Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



Lonely River Song
WriteBeLight said:

When love is lost, all of those things like songs and special places become something to avoid to avoid the memories. But, I think that it is not those things that are at fault. They are innocent through all of the turmoil. Just the human condition of trying to relate and obtain great memories. Great one Phil! As usual :)

May 1st, 2017 19:14

Like thinking
Goldfinch60 said:

Wonderful write, my wife and I still say I Love you and it is always the last thing we say to each other as we go to sleep at night.

May 1st, 2017 01:51

Like thinking
Michael Edwards said:

My full attention too. Luckily we still say \'I love you\' and will be saying it again and, I am sure, again. By the way we\'ve never watched Downton Abbey but currently are captured by \'Line Of Duty\'.

April 30th, 2017 09:02

Outcast
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write.

April 30th, 2017 00:31

Home Fires Burning
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true in this day and age.

April 23rd, 2017 00:50

Home before dark
Michael Edwards said:

As an aside the forget-me-nots are in full bloom in my garden at the moment (here in the UK). Enjoyed this romp into the world of flora and our honey bearing friends.

April 19th, 2017 14:37

Excalibur II
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and good twist in the tale (or should that be tail)

April 16th, 2017 00:21

Persistence of political vision
WriteBeLight said:

Very, very clever and informative Phil!

March 31st, 2017 15:49

Persistence of political vision
Michael Edwards said:

Another beautifully written piece - great use of the language.

March 31st, 2017 10:56

Life\'s other side
Michael Edwards said:

The trouble is the art of communication is almost lost - language standards have fallen and no one writes letters anymore or even speaks not even on the telephone - its all texting etc = going to read your poem again as I find it quite intriguing.

March 29th, 2017 16:09

Life\'s other side
willyweed said:

OK so you found me out? can you sent me twenty dollars for a worthy cause>$20.00

March 29th, 2017 14:20

Sex life of writers
Garry said:

Certainly made me smile. Some excellent ideas and lovely phrases.

March 21st, 2017 03:07

Sex life of writers
Michael Edwards said:

I both smiled at and admired this piece - so imaginative phil.

March 20th, 2017 01:32

Sex life of writers
rrodriguez said:

Quite a write my friend... spent with creation and the computer...

March 19th, 2017 19:12

Conjunctivitis
Michael Edwards said:

Keep rambling - I love this eclectic collection of linguistic curios 0- great stuff Phil.

March 18th, 2017 17:10

Conjunctivitis
Fay Slimm. said:

Ah - I love the flow and ongoing imagery in this masterclass of poetic wording my friend - I chuckled aloud at that final about \"mankind\'s elastic morals\" - how true. ........

March 18th, 2017 13:30

Blue song in Morning
Augustus said:

Seems a little more complicated than love sick blues, maybe some guilt thrown in. Great piece.

March 13th, 2017 18:30

Blue song in Morning
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 13th, 2017 17:19

Blue song in Morning
willyweed said:

a sad but wonderful rendering of love gone a stray I love the instrumental part. WW

March 13th, 2017 14:01

Blue song in Morning
Michael Edwards said:

Great stuff Phil - Part 2 tomorrow? Evil plan?

March 13th, 2017 13:54

Blue song in Morning
WriteBeLight said:

Stress and dismay between loved ones is always a very gutwrenching existance. Very good work Phil.

March 13th, 2017 13:26

Lost
Augustus said:

The cheapskate bought a ring that oxidizes. You wear a skirt well Phil. Heh, heh. Enjoyed.

March 7th, 2017 17:55

Lost
Tony36 said:

Great write

March 7th, 2017 16:01

Smidgies
Tony36 said:

WOW awesome write

March 4th, 2017 18:17

Smidgies
Augustus said:

Your \"fluff\" was packed full of things not taken lightly. Enjoyed.

March 4th, 2017 17:28

Smidgies
rrodriguez said:

Wow, this is quite a feat of genius imagination and ability. I read it fast to get the rap and it was so fast I thought I was Dr. Dre in the flesh. Great job! Congrats!

March 4th, 2017 11:57

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