Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
unravelling after
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers. Sometimes I have that first line and nothing else, but, somehow, the piece finishes itself. No clue where the rest came from.
Love your poem!
October 13th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers. Sometimes I have that first line and nothing else, but, somehow, the piece finishes itself. No clue where the rest came from.
Love your poem!
October 13th, 2017 12:16
unravelling after
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite description of the process of good writing, Frank! Let the muse take over and watch it flow. A bit uncanny how this works, isn\'t it.
October 13th, 2017 09:52
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite description of the process of good writing, Frank! Let the muse take over and watch it flow. A bit uncanny how this works, isn\'t it.
October 13th, 2017 09:52
difficult departure
Frank Prem said:
Thanks to all for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.
October 12th, 2017 16:04
Frank Prem said:
Thanks to all for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.
October 12th, 2017 16:04
difficult departure
Fay Slimm. said:
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky experience - - great stuff.
October 12th, 2017 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky experience - - great stuff.
October 12th, 2017 10:33
difficult departure
Louis Gibbs said:
This one was a bit hard for me to see through all the smoke. Abstract, I would say, as are many a good poem. It certainly reads well and holds one\'s attention ... the mark of a good poem. Kudos, Frank!
October 12th, 2017 08:00
Louis Gibbs said:
This one was a bit hard for me to see through all the smoke. Abstract, I would say, as are many a good poem. It certainly reads well and holds one\'s attention ... the mark of a good poem. Kudos, Frank!
October 12th, 2017 08:00
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
Louis Gibbs said:
This is a classic, Frank! Truly enjoyed it, and envy the advantage you Europeans have to learn and blend so many Languages.
October 11th, 2017 09:52
Louis Gibbs said:
This is a classic, Frank! Truly enjoyed it, and envy the advantage you Europeans have to learn and blend so many Languages.
October 11th, 2017 09:52
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
FredPeyer said:
Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is Alsatian, so a German speaking French citizen. And he now lives in Hawaii, speaking English. But sometimes when he talks to me, he will use all three languages within one sentence. And I guess I am the only one who can understand!
Why can\'t we have just one language in the whole world?
October 11th, 2017 03:33
FredPeyer said:
Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is Alsatian, so a German speaking French citizen. And he now lives in Hawaii, speaking English. But sometimes when he talks to me, he will use all three languages within one sentence. And I guess I am the only one who can understand!
Why can\'t we have just one language in the whole world?
October 11th, 2017 03:33
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
orchidee said:
Have to call you Frenk then. Good write!
October 11th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
Have to call you Frenk then. Good write!
October 11th, 2017 01:56
the wind and the lion
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it a few more times!
If you know him, really know him, the roar does not frighten you.
October 10th, 2017 02:14
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it a few more times!
If you know him, really know him, the roar does not frighten you.
October 10th, 2017 02:14
politika of the pipples
FredPeyer said:
No wonder it won the prize, Frenk!
Absolutely gorgeous!
October 9th, 2017 21:06
FredPeyer said:
No wonder it won the prize, Frenk!
Absolutely gorgeous!
October 9th, 2017 21:06
politika of the pipples
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant, Frank! Simply brilliant tribute to poets. And a fine commentary on dictatorial rule.
October 9th, 2017 09:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant, Frank! Simply brilliant tribute to poets. And a fine commentary on dictatorial rule.
October 9th, 2017 09:35
politika of the pipples
orchidee said:
Is, how you say, a fine writing there Frenk!
October 9th, 2017 08:49
orchidee said:
Is, how you say, a fine writing there Frenk!
October 9th, 2017 08:49
politika of the pipples
Mugsdaddy said:
This should definitely be done on stage, quite ingenious very entertaining.
Mugsdaddy
October 9th, 2017 00:37
Mugsdaddy said:
This should definitely be done on stage, quite ingenious very entertaining.
Mugsdaddy
October 9th, 2017 00:37
tango
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would definitely get hurt. I saw a show on Broadway called just this, \"Tango,\" fascinating stuff.
Well expressed here, Frank. The attraction between the two dancers is critical to their performance, and you have captured a well trained pair. Excellent write - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 13:17
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would definitely get hurt. I saw a show on Broadway called just this, \"Tango,\" fascinating stuff.
Well expressed here, Frank. The attraction between the two dancers is critical to their performance, and you have captured a well trained pair. Excellent write - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 13:17
tango
Accidental Poet said:
I was born with two left feet. Dancing has never been something I do effortlessly. You\'d roll on the floor laughing though. Great write Frank. ; )
October 8th, 2017 06:29
Accidental Poet said:
I was born with two left feet. Dancing has never been something I do effortlessly. You\'d roll on the floor laughing though. Great write Frank. ; )
October 8th, 2017 06:29
tango
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the tango is a most erotic dance to watch but looks hard to dance - not that I have ever tried.
October 8th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the tango is a most erotic dance to watch but looks hard to dance - not that I have ever tried.
October 8th, 2017 01:40
tango
orchidee said:
Would I even start to learn? Could I get past my swoons?! heehee.
October 8th, 2017 01:24
orchidee said:
Would I even start to learn? Could I get past my swoons?! heehee.
October 8th, 2017 01:24
tango
Michael Edwards said:
I would certainly need lessons - once heard dancing as something which you sort of do a lot of pointless wiggles and jiggles of the body while someone else makes noises blowing into brass tubes, hitting bits of animal skin and dragging cat across other bits of cart gut to make a sort of screeching sound. And I do value my jewels - Great funloads Frank - enjoyed !!
October 8th, 2017 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
I would certainly need lessons - once heard dancing as something which you sort of do a lot of pointless wiggles and jiggles of the body while someone else makes noises blowing into brass tubes, hitting bits of animal skin and dragging cat across other bits of cart gut to make a sort of screeching sound. And I do value my jewels - Great funloads Frank - enjoyed !!
October 8th, 2017 00:33
perfect time
MendedFences27 said:
A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are forgiving creatures. Maybe you should work on your woofs, or arfs, a bit. A great fun poem, Frank. Loved the dog responses. They say dogs can appreciate music, just in a different range from us. Nice write.- Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:17
MendedFences27 said:
A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are forgiving creatures. Maybe you should work on your woofs, or arfs, a bit. A great fun poem, Frank. Loved the dog responses. They say dogs can appreciate music, just in a different range from us. Nice write.- Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:17
perfect time
Accidental Poet said:
And I thought that howling was orchi. Great write Frank. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:59
Accidental Poet said:
And I thought that howling was orchi. Great write Frank. ; )
October 7th, 2017 09:59
perfect time
Fay Slimm. said:
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em is what I do when that whistle blows in a new morning.
October 7th, 2017 08:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em is what I do when that whistle blows in a new morning.
October 7th, 2017 08:45
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