Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Echoes of Inevitability
Poetic Licence said:
This one could easily have many answers, but i have often wondered why people in general only remember the good memories, is it because that is what they remember or are they protecting their own emotions and feelings from the pain. I guess everyone has their own way. Loved reading this and a Fav for today
January 29th, 2025 10:44
Poetic Licence said:
This one could easily have many answers, but i have often wondered why people in general only remember the good memories, is it because that is what they remember or are they protecting their own emotions and feelings from the pain. I guess everyone has their own way. Loved reading this and a Fav for today
January 29th, 2025 10:44
Echoes of Inevitability
sorenbarrett said:
A question I have heard form books, films, and many people and all have a different answer. Well expressed in your poem are the different aspects of loss and in fine can we console ourselves with the transcience of life and relationships? Or do we invent ways to hold on through belief, hope and memories. Lovely write
January 29th, 2025 09:05
sorenbarrett said:
A question I have heard form books, films, and many people and all have a different answer. Well expressed in your poem are the different aspects of loss and in fine can we console ourselves with the transcience of life and relationships? Or do we invent ways to hold on through belief, hope and memories. Lovely write
January 29th, 2025 09:05
You
arqios said:
What Iβve observed in such βentanglement β is that they choose to be somewhat close by but never participate in or build the other or the relationship, always with the upper hand and most possibly always calling the shots, taking for granted the other who makes up the tandem. ππ»ππ»π
January 29th, 2025 08:22
arqios said:
What Iβve observed in such βentanglement β is that they choose to be somewhat close by but never participate in or build the other or the relationship, always with the upper hand and most possibly always calling the shots, taking for granted the other who makes up the tandem. ππ»ππ»π
January 29th, 2025 08:22
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you - good write
so many amendments, and yet has it brought about positive change ? i wonder
January 29th, 2025 07:35
NafisaSB said:
i agree with you - good write
so many amendments, and yet has it brought about positive change ? i wonder
January 29th, 2025 07:35
You
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, a very
touching, poignant π’
and heart breaking write! π
Skillfully expressed my friend!!π―
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
January 28th, 2025 20:32
Thad Wilk said:
Awww, a very
touching, poignant π’
and heart breaking write! π
Skillfully expressed my friend!!π―
Best regards βοΈ peace Thad
January 28th, 2025 20:32
You
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the story of Hakuin (Japanese Zen priest) and the baby he supposedly fathered? That guy was on another level!
If a stranger says something \"hurtful\" to us it\'s not usually such a big deal. If someone we love says it then it\'s a big deal, isn\'t it?! I think this is one of the biggest challenges we face as people. One I still struggle with!
January 28th, 2025 18:30
Mutley Ravishes said:
Have you heard the story of Hakuin (Japanese Zen priest) and the baby he supposedly fathered? That guy was on another level!
If a stranger says something \"hurtful\" to us it\'s not usually such a big deal. If someone we love says it then it\'s a big deal, isn\'t it?! I think this is one of the biggest challenges we face as people. One I still struggle with!
January 28th, 2025 18:30
You
sorenbarrett said:
A poem percieved deprication by one that should be important to the narrator. It speaks to many or our inner selves that feel neglected and overlooked. Nicely written
January 28th, 2025 11:41
sorenbarrett said:
A poem percieved deprication by one that should be important to the narrator. It speaks to many or our inner selves that feel neglected and overlooked. Nicely written
January 28th, 2025 11:41
You
Poetic Licence said:
This very much reminds me of when i was married, completely unaware of the hurt she was causing, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 09:50
Poetic Licence said:
This very much reminds me of when i was married, completely unaware of the hurt she was causing, enjoyed the read
January 28th, 2025 09:50
Deep in My Bed
Neville said:
Been there and done that .. some of us find it a blessing and others much more of a curse .. I kind of switch from one to another depending on all sorts of things going on around me ..
January 28th, 2025 09:38
Neville said:
Been there and done that .. some of us find it a blessing and others much more of a curse .. I kind of switch from one to another depending on all sorts of things going on around me ..
January 28th, 2025 09:38
Deep in My Bed
arqios said:
If I slept alone I would hardly sleep as thoughts would keep me up the whole night. I guess that makes me a social sleeper? π΄ π€
January 28th, 2025 05:06
arqios said:
If I slept alone I would hardly sleep as thoughts would keep me up the whole night. I guess that makes me a social sleeper? π΄ π€
January 28th, 2025 05:06
Deep in My Bed
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Wow! Great brevity!! π€©
Some nights
the same exact thing
happens to me?ΒΏ π³
Great read, relatable too!
Best regards my friend!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 27th, 2025 22:15
Thad Wilk said:
ππ
Wow! Great brevity!! π€©
Some nights
the same exact thing
happens to me?ΒΏ π³
Great read, relatable too!
Best regards my friend!!
