Comments received on poems by MendedFences27
In the Clouds
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this write. Love the clouds and sometimes find myself living in the clouds. Nicely done
August 3rd, 2024 08:53
sorenbarrett said:
Beautiful images in this write. Love the clouds and sometimes find myself living in the clouds. Nicely done
August 3rd, 2024 08:53
In the Clouds
Cassie58 said:
The Lark Ascending by Vaughan Williams does this to me. It is a wonderful out of world feeling. Very nicely penned. Music is a great escape. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 08:46
Cassie58 said:
The Lark Ascending by Vaughan Williams does this to me. It is a wonderful out of world feeling. Very nicely penned. Music is a great escape. Happy Saturday.
August 3rd, 2024 08:46
A Love Song
Neville said:
Now where did that come from .. magic .. rather like a rabbit out off a hat ..
August 3rd, 2024 00:48
Neville said:
Now where did that come from .. magic .. rather like a rabbit out off a hat ..
August 3rd, 2024 00:48
A Love Song
Teddy.15 said:
A true life love song dear Phil, your ending could end like a fairytale or a tragedy, beautiful poetry my friend. 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 11:34
Teddy.15 said:
A true life love song dear Phil, your ending could end like a fairytale or a tragedy, beautiful poetry my friend. 🌹
August 2nd, 2024 11:34
Hot Off the Press
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good rant Phil, I agree with most of it.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good rant Phil, I agree with most of it.
Andy
August 2nd, 2024 01:49
Sorrow
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I find it hard to describe lost love, you have done a fine job.
August 2nd, 2024 00:17
Dan Williams said:
Sometimes I find it hard to describe lost love, you have done a fine job.
August 2nd, 2024 00:17
Hot Off the Press
Doggerel Dave said:
Your Full Bore Safety Valve worked extremely efficiently from what I can see here, Phil.
Now while I\'m not going to make comment on the ‘state of the nation’ wrt the USA (don’t try me!) much of that steam could be reasonably blasted off from a point somewhere on another part of the globe, like……..
Such a good write.
August 1st, 2024 17:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Your Full Bore Safety Valve worked extremely efficiently from what I can see here, Phil.
Now while I\'m not going to make comment on the ‘state of the nation’ wrt the USA (don’t try me!) much of that steam could be reasonably blasted off from a point somewhere on another part of the globe, like……..
Such a good write.
August 1st, 2024 17:48
Hot Off the Press
Teddy.15 said:
So very brilliant every last line. Frightening but so damn true. The journals are the same world wide. 🌹
August 1st, 2024 16:11
Teddy.15 said:
So very brilliant every last line. Frightening but so damn true. The journals are the same world wide. 🌹
August 1st, 2024 16:11
Hot Off the Press
Neville said:
I was in Florida very recently .. not all of it mind, but certainly in Miami for 4th July and was very surprised at how different it is today to when I last paid a call .. and having got that out into the open, I think I can now more fully appreciate your chagrin .. this is by the way very much of the moment I fear .. and just hope your middle name is not Nostradamus .. Neville
August 1st, 2024 13:40
Neville said:
I was in Florida very recently .. not all of it mind, but certainly in Miami for 4th July and was very surprised at how different it is today to when I last paid a call .. and having got that out into the open, I think I can now more fully appreciate your chagrin .. this is by the way very much of the moment I fear .. and just hope your middle name is not Nostradamus .. Neville
August 1st, 2024 13:40
Hot Off the Press
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for giving me the news of the day and now I feel I won\'t have to watch it. Well written in good verse a fun read.
August 1st, 2024 10:50
sorenbarrett said:
Thank you for giving me the news of the day and now I feel I won\'t have to watch it. Well written in good verse a fun read.
August 1st, 2024 10:50
Sorrow
Goldfinch60 said:
Theu certainly are Phil but we must get through that sorrow and move on, life is good.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:39
Goldfinch60 said:
Theu certainly are Phil but we must get through that sorrow and move on, life is good.
Andy
August 1st, 2024 01:39
Sorrow
Teddy.15 said:
The tragedy of Divorce lawyers and all, dear Phil, my friend has recently been through this and I have seen how it\'s effected her, a deeply sad poem, but so very relevant and relatable to so many, it\'s a hard world to live in some forms of sorrow are so very worse than others, I take my hat off to you for this because if all that\'s left is pride well that\'s not too shabby, some don\'t even get to keep that. A heartfelt read Sir. 🌹
July 31st, 2024 15:11
Teddy.15 said:
The tragedy of Divorce lawyers and all, dear Phil, my friend has recently been through this and I have seen how it\'s effected her, a deeply sad poem, but so very relevant and relatable to so many, it\'s a hard world to live in some forms of sorrow are so very worse than others, I take my hat off to you for this because if all that\'s left is pride well that\'s not too shabby, some don\'t even get to keep that. A heartfelt read Sir. 🌹
July 31st, 2024 15:11
Sorrow
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words the great sorrow of loss, be it death of a loved one, or death of a relationship, with a rhyming pattern that stitches it together seamlessly. So sad, yet so beautiful in its expression.
