Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
the ghost
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this brought me flashbacks. When twenty one years old I was driving in a hurry through a residential area my attention diverted I came back to see a young boy on the sidewalk right in front of my car going forty miles an hour I was able to swerve out of the way and avoided hitting the child. The memory serves as a ghost to me to this day of what might have been and a reminder to always pay attention and stay at a low speed in residential areas. It still haunts me and I look at it as possibly saving others as well. A powerful write for me and on the basis of that power a fave
October 9th, 2026 08:27
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan this brought me flashbacks. When twenty one years old I was driving in a hurry through a residential area my attention diverted I came back to see a young boy on the sidewalk right in front of my car going forty miles an hour I was able to swerve out of the way and avoided hitting the child. The memory serves as a ghost to me to this day of what might have been and a reminder to always pay attention and stay at a low speed in residential areas. It still haunts me and I look at it as possibly saving others as well. A powerful write for me and on the basis of that power a fave
October 9th, 2026 08:27
the ghost
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A close brush with death that never was, fine write
October 9th, 2026 08:24
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A close brush with death that never was, fine write
October 9th, 2026 08:24
pecking order
Syd said:
Certainly never desired by me Tristan.
Clever write 👏 Really enjoyed 😉
- Syd 🍄
October 9th, 2026 04:22
Syd said:
Certainly never desired by me Tristan.
Clever write 👏 Really enjoyed 😉
- Syd 🍄
October 9th, 2026 04:22
pecking order
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
No connections a life of rejections. On the low rung of the ladder, the poor chicken, resumé in hand and not a chance. a tale of woe the world over.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 14:45
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
No connections a life of rejections. On the low rung of the ladder, the poor chicken, resumé in hand and not a chance. a tale of woe the world over.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 8th, 2026 14:45
pecking order
Teddy.15 said:
LoL so catchy, you will find me on a beach in the Maldives with not a care in the world! 🐔
October 8th, 2026 12:34
Teddy.15 said:
LoL so catchy, you will find me on a beach in the Maldives with not a care in the world! 🐔
October 8th, 2026 12:34
pecking order
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid fire rhyme through this work. Short lines accentuate this. Well done my friend
October 8th, 2026 09:16
sorenbarrett said:
Love the rapid fire rhyme through this work. Short lines accentuate this. Well done my friend
October 8th, 2026 09:16
pecking order
Kevin Hulme said:
Been on a few Work Interviews and Never got the Job. You said a lot in a few Words.
October 8th, 2026 09:12
Kevin Hulme said:
Been on a few Work Interviews and Never got the Job. You said a lot in a few Words.
October 8th, 2026 09:12
pecking order
arqios said:
Too many have been thus derailed from the once overarching American dream.
October 8th, 2026 08:58
arqios said:
Too many have been thus derailed from the once overarching American dream.
October 8th, 2026 08:58
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
Paul Bell said:
You can see why Britain ruled great parts of the world, we were bastards.
Now the world has come back to haunt us and we hate them even more.
Isn\'t history great, it can be distorted but it can\'t lie.
October 8th, 2026 07:42
Paul Bell said:
You can see why Britain ruled great parts of the world, we were bastards.
Now the world has come back to haunt us and we hate them even more.
Isn\'t history great, it can be distorted but it can\'t lie.
October 8th, 2026 07:42
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey,Tristan. Is this dude David Brainerd (April 20, 1718 – October 9, 1747), an American Presbyterian minister? He is someone I know nothing about (although most respondees here seem very familiar with him) The incident involving the burning church is equally elusive. Feel I\'m on the outer here...
October 7th, 2026 16:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey,Tristan. Is this dude David Brainerd (April 20, 1718 – October 9, 1747), an American Presbyterian minister? He is someone I know nothing about (although most respondees here seem very familiar with him) The incident involving the burning church is equally elusive. Feel I\'m on the outer here...
October 7th, 2026 16:17
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant just like you dear Tristan. 🌹
October 7th, 2026 15:58
Teddy.15 said:
Powerful and brilliant just like you dear Tristan. 🌹
October 7th, 2026 15:58
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
orchidee said:
A martyr - only aged about 29?
Popeye\'s burning piles of old spinach. lol.
October 7th, 2026 10:15
orchidee said:
A martyr - only aged about 29?
Popeye\'s burning piles of old spinach. lol.
October 7th, 2026 10:15
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
Kevin Hulme said:
If that wasn\'t bad enough: We gave you The Spice Girls.
October 7th, 2026 09:25
Kevin Hulme said:
If that wasn\'t bad enough: We gave you The Spice Girls.
October 7th, 2026 09:25
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
Succinctly blunt in brilliance in the art of poetry. Talk about, hitting the nail on the head. Excellent, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 08:38
Tony Grannell said:
Dear, Tristan,
Succinctly blunt in brilliance in the art of poetry. Talk about, hitting the nail on the head. Excellent, my friend.
