Comments received on poems by Frank Prem



my place in nothing
Goldfinch60 said:

Stars are the holes in heavens floor.

November 10th, 2017 02:31

singing broken heart at number 60
Fay Slimm. said:

Loud applause for singing duets with the famed Emmy-Lou - such a swinging flow to this choral confession dear Frank - let me clear the tonsils and will join you anon.

November 9th, 2017 14:12

singing broken heart at number 60
Tony36 said:

Great write

November 9th, 2017 13:01

singing broken heart at number 60
Louis Gibbs said:

A good voice is a blessing to listen to. I don\'t try to sing along, but am stimulated to sing on my own by one. A great way to express and release feelings! Good write on the topic, Frank!


November 9th, 2017 11:00

singing broken heart at number 60
Accidental Poet said:

Clapping to a standing ovation Frank. Go ahead, sing with Emmy, the Boss, Elton and anyone else you want. We\'re listening.

November 9th, 2017 05:02

singing broken heart at number 60
Michael Edwards said:

Oh dear - don\'t really know emmy-lou and as for Elton his best piece which I truly love is Song for Guy because he doesn\'t sing much on that. :) That aside I do love the human voice - just been listening to Solveigs Song - one of my all time favourites - and a great poem Frank.

November 9th, 2017 02:05

singing broken heart at number 60
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, singing is so good for you and it can bring all emotions, especially love.

November 9th, 2017 00:49

singing broken heart at number 60
FredPeyer said:

Great poem, great subject, Frank! I love to sing in the shower. Love all the references to emmy-lou, the boss, and others!
Thank God my neighbors are far away!

November 9th, 2017 00:20

the bazaar
Louis Gibbs said:

A bazaar poem to fit the bazaar it is set in. Thought-provoking and enjoyable, as is all of your work, Frank!

November 8th, 2017 10:37

the bazaar
Accidental Poet said:

I\'ll take some blue skies, 75 degrees, and could you sprinkle in a few birds chirping with that please. Excellent write Frank.

November 8th, 2017 03:58

the bazaar
orchidee said:

A fine write Frank.

November 8th, 2017 02:46

the bazaar
Michael Edwards said:

Reminds me of the bazaars in Istanbul where you are constantly harassed - not that they sell weather ( I hope
they don\'t see this posting or they might get ideas) - enjoyed the write Frank.

November 8th, 2017 02:08

the bazaar
FredPeyer said:

Sounds like some heavenly bazaar where we can choose our weather?
You do have a vivid imagination, Frank, and it shows in this whimsy, but interesting and well structured poem.

November 8th, 2017 01:59

stirring the soup
MendedFences27 said:

Makes one wonder what was in the \"yonder?\" Was it another \'cauldron?\" Did it have a different \"soup?\" A thought provoking, yet thoughtful presentation of the birth of the stars. Loved every spin of it.- Phil A.

November 7th, 2017 20:26

stirring the soup
Frank Prem said:

Thanks so much for your warm comments. I\'m a little pressed for time this morning, but will try posting later. Cheers, F~

November 7th, 2017 17:34

stirring the soup
Fay Slimm. said:

I can smell from here that stirring aroma of delectable soup Frank - am on my way and am bringing the bread

November 7th, 2017 15:02

stirring the soup
Louis Gibbs said:

Ah, the moment of creation. Always wondered how it began. And what a soup it turned out to be.
Well done, Frank!

November 7th, 2017 09:31

stirring the soup
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Wonderful evocative Poem FRANK ~ thanks for stirring. It struck a ladle with me because every Saturday Morning I make a cauldron of Veggie Soup with whatever veggies I have to hand plus stock ~ herbs and seasoning ! I decant into individual containers and freeze for use in the week and to share with ANGELA (and other visitors) with crusty bread and a glass of Rioja Tinta ~ For me SOUP is the elixir of life and aways my chosen starter in any restaurant ~ I often ask for (and obtain) the recipe ! Yours BRIAN. Please check my AROMATHERAPY Poem and \"Send Flowers\" FUSION ~ Thanks B.

November 7th, 2017 05:15

stirring the soup
Accidental Poet said:

Or maybe it\'s the creator of the cosmos who stirs the soup of stars. Great write here Frank I love it.

November 7th, 2017 05:08

stirring the soup
FredPeyer said:

I do like the way you write, the way you structure your poems. In this case, I guess it depends on whether he was north or south of the equator!

November 7th, 2017 02:03

stirring the soup
Michael Edwards said:

Smooth and creamy served with fresh baked bread - or in this case a great pen - well writ Frank.

November 7th, 2017 01:11

three echoes
MendedFences27 said:

Recently, someone wrote on here that love is \"soundless,\" now here in this poem we see the extent to which love can reach. From one mountain top to another, across endless miles, with but a single word, lovers can connect. A beautiful poem, Frank, presented in a unique style, with interesting metaphors, \"the speech of a small fire,\" \" he threw his voice, single-handed,.\" Loved every unspoken moment of it. - Phil A.

November 6th, 2017 13:37

three echoes
Accidental Poet said:

When two hearts listen within, the love they share speaks to both of them. Great write Franks.

November 6th, 2017 04:05

three echoes
FredPeyer said:

Very beautiful poem, Frank. Makes one think.

November 6th, 2017 03:13

three echoes
orchidee said:

A fine write Frank.

November 6th, 2017 02:43

meeting Nola
Louis Gibbs said:

\'The kindness of strangers\' ... I adore the theme, Frank. Beautifully portrayed in this heart touching write. Wouldn\'t it be nice if ... oh well, maybe some day.

November 5th, 2017 10:41

meeting Nola
Accidental Poet said:

Shows what a Good Samaritan you are Frank. And an excellent poet too.

November 5th, 2017 08:53

meeting Nola
FredPeyer said:

Frank, this poem is just great. I stopped at the end with a \'what just happened?\' kind of thought in my head. There is a much deeper meaning here, and you can be sure I will eventually get it.

November 5th, 2017 04:14

meeting Nola
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a meaningful write.

November 5th, 2017 02:28

stars in his sleeves
Louis Gibbs said:

Sounds like you outed a star person disguised as a human. Lot of them around these strange days. Enjoyable poem, Frank!

November 4th, 2017 08:19



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