Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Defy
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
sorenbarrett said:
A poem of depth defying expectations in exchange for a solid rooted knowledge. This poem does just that in a unique rhyme pattern and format. My father\'s moto was if you\'re not five minutes early you are late. My mother was always late, not by five minutes but much more. I saw the conflict first hand between conformity and who you are. One need not be a rebel to be oneself, there is no rebellion just being that is enough. A fave my friend
April 6th, 2025 08:07
Enemy
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
NafisaSB said:
you have given us so much to ponder about - some of these thoughts come to us too - glad you put them in verse, and asked the world..
April 6th, 2025 02:37
Serpentine Seduction
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
orchidee said:
I shertainly can\'t shay all thish poem after a ginsh of threesh! lol.
April 5th, 2025 10:18
Serpentine Seduction
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
A masterpiece of alliteration that like the snake unnoticed until it is too close it bites before you know it. Very nicely done Tristan
April 5th, 2025 07:09
Serpentine Seduction
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
arqios said:
Super! The esses have it in thisss one! What an accomplishment 🕊🙏🏻Liked and Faved 🤩
April 5th, 2025 07:03
Viscosity
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
Courtnie McKern said:
Nicely done! I love the last line
Where ink will flow free and enter hearts to live
April 4th, 2025 20:08
Viscosity
Poetic Licence said:
Poetry is the plaster to cover the wounds and pain, that in the real world we would never show. A way of releasing those demons that torment us every day into a relatively safe environment, in the process allowing us to possibly heal but more importantly letting us that we are not alone in our struggles and experiences , enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 12:33
Poetic Licence said:
Poetry is the plaster to cover the wounds and pain, that in the real world we would never show. A way of releasing those demons that torment us every day into a relatively safe environment, in the process allowing us to possibly heal but more importantly letting us that we are not alone in our struggles and experiences , enjoyed the read
April 4th, 2025 12:33
Viscosity
Cheeky Missy said:
You cull Shakespeare adroutly herein, and too prettily too, my la! \"...in black ink my love--\" and from the initial knowledge of family to the larger reality, weave the fabric of a garment seems the world might wear. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating, intriguing, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 4th, 2025 09:57
Cheeky Missy said:
You cull Shakespeare adroutly herein, and too prettily too, my la! \"...in black ink my love--\" and from the initial knowledge of family to the larger reality, weave the fabric of a garment seems the world might wear. Gorgeously rendered with exquisite imagery and a fascinating, intriguing, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 4th, 2025 09:57
Viscosity
arqios said:
Coagulation? A funny property that kicks in during the healing process, clotting is probably a more accurate term. Could poetry be a scabbing over Lunda that refuse to heal? Mmm… fodder for thoughts🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved🤩
April 4th, 2025 08:46
arqios said:
Coagulation? A funny property that kicks in during the healing process, clotting is probably a more accurate term. Could poetry be a scabbing over Lunda that refuse to heal? Mmm… fodder for thoughts🙏🏻🕊Liked and Faved🤩
April 4th, 2025 08:46
Viscosity
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic that speaks to evolution, bonding and family. Very well written Tristan.
April 4th, 2025 08:21
sorenbarrett said:
Loved the metaphor, the wording, and the meter. This has a strong topic that speaks to evolution, bonding and family. Very well written Tristan.
April 4th, 2025 08:21
All I See Is Darkness
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
Thomas W Case said:
Powerful work. I see the budding poet.
April 3rd, 2025 22:16
All I See Is Darkness
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
arqios said:
Throwback magic! The darkness was very dark indeed 🙏🏻🕊
April 3rd, 2025 19:10
All I See Is Darkness
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
GenXer Shamrocker ☘️ said:
A beautiful write for just being 14 when written
April 3rd, 2025 12:03
All I See Is Darkness
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
orchidee said:
I told ya to turn on the light! Doh! heehee.
