Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Stumbling Blocks.
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
both to your insightful words, my friend
and to the unquestionable brilliance
of the legendary Miles Davis!
July 23rd, 2021 05:14
L. B. Mek said:
Amen!
both to your insightful words, my friend
and to the unquestionable brilliance
of the legendary Miles Davis!
July 23rd, 2021 05:14
Stumbling Blocks.
Fay Slimm. said:
No truer words written dear Andy -- there are problems to be solved and there are truths to be accepted in life.
July 23rd, 2021 04:04
Fay Slimm. said:
No truer words written dear Andy -- there are problems to be solved and there are truths to be accepted in life.
July 23rd, 2021 04:04
Stumbling Blocks.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
And the truth about my singing is.......?
Well there was a rumour that I was singing. lol.
July 23rd, 2021 01:36
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
And the truth about my singing is.......?
Well there was a rumour that I was singing. lol.
July 23rd, 2021 01:36
Night Club Time.
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t like your taste in beer, mate -Courage man meself.....
July 22nd, 2021 19:28
Doggerel Dave said:
Don\'t like your taste in beer, mate -Courage man meself.....
July 22nd, 2021 19:28
Night Club Time.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - am with you dear Andy for the musical jives but leaving at just after ten -- oh nah - - - you\'ll find me night-clubbing Downtown til dawn with Petula. - - What a fun read.
July 22nd, 2021 12:27
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha - am with you dear Andy for the musical jives but leaving at just after ten -- oh nah - - - you\'ll find me night-clubbing Downtown til dawn with Petula. - - What a fun read.
July 22nd, 2021 12:27
Night Club Time.
SureshG said:
Days of youth, a lot of fun
In my time, a lot was done
Now enjoy doing more BBQ’s
Let me throw one on fire for you
Hop in the car, get on a plane
Come by, for music n games
Thanks for lightening the mood
July 22nd, 2021 12:12
SureshG said:
Days of youth, a lot of fun
In my time, a lot was done
Now enjoy doing more BBQ’s
Let me throw one on fire for you
Hop in the car, get on a plane
Come by, for music n games
Thanks for lightening the mood
July 22nd, 2021 12:12
Night Club Time.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gahh do even oldies really go to night clubs? Or this is just your fantastic rocking imagination? I was actually impressed when my American friend in his late forties told me he never went to night clubs. But this poem is jaunty fun nevertheless. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:30
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Gahh do even oldies really go to night clubs? Or this is just your fantastic rocking imagination? I was actually impressed when my American friend in his late forties told me he never went to night clubs. But this poem is jaunty fun nevertheless. Kudos!!
Plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
July 22nd, 2021 11:30
Night Club Time.
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feed us chicken in a basket.
You must have defibs available
And good first aiders,
And we will be there,
Dancing and singing
Well into the night,\'..
insightful yet fun, a playful write
thanks for sharing Andy
July 22nd, 2021 03:49
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feed us chicken in a basket.
You must have defibs available
And good first aiders,
And we will be there,
Dancing and singing
Well into the night,\'..
insightful yet fun, a playful write
thanks for sharing Andy
July 22nd, 2021 03:49
Night Club Time.
Neville said:
talk about memories & oldies ... pot calling the kettle .. golden oldies indeed ... a little gem first thing works wonders sir .. but then so does a Double Diamond ... :)
July 22nd, 2021 01:23
Neville said:
talk about memories & oldies ... pot calling the kettle .. golden oldies indeed ... a little gem first thing works wonders sir .. but then so does a Double Diamond ... :)
July 22nd, 2021 01:23
Night Club Time.
orchidee said:
Yep, let\'s ditch the carpet slippers and pipe (though that\'s bad for us anyway, the pipe). Let\'s go wild, stay past our bedtime a quarter of a hour (gasp, whatever next?) and rave - to \'proper songs\' though, like this one.
July 22nd, 2021 01:16
orchidee said:
Yep, let\'s ditch the carpet slippers and pipe (though that\'s bad for us anyway, the pipe). Let\'s go wild, stay past our bedtime a quarter of a hour (gasp, whatever next?) and rave - to \'proper songs\' though, like this one.
July 22nd, 2021 01:16
Night Club Time.
