Comments received on poems by Tristan Robert Lange
Dead Presidents
Paul Bell said:
Most of them want their time in history, good or bad.
Some will be remembered for great things.
But the ones they make films about are usually mass killers.
August 10th, 2026 11:08
Paul Bell said:
Most of them want their time in history, good or bad.
Some will be remembered for great things.
But the ones they make films about are usually mass killers.
August 10th, 2026 11:08
Dead Presidents
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Tristan. I used to be a fan of a few until I learned of their follies and sins now I think of them all as the ones in Point Break where the dead presidents were a rubber faced band of crooks although they were much more loveable than the real ones. Nicely written my friend
August 10th, 2026 10:31
sorenbarrett said:
A great write Tristan. I used to be a fan of a few until I learned of their follies and sins now I think of them all as the ones in Point Break where the dead presidents were a rubber faced band of crooks although they were much more loveable than the real ones. Nicely written my friend
August 10th, 2026 10:31
Sunday Snakes
arqios said:
Funny that all through the human epochs, the prophetic voice has always been \'other.\' 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:19
arqios said:
Funny that all through the human epochs, the prophetic voice has always been \'other.\' 👍🏻🙏🕊️
August 10th, 2026 06:19
Sunday Snakes
cellinic said:
A serious and emotionally penned write. The meanings and mood are well conveyed and generally shared....
August 9th, 2026 22:43
cellinic said:
A serious and emotionally penned write. The meanings and mood are well conveyed and generally shared....
August 9th, 2026 22:43
The Middle-Finger Christ
NafisaSB said:
A poem worth reflecting upon for sure. 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:34
NafisaSB said:
A poem worth reflecting upon for sure. 👌
August 9th, 2026 13:34
Sunday Snakes
Thomas W Case said:
This one comes out swinging, with a jagged, almost apocalyptic fury aimed at religious hypocrisy and institutional power. The language feels deliberately abrasive and bloody, turning faith into a battlefield where damnation, villainy, and the prophetic voice collide.
August 9th, 2026 07:45
Thomas W Case said:
This one comes out swinging, with a jagged, almost apocalyptic fury aimed at religious hypocrisy and institutional power. The language feels deliberately abrasive and bloody, turning faith into a battlefield where damnation, villainy, and the prophetic voice collide.
August 9th, 2026 07:45
Sunday Snakes
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
sorenbarrett said:
This poem is powerful aided by alliteration it speaks of those that add to accepted beliefs their own making themselves spokesmen of a God they do not know. Well written Tristan
August 9th, 2026 06:05
Sunday Snakes
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
Faith always seems to want to control its believers
August 9th, 2026 05:35
Persons of Conviction
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Doggerel Dave said:
The specific detail could have done for me with some extra detail in your comments, although the general tenor of your argument is crystal clear, Tristan and fully endorsed by me with appreciation.
So where exactly is your country on legal abortion and gender equality?
August 8th, 2026 20:43
Persons of Conviction
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
orchidee said:
Some people act as if they are not human - Popeye & Co for a start. Why, what do they do?! Erm, WCAT!! lol.
August 8th, 2026 09:56
Persons of Conviction
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
sorenbarrett said:
It is not just the one corporation but the idea behind this that gets the fave. This idea needs to be extended to AI as well as corporations and a death penalty imposed for any infractions. Nicely written Tristan
August 8th, 2026 09:40
Persons of Conviction
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Syd said:
Hi Tristan, very clever satire. The big corporations deserve locking up in my opinion. Well thought out and I love the ending.
- Syd 🍄
August 8th, 2026 09:04
Persons of Conviction
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
a masterful write and a fav
August 8th, 2026 08:19
miracle man
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
orchidee said:
It\'s a miracle if a day goes by without .............. WCAT! lol.
August 7th, 2026 08:53
miracle man
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
this piece definitely hits the mark
August 7th, 2026 08:22
miracle man
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
sorenbarrett said:
This one holds bitter reproach and justified righteousness in the form of sin. Nicely written my friend formatting has meaning here set on the left side of the page as if written by the left hand it is by being contrary that one makes one\'s point.
August 7th, 2026 07:38
merciless
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
Paul Bell said:
Life seems to be the burden now, 24/7 bad news aint helping either.
Life of the monk is looking more promising by the day.
August 6th, 2026 14:23
merciless
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
Nerd said:
Brilliant, the words are matching the imagery perfectly
I love how soul and beneath looks as if someone is suffocating
August 6th, 2026 14:01
merciless
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
you can feel the pressure pushing down, good write
August 6th, 2026 12:04
merciless
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
orchidee said:
Popeye & Co\'s antics are merciless. What antics? WCAT! lol.
August 6th, 2026 08:32
merciless
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
sorenbarrett said:
Wo many can identify with this poem Tristan. It feels heavy and the structure seems to convey this as well. Nicely done my friend
August 6th, 2026 08:02
Butter in a Cup
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Paul Bell said:
The two weeks away you save for every year.
Now let us check. Are we covered for this, covered for that. Will I get there.
Is the hotel real.
Okay, and we\'re off.
Late text. Sorry sir, cancelled.
August 5th, 2026 07:44
Butter in a Cup
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
arqios said:
The heated cup melts the butter slicking over as it topples and spills over. stress is such a cloying pain.🙏🕊️
August 5th, 2026 07:00
Butter in a Cup
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
sorenbarrett said:
Disjointed thoughts come together in this acrostic poem of stress. Just as thoughts bounce and return under stress they do in this poem as well. Time passes and the stress is emphasized in the word Titanic and the denial of action. Frozen on a sinking ship disaster certain. No surprises here one is left to suck it up. Now the alarm, one is not even able to rest, awakened even from one\'s nightmares to the real nightmares that the day holds. How quickly time passes. A lovely poem Tristan
August 5th, 2026 06:30
Butter in a Cup
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson) said:
I like this piece my friend, said well
August 5th, 2026 06:27
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