Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
The Fence in the Boy
sorenbarrett said:
Bloody, gruesome, horrific it delivers a picture of terror but is far worse in the discovery. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 11:33
sorenbarrett said:
Bloody, gruesome, horrific it delivers a picture of terror but is far worse in the discovery. Nicely written
June 13th, 2025 11:33
The Fence in the Boy
Poetic Licence said:
This is like a nightmare coming to life, all the demons of your past congregating and tormenting, very dark and sad in context, but a gripping read, welcome back
June 13th, 2025 10:55
Poetic Licence said:
This is like a nightmare coming to life, all the demons of your past congregating and tormenting, very dark and sad in context, but a gripping read, welcome back
June 13th, 2025 10:55
The Fence in the Boy
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Engrossed, intrigued, beguiled and horrified as I read through this poem and then to discover it was you along as a boy on the trashing floor of your own past. As if composed out of a nightmare. You have a unique way with words, on edge poetry, as it were, holding the reader\'s attention with poetic acumen and the fierceness that can be found therein. A gifted poet, you are. Excellent!
Do take care now,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:56
Tony Grannell said:
Hello Tristan,
Engrossed, intrigued, beguiled and horrified as I read through this poem and then to discover it was you along as a boy on the trashing floor of your own past. As if composed out of a nightmare. You have a unique way with words, on edge poetry, as it were, holding the reader\'s attention with poetic acumen and the fierceness that can be found therein. A gifted poet, you are. Excellent!
Do take care now,
Tony.
June 13th, 2025 09:56
The Fence in the Boy
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man! From whence spring these ghastly, macabre, devilish murmurs?! La dee. Superbly rendered with exceptional imagery and a devilish, intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 13th, 2025 08:42
Cheeky Missy said:
Sheesh, man! From whence spring these ghastly, macabre, devilish murmurs?! La dee. Superbly rendered with exceptional imagery and a devilish, intriguing poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 13th, 2025 08:42
Let\'s Be Honest
NafisaSB said:
you have fully nailed it in your verse - agree whole-heartedly
June 9th, 2025 23:27
NafisaSB said:
you have fully nailed it in your verse - agree whole-heartedly
June 9th, 2025 23:27
Us and the Void
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Light dulls us? Methinks to disagree with that line because God is light and in Him is no darkness at all. There\'s a definite well-nigh irresistible enchantment to the mysterious essence of \"the\" void, and darkness can stifle or else likewise entice. Fascinating. Superbly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2025 09:44
Cheeky Missy said:
Hmm. Light dulls us? Methinks to disagree with that line because God is light and in Him is no darkness at all. There\'s a definite well-nigh irresistible enchantment to the mysterious essence of \"the\" void, and darkness can stifle or else likewise entice. Fascinating. Superbly rendered with nigh exquisite imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 7th, 2025 09:44
Let\'s Be Honest
Cheeky Missy said:
Preach it, Mon! You\'ve addressed in delicious eloquence what which of our beloved MPS poets addressed how few hours ago? Or, kick me, it was you, correct?! Either way, the war for our minds is crucial and the reason for TV and all other media, \"social\" or otherwise. What \"pot\" or \"Mary Jane\" does to the mind is a very serious matter. Liquor likewise manipulates the mind, etc. Allegedly the first is most damaging. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a driving, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:58
Cheeky Missy said:
Preach it, Mon! You\'ve addressed in delicious eloquence what which of our beloved MPS poets addressed how few hours ago? Or, kick me, it was you, correct?! Either way, the war for our minds is crucial and the reason for TV and all other media, \"social\" or otherwise. What \"pot\" or \"Mary Jane\" does to the mind is a very serious matter. Liquor likewise manipulates the mind, etc. Allegedly the first is most damaging. Gorgeously rendered with excellent imagery and a driving, haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 4th, 2025 14:58
Let\'s Be Honest
Salvia.S said:
This is strong and clear. It shows how unfair the rules are and makes you think about who really benefits. Well written dearest Tittu!!!
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
Salvia.S said:
This is strong and clear. It shows how unfair the rules are and makes you think about who really benefits. Well written dearest Tittu!!!
June 3rd, 2025 10:59
Let\'s Be Honest
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, posing worthy thoughts, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 09:49
Poetic Licence said:
A very interesting write, posing worthy thoughts, enjoyed the read
June 3rd, 2025 09:49
Let\'s Be Honest
orchidee said:
Erm, let\'s be honest about Obi and Popeye - noooo, not here! lol.
June 3rd, 2025 09:22
orchidee said:
Erm, let\'s be honest about Obi and Popeye - noooo, not here! lol.
June 3rd, 2025 09:22
Let\'s Be Honest
sorenbarrett said:
A truth so clear that it stuns the mind but so ingrained that it is often overlooked. I was writing a related poem today but think in view of this one will put it off a day or two. This poem struck deep in my feelings not because I have ever used and in fact I have a drink or two once in a while but for the sake of justice and common sense. A fave
June 3rd, 2025 08:58
sorenbarrett said:
A truth so clear that it stuns the mind but so ingrained that it is often overlooked. I was writing a related poem today but think in view of this one will put it off a day or two. This poem struck deep in my feelings not because I have ever used and in fact I have a drink or two once in a while but for the sake of justice and common sense. A fave
June 3rd, 2025 08:58
Us and the Void
Doggerel Dave said:
Great paint of a mind in freefall. Steady though - too much of that....But I believe there\'s enough energy there to allow you to maintain a steady orbit.
