Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
tango
Michael Edwards said:
I would certainly need lessons - once heard dancing as something which you sort of do a lot of pointless wiggles and jiggles of the body while someone else makes noises blowing into brass tubes, hitting bits of animal skin and dragging cat across other bits of cart gut to make a sort of screeching sound. And I do value my jewels - Great funloads Frank - enjoyed !!
October 8th, 2017 00:33
Michael Edwards said:
I would certainly need lessons - once heard dancing as something which you sort of do a lot of pointless wiggles and jiggles of the body while someone else makes noises blowing into brass tubes, hitting bits of animal skin and dragging cat across other bits of cart gut to make a sort of screeching sound. And I do value my jewels - Great funloads Frank - enjoyed !!
October 8th, 2017 00:33
perfect time
MendedFences27 said:
A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are forgiving creatures. Maybe you should work on your woofs, or arfs, a bit. A great fun poem, Frank. Loved the dog responses. They say dogs can appreciate music, just in a different range from us. Nice write.- Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:17
MendedFences27 said:
A dog is a man\'s best friend, but not a duet partner, or is he? They are forgiving creatures. Maybe you should work on your woofs, or arfs, a bit. A great fun poem, Frank. Loved the dog responses. They say dogs can appreciate music, just in a different range from us. Nice write.- Phil A.
October 7th, 2017 17:17
perfect time
Fay Slimm. said:
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em is what I do when that whistle blows in a new morning.
October 7th, 2017 08:45
Fay Slimm. said:
Dogs in the grasp of making music can teach us all much Frank - join \'em is what I do when that whistle blows in a new morning.
October 7th, 2017 08:45
perfect time
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of muzzles to the moon but not before bums to the sod - great fun write to get the day off to a good start.
October 7th, 2017 01:41
Michael Edwards said:
Love the idea of muzzles to the moon but not before bums to the sod - great fun write to get the day off to a good start.
October 7th, 2017 01:41
perfect time
Goldfinch60 said:
The howl towards the falling moon. Good write.
October 7th, 2017 01:23
Goldfinch60 said:
The howl towards the falling moon. Good write.
October 7th, 2017 01:23
perfect time
dusk arising said:
Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are eclipsed. Actually its good fun to howl along with a willing dog.
October 7th, 2017 00:44
dusk arising said:
Aaaah the Prem hound howls his ghostly accompanyment. Dog and piper are eclipsed. Actually its good fun to howl along with a willing dog.
October 7th, 2017 00:44
sweeping
dusk arising said:
Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey man nobody sees, becomes a work of art in his depth of purpose giving dignity to his mundanity. Or is he yesterdays prince learning the value of a poor mans labour.
October 6th, 2017 16:41
dusk arising said:
Such drama in your writing. This is a scene where the plain man, the grey man nobody sees, becomes a work of art in his depth of purpose giving dignity to his mundanity. Or is he yesterdays prince learning the value of a poor mans labour.
October 6th, 2017 16:41
sweeping
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on life well lived, Frank! I appreciate this one immensely.
October 6th, 2017 11:21
Louis Gibbs said:
A fine metaphor on life well lived, Frank! I appreciate this one immensely.
October 6th, 2017 11:21
coffee train
secondchancesyndrome said:
two sugars please, enjoyable poetry Frank, thanks j
October 5th, 2017 09:17
secondchancesyndrome said:
two sugars please, enjoyable poetry Frank, thanks j
October 5th, 2017 09:17
coffee train
orchidee said:
Is there a tea-train too?! I shall hop on that one, if there is! Feel like a pot of tea now. lol. Not Earl Grey tea. I shall miss that train. Yuk!
October 5th, 2017 08:26
orchidee said:
Is there a tea-train too?! I shall hop on that one, if there is! Feel like a pot of tea now. lol. Not Earl Grey tea. I shall miss that train. Yuk!
