Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
cultured
Louis Gibbs said:
Your writing is like watching a movie, how it progresses from scene to scene. So descriptive! This is another fine example, Frank. Well done.
October 31st, 2017 07:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Your writing is like watching a movie, how it progresses from scene to scene. So descriptive! This is another fine example, Frank. Well done.
October 31st, 2017 07:48
cultured
orchidee said:
A fine write, and a nice spot of gardening there Frank.
October 31st, 2017 03:05
orchidee said:
A fine write, and a nice spot of gardening there Frank.
October 31st, 2017 03:05
the search for truth
Louis Gibbs said:
My thoughts reflect Fay\'s, Frank. You speak well here of the commendable reverence to life in all forms that many today do not share as did those who hunted for sustenance. Beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2017 11:22
Louis Gibbs said:
My thoughts reflect Fay\'s, Frank. You speak well here of the commendable reverence to life in all forms that many today do not share as did those who hunted for sustenance. Beautiful poem!
October 30th, 2017 11:22
the search for truth
Fay Slimm. said:
A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see that scene of hunger\'s need and the gratitude felt for achieving fullness - a great read all to the credit of your talented pen Frank.
October 30th, 2017 04:56
Fay Slimm. said:
A grand tribute to those who revere life as they should -- I could see that scene of hunger\'s need and the gratitude felt for achieving fullness - a great read all to the credit of your talented pen Frank.
October 30th, 2017 04:56
maybe elvis
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ In the Beginning was ELVIS ~ he blessed and influenced the Whole World ! Those of us born ~ after the death of ELVIS missed the euphoria but not the MAN ~ George Beverly Shea said \"Though he is dead ~ he lives on through his incomparable recorded Music\" (850 tracks) ! We used to say \"Next year Gracelands\" I visited in 2003 and I DID SEE ELVIS ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 04:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks FRED ~ In the Beginning was ELVIS ~ he blessed and influenced the Whole World ! Those of us born ~ after the death of ELVIS missed the euphoria but not the MAN ~ George Beverly Shea said \"Though he is dead ~ he lives on through his incomparable recorded Music\" (850 tracks) ! We used to say \"Next year Gracelands\" I visited in 2003 and I DID SEE ELVIS ~ AMEN ! Yours BRIAN
October 29th, 2017 04:15
maybe elvis
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I seen him! It\'s a guy about town, and at church too sometimes. He don\'t look like Elvis, mind you, but collects all his stuff!
October 29th, 2017 02:15
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. I seen him! It\'s a guy about town, and at church too sometimes. He don\'t look like Elvis, mind you, but collects all his stuff!
October 29th, 2017 02:15
maybe elvis
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank but I am afraid that \"Elvis has left the building\".
When the name Elvis is said the world knows who we are talking about - a wonderful reputation he created.
October 29th, 2017 01:33
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Frank but I am afraid that \"Elvis has left the building\".
When the name Elvis is said the world knows who we are talking about - a wonderful reputation he created.
October 29th, 2017 01:33
bass lines
FredPeyer said:
I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank.
But, what the heck is a \'flat white\'?
October 28th, 2017 13:07
FredPeyer said:
I do love this poem and the way it is structured, Frank.
But, what the heck is a \'flat white\'?
October 28th, 2017 13:07
bass lines
Fay Slimm. said:
Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy a yummy white flat if there\'s one to spare - do do dummy do yum .
October 28th, 2017 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy a yummy white flat if there\'s one to spare - do do dummy do yum .
October 28th, 2017 05:37
bass lines
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with the song intermixed with the orders.
October 28th, 2017 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with the song intermixed with the orders.
October 28th, 2017 01:11
ronnie\'s other guy
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems that our unspoken thoughts are all the privacy we have left these days ... thank goodness! Well done write, Frank!
October 27th, 2017 10:29
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems that our unspoken thoughts are all the privacy we have left these days ... thank goodness! Well done write, Frank!
