Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
It Is So Easy.
Neville said:
Here there n everywhere.. on ya face n in ya hair ... on da table n on da chair .. on the walls and on ya belly you can even see some on da tag da telly .................. hey Pesto .. nice n sir ..........
Neville
November 23rd, 2020