Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
stirring the soup
Fay Slimm. said:
I can smell from here that stirring aroma of delectable soup Frank - am on my way and am bringing the bread
November 7th, 2017 15:02
Fay Slimm. said:
I can smell from here that stirring aroma of delectable soup Frank - am on my way and am bringing the bread
November 7th, 2017 15:02
stirring the soup
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the moment of creation. Always wondered how it began. And what a soup it turned out to be.
Well done, Frank!
November 7th, 2017 09:31
Louis Gibbs said:
Ah, the moment of creation. Always wondered how it began. And what a soup it turned out to be.
Well done, Frank!
November 7th, 2017 09:31
stirring the soup
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful evocative Poem FRANK ~ thanks for stirring. It struck a ladle with me because every Saturday Morning I make a cauldron of Veggie Soup with whatever veggies I have to hand plus stock ~ herbs and seasoning ! I decant into individual containers and freeze for use in the week and to share with ANGELA (and other visitors) with crusty bread and a glass of Rioja Tinta ~ For me SOUP is the elixir of life and aways my chosen starter in any restaurant ~ I often ask for (and obtain) the recipe ! Yours BRIAN. Please check my AROMATHERAPY Poem and \"Send Flowers\" FUSION ~ Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Wonderful evocative Poem FRANK ~ thanks for stirring. It struck a ladle with me because every Saturday Morning I make a cauldron of Veggie Soup with whatever veggies I have to hand plus stock ~ herbs and seasoning ! I decant into individual containers and freeze for use in the week and to share with ANGELA (and other visitors) with crusty bread and a glass of Rioja Tinta ~ For me SOUP is the elixir of life and aways my chosen starter in any restaurant ~ I often ask for (and obtain) the recipe ! Yours BRIAN. Please check my AROMATHERAPY Poem and \"Send Flowers\" FUSION ~ Thanks B.
November 7th, 2017 05:15
stirring the soup
FredPeyer said:
I do like the way you write, the way you structure your poems. In this case, I guess it depends on whether he was north or south of the equator!
November 7th, 2017 02:03
FredPeyer said:
I do like the way you write, the way you structure your poems. In this case, I guess it depends on whether he was north or south of the equator!
November 7th, 2017 02:03
stirring the soup
Michael Edwards said:
Smooth and creamy served with fresh baked bread - or in this case a great pen - well writ Frank.
November 7th, 2017 01:11
Michael Edwards said:
Smooth and creamy served with fresh baked bread - or in this case a great pen - well writ Frank.
November 7th, 2017 01:11
three echoes
MendedFences27 said:
Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in this poem we see the extent to which love can reach. From one mountain top to another, across endless miles, with but a single word, lovers can connect. A beautiful poem, Frank, presented in a unique style, with interesting metaphors, \"the speech of a small fire,\" \" he threw his voice, single-handed,.\" Loved every unspoken moment of it. - Phil A.
November 6th, 2017 13:37
MendedFences27 said:
Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in this poem we see the extent to which love can reach. From one mountain top to another, across endless miles, with but a single word, lovers can connect. A beautiful poem, Frank, presented in a unique style, with interesting metaphors, \"the speech of a small fire,\" \" he threw his voice, single-handed,.\" Loved every unspoken moment of it. - Phil A.
November 6th, 2017 13:37
meeting Nola
Louis Gibbs said:
\'The kindness of strangers\' ... I adore the theme, Frank. Beautifully portrayed in this heart touching write. Wouldn\'t it be nice if ... oh well, maybe some day.
November 5th, 2017 10:41
Louis Gibbs said:
\'The kindness of strangers\' ... I adore the theme, Frank. Beautifully portrayed in this heart touching write. Wouldn\'t it be nice if ... oh well, maybe some day.
November 5th, 2017 10:41
meeting Nola
FredPeyer said:
Frank, this poem is just great. I stopped at the end with a \'what just happened?\' kind of thought in my head. There is a much deeper meaning here, and you can be sure I will eventually get it.
November 5th, 2017 04:14
FredPeyer said:
Frank, this poem is just great. I stopped at the end with a \'what just happened?\' kind of thought in my head. There is a much deeper meaning here, and you can be sure I will eventually get it.
