Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



Mankind\'s Evolution
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 29th, 2024 18:43

Mankind\'s Evolution
Doggerel Dave said:

Did feel ever so slightly lost, unsure where we were going next, Phil. Expectations upended. An enjoyable erratic ride.

August 29th, 2024 16:47

Mankind\'s Evolution
Teddy.15 said:

Liquid salad bar is a bit more convincing than the salad bar lol I\'d say that liquid bar would be mighty fine. What a lovely piece, kept me wondering all the way through, by the way Phil, it\'s not all us women do is shop you know lol 🌹

August 29th, 2024 12:32

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Goldfinch60 said:

Very clever write Phil, I can remember most of those songs.

Andy

August 29th, 2024 01:08

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
Doggerel Dave said:

I was identifying right along Phil, and fully felt a sinking recrimination at the end, sadness that the sorry, after the insight didn\'t turn the boat around.

August 28th, 2024 20:17

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
rrodriguez said:

Now this is nice. What a way to go... I enjoyed it, buddy.

August 28th, 2024 19:55

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

Loved the way it was written

August 28th, 2024 12:37

Smoky Eyes of a Twilight Pretender ( A Platter-Tude )
JD Boye said:

I love the structure you chose for this work. A very evocative piece.

August 28th, 2024 10:46

Ten Very Small Poems
Doggerel Dave said:

Truth, The night Sky and buttonholes would have satisfied me, Phil - the rest a bonus.

August 27th, 2024 22:58

Ten Very Small Poems
rrodriguez said:

So, poetry can be found in a flea market. This Sunday I\'m going to the flea market to find my inspiration. Or should I look to \"The night’s sky because it\'s is more truthful than the day’s?\" I believe it is. Great write, my friend. If you let me, maybe I can use one of your line as a prompt for my next poem. Just kidding!



August 27th, 2024 20:26

Ten Very Small Poems
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 27th, 2024 15:26

Ten Very Small Poems
sorenbarrett said:

Great sayings my friend enjoyed them all.

August 27th, 2024 12:36

Ten Very Small Poems
orchidee said:

A small comment - Good! lol.
I could be gushing and say - Oh wonderful, marvellous, full of wisdom, etc. Well, these poems are all that too.

August 27th, 2024 12:11

Ten Very Small Poems
Teddy.15 said:

lol I can honestly say this is one of the most entertaining poems I have ever read, I love every one. lol fabulous dearest Phil fabulous 🌹

August 27th, 2024 10:27

Go Figure, Eight
Cassie58 said:

Looking at situations from all sides, surely has to be a good thing. If more did that, perhaps there might be less conflict. I like the thoughts you have shared here MF. I sensed the wisdom.

August 25th, 2024 12:13

Go Figure, Eight
orchidee said:

Good write M.

August 18th, 2024 01:28

Go Figure, Eight
Dan Williams said:

A generous serving of wisdom, this. Well done.

August 17th, 2024 23:27

Go Figure, Eight
Neville said:


this reads like a treatise on the unity of opposites .. well said say\'s I ..

August 17th, 2024 14:30

Go Figure, Eight
Teddy.15 said:

Beautiful. 🌹

August 17th, 2024 14:15

Go Figure, Eight
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2024 12:57

Go Figure, Eight
sorenbarrett said:

Taoist in nature this looks at both sides. Nicely stated.

August 17th, 2024 12:31

Light
Teddy.15 said:

I felt the light dear Phil, I felt the light. Beautiful. 🌹

August 17th, 2024 03:53

Light
Goldfinch60 said:

So very true Phil, the sun shines on us all.

Andy

August 17th, 2024 01:45

Light
Doggerel Dave said:

Should be the world\'s Mission Statement.
Well put, Phil.

August 16th, 2024 22:34

Light
Caring dove said:

Almost makes me think of angels . Nice writing ))

August 16th, 2024 12:32

Light
Tony36 said:

Love it

August 16th, 2024 09:15

Light
sorenbarrett said:

Indeed we are the sun shines on all. Impartiality in the highest sense. A most lovely write.

August 16th, 2024 09:00

The Flames of Love
Goldfinch60 said:

But the memories will never leave us Phil.

Andy

August 16th, 2024 01:22

The Flames of Love
Tony36 said:

Beautiful

August 15th, 2024 16:58

The Flames of Love
Neville said:

they say there\'s no smoke without fire but I have grown to dispute that hot potato and now wear nothing but asbestos undergarments, just to be on the safe side .. 🩲🔥 :)

August 15th, 2024 14:17



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