Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
looking up
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I read LOOKING UP a few times!
Through hard work we will reach the stars!
Great write!
Beam me up, Scotty!
November 18th, 2017 16:51
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I read LOOKING UP a few times!
Through hard work we will reach the stars!
Great write!
Beam me up, Scotty!
November 18th, 2017 16:51
looking up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ There is only ine sure route ~ that endorsed by the RAF \"Ad Astra per Ardua\" ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ There is only ine sure route ~ that endorsed by the RAF \"Ad Astra per Ardua\" ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:21
looking up
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
November 18th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
November 18th, 2017 02:13
looking up
Will Shootman said:
very very dope. you ask a lot from a reader, and that\'s admirable - shows trust
November 18th, 2017 01:50
Will Shootman said:
very very dope. you ask a lot from a reader, and that\'s admirable - shows trust
November 18th, 2017 01:50
looking up
Michael Edwards said:
I love your format and the thoughts which each stanza invoke - have read it twice and will return again later - super stuff Frank.
November 18th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
I love your format and the thoughts which each stanza invoke - have read it twice and will return again later - super stuff Frank.
November 18th, 2017 00:36
child sometimes
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank, from the perspective of the inner child. Brilliant!
November 17th, 2017 10:23
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank, from the perspective of the inner child. Brilliant!
November 17th, 2017 10:23
child sometimes
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own experience of waking is similar - - a lovely nostalgic read of remembered wrapped Mom-made sandwiches too.
November 17th, 2017 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own experience of waking is similar - - a lovely nostalgic read of remembered wrapped Mom-made sandwiches too.
November 17th, 2017 08:57
child sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those memories of childhood are so precious.
November 17th, 2017 08:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those memories of childhood are so precious.
November 17th, 2017 08:55
child sometimes
Accidental Poet said:
The child in us all is full of life and always tugging on our conscience to remember our youthful years. And you accomplished exactly that with me while reading this great poem Frank.
November 17th, 2017 08:30
Accidental Poet said:
The child in us all is full of life and always tugging on our conscience to remember our youthful years. And you accomplished exactly that with me while reading this great poem Frank.
November 17th, 2017 08:30
child sometimes
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a bit of a child in all of us - I know I\'ve got a very childish sense of humour at times - great original write Frank.
November 17th, 2017 07:54
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a bit of a child in all of us - I know I\'ve got a very childish sense of humour at times - great original write Frank.
November 17th, 2017 07:54
Praying For Grandfather
dusk arising said:
Your theatrical poetry at its best again.
November 16th, 2017 19:43
dusk arising said:
Your theatrical poetry at its best again.
November 16th, 2017 19:43
Praying For Grandfather
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliant portrayal here, Frank! Both poignant and humorous at once. Sterling poem, as only you can do. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 10:49
Louis Gibbs said:
A brilliant portrayal here, Frank! Both poignant and humorous at once. Sterling poem, as only you can do. Kudos!
November 16th, 2017 10:49
Praying For Grandfather
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
Great write! It’s so relatable!
It sounds like grandmother in her rocking chair talking about grandfather!
At times I find my mom talking about my
dad...as if talking to an audience...In reality, she’s the audience. The audience of one...herself!
November 16th, 2017 03:07
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
Great write! It’s so relatable!
It sounds like grandmother in her rocking chair talking about grandfather!
At times I find my mom talking about my
dad...as if talking to an audience...In reality, she’s the audience. The audience of one...herself!
November 16th, 2017 03:07
who will leave you clean
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the cleanliness of rain is inspiring.
November 16th, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the cleanliness of rain is inspiring.
November 16th, 2017 01:37
Praying For Grandfather
Michael Edwards said:
Now this was so worth waking up to - a superb bit of poetry Frank.
November 16th, 2017 01:19
Michael Edwards said:
Now this was so worth waking up to - a superb bit of poetry Frank.
November 16th, 2017 01:19
who will leave you clean
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff as always Frank.
November 15th, 2017 09:51
Michael Edwards said:
Great stuff as always Frank.
November 15th, 2017 09:51
who will leave you clean
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done, makes me want to stand in the rain.
November 15th, 2017 09:43
Poetic Dan said:
Nicely done, makes me want to stand in the rain.
November 15th, 2017 09:43
my place in nothing
MendedFences27 said:
Looking up at the universe, we see only what\'s within the realm of our eyesight, but even if we include the acquisition of scientific knowledge, what we see or know about is infinitesimally \"small.\" This leaves us feeling powerless and of no consequence, \"small\" or \"nothing.\" If there are no \"Others\" then what is the point, \"it is nothing.\" I believe this is why Mankind is constantly exploring, to prove his own worth, and to find evidence of \"Others.\" We must continue the search, for our own sake and sanity.
Great poem. It got me to thinking. What else can one get from poetry? - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 14:52
MendedFences27 said:
Looking up at the universe, we see only what\'s within the realm of our eyesight, but even if we include the acquisition of scientific knowledge, what we see or know about is infinitesimally \"small.\" This leaves us feeling powerless and of no consequence, \"small\" or \"nothing.\" If there are no \"Others\" then what is the point, \"it is nothing.\" I believe this is why Mankind is constantly exploring, to prove his own worth, and to find evidence of \"Others.\" We must continue the search, for our own sake and sanity.
Great poem. It got me to thinking. What else can one get from poetry? - Phil A.
November 10th, 2017 14:52
singing broken heart at number 60
dusk arising said:
As a natural born singer / songwriter and ex frontman i am always singing. I couldn\'t live without song! And loud and expressive. Great piece and good to see another who is similarly afflicted with the need to croak out a good song.
November 10th, 2017 13:11
dusk arising said:
As a natural born singer / songwriter and ex frontman i am always singing. I couldn\'t live without song! And loud and expressive. Great piece and good to see another who is similarly afflicted with the need to croak out a good song.
November 10th, 2017 13:11
my place in nothing
Fay Slimm. said:
Such depth to these lines Frank - small becomes nothing which alters its host and readers are left with the thought that everything is tied up in human soul-heritage. A first rate read.
November 10th, 2017 12:34
Fay Slimm. said:
Such depth to these lines Frank - small becomes nothing which alters its host and readers are left with the thought that everything is tied up in human soul-heritage. A first rate read.
November 10th, 2017 12:34
my place in nothing
dusk arising said:
if the beauty and wonderment is not for me then for whom??? for i cannot see beauty for another.....
. ......... but beauty within another
. ............... ahh there is a different story
November 10th, 2017 08:42
dusk arising said:
if the beauty and wonderment is not for me then for whom??? for i cannot see beauty for another.....
. ......... but beauty within another
. ............... ahh there is a different story
November 10th, 2017 08:42
my place in nothing
Accidental Poet said:
Everything of a poetic genius Frank.
November 10th, 2017 05:34
Accidental Poet said:
Everything of a poetic genius Frank.
November 10th, 2017 05:34
my place in nothing
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve penned another super work Frank
November 10th, 2017 02:56
Michael Edwards said:
You\'ve penned another super work Frank
November 10th, 2017 02:56
my place in nothing
orchidee said:
A fine write Frank. I knew this was going to have some depth to it, when it started with \'and....\'. A sort of breaking into one\'s thoughts, without any introduction, as it were. Maybe unlike me, waffling on in the intro! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:51
orchidee said:
A fine write Frank. I knew this was going to have some depth to it, when it started with \'and....\'. A sort of breaking into one\'s thoughts, without any introduction, as it were. Maybe unlike me, waffling on in the intro! lol.
November 10th, 2017 02:51
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