Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
axeman: await winter
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of lines Frank - another scene you drew my mind into so easily . First rate work.
October 24th, 2017 11:15
Fay Slimm. said:
I love the way you build up the mood of your subject with the shortest of lines Frank - another scene you drew my mind into so easily . First rate work.
October 24th, 2017 11:15
axeman: await winter
Louis Gibbs said:
I am reminded of the satisfaction gained from chopping wood for the winter by this excellent write, Frank. Another beauty!
October 24th, 2017 10:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I am reminded of the satisfaction gained from chopping wood for the winter by this excellent write, Frank. Another beauty!
October 24th, 2017 10:05
axeman: await winter
orchidee said:
Cooee Frank. I commented - said good write - but it vanished before! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:27
orchidee said:
Cooee Frank. I commented - said good write - but it vanished before! lol.
October 24th, 2017 08:27
axeman: await winter
Michael Edwards said:
I am now so familiar with your style but never tire of it - great stuff Frank.
October 24th, 2017 05:55
Michael Edwards said:
I am now so familiar with your style but never tire of it - great stuff Frank.
October 24th, 2017 05:55
rules (are only guidelines)
Laura🌻 said:
It sounds like he’s awakened from a coma he’s been in ...
...and now he’s experiencing
déjà vu moments.
A piece well written!
A lot to ponder!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:40
Laura🌻 said:
It sounds like he’s awakened from a coma he’s been in ...
...and now he’s experiencing
déjà vu moments.
A piece well written!
A lot to ponder!
~Laura~
October 24th, 2017 01:40
rules (are only guidelines)
Louis Gibbs said:
I simply love this one, Frank! Too me it describes the dream of \"reality\" we are dreaming, and how we dream a new one with each lifetime. A fav for sure!
October 23rd, 2017 07:24
Louis Gibbs said:
I simply love this one, Frank! Too me it describes the dream of \"reality\" we are dreaming, and how we dream a new one with each lifetime. A fav for sure!
October 23rd, 2017 07:24
rules (are only guidelines)
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the world as we know it is only in our mind and minds can change.
October 23rd, 2017 02:24
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the world as we know it is only in our mind and minds can change.
October 23rd, 2017 02:24
rules (are only guidelines)
Michael Edwards said:
Well writ. There is only one rule in my world: There are no rules.
October 23rd, 2017 01:54
Michael Edwards said:
Well writ. There is only one rule in my world: There are no rules.
October 23rd, 2017 01:54
rules (are only guidelines)
orchidee said:
A fine write again Frank. Is Frenk still about?! lol.
October 23rd, 2017 01:47
orchidee said:
A fine write again Frank. Is Frenk still about?! lol.
October 23rd, 2017 01:47
gazing contrails
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. You going round in circles?!
October 22nd, 2017 01:27
orchidee said:
Good write Frank. You going round in circles?!
October 22nd, 2017 01:27
lumpen
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I could see this man and understand his ways.
October 22nd, 2017 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, I could see this man and understand his ways.
October 22nd, 2017 00:25
lumpen
Louis Gibbs said:
Let me guess ... he is not a poet? Doesn\'t seem to fit the profile. A wonderful description in poetry of a hearty soul enjoying his life. Kudos, Frank!
October 21st, 2017 10:31
Louis Gibbs said:
Let me guess ... he is not a poet? Doesn\'t seem to fit the profile. A wonderful description in poetry of a hearty soul enjoying his life. Kudos, Frank!
October 21st, 2017 10:31
lumpen
Michael Edwards said:
Brill and good on you for resurrecting a great word - think I\'ll use \'lumpen\' sometime soon.
October 21st, 2017 10:01
Michael Edwards said:
Brill and good on you for resurrecting a great word - think I\'ll use \'lumpen\' sometime soon.
October 21st, 2017 10:01
lumpen
Fay Slimm. said:
Dancing with joy amid light from the flames - your lumpen man knows how to end a good day. Frank I learnt a new adjective by reading this tribute to a clumsy \"lumpen\" man. Thanks muchly for sharing it.
October 21st, 2017 08:58
Fay Slimm. said:
Dancing with joy amid light from the flames - your lumpen man knows how to end a good day. Frank I learnt a new adjective by reading this tribute to a clumsy \"lumpen\" man. Thanks muchly for sharing it.
