Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Orchi\'s Own
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
orchidee said:
Oh lol, thank you T. Oh no, now I will have to do yet another poem, explaining they are not hamsters! Nor are they related to Popeye. Go away Popeye, I never mentioned you! lol.
September 18th, 2025 11:32
To Soak in Reality
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasn’t even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan you’ve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
Demar Desu said:
Holy crap I wasn’t even born yet when this poem was written! Damn Tristan you’ve been doing this for a long time. Would you consider yourself a master poet by now?
September 18th, 2025 11:09
To Soak in Reality
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
Priya Tomar said:
Powerful !
Problems of today ... and warning for future...
September 18th, 2025 10:27
To Soak in Reality
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. 🌹
September 18th, 2025 10:22
Teddy.15 said:
Well you were way ahead of time because today the world really does suck. 🌹
September 18th, 2025 10:22
To Soak in Reality
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I deeply respect who you were and the almost uncompromising stance to tell the truth. This one is going to be my all time favourite. It resonates at all levels.
Once I was reading a book \"The Lucky Planet\" and it hit me hard that what took billions of years to form, we are about to decimate in few centuries (post Industrial Revolution). The probability of finding another planet like Earth is 1 divided by 1 followed by 26 zeros! But why should we care? Why should we care what we are living behind for our progny? So long we attain the criteria of being successful- all well, all good. Even the word greed is feeling ashamed.
September 18th, 2025 09:39
To Soak in Reality
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
sorenbarrett said:
Strong words on a painful subject that cries out for redress. I don\'t consider myself an environmentalist but instead a preventalist and for that it is too late. A conservationist yes to a point. Too many people demanding too much from a planet not designed for it. A powerful message in this write. Well done my friend
September 18th, 2025 09:07
Orchi\'s Own
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
Fína Elara 🌙 Petra Patrice said:
This poem is playful, lighthearted, and humorous. Orichdee in a teasing and affectionate way. It reads like a fun tribute with a personal touch. Nicely written.
September 17th, 2025 15:42
Orchi\'s Own
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Doggerel Dave said:
Who?...Oh him!.. He\'s already headed for the hills...but will come back when he thinks the furore is over......
September 17th, 2025 15:10
Hate\'s Finality
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragic…the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...“knowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within me”...really struck me, and that closing vow to “die unsung” lingers painfully. It’s simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Tristan Robert Lange said:
Dearest Teddy, this is tender and tragic…the longing of distant love entwined with poetry itself. That line...“knowing our hands will never touch, but you are deep within me”...really struck me, and that closing vow to “die unsung” lingers painfully. It’s simple, but it carries a heartbreaking truth. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛ And beautiful picture, my friend! Love the Dante quote too!
September 17th, 2025 10:40
Orchi\'s Own
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Friendship said:
OMG, you outdid yourself. Your poem celebrates the character of \"Orichdee,\" portraying him as a cool, funny, and trustworthy individual. It highlights the importance of being aware and respectful of others\' feelings, particularly concerning a playful yet sensitive topic involving hamsters, which serve as symbols of innocence and vulnerability. Well done, my friend,
September 17th, 2025 08:06
Orchi\'s Own
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
sorenbarrett said:
You made me laugh and for that my dear friend you get a fave. I had never thought of it that way and I won\'t mention it out of curtesy to your request and respect to one of the poets here that I dearly love but I think you have uncovered a secret that had slipped by me and I find quite endearing. A fine write.
September 17th, 2025 07:09
The Harder Way
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the tension between love and hate, particularly in the context of differing worldviews. The speaker grapples with the pain of losing someone while simultaneously rejecting their hateful perspectives. The poet matter addresses themes of acceptance, forgiveness, and the struggle to maintain love in the face of ideological differences
September 16th, 2025 20:16
Friendship said:
The poem revolves around the tension between love and hate, particularly in the context of differing worldviews. The speaker grapples with the pain of losing someone while simultaneously rejecting their hateful perspectives. The poet matter addresses themes of acceptance, forgiveness, and the struggle to maintain love in the face of ideological differences
September 16th, 2025 20:16
The Harder Way
NinjaGirl said:
This--this is it. It\'s not that I agreed with all he said, but often he was kind, and understanding. There were times where he wasn\'t, perhaps several, but the celebration of his death is where I can turn against my own.
September 16th, 2025 09:33
NinjaGirl said:
This--this is it. It\'s not that I agreed with all he said, but often he was kind, and understanding. There were times where he wasn\'t, perhaps several, but the celebration of his death is where I can turn against my own.
September 16th, 2025 09:33
The Harder Way
RSM0812 said:
I liked your poem. I agree with much of your main poi t also. Please dont forget though that ecery human being deservs to have their own opinions. His death is trajic and hostile. It et again proves the confusion a.d mental processes of a society that renders the heart only to the money and increase in capaplist ideolgy. However imperfect our best is. Live and let live. That always been my philosophy. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:21
RSM0812 said:
I liked your poem. I agree with much of your main poi t also. Please dont forget though that ecery human being deservs to have their own opinions. His death is trajic and hostile. It et again proves the confusion a.d mental processes of a society that renders the heart only to the money and increase in capaplist ideolgy. However imperfect our best is. Live and let live. That always been my philosophy. Nice write.
