Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Numbers Do Not Exist.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Yet numbers exist in some things. People in jobs-worth jobs meeting targets, sometimes meeting targets in terms of numbers of people, even if the people they number as treated as trash.

February 5th, 2021 03:04

No Holidays.
Michael Edwards said:

I still smile at the words of Ricky Gervaise - there are 3000 gods in the this world, Christians only believe in one - atheists and Christians are, therefore, only one god apart.

Now that\'s interesting - Christians with a capital C yet the word atheist with a lower case \'a\'. A clear case of inequality.

February 4th, 2021 09:11

Steps Into My River.
L. B. Mek said:

may we all find solace in what \'rivers\' we can excavate from whatever meaning we glean of life and then, learn the wisdom to carry our \'rivers\' with us, wherever our path may lead...
let those \'rivers\' be our liberators and never, be warped into our \'settling cocoon\' of anchors...
onwards, one step at a time to what next awaits,
till what\'s next is revealed as our final sip: of a lifetime\'s treasured breath...
onwards! my friend, let us dwell as much in our today\'s while cherishing each straining tug of our beloved yesterday\'s, let us \'choose\' to search out those adventures - waiting, for us to realise: how brief a second takes to blink-by...
thanks for inspiring my little reply Andy, a wonderfully thought provoking read

February 4th, 2021 05:24

No Holidays.
Doggerel Dave said:

\"Just a thought\"??? Go on Andy - you keep thinking if that keeps you occupied. But I\'m both an atheist and an agnostic. So do come back and we can have a chat - after which you can have more thoughts as you sort that lot out. :-)
Agreed - no holidays. Though it is immaterial now you\'ve retired. So this is your big chance....

February 4th, 2021 03:18

No Holidays.
orchidee said:

I only read recently of one in an accident. He said he came out of it a stronger atheist. Doh! that\'s just digging oneself deeper into a hole, I say.
Jehovah\'s Witnesses don\'t put up Christmas trees, I heard.

February 4th, 2021 02:55

Steps Into My River.
orchidee said:

Has Cally (Caliope) got any welly boots?!

February 4th, 2021 02:43

Steps Into My River.
willow tree said:

I can hear your affection for the path along come through this poem is full of love . Keep up the loving life

February 3rd, 2021 15:37

Steps Into My River.
SureshG said:

Mankind from inception has been drawn to the River, just as you have poetically taken the steps to yours.

February 3rd, 2021 13:01

Steps Into My River.
FredPeyer said:

Keep on walking Andy, and you will find a lot of good and excitement just around the bend in that river of yours!

February 3rd, 2021 12:53

Steps Into My River.
Michael Edwards said:

Just great - sadly the river through our village is still very high but the wildlife endures - kingfishers, otters, et al.

February 3rd, 2021 08:30

Steps Into My River.
dusk arising said:

That lady river flows through your poetry like your inspirational muse. Surely, on the days after your life\'s fulfillment, there could be no finer tribute to your times in the company of your river than a bench for the living to sit in contemplation of the peace she brings.

February 3rd, 2021 07:12

Steps Into My River.
orchidee said:

And - hey , that\'s the steps in the pic, that people take when they can\'t bear my singing any more! lol.

February 3rd, 2021 03:01

Steps Into My River.
orchidee said:

Can ya do miracles? Can ya walk IN or ON the River, as well a walk BY it? Would ya still need ya welly boots for it?!
I\'ve had to turn back on some walks, along some unpaved tracks. I\'ve not got proper walking boots.

February 3rd, 2021 03:00

The View From The Window.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good story Andy.

February 2nd, 2021 10:08

The View From The Window.
L. B. Mek said:

Brilliant!

February 2nd, 2021 05:35

The View From The Window.
dusk arising said:

A similar story I had heard before but it highlights so well our many differences from one another.The creative, the giving, the needy to name those which firstly come to mind.

A tale well told..... owzat!

February 2nd, 2021 05:20

The View From The Window.
Michael Edwards said:

It\'s not what\'s in front of ypu - it\'s what you see - he was a true artist. And a fine write to boot!

February 2nd, 2021 04:43

The View From The Window.
Doggerel Dave said:

Revealed yourself as a writer of great short stories with a twist.
New departure, Andy?

February 2nd, 2021 04:31

The View From The Window.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
I visited someone in hospital, 29 years ago now. He sadly passed away, but one of the nurses who tended him was a major person in setting up a Cycle Helmet Safety Trust.

February 2nd, 2021 02:55

Use By Date?
FredPeyer said:

What that number means Andy, is that you can use it for 3 minutes at a time only, for a total of 2020 hours. So don\'t bring a book with you, do your business and get the heck out of there! :-)

February 1st, 2021 12:25

Use By Date?
L. B. Mek said:

how amusing, a toilet seat with a use by date...
very observant of you, I would assume that was just their manufacturing batch number
and hope, I made a lucky pick, lol
fun read Andy

February 1st, 2021 07:11

Use By Date?
dusk arising said:

In these days of our later years maybe the toilet seat should have a functional date mechanism topside so that as our memory fades we can bend over in front of a mirror looking at it from betwen our legs to check when we last sat upon the loo for bodily functions to perform...... or is this just another load of crap i should have deposited elsewhere.

I think your number is a manufactured date.... if humans had one of those on their bum it would stop some people telling porkies unless they kept their little panties on.

February 1st, 2021 03:41

Use By Date?
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold.
Maybe it\'s the size of what has to sit on the seats!

February 1st, 2021 02:45

What Words?
Neville said:


there will indeed be better days ahead of that I am quite certain ... and I am also glad I chose to call in today, so that you might remind me ....


January 31st, 2021 17:30

What Words?
FredPeyer said:

Andy, sometimes words are not enough, sometimes they are too much. You found the right ones.

January 31st, 2021 11:52

What Words?
Suresh said:

The way we can make these trying times better, is by easing the pain of those a little less fortunate, for as you said, there WILL be better days soon.

January 31st, 2021 09:00

What Words?
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
You walking that River? Or just seeing it for now, with the floods?

January 31st, 2021 03:08

That Photograph.
FredPeyer said:

Andy, that photo and your lovely poem made me think back to my wedding day. Love that poem! You inspired me to maybe one day write a love poem to my wife and post it with a wedding picture.
Of course, I am looking a lot better now, but no matter...

January 30th, 2021 21:58

That Photograph.
Fay Slimm. said:

What a delightful and telling picture where two know their future of closest love - - thank you so much Andy for sharing it and your lovely words with us.

January 30th, 2021 07:26

That Photograph.
dusk arising said:

Cor! I\'d love a photo of your meeting up again..... the facial expressions would tell so much.

January 30th, 2021 07:15



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