Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
Love So Deep
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Phil and so well written, I was hooked.
Andy
September 1st, 2022 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful write Phil and so well written, I was hooked.
Andy
September 1st, 2022 01:11
Love So Deep
Doggerel Dave said:
Either way, one hell of a tale, Phil, very real in the telling. Pulled me in.
And I have to ask:
August 31st, 2022 23:56
Doggerel Dave said:
Either way, one hell of a tale, Phil, very real in the telling. Pulled me in.
And I have to ask:
August 31st, 2022 23:56
Yearlong
Neville said:
this has more than just a hint of an autobiographical flavour to it .. and the aftertaste is oh\' so sweet ... if I had favourites Phil, this would surely be among them ........ Neville
August 30th, 2022 12:54
Neville said:
this has more than just a hint of an autobiographical flavour to it .. and the aftertaste is oh\' so sweet ... if I had favourites Phil, this would surely be among them ........ Neville
August 30th, 2022 12:54
Yearlong
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
See ya then - in Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, whenever!
August 29th, 2022 03:31
orchidee said:
Good write MF.
See ya then - in Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, whenever!
August 29th, 2022 03:31
Yearlong
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, those fours seasons can bring such different thoughts in l our love.
Andy
August 29th, 2022 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
Wonderful emotive words Phil, those fours seasons can bring such different thoughts in l our love.
Andy
August 29th, 2022 01:35
Yearlong
Fay Slimm. said:
The journey back to our lover can be hazardly long and you pen the seasons it takes to find happy endings so well Phil. I love the first stanza of cold winter\'s bitter-sweet parting. A favourite for me is your Yearlong.
August 28th, 2022 18:15
Fay Slimm. said:
The journey back to our lover can be hazardly long and you pen the seasons it takes to find happy endings so well Phil. I love the first stanza of cold winter\'s bitter-sweet parting. A favourite for me is your Yearlong.
August 28th, 2022 18:15
One drink down
Neville said:
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the combined voices of both Teddy and Fay ... Neville
August 24th, 2022 11:31
Neville said:
the girls have got you sussed Phil .. ... I agree entirely with the combined voices of both Teddy and Fay ... Neville
August 24th, 2022 11:31
Crusin\' to reality
Doggerel Dave said:
As a metaphor, i think I can take it, Phil. As a description of an actual cruise, you have evoked an old memory and reminded me of my allergy...
August 24th, 2022 07:35
Doggerel Dave said:
As a metaphor, i think I can take it, Phil. As a description of an actual cruise, you have evoked an old memory and reminded me of my allergy...
August 24th, 2022 07:35
Crusin\' to reality
Goldfinch60 said:
I am on that cruise Phil and hopefully for a long time to come.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
I am on that cruise Phil and hopefully for a long time to come.
Andy
August 24th, 2022 01:05
Crusin\' to reality
Neville said:
I know I have said it before .. but you have such a keen eye Phil .. for a few moments back then, I felt like I was sitting in a petri dish and being watched from above ... an amazing journey of self discovery ..
Neville
August 24th, 2022 01:04
Neville said:
I know I have said it before .. but you have such a keen eye Phil .. for a few moments back then, I felt like I was sitting in a petri dish and being watched from above ... an amazing journey of self discovery ..
Neville
August 24th, 2022 01:04
Winter Loneliness
Neville said:
Hey Phil, what\'s a metaphor if you aint gonna use it well .. Used perfectly here my friend and correspondingly very much enjoyed ......... Neville
August 22nd, 2022 05:17
Neville said:
Hey Phil, what\'s a metaphor if you aint gonna use it well .. Used perfectly here my friend and correspondingly very much enjoyed ......... Neville
August 22nd, 2022 05:17
Winter Loneliness
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful use of metaphor Phil - - your third stanza captures the feel of relationship breakup so well and the end brings hope with its positive note - - this has to be one of your best and a real favourite for me.
August 20th, 2022 02:51
Fay Slimm. said:
A wonderful use of metaphor Phil - - your third stanza captures the feel of relationship breakup so well and the end brings hope with its positive note - - this has to be one of your best and a real favourite for me.
August 20th, 2022 02:51
Winter Loneliness
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil but we know that it will not last and the seasons will show us different aspects of our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Good words Phil but we know that it will not last and the seasons will show us different aspects of our lives.
Andy
August 20th, 2022 01:27
Winter Loneliness
Aradhya said:
just like everything in the nature, change is inevitable to human heart too. through the change we experience, we grow. beautifully written a harsh truth with poetic words. excellent!
