Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
The New Day
L. B. Mek said:
I toast, to you
who is here to toast me, too
for soon my friend, we all
will be clinking tables and arm handles, for those one-sided toasts,
salud 🍻
take a deep, plunge
wipe the remnants from your lips
knowing, this too
is a meaningful life: worth truly living!..
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply Andy
February 16th, 2021 07:05
L. B. Mek said:
I toast, to you
who is here to toast me, too
for soon my friend, we all
will be clinking tables and arm handles, for those one-sided toasts,
salud 🍻
take a deep, plunge
wipe the remnants from your lips
knowing, this too
is a meaningful life: worth truly living!..
thanks for inspiring my little scribbled reply Andy
February 16th, 2021 07:05
That Handbag.
FredPeyer said:
I understand how you feel Andy, but I also think it is beautiful that your daughter is using that handbag.
February 15th, 2021 21:51
FredPeyer said:
I understand how you feel Andy, but I also think it is beautiful that your daughter is using that handbag.
February 15th, 2021 21:51
That Handbag.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is such a touching sentimental poem that you ought to enframe, its awesomely expressed and superbly written, how wifey\'s handbag reminded you of her, aw, i feel the feelings. But yes she is in a wonderful spirit world where there is no dementia. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 14:46
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Aw this is such a touching sentimental poem that you ought to enframe, its awesomely expressed and superbly written, how wifey\'s handbag reminded you of her, aw, i feel the feelings. But yes she is in a wonderful spirit world where there is no dementia. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
February 15th, 2021 14:46
That Handbag.
heatherbee said:
So beautiful to read and hear your story it is amazing how such items can hold such power over our emotions when they have belonged to a loved one.
February 15th, 2021 07:47
heatherbee said:
So beautiful to read and hear your story it is amazing how such items can hold such power over our emotions when they have belonged to a loved one.
February 15th, 2021 07:47
That Handbag.
L. B. Mek said:
emotion, is an absurd notion, how can something so intangible gain such an unnerving grasp on our mental condition, and yet
that same emotive unfurling of hidden wounds, is a window to our healing\'s, soothing
a solace, within remembrance -painful,
untimely - mostly, but undeniably worthwhile, for whomever instilled such feeling\'s within us performed a small miracle in our lives and thus, is worthy of every drop we shed and every smile we are gifted, as those tears - eventually, dry...
be strong my friend, your journey of loss may be long or short but its cost are worth paying, for the added value your beloved enriched your life with: is without doubt!
thank you for sharing Andy, an emotive write - truly
February 15th, 2021 06:28
L. B. Mek said:
emotion, is an absurd notion, how can something so intangible gain such an unnerving grasp on our mental condition, and yet
that same emotive unfurling of hidden wounds, is a window to our healing\'s, soothing
a solace, within remembrance -painful,
untimely - mostly, but undeniably worthwhile, for whomever instilled such feeling\'s within us performed a small miracle in our lives and thus, is worthy of every drop we shed and every smile we are gifted, as those tears - eventually, dry...
be strong my friend, your journey of loss may be long or short but its cost are worth paying, for the added value your beloved enriched your life with: is without doubt!
thank you for sharing Andy, an emotive write - truly
February 15th, 2021 06:28
Peaceful Buzzard.
L. B. Mek said:
as a city dweller, for the majority of these throwaway years I count as my unremarkable experience - of all things, \'life\'
nature, has always been a distant friend, of course it visits - noticeably, with each change of season or those twilight\'s that ignite our reverie of idolised yesteryear memories, but in reality
it is only when I read, dedication and depictions like yours, I get some tangible grasp of the majesty - in it all...
that\'s the gift of sharing, that\'s why
I thank you for letting me experience a little bit more of nature, within your words today dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
as a city dweller, for the majority of these throwaway years I count as my unremarkable experience - of all things, \'life\'
nature, has always been a distant friend, of course it visits - noticeably, with each change of season or those twilight\'s that ignite our reverie of idolised yesteryear memories, but in reality
it is only when I read, dedication and depictions like yours, I get some tangible grasp of the majesty - in it all...
that\'s the gift of sharing, that\'s why
I thank you for letting me experience a little bit more of nature, within your words today dear Poet
February 15th, 2021 04:55
That Handbag.
dusk arising said:
And so we pass into the great unknown, for that we have to admit is all we really know about what follows our passing other than our faith to believe that which we hold dearly. Always though is the haunting phrase \'they live on after death\'. And here is your words today is a clearly defined truth of one aspect of how a loved one lives on along with us.
If i survive your passing then whenever i see a pair of buzzards doing their talons entwined tumble from altitude mating ritual then the two of you will live on in my mind my friend.
(when i lived at upper wick buzzards were regularly in the skies and to see a pair perform this dance of ritual was thrilling).
February 15th, 2021 04:19
dusk arising said:
And so we pass into the great unknown, for that we have to admit is all we really know about what follows our passing other than our faith to believe that which we hold dearly. Always though is the haunting phrase \'they live on after death\'. And here is your words today is a clearly defined truth of one aspect of how a loved one lives on along with us.
If i survive your passing then whenever i see a pair of buzzards doing their talons entwined tumble from altitude mating ritual then the two of you will live on in my mind my friend.
(when i lived at upper wick buzzards were regularly in the skies and to see a pair perform this dance of ritual was thrilling).
February 15th, 2021 04:19
That Handbag.
orchidee said:
It takes a year - or more - getting through bereavement, they say. In one way, it takes forever, though \'time heals\' somewhat, as the saying goes.
February 15th, 2021 03:10
orchidee said:
It takes a year - or more - getting through bereavement, they say. In one way, it takes forever, though \'time heals\' somewhat, as the saying goes.
