Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Virtual Event.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 23rd, 2021 01:44

In My Dreams.
Dove said:

Glad you have beautiful memories!

April 22nd, 2021 20:32

In My Dreams.
Fay Slimm. said:

May those dreams of togetherness uplift all your daytimes dear Andy - - a wonderful place to have spent time with Joyce and with nature\'s rich gifts..

April 22nd, 2021 13:45

In My Dreams.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Great morning read, Gold. Thanks for sharing that.

April 22nd, 2021 08:00

In My Dreams.
dusk arising said:

I\'m very much a fan of \'Last of the summer wine\' and record all the episodes being re-run. I shall watch a couple directly after i finish my mps comments.

Take a trip by yourself hand in hand with her again to those dales Andy. You know she will enjoy the pleasure of you two being there again.

April 22nd, 2021 07:03

In My Dreams.
Amon said:

..... and you wish you never woke up ha haa


April 22nd, 2021 03:27

In My Dreams.
Neville said:


This is really quite beautiful Andy .. gave me a warm glow, so it did ..

... and one does not need a doctorate, or an imagination even, to know immediately where the inspiration comes from ......

Neville

April 22nd, 2021 03:13

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
L. B. Mek said:

you know what Andy
I learnt a similar lesson the other day
but I heard it from a Welsh: Athro
who I just happened to share a pint with
at some random pub, while toasting
our clear sky\'s of whimsical Spring..
such a light touch you have with your words of warmth, my friend

April 22nd, 2021 02:55

In My Dreams.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 22nd, 2021 01:30

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
Fay Slimm. said:

Appreciating life makes all the difference to health my friend - I love the first line and how you introduced a threesome who valued life despite all its challenges.

April 21st, 2021 15:30

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
Jerry Reynolds said:

Good morning read Gold. Sun just popped out street still wet, your poem in mind \"There lives weren\'t so bad.\"

April 21st, 2021 09:31

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
dusk arising said:

Nice words, we are indeed lucky to be middle class white retirees.

April 21st, 2021 08:56

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
John Prophet said:

Good hopeful message. Nice write as always. šŸ˜€

April 21st, 2021 07:12

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
Doggerel Dave said:

The kind of lockdown you have suffered over there must have taken a toll - but not so much that you have given up. The warmth and sociability shines through those stanzas, Andy.

April 21st, 2021 07:00

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
Neville said:


What a brilliant new take on an old classic .. and how very true for most of us ............. stay well mate ..

April 21st, 2021 02:50

Good Lives For Each Of Us.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

April 21st, 2021 01:57

New Light Ahead.
PrEm Ji said:

I find these lines beyond humour... the writer reminds : be optimistic...

April 20th, 2021 07:46

New Light Ahead.
L. B. Mek said:

lol, its the little things that make the big difference
a fun read, thanks Andy

April 20th, 2021 05:39

New Light Ahead.
dusk arising said:

Now for goodness sake get a shave!!!

I\'m lucky, got fed up with thinning hair on top and grey pushing the sides out - I shaved the lot off a few years back. Very cold in winter but i\'m all the more good looking for it (vanity rules).

April 20th, 2021 04:28

New Light Ahead.
Doggerel Dave said:

Wot - You still have hair???

April 20th, 2021 04:08

New Light Ahead.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. lol.

April 20th, 2021 01:48

New Light Ahead.
Michael Edwards said:

Jeanne cut mine and made a fairly good job of it so don\'t need to go for a while yet. Nice one Andy.

April 20th, 2021 01:39

Custer.
dusk arising said:

Blimey i remember my brother telling me that story when i was about 14. Thanks for retelling a good fun story here. It brought back a few memories of happier times with my now departed brother Rod.

Life is for the living.

Footnote. I recently bought a native american flute to mess about with. It\'s a very limited instrument and has a lovely haunting tone but only one octave. One day i shall organise my music room (too many other projects on the go at the moment - including being lazy) and make a recording or two to accompany my scribblings on MPS.

April 19th, 2021 06:00

Custer.
L. B. Mek said:

sorry Andy - but I can\'t find this funny (nor sadly, can I simply scroll-past and ignore)..
general Custer was a war criminal
who butchered helpless woman and children
going - against
what were originally - inhumane orders
to act-out
his zealotry of blinkered cruelty!

April 19th, 2021 05:38

Custer.
Doggerel Dave said:

Gold star comedy...... shaggy (yes?) dog story,....rhyme. What more could one (or two, or more) ask for?

April 19th, 2021 05:26

Dancing In Her Arms.
L. B. Mek said:

\'The slow beat of the song
Makes me want to dance,
Remembering the dancing
With my lover in my arms
As we sway together\'..
as we sway, you say - in the now of remembered serenity
and may it always, always remain this way
for you and your beloved: too..
wonderful use of repetition Andy

April 19th, 2021 04:18

Custer.
orchidee said:

Oh lol, good write Gold. Were we there too, us two?!

April 19th, 2021 01:50

Dancing In Her Arms.
dusk arising said:

To see truly good young singing talent on TV has a similar effect on me Andy. Dunno why, it cuts to memories of my young singing days and total lack of self confidence even though i was fronting a band. I guess theres something just cuts through the bullshit of everyday and connects with an inner longing.

April 18th, 2021 08:39

Dancing In Her Arms.
Caring dove said:

I’m glad you have nice memories šŸ™‚ everyone needs them . Difficult to miss someone you loved . A nice writing tho )

April 18th, 2021 03:01

Dancing In Her Arms.
orchidee said:

A poignant write Gold.
Music pulling at the heart-strings, recalling happy memories.
Happy, except if I sing along to the music. heehee. Hope I don\'t turn up to sing!

April 18th, 2021 01:38



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