Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
How Many, Before?
Neville said:
It always amazes me yet I am rarely surprised .. (that by the way applies equally to your authors note as it does more generally to your poetry) .. since I have come to anticipate either subtle twists and killer punchlines which is the hallmark of your writing and the highest of compliments I am able to pay while getting ready for work this morning .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:51
Neville said:
It always amazes me yet I am rarely surprised .. (that by the way applies equally to your authors note as it does more generally to your poetry) .. since I have come to anticipate either subtle twists and killer punchlines which is the hallmark of your writing and the highest of compliments I am able to pay while getting ready for work this morning .. Neville
August 12th, 2024 01:51
I Need To Be Near You
Dan Williams said:
So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
August 12th, 2024 00:32
Dan Williams said:
So sad and regretful, insinuating tears, I sympathize. Good work.
August 12th, 2024 00:32
How Many, Before?
sorenbarrett said:
A write of questions about dissolution of a relationship. Well written and nicely said.
August 11th, 2024 12:48
sorenbarrett said:
A write of questions about dissolution of a relationship. Well written and nicely said.
August 11th, 2024 12:48
I Need To Be Near You
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly sad and if it is non fiction even sadder, as a woman I\'d like to say go out and get your girl, because we want to be saved, but not knowing each side of the coin is difficult to judge, a beautiful love note or song. I hope she comes back. š¹
August 11th, 2024 03:49
Teddy.15 said:
Incredibly sad and if it is non fiction even sadder, as a woman I\'d like to say go out and get your girl, because we want to be saved, but not knowing each side of the coin is difficult to judge, a beautiful love note or song. I hope she comes back. š¹
August 11th, 2024 03:49
I Need To Be Near You
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. A love that was your sunlight, now obscured. Breakups do that. They cause such hurt. Your emotions come through well in this poem. Iām sure it will be relatable to many. Have a good Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 03:15
Cassie58 said:
A sad poem. A love that was your sunlight, now obscured. Breakups do that. They cause such hurt. Your emotions come through well in this poem. Iām sure it will be relatable to many. Have a good Sunday.
August 11th, 2024 03:15
I Need To Be Near You
Neville said:
Been there, done that & you clearly have too sir .. well scribed ..
August 11th, 2024 02:36
Neville said:
Been there, done that & you clearly have too sir .. well scribed ..
August 11th, 2024 02:36
I Need To Be Near You
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be near her in your heart Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
You will always be near her in your heart Phil.
Andy
August 11th, 2024 01:39
Deep Sixed
Dan Williams said:
\"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of skip this with the redhead. Good work.
August 11th, 2024 00:24
Dan Williams said:
\"rude dancing in the nightclub\" will buy you grief every time. Kind of skip this with the redhead. Good work.
August 11th, 2024 00:24
Brokenhearted Charities
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an important number Phil.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Such an important number Phil.
Andy
August 10th, 2024 01:10
Deep Sixed
Doggerel Dave said:
\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"
Holidays are so brief - but I found myself very entertained from my deckchair (well clear of trouble).
August 9th, 2024 19:15
Doggerel Dave said:
\"parting is such sweet sorrow\"
Holidays are so brief - but I found myself very entertained from my deckchair (well clear of trouble).
August 9th, 2024 19:15
Deep Sixed
sorenbarrett said:
This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved it.
August 9th, 2024 12:02
sorenbarrett said:
This one brightened my afternoon and that is all I can ask of a poem Loved it.
August 9th, 2024 12:02
Deep Sixed
Teddy.15 said:
Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. š¹
August 9th, 2024 11:50
Teddy.15 said:
Something\'s just aren\'t meant to be, I do hope he had better times with the redhead. š¹
August 9th, 2024 11:50
Deep Sixed
Neville said:
the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..
this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)
August 9th, 2024 11:09
Neville said:
the full five & three quarters always raises a smile .. if nothing else ..
this is another brilliant snippet from what is rapidly becoming one of my favourite portfolios sir Fences27 :)
August 9th, 2024 11:09
Brokenhearted Charities
Doggerel Dave said:
Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.