August 19th, 2022 23:08
Aradhya said:
just like everything in the nature, change is inevitable to human heart too. through the change we experience, we grow. beautifully written a harsh truth with poetic words. excellent!
August 19th, 2022 23:08
Love\'s Lifespan
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Phil, true love lasts for eternity - and beyond.
Andy
August 13th, 2022 00:45
Goldfinch60 said:
So true Phil, true love lasts for eternity - and beyond.
Andy
August 13th, 2022 00:45
One drink down
Fay Slimm. said:
An unforgettably rhythmic lament Phil with heartfelt learning curves meant for lovers world over - - yet I confess that sad though it was it somehow got me tapping my feet to its beat - - impressive penning.
August 11th, 2022 17:06
Fay Slimm. said:
An unforgettably rhythmic lament Phil with heartfelt learning curves meant for lovers world over - - yet I confess that sad though it was it somehow got me tapping my feet to its beat - - impressive penning.
August 11th, 2022 17:06
Solitude
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet, may I recommend
you look-up
the working schedule of that great Tennyson
the one his wife managed for him
or maybe
take a look at that elevated desk and vista, setup
that great Dickens\' had
in his office of wonders..
see
because, we
tinkerers of syllables and ink
are so far and few
to find fame and fortune, the world
makes us believe
what we do, is effortless and easy
when
they themselves couldn\'t manage
to pen, a line of poetic sincerity
and so
jealously or merely hatefully
all artistry, is belittled
as a whole
with only the minuscule few celebrated
and all the effort we go through
to write these works of ours
are made to feel like, whimsical traits
when in actuality
each and every one
of our so called eccentric traits
like
finding a quite place, to call upon
our muses and inspirations
are
the essential tools of our craft!
(kinda like
an olympic athlete and that lucky sock...)
lol
August 11th, 2022 03:05
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet, may I recommend
you look-up
the working schedule of that great Tennyson
the one his wife managed for him
or maybe
take a look at that elevated desk and vista, setup
that great Dickens\' had
in his office of wonders..
see
because, we
tinkerers of syllables and ink
are so far and few
to find fame and fortune, the world
makes us believe
what we do, is effortless and easy
when
they themselves couldn\'t manage
to pen, a line of poetic sincerity
and so
jealously or merely hatefully
all artistry, is belittled
as a whole
with only the minuscule few celebrated
and all the effort we go through
to write these works of ours
are made to feel like, whimsical traits
when in actuality
each and every one
of our so called eccentric traits
like
finding a quite place, to call upon
our muses and inspirations
are
the essential tools of our craft!
(kinda like
an olympic athlete and that lucky sock...)
lol
August 11th, 2022 03:05
Solitude
Goldfinch60 said:
I too normally write alone but can write with others around. Writing is such an individual way of being in our lives Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2022 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
I too normally write alone but can write with others around. Writing is such an individual way of being in our lives Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2022 00:58
Solitude
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing twisted about doing a Greta Garbo - I have a solid double locked front door to the cupboard wherein I reside....I emerge when I\'m ready...
Good fun, Phil.
August 11th, 2022 00:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Nothing twisted about doing a Greta Garbo - I have a solid double locked front door to the cupboard wherein I reside....I emerge when I\'m ready...
Good fun, Phil.
August 11th, 2022 00:51
Waiting Tables
Neville said:
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ..................... Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:03
Neville said:
It all makes perfect sense to me .. Write on Phil ..................... Neville
August 10th, 2022 07:03
Waiting Tables
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blues go away without the booze and you two get together Phil.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:49
Goldfinch60 said:
May those blues go away without the booze and you two get together Phil.
Andy
August 9th, 2022 00:49
Frankly
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things that we want o happen have a strange way of turning into the reverse Phil. That\'s life I\'m afraid.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Sometimes things that we want o happen have a strange way of turning into the reverse Phil. That\'s life I\'m afraid.
Andy
August 8th, 2022 00:39
Frankly
Doggerel Dave said:
Ambivalence rules, Phil... Nothing frank about it.
An engaging read I enjoyed.
August 7th, 2022 19:09
Doggerel Dave said:
Ambivalence rules, Phil... Nothing frank about it.
An engaging read I enjoyed.
August 7th, 2022 19:09
The Last Romance
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I hope all is OK now.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 00:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive words Phil, I hope all is OK now.
Andy
August 7th, 2022 00:31
The Last Romance
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Oh what a sigh of a read Phil - you penned the very hurts that come when a partner walks out and leaves such sadness and sorrow - - full marks for the lump that will remain in many a heart (including mine too ) after reading this lament on The Last Romance.
August 6th, 2022 12:56
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