You are in fine fettle, I trust,
Tony.
October 7th, 2026 08:38
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
sorenbarrett said:
Those were tough times and sides were split but I suppose that was not proper etiquette. War makes many things that are improper, proper. I guess it could have been worse. Nicely written Tristan
October 7th, 2026 08:17
sorenbarrett said:
Those were tough times and sides were split but I suppose that was not proper etiquette. War makes many things that are improper, proper. I guess it could have been worse. Nicely written Tristan
October 7th, 2026 08:17
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
arqios said:
Quickest ballad ever! Most delectable save the unsavoury back and forth between belligerent parties. But there we go, history bare and unapologetic.
October 7th, 2026 07:31
arqios said:
Quickest ballad ever! Most delectable save the unsavoury back and forth between belligerent parties. But there we go, history bare and unapologetic.
October 7th, 2026 07:31
The Ballad of Reverend Brainerd
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Truth definitely applied my friend
October 7th, 2026 07:24
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Truth definitely applied my friend
October 7th, 2026 07:24
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
Teddy.15 said:
LOL language hilarious and I could hear you read this one in my head. Sweet as sugar my friend. 🩷
October 7th, 2026 01:41
Teddy.15 said:
LOL language hilarious and I could hear you read this one in my head. Sweet as sugar my friend. 🩷
October 7th, 2026 01:41
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
Kevin Hulme said:
Julie Newmar as Catwoman. My kind of Feline.
A good Write.
October 6th, 2026 18:31
Kevin Hulme said:
Julie Newmar as Catwoman. My kind of Feline.
A good Write.
October 6th, 2026 18:31
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A soft appealing write my friend
October 6th, 2026 12:13
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
A soft appealing write my friend
October 6th, 2026 12:13
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s feeding his kitten spinach, Ol\' Tom\'s knitting some \'warmer\' thing for it. Dunno how Obi\'s sabre fits in here. lol.
October 6th, 2026 12:10
orchidee said:
Good write T. Popeye\'s feeding his kitten spinach, Ol\' Tom\'s knitting some \'warmer\' thing for it. Dunno how Obi\'s sabre fits in here. lol.
October 6th, 2026 12:10
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
Paul Bell said:
Cats are great, they do their own thing, and if that\'s eating next doors pigeons, so be it.
Unlike dogs that demand fifteen walks a day, and if that\'s not bad enough, the vet says I shouldn\'t be feeding him fudge brownies.
October 6th, 2026 10:28
Paul Bell said:
Cats are great, they do their own thing, and if that\'s eating next doors pigeons, so be it.
Unlike dogs that demand fifteen walks a day, and if that\'s not bad enough, the vet says I shouldn\'t be feeding him fudge brownies.
October 6th, 2026 10:28
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Smitten myself when it comes to kittens, ice tea and brownies. The sweeter side of your good self, a child at heart.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 6th, 2026 10:15
Tony Grannell said:
Hello, Tristan,
Smitten myself when it comes to kittens, ice tea and brownies. The sweeter side of your good self, a child at heart.
Fond regards,
Tony.
October 6th, 2026 10:15
Fluffy Feline Frenzy
sorenbarrett said:
Soft and sweet this poetic treat. Nicely done Tristan.
October 6th, 2026 09:38
sorenbarrett said:
Soft and sweet this poetic treat. Nicely done Tristan.
October 6th, 2026 09:38
Devilishly Dreadful: The Boy Detective; or, the Crimes of the Collective
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Powerful writing.
October 6th, 2026 08:02
Thomas W Case said:
Brilliant. Powerful writing.
October 6th, 2026 08:02
Devilishly Dreadful: The Boy Detective; or, the Crimes of the Collective
Paul Bell said:
I remember the days when a tranny was a radio you took into church to listen to, whilst the vicar cast scorn over rock \' n \' roll.
Roll on today, take a tranny into church, and wow, the wrath of god is upon you.
Plebs and Presidents now walk amongst us, though one might be in an armoured car to keep the tranny\'s away.
Even God has demanded the rib back off Eve, realising that rib had tilted Adam in a direction even he hadn\'t heard of.
Can\'t wait for part 2. Why can\'t straight people get into the LGBT, half price beer night.
October 5th, 2026 13:59
Paul Bell said:
I remember the days when a tranny was a radio you took into church to listen to, whilst the vicar cast scorn over rock \' n \' roll.
Roll on today, take a tranny into church, and wow, the wrath of god is upon you.
Plebs and Presidents now walk amongst us, though one might be in an armoured car to keep the tranny\'s away.
Even God has demanded the rib back off Eve, realising that rib had tilted Adam in a direction even he hadn\'t heard of.
Can\'t wait for part 2. Why can\'t straight people get into the LGBT, half price beer night.
October 5th, 2026 13:59
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