Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
She Found Herself.
Accidental Poet said:
A great write and read from an even greater man. ; )
May 15th, 2021 07:20
Accidental Poet said:
A great write and read from an even greater man. ; )
May 15th, 2021 07:20
She Found Herself.
dusk arising said:
It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.
There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.
May 15th, 2021 05:30
dusk arising said:
It\'s sad how people can be dominated by a relationship and lose what they are. I have seen it and been it in the past. It happens all too readily. At my stage in life I have decided not to risk it again and to carry on to my final years being the unfettered \'me\'.
There\'s a good message in your words today and i hope very few readers find themselves in a restrictive relationship such as you describe.
May 15th, 2021 05:30
She Found Herself.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 15th, 2021 01:58
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
meanwhile - did I find \'Me\', \'Myself\', or \'I\'? (Do shut up Orchi. lol).
May 15th, 2021 01:58
She Found Herself.
Caring dove said:
Listening is so important ! 🙂great that she got her strength and power back
May 15th, 2021 01:39
Caring dove said:
Listening is so important ! 🙂great that she got her strength and power back
May 15th, 2021 01:39
Unjustified Violence.
Andy Hunter said:
Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good 🙂
May 14th, 2021 17:16
Andy Hunter said:
Had me puzzled until I got to the end. Very good 🙂
May 14th, 2021 17:16
Unjustified Violence.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.
May 14th, 2021 14:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good story Andy. Love the suggestions the images make.
May 14th, 2021 14:06
Unjustified Violence.
dusk arising said:
If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?
May 14th, 2021 10:52
dusk arising said:
If you had to choose, which colour croquet ball would you be?
May 14th, 2021 10:52
Unjustified Violence.
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)
May 14th, 2021 06:16
L. B. Mek said:
a fun read to help inject that Friday feeling Andy,
thanks!
although, I suggest
there\'s much worse Manmade things to be, than a ball
in a sport,
like a fish hook, maybe or a bullet
accessories both, to that other type
of hunting sport
where those who get knocked down
never get to see the Sun, again...
(please note: commentary is on
hunting for Pleasure not need)
May 14th, 2021 06:16
Unjustified Violence.
Accidental Poet said:
Sounded to me like the life of Orchi. ; ) Great write Andy.
May 14th, 2021 05:05
Accidental Poet said:
Sounded to me like the life of Orchi. ; ) Great write Andy.
May 14th, 2021 05:05
Love Day
myself and me said:
A love beyond life long. So touching and wonderful.
May 13th, 2021 21:12
myself and me said:
A love beyond life long. So touching and wonderful.
May 13th, 2021 21:12
Love Day
Neville said:
... Hey you beautiful little golden bird, I reckon you just poemed my most very favourwritest GF60 posts of all time ...
and it aint hard to see where you are coming from neither ...
... such cool memories of the one you love and are no doubt still loved by ...
... great music n sounds and living life at four miles an hour ...
... what more could an old fella ask for ...
... cor blimey, you even got sheep thrown in ...
a brilliantly composed, most meaningful and heart-felt bit o poetry ...
All Good Things Andy,
Neville
May 13th, 2021 01:58
Neville said:
... Hey you beautiful little golden bird, I reckon you just poemed my most very favourwritest GF60 posts of all time ...
and it aint hard to see where you are coming from neither ...
... such cool memories of the one you love and are no doubt still loved by ...
... great music n sounds and living life at four miles an hour ...
... what more could an old fella ask for ...
... cor blimey, you even got sheep thrown in ...
a brilliantly composed, most meaningful and heart-felt bit o poetry ...
All Good Things Andy,
Neville
May 13th, 2021 01:58
Work Enjoyment.
Accidental Poet said:
In 51 years of working, I\'ve learned many things. At 13 I really had no idea what I wanted to do, and not a lot of influence in how to work. But over time I did begin to learn that I was starting to know what it meant to want to make a difference. And from various people I\'ve learned that I need to hold myself accountable for what I do. And you\'re right Andy, loving what you do is a happy life. Beautiful write. ; )
May 12th, 2021 18:53
Accidental Poet said:
In 51 years of working, I\'ve learned many things. At 13 I really had no idea what I wanted to do, and not a lot of influence in how to work. But over time I did begin to learn that I was starting to know what it meant to want to make a difference. And from various people I\'ve learned that I need to hold myself accountable for what I do. And you\'re right Andy, loving what you do is a happy life. Beautiful write. ; )
May 12th, 2021 18:53
Work Enjoyment.
SureshG said:
If we love what we do, then we do what we love
and then, even the hardship of our work, melts away.
May 12th, 2021 14:20
SureshG said:
If we love what we do, then we do what we love
and then, even the hardship of our work, melts away.
