Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
stars in his sleeves
Accidental Poet said:
He was embarrassed by the tattoo on his wrist? Odd, but a great poem Frank.
November 4th, 2017 04:51
Accidental Poet said:
He was embarrassed by the tattoo on his wrist? Odd, but a great poem Frank.
November 4th, 2017 04:51
hair wash on friday nights
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves. This poem states it well, Frank. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 09:41
Louis Gibbs said:
Amazing how the norm of days past, which we took for granted, evolves. This poem states it well, Frank. Well done!
November 3rd, 2017 09:41
hair wash on friday nights
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us Frank ~ just how pampered we are today ! I was born in 1983 ~ so I have always enjoyed Hotel Standard ~ Bathrooms with showers and H & C on tap ! At Home and now in my own Flat. We might be \"richer\" but when I look at my Grandparents ~ we are no happier ! It\'s not what we possess that brings happiness ~ It is our state of Mind and our day-by-day relationships with our Family Friends & Neighbours and with our Creator GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my tribute to Angela on a Beach ~ thanks BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 03:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks for reminding us Frank ~ just how pampered we are today ! I was born in 1983 ~ so I have always enjoyed Hotel Standard ~ Bathrooms with showers and H & C on tap ! At Home and now in my own Flat. We might be \"richer\" but when I look at my Grandparents ~ we are no happier ! It\'s not what we possess that brings happiness ~ It is our state of Mind and our day-by-day relationships with our Family Friends & Neighbours and with our Creator GOD ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my tribute to Angela on a Beach ~ thanks BRIAN
November 3rd, 2017 03:06
hair wash on friday nights
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it brings back memories to me as well.
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write and it brings back memories to me as well.
November 3rd, 2017 02:49
hair wash on friday nights
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. An outside loo too? As on a comedy show: \'But you just had a bath in January, and now it\'s June!\' heehee.
November 3rd, 2017 02:44
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. An outside loo too? As on a comedy show: \'But you just had a bath in January, and now it\'s June!\' heehee.
November 3rd, 2017 02:44
hair wash on friday nights
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this brings back memories including a 2 mile walk to school across fields and through woods - something that simply wouldn\'t happen today as we are so aware of the dangers for young children - but back then it was the norm.
November 3rd, 2017 02:15
Michael Edwards said:
Yes this brings back memories including a 2 mile walk to school across fields and through woods - something that simply wouldn\'t happen today as we are so aware of the dangers for young children - but back then it was the norm.
November 3rd, 2017 02:15
hair wash on friday nights
FredPeyer said:
Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we only had a bath once a week. Cleaned my feet the same way as you!
November 3rd, 2017 01:41
FredPeyer said:
Great poem about the \'good old days\', Frank! As a kid in Switzerland, we only had a bath once a week. Cleaned my feet the same way as you!
November 3rd, 2017 01:41
three flames
FredPeyer said:
Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-)
Fun and interesting! Great structure.
November 2nd, 2017 22:33
FredPeyer said:
Frank, burned my mouth just trying to read this! :-)
Fun and interesting! Great structure.
November 2nd, 2017 22:33
three flames
Michael Edwards said:
All I can see are the colours - great bit of atmosphere Frank.
November 2nd, 2017 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
All I can see are the colours - great bit of atmosphere Frank.
November 2nd, 2017 01:35
born to dance
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, we all dance through life alone ... some times with partners, sometimes without. Another fine write, Frank.
November 1st, 2017 09:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Indeed, we all dance through life alone ... some times with partners, sometimes without. Another fine write, Frank.
November 1st, 2017 09:48
born to dance
kevin browne said:
Cheltenham is just a few hours North away from from me so I\'m getting the chills also. love this writing.
November 1st, 2017 05:44
kevin browne said:
Cheltenham is just a few hours North away from from me so I\'m getting the chills also. love this writing.
November 1st, 2017 05:44
born to dance
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such strong images and I can feel the cold - a great write Frank.
November 1st, 2017 01:15
Michael Edwards said:
This evokes such strong images and I can feel the cold - a great write Frank.
