Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Sentimentality.
Trenz Pruca said:

It is always a pleasure to read your poems. Thank you.

May 23rd, 2021 17:51

Diogenes.
John Prophet said:

I don\'t see one even when I look in a mirror. Great write!

May 23rd, 2021 07:22

Sentimentality.
Doggerel Dave said:

With you all the way, Andy. Where appropriate make yourself vulnerable - how the other reacts is a good test (ensure you have a safe exit should things go pear shaped).

May 23rd, 2021 07:15

Sentimentality.
everlong said:

Beautiful song! Emotions truly are powerful, especially through music!

May 23rd, 2021 04:41

Sentimentality.
dusk arising said:

Totally agree. Kindred spirit.

May 23rd, 2021 04:19

Sentimentality.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Meanwhile - do they weep tears of joy, or of anguish, when I begin to sing?! heehee.

May 23rd, 2021 01:59

Diogenes.
myself and me said:

Beautiful song, beautiful writing.

May 22nd, 2021 22:19

Diogenes.
Doggerel Dave said:

You do make it hard sometimes, Andy - now I know I\'ve been around a fair while, but he was a bit before my time....however if you had mentioned Zorba, I might have been able to contribute something constructive to this particular collumn.......

May 22nd, 2021 08:07

Diogenes.
dusk arising said:

So why was he dropped from Eastenders?

May 22nd, 2021 07:18

Diogenes.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.
Did we meet him in 1066? Was he around then?
He thought he met an honest man in a politician. But then - he opened his mouth? We knows the rest.

May 22nd, 2021 01:43

And The Wind Blows.
Doggerel Dave said:

The clouds, the trees, the sea, the waves of corn..all provoked rich memories - thanks, Andy.
The bike? Ahh the bike...rode one for years - try bottom gear...No good? Plan a trip in the opposite direction and hope the bloody wind has exhausted itself by the time you have to get home....


May 21st, 2021 19:50

And The Wind Blows.
Dove said:

Lovely! Just don’t fall! I love the wind too

May 21st, 2021 08:53

And The Wind Blows.
dusk arising said:

And the wind blows
as I sit in the bathroom
staring at the washbasin.

Love the sound of that quartet (but theyre not quite polished at that style of jazz yet). Names to watch out for in years ahead.
Sound is reminiscent of a lot of ECM jazz recordings who use similar groupings.

Excellent poetry.

May 21st, 2021 05:58

And The Wind Blows.
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful, simply
thanks Andy

May 21st, 2021 04:06

And The Wind Blows.
Neville said:

this is so much more than just a bit o fun my golden friend ... I could read, listen and enjoy any day of the week ..

this is simply super sir and all that jazz ....

Neville


May 21st, 2021 03:33

And The Wind Blows.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

May 21st, 2021 01:56

What Is A Youth.
Fay Slimm. said:

A really wonderful piece of romantic music and words - - love certainly does rule over all dear Andy.

May 20th, 2021 12:49

What Is A Youth.
dusk arising said:

Your drug of choice - music - takes you places other could only dream about.

May 20th, 2021 09:21

What Is A Youth.
Dove said:

Awe, isn’t music therapy beautiful! Nice poem!

May 20th, 2021 09:02

Laughter On The Lawn.
L. B. Mek said:

well then
let us toast, us \'old twats\'
who survived
to keep our loved ones, alive
within each smile
we display: Defiantly, each day!
\'Cheers\' 🍻 - my friend
to many more years, being serenaded
by laughter\'s music
while watching youthful vitality, script
their future\'s: tears of regret...


May 20th, 2021 03:44

What Is A Youth.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Even teenagers are young. It\'s said youth are still developing their road-sense even at age 12 - crossing busy roads, etc.
You got road sense? That No.7 bus arrived yet?! lol.

May 20th, 2021 02:15

Laughter On The Lawn.
Doggerel Dave said:

Anyone bothered by \'twat\' should bugger off and consult Wikipedia on the subject - The scope of that reference never ceases to amaze....

May 19th, 2021 19:44

Laughter On The Lawn.
rosiedm said:

It\'s good you wrote about it about real daily events maybe he had a nice puncture on down the road and had to push his bike home

May 19th, 2021 17:40

Laughter On The Lawn.
Andy Hunter said:

If you\'re having fun then laughter is a great way of remembering the day. A cheeky comment is always worth a chuckle 🙂

May 19th, 2021 15:13

Laughter On The Lawn.
dusk arising said:

Wynton is probably the most technically proficient trumpet player of all time. What he is doing on circular breathing alone is mind blowing. Whilst being dazzled by his playing here, I would much rather enjoy the picture being painted rather than be dazzled. I.E. Chet never dazzled but painted with his soul.

Well as one \"old twat\" to another. Long live being an old twat, they may never achieve it.

May 19th, 2021 07:31

Nothing To Prove.
L. B. Mek said:

insightful observations Andy,
indeed, what most colours the perception we have for others
is our projection of what we assume
we would be like, in their shoes..
but like the bequeathed wisdom of our ancestral teachings
until we\'ve walked in the other persons shoes
we can not judge, merely: speculate...
or in more accessibly palatable: biblical terminology
\'Thou hypocrite, first cast out the beam
out of thine own eye; and then shalt thou
see clearly to cast out the mote
out of thy brother\'s (&/or sisters) eye.\'

May 19th, 2021 04:32

Laughter On The Lawn.
orchidee said:

A useful write Gold.
Their days will come, when they are twattish! Is that a word?
Well, we are very old, you and I. They got that bit right.
We would tell them:\'Do you know, lads, back in 1066 we......\'

May 19th, 2021 02:06

Laughter On The Lawn.
Caring dove said:

Sorry you were called this ... that’s rude isn’t it . I’m glad you tried to laugh it away .

There’s no need to call people names ... it’s unkind

May 19th, 2021 01:21

Nothing To Prove.
dusk arising said:

Other than on a race track those supercars have never attracted me. Yes the original Lamborghini Miura in 69 had beautiful lines which were soon lost as it was \'bettered\' by later models.
I\'m happy with my old Mercedes estate which will go fast if i want it to but these days i\'m more interested in getting high MPG than speeding.
They do look add and out of place among normal cars and I do agree that I expect them to be driven with pace and a show of accelleration. Why I wonder?

May 18th, 2021 03:25

Nothing To Prove.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. It becomes tiresome if a fast car or motorbike roars past us just to show off, on the road, or while we\'re walking along the path.

May 18th, 2021 01:44



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