Comments received on poems by Frank Prem
arthur and alice
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful and tender work of art, this one, Frank. You\'ve outdone yourself with this one ... again.
October 15th, 2017 10:22
Louis Gibbs said:
A beautiful and tender work of art, this one, Frank. You\'ve outdone yourself with this one ... again.
October 15th, 2017 10:22
arthur and alice
Fay Slimm. said:
Love as perfectly written to catch readers\' attention and a tale to bring tears to the eye. A sure favourite Frank and thanks for sharing its life-long devotion with us today.
October 15th, 2017 05:06
Fay Slimm. said:
Love as perfectly written to catch readers\' attention and a tale to bring tears to the eye. A sure favourite Frank and thanks for sharing its life-long devotion with us today.
October 15th, 2017 05:06
single male shopper
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OH YES FRANK ~ Was that you behind me in the SUPERMARKET ! Thanks for caring for Listless Single Man ~ hating to shop ~ BUT ~ ab necessitum ~ having to shop ~ Thanks GOD for Ready Meals ~ precooked ~ prepacked ~ preeaten Yours BRIAN (33 and still single !)
October 14th, 2017 11:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
OH YES FRANK ~ Was that you behind me in the SUPERMARKET ! Thanks for caring for Listless Single Man ~ hating to shop ~ BUT ~ ab necessitum ~ having to shop ~ Thanks GOD for Ready Meals ~ precooked ~ prepacked ~ preeaten Yours BRIAN (33 and still single !)
October 14th, 2017 11:19
single male shopper
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - could it have been you were peeking at someone\'s purchases Frank or was it your talented imagination - hhhhmmm a great read to set the female mind thinking.
October 14th, 2017 05:46
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - could it have been you were peeking at someone\'s purchases Frank or was it your talented imagination - hhhhmmm a great read to set the female mind thinking.
October 14th, 2017 05:46
single male shopper
FredPeyer said:
Frank, that shopper could have been me! Love your poem.
October 14th, 2017 04:50
FredPeyer said:
Frank, that shopper could have been me! Love your poem.
October 14th, 2017 04:50
unravelling after
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers. Sometimes I have that first line and nothing else, but, somehow, the piece finishes itself. No clue where the rest came from.
Love your poem!
October 13th, 2017 12:16
FredPeyer said:
Frank, your excellent poem speaks to me and I think to many of us writers. Sometimes I have that first line and nothing else, but, somehow, the piece finishes itself. No clue where the rest came from.
Love your poem!
October 13th, 2017 12:16
unravelling after
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite description of the process of good writing, Frank! Let the muse take over and watch it flow. A bit uncanny how this works, isn\'t it.
October 13th, 2017 09:52
Louis Gibbs said:
Exquisite description of the process of good writing, Frank! Let the muse take over and watch it flow. A bit uncanny how this works, isn\'t it.
October 13th, 2017 09:52
difficult departure
Frank Prem said:
Thanks to all for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.
October 12th, 2017 16:04
Frank Prem said:
Thanks to all for reading and your comments. I appreciate them.
October 12th, 2017 16:04
difficult departure
Fay Slimm. said:
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky experience - - great stuff.
October 12th, 2017 10:33
Fay Slimm. said:
You tell a mystery story so well here Frank - - I could taste that smoky experience - - great stuff.
October 12th, 2017 10:33
difficult departure
Louis Gibbs said:
This one was a bit hard for me to see through all the smoke. Abstract, I would say, as are many a good poem. It certainly reads well and holds one\'s attention ... the mark of a good poem. Kudos, Frank!
October 12th, 2017 08:00
Louis Gibbs said:
This one was a bit hard for me to see through all the smoke. Abstract, I would say, as are many a good poem. It certainly reads well and holds one\'s attention ... the mark of a good poem. Kudos, Frank!
October 12th, 2017 08:00
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
Louis Gibbs said:
This is a classic, Frank! Truly enjoyed it, and envy the advantage you Europeans have to learn and blend so many Languages.
October 11th, 2017 09:52
Louis Gibbs said:
This is a classic, Frank! Truly enjoyed it, and envy the advantage you Europeans have to learn and blend so many Languages.
October 11th, 2017 09:52
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
FredPeyer said:
Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is Alsatian, so a German speaking French citizen. And he now lives in Hawaii, speaking English. But sometimes when he talks to me, he will use all three languages within one sentence. And I guess I am the only one who can understand!
Why can\'t we have just one language in the whole world?
October 11th, 2017 03:33
FredPeyer said:
Frenk, your really great funny poem reminds me of my brother in law. He is Alsatian, so a German speaking French citizen. And he now lives in Hawaii, speaking English. But sometimes when he talks to me, he will use all three languages within one sentence. And I guess I am the only one who can understand!
Why can\'t we have just one language in the whole world?
October 11th, 2017 03:33
materinski jezik - the mother tongue
orchidee said:
Have to call you Frenk then. Good write!
October 11th, 2017 01:56
orchidee said:
Have to call you Frenk then. Good write!
October 11th, 2017 01:56
the wind and the lion
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it a few more times!
If you know him, really know him, the roar does not frighten you.
October 10th, 2017 02:14
FredPeyer said:
An incredible poem, Frank. Still trying to get it though. Need to read it a few more times!
If you know him, really know him, the roar does not frighten you.
October 10th, 2017 02:14
politika of the pipples
FredPeyer said:
No wonder it won the prize, Frenk!
Absolutely gorgeous!
October 9th, 2017 21:06
FredPeyer said:
No wonder it won the prize, Frenk!
Absolutely gorgeous!
October 9th, 2017 21:06
politika of the pipples
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant, Frank! Simply brilliant tribute to poets. And a fine commentary on dictatorial rule.
October 9th, 2017 09:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Brilliant, Frank! Simply brilliant tribute to poets. And a fine commentary on dictatorial rule.
October 9th, 2017 09:35
politika of the pipples
orchidee said:
Is, how you say, a fine writing there Frenk!
October 9th, 2017 08:49
orchidee said:
Is, how you say, a fine writing there Frenk!
October 9th, 2017 08:49
politika of the pipples
Mugsdaddy said:
This should definitely be done on stage, quite ingenious very entertaining.
Mugsdaddy
October 9th, 2017 00:37
Mugsdaddy said:
This should definitely be done on stage, quite ingenious very entertaining.
Mugsdaddy
October 9th, 2017 00:37
tango
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would definitely get hurt. I saw a show on Broadway called just this, \"Tango,\" fascinating stuff.
Well expressed here, Frank. The attraction between the two dancers is critical to their performance, and you have captured a well trained pair. Excellent write - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 13:17
MendedFences27 said:
\"The Tango\", or if I ever tried it, \"The Tangle.\" Someone would definitely get hurt. I saw a show on Broadway called just this, \"Tango,\" fascinating stuff.
Well expressed here, Frank. The attraction between the two dancers is critical to their performance, and you have captured a well trained pair. Excellent write - Phil A.
October 8th, 2017 13:17
tango
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the tango is a most erotic dance to watch but looks hard to dance - not that I have ever tried.
October 8th, 2017 01:40
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, the tango is a most erotic dance to watch but looks hard to dance - not that I have ever tried.
October 8th, 2017 01:40
tango
orchidee said:
Would I even start to learn? Could I get past my swoons?! heehee.
October 8th, 2017 01:24
orchidee said:
Would I even start to learn? Could I get past my swoons?! heehee.
October 8th, 2017 01:24
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