Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
before winter
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Ahh, when someone asks me what sort of day I\'ve had, I will reply: A zephyrous one!
November 23rd, 2017 02:45
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. Ahh, when someone asks me what sort of day I\'ve had, I will reply: A zephyrous one!
November 23rd, 2017 02:45
male nude
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Don\'t look deep
Inside my eyes
For that is where
My soul lies bare.\"
Lines from a poem of mine which reflect your fine offering, Frank. This one nails it ... the eyes reveal the soul!
November 22nd, 2017 09:21
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Don\'t look deep
Inside my eyes
For that is where
My soul lies bare.\"
Lines from a poem of mine which reflect your fine offering, Frank. This one nails it ... the eyes reveal the soul!
November 22nd, 2017 09:21
male nude
orchidee said:
Could be a rather swoony poem - for me anyway! heehee.
November 22nd, 2017 03:09
orchidee said:
Could be a rather swoony poem - for me anyway! heehee.
November 22nd, 2017 03:09
male nude
Michael Edwards said:
Just seen it in the bathroom mirror - not pretty. But yes the eyes are the only real indicators - good read Frank.
November 22nd, 2017 02:32
Michael Edwards said:
Just seen it in the bathroom mirror - not pretty. But yes the eyes are the only real indicators - good read Frank.
November 22nd, 2017 02:32
male nude
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes have it, it is the only way that you can see the real person. Good write.
November 22nd, 2017 01:37
Goldfinch60 said:
The eyes have it, it is the only way that you can see the real person. Good write.
November 22nd, 2017 01:37
after storm
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of a line from a song, in \'Annie\' I believe ... \"The sun will come out tomorrow\". Good write on passing through bad times, Frank!
November 21st, 2017 10:45
Louis Gibbs said:
Reminds me of a line from a song, in \'Annie\' I believe ... \"The sun will come out tomorrow\". Good write on passing through bad times, Frank!
November 21st, 2017 10:45
after storm
Michael Edwards said:
Had to look up susser and I\'m none the wiser but it doesn\'t matter - it sits so well in this great work.
November 21st, 2017 01:38
Michael Edwards said:
Had to look up susser and I\'m none the wiser but it doesn\'t matter - it sits so well in this great work.
November 21st, 2017 01:38
witchy wire
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Frank, about something that was very special. Nowadays I guess we use radar or some other technology, which is not so magic anymore.
November 20th, 2017 17:05
FredPeyer said:
Great poem, Frank, about something that was very special. Nowadays I guess we use radar or some other technology, which is not so magic anymore.
November 20th, 2017 17:05
witchy wire
Louis Gibbs said:
I once hired one of these gifted \"Dousers\" to find a new well location on my property. It produced 15 gallons a minute! Even toyed with the practice myself. It works for anyone to a degree.
Good write on the topic, Frank!
November 20th, 2017 09:32
Louis Gibbs said:
I once hired one of these gifted \"Dousers\" to find a new well location on my property. It produced 15 gallons a minute! Even toyed with the practice myself. It works for anyone to a degree.
Good write on the topic, Frank!
November 20th, 2017 09:32
witchy wire
kevin browne said:
what a wonderful story you have created here. brilliant work, Frank.
November 20th, 2017 03:07
kevin browne said:
what a wonderful story you have created here. brilliant work, Frank.
November 20th, 2017 03:07
witchy wire
Michael Edwards said:
I always love your \'scheme\' Frank and this is super and love the story behind it
November 20th, 2017 02:27
Michael Edwards said:
I always love your \'scheme\' Frank and this is super and love the story behind it
November 20th, 2017 02:27
witchy wire
b-LAH-que said:
This poem doesn\'t have the type of schema I\'m usually attracted to, but I went ahead and read it through anyway, and I\'m very glad I did! What a fascinating new dimension to poetry I feel capable of seeing thanks to it. Thanks for sharing!
November 20th, 2017 02:17
b-LAH-que said:
This poem doesn\'t have the type of schema I\'m usually attracted to, but I went ahead and read it through anyway, and I\'m very glad I did! What a fascinating new dimension to poetry I feel capable of seeing thanks to it. Thanks for sharing!
November 20th, 2017 02:17
belle and beau
Michael Edwards said:
Your style sings yet again - super stuff Frank.
November 19th, 2017 14:13
Michael Edwards said:
Your style sings yet again - super stuff Frank.
November 19th, 2017 14:13
belle and beau
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely depiction of the wind making love to a tree, Frank. Shouldn\'t it have been marked for \'over eighteen\' though?
Good write well presented!
November 19th, 2017 08:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Lovely depiction of the wind making love to a tree, Frank. Shouldn\'t it have been marked for \'over eighteen\' though?
Good write well presented!
November 19th, 2017 08:41
belle and beau
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you are so good at these incredibly styled poems. Like the subject too!
November 19th, 2017 02:15
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you are so good at these incredibly styled poems. Like the subject too!
November 19th, 2017 02:15
looking up
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I read LOOKING UP a few times!
Through hard work we will reach the stars!
Great write!
Beam me up, Scotty!
November 18th, 2017 16:51
Laura🌻 said:
Frank,
I read LOOKING UP a few times!
Through hard work we will reach the stars!
Great write!
Beam me up, Scotty!
November 18th, 2017 16:51
looking up
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ There is only ine sure route ~ that endorsed by the RAF \"Ad Astra per Ardua\" ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:21
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRANK ~ There is only ine sure route ~ that endorsed by the RAF \"Ad Astra per Ardua\" ~ Yours BRIAN. Please check ZIMBABWE ~ Thanks B.
November 18th, 2017 08:21
looking up
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
November 18th, 2017 02:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and I too have that dream, lets us go to the stars.
November 18th, 2017 02:13
looking up
Will Shootman said:
very very dope. you ask a lot from a reader, and that\'s admirable - shows trust
November 18th, 2017 01:50
Will Shootman said:
very very dope. you ask a lot from a reader, and that\'s admirable - shows trust
November 18th, 2017 01:50
looking up
Michael Edwards said:
I love your format and the thoughts which each stanza invoke - have read it twice and will return again later - super stuff Frank.
November 18th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
I love your format and the thoughts which each stanza invoke - have read it twice and will return again later - super stuff Frank.
November 18th, 2017 00:36
child sometimes
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank, from the perspective of the inner child. Brilliant!
November 17th, 2017 10:23
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful sequential journey through life you take us on here, Frank, from the perspective of the inner child. Brilliant!
November 17th, 2017 10:23
child sometimes
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own experience of waking is similar - - a lovely nostalgic read of remembered wrapped Mom-made sandwiches too.
November 17th, 2017 08:57
Fay Slimm. said:
This describes our inner child so well Frank - -many a time my own experience of waking is similar - - a lovely nostalgic read of remembered wrapped Mom-made sandwiches too.
November 17th, 2017 08:57
child sometimes
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those memories of childhood are so precious.
November 17th, 2017 08:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, those memories of childhood are so precious.
November 17th, 2017 08:55
child sometimes
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a bit of a child in all of us - I know I\'ve got a very childish sense of humour at times - great original write Frank.
November 17th, 2017 07:54
Michael Edwards said:
There\'s a bit of a child in all of us - I know I\'ve got a very childish sense of humour at times - great original write Frank.
November 17th, 2017 07:54
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