Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
What Is Life?
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy it to the full, Andy.
Redundant advice \'cos you already do.
Four perfectly balanced stanzas.
June 18th, 2021 02:00
Doggerel Dave said:
Enjoy it to the full, Andy.
Redundant advice \'cos you already do.
Four perfectly balanced stanzas.
June 18th, 2021 02:00
What Is Life?
orchidee said:
Good write Gold
Everyone was enjoying life in 1066 too, until I turned up. Doh!
June 18th, 2021 01:40
orchidee said:
Good write Gold
Everyone was enjoying life in 1066 too, until I turned up. Doh!
June 18th, 2021 01:40
Match Mask.
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo congrats! Niceky penned. Yiu might even be better than me now haha
June 17th, 2021 06:37
Saxon Crow said:
Ooo congrats! Niceky penned. Yiu might even be better than me now haha
June 17th, 2021 06:37
Match Mask.
L. B. Mek said:
really liked that message you imbued
behind the mask of your gripping poetry, Andy..
that yes, Nature wants us to compete
and yes that means, we wont always agree
but, through it all
beneath our masks, aren\'t we all
just People, striving
to be the best we can be?
So one is better, today
and the other dominated yesterday
after all, its just self-indulgent pride
to try and destroy things for everyone
just cause, things aren\'t going your way...
we are more
than our battles/matches
we are: those few, gifted
to experience the entirety of life
winning, losing and getting back-up
to try again, or simply accepting
and wisely, choosing
to move-on, to a weight class
where we\'re more likely to compete, evenly..
that\'s not a defeatist mentality, that\'s surviving
and choosing to denounce foolish pride
to insure we don\'t waste time
in futile pursuit of something, nature fated
wasn\'t for us, to begin with..
choosing our battles: is a quintessential
aspect, of life!
June 17th, 2021 06:10
L. B. Mek said:
really liked that message you imbued
behind the mask of your gripping poetry, Andy..
that yes, Nature wants us to compete
and yes that means, we wont always agree
but, through it all
beneath our masks, aren\'t we all
just People, striving
to be the best we can be?
So one is better, today
and the other dominated yesterday
after all, its just self-indulgent pride
to try and destroy things for everyone
just cause, things aren\'t going your way...
we are more
than our battles/matches
we are: those few, gifted
to experience the entirety of life
winning, losing and getting back-up
to try again, or simply accepting
and wisely, choosing
to move-on, to a weight class
where we\'re more likely to compete, evenly..
that\'s not a defeatist mentality, that\'s surviving
and choosing to denounce foolish pride
to insure we don\'t waste time
in futile pursuit of something, nature fated
wasn\'t for us, to begin with..
choosing our battles: is a quintessential
aspect, of life!
June 17th, 2021 06:10
Match Mask.
Doggerel Dave said:
Different roles for different occasions, Andy. Its been said of a certain gangster that he was a lovely family man, attended church regularly...
But you are an addict...no hope for you really....😊
June 17th, 2021 02:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Different roles for different occasions, Andy. Its been said of a certain gangster that he was a lovely family man, attended church regularly...
But you are an addict...no hope for you really....😊
June 17th, 2021 02:07
Match Mask.
dusk arising said:
I\'ve met parking wardens like you. I\'m sure they must be human before they put that uniform on, maybe somebody loves them, but suited up theyre hard as nails LOL
I dont blame you m8. After all muhammed ali was a different bloke in the ring too.
June 17th, 2021 01:50
dusk arising said:
I\'ve met parking wardens like you. I\'m sure they must be human before they put that uniform on, maybe somebody loves them, but suited up theyre hard as nails LOL
I dont blame you m8. After all muhammed ali was a different bloke in the ring too.
June 17th, 2021 01:50
Calmness Abounds
SureshG said:
Ain’t it true, the music that stops us in our track, seems like it’s played just for you.
June 16th, 2021 11:18
SureshG said:
Ain’t it true, the music that stops us in our track, seems like it’s played just for you.
June 16th, 2021 11:18
Calmness Abounds
dusk arising said:
It is indeed a very relaxing piece. And now he played it just for me too.
June 16th, 2021 01:13
dusk arising said:
It is indeed a very relaxing piece. And now he played it just for me too.
June 16th, 2021 01:13
All Through Music.
SureshG said:
A whiff of breeze
A sound of music
A sight of familiar
Any and many more can invoke those treasured memories, as you have so lovingly, though with a tinge of sadness at her loss, amplified here.
