Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
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Kevin Hulme said:
The People who reject you, What’s wrong with them I would say.
January 6th, 2025 21:58
Kevin Hulme said:
The People who reject you, What’s wrong with them I would say.
January 6th, 2025 21:58
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Thad Wilk said:
A poignant
and touching senryu! 😢
So sad to be rejected
that\'s so true!☹️
Thank you for sharing
much enjoyed thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:38
Thad Wilk said:
A poignant
and touching senryu! 😢
So sad to be rejected
that\'s so true!☹️
Thank you for sharing
much enjoyed thank you!!
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 6th, 2025 21:38
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NinjaGirl said:
I say you have a lot of friends here! the missing puzzle piece is in others, not yourself
January 6th, 2025 20:55
NinjaGirl said:
I say you have a lot of friends here! the missing puzzle piece is in others, not yourself
January 6th, 2025 20:55
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Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ve been rejected. And done some rejecting!
Perhaps we were doing each other a favor? I guess there\'s only One in the whole universe we can truly rely on.
Great write, Tristan.
January 6th, 2025 18:25
Mutley Ravishes said:
I\'ve been rejected. And done some rejecting!
Perhaps we were doing each other a favor? I guess there\'s only One in the whole universe we can truly rely on.
Great write, Tristan.
January 6th, 2025 18:25
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orchidee said:
Good senryu T. Bit of French there?! lol. Woof! says Fido, you know it\'s not french, Orchi.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
orchidee said:
Good senryu T. Bit of French there?! lol. Woof! says Fido, you know it\'s not french, Orchi.
January 6th, 2025 14:53
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sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Tristan let me humbly introject this
I value friendships
I always get rejected
What is wrong with them?
January 6th, 2025 13:16
sorenbarrett said:
Lovely Tristan let me humbly introject this
I value friendships
I always get rejected
What is wrong with them?
January 6th, 2025 13:16
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Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, what a topic for a senryu. So charmingly rendered with a piercing poignancy, who could resist?
January 6th, 2025 12:39
Cheeky Missy said:
Aww, what a topic for a senryu. So charmingly rendered with a piercing poignancy, who could resist?
January 6th, 2025 12:39
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TobaniNataiella said:
I am hoping that is not relating to you, as at least on this site that is not the case. Thou i understand the message, ones you take time to build a relationship with, invest in, then find out it was a one way street is one of the most painful rejections, enjoy the rest of your day.
January 6th, 2025 11:26
TobaniNataiella said:
I am hoping that is not relating to you, as at least on this site that is not the case. Thou i understand the message, ones you take time to build a relationship with, invest in, then find out it was a one way street is one of the most painful rejections, enjoy the rest of your day.
January 6th, 2025 11:26
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arqios said:
Nothing from what I can see! Other poems on this site today has made that clear. Friendship rejections are among the most hurtful of all types of rejections. Perhaps that’s just me but that’s how it is. 🙏🏻
January 6th, 2025 09:52
arqios said:
Nothing from what I can see! Other poems on this site today has made that clear. Friendship rejections are among the most hurtful of all types of rejections. Perhaps that’s just me but that’s how it is. 🙏🏻
January 6th, 2025 09:52
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
Thad Wilk said:
Another outstanding
poem in Acrostic form,
eloquently penned my friend!! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:44
Thad Wilk said:
Another outstanding
poem in Acrostic form,
eloquently penned my friend!! 👍
My pleasure to read indeed!!! 😁
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 23:44
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
NinjaGirl said:
you simply can\'t learn or be intelligent at all with a closed mind. you can\'t believe in x without knowing why you don\'t believe in y. you can\'t know everything about something until you consider multiple perspectives. believing blindly is just as good as giving up
January 5th, 2025 16:31
NinjaGirl said:
you simply can\'t learn or be intelligent at all with a closed mind. you can\'t believe in x without knowing why you don\'t believe in y. you can\'t know everything about something until you consider multiple perspectives. believing blindly is just as good as giving up
January 5th, 2025 16:31
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific Acrostic,
wisdom and advice indeed! 👍
Wonderfully woven
an a treat to read! Love it! 😍
Thanks for sharing! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 12:05
Thad Wilk said:
Terrific Acrostic,
wisdom and advice indeed! 👍
Wonderfully woven
an a treat to read! Love it! 😍
Thanks for sharing! 🙏
Best regards ✌️ Thad
January 5th, 2025 12:05
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
TobaniNataiella said:
A lot of work gone into this one, making me a little bit wiser than i was before. Enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:04
TobaniNataiella said:
A lot of work gone into this one, making me a little bit wiser than i was before. Enjoyed the read
January 5th, 2025 10:04
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
sorenbarrett said:
Cleanly done words of wisdom indeed. This reflects a great deal of work. Nicely executed
January 5th, 2025 09:34
sorenbarrett said:
Cleanly done words of wisdom indeed. This reflects a great deal of work. Nicely executed
January 5th, 2025 09:34
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"Really are just taking
Stabs in the dark
Every time we think\". Or \"Openness begets Wisdom.\"
Philosophical and thought provoking - a must read for everyone in my humble opinion
January 5th, 2025 09:08
rebellion_in_sanity said:
I wish I could write something like \"Really are just taking
Stabs in the dark
Every time we think\". Or \"Openness begets Wisdom.\"
Philosophical and thought provoking - a must read for everyone in my humble opinion
January 5th, 2025 09:08
Hidden Words, Revealed Truths
arqios said:
Oh, it was a prompt that prompted this; all the while I was prepping for a sleuthing expedition to find out why these words in particular! Nice read too, even without it being an acrostic, a fine touch of poetry my friend!