Saxon Crow said:
Although I whole heartedly disagree with the no jab no entry fascism I really enjoyed the poem. Chicken in a basket! Lol
July 22nd, 2021 01:02
Saxon Crow said:
Although I whole heartedly disagree with the no jab no entry fascism I really enjoyed the poem. Chicken in a basket! Lol
July 22nd, 2021 01:02
The Sixties, I Was There .
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful sixties’ memories. I enjoyed the read.
Laura🌻
July 21st, 2021 15:45
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Thank you for sharing your wonderful sixties’ memories. I enjoyed the read.
Laura🌻
July 21st, 2021 15:45
The Sixties, I Was There .
dusk arising said:
Oh my yes, a couple of years younger I turned 15 in the summer of love. Being a city kid (Nottm) it was soul music which drove the blood through my veins. Halcyon days of youth.
July 21st, 2021 05:37
dusk arising said:
Oh my yes, a couple of years younger I turned 15 in the summer of love. Being a city kid (Nottm) it was soul music which drove the blood through my veins. Halcyon days of youth.
July 21st, 2021 05:37
The Sixties, I Was There .
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of nostalgia – really took me back: if I could disassociate it from the seventies I think I would be happy in that bubble – ‘cos it didn’t last..unfortunately….Or perhaps…
But thanks for the memories….
Aah….Andy… Don’t hog it - pass that toke around will ya ?
July 21st, 2021 04:58
Doggerel Dave said:
Great piece of nostalgia – really took me back: if I could disassociate it from the seventies I think I would be happy in that bubble – ‘cos it didn’t last..unfortunately….Or perhaps…
But thanks for the memories….
Aah….Andy… Don’t hog it - pass that toke around will ya ?
July 21st, 2021 04:58
The Sixties, I Was There .
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Yes, we woz there in the (ten) sixties too! What songs were in the charts then?
July 21st, 2021 02:02
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Yes, we woz there in the (ten) sixties too! What songs were in the charts then?
July 21st, 2021 02:02
The Sixties, I Was There .
Neville said:
I was there too ... I also remember each of those songs you mention and quite possibly the first time you posted this little trip back in time when everything was a breeze ........... I still have a kipper tie somewhere .............. :)
July 21st, 2021 01:43
Neville said:
I was there too ... I also remember each of those songs you mention and quite possibly the first time you posted this little trip back in time when everything was a breeze ........... I still have a kipper tie somewhere .............. :)
July 21st, 2021 01:43
Singing Once More.
myself and me said:
I enjoy listening the song, so beautiful, bring peace to the uneasy mind.
July 20th, 2021 20:48
myself and me said:
I enjoy listening the song, so beautiful, bring peace to the uneasy mind.
July 20th, 2021 20:48
Singing Once More.
SureshG said:
Singing, an emotional release, a calming experience.
Thank you
July 20th, 2021 12:54
SureshG said:
Singing, an emotional release, a calming experience.
Thank you
July 20th, 2021 12:54
Singing Once More.
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure about this, Andy? Even from far away it looks like madness to me...
Understand this newfound freedom applies to England alone not the rest of the UK. Correct?
July 20th, 2021 04:45
Doggerel Dave said:
Are you sure about this, Andy? Even from far away it looks like madness to me...
Understand this newfound freedom applies to England alone not the rest of the UK. Correct?
July 20th, 2021 04:45
Singing Once More.
L. B. Mek said:
organ is such a powerful instrument
you could be six hundred or six
and you wouldn\'t notice it,
thanks for sharing Andy
July 20th, 2021 04:22
L. B. Mek said:
organ is such a powerful instrument
you could be six hundred or six
and you wouldn\'t notice it,
thanks for sharing Andy
July 20th, 2021 04:22
Singing Once More.
Neville said:
some things are gradually returning to normal it seems .. I can\'t help worrying there may be a price to pay though .............................. I dont like being wrong any more than the next bloke .. but would not object if I have erred in my thinking on this one ..
July 20th, 2021 03:32
Neville said:
some things are gradually returning to normal it seems .. I can\'t help worrying there may be a price to pay though .............................. I dont like being wrong any more than the next bloke .. but would not object if I have erred in my thinking on this one ..
July 20th, 2021 03:32
Singing Once More.
orchidee said:
Cooee! Good write Gold.
It\'s a gloomy day - my singing resumes! lol.
