Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Stasis Will Replace Us
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Doggerel Dave said:
I find as much significance in the structure of your works as the actual content, Tristan. Master artworks of themselves. Good value there alone.
June 29th, 2025 17:49
Stasis Will Replace Us
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
orchidee said:
A friend of Obi\'s in that pic? How on earth did I relate Obi into this? lol.
June 29th, 2025 11:11
Stasis Will Replace Us
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
Poetic Licence said:
A deep and complex write, to be honest is way above my station, am enjoying trying to figure it out
June 29th, 2025 09:44
The Judge
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Cheeky Missy said:
\"...yea, I judge not mine own self.\" (1 Corinthians 4:3c) and \"...which were born, not of blood, nor of the will of the flesh, nor of the will of man, but of God.\" (John 1:13) And, \"...with men this is impossible; but with God all things are possible.\" (Matthew 19:26b) I guess my point originally and still is: what power have we, truly? It seems to me we haven\'t even the power to save our own selves...\"who can say, I have made my heart clean, I am pure from my sin?\" (Proverbs 20:9) You know? Excellently rendered in exquisite brevity with a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:58
Stasis Will Replace Us
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Cheeky Missy said:
La dee, what on earth is this seeming half incantation?! \"...if I say, surely the darkness will cover me; even the night shall be light about me. Yea, the darkness hideth not from Thee; but the night shineth as the day: the darkness and the light are both alike to Thee.\" (Psalm 139: 11-12) Read the whole little chapter...I can\'t rightly say, but \"...there is forgiveness with Thee that Thou mightest be feared\" This is a fascinating, intriguing little number. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 29th, 2025 08:44
Stasis Will Replace Us
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
arqios said:
In the hush of moonlit stillness, the cosmos reveals both beauty and unease—shimmering with wonder, yet pierced by the ache of fragmentation. Beneath the glow, fears ferment, egos unravel, and darkness whispers through the cracks of night. The tragedy lies not in chaos, but in the trance of unchanging stasis. gripping stuff.
June 29th, 2025 07:30
Stasis Will Replace Us
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply intellectual dive into the cosmos of space and mind. Loved your continued use of format to enhance the feel of the poem. Some big words for a big universe and images as alliteration hypnotizes the reader. The las lines define the poem for me. The use of static is a vision of what remains not causation or even correlation but chaos and accompanying stasis. Very cerebral and chillingly nihilistic
June 29th, 2025 07:28
sorenbarrett said:
A deeply intellectual dive into the cosmos of space and mind. Loved your continued use of format to enhance the feel of the poem. Some big words for a big universe and images as alliteration hypnotizes the reader. The las lines define the poem for me. The use of static is a vision of what remains not causation or even correlation but chaos and accompanying stasis. Very cerebral and chillingly nihilistic
June 29th, 2025 07:28
The Judge
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan, As a person who doesn\'t believe in religion myself, I appreciate this emmencely. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 00:19
Teddy.15 said:
Dear Tristan, As a person who doesn\'t believe in religion myself, I appreciate this emmencely. 🌹
June 29th, 2025 00:19
The Judge
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they, are they likely to harm me in any way, physically or mentally. Me: that act was not up to the standards I aspire to....
I have a slight feeling I may have approached your piece from the wrong direction.....
June 28th, 2025 20:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Oh lovely Tristan, no judgements. I judge all the time: Others: do they, are they likely to harm me in any way, physically or mentally. Me: that act was not up to the standards I aspire to....
I have a slight feeling I may have approached your piece from the wrong direction.....
