Comments received on poems by Adrianna Kjeld
Story from an Ex-Depression Addict
FredPeyer said:
Some great advice from somebody who (it seems) knows!
Adrianna, I don\'t know if this is biographical, but no matter, your writing is good, raw, to the point. And I do love that last line!
October 9th, 2017 20:30
FredPeyer said:
Some great advice from somebody who (it seems) knows!
Adrianna, I don\'t know if this is biographical, but no matter, your writing is good, raw, to the point. And I do love that last line!
October 9th, 2017 20:30
Story from an Ex-Depression Addict
queer-with-a-pen said:
That last line makes me smile. It’s very reaffirming and validating. Thank you for sharing this work.
October 9th, 2017 17:54
queer-with-a-pen said:
That last line makes me smile. It’s very reaffirming and validating. Thank you for sharing this work.
October 9th, 2017 17:54
The Honey Moon Phase
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, love your poem overall, like the wording, the rhyming, the structure and the subject matter....until the last word on the last line. I know it rhymes, but to finish such a beautiful poem with that kind of word, somehow does not feel right.
October 7th, 2017 02:51
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, love your poem overall, like the wording, the rhyming, the structure and the subject matter....until the last word on the last line. I know it rhymes, but to finish such a beautiful poem with that kind of word, somehow does not feel right.
October 7th, 2017 02:51
The Honey Moon Phase
dusk arising said:
Nice writing. Lovely sentiment here, long may it last for you both.
October 7th, 2017 00:01
dusk arising said:
Nice writing. Lovely sentiment here, long may it last for you both.
October 7th, 2017 00:01
This Love
MendedFences27 said:
I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is.\" Some of us wander through many doors, before finding the prize. Sort of like Monty Hall used to say, \"Will it be Door #1, 2 or 3?\" Love is a fickle penny, you never know where you will find it. Your poem describes a kind of love we all seek, a shared love, one of trust and understanding. I\'ve often described it as a love that requires no forgiveness. First time I\'ve read your stuff, will return for more. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:35
MendedFences27 said:
I believe Fred said it best, :You tell it like it is.\" Some of us wander through many doors, before finding the prize. Sort of like Monty Hall used to say, \"Will it be Door #1, 2 or 3?\" Love is a fickle penny, you never know where you will find it. Your poem describes a kind of love we all seek, a shared love, one of trust and understanding. I\'ve often described it as a love that requires no forgiveness. First time I\'ve read your stuff, will return for more. - Phil A.
October 3rd, 2017 15:35
Life as I know it
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, your great little poem just proved that we don\'t have to be rich and famous to be happy!
Great writing, I do like it.
October 3rd, 2017 00:45
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, your great little poem just proved that we don\'t have to be rich and famous to be happy!
Great writing, I do like it.
October 3rd, 2017 00:45
Butterflies
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, the butterflies will come again! I promise! Don\'t forget, they need a rest too.
You know, the beginning of a relationship is the most incredible, most amazing thing in the world. It is a real roller-coaster, one day you are in the clouds, the next day you feel like standing in pouring rain. You are not yet sure about your feelings, and you are not yet sure about the other person\'s feelings, so just step back, and let it happen to you! Remember that old song: Que sera , sera! Whatever will be, will be. And in Hawaii we have a saying: If can, can, if no can, no can!
Wish you a beautiful week!!!!
October 2nd, 2017 03:23
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, the butterflies will come again! I promise! Don\'t forget, they need a rest too.
You know, the beginning of a relationship is the most incredible, most amazing thing in the world. It is a real roller-coaster, one day you are in the clouds, the next day you feel like standing in pouring rain. You are not yet sure about your feelings, and you are not yet sure about the other person\'s feelings, so just step back, and let it happen to you! Remember that old song: Que sera , sera! Whatever will be, will be. And in Hawaii we have a saying: If can, can, if no can, no can!
Wish you a beautiful week!!!!
October 2nd, 2017 03:23
Frank Sinatra
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, I like how you lead into the poem with Frank Sinatra. It sets the tone right away. First dates can be beautiful (or a disaster). Also like the line where you compare the \'us\' to the \'you and I\', it is a distinction many people might not even realize.
Very good poem, I like it a lot.
September 30th, 2017 22:00
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, I like how you lead into the poem with Frank Sinatra. It sets the tone right away. First dates can be beautiful (or a disaster). Also like the line where you compare the \'us\' to the \'you and I\', it is a distinction many people might not even realize.
Very good poem, I like it a lot.
September 30th, 2017 22:00
Frank Sinatra
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written Sunrise. I love it. ; )
September 30th, 2017 19:46
Accidental Poet said:
Beautifully written Sunrise. I love it. ; )
September 30th, 2017 19:46
This Love
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, nice poem, you tell it how it is! Love the last line! No matter what happens to us, there will be a time when that door needs to be open again.
