend!
June 1st, 2026 20:55
cellinic said:
A deep and sincere write with sensible and well-based meanings and emotional background. A fave, my friend!
June 1st, 2026 20:55
Renewable Hope
Fränz Müller said:
Very well written. We do indeed need to study to show ourselves approved. Just because someone stands behind a pulpit or on a bima or cries from a minaret does not mean they are telling you the truth. We need be not just cautious consumers but attentive students of our faith.
June 1st, 2026 20:31
Fränz Müller said:
Very well written. We do indeed need to study to show ourselves approved. Just because someone stands behind a pulpit or on a bima or cries from a minaret does not mean they are telling you the truth. We need be not just cautious consumers but attentive students of our faith.
June 1st, 2026 20:31
Renewable Hope
Kevin Hulme said:
I keep God in my own way . You said it all here.
June 1st, 2026 20:30
Kevin Hulme said:
I keep God in my own way . You said it all here.
June 1st, 2026 20:30
Renewable Hope
Mutley Ravishes said:
Did this one just flow out of you, Tristan?!
June 1st, 2026 19:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
Did this one just flow out of you, Tristan?!
June 1st, 2026 19:25
Renewable Hope
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem conveys a message about the importance of authenticity, love, and transformation in the face of societal and institutional conformity. The poet expresses a desire to inspire hope and reform, particularly within the Church, urging a departure from dogma and a movement towards a more open and loving approach to faith.
June 1st, 2026 18:27
Friendship said:
A powerful write. Your poem conveys a message about the importance of authenticity, love, and transformation in the face of societal and institutional conformity. The poet expresses a desire to inspire hope and reform, particularly within the Church, urging a departure from dogma and a movement towards a more open and loving approach to faith.
June 1st, 2026 18:27
Renewable Hope
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.For me it speaks of the \"truth\" being given to people but rather than being grateful they being challenging and arguing.All that is wanting is hope but they often can\'t see it.Very topical when applied to the Iran/ Israel crisis.Made me think compadre
June 1st, 2026 17:50
David Wakeling said:
This is amazing.For me it speaks of the \"truth\" being given to people but rather than being grateful they being challenging and arguing.All that is wanting is hope but they often can\'t see it.Very topical when applied to the Iran/ Israel crisis.Made me think compadre
June 1st, 2026 17:50
Renewable Hope
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Absolutely beautiful and well understood my friend. Thank you for these words. Stay blessed!! #BeTru2U
June 1st, 2026 16:30
Amber D. Petty Patrick said:
Absolutely beautiful and well understood my friend. Thank you for these words. Stay blessed!! #BeTru2U
June 1st, 2026 16:30
Renewable Hope
Paul Bell said:
How can something so simple like religion become so entangled in dogma that it completely loses all identity.
You can see why agnostics go through life happy.
Maybe being religious outside the church is the way to go.
June 1st, 2026 15:39
Paul Bell said:
How can something so simple like religion become so entangled in dogma that it completely loses all identity.
You can see why agnostics go through life happy.
Maybe being religious outside the church is the way to go.
June 1st, 2026 15:39
Renewable Hope
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved the ABAB rhyme scheme it takes an ordinary poem and makes it more. The message of this poem is close to my heart telling others that conformity has its place but not in one\'s beliefs or values. A lovely write my friend and a fave
June 1st, 2026 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
I have always loved the ABAB rhyme scheme it takes an ordinary poem and makes it more. The message of this poem is close to my heart telling others that conformity has its place but not in one\'s beliefs or values. A lovely write my friend and a fave
June 1st, 2026 10:50
Not the Park
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem deals with themes of endurance, isolation, conflict with authority, and the complexities of human agency within organized structures. It raises questions about how collective efforts can both support and undermine individual causes.
May 31st, 2026 19:32
Friendship said:
Well done. Your poem deals with themes of endurance, isolation, conflict with authority, and the complexities of human agency within organized structures. It raises questions about how collective efforts can both support and undermine individual causes.
May 31st, 2026 19:32
Not the Park
David Wakeling said:
This very clever.Quite a lot in a small space.From Fortitude to endurance and failure.Its all hereExcellent.Made me think.
May 31st, 2026 17:02
David Wakeling said:
This very clever.Quite a lot in a small space.From Fortitude to endurance and failure.Its all hereExcellent.Made me think.
May 31st, 2026 17:02
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