Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Oh Look!
Doggerel Dave said:

In England now , it\'s no longer \'Jolly hockey sticks!\', it\'s now \'Great croquet mallets!\', is it? I\'d never have guessed.

Dave

January 20th, 2021 05:40

Oh Look!
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.

January 20th, 2021 03:12

Oh Look!
dusk arising said:

May the weather be optimum for your activities sir.

(Where\'s the \'now write a poem\' section?).

January 20th, 2021 02:32

Oh Look!
Goldfinch60 said:

Oops. picture at 90 degrees


January 20th, 2021 02:26

Mirror Image Goldiku
ron parrish aka wordman said:

a different angle but the same person

January 19th, 2021 15:42

Mirror Image Goldiku
L. B. Mek said:

deep, so deep I dare not swim-in
in fear, of what realisations
I may glean...
tepidly, while wetting my feet
cautiously, I shall merely read
and simply witness
your wonderous way
with words...
a thought provoking write Andy, well executed

January 19th, 2021 06:04

Mirror Image Goldiku
Neville said:


these words have a golden patina all over them ... maybe you should patent the concept .............. Neville

January 19th, 2021 05:49

Mirror Image Goldiku
dusk arising said:

I don\'t care about what i see in the mirror, I\'ve always been backward.

January 19th, 2021 05:31

Mirror Image Goldiku
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
Also on TV. If a news reader has hair parting on the left, it appears as on the right when we look at the telly. If he (or she!) is bald, it makes no difference!

January 19th, 2021 03:01

In Reality.
Fay Slimm. said:

Love such as yours can never die Andy and your dream-experience with Joyce as told by these inspiring words proves that beyond doubt my dear friend.

January 19th, 2021 02:30

In Reality.
FredPeyer said:

Andy, this is such a wonderful tribute to your late wife. I know you two will be together again one day, together in love and happiness.

January 18th, 2021 21:01

In Reality.
dusk arising said:

Undeniably a strong spiritual connection runs through this.

January 18th, 2021 07:31

Snooker Limerick.
Doggerel Dave said:

Lucky to be able to get snooker still. Haven\'t been able to see it since the \'60\'s. None in Oz as far as I Know.
Sad I enjoyed it very much.
Limerick has nice snookerish flow to it, in my imagination.

Good for you, Dave

January 18th, 2021 07:14

In Reality.
L. B. Mek said:

\'She walked up onto another hill
And I watched as she turned
Waved, smiled and said,
“See you soon”,\'
how comforting these words may read to many who are dealing with a similar pain Andy, what a wonderful gift to share your positive outlook and offer a helping hand,
beautiful in sentiment and penned so immersive:
\'It’s beauty and wonder.
The green multicoloured swards
All around us
Dotted with the white dots
Of the sheep.
The plaintiff call of the curlew
Sounding so sad
But we were so happy,\'

January 18th, 2021 05:37

In Reality.
Neville said:


I have a feeling you describe more than just a dream .. your words are filled with love and with longing ... a two way thing if ever there was ... I also have no doubt, you write the truth ... write on my friend ...


January 18th, 2021 04:28

Snooker Limerick.
L. B. Mek said:

indeed a smooth operator, reminds me of those past great\'s stylish ways,
a good read Andy

January 18th, 2021 04:16

In Reality.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

January 18th, 2021 02:56

In Reality.
Evergreen said:

Beautiful flow. May she return to you, in reality.

January 18th, 2021 02:43

Snooker Limerick.
FredPeyer said:

Don\'t have a clue about snooker or pool or whatever.....but I do like your limerick!

January 17th, 2021 12:33

Snooker Limerick.
Suresh said:

I don\'t know the game is available here, if so will surely do, for your limerick begs me to.

January 17th, 2021 08:19

Snooker Limerick.
dusk arising said:

Yes Yan is very impressive. He will go far.

January 17th, 2021 06:58

Snooker Limerick.
Neville said:


sounds like you both have a plan mate ............ enjoy sir ...

January 17th, 2021 03:29

Snooker Limerick.
orchidee said:

Good write and clip Gold.
You made that bread?!

January 17th, 2021 03:11

Snooker Limerick.
Michael Edwards said:

I watched him too - the king of cool.

January 17th, 2021 02:59

Laughter Acrostic,
FredPeyer said:

You are right Andy, laughter is so important, especially the ability to laugh about yourself.

January 16th, 2021 14:05

Laughter Acrostic,
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good one.

January 16th, 2021 12:27

Laughter Acrostic,
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve a big sense of humour that can get me into trouble but rather that than no sense at all.

January 16th, 2021 11:01

Laughter Acrostic,
dusk arising said:

Laughter is a big part of my life.

January 16th, 2021 05:42

Laughter Acrostic,
orchidee said:

Good write Gold.
But - What laughter never left our lips since about, oohh, 1978 - the last proper comedy show on TV that I could trace. Well, a couple since then, but only a couple.

January 16th, 2021 03:12

Emotional Art.
Trenz Pruca said:

Another well written poem. Thank you for sharing.

January 15th, 2021 21:04



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