June 28th, 2025 20:24
The Judge
arqios said:
Yes, we judge daily and we needn’t confirm but deem and appraise what is worthy to bring with us into tomorrow 🕊️🙏🏻
June 28th, 2025 17:39
arqios said:
Yes, we judge daily and we needn’t confirm but deem and appraise what is worthy to bring with us into tomorrow 🕊️🙏🏻
June 28th, 2025 17:39
The Judge
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is no one who is equipped to judge anyone including judging ourselves, acceptance is a better use of emotion and time, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 09:51
Poetic Licence said:
I feel there is no one who is equipped to judge anyone including judging ourselves, acceptance is a better use of emotion and time, enjoyed the read
June 28th, 2025 09:51
The Judge
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Tristan. I believe it a destructive illusion that one can even judge oneself. In actuality I believe that each man does the best he can with the tools that he has and his knowledge of the moment. It is not our fault that some have fewer tools or are not in the same moment as we. What we perceive as evil or bad is nothing more than an empty toolbox or one with the wrong tools and he attempts to sink a bolt with a hammer and tighten a nut with a hacksaw. Good write and a fave
June 28th, 2025 09:28
sorenbarrett said:
Here here Tristan. I believe it a destructive illusion that one can even judge oneself. In actuality I believe that each man does the best he can with the tools that he has and his knowledge of the moment. It is not our fault that some have fewer tools or are not in the same moment as we. What we perceive as evil or bad is nothing more than an empty toolbox or one with the wrong tools and he attempts to sink a bolt with a hammer and tighten a nut with a hacksaw. Good write and a fave
June 28th, 2025 09:28
The Exorcist
arqios said:
Hey T! Your poem storms with vivid fury, dragging shadows into the light and naming them boldly. Yet in its surge of darkness, there\'s a defiant spark—a rallying cry for inner reclamation. The closing lines land like a spell: simple, steadfast, and fiercely redemptive. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 27th, 2025 21:36
arqios said:
Hey T! Your poem storms with vivid fury, dragging shadows into the light and naming them boldly. Yet in its surge of darkness, there\'s a defiant spark—a rallying cry for inner reclamation. The closing lines land like a spell: simple, steadfast, and fiercely redemptive. 🙏🏻🕊️
June 27th, 2025 21:36
The Exorcist
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Made me sweat, Tristan; and I\'m not sure whether it was the demonic nature of your subject matter or your words pouring out in proliferation there.
Next time I\'d like a jolly one please😂
June 27th, 2025 20:28
The Exorcist
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery in this dark but positive write, to dispel the evil once and for all, great write, very enjoyable
June 27th, 2025 09:25
Poetic Licence said:
Wonderful imagery in this dark but positive write, to dispel the evil once and for all, great write, very enjoyable
June 27th, 2025 09:25
The Exorcist
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve successfully woven an intricate tapestry concocted as an exorcism in and of itself which yet mystifies me. Fascinating, and intriguing the while it seems familiar, beautifully rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 09:11
Cheeky Missy said:
You\'ve successfully woven an intricate tapestry concocted as an exorcism in and of itself which yet mystifies me. Fascinating, and intriguing the while it seems familiar, beautifully rendered with beyond excellent imagery and a deeply haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 27th, 2025 09:11
The Exorcist
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the demonic it gives a magical mantra to expel the evil. Nicely worded and clearly imaged in vivid forms. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 08:08
sorenbarrett said:
A poem about the demonic it gives a magical mantra to expel the evil. Nicely worded and clearly imaged in vivid forms. Very nice
June 27th, 2025 08:08
Forever Breaking Through
arqios said:
This poem hits like a citrus shot to the soul; sharp, electric, immediate. The language punches through pretence, demanding authenticity in a world slick with masks and synthetic sweetness. It’s rebellion wrapped in brightness: “Smile, / Shine your lemon peel,” suggests not just resilience but defiant joy, like daring to be zesty in a system that wants bland. Here is a response in verse for your enjoyment: “Peel Back the Neon”
Spit shine the bitter truth— no sugar coat, no soft landing.
The real rolls in like thunder wearing citrus and static.
We bite back with tongues dyed bright.
Laugh lines splitting through fluorescent doubt.
No algorithm knows how hard we hit when we hit with nothing to prove.
Peel back the neon skin— under it: something too loud to fake.
