Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Two Muses.
dusk arising said:
Envious, I don\'t have a muse. Callioipe maybe but not a name i knew until some time after i began to post on mps.
Someone to watch over me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbTm0foWVj0
December 14th, 2020 03:54
dusk arising said:
Envious, I don\'t have a muse. Callioipe maybe but not a name i knew until some time after i began to post on mps.
Someone to watch over me.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BbTm0foWVj0
December 14th, 2020 03:54
Two Muses.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. I\'ve not met Calli. Or did we meet her in person ages ago?
December 14th, 2020 02:47
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. I\'ve not met Calli. Or did we meet her in person ages ago?
December 14th, 2020 02:47
Dream a Little Dream.
Jerry Reynolds said:
Truly honest. Thanks for sharing.
December 13th, 2020 18:06
Jerry Reynolds said:
Truly honest. Thanks for sharing.
December 13th, 2020 18:06
Dream a Little Dream.
Christina8 said:
Your love will live on. Uplifting as it is somber.
December 13th, 2020 16:48
Christina8 said:
Your love will live on. Uplifting as it is somber.
December 13th, 2020 16:48
Dream a Little Dream.
John Prophet said:
Soulful write Andy. Life can be beautiful but also so very painful. May life just be beautiful for you this time forward. Merry Christmas
JP
December 13th, 2020 15:37
John Prophet said:
Soulful write Andy. Life can be beautiful but also so very painful. May life just be beautiful for you this time forward. Merry Christmas
JP
December 13th, 2020 15:37
Dream a Little Dream.
FredPeyer said:
Andy, love transcends the physical and I am sure she feels your love on that \'other side\'. You will never be apart!
December 13th, 2020 13:23
FredPeyer said:
Andy, love transcends the physical and I am sure she feels your love on that \'other side\'. You will never be apart!
December 13th, 2020 13:23
Dream a Little Dream.
Poetic Dan said:
You are a classic I wish to keep passing on and dreams can come true when you feel them with your body mind and soul!
To this a love you talk of is what should keep all searching until that find that home, we are never truly alone!
Thanks for sharing all that you ever have to allow me to stay as open as I can..
See you on the other side of that riverbank!
Much peace and respect
December 13th, 2020 07:57
Poetic Dan said:
You are a classic I wish to keep passing on and dreams can come true when you feel them with your body mind and soul!
To this a love you talk of is what should keep all searching until that find that home, we are never truly alone!
Thanks for sharing all that you ever have to allow me to stay as open as I can..
See you on the other side of that riverbank!
Much peace and respect
December 13th, 2020 07:57
The Moon\'s Call.
Poetic Dan said:
I do not wish for that next stage but when I comes I\'ll drift down your river my friend! I\'m sure of it!
Fantastic flow as every!
December 13th, 2020 07:24
Poetic Dan said:
I do not wish for that next stage but when I comes I\'ll drift down your river my friend! I\'m sure of it!
Fantastic flow as every!
December 13th, 2020 07:24
Dream a Little Dream.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Andy ~ Thanks for showcasing DEAN MARTIN ~ a Ham Actor but a much better singer (especially in Italian) than Sinatra ! Thanks for your Poem ~ Beautiful ! The ability to *Dream the presence of Departed Loved Ones* is a gret Blessing ~ AMEN. Please check our Poem on TRUE LOVE ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 05:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ Good Morning Uncle Andy ~ Thanks for showcasing DEAN MARTIN ~ a Ham Actor but a much better singer (especially in Italian) than Sinatra ! Thanks for your Poem ~ Beautiful ! The ability to *Dream the presence of Departed Loved Ones* is a gret Blessing ~ AMEN. Please check our Poem on TRUE LOVE ~ Thanks A & B !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
December 13th, 2020 05:12
The Moon\'s Call.
FredPeyer said:
And you WILL tour the Universe with your loved one, and who knows, we might even meet!
December 12th, 2020 14:23
FredPeyer said:
And you WILL tour the Universe with your loved one, and who knows, we might even meet!
December 12th, 2020 14:23
The Village Ghost.
RDS said:
Haha good to fing a poem with some high-spirited humour cheers Andy.
J
December 12th, 2020 14:11
RDS said:
Haha good to fing a poem with some high-spirited humour cheers Andy.
J
December 12th, 2020 14:11
The Moon\'s Call.
dusk arising said:
Great to hear Chet really bop. This is 1954 and he still had his teeth.I have become so accustomed to his tone without teeth that hearing young Chet again is a revelation. Such a fluid player. That sounds like an alto clarinet on there too. Much nicer playing than Eric Dolphy who seemed to choose it as his number one weapon. I\'m going to have to explore this LP.
Well what can i say about the moon in your poetry. The moon is a fine lady and despite many a dalliance with her, by me and many other suitors, she retains her virtue.
December 12th, 2020 05:23
dusk arising said:
Great to hear Chet really bop. This is 1954 and he still had his teeth.I have become so accustomed to his tone without teeth that hearing young Chet again is a revelation. Such a fluid player. That sounds like an alto clarinet on there too. Much nicer playing than Eric Dolphy who seemed to choose it as his number one weapon. I\'m going to have to explore this LP.
Well what can i say about the moon in your poetry. The moon is a fine lady and despite many a dalliance with her, by me and many other suitors, she retains her virtue.