November 1st, 2017 01:15
born to dance
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up with broad-leaf cattail, hope that is the one.
Trying to imagine that chilly cold Cheltenham morning while sweating in the heat here. :-)
November 1st, 2017 01:12
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written Frank. Had to look up broad-leaf dancer and came up with broad-leaf cattail, hope that is the one.
Trying to imagine that chilly cold Cheltenham morning while sweating in the heat here. :-)
November 1st, 2017 01:12
cultured
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a simple act into something much bigger and very special! And you are good at it, Frank!
October 31st, 2017 12:57
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great structure! It is the sign of a master to turn a simple act into something much bigger and very special! And you are good at it, Frank!
October 31st, 2017 12:57
cultured
Louis Gibbs said:
Your writing is like watching a movie, how it progresses from scene to scene. So descriptive! This is another fine example, Frank. Well done.
October 31st, 2017 07:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Your writing is like watching a movie, how it progresses from scene to scene. So descriptive! This is another fine example, Frank. Well done.
October 31st, 2017 07:48
cultured
orchidee said:
A fine write, and a nice spot of gardening there Frank.
October 31st, 2017 03:05
orchidee said:
A fine write, and a nice spot of gardening there Frank.
October 31st, 2017 03:05
the search for truth
Louis Gibbs said:
My thoughts reflect Fay\'s, Frank. You speak well here of the commendable reverence to life in all forms that many today do not share as did those who hunted for sustenance. Beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2017 11:22
Louis Gibbs said:
My thoughts reflect Fay\'s, Frank. You speak well here of the commendable reverence to life in all forms that many today do not share as did those who hunted for sustenance. Beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2017 11:22
the search for truth
Fay Slimm. said:
A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see that scene of hunger\'s need and the gratitude felt for achieving fullness - a great read all to the credit of your talented pen Frank.
October 30th, 2017 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see that scene of hunger\'s need and the gratitude felt for achieving fullness - a great read all to the credit of your talented pen Frank.
October 30th, 2017 04:56
maybe elvis
Accidental Poet said:
A little bit of Elvis lives in all of us Frank. I remember Elvis very well. He was a class act certainly. Thank you for this poem.
October 29th, 2017 05:01
Accidental Poet said:
A little bit of Elvis lives in all of us Frank. I remember Elvis very well. He was a class act certainly. Thank you for this poem.
October 29th, 2017 05:01
maybe elvis
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ In the Beginning was ELVIS ~ he blessed and influenced the Whole World ! Those of us born ~ after the death of ELVIS missed the euphoria but not the MAN ~ George Beverly Shea said \"Though he is dead ~ he lives on through his incomparable recorded Music\" (850 tracks) ! We used to say \"Next year Gracelands\" I visited in 2003 and I DID SEE ELVIS ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 04:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ In the Beginning was ELVIS ~ he blessed and influenced the Whole World ! Those of us born ~ after the death of ELVIS missed the euphoria but not the MAN ~ George Beverly Shea said \"Though he is dead ~ he lives on through his incomparable recorded Music\" (850 tracks) ! We used to say \"Next year Gracelands\" I visited in 2003 and I DID SEE ELVIS ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 04:15
maybe elvis
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I seen him! It\'s a guy about town, and at church too sometimes. He don\'t look like Elvis, mind you, but collects all his stuff!
October 29th, 2017 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I seen him! It\'s a guy about town, and at church too sometimes. He don\'t look like Elvis, mind you, but collects all his stuff!
October 29th, 2017 02:15
maybe elvis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank but I am afraid that \"Elvis has left the building\".
When the name Elvis is said the world knows who we are talking about - a wonderful reputation he created.
October 29th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank but I am afraid that \"Elvis has left the building\".
When the name Elvis is said the world knows who we are talking about - a wonderful reputation he created.
October 29th, 2017 01:33
bass lines
FredPeyer said:
I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank.
But, what the heck is a \'flat white\'?
October 28th, 2017 13:07
FredPeyer said:
I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank.
But, what the heck is a \'flat white\'?
October 28th, 2017 13:07
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