Comments received on poems by Adrianna Kjeld



Losing The Loveliest Love
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Adrianna!

March 4th, 2020 18:00

Losing The Loveliest Love
dusk arising said:

A heartfelt plea comes through very strong here.

March 3rd, 2020 06:14

Losing The Loveliest Love
Adrianna Kjeld said:

My guy is great, out relationship can be insane sometimes but we are in love, we\'re just so not ready for kids.

March 3rd, 2020 03:25

Losing The Loveliest Love
Adrianna Kjeld said:

My guy is great, out relationship can be insane sometimes but we are in love, we\'re just so not ready for kids.

March 3rd, 2020 03:25

Looking Up Again
kevin browne said:

That\'s what I love to read about. Great work.

March 14th, 2018 19:33

Floral, Red Dress.
FredPeyer said:

You outdid yourself with this one, Adrianna! Well written, well rhymed, it is funny, tender, innocent, with a kind of tongue in cheek quality.
Love it.

February 9th, 2018 14:02

Floral, Red Dress.
Tony36 said:

Great write

February 8th, 2018 17:39

Months to Years. Depression.
Lexi_lg said:

wow so true tho like schools try to help with those things but the only thing they do is turn around and tell your parents

February 3rd, 2018 08:38

Months to Years. Depression.
Lorna said:

I agree with both comments - relying on yourself is the secret of life.

February 3rd, 2018 08:33

Months to Years. Depression.
FredPeyer said:

Ahw, Adrianna, so sad! Well written though! Well, there you are, ready with your suitcases, and there is no bus. So you rely on yourself and get going!! If you dig deep down, do you really need him?

February 2nd, 2018 23:26

Realizations
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 20th, 2018 09:57

Catatonic Sight
FredPeyer said:

Adrianna, I think that last line is what the whole poem is about. How do we know when a love is a true love? What is true love? Since love does not lie, how can any love not be true?
I am probably off the point here, but your poem made me think.

January 14th, 2018 03:08

Thinking
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

A lovely appealing poem. I ESP loved the creatively thought up \"conceited \"line, yeah nicely said, way to go to find out certainty of love. Thumbs up.


Soo nice to read from u again. Pls do review comment my latest poem too, titled,\"play it on your lips\"

January 9th, 2018 15:10

Thinking
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Adrianna, but it does sound a bit like you are barking up the wrong tree! But hey, what do I know!


December 20th, 2017 19:55

Meh.
FredPeyer said:

Well written, Adrianna! You captured that feeling of sadness well, but at the same time there is forgiveness and hope, especially in the last stanza.


December 14th, 2017 14:02

Cold
FredPeyer said:

Adrianna, I like your raw, straight forward writing. I wonder though how it can be love if somebody says:
\"You\'re ugly, disgusting, and your skin is ghastly, you\'re only comparable to a complete catastrophe.\"
to you.Judging from your picture, you look perfectly fine to me!

December 5th, 2017 04:35

Reputation
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Poignant poem that many can relate to but only efficient writers like u can chronicle the soulful up to positivity and express so awesomely. ESP admire the last lines, the metaphor and poetics. But don\'t cut wrists, just bleed in ink I always advise. Kudos.



So nice to read from your pen again,
Do pls review my latest too.

November 29th, 2017 02:50

Reputation
FredPeyer said:

An incredible journey, Adrianna! Well written. Stay strong!

November 20th, 2017 17:13

Reputation
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ADRIANNA ~ for a very frank and challenging confession ! However the pleasure (hidden behind your almost smile !) and the unsuppressed twinkle in your eyes belies much of the angst you have expressed in your gripping poem ! You are much to young and sassy become a recluse ! Your poem depressed me ~ BUT ~ your photo lifted my Spirits that you have \"moved on !\" STRONG ~ maybe not always lonely ~ You conquered ~ YOU ARE ALIVE ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Thinking of You ~ Happy Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)

November 19th, 2017 04:30

Old Friends
FredPeyer said:

\'A sneak peek at my life
like its some kind of exhibit.\'
As far as I am concerned (but I don\'t really count) this is the best line in the whole poem!
Not that the rest is bad, no, it\'s just that this one stands out.
Good rhyming, you got your points across very well. He is gone, and he should stay gone!

November 9th, 2017 03:10

If I Had The Chance...Again.
FredPeyer said:

Adrianna, what can I say? Life is not fair. And you expressed that beautifully in this poem.

November 6th, 2017 03:06

To The Moon
Tony36 said:

Wonderful write

November 3rd, 2017 17:29

To The Moon
kevin browne said:

the gravity of this poem just pulled me straight in and I am now rotating widely around the universe and I\'m loving it. great write, my friend.

November 3rd, 2017 15:42

To The Moon
FredPeyer said:

I know there is that trampoline-like thingy on the moon erected just to return all the kisses that are flung its way. But one has to aim very carefully!
Great poem, Adrianna!

November 3rd, 2017 12:59

Comfort
FredPeyer said:

I do like your poem, and the last line says it all. Stay in the moment, enjoy what you have, as long as you have it. Don\'t overthink! If it is right, you just know!

October 29th, 2017 04:09

Dirty Dishes
queer-with-a-pen said:

I’m about to take an exam I forgot to study for in a class I don’t really understand. But this poem, man, it’s made me feel less crappy. Thank you.

October 19th, 2017 16:39

Social Media
Adrianna Kjeld said:

This is one of those weird poems you kinda blerp out and forget the flow of and come back to it 8 hrs later going, \"wtf is this?\"

October 17th, 2017 23:29

My Morning Routine.
FredPeyer said:

Sounds like the perfect morning to me, Adrianna! I can even tell that you are spoiled! :-)
A very nicely written, light account of the beginning of the day. With a nice touch of humor as well.
I like it.

October 12th, 2017 17:30

Razors
Mugsdaddy said:

Beautiful write it would soften any man\'s heart.
Mugs

October 11th, 2017 13:58

Razors
FredPeyer said:

Adrianna, this is such a nice poem about a love gone wrong and a new love coming into bloom.
If you feel the way you seem to feel in the poem, TELL HIM YOU LOVE HIM!

October 11th, 2017 03:10

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