Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
wood you?
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
Thomas W Case said:
This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.
July 28th, 2026 08:26
wood you?
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
Paul Bell said:
No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.
July 27th, 2026 15:43
wood you?
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
sorenbarrett said:
Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend
July 27th, 2026 10:09
wood you?
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope youβre doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Demar Desu said:
Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope youβre doing well TRL!
July 27th, 2026 08:44
Marooned
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Dan Williams said:
Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.
July 27th, 2026 01:46
Frisbee Golf
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
David Wakeling said:
This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre
July 26th, 2026 19:36
Frisbee Golf
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp π€£
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Teddy.15 said:
Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp π€£
July 26th, 2026 13:04
Frisbee Golf
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
orchidee said:
So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.
July 26th, 2026 11:47
Frisbee Golf
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Friendship said:
Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.
July 26th, 2026 11:32
Frisbee Golf
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite
July 26th, 2026 08:40
Frisbee Golf
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
Thereβs a raw compassion hereβa reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Thomas W Case said:
A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
Thereβs a raw compassion hereβa reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.
July 26th, 2026 08:21
Frisbee Golf
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Paul Bell said:
This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.
July 26th, 2026 08:20
Frisbee Golf
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
arqios said:
Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.
July 26th, 2026 07:24
Marooned
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬π¦ββ¬π¦ββ¬π¦ββ¬πΉπ΄β«π€
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Neville said:
I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro πββ¬πββ¬πββ¬π¦ββ¬π¦ββ¬π¦ββ¬πΉπ΄β«π€
July 26th, 2026 03:28
Marooned
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
cellinic said:
Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,
July 25th, 2026 16:18
Marooned
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway π
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Teddy.15 said:
Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway π
July 25th, 2026 12:28
Marooned
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
orchidee said:
Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.
July 25th, 2026 09:53
Marooned
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
sorenbarrett said:
Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan
July 25th, 2026 09:15
Marooned
arqios said:
Feels like the world I have realised that we live inππ»ποΈ
July 25th, 2026 08:56
arqios said:
Feels like the world I have realised that we live inππ»ποΈ
July 25th, 2026 08:56
come again?
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! π€£
July 25th, 2026 00:50
Teddy.15 said:
LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! π€£
July 25th, 2026 00:50
come again?
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend
July 24th, 2026 08:53
come again?
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium ππ»ποΈ
July 24th, 2026 08:48
arqios said:
The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium ππ»ποΈ
July 24th, 2026 08:48
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