February 15th, 2021 03:10
Peaceful Buzzard.
SureshG said:
I am more in awe of the ‘birds of prey’.
But I do wish you a feast of morsels though.
February 14th, 2021 11:31
SureshG said:
I am more in awe of the ‘birds of prey’.
But I do wish you a feast of morsels though.
February 14th, 2021 11:31
Peaceful Buzzard.
Michael Edwards said:
We have several raptors around here including not only red kites, but also a peregrine falcon in the church spire in town as well as the usual buzzards and kestrals. Fabulous birds all of them.
February 14th, 2021 05:12
Michael Edwards said:
We have several raptors around here including not only red kites, but also a peregrine falcon in the church spire in town as well as the usual buzzards and kestrals. Fabulous birds all of them.
February 14th, 2021 05:12
Peaceful Buzzard.
SureshG said:
I am more in awe of the ‘birds of prey’.
But I do wish you a feast of morsels though.
February 14th, 2021 04:32
SureshG said:
I am more in awe of the ‘birds of prey’.
But I do wish you a feast of morsels though.
February 14th, 2021 04:32
Peaceful Buzzard.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
Oops, not in the sense of \'He\'s a crotchety old buzzard\' though!
February 14th, 2021 03:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold.
Oops, not in the sense of \'He\'s a crotchety old buzzard\' though!
February 14th, 2021 03:15
Peaceful Buzzard.
dusk arising said:
Awe inspiring aren\'t they. Who doesn\'t get carried away wondering what it would be like to soar on a breeze or circle upon rising air currents. Mesmerising.
chick corea - once again cancer robs us of a great musician RIP
February 14th, 2021 02:28
dusk arising said:
Awe inspiring aren\'t they. Who doesn\'t get carried away wondering what it would be like to soar on a breeze or circle upon rising air currents. Mesmerising.
chick corea - once again cancer robs us of a great musician RIP
February 14th, 2021 02:28
The Power Of Music.
dusk arising said:
Its a pity the general public only know Morricone for his film music (if at all) for he surely is deserving of much more recognition.
February 13th, 2021 22:24
dusk arising said:
Its a pity the general public only know Morricone for his film music (if at all) for he surely is deserving of much more recognition.
February 13th, 2021 22:24
The Power Of Music.
FredPeyer said:
Well done Andy, music triggers so many emotions!
February 13th, 2021 13:30
FredPeyer said:
Well done Andy, music triggers so many emotions!
February 13th, 2021 13:30
The Power Of Music.
Fay Slimm. said:
What a lovely piece of music and your words hold its comforting message of the journey to come dear Andy - - another beautiful posting my friend.
February 13th, 2021 11:43
Fay Slimm. said:
What a lovely piece of music and your words hold its comforting message of the journey to come dear Andy - - another beautiful posting my friend.
February 13th, 2021 11:43
The Power Of Music.
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed a beautiful piece - done honour by your fine write.
February 13th, 2021 06:20
Michael Edwards said:
It is indeed a beautiful piece - done honour by your fine write.
February 13th, 2021 06:20
The Power Of Music.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for all your musical selections, Andy.
I\'ve formed the habit of turning, first stop, to your posts; I then click on your selection, convert to the Youtube version and, utilising this as an accompaniment, continue with whatever else I might do here.
It\'s a great service You provide.
Thanks again.
February 13th, 2021 05:24
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks for all your musical selections, Andy.
I\'ve formed the habit of turning, first stop, to your posts; I then click on your selection, convert to the Youtube version and, utilising this as an accompaniment, continue with whatever else I might do here.
It\'s a great service You provide.
Thanks again.
February 13th, 2021 05:24
Resurrected Flower.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor of what love will do to a person. If you are loved, you will bloom.
February 12th, 2021 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor of what love will do to a person. If you are loved, you will bloom.
February 12th, 2021 11:31
Resurrected Flower.
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really enjoyed reading this poem Gold.
February 12th, 2021 10:46
Jerry Reynolds said:
I really enjoyed reading this poem Gold.
February 12th, 2021 10:46
Resurrected Flower.
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I find you\'re getting better and better my friend, and oh so talented Poet..
I looked forward to what next reading delight you\'ll be sharing, every time I finish your last line..
February 12th, 2021 07:17
L. B. Mek said:
Brilliant!
I find you\'re getting better and better my friend, and oh so talented Poet..
I looked forward to what next reading delight you\'ll be sharing, every time I finish your last line..
February 12th, 2021 07:17
Talking On The Screen.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Andy! I am so thankful for that \'screen\'. Without it I wouldn\'t have seen my grandkids for over a year. We don\'t talk for hours, they some of them have an attention span of about three minutes. But they always want to hear a \'story\' which I have to make up as I go along. Thanks for this poem.
February 11th, 2021 19:48
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, Andy! I am so thankful for that \'screen\'. Without it I wouldn\'t have seen my grandkids for over a year. We don\'t talk for hours, they some of them have an attention span of about three minutes. But they always want to hear a \'story\' which I have to make up as I go along. Thanks for this poem.
February 11th, 2021 19:48
One At A Time.
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor, Andy. We are unique, each of us, but also belong to humanity with all its beauty and sorrow. Well written!
February 11th, 2021 16:13
FredPeyer said:
Beautiful metaphor, Andy. We are unique, each of us, but also belong to humanity with all its beauty and sorrow. Well written!
February 11th, 2021 16:13
One At A Time.
SureshG said:
Your analogy of a single flake (each flake being truly unique) to individualism is unparalleled, and more when so poetically stated
February 11th, 2021 13:08
SureshG said:
Your analogy of a single flake (each flake being truly unique) to individualism is unparalleled, and more when so poetically stated
February 11th, 2021 13:08
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