May 12th, 2021 14:20
Work Enjoyment.
dusk arising said:
I\'ve been working 54 years (the last 40 yrs working self employed) and I am just giving up on it.... all NI stamps fully paid since day one.
I\'m looking forward to enjoying retirement.
May 12th, 2021 07:44
dusk arising said:
I\'ve been working 54 years (the last 40 yrs working self employed) and I am just giving up on it.... all NI stamps fully paid since day one.
I\'m looking forward to enjoying retirement.
May 12th, 2021 07:44
Work Enjoyment.
Andy Hunter said:
Very true Andy some jobs were more a vocation which were a pleasure, whilst others were simply dire. Great piece of writing 👍
May 12th, 2021 07:21
Andy Hunter said:
Very true Andy some jobs were more a vocation which were a pleasure, whilst others were simply dire. Great piece of writing 👍
May 12th, 2021 07:21
Work Enjoyment.
John Prophet said:
Creating with our minds and hands,
can be a fulfilling thing.
May 12th, 2021 07:04
John Prophet said:
Creating with our minds and hands,
can be a fulfilling thing.
May 12th, 2021 07:04
Work Enjoyment.
Doggerel Dave said:
Give me retirement (in comfortable circumstances) any day - and preferably for as long as possible.
Good attempt to get \'em productive again though, Andy.
May 12th, 2021 05:12
Doggerel Dave said:
Give me retirement (in comfortable circumstances) any day - and preferably for as long as possible.
Good attempt to get \'em productive again though, Andy.
May 12th, 2021 05:12
Work Enjoyment.
Neville said:
my word tis good to hear .. and read of course .. well done you .. and by the way, those last two lines are quite brilliant and true ....... N
May 12th, 2021 03:11
Neville said:
my word tis good to hear .. and read of course .. well done you .. and by the way, those last two lines are quite brilliant and true ....... N
May 12th, 2021 03:11
Work Enjoyment.
Caring dove said:
It’s nice to be able to have a job that you can actually enjoy . Many people don’t have jobs they like and I guess it probably affects their moods , and how they feel
Glad you enjoyed your job
May 12th, 2021 01:09
Caring dove said:
It’s nice to be able to have a job that you can actually enjoy . Many people don’t have jobs they like and I guess it probably affects their moods , and how they feel
Glad you enjoyed your job
May 12th, 2021 01:09
The End Of The Day.
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely read of your pleasure in Mozart my friend - wonderful talent both the music and the fab. Cleo perfectly interpreting in her expert style
May 11th, 2021 12:47
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely read of your pleasure in Mozart my friend - wonderful talent both the music and the fab. Cleo perfectly interpreting in her expert style
May 11th, 2021 12:47
The End Of The Day.
dusk arising said:
The right music is such an aid to finding peace of mind and so to sleep.
May 11th, 2021 08:55
dusk arising said:
The right music is such an aid to finding peace of mind and so to sleep.
May 11th, 2021 08:55
The End Of The Day.
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve noticed that with certain music, if I close my eyes I feel as if the music lifts me up like on a cloud of euphoria. Wonderful way to end the day Andy and a great write. ; )
May 11th, 2021 06:27
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve noticed that with certain music, if I close my eyes I feel as if the music lifts me up like on a cloud of euphoria. Wonderful way to end the day Andy and a great write. ; )
May 11th, 2021 06:27
The End Of The Day.
John Prophet said:
The arts, mankind\'s greatest achievement!
May 11th, 2021 05:54
John Prophet said:
The arts, mankind\'s greatest achievement!
May 11th, 2021 05:54
The End Of The Day.
L. B. Mek said:
\'That sound of music touched me\'
\'Taken to a world of beauty\'
\'That place of Utopia
Brought to me
At the end of the day\'..
a wonderful dedication and detailed rendering, of such a relatable scene
(sorry for messing with the order of your lines Andy
I meant no disrespect, just wanted to highlight
that unassuming poetic skill: you hide in your write\'s, at times\'
May 11th, 2021 05:30
L. B. Mek said:
\'That sound of music touched me\'
\'Taken to a world of beauty\'
\'That place of Utopia
Brought to me
At the end of the day\'..
a wonderful dedication and detailed rendering, of such a relatable scene
(sorry for messing with the order of your lines Andy
I meant no disrespect, just wanted to highlight
that unassuming poetic skill: you hide in your write\'s, at times\'
May 11th, 2021 05:30
The End Of The Day.
Andy Hunter said:
Music can take you to another place. Great write Andy
May 11th, 2021 05:08
Andy Hunter said:
Music can take you to another place. Great write Andy
May 11th, 2021 05:08
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