August 8th, 2024 17:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Look at how technology and \'Love\' keep the economy stimulated.
Can you franchise that out? there\'s enough profit there for everyone to have a fair return.
Good laugh, Phil with just the merest smattering of cynicism I feel.
August 8th, 2024 17:28
Brokenhearted Charities
Neville said:
You are not only funny, you are amazing Phil ..
Hou have got this particular poetic genre sewn up my friend .. Neville
August 8th, 2024 13:38
Neville said:
You are not only funny, you are amazing Phil ..
Hou have got this particular poetic genre sewn up my friend .. Neville
August 8th, 2024 13:38
Brokenhearted Charities
Teddy.15 said:
I would give you $ 19.99 for your wonderful ironic humour, what a jar you\'ve opened on love, inspiring to say the least, brilliant and I think I may chuckle all evening, Phil the agony uncle on the radio š» keeping the world honest, love it\'s not all sunshine and rainbows this is a kudos. š¹
August 8th, 2024 09:58
Teddy.15 said:
I would give you $ 19.99 for your wonderful ironic humour, what a jar you\'ve opened on love, inspiring to say the least, brilliant and I think I may chuckle all evening, Phil the agony uncle on the radio š» keeping the world honest, love it\'s not all sunshine and rainbows this is a kudos. š¹
August 8th, 2024 09:58
Blue Song at Night
rrodriguez said:
This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked the rhyme and the story it tells. Great job!
August 7th, 2024 20:16
rrodriguez said:
This is quite a tale that can be transformed into a micro-story. I liked the rhyme and the story it tells. Great job!
August 7th, 2024 20:16
Blue Song at Night
Doggerel Dave said:
Age old tradition - do it in chapters, Phil.
I always find it satisfying to have achieved the end. Fined up nicely. It is open enders I\'m not fond of.
August 7th, 2024 18:13
Doggerel Dave said:
Age old tradition - do it in chapters, Phil.
I always find it satisfying to have achieved the end. Fined up nicely. It is open enders I\'m not fond of.
August 7th, 2024 18:13
Blue Song at Night
Bella Shepard said:
Nicely done, a touch of Agatha Christie there, loved it.
August 7th, 2024 14:49
Bella Shepard said:
Nicely done, a touch of Agatha Christie there, loved it.
August 7th, 2024 14:49
Blue Song at Night
Neville said:
There are some real nasty folk about aren\'t there Phil .. a torrid tale told tantalizingly well ..
August 7th, 2024 11:38
Neville said:
There are some real nasty folk about aren\'t there Phil .. a torrid tale told tantalizingly well ..
August 7th, 2024 11:38
Blue Song at Night
Teddy.15 said:
Your dramatic imagery brings the reader to the forefront of this. A very serious subject, I love your title. It\'s an open book. š¹
August 7th, 2024 11:18
Teddy.15 said:
Your dramatic imagery brings the reader to the forefront of this. A very serious subject, I love your title. It\'s an open book. š¹
August 7th, 2024 11:18
Blue Song at Night
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini
August 7th, 2024 10:04
sorenbarrett said:
Quite the story, I just don\'t think I could stomach a chocolate martini
August 7th, 2024 10:04
Blue Song in Evening
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m engrossed, can\'t wait for the next episode. Good Write!
August 6th, 2024 12:52
Bella Shepard said:
I\'m engrossed, can\'t wait for the next episode. Good Write!
August 6th, 2024 12:52
Blue Song at Noon
Teddy.15 said:
I love the blues, hey you have a few of these songs under your wings. Love this. š¹
August 6th, 2024 01:28
Teddy.15 said:
I love the blues, hey you have a few of these songs under your wings. Love this. š¹
August 6th, 2024 01:28
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