I\'m sure my singing tutor knows something, but its not telling me. I\'ve paid out for 5,284 lessons so far. He says I\'m improving, so.....!
July 20th, 2021 01:50
orchidee said:
Cooee! Good write Gold.
It\'s a gloomy day - my singing resumes! lol.
I\'m sure my singing tutor knows something, but its not telling me. I\'ve paid out for 5,284 lessons so far. He says I\'m improving, so.....!
July 20th, 2021 01:50
Singing Once More.
Saxon Crow said:
Glad you\'ve got back to the choir GF. Sing your heart out! Lovely poem
July 20th, 2021 01:25
Saxon Crow said:
Glad you\'ve got back to the choir GF. Sing your heart out! Lovely poem
July 20th, 2021 01:25
No Longer At Home.
Thekkinkkattil said:
No words can describe your frustration and grief but you have made us all feel the intensity .Admire the way you penned it. My prayers for you and Joyce and the love you shared
July 20th, 2021 00:09
Thekkinkkattil said:
No words can describe your frustration and grief but you have made us all feel the intensity .Admire the way you penned it. My prayers for you and Joyce and the love you shared
July 20th, 2021 00:09
No Longer At Home.
SureshG said:
In the seething pain of your words, I read the intensity of love for Joyce, that I humbly admire.
July 19th, 2021 13:02
SureshG said:
In the seething pain of your words, I read the intensity of love for Joyce, that I humbly admire.
July 19th, 2021 13:02
No Longer At Home.
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned fury, at that ill-fate
of destiny\'s despairingly, demoralising injustice
should never be mistaken
for that \'self-loathing harbouring: anger,
of modern societies, pitifully senile fool\'s..\'
see, when you\'ve given everything
to that one thing, you hoped, prayed, wished
and sacrificed, to keep - \'whole\'
for as long as you draw breath, then you\'re entitled
to vent and express, your raw - suffering
in worded fury;
its a human, tool for survival - to insure
we don\'t all end-up, like \'those loathsome few
who would rather see the world burn and give-in\'
than find that self-worth from within
and do the work, the rest of us
grudgingly, embrace
as our hope fuelled - fight, to survive
and imbue meaning: in this - our one, and only
taste of a short-lived, existence...!
really liked that raw emotionality
you conveyed in this write, Andy
let it all out!
\'only then will you have that space
to realise and cherish
that subtle, embrace - when next
\'She\': comes to visit\'
July 19th, 2021 06:24
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned fury, at that ill-fate
of destiny\'s despairingly, demoralising injustice
should never be mistaken
for that \'self-loathing harbouring: anger,
of modern societies, pitifully senile fool\'s..\'
see, when you\'ve given everything
to that one thing, you hoped, prayed, wished
and sacrificed, to keep - \'whole\'
for as long as you draw breath, then you\'re entitled
to vent and express, your raw - suffering
in worded fury;
its a human, tool for survival - to insure
we don\'t all end-up, like \'those loathsome few
who would rather see the world burn and give-in\'
than find that self-worth from within
and do the work, the rest of us
grudgingly, embrace
as our hope fuelled - fight, to survive
and imbue meaning: in this - our one, and only
taste of a short-lived, existence...!
really liked that raw emotionality
you conveyed in this write, Andy
let it all out!
\'only then will you have that space
to realise and cherish
that subtle, embrace - when next
\'She\': comes to visit\'
July 19th, 2021 06:24
No Longer At Home.
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s more like it, Andy. No more of your sweetness and light memories – reality impinges. Better the anger - that’s reality.
I’ve seen quite a number of early onset dementia folks (can occur as early as the ‘40’s) - so consider yourself lucky you had so long with Joyce.
Not particularly helpful to you –but it does make me realize that there is nothing of me (no spirit, identity beyond this mortal coil) which exists after I cark it.
Enjoyed your anger - it makes a change.
July 19th, 2021 04:53
Doggerel Dave said:
That’s more like it, Andy. No more of your sweetness and light memories – reality impinges. Better the anger - that’s reality.
I’ve seen quite a number of early onset dementia folks (can occur as early as the ‘40’s) - so consider yourself lucky you had so long with Joyce.
Not particularly helpful to you –but it does make me realize that there is nothing of me (no spirit, identity beyond this mortal coil) which exists after I cark it.
Enjoyed your anger - it makes a change.
July 19th, 2021 04:53
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