A Vampyre\'s Lament
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Haha! I didn\'t know it was for sale! Thanks for the feedback!

February 6th, 2017 21:00

The Machine
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed. I wrote a poem called \"The Machine\" you should look it up sometime.

February 4th, 2017 15:11

The Machine
Antoinette said:

I really enjoyed this It\'s actually amazing and so (unfortunately) relateable .
xx

February 4th, 2017 11:35

Haunted
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

This is the first I have come upon from you..and its absolutely stunning in its imagery and such...I like how you used the term Haunted to represent the entire body of work... I have a poem with the same title and that is what drew me to read yours and I was pleased to see that it was completely and totally unlike mine nd also, another look at the concept of being Haunted all together..I guess its hard to explain how this moved me to you, as you and I have never conversed but you get the idea,..Brilliant write and now I will look forward to reading more of your work..


February 4th, 2017 01:25

The Necromancer
P.H.Rose said:

This is so bloody good
I absolutely love it
Very descriptive
Flows wonderfully well
And a great story to boot.
Well done !!!

February 1st, 2017 19:38

Who Am I?
Tony36 said:

Great write

January 31st, 2017 14:02

ALIVE
Pintu Mahakul said:

There is illusive darkness everywhere and we search for intense light. Being buried alive is so sad. Mother might be hearing agony. This is sad and thought provoking. God bestows us and we feel his mercy. His light of wisdom protects us here. Very amazing poem is shared.

January 28th, 2017 00:09

Plastic Pawns
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Thanks! I can only imagine what you and her went through. With that said, I am thankful that you shared with me what this poem powerfully evoked and that you related with it. Many thanks!

January 25th, 2017 21:51

In the Endless Sea
Edthepoet said:

Reminds me of an Alan watts quote \"imagine what it\'s like to wake up, having never been to sleep\" excellent poem, really enjoyed it.

January 23rd, 2017 12:42

The Anxious Morning
NB said:

brilliant.. the last two lines really make it :)

January 20th, 2017 07:46

Lurking Demons
Augustus said:

I always feel subject to temptations and have at times give in to the dark side. I pray there is forgiveness in the end. Nicely done.

January 18th, 2017 13:02

The Withered Garden
Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! Excellent structure. Hope to read more tomorrow! Again, great job!--Christina

January 17th, 2017 12:20

The Withered Garden
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS FRIEND ~ For a very elegant poem with a very wintry tale. I am sad that your poem is not just about a Winter dormant garden (with anticipation of resurrection in the Spring) but a WITHERED GARDEN that is well past its \"sell by date\". It is even sadder when such a Garden was once the playground of our verdant Youth. Thanks for sharing ~ more please. Please check my Poems ~ thanks BRIAN (UK)

January 17th, 2017 10:11