June 26th, 2025 18:50
arqios said:
This poem hits like a citrus shot to the soul; sharp, electric, immediate. The language punches through pretence, demanding authenticity in a world slick with masks and synthetic sweetness. It’s rebellion wrapped in brightness: “Smile, / Shine your lemon peel,” suggests not just resilience but defiant joy, like daring to be zesty in a system that wants bland. Here is a response in verse for your enjoyment: “Peel Back the Neon”
Spit shine the bitter truth— no sugar coat, no soft landing.
The real rolls in like thunder wearing citrus and static.
We bite back with tongues dyed bright.
Laugh lines splitting through fluorescent doubt.
No algorithm knows how hard we hit when we hit with nothing to prove.
Peel back the neon skin— under it: something too loud to fake.
June 26th, 2025 18:50
Forever Breaking Through
orchidee said:
Ohhhh, only one thing to say to this - F, F, F, and, F, and.....steady on, says Fido! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:44
orchidee said:
Ohhhh, only one thing to say to this - F, F, F, and, F, and.....steady on, says Fido! lol.
June 26th, 2025 14:44
The P\'s of Poetry
Salvia.S said:
This is so a powerful and creative !!!! The use of the letter \"P\" is clever and gives it a nice rhythm. Each line shows a different side of what poetry can be. It\'s thoughtful and interesting. Very well written dear Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
June 26th, 2025 11:25
Salvia.S said:
This is so a powerful and creative !!!! The use of the letter \"P\" is clever and gives it a nice rhythm. Each line shows a different side of what poetry can be. It\'s thoughtful and interesting. Very well written dear Tittu ❤️
A fave 🌹
June 26th, 2025 11:25
Forever Breaking Through
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh this is truly rich indeed! We\'ll swear like sailors, with \"pardon my French,\" in polite company, and pucker up to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, eh? This must be the real reason I forgot this morning when ordering Starbucks to say my usual, missing the lemonade in my drink--because you\'d penned this. After that, I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curiously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:14
Cheeky Missy said:
Oh this is truly rich indeed! We\'ll swear like sailors, with \"pardon my French,\" in polite company, and pucker up to tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth, eh? This must be the real reason I forgot this morning when ordering Starbucks to say my usual, missing the lemonade in my drink--because you\'d penned this. After that, I give up. Beautifully rendered with excellent imagery and a curiously haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 26th, 2025 11:14
Forever Breaking Through
Poetic Licence said:
Burning away with deceit and lies with the acid from fruit to get to the fact and truth , its a lovely thought but it wouldn\'t it leave a bitter taste in the mouth, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 10:59
Poetic Licence said:
Burning away with deceit and lies with the acid from fruit to get to the fact and truth , its a lovely thought but it wouldn\'t it leave a bitter taste in the mouth, enjoyed the read
June 26th, 2025 10:59
Forever Breaking Through
Damaso said:
I really like the idea of burning away lies with the acidity of a juicy lemon. It exudes warmth and heals. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:37
Damaso said:
I really like the idea of burning away lies with the acidity of a juicy lemon. It exudes warmth and heals. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing! Cheers!
June 26th, 2025 08:37
Forever Breaking Through
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration alleviates anger angels allege. There seems some irritation in this poem my friend. As for a citrus fix I have been drinking a dozen lemons a day in lemonade fresh squeezed to ward off colds and although correlation is not causation it seems to be working. A fun read whatever the fuck
June 26th, 2025 08:13
sorenbarrett said:
Alliteration alleviates anger angels allege. There seems some irritation in this poem my friend. As for a citrus fix I have been drinking a dozen lemons a day in lemonade fresh squeezed to ward off colds and although correlation is not causation it seems to be working. A fun read whatever the fuck
June 26th, 2025 08:13
The P\'s of Poetry
orchidee said:
Good write T. Us two should know another poem - Popeye\'s Progress. Don\'t answer that - or rather, don\'t write that poem! heehee.
June 26th, 2025 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write T. Us two should know another poem - Popeye\'s Progress. Don\'t answer that - or rather, don\'t write that poem! heehee.
June 26th, 2025 02:09
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