April 3rd, 2025 11:31
All I See Is Darkness
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
Poetic Licence said:
Very relatable to me like walking around with a permanent blindfold on, taking the authors notes that is sad to feel so low at that age, but that was me as well. The explains to me alot about the authors writing\'s and the history that formed the author, nicely expressed and written
April 3rd, 2025 10:54
All I See Is Darkness
sorenbarrett said:
An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later. It is dark and like being in a cave there is no sun and no guiding light. In its rawness it pulls at the heart.
April 3rd, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
An existential hole where we may stumble and fall in youth and even later. It is dark and like being in a cave there is no sun and no guiding light. In its rawness it pulls at the heart.
April 3rd, 2025 09:34
What the Hell?
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now that was a challenging read. Be wise as serpents, gentle as doves!
April 2nd, 2025 21:43
Mutley Ravishes said:
Now that was a challenging read. Be wise as serpents, gentle as doves!
April 2nd, 2025 21:43
These Three Things
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. Intrigued rather hopelessly, stumped by the unfolding of those three items, having chuckled initially, now I\'m left with a wry smile, is it? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Alright, you\'ve got me. Intrigued rather hopelessly, stumped by the unfolding of those three items, having chuckled initially, now I\'m left with a wry smile, is it? Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:44
A Trip
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Charming quatrains with an interesting rhyme scheme, rendering a classic format and theme to effect so beautifully, it seems familiar somehow. Fascinating and thought-provoking with great imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I like it.
April 2nd, 2025 12:40
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Charming quatrains with an interesting rhyme scheme, rendering a classic format and theme to effect so beautifully, it seems familiar somehow. Fascinating and thought-provoking with great imagery and a fitly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing. I like it.
April 2nd, 2025 12:40
Pray, Friend, You Must Pray
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and an intriguingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
Cheeky Missy said:
Fascinating and delightfully rendered with excellent imagery and an intriguingly haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
April 2nd, 2025 12:34
What the Hell?
orchidee said:
I went to a thorn bush expecting to find apples on it - doh! \'Tree know by its fruit\'. Too much here for me to comment on in detail. All I know is I can\'t have figs cos they..... Too Much Info to say why!
April 2nd, 2025 10:40
orchidee said:
I went to a thorn bush expecting to find apples on it - doh! \'Tree know by its fruit\'. Too much here for me to comment on in detail. All I know is I can\'t have figs cos they..... Too Much Info to say why!
April 2nd, 2025 10:40
What the Hell?
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in belief. I love how it is formed in a similarity of religious chants. A sarcastic presentation of what many believe but as a call to carefully think about what one says they believe. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
I have to say this poem is well said and points to many inconsistencies in belief. I love how it is formed in a similarity of religious chants. A sarcastic presentation of what many believe but as a call to carefully think about what one says they believe. A fave
April 2nd, 2025 10:31
What the Hell?
Poetic Licence said:
This write is justified, religion is more guilty than the layman of misinterpretation of the holy books , as it is these houses of faith that the layman is told what to think, do and believe, and each and everyone is there serve there own purpose and individual agenda. Enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:48
Poetic Licence said:
This write is justified, religion is more guilty than the layman of misinterpretation of the holy books , as it is these houses of faith that the layman is told what to think, do and believe, and each and everyone is there serve there own purpose and individual agenda. Enjoyed the read
April 2nd, 2025 09:48
What the Hell?
NinjaGirl said:
Profound and so frequent! People only take what they want to hear...
April 2nd, 2025 09:28
NinjaGirl said:
Profound and so frequent! People only take what they want to hear...
April 2nd, 2025 09:28
Opioid
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read of a warrior from old Japan who was tortured, and didn\'t even blink an eye. I have no way (that I know of/am capable of presently) to verify if that is a true story. Let\'s imagine it is. Then, how on earth did he do that? The only answer I can come up with is that there was no one there to feel the pain.
April 2nd, 2025 00:46
Mutley Ravishes said:
I once read of a warrior from old Japan who was tortured, and didn\'t even blink an eye. I have no way (that I know of/am capable of presently) to verify if that is a true story. Let\'s imagine it is. Then, how on earth did he do that? The only answer I can come up with is that there was no one there to feel the pain.
April 2nd, 2025 00:46
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