November 5th, 2017 04:14
stars in his sleeves
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you outed a star person disguised as a human. Lot of them around these strange days. Enjoyable poem, Frank!
November 4th, 2017 08:19
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like you outed a star person disguised as a human. Lot of them around these strange days. Enjoyable poem, Frank!
November 4th, 2017 08:19
hair wash on friday nights
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves. This poem states it well, Frank. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves. This poem states it well, Frank. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 09:41
hair wash on friday nights
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us Frank ~ just how pampered we are today ! I was born in 1983 ~ so I have always enjoyed Hotel Standard ~ Bathrooms with showers and H & C on tap ! At Home and now in my own Flat. We might be \"richer\" but when I look at my Grandparents ~ we are no happier ! It\'s not what we possess that brings happiness ~ It is our state of Mind and our day-by-day relationships with our Family Friends & Neighbours and with our Creator GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my tribute to Angela on a Beach ~ thanks BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us Frank ~ just how pampered we are today ! I was born in 1983 ~ so I have always enjoyed Hotel Standard ~ Bathrooms with showers and H & C on tap ! At Home and now in my own Flat. We might be \"richer\" but when I look at my Grandparents ~ we are no happier ! It\'s not what we possess that brings happiness ~ It is our state of Mind and our day-by-day relationships with our Family Friends & Neighbours and with our Creator GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my tribute to Angela on a Beach ~ thanks BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 03:06
hair wash on friday nights
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it brings back memories to me as well.
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it brings back memories to me as well.
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
hair wash on friday nights
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. An outside loo too? As on a comedy show: \'But you just had a bath in January, and now it\'s June!\' heehee.
November 3rd, 2017 02:44
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. An outside loo too? As on a comedy show: \'But you just had a bath in January, and now it\'s June!\' heehee.
November 3rd, 2017 02:44
hair wash on friday nights
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this brings back memories including a 2 mile walk to school across fields and through woods - something that simply wouldn\'t happen today as we are so aware of the dangers for young children - but back then it was the norm.
November 3rd, 2017 02:15
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this brings back memories including a 2 mile walk to school across fields and through woods - something that simply wouldn\'t happen today as we are so aware of the dangers for young children - but back then it was the norm.
November 3rd, 2017 02:15
hair wash on friday nights
FredPeyer said:
Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we only had a bath once a week. Cleaned my feet the same way as you!
November 3rd, 2017 01:41
FredPeyer said:
Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we only had a bath once a week. Cleaned my feet the same way as you!
November 3rd, 2017 01:41
three flames
FredPeyer said:
Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-)
Fun and interesting! Great structure.
November 2nd, 2017 22:33
FredPeyer said:
Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-)
Fun and interesting! Great structure.
November 2nd, 2017 22:33
three flames
Michael Edwards said:
All I can see are the colours - great bit of atmosphere Frank.
November 2nd, 2017 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
All I can see are the colours - great bit of atmosphere Frank.
November 2nd, 2017 01:35
born to dance
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, we all dance through life alone ... some times with partners, sometimes without. Another fine write, Frank.
November 1st, 2017 09:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, we all dance through life alone ... some times with partners, sometimes without. Another fine write, Frank.
November 1st, 2017 09:48
born to dance
kevin browne said:
Cheltenham is just a few hours North away from from me so I\'m getting the chills also. love this writing.
November 1st, 2017 05:44
kevin browne said:
Cheltenham is just a few hours North away from from me so I\'m getting the chills also. love this writing.
November 1st, 2017 05:44
born to dance
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such strong images and I can feel the cold - a great write Frank.
November 1st, 2017 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such strong images and I can feel the cold - a great write Frank.
November 1st, 2017 01:15
born to dance
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up with broad-leaf cattail, hope that is the one.
Trying to imagine that chilly cold Cheltenham morning while sweating in the heat here. :-)
November 1st, 2017 01:12
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up with broad-leaf cattail, hope that is the one.
Trying to imagine that chilly cold Cheltenham morning while sweating in the heat here. :-)
November 1st, 2017 01:12
cultured
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a simple act into something much bigger and very special! And you are good at it, Frank!
October 31st, 2017 12:57
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a simple act into something much bigger and very special! And you are good at it, Frank!
October 31st, 2017 12:57
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