July 31st, 2024 13:30
Bella Shepard said:
You have put into words the great sorrow of loss, be it death of a loved one, or death of a relationship, with a rhyming pattern that stitches it together seamlessly. So sad, yet so beautiful in its expression.
July 31st, 2024 13:30
Sorrow
Neville said:
Damn .. I don\'t often get stuck for words, but stuck I am Phil .. How sad is that ..
Damn good poetry regardless .. N
July 31st, 2024 12:46
Neville said:
Damn .. I don\'t often get stuck for words, but stuck I am Phil .. How sad is that ..
Damn good poetry regardless .. N
July 31st, 2024 12:46
Sorrow
sorenbarrett said:
Just like when all the wood is burned all that is left is ashes. Sad commentary on society and life
July 31st, 2024 11:59
sorenbarrett said:
Just like when all the wood is burned all that is left is ashes. Sad commentary on society and life
July 31st, 2024 11:59
The Mystery of a Woman
Doggerel Dave said:
Better the poem popped into your head,
Than your head being popped by the lead..
I know - too obvious, but it\'s the best I can do before my afternoon nap.....
July 30th, 2024 21:51
Doggerel Dave said:
Better the poem popped into your head,
Than your head being popped by the lead..
I know - too obvious, but it\'s the best I can do before my afternoon nap.....
July 30th, 2024 21:51
The Mystery of a Woman
sorenbarrett said:
A noir style poem in black and white. Loved those old movies. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:18
sorenbarrett said:
A noir style poem in black and white. Loved those old movies. Well written
July 30th, 2024 19:18
The Mystery of a Woman
Neville said:
excruciatingly gory but boy what a bloody story .. 😎👍
July 30th, 2024 12:45
Neville said:
excruciatingly gory but boy what a bloody story .. 😎👍
July 30th, 2024 12:45
The Mystery of a Woman
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you just started your first novel? Two most interesting characters, although we now know the end. brilliant imagery somewhat gory. I had a chuckle when I read the title. 🤣
July 30th, 2024 09:56
Teddy.15 said:
Maybe you just started your first novel? Two most interesting characters, although we now know the end. brilliant imagery somewhat gory. I had a chuckle when I read the title. 🤣
July 30th, 2024 09:56
To Be Loved
Dan Williams said:
\"does she ever think of me?\" is my epitaph. Many succumb to the escape from such pain. Told very well.
July 30th, 2024 00:02
Dan Williams said:
\"does she ever think of me?\" is my epitaph. Many succumb to the escape from such pain. Told very well.
July 30th, 2024 00:02
Still I Know
Doggerel Dave said:
I can give ninety percent of love poetry a miss, Phil, but
Still, I both enjoyed the content,
And admired the structure and rhyme.
July 29th, 2024 17:39
Doggerel Dave said:
I can give ninety percent of love poetry a miss, Phil, but
Still, I both enjoyed the content,
And admired the structure and rhyme.
July 29th, 2024 17:39
Still I Know
Neville said:
this is a real treat Phil .. a meticulously crafted love poem with I imagine considerable longevity to keep it going round and round the MPS block .. 100/100 no less .. Neville
July 29th, 2024 12:33
Neville said:
this is a real treat Phil .. a meticulously crafted love poem with I imagine considerable longevity to keep it going round and round the MPS block .. 100/100 no less .. Neville
July 29th, 2024 12:33
Still I Know
Bella Shepard said:
This poem must be read aloud for the wonderful rhyming pattern which enhances every line. It is beautiful, tender and brimming with love, what could be better. Loved it!
July 29th, 2024 12:00
Bella Shepard said:
This poem must be read aloud for the wonderful rhyming pattern which enhances every line. It is beautiful, tender and brimming with love, what could be better. Loved it!
July 29th, 2024 12:00
Still I Know
sorenbarrett said:
Fixation on a love written nicely in verse well done
July 29th, 2024 10:18
sorenbarrett said:
Fixation on a love written nicely in verse well done
July 29th, 2024 10:18
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