Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Maria\'s Last Dance
arqios said:
Like the echoes of a bell just rung or the after image of a candle’s flickering flame, so does this poem and its last stanza remain imprinting indelibly at the core: “ And,
Tragically,
She cannot hear
A ghost who’s never
Really
Been there.”
It has completely undone me.
December 7th, 2024 15:17
arqios said:
Like the echoes of a bell just rung or the after image of a candle’s flickering flame, so does this poem and its last stanza remain imprinting indelibly at the core: “ And,
Tragically,
She cannot hear
A ghost who’s never
Really
Been there.”
It has completely undone me.
December 7th, 2024 15:17
Maria\'s Last Dance
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful, moving and
heart rendering write!! 😢
Suicide lines and those
mental health resources,
really do help in this fight!! 🙏
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ 🕊️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:48
Thad Wilk said:
A wonderful, moving and
heart rendering write!! 😢
Suicide lines and those
mental health resources,
really do help in this fight!! 🙏
Thanks for sharing my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ 🕊️ Thad
December 7th, 2024 13:48
Maria\'s Last Dance
sorenbarrett said:
As human beings, we all share, and experiences, though they have their many differences. This poem pulls from my past many threads that weave a worn fabric. It evoked many emotions which is the sign of true art. It is highly emotional and dark as well. Very nicely written Tristan. It shows an artists care.
December 7th, 2024 13:42
sorenbarrett said:
As human beings, we all share, and experiences, though they have their many differences. This poem pulls from my past many threads that weave a worn fabric. It evoked many emotions which is the sign of true art. It is highly emotional and dark as well. Very nicely written Tristan. It shows an artists care.
December 7th, 2024 13:42
Maria\'s Last Dance
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful that you were inspired by two different songs to create this master piece. The subject matter touches so many families. Thank you for raising awareness to mental health problems. Loved the alliteration in the first stanza. That set up the whole piece and it was a delight to read Tristan. Have a good Saturday.
December 7th, 2024 12:40
Cassie58 said:
Wonderful that you were inspired by two different songs to create this master piece. The subject matter touches so many families. Thank you for raising awareness to mental health problems. Loved the alliteration in the first stanza. That set up the whole piece and it was a delight to read Tristan. Have a good Saturday.
December 7th, 2024 12:40
Maria\'s Last Dance
aDarkerMind said:
there is not a single book of poetry in the world, that this write would not belong Tristan.
an outstanding write on mental health my friend.
an outstanding write of poetry.....!
take a bow and enjoy the applause.
December 7th, 2024 10:11
aDarkerMind said:
there is not a single book of poetry in the world, that this write would not belong Tristan.
an outstanding write on mental health my friend.
an outstanding write of poetry.....!
take a bow and enjoy the applause.
December 7th, 2024 10:11
Maria\'s Last Dance
TobaniNataiella said:
Something close to my heart Mental health, i found the poem fascinating and questioning and thoroughly enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 7th, 2024 08:51
TobaniNataiella said:
Something close to my heart Mental health, i found the poem fascinating and questioning and thoroughly enjoyed the read, Thank you Tristan
December 7th, 2024 08:51
Maria\'s Last Dance
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
orchidee said:
Good write T.
Meanwhile (meaning something daft is to follow), I jumped off a wall but landed in a pond two feet below. Doh! lol.
December 7th, 2024 08:40
A Tale of Two Journeys
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
Thad Wilk said:
Fantastic Reverse Sestina
I must say!!! 💯👍
A magical, mesmerizing
and evocative piece of art
so eloquently penned my friend!🤩
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 6th, 2024 16:16
A Tale of Two Journeys
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
Doggerel Dave said:
Killer technicalities there, Tristan, (way back I did a very creditable villanelle, but after that the exhaustion has kept me away from really complex forms) however reading forward I really got into your parable of loneliness and isolation. Backwards? Sadly.....
December 6th, 2024 15:43
A Tale of Two Journeys
TobaniNataiella said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
TobaniNataiella said:
I am not aware to what a Sestina, Meter etc is, what i do know is i really enjoyed the read, Cleverly written about a subject that effects a lot more people, than we realise, all behind closed doors, Thank you Tristan
December 6th, 2024 11:05
A Tale of Two Journeys
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
sorenbarrett said:
We like wolves are social animals and look for acceptance. A poing well taken and expressed. Deviation from social norms leads to rejection and isolation. A great metaphor. Nicely done Tristan
December 6th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Teddy.15 said:
Wonderful, I often write about a Raven, love the dark stuff and you place your theme perfectly between both corners very well, personally I\'d like to believe we can all, forever find healing in music, as I live far from home, I have a jukebox in my head with mountains of memory and reminders. Love this Tristan. 🌹
December 6th, 2024 00:22
Crowing Time
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
Thad Wilk said:
A terrific poem and
You are so right!! 👍💯
Music mends the soul 🎵🎶🎶🎶
Thanks for sharing
a treat to recite!!! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ peace 🕊️ Thad
December 5th, 2024 21:56
Crowing Time
Doggerel Dave said:
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22
Doggerel Dave said:
The inevitability of it all is well placed there, Tristan.
December 5th, 2024 18:22
Crowing Time
TobaniNataiella said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
TobaniNataiella said:
A cleverly written piece of poetry, i really enjoyed the read, thank you
December 5th, 2024 09:59
Crowing Time
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Neville said:
music does all that and more but what beggars belief is you still managed to squeeze a raven and so much darkness into such a small space .. bravo darkly ..
🖤🐦⬛
December 5th, 2024 09:13
Crowing Time
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
sorenbarrett said:
Another dark passage with words of caution. It reads as a cloudy day under a sunny sky. Nicely worded.
December 5th, 2024 08:34
Crowing Time
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
arqios said:
Your poem masterfully balances the tension between the healing power of music and the relentless presence of despair and death. Executed with suitable darkness!
December 5th, 2024 08:19
Numbers
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Cheeky Missy said:
Math certainly was NOT my forté, yet geometry refusing my attempts, algebra seemed a nice place to hole up until trigonometry threw in the monkey wrench. Charmingly rendered with creative imagery and a macabre poignancy, thank you for sharing.
December 4th, 2024 23:47
Numbers
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Thad Wilk said:
Wow!! 😧
A very powerful and
captivating poem and
feelings penned!!🙏
Brilliantly composed,
much enjoyed my friend!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
December 4th, 2024 21:23
Numbers
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Doggerel Dave said:
Plodding along and got here L8. Still better even this than 0.
Take care, Tristan!
December 4th, 2024 19:22
Numbers
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
arqios said:
The w8 was inconsistent with a4mentioned spect8ors’ f8. Top r8ting 4 dis.
December 4th, 2024 17:05
Numbers
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
aDarkerMind said:
a very impressive write Tristan.
a use of numbers I have not seen before...
much applause once again my friend.
December 4th, 2024 13:24
Numbers
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
sorenbarrett said:
I love the use of numbers in this piece. 2 begin with it was gr8.
December 4th, 2024 12:57
Numbers
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Neville said:
I am a man who much prefers letters but appreciate numbers also have a place in this increasingly crazy world of ours .. and you have certainly made good use of a few of them well here my friend .. 10/10 .. Neville 👍
December 4th, 2024 12:08
Numbers
TobaniNataiella said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
TobaniNataiella said:
For me a very enjoyable read if a little bit confusing, thank you
December 4th, 2024 11:40
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