January 5th, 2025 07:56
arqios said:
Oh, it was a prompt that prompted this; all the while I was prepping for a sleuthing expedition to find out why these words in particular! Nice read too, even without it being an acrostic, a fine touch of poetry my friend!
January 5th, 2025 07:56
Inhale/Exhale
aDarkerMind said:
both words and artistry combined....
you have a gift Tristan.
enjoyed every word.
January 5th, 2025 06:37
aDarkerMind said:
both words and artistry combined....
you have a gift Tristan.
enjoyed every word.
January 5th, 2025 06:37
Doors
arqios said:
Now, how did I miss this! Doors, light… and a keyhole comes to mind… as a child I remember looking through the keyhole, being somehow locked out of a room. Curious things the brain does while meant to be on task… another sign of ADD perhaps. Love always unlocks…
January 4th, 2025 19:14
arqios said:
Now, how did I miss this! Doors, light… and a keyhole comes to mind… as a child I remember looking through the keyhole, being somehow locked out of a room. Curious things the brain does while meant to be on task… another sign of ADD perhaps. Love always unlocks…
January 4th, 2025 19:14
Inhale/Exhale
NinjaGirl said:
My brother 😂😭! sad but true--seems to be easier to escape than to face it!
January 4th, 2025 12:37
NinjaGirl said:
My brother 😂😭! sad but true--seems to be easier to escape than to face it!
January 4th, 2025 12:37
Inhale/Exhale
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tristan. That lighter sparked some images. Never been a smoker, not only that I have never felt the need to inhale anything or even worse inject anything. I was a hippie without getting high:) As to cannabis, my grandchildren tell me, they think it would do me a favour:) I’ll just stick to my breathing exercises and relaxation music. A fun write. Have a great weekend.
January 4th, 2025 11:40
Cassie58 said:
Dear Tristan. That lighter sparked some images. Never been a smoker, not only that I have never felt the need to inhale anything or even worse inject anything. I was a hippie without getting high:) As to cannabis, my grandchildren tell me, they think it would do me a favour:) I’ll just stick to my breathing exercises and relaxation music. A fun write. Have a great weekend.
January 4th, 2025 11:40
Inhale/Exhale
TobaniNataiella said:
I was once told that breathing controls the speed at which the mind processes and reacts, i am not sure if that is the case, i would of thought it would depend on how fit you are and what your choice of inhalation is !!, I enjoyed reading this puzzle and it has awoken my imagination. Have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 10:57
TobaniNataiella said:
I was once told that breathing controls the speed at which the mind processes and reacts, i am not sure if that is the case, i would of thought it would depend on how fit you are and what your choice of inhalation is !!, I enjoyed reading this puzzle and it has awoken my imagination. Have a great weekend
January 4th, 2025 10:57
Inhale/Exhale
sorenbarrett said:
Have worked with many on breathing exercises to relax, deal with pain and meditate. Can\'t overestimate the value of breathing. And breathing is necessary to take a toke. Loved the changing form in this poem that enhanced its power.
January 4th, 2025 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Have worked with many on breathing exercises to relax, deal with pain and meditate. Can\'t overestimate the value of breathing. And breathing is necessary to take a toke. Loved the changing form in this poem that enhanced its power.
January 4th, 2025 10:18
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