October 21st, 2017 08:58
the water
MendedFences27 said:
A life, a stream, you are the water. Like two streams join to become a small river. Water is the essence of Love. Nice poem, Frank. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:43
MendedFences27 said:
A life, a stream, you are the water. Like two streams join to become a small river. Water is the essence of Love. Nice poem, Frank. - Phil A.
October 20th, 2017 13:43
the water
Michael Edwards said:
Love where this is coming from - well expressed.
October 20th, 2017 01:33
Michael Edwards said:
Love where this is coming from - well expressed.
October 20th, 2017 01:33
the water
Goldfinch60 said:
Water is the lifeblood in our lives. Good write.
October 20th, 2017 01:30
Goldfinch60 said:
Water is the lifeblood in our lives. Good write.
October 20th, 2017 01:30
surviving the devil - a song of fire
Louis Gibbs said:
A captivating poem of terror and loss, Frank. Even now, again, being reenacted in California at this moment. One can only marvel, and quake, at the awesome power of this expression of the force of nature.
October 19th, 2017 08:08
Louis Gibbs said:
A captivating poem of terror and loss, Frank. Even now, again, being reenacted in California at this moment. One can only marvel, and quake, at the awesome power of this expression of the force of nature.
October 19th, 2017 08:08
Ink, Pastel and Water
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Frank, but then, so are all of your poems!
And thanks, will remember to sign my name next time!!!
October 17th, 2017 01:57
FredPeyer said:
Very well written, Frank, but then, so are all of your poems!
And thanks, will remember to sign my name next time!!!
October 17th, 2017 01:57
Ink, Pastel and Water
Goldfinch60 said:
An art lesson in poetry, thank you Frank and thank you for the positiveness in these words \"wash on however until the finish
and let us see the outcome that emerges
from the application of your craft\".Poetry can work the same way if we just wash on with words.
October 17th, 2017 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
An art lesson in poetry, thank you Frank and thank you for the positiveness in these words \"wash on however until the finish
and let us see the outcome that emerges
from the application of your craft\".Poetry can work the same way if we just wash on with words.
October 17th, 2017 01:27
Zlata\'s Daughter
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, tender, yet so strong writing here, Frank!
Living here in Hawaii, married to a Chinese woman, in a place where the majority of people is happa (half/half, or mixed) sometimes makes me forget how bad it is in other parts of the world. We make jokes about each others ethnicity, but overall we all get along. Sometimes wish the whole world would be like that.
Thank you for a great and thought provoking poem!
October 16th, 2017 16:45
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful, tender, yet so strong writing here, Frank!
Living here in Hawaii, married to a Chinese woman, in a place where the majority of people is happa (half/half, or mixed) sometimes makes me forget how bad it is in other parts of the world. We make jokes about each others ethnicity, but overall we all get along. Sometimes wish the whole world would be like that.
Thank you for a great and thought provoking poem!
October 16th, 2017 16:45
Zlata\'s Daughter
Louis Gibbs said:
But another sad chapter in the ongoing madness of Wars, the favorite sport of man. But then isn\'t all of this illusion of life we create void of rationality? Good, impactful write, Frank!
October 16th, 2017 12:22
Louis Gibbs said:
But another sad chapter in the ongoing madness of Wars, the favorite sport of man. But then isn\'t all of this illusion of life we create void of rationality? Good, impactful write, Frank!
October 16th, 2017 12:22
Zlata\'s Daughter
MendedFences27 said:
An awesome write, loaded with emotions we try to hide, like bigotry and hate. It makes one wonder if the world will ever be a safe place for all. We educate our young, but then the uneducated take control and fascism thrives.Hopefully they will find a happy life on your wonderful island.- Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:55
MendedFences27 said:
An awesome write, loaded with emotions we try to hide, like bigotry and hate. It makes one wonder if the world will ever be a safe place for all. We educate our young, but then the uneducated take control and fascism thrives.Hopefully they will find a happy life on your wonderful island.- Phil A.
October 16th, 2017 09:55
Zlata\'s Daughter
Goldfinch60 said:
Wow! What a very moving write. What is wrong with this world where so many cannot accept difference.
October 16th, 2017 01:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Wow! What a very moving write. What is wrong with this world where so many cannot accept difference.
October 16th, 2017 01:21
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