September 29th, 2017 02:55
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, nice poem, you tell it how it is! Love the last line! No matter what happens to us, there will be a time when that door needs to be open again.
September 29th, 2017 02:55
Existential Crisis
FredPeyer said:
What happened to your happiness from the last poem, Adrianna?
Maybe you should look at the world through one of your fuzzy socks!
I guess the love you have to find yourself.
September 19th, 2017 16:03
FredPeyer said:
What happened to your happiness from the last poem, Adrianna?
Maybe you should look at the world through one of your fuzzy socks!
I guess the love you have to find yourself.
September 19th, 2017 16:03
Happiness
FredPeyer said:
And happiness can be found in one of your poems, Adrianna!
Love it!
September 13th, 2017 21:59
FredPeyer said:
And happiness can be found in one of your poems, Adrianna!
Love it!
September 13th, 2017 21:59
Good Friends
FredPeyer said:
Well written poem, Adrianna, with a great message. Real friends are hard to find and you are lucky if you have two or three in a lifetime.
September 1st, 2017 20:26
FredPeyer said:
Well written poem, Adrianna, with a great message. Real friends are hard to find and you are lucky if you have two or three in a lifetime.
September 1st, 2017 20:26
Confessions
FredPeyer said:
A beautifully written poem, sad, but with a lot of meaning.
But, Adrianna, what the heck were you doing under the hobo bridge?!!!
August 22nd, 2017 20:21
FredPeyer said:
A beautifully written poem, sad, but with a lot of meaning.
But, Adrianna, what the heck were you doing under the hobo bridge?!!!
August 22nd, 2017 20:21
Wild!
kevin browne said:
really smooth and comforting poem. love your work here.
August 2nd, 2017 00:58
kevin browne said:
really smooth and comforting poem. love your work here.
August 2nd, 2017 00:58
Wild!
Mellowman said:
This poem has a classic Poetry Open Mic feel to it! Loved it! Made me want to clap!
August 1st, 2017 20:13
Mellowman said:
This poem has a classic Poetry Open Mic feel to it! Loved it! Made me want to clap!
August 1st, 2017 20:13
Wild!
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, your poem is wild! Seriously, I really enjoyed it, and you are right, we do miss out on a lot by not looking at the little things.
August 1st, 2017 18:39
FredPeyer said:
Adrianna, your poem is wild! Seriously, I really enjoyed it, and you are right, we do miss out on a lot by not looking at the little things.
August 1st, 2017 18:39
Ladies!
Micalina said:
That is great! I remember those days.
Glad they are over for many years.
Hugs
Micalina
July 26th, 2017 08:03
Micalina said:
That is great! I remember those days.
Glad they are over for many years.
Hugs
Micalina
July 26th, 2017 08:03
Coffee and cigarettes
Micalina said:
I gave up smoking when I was 28 years olds now I am 68 going on 69. I used to smoke three packs of cigarettes a day. It is addictive they say more than any other drug. But I threw the cigarettes away and went cold turkey. It took a whole year to get it out of my system. I even had a dream about smoking and woke up in a deep sweat when I quit. You can do it. I did at a younger age. You will feel better after you do. Also think of all the money that you will save. I understand that cigarettes are expensive now. I will post a poem another day about my quitting. It is actually like a rap song. Good luck but I know you can do it.
July 26th, 2017 08:01
Micalina said:
I gave up smoking when I was 28 years olds now I am 68 going on 69. I used to smoke three packs of cigarettes a day. It is addictive they say more than any other drug. But I threw the cigarettes away and went cold turkey. It took a whole year to get it out of my system. I even had a dream about smoking and woke up in a deep sweat when I quit. You can do it. I did at a younger age. You will feel better after you do. Also think of all the money that you will save. I understand that cigarettes are expensive now. I will post a poem another day about my quitting. It is actually like a rap song. Good luck but I know you can do it.
July 26th, 2017 08:01
Imperfection
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Life could be so many things if only we\'d enable it properly. Nicely written, wonderful job.
July 10th, 2017 01:55
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed. Life could be so many things if only we\'d enable it properly. Nicely written, wonderful job.
July 10th, 2017 01:55
Imperfection
burning-embers said:
Someone else\'s recently penned phrase \'perfect imperfections\' comes to mind. \'instead of letting real words sink\' i wonder if you meant \'real worlds sink\'. Yes to love and reflections
July 9th, 2017 18:09
burning-embers said:
Someone else\'s recently penned phrase \'perfect imperfections\' comes to mind. \'instead of letting real words sink\' i wonder if you meant \'real worlds sink\'. Yes to love and reflections
July 9th, 2017 18:09
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