Best regards βοΈ Thad
January 27th, 2025 22:15
Deep in My Bed
NinjaGirl said:
So so relatable... had this feeling just last night
January 27th, 2025 21:47
NinjaGirl said:
So so relatable... had this feeling just last night
January 27th, 2025 21:47
Deep in My Bed
sorenbarrett said:
Wow and after the Christmas season too. I think I know what you mean Tristan and so well put.
January 27th, 2025 12:15
sorenbarrett said:
Wow and after the Christmas season too. I think I know what you mean Tristan and so well put.
January 27th, 2025 12:15
Deep in My Bed
Poetic Licence said:
Are you thinking of good things ?, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:37
Poetic Licence said:
Are you thinking of good things ?, enjoyed the read
January 27th, 2025 11:37
Deep in My Bed
aDarkerMind said:
you have a talent my friend,
and I will never tire of saying so;
January 27th, 2025 11:06
aDarkerMind said:
you have a talent my friend,
and I will never tire of saying so;
January 27th, 2025 11:06
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Freedoms are signed away by a rich manβs sidewinder.\" - just wow!!!
January 26th, 2025 05:35
rebellion_in_sanity said:
\"Freedoms are signed away by a rich manβs sidewinder.\" - just wow!!!
January 26th, 2025 05:35
The Song You Taught Me
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I often feel disillusioned when people change their colours, especially those who had been my guiding light. This poem has put in words and verses the feeling of disilusioment and anger. I wish I could write something like this. Great work
January 26th, 2025 05:30
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I often feel disillusioned when people change their colours, especially those who had been my guiding light. This poem has put in words and verses the feeling of disilusioment and anger. I wish I could write something like this. Great work
January 26th, 2025 05:30
The Song You Taught Me
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
poetic pictorial!! ππ€©
Intriguing and mesmerizing,
AND \"artfully woven\"! βββ
My pleasure indeed to read!!
Thanks for sharing my friend
Best regards βοΈ ποΈ Thad
January 25th, 2025 21:48
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
poetic pictorial!! ππ€©
Intriguing and mesmerizing,
AND \"artfully woven\"! βββ
My pleasure indeed to read!!
Thanks for sharing my friend
Best regards βοΈ ποΈ Thad
January 25th, 2025 21:48
The Song You Taught Me
Cassie58 said:
I see division or separation here where once there was unity. Whether personal or in politics or even faith, that is one huge challenge to contemplate. You have to be true to yourself. Another fine write dear Tristen. I admire very much your prolific poetry. Your muse serves you very well indeed. Mine needs her arm twisted :)
January 25th, 2025 14:33
Cassie58 said:
I see division or separation here where once there was unity. Whether personal or in politics or even faith, that is one huge challenge to contemplate. You have to be true to yourself. Another fine write dear Tristen. I admire very much your prolific poetry. Your muse serves you very well indeed. Mine needs her arm twisted :)
January 25th, 2025 14:33
The Rich Man\'s Sidewinder
Cassie58 said:
At the stroke of a pen how much damage can be inflicted. A very topical write Tristen. I hope it is limited, but I am not very optimistic my friend. Very well composed.
January 25th, 2025 14:14
Cassie58 said:
At the stroke of a pen how much damage can be inflicted. A very topical write Tristen. I hope it is limited, but I am not very optimistic my friend. Very well composed.
January 25th, 2025 14:14
The Song You Taught Me
LP2187 said:
A great, emotional poem, really resonated with me. Enjoyed the read!
January 25th, 2025 11:59
LP2187 said:
A great, emotional poem, really resonated with me. Enjoyed the read!
January 25th, 2025 11:59
The Song You Taught Me
arqios said:
Faith is interconnected and sometimes we travel at different speeds and intensities. We could only run our course, pick a line/lane and follow through. Some appear to fall behind, but the Game Master knows best the Game Plan, I am so waiting to be surprised at the End Game!
January 25th, 2025 08:44
arqios said:
Faith is interconnected and sometimes we travel at different speeds and intensities. We could only run our course, pick a line/lane and follow through. Some appear to fall behind, but the Game Master knows best the Game Plan, I am so waiting to be surprised at the End Game!
January 25th, 2025 08:44
The Song You Taught Me
sorenbarrett said:
Very personal yet so applicable it reaches me personally. For those with the anchor of faith they remain in one place but to those adrift currents carry them to other shores. They may remain the same people but now separated by oceans of belief. Again loved the format that funneled one down to single word thoughts. We are all sailors on a vast sea.
January 25th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
Very personal yet so applicable it reaches me personally. For those with the anchor of faith they remain in one place but to those adrift currents carry them to other shores. They may remain the same people but now separated by oceans of belief. Again loved the format that funneled one down to single word thoughts. We are all sailors on a vast sea.
January 25th, 2025 08:08
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