October 5th, 2017 08:26
coffee train
Fay Slimm. said:
I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52
Fay Slimm. said:
I echo those lovely coffee-toots Frank - yes please for me.
October 5th, 2017 02:52
coffee train
Michael Edwards said:
Just had one - freshly filtered, naturally, no machine, best way but no toot toot. Love this Frank
October 5th, 2017 02:36
Michael Edwards said:
Just had one - freshly filtered, naturally, no machine, best way but no toot toot. Love this Frank
October 5th, 2017 02:36
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
Louis Gibbs said:
Mountain climber becomes bird-man ... an enigma indeed, but intriguing. Fine poem, Frank!
October 4th, 2017 12:06
Louis Gibbs said:
Mountain climber becomes bird-man ... an enigma indeed, but intriguing. Fine poem, Frank!
October 4th, 2017 12:06
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
FredPeyer said:
Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single engine small planes. Even though your poem is talking about a bird, it did bring back memories! When you are up there, you really do feel free!
October 4th, 2017 02:15
FredPeyer said:
Frank, when I was young I had a private pilot license, was flying single engine small planes. Even though your poem is talking about a bird, it did bring back memories! When you are up there, you really do feel free!
October 4th, 2017 02:15
ya-hey ya-ho (to fly)
Michael Edwards said:
At first I read as a man climbing and towards the end as a great bird flying - for me it\'s this enigma that is so appealing in this well crafted piece. I am left wondering and using my own imagination.
October 4th, 2017 00:36
Michael Edwards said:
At first I read as a man climbing and towards the end as a great bird flying - for me it\'s this enigma that is so appealing in this well crafted piece. I am left wondering and using my own imagination.
October 4th, 2017 00:36
where you see and feel it
FredPeyer said:
Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well written! Love the structure too!
October 3rd, 2017 12:33
FredPeyer said:
Frank, I did need to read the comments to understand the poem. So well written! Love the structure too!
October 3rd, 2017 12:33
where you see and feel it
Louis Gibbs said:
A psychiatric nurse, in a world going mad! There must be a long line at your door, Frank. I don\'t envy you, but do admire you. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
October 3rd, 2017 06:31
Louis Gibbs said:
A psychiatric nurse, in a world going mad! There must be a long line at your door, Frank. I don\'t envy you, but do admire you. Thanks for sharing this one with us.
October 3rd, 2017 06:31
where you see and feel it
orchidee said:
Ahh, someone having a bad hair-day? A tad upset?! Erm, I\'ve dampened down the emotion in this like a wet blanket! lol.
October 3rd, 2017 02:04
orchidee said:
Ahh, someone having a bad hair-day? A tad upset?! Erm, I\'ve dampened down the emotion in this like a wet blanket! lol.
October 3rd, 2017 02:04
where you see and feel it
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon if you tell me?! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 01:58
orchidee said:
What\'s going on there? Will I swoon if you tell me?! heehee.
October 3rd, 2017 01:58
where you see and feel it
Michael Edwards said:
Surreal indeed - very Dahliesque - great work Frank.
October 3rd, 2017 01:08
Michael Edwards said:
Surreal indeed - very Dahliesque - great work Frank.
October 3rd, 2017 01:08
love (in a time of passing trains)
Frank Prem said:
Thank you to all who\'ve read and responded.
I\'m so glad you\'ve enjoyed. Sorry I can\'t respond individually today - a little pressed for time.
October 2nd, 2017 17:20
Frank Prem said:
Thank you to all who\'ve read and responded.
I\'m so glad you\'ve enjoyed. Sorry I can\'t respond individually today - a little pressed for time.
October 2nd, 2017 17:20
love (in a time of passing trains)
Louis Gibbs said:
Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains, and remember riding the steam-driven locomotive train into Chicago as a child.
October 2nd, 2017 11:23
Louis Gibbs said:
Thanks for the enjoyable train ride, Frank. I always have loved trains, and remember riding the steam-driven locomotive train into Chicago as a child.
October 2nd, 2017 11:23
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