June 15th, 2021 11:45
SureshG said:
A whiff of breeze
A sound of music
A sight of familiar
Any and many more can invoke those treasured memories, as you have so lovingly, though with a tinge of sadness at her loss, amplified here.
June 15th, 2021 11:45
A Single Flower.
vellin23 said:
I will use this as a caption to my single flower post, if you will allow...
June 15th, 2021 10:04
vellin23 said:
I will use this as a caption to my single flower post, if you will allow...
June 15th, 2021 10:04
All Through Music.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully done, Andy.
The \"Don\'t Jump\" share was magnificent.
June 15th, 2021 09:39
Jerry Reynolds said:
Beautifully done, Andy.
The \"Don\'t Jump\" share was magnificent.
June 15th, 2021 09:39
All Through Music.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
One of my favorite musical pieces.
O Fortuna…
egestatem,
potestatem
dissolvit ut glaciem.
Thank you for sharing this musical piece and your unforgettable loving memories of Joyce.
Laura🌻
June 15th, 2021 07:29
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
One of my favorite musical pieces.
O Fortuna…
egestatem,
potestatem
dissolvit ut glaciem.
Thank you for sharing this musical piece and your unforgettable loving memories of Joyce.
Laura🌻
June 15th, 2021 07:29
All Through Music.
Jayasree said:
I really feel for you, and yes, music is so powerful and so connected to memories. Very touching poem.
June 15th, 2021 06:22
Jayasree said:
I really feel for you, and yes, music is so powerful and so connected to memories. Very touching poem.
June 15th, 2021 06:22
All Through Music.
dusk arising said:
Such stirring music. Joyce must have gained so much pleasure from being a part of this glorious sounding piece. I\'m sure you knew of that pleasure and the joy she gave to the listening audiences.
Such marvellous memories this piece must evoke.
There will come a time maybe when a chorus of angels will sing this piece for you both, hand in hand again.
May your god bless the both of you.
June 15th, 2021 06:06
dusk arising said:
Such stirring music. Joyce must have gained so much pleasure from being a part of this glorious sounding piece. I\'m sure you knew of that pleasure and the joy she gave to the listening audiences.
Such marvellous memories this piece must evoke.
There will come a time maybe when a chorus of angels will sing this piece for you both, hand in hand again.
May your god bless the both of you.
June 15th, 2021 06:06
All Through Music.
Saxon Crow said:
I remember you told me she had to do that lol.
She\'s waiting for you GF..... Hopefully with chocolate pudding xxx
June 15th, 2021 05:54
Saxon Crow said:
I remember you told me she had to do that lol.
She\'s waiting for you GF..... Hopefully with chocolate pudding xxx
June 15th, 2021 05:54
All Through Music.
L. B. Mek said:
of that transformative exchange
your poem depicts, Andy
between poetry\'s silent rhymes
and music chords
of bombastically triumphant symphony
where a Poet inks his truth
and we readers, willingly submit
to that Poetic escape, journey
of empathetic emotionality..
(such a wonderfully measured
melancholic flow
in your dedication, dear poet)
June 15th, 2021 05:32
L. B. Mek said:
of that transformative exchange
your poem depicts, Andy
between poetry\'s silent rhymes
and music chords
of bombastically triumphant symphony
where a Poet inks his truth
and we readers, willingly submit
to that Poetic escape, journey
of empathetic emotionality..
(such a wonderfully measured
melancholic flow
in your dedication, dear poet)
June 15th, 2021 05:32
All Through Music.
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem . I’m sorry for your sadness and loss ,
Music is so powerful
June 15th, 2021 01:39
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem . I’m sorry for your sadness and loss ,
Music is so powerful
June 15th, 2021 01:39
All Through Music.
Neville said:
such beautiful memories tinged with the ache of such great loss ..
keepsakes kept till once again united ..
a golden poem if ever there was ..
June 15th, 2021 01:37
Neville said:
such beautiful memories tinged with the ache of such great loss ..
keepsakes kept till once again united ..
a golden poem if ever there was ..
June 15th, 2021 01:37
Sanctuary of Peace.
SureshG said:
The doubters only need to visit your poem to know of it’s existence.
June 14th, 2021 12:17
SureshG said:
The doubters only need to visit your poem to know of it’s existence.
June 14th, 2021 12:17
Sanctuary of Peace.
dusk arising said:
The place you describe sounds wonderful, relaxing, reassuring.
June 14th, 2021 06:36
dusk arising said:
The place you describe sounds wonderful, relaxing, reassuring.
June 14th, 2021 06:36
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