Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange



wood you?
Thomas W Case said:

This playful piece dances with sound, rhythm, and word invention, creating a mischievous energy that feels both clever and unexpected. I enjoyed the humor and the bold imagination woven through such a compact little poem.

July 28th, 2026 08:26

wood you?
David Wakeling said:

An interesting journey here.An enjoyable read

July 27th, 2026 22:03

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Paul Bell said:

No tree was harmed in this sex act.
Which maybe can\'t be said for the one hugging the tree.
They do say fresh air is good for you, and who am I to argue.

July 27th, 2026 15:43

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sorenbarrett said:

Where I grew up a woody was one of two thing one a station wagon with the old fake wood siding or well you know. A splintergasm another neologism for me but it makes sense in this context. I wonder about deforestation or forest fires under such circumstances. Loved the rhyme my friend

July 27th, 2026 10:09

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orchidee said:

Oops, good write T. lol.

July 27th, 2026 09:23

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Demar Desu said:

Haha another slick erotic write! They say art reflects life, I hope you’re doing well TRL!

July 27th, 2026 08:44

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

good write my friend,

July 27th, 2026 08:43

Marooned
Dan Williams said:

Warm up blends nicely to \"engage at one\'s own risk\". Nicely done.

July 27th, 2026 01:46

Frisbee Golf
David Wakeling said:

This clever poem certainly made me think.I have struggled with hate and love which I see as a twin edged sword.The christian irony is clear and a certain struggle for many. Well written compadre

July 26th, 2026 19:36

Frisbee Golf
Teddy.15 said:

Shortcut somewhere, pppppplleeeaase
h... Eeeellllp 🀣

July 26th, 2026 13:04

Frisbee Golf
orchidee said:

So now Popeye and Co are playing frisbee throwing?! lol.

July 26th, 2026 11:47

Frisbee Golf
Friendship said:

Well said. Your poem explores the contrast between love and hate, emphasizing that love is an inherent and universal quality, while hate is a rejection of this principle. You seem to suggest that differences among individuals should not be seen as sinful but rather as a natural part of humanity. It promotes acceptance and understanding of human contradictions.

July 26th, 2026 11:32

Frisbee Golf
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Irony and hypocrisy

July 26th, 2026 09:42

Frisbee Golf
sorenbarrett said:

It is often that people confuse even the extremes of love and hate and when wires are crossed there is usually a short circuite

July 26th, 2026 08:40

Frisbee Golf
Thomas W Case said:

A short but powerful piece that challenges the easy labels we place on each other and asks us to look deeper than judgment.
There’s a raw compassion hereβ€”a reminder that every human heart carries contradictions, wounds, and the need to be understood.

July 26th, 2026 08:21

Frisbee Golf
Paul Bell said:

This is why most churches have closed and become disco\'s now, which is very ironic in a way
Maybe that\'s the way to get people together.
If someone saves your life, do you care if they\'re gay, I wonder.


July 26th, 2026 08:20

Frisbee Golf
arqios said:

Frisbee on the church lawn will ruin its front-facing presentation. So, Lonnie has to be sacrificed.

July 26th, 2026 07:24

Marooned
Neville said:



I can sense an ominous calling .. compelling by design .. bravo maestro πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸˆβ€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸ¦β€β¬›πŸŒΉπŸ΄βš«πŸ–€

July 26th, 2026 03:28

Marooned
cellinic said:

Dear Tristan, a serious write, with well-coined meaning and clearly expressed emotional background! Best wishes,

July 25th, 2026 16:18

Marooned
Teddy.15 said:

Me and you are more alike than you think! LoL I\'d quite like to be marooned on a desert island anyway πŸ’œ

July 25th, 2026 12:28

Marooned
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

Deep meaningful write friend

July 25th, 2026 12:23

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orchidee said:

Good write T. We\'re marooned on this island with a few people - Popeye, Ol\' Tom, Obi, and a Mr MH. lol.

July 25th, 2026 09:53

Marooned
sorenbarrett said:

Here the question becomes if invalid is a noun or a verb. The whole piece seems a military maneuver where casualties and death is expected. Maybe death of reason fighting against untruth. Clever Tristan

July 25th, 2026 09:15

Marooned
arqios said:

Feels like the world I have realised that we live inπŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 25th, 2026 08:56

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Teddy.15 said:

LOL well this is what we call in London (very sausy) please don\'t come too often you\'ll make some jealous! 🀣

July 25th, 2026 00:50

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orchidee said:

Sounds like a poem from Mr Hunt. Who? WCAT!! lol.

July 24th, 2026 09:02

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sorenbarrett said:

Tristan is that last line a sexual one disguised in word play? An intriguing write where sound waves become a siren\'s call. Well done my friend

July 24th, 2026 08:53

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arqios said:

The ear and hearing can be so underrated while all the other senses get the premium πŸ™πŸ»πŸ•ŠοΈ

July 24th, 2026 08:48

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nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:

well put my friend

July 24th, 2026 08:41

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Demar Desu said:

A rare erotic write… good job

July 24th, 2026 08:34

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