Comments received on poems by Allan J. Renaldo
Of Course
FredPeyer said:
For God\'s sake, tell us what happened?
Just kidding, your poem leaves it wide open. Whatever happened, happened, and since I don\'t know what that is, I don\'t know why either!
January 21st, 2018 02:22
FredPeyer said:
For God\'s sake, tell us what happened?
Just kidding, your poem leaves it wide open. Whatever happened, happened, and since I don\'t know what that is, I don\'t know why either!
January 21st, 2018 02:22
We aren\'t
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good piece of writing .. i like the wording here
January 20th, 2018 05:22
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
good piece of writing .. i like the wording here
January 20th, 2018 05:22
I Swear I Love You
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sometimes feelings can get confusing ... nice poem
January 20th, 2018 05:20
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
sometimes feelings can get confusing ... nice poem
January 20th, 2018 05:20
Dreams
Nicholas Browning said:
Love love love. Hmmmmm. If someone ever does truly love you, I suggest you seriously consider mending your broken view of yourself. Love is a pillar on which castles of mind can stand. Good write, thanks.
July 11th, 2017 20:20
Nicholas Browning said:
Love love love. Hmmmmm. If someone ever does truly love you, I suggest you seriously consider mending your broken view of yourself. Love is a pillar on which castles of mind can stand. Good write, thanks.
July 11th, 2017 20:20
Hope{less}
burning-embers said:
This is brilliant work! i believe every bit of twisted anguish u describe and ive been there believe me but youve made it into a what i picture as a comedy sketch to be peformed very tongue in cheek. I\'d love to watch u perform it live.
June 30th, 2017 00:02
burning-embers said:
This is brilliant work! i believe every bit of twisted anguish u describe and ive been there believe me but youve made it into a what i picture as a comedy sketch to be peformed very tongue in cheek. I\'d love to watch u perform it live.
June 30th, 2017 00:02
We aren\'t
Jeff said:
Makes perfect sense my friend...and is nicely penned...great job
June 14th, 2017 10:42
Jeff said:
Makes perfect sense my friend...and is nicely penned...great job
June 14th, 2017 10:42
Heartstrings
Szaviels said:
Good little poem, could do with shortening the last line of stanza 1, slows down the pace a little too much. Other than that its perfect.
June 13th, 2017 05:32
Szaviels said:
Good little poem, could do with shortening the last line of stanza 1, slows down the pace a little too much. Other than that its perfect.
June 13th, 2017 05:32
Hope{less}
Michael Edwards said:
Totally bewildered and determined not to be beaten I put it into Word and changed the font and voila I could read it - as Hopey says great ending.
June 11th, 2017 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
Totally bewildered and determined not to be beaten I put it into Word and changed the font and voila I could read it - as Hopey says great ending.
June 11th, 2017 02:23
Scars
Hopey_xx said:
I love this so much, its so beautifully written, well done.
March 6th, 2017 16:02
Hopey_xx said:
I love this so much, its so beautifully written, well done.
March 6th, 2017 16:02
Mirror
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, as Jooles said we all have a demon within us.
March 1st, 2017 03:07
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, as Jooles said we all have a demon within us.
March 1st, 2017 03:07
Falling
WG7 said:
This is amazing. I love how you could read it both up and down. It is very clever. Though never ever try to fly even if you want to. I tried to before and it did me no good.
February 17th, 2017 17:15
WG7 said:
This is amazing. I love how you could read it both up and down. It is very clever. Though never ever try to fly even if you want to. I tried to before and it did me no good.
February 17th, 2017 17:15
Falling
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! The poems where you can read it backwards are so clever, I tried to make one, not entirely sure if it worked though. Well done
February 17th, 2017 15:04
Hopey_xx said:
Love it! The poems where you can read it backwards are so clever, I tried to make one, not entirely sure if it worked though. Well done
February 17th, 2017 15:04