October 27th, 2017 10:29
ronnie\'s other guy
Fay Slimm. said:
The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great read Frank.
October 27th, 2017 03:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great read Frank.
October 27th, 2017 03:22
ronnie\'s other guy
Michael Edwards said:
Frank this a real engaging piece - think I\'ll save it its that good.
October 27th, 2017 00:39
Michael Edwards said:
Frank this a real engaging piece - think I\'ll save it its that good.
October 27th, 2017 00:39
ronnie\'s other guy
FredPeyer said:
Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our partners heads.
Great poem, well written, amusing, but simultaneously disturbing a bit. Because from now on I will always wonder....
October 27th, 2017 00:20
FredPeyer said:
Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our partners heads.
Great poem, well written, amusing, but simultaneously disturbing a bit. Because from now on I will always wonder....
October 27th, 2017 00:20
holding close to beauty
Heather T said:
Frank...I felt this in the pit of my stomach. This is well crafted darkness, both elegant and visceral. Fine work.
October 26th, 2017 21:09
Heather T said:
Frank...I felt this in the pit of my stomach. This is well crafted darkness, both elegant and visceral. Fine work.
October 26th, 2017 21:09
holding close to beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while - the verse outlines an abuser so clearly in this dark piece of poetry Frank
October 26th, 2017 13:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while - the verse outlines an abuser so clearly in this dark piece of poetry Frank
October 26th, 2017 13:28
holding close to beauty
Louis Gibbs said:
The domineering, insecure, brute of a man who destroys his own image of beauty in another by constantly beating them down. A scene often played in relationships, unfortunately.
Well portrayed in this, another fine poem, Frank!
October 26th, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
The domineering, insecure, brute of a man who destroys his own image of beauty in another by constantly beating them down. A scene often played in relationships, unfortunately.
Well portrayed in this, another fine poem, Frank!
October 26th, 2017 08:23
holding close to beauty
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem leaves a lot to the imagination. And I did have to look up the meaning of the word \'remiges\'. I won\'t reveal it here though.
October 26th, 2017 04:59
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem leaves a lot to the imagination. And I did have to look up the meaning of the word \'remiges\'. I won\'t reveal it here though.
October 26th, 2017 04:59
holding close to beauty
Michael Edwards said:
A good work and now I\'ve got another word to fit into casual conversation: remiges.
October 26th, 2017 03:21
Michael Edwards said:
A good work and now I\'ve got another word to fit into casual conversation: remiges.
October 26th, 2017 03:21
the astronomer
Louis Gibbs said:
A man so absorbed in his work that he becomes oblivious to the mundane world. A blessing and a curse, one could say. He at least has his passion to keep him going.
Excellent, absorbing write, Frank!
October 25th, 2017 09:58
Louis Gibbs said:
A man so absorbed in his work that he becomes oblivious to the mundane world. A blessing and a curse, one could say. He at least has his passion to keep him going.
Excellent, absorbing write, Frank!
October 25th, 2017 09:58
the astronomer
Michael Edwards said:
I also get too far focussed on something and tend to forget other things that are far more important - like family for example. A lesson to us all.
October 25th, 2017 02:00
Michael Edwards said:
I also get too far focussed on something and tend to forget other things that are far more important - like family for example. A lesson to us all.
October 25th, 2017 02:00
the astronomer
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. A sort of \'head in the clouds\' thing?
October 25th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. A sort of \'head in the clouds\' thing?
October 25th, 2017 01:52
the astronomer
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb write Fred. Sometimes we get involved in one particular subject that others are ignored.
October 25th, 2017 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb write Fred. Sometimes we get involved in one particular subject that others are ignored.
October 25th, 2017 01:41
the astronomer
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem goes further, talking about being so involved in something that we forget daily life, or being so good in one thing, but so bad in others. Great poem!
October 25th, 2017 00:38
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem goes further, talking about being so involved in something that we forget daily life, or being so good in one thing, but so bad in others. Great poem!
October 25th, 2017 00:38
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