Comments received on poems by Adrianna Kjeld
Imperfection
FredPeyer said:
Life IS full of love, and yes, we are all imperfect. But that is the beauty of it. Can you imagine a world full of perfect people? No, thank you, I like it the way it is.
I do like your poem Adrianna, it reminds us all to accept others the way they are.
July 9th, 2017 18:00
FredPeyer said:
Life IS full of love, and yes, we are all imperfect. But that is the beauty of it. Can you imagine a world full of perfect people? No, thank you, I like it the way it is.
I do like your poem Adrianna, it reminds us all to accept others the way they are.
July 9th, 2017 18:00
Prom
FredPeyer said:
A nice light well written piece. I remember my daughter\'s prom night, and understand that it can be scary. You\'re on the stage where everybody can see you. Nuff said. I am glad it did work out for you despite the, as it turned out, small hickup with your friend.
July 6th, 2017 23:03
FredPeyer said:
A nice light well written piece. I remember my daughter\'s prom night, and understand that it can be scary. You\'re on the stage where everybody can see you. Nuff said. I am glad it did work out for you despite the, as it turned out, small hickup with your friend.
July 6th, 2017 23:03
Oranges
burning-embers said:
Oh i love \'em but not allowed them. Put myself on ketogenic diet. I miss them even more now.
July 5th, 2017 05:57
burning-embers said:
Oh i love \'em but not allowed them. Put myself on ketogenic diet. I miss them even more now.
July 5th, 2017 05:57
Oranges
FredPeyer said:
After reading your fun poem, I may never look at an Orange the same way again.
July 5th, 2017 03:31
FredPeyer said:
After reading your fun poem, I may never look at an Orange the same way again.
July 5th, 2017 03:31
Oranges
onepauly said:
the most positive poem I\'ve read I a very long time! great work!
July 4th, 2017 23:26
onepauly said:
the most positive poem I\'ve read I a very long time! great work!
July 4th, 2017 23:26
Ladies!
Louis Gibbs said:
See what all we men are missing! I guess we weren\'t brave enough to be women this time. Good poem, Adrianna.
July 3rd, 2017 13:12
Louis Gibbs said:
See what all we men are missing! I guess we weren\'t brave enough to be women this time. Good poem, Adrianna.
July 3rd, 2017 13:12
A door without locks
Augustus said:
Unlocked hidden doors serve as crutches perhaps for troubled emotions. As time passes and life is not served us well, we can pick up the Glock, a nine millimeter quick fix. Or we can leave and go have fun. Like the way you ended. Enjoyed this enigmatic poem
May 24th, 2017 23:03
Augustus said:
Unlocked hidden doors serve as crutches perhaps for troubled emotions. As time passes and life is not served us well, we can pick up the Glock, a nine millimeter quick fix. Or we can leave and go have fun. Like the way you ended. Enjoyed this enigmatic poem
May 24th, 2017 23:03
World in her hands.
Augustus said:
\"There is a simpleness to good and bad\" very nice
May 24th, 2017 22:54
Augustus said:
\"There is a simpleness to good and bad\" very nice
May 24th, 2017 22:54
The Anger Inside
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah life is rough like u rhymed in so superbly. Lyrical and wistful. Thumbs up for expressing it swell.
Pls do comment my latest poem too, u r most welcome to.
April 27th, 2017 15:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yeah life is rough like u rhymed in so superbly. Lyrical and wistful. Thumbs up for expressing it swell.
Pls do comment my latest poem too, u r most welcome to.
April 27th, 2017 15:16
Coffee and cigarettes
willyweed said:
I gave up smoking but this is still good work A-sunrise. ww
April 20th, 2017 17:34
willyweed said:
I gave up smoking but this is still good work A-sunrise. ww
April 20th, 2017 17:34
Aaaaaaand he’s gone
Pls JUST LISTEN!!!!!! said:
Hmmmm great move never put your self through that pressure. Losing your love gives people great pain but you can get through it.
April 13th, 2017 19:40
Pls JUST LISTEN!!!!!! said:
Hmmmm great move never put your self through that pressure. Losing your love gives people great pain but you can get through it.
April 13th, 2017 19:40
Someone new, the usual
willyweed said:
just wait the real deal will show up, and you\'ll know the bullshit is over good luck your young no rush! ww
April 3rd, 2017 08:47
willyweed said:
just wait the real deal will show up, and you\'ll know the bullshit is over good luck your young no rush! ww
April 3rd, 2017 08:47
Help me
Augustus said:
Though a bit troubling with strife I sense some strength to over come all obstacles. Loved the inverted pyramid.
February 15th, 2017 17:11
Augustus said:
Though a bit troubling with strife I sense some strength to over come all obstacles. Loved the inverted pyramid.
February 15th, 2017 17:11
His Mind On Mine
Elizabethan Sea said:
Beautiful! I like some of the words in this poem a lot. It makes a very real picture and feeling. This poem seems to come to life.
February 6th, 2017 22:09
Elizabethan Sea said:
Beautiful! I like some of the words in this poem a lot. It makes a very real picture and feeling. This poem seems to come to life.
February 6th, 2017 22:09
The Midnight Wish
Elizabethan Sea said:
Amber! This is so beautiful and bittersweet, it makes me want to cry. I love the brighter ending. It\'s like the sun breaking from behind some clouds and melting the frost. This is a beautiful poem. The rhyme scheme and emphasis of certain vowels mimics the sound of crying or weeping, which is fitting. And the length of stanzas fits the content really well. For example: \"Time went on like a ticking clock
I wanted nothing more to stop
but when I stood there at the edge
I decided I should not.\" This stanza is shorter and more abrupt than the others. Then after that the next stanza is a little longer and flows like running away. The poem paints a picture in my mind, which is wonderful. I can\'t wait to read more of your work. :)
February 6th, 2017 22:05
Elizabethan Sea said:
Amber! This is so beautiful and bittersweet, it makes me want to cry. I love the brighter ending. It\'s like the sun breaking from behind some clouds and melting the frost. This is a beautiful poem. The rhyme scheme and emphasis of certain vowels mimics the sound of crying or weeping, which is fitting. And the length of stanzas fits the content really well. For example: \"Time went on like a ticking clock
I wanted nothing more to stop
but when I stood there at the edge
I decided I should not.\" This stanza is shorter and more abrupt than the others. Then after that the next stanza is a little longer and flows like running away. The poem paints a picture in my mind, which is wonderful. I can\'t wait to read more of your work. :)
February 6th, 2017 22:05
Coffee and Cigarettes
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Who was it who said \"My only regrets is that I have no regrets\"?
You\'re only here once be damned and enjoy yourself.
We will all die in the end
Happy days
February 2nd, 2017 17:54
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Who was it who said \"My only regrets is that I have no regrets\"?
You\'re only here once be damned and enjoy yourself.
We will all die in the end
Happy days
February 2nd, 2017 17:54
The Midnight Wish
Augustus said:
Interesting how those feelings never go away. They must be very important to our psyche. Nice that the life untangled after being so twisted. Very nicely done.
January 29th, 2017 22:34
Augustus said:
Interesting how those feelings never go away. They must be very important to our psyche. Nice that the life untangled after being so twisted. Very nicely done.
January 29th, 2017 22:34
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