December 12th, 2020 05:23
The Moon\'s Call.
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks, as usual for Chet and the Proms, Andy.
Dave
Ps: and the poem, I spose.
December 12th, 2020 04:55
Doggerel Dave said:
Thanks, as usual for Chet and the Proms, Andy.
Dave
Ps: and the poem, I spose.
December 12th, 2020 04:55
The Moon\'s Call.
orchidee said:
A fine write gold.
Now it\'s started me off singing - that first line. Bit old, dates from 1943. Oklahoma film (1955).
We wouldn\'t know the newer film (apx 2011) being very old!.
December 12th, 2020 03:14
orchidee said:
A fine write gold.
Now it\'s started me off singing - that first line. Bit old, dates from 1943. Oklahoma film (1955).
We wouldn\'t know the newer film (apx 2011) being very old!.
December 12th, 2020 03:14
The Village Ghost.
Doggerel Dave said:
After all that feedback, Andy, your true path as a poet is set for you now!!
Regards
Dave
December 12th, 2020 01:34
Doggerel Dave said:
After all that feedback, Andy, your true path as a poet is set for you now!!
Regards
Dave
December 12th, 2020 01:34
The Village Ghost.
MendedFences27 said:
\"The village ghost,\" gave me an invisible chuckle. Someone should have bought him (meaning you) a pint.
A most humorous way for me to end my night. -Phil A.
December 11th, 2020 22:30
MendedFences27 said:
\"The village ghost,\" gave me an invisible chuckle. Someone should have bought him (meaning you) a pint.
A most humorous way for me to end my night. -Phil A.
December 11th, 2020 22:30
The Village Ghost.
Jerry Reynolds said:
I enjoyed this it was a lot of fun to read. Happy Holidays. Stay Safe.
December 11th, 2020 14:33
Jerry Reynolds said:
I enjoyed this it was a lot of fun to read. Happy Holidays. Stay Safe.
December 11th, 2020 14:33
The Village Ghost.
Suresh said:
What a light hearted ghostly tale
To bring a smile, it won\'t fail
December 11th, 2020 12:43
Suresh said:
What a light hearted ghostly tale
To bring a smile, it won\'t fail
December 11th, 2020 12:43
The Village Ghost.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for the video nice to hear a bit of Blue Grass from two great Artists Pete & Jonny ! The old ones are always the BEST ! Love the ODE ~ Structure & Subject ! You always have Rhythm but with added Rhyme it flows beautifully in recitation ~ Loved the sting in the TALE !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & S mokey ! ! !
December 11th, 2020 07:11
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Thanks for the video nice to hear a bit of Blue Grass from two great Artists Pete & Jonny ! The old ones are always the BEST ! Love the ODE ~ Structure & Subject ! You always have Rhythm but with added Rhyme it flows beautifully in recitation ~ Loved the sting in the TALE !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela Brian & S mokey ! ! !
December 11th, 2020 07:11
The Village Ghost.
dusk arising said:
Ah... my friend in Bretforton. Worth trying a ghost ale in that pub.
Were you beside yourself in fear?
December 11th, 2020 05:44
dusk arising said:
Ah... my friend in Bretforton. Worth trying a ghost ale in that pub.
Were you beside yourself in fear?
December 11th, 2020 05:44
The Village Ghost.
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun read Andy, like your use of rhythm and tempo to set the jovial mood from the start,
but I guess the character in the write was only showing \'a side\' to everyone looking from the outside, sometimes we all need a quite moment to contemplate and gather ourselves,
a clever write my friend, just what I needed on a dull Friday morning
December 11th, 2020 04:56
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully fun read Andy, like your use of rhythm and tempo to set the jovial mood from the start,
but I guess the character in the write was only showing \'a side\' to everyone looking from the outside, sometimes we all need a quite moment to contemplate and gather ourselves,
a clever write my friend, just what I needed on a dull Friday morning
December 11th, 2020 04:56
The Village Ghost.
peto said:
Never saw you write in this style before Andy
Hope you do again
Super read
December 11th, 2020 04:01
peto said:
Never saw you write in this style before Andy
Hope you do again
Super read
December 11th, 2020 04:01
The Village Ghost.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I been on a couple of walks, not particularly deserted areas. I saw a person in front of me, then they turned a corner and vanished after a while. A person or a ghost? Or an angel?!
December 11th, 2020 03:11
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I been on a couple of walks, not particularly deserted areas. I saw a person in front of me, then they turned a corner and vanished after a while. A person or a ghost? Or an angel?!
December 11th, 2020 03:11
The Village Ghost.
Doggerel Dave said:
Hah hah hah - couldn\'t stop laughing, great stuff. Thanks a lot Andy - got me where it counts.
Dave
December 11th, 2020 03:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Hah hah hah - couldn\'t stop laughing, great stuff. Thanks a lot Andy - got me where it counts.
Dave
December 11th, 2020 03:06
The Village Ghost.
Alzbeta said:
Ah this is wonderful, I love it!
thank you Andy - nice cheerful start to a day :)
December 11th, 2020 02:50
Alzbeta said:
Ah this is wonderful, I love it!
thank you Andy - nice cheerful start to a day :)
December 11th, 2020 02:50
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