Cheers, Tristan.
June 2nd, 2025 19:32
Doggerel Dave said:
Great paint of a mind in freefall. Steady though - too much of that....But I believe there\'s enough energy there to allow you to maintain a steady orbit.
Cheers, Tristan.
June 2nd, 2025 19:32
Us and the Void
Poetic Licence said:
To me a strong sense of asking us to look deep inside us to the darkness we all hold and have , where even some of us live. Some wonderful lines and a engrossing read
June 2nd, 2025 11:03
Poetic Licence said:
To me a strong sense of asking us to look deep inside us to the darkness we all hold and have , where even some of us live. Some wonderful lines and a engrossing read
June 2nd, 2025 11:03
Us and the Void
Teddy.15 said:
When I was a child I was convinced the sky would fall down.
There is no sky,
It cannot
F
a
l
l
Wonderful poetry 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 09:50
Teddy.15 said:
When I was a child I was convinced the sky would fall down.
There is no sky,
It cannot
F
a
l
l
Wonderful poetry 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 09:50
Us and the Void
orchidee said:
I thought this might be titled \'Us and Popeye\'. lol. Good write Obi T.
June 2nd, 2025 09:40
orchidee said:
I thought this might be titled \'Us and Popeye\'. lol. Good write Obi T.
June 2nd, 2025 09:40
Us and the Void
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and deeply philosophical poem that asks us to look deep into ourselves. That void like a black hole that even light can not escape. I loved the lettering format that demonstrates the words being said. It is the meaning that captured me and gets a fave
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
sorenbarrett said:
A wonderful and deeply philosophical poem that asks us to look deep into ourselves. That void like a black hole that even light can not escape. I loved the lettering format that demonstrates the words being said. It is the meaning that captured me and gets a fave
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Us and the Void
Salvia.S said:
A haunting, thought-provoking poem that explores truth, illusion, and the vastness of both outer and inner space. I especially love the line break in \'There is no sky, it cannot fall\'—it feels like the very concept of sky is collapsing letter by letter. Well done!
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Salvia.S said:
A haunting, thought-provoking poem that explores truth, illusion, and the vastness of both outer and inner space. I especially love the line break in \'There is no sky, it cannot fall\'—it feels like the very concept of sky is collapsing letter by letter. Well done!
June 2nd, 2025 09:36
Cats on a Pillar
Teddy.15 said:
I definitely see some seriously great lyrics in here, love your play on words 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:16
Teddy.15 said:
I definitely see some seriously great lyrics in here, love your play on words 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:16
Closure
Teddy.15 said:
I was truly sorry to read this last week, I hope you have found some fond memories to pack into your mind, dogs are like family so I know how much pain we can feel. 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:15
Teddy.15 said:
I was truly sorry to read this last week, I hope you have found some fond memories to pack into your mind, dogs are like family so I know how much pain we can feel. 🌹
June 2nd, 2025 08:15
Cats on a Pillar
orchidee said:
Good write Cat! lol. I of course wouldn\'t get any deep philosophical meaning to poems. Well, I only got 3 brain cells to use. lol.
June 1st, 2025 11:19
orchidee said:
Good write Cat! lol. I of course wouldn\'t get any deep philosophical meaning to poems. Well, I only got 3 brain cells to use. lol.
June 1st, 2025 11:19
The Wizard
Cheeky Missy said:
Hope Tony\'s okay. Gorgeously rendered with delicious imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy, so very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:59
Cheeky Missy said:
Hope Tony\'s okay. Gorgeously rendered with delicious imagery and a keenly haunting poignancy, so very, very beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:59
Cats on a Pillar
Cheeky Missy said:
Apparently it was \"cat or pillar,\" eh? And the death which resurrects into a breath-taking beauty is being celebrated in a twisted fashion, eh? Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:56
Cheeky Missy said:
Apparently it was \"cat or pillar,\" eh? And the death which resurrects into a breath-taking beauty is being celebrated in a twisted fashion, eh? Fascinating and curiously rendered with excellent imagery and a very haunting poignancy. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2025 10:56
Cats on a Pillar
2781 said:
I must admit, I didn\'t understand it.
But enjoyed the read!
June 1st, 2025 09:49
2781 said:
I must admit, I didn\'t understand it.
But enjoyed the read!
June 1st, 2025 09:49
Cats on a Pillar
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very clever write and play on words and there common excepted meaning. The essence to me is that everything feeds of off one another, raising the question do we really ever die, great write, enjoyed
June 1st, 2025 09:11
Poetic Licence said:
This is a very clever write and play on words and there common excepted meaning. The essence to me is that everything feeds of off one another, raising the question do we really ever die, great write, enjoyed
June 1st, 2025 09:11
Cats on a Pillar
Salvia.S said:
Really love the clever wordplay!!! You\'re not just playing with words; you\'re weaponizing them to challenge traditional metaphors like butterflies - a symbol of beauty , growth, freedom to offer a darker , more complex view. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹
June 1st, 2025 08:33
Salvia.S said:
Really love the clever wordplay!!! You\'re not just playing with words; you\'re weaponizing them to challenge traditional metaphors like butterflies - a symbol of beauty , growth, freedom to offer a darker , more complex view. Very well written dearest Tittu 🌹
June 1st, 2025 08:33
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