Comments received on poems by MendedFences27



Deep Sixed
Teddy.15 said:

Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. 🌹

August 9th, 2024 11:50

Deep Sixed
Neville said:


the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..

this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)

August 9th, 2024 11:09

Brokenhearted Charities
Doggerel Dave said:

Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.

August 8th, 2024 17:28

Brokenhearted Charities
Neville said:


You are not only funny, you are amazing Phil ..

Hou have got this particular poetic genre sewn up my friend .. Neville

August 8th, 2024 13:38

Brokenhearted Charities
Teddy.15 said:

I would give you $ 19.99 for your wonderful ironic humour, what a jar you\'ve opened on love, inspiring to say the least, brilliant and I think I may chuckle all evening, Phil the agony uncle on the radio 📻 keeping the world honest, love it\'s not all sunshine and rainbows this is a kudos. 🌹

August 8th, 2024 09:58

Blue Song at Night
Goldfinch60 said:

Caught at last Phil. Well done.

Andy

August 8th, 2024 01:38

Blue Song at Night
rrodriguez said:

This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked the rhyme and the story it tells. Great job!

August 7th, 2024 20:16

Blue Song at Night
Doggerel Dave said:

Age old tradition - do it in chapters, Phil.
I always find it satisfying to have achieved the end. Fined up nicely. It is open enders I\'m not fond of.

August 7th, 2024 18:13

Blue Song at Night
Bella Shepard said:

Nicely done, a touch of Agatha Christie there, loved it.

August 7th, 2024 14:49

Blue Song at Night
Neville said:



There are some real nasty folk about aren\'t there Phil .. a torrid tale told tantalizingly well ..

August 7th, 2024 11:38

Blue Song at Night
Teddy.15 said:

Your dramatic imagery brings the reader to the forefront of this. A very serious subject, I love your title. It\'s an open book. 🌹

August 7th, 2024 11:18

Blue Song at Night
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini

August 7th, 2024 10:04

Blue Song in Evening
Goldfinch60 said:

Swim away then Phil. Good words.

Andy

August 7th, 2024 01:57

Blue Song in Evening
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m engrossed, can\'t wait for the next episode. Good Write!

August 6th, 2024 12:52

Blue Song in Evening
sorenbarrett said:

Quite the story. nicely done.

August 6th, 2024 11:17

Blue Song at Noon
Teddy.15 said:

I love the blues, hey you have a few of these songs under your wings. Love this. 🌹

August 6th, 2024 01:28

Corona
Dan Williams said:

I\'m pretty sure I have done this dance. Nice work.

August 5th, 2024 23:00

Blue Song at Noon
sorenbarrett said:

I personally like the blues, well not all blues, but some. A most interesting story let\'s see how it ends.

August 5th, 2024 16:13

Corona
Teddy.15 said:

LOL let\'s hope it\'s the beer and not the virus 🤣🤣🤣 ice cold on tap. Loved your imagery a summer poem very nicely done. 🌹

August 5th, 2024 03:38

Corona
Neville said:



I could say maybe you had had your Phil .. but I wont .. and you were funny, so there .. 👍

August 5th, 2024 03:06

Corona
Goldfinch60 said:

Corona used to be delivered to the door when I was a youngster Phil. Good times.

Andy

August 5th, 2024 01:51

Corona
Doggerel Dave said:

Got a refund scheme on the bottles? Cash the empties in and you\'ve got enough for another full bottle....

August 4th, 2024 17:29

Corona
sorenbarrett said:

Cheers to that. Nice write

August 4th, 2024 15:52

In the Clouds
Teddy.15 said:

How very beautiful dear Phil. 🌹

August 4th, 2024 02:40

In the Clouds
Neville said:



There really is something kind of special about clouds isn\'t there .. and its good to know that I\'m not the only one who finds inspiration from music and general observations .. I think many of my reviewing predecessors have stolen my thunder, but hey ho .. Neville

August 4th, 2024 02:13

In the Clouds
Goldfinch60 said:

Such wonderful words Phil, I have often wondered what it would be like loving amongst the clouds.

Andy

August 4th, 2024 01:23

A Love Song
Cassie58 said:

Pleased I stopped by. Your poetic lines of love much enjoyed. Very nicely penned.

August 4th, 2024 01:06

In the Clouds
Dan Williams said:

Gives Joni Mitchell a run for the money. Nicely done.

August 3rd, 2024 23:52

A Love Song
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing ))

August 3rd, 2024 16:38

In the Clouds
Caring dove said:

Lovely writing I like the words used .. a good read ))

August 3rd, 2024 16:36



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