September 16th, 2025 09:21
The Harder Way
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant write.
A great poem of values....
September 16th, 2025 08:17
Priya Tomar said:
Brilliant write.
A great poem of values....
September 16th, 2025 08:17
The Harder Way
Demar Desu said:
Way to empathize and still dance with your own feelings. I find it very strange that the people who are mourning his death is wanting the death penalty for the one who committed the crime… it just never makes sense to me. Still all life has value… today I lost my beta fish… sigh
September 16th, 2025 08:12
Demar Desu said:
Way to empathize and still dance with your own feelings. I find it very strange that the people who are mourning his death is wanting the death penalty for the one who committed the crime… it just never makes sense to me. Still all life has value… today I lost my beta fish… sigh
September 16th, 2025 08:12
The Harder Way
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant poem. Humane, empathetic, yet unwavering on the moral stance. I wouldn\'t diminsh it\'s impact with a mere \'loved it\'. Let me say- I respected it.
September 16th, 2025 08:04
rebellion_in_sanity said:
A brilliant poem. Humane, empathetic, yet unwavering on the moral stance. I wouldn\'t diminsh it\'s impact with a mere \'loved it\'. Let me say- I respected it.
September 16th, 2025 08:04
The Harder Way
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know about that, Tristan - The murder was wrong, but now that he is gone it would be good to forget him - with some relief.
Wish I could do an acrostic - if I could find a subject worthy of the effort you put into that one.
September 16th, 2025 07:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t know about that, Tristan - The murder was wrong, but now that he is gone it would be good to forget him - with some relief.
Wish I could do an acrostic - if I could find a subject worthy of the effort you put into that one.
September 16th, 2025 07:51
The Harder Way
sorenbarrett said:
A mature view that can never condone cutting off freedom of speech by killing the speaker that is the higher value despite how we feel about the speech itself. Some people become the evil they fight and fighting fire with fire leaves the whole building burnt. Very nicely done Tristan
September 16th, 2025 07:47
sorenbarrett said:
A mature view that can never condone cutting off freedom of speech by killing the speaker that is the higher value despite how we feel about the speech itself. Some people become the evil they fight and fighting fire with fire leaves the whole building burnt. Very nicely done Tristan
September 16th, 2025 07:47
Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! This flowed so well, I could here the voice in my head. A great write.
September 16th, 2025 02:06
Tom Dylan said:
Wonderful! This flowed so well, I could here the voice in my head. A great write.
September 16th, 2025 02:06
Under the Corn Moon Spell
NafisaSB said:
one can almost feel the darkness and the terror - it has been so well described..great work
September 16th, 2025 00:37
NafisaSB said:
one can almost feel the darkness and the terror - it has been so well described..great work
September 16th, 2025 00:37
Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place
NinjaGirl said:
That got progressively harder for me to read...but I like a challenge! Understanding the context is definitely key, and I love your creativity!
September 15th, 2025 21:52
NinjaGirl said:
That got progressively harder for me to read...but I like a challenge! Understanding the context is definitely key, and I love your creativity!
September 15th, 2025 21:52
Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place
Doggerel Dave said:
Wotcher Tristan. I was born not far away - a hop step and a jump from the location of the happenings you recount,...and just a teensy bit later too...
Loved the script - the vocals? I fink you are a bloody foreigner from Portsmouth or Dorset or somewhere close😉... or perhaps I\'m going a bit deaf...
It\'s a full on creepy one this and I look forward to the rest of the series. (With respect to them meat pies.. glad I\'m vegetarian...)
September 15th, 2025 19:17
Doggerel Dave said:
Wotcher Tristan. I was born not far away - a hop step and a jump from the location of the happenings you recount,...and just a teensy bit later too...
Loved the script - the vocals? I fink you are a bloody foreigner from Portsmouth or Dorset or somewhere close😉... or perhaps I\'m going a bit deaf...
It\'s a full on creepy one this and I look forward to the rest of the series. (With respect to them meat pies.. glad I\'m vegetarian...)
September 15th, 2025 19:17
Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place
Teddy.15 said:
Deliciously dark, you got to love the spirits, a most wonderful London town atmosphere if I may indeed say so. I\'ll take my hat off to you. 🌹
September 15th, 2025 14:01
Teddy.15 said:
Deliciously dark, you got to love the spirits, a most wonderful London town atmosphere if I may indeed say so. I\'ll take my hat off to you. 🌹
September 15th, 2025 14:01
Devilishly Dreadful: Resting Place
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought to mind the Jack the Ripper murders in Spitalfields and White Chapel in London The vernacular aids in the recounting of murder setting the scene and the cutting of throats is poignant in view of the last murder on a train in North Carolina where a girl\'s throat was cut from behind. Dark and the cadence of repeated lines aided in the sense of madness. Lovely and a fave
September 15th, 2025 10:13
sorenbarrett said:
This one brought to mind the Jack the Ripper murders in Spitalfields and White Chapel in London The vernacular aids in the recounting of murder setting the scene and the cutting of throats is poignant in view of the last murder on a train in North Carolina where a girl\'s throat was cut from behind. Dark and the cadence of repeated lines aided in the sense of madness. Lovely and a fave
September 15th, 2025 10:13
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