Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



One At A Time.
JonathanB said:

Thought provoking and neat

February 11th, 2021 12:37

One At A Time.
willow tree said:

I enjoyed it -yet why do crowds bring sorrow ?

February 11th, 2021 10:12

One At A Time.
John Prophet said:

Nice work Andy. Love a good snow fall! ❄️☃️

February 11th, 2021 08:09

One At A Time.
L. B. Mek said:

but my friend, you\'ve also seen the majesty of that white carpet, those individual flakes paint the earth with, when they truly choose
\'to join together\': as equals...
(such, be
life\'s unrequited bane of commonality
within Nature\'s: cyclical, cynicism of duality
while all existence is tethered
a mere coin flip\'s - breadth
to empathy\'s mercy...)
a wonderful read Andy,
thanks for inspiring my little reply

February 11th, 2021 05:52

Talking On The Screen.
L. B. Mek said:

\'Those wonderful times of the past
When the three of us
Were together.
But we laugh as well,
The humour in our lives
Always to the fore.
There are many miles between us
But that distance means nothing
As we sit by each other\'...
oh my friend what warmth you imbue into mere words,
a great read Andy

February 11th, 2021 04:41

One At A Time.
Doggerel Dave said:

No blame (your comment) accrues with you here Andy – only the stultifying and potentially dangerous effect crowds can (not necessarily will) have. Would you accept my judgement of this as a parable, succinct and nicely polished?
Thanks also for the music.

February 11th, 2021 03:38

One At A Time.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

February 11th, 2021 02:49

Talking On The Screen.
heatherbee said:

These are lovely words.

February 10th, 2021 18:05

Talking On The Screen.
Fay Slimm. said:

Chatting with someone special is always a way to lighten our hearts Andy - - thank you for sharing your experience of that with us and also for sharing the music that always lifts my heart.

February 10th, 2021 16:27

Talking On The Screen.
Julie B said:

I like this a lot

February 10th, 2021 03:18

Talking On The Screen.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

February 10th, 2021 02:47

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
AlitaOpal said:

Green is the colour of the heart chakra, wonderful piece Goldfinch 🌹

February 9th, 2021 20:11

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well done Gold accept this humble
response.

dandelions bloom
in the snow


February 9th, 2021 10:55

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
dusk arising said:

Tears from heaven fall
Bringing forth a joyous call
Build a snowman tall


Grrr at you getting me counting syllables!

February 9th, 2021 07:23

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
L. B. Mek said:

beautiful Andy,
it snowed here as well, not as much I think - for our
\'grey, pointedly: stayed...\'

February 9th, 2021 06:00

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
willow tree said:

Lovely gentle soft haiku

February 9th, 2021 05:14

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Doggerel Dave said:

Not fond of haikus generally, Andy - but this one gave me a clear vision. So...

February 9th, 2021 04:45

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Autumn pulls a silky blanket over its head and sleeps again
Great capture of nature today Andy

February 9th, 2021 03:52

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Orchi.

February 9th, 2021 03:10

The Green Disappears – Haiku.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
We got a slight covering, but the green has not completely disappeared.

February 9th, 2021 02:49

Love For Eternity.
dusk arising said:

It\'s written in the stars. You only need look to the heavens at night and it is as plain as day and written in your heart.
One day we shall all share the bliss of the love we have lived.

February 8th, 2021 07:49

Love For Eternity.
DesertWords said:

Soon I will share a 60th anniversary with my Love. Your poem reminds me to celebrate each day, each moment. Thank you.

February 8th, 2021 07:00

Love For Eternity.
L. B. Mek said:

just beautiful, I will never tire of reading your wonderful depiction of that love, life so fit - to gift, you and your treasured wife..
\'emotive\' doesn\'t even begin to do your dedication\'s justice Andy

February 8th, 2021 06:36

Love For Eternity.
JonathanB said:

Just beautiful. I can really relate to that after 37 years of marriage to the love of my life.

February 8th, 2021 05:17

It Is Back.
L. B. Mek said:

forgive me Andy, I\'m not the biggest cricket fan, but your write still took me back - in-time...
as I used to work at Lord\'s and Twickenham in my adventurous teens, and yes I ticked-off Wembley as well but try as I might Wimbledon - actually had standard\'s to uphold,
so my grand-slam stadia dreams
dissipated in straight sets, before
I got anywhere near centre court... lol

February 8th, 2021 05:14

Love For Eternity.
Fay Slimm. said:

Your beautiful words are indeed reminders that love last forever - - love never fails as it is part of the permanent and therefore love never dies - what a wonderful gift is love --- thank you so much for sharing that happy dream with us dear Andy.

February 8th, 2021 02:55

Love For Eternity.
orchidee said:

A fine write and true, Gold.

February 8th, 2021 02:42

It Is Back.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Sports on TV always a call to party Andy. Good write,

February 7th, 2021 16:37

It Is Back.
willow tree said:

It’s the small pleasures in life that bring us joy ! Cricket , poetry walking in nature ! I’m Glad some goodness showed up for you

February 7th, 2021 05:44

It Is Back.
Poetic Dan said:

I\'m glad something came around as we can\'t spend all our by the river!

I hope you get to that green soon my friend

February 7th, 2021 03:35



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