Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
bass lines
Accidental Poet said:
How \'bout a waffle with acoustic guitar as back up. ; )
October 28th, 2017 07:42
Accidental Poet said:
How \'bout a waffle with acoustic guitar as back up. ; )
October 28th, 2017 07:42
bass lines
Fay Slimm. said:
Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy a yummy white flat if there\'s one to spare - do do dummy do yum .
October 28th, 2017 05:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Great poetic fun-wrte of the busy sounds around café life Frank. I fancy a yummy white flat if there\'s one to spare - do do dummy do yum .
October 28th, 2017 05:37
bass lines
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with the song intermixed with the orders.
October 28th, 2017 01:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write with the song intermixed with the orders.
October 28th, 2017 01:11
ronnie\'s other guy
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems that our unspoken thoughts are all the privacy we have left these days ... thank goodness! Well done write, Frank!
October 27th, 2017 10:29
Louis Gibbs said:
It seems that our unspoken thoughts are all the privacy we have left these days ... thank goodness! Well done write, Frank!
October 27th, 2017 10:29
ronnie\'s other guy
Accidental Poet said:
And what might she say if questioned of her thoughts? Great write Frank.
October 27th, 2017 08:15
Accidental Poet said:
And what might she say if questioned of her thoughts? Great write Frank.
October 27th, 2017 08:15
ronnie\'s other guy
Fay Slimm. said:
The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great read Frank.
October 27th, 2017 03:22
Fay Slimm. said:
The folly of thinking we really know others around us eh? - a great read Frank.
October 27th, 2017 03:22
ronnie\'s other guy
Michael Edwards said:
Frank this a real engaging piece - think I\'ll save it its that good.
October 27th, 2017 00:39
Michael Edwards said:
Frank this a real engaging piece - think I\'ll save it its that good.
October 27th, 2017 00:39
ronnie\'s other guy
FredPeyer said:
Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our partners heads.
Great poem, well written, amusing, but simultaneously disturbing a bit. Because from now on I will always wonder....
October 27th, 2017 00:20
FredPeyer said:
Just goes to show, Frank, we will never know what is going on inside our partners heads.
Great poem, well written, amusing, but simultaneously disturbing a bit. Because from now on I will always wonder....
October 27th, 2017 00:20
holding close to beauty
Heather T said:
Frank...I felt this in the pit of my stomach. This is well crafted darkness, both elegant and visceral. Fine work.
October 26th, 2017 21:09
Heather T said:
Frank...I felt this in the pit of my stomach. This is well crafted darkness, both elegant and visceral. Fine work.
October 26th, 2017 21:09
holding close to beauty
Fay Slimm. said:
Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while - the verse outlines an abuser so clearly in this dark piece of poetry Frank
October 26th, 2017 13:28
Fay Slimm. said:
Love cannot be love if it changes to total indifference after a while - the verse outlines an abuser so clearly in this dark piece of poetry Frank
October 26th, 2017 13:28
holding close to beauty
Louis Gibbs said:
The domineering, insecure, brute of a man who destroys his own image of beauty in another by constantly beating them down. A scene often played in relationships, unfortunately.
Well portrayed in this, another fine poem, Frank!
October 26th, 2017 08:23
Louis Gibbs said:
The domineering, insecure, brute of a man who destroys his own image of beauty in another by constantly beating them down. A scene often played in relationships, unfortunately.
Well portrayed in this, another fine poem, Frank!
October 26th, 2017 08:23
holding close to beauty
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem leaves a lot to the imagination. And I did have to look up the meaning of the word \'remiges\'. I won\'t reveal it here though.
October 26th, 2017 04:59
FredPeyer said:
Frank, you keep on surprising me with your incredible writing. This poem leaves a lot to the imagination. And I did have to look up the meaning of the word \'remiges\'. I won\'t reveal it here though.
October 26th, 2017 04:59
holding close to beauty
Michael Edwards said:
A good work and now I\'ve got another word to fit into casual conversation: remiges.
October 26th, 2017 03:21
Michael Edwards said:
A good work and now I\'ve got another word to fit into casual conversation: remiges.
October 26th, 2017 03:21
the astronomer
Louis Gibbs said:
A man so absorbed in his work that he becomes oblivious to the mundane world. A blessing and a curse, one could say. He at least has his passion to keep him going.
Excellent, absorbing write, Frank!
October 25th, 2017 09:58
Louis Gibbs said:
A man so absorbed in his work that he becomes oblivious to the mundane world. A blessing and a curse, one could say. He at least has his passion to keep him going.
Excellent, absorbing write, Frank!
October 25th, 2017 09:58
the astronomer
Michael Edwards said:
I also get too far focussed on something and tend to forget other things that are far more important - like family for example. A lesson to us all.
October 25th, 2017 02:00
Michael Edwards said:
I also get too far focussed on something and tend to forget other things that are far more important - like family for example. A lesson to us all.
October 25th, 2017 02:00
the astronomer
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. A sort of \'head in the clouds\' thing?
October 25th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. A sort of \'head in the clouds\' thing?
October 25th, 2017 01:52
the astronomer
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb write Fred. Sometimes we get involved in one particular subject that others are ignored.
October 25th, 2017 01:41
Goldfinch60 said:
This is a superb write Fred. Sometimes we get involved in one particular subject that others are ignored.
October 25th, 2017 01:41
the astronomer
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem goes further, talking about being so involved in something that we forget daily life, or being so good in one thing, but so bad in others. Great poem!
October 25th, 2017 00:38
FredPeyer said:
I love your poem, Frank! I can see that astronomer, but I think the poem goes further, talking about being so involved in something that we forget daily life, or being so good in one thing, but so bad in others. Great poem!
October 25th, 2017 00:38
axeman: await winter
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of lines Frank - another scene you drew my mind into so easily . First rate work.
October 24th, 2017 11:15
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of lines Frank - another scene you drew my mind into so easily . First rate work.
October 24th, 2017 11:15
axeman: await winter
Louis Gibbs said:
I am reminded of the satisfaction gained from chopping wood for the winter by this excellent write, Frank. Another beauty!
October 24th, 2017 10:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I am reminded of the satisfaction gained from chopping wood for the winter by this excellent write, Frank. Another beauty!
October 24th, 2017 10:05
axeman: await winter
orchidee said:
Cooee Frank. I commented - said good write - but it vanished before! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
Cooee Frank. I commented - said good write - but it vanished before! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:27
axeman: await winter
Michael Edwards said:
I am now so familiar with your style but never tire of it - great stuff Frank.
October 24th, 2017 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
I am now so familiar with your style but never tire of it - great stuff Frank.
October 24th, 2017 05:55
rules (are only guidelines)
Laura🌻 said:
It sounds like he’s awakened from a coma he’s been in ...
...and now he’s experiencing
déjà vu moments.
A piece well written!
A lot to ponder!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:40
Laura🌻 said:
It sounds like he’s awakened from a coma he’s been in ...
...and now he’s experiencing
déjà vu moments.
A piece well written!
A lot to ponder!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:40
rules (are only guidelines)
Louis Gibbs said:
I simply love this one, Frank! Too me it describes the dream of \"reality\" we are dreaming, and how we dream a new one with each lifetime. A fav for sure!
October 23rd, 2017 07:24
Louis Gibbs said:
I simply love this one, Frank! Too me it describes the dream of \"reality\" we are dreaming, and how we dream a new one with each lifetime. A fav for sure!
October 23rd, 2017 07:24
rules (are only guidelines)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the world as we know it is only in our mind and minds can change.
October 23rd, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the world as we know it is only in our mind and minds can change.
October 23rd, 2017 02:24
rules (are only guidelines)
Michael Edwards said:
Well writ. There is only one rule in my world: There are no rules.
October 23rd, 2017 01:54
Michael Edwards said:
Well writ. There is only one rule in my world: There are no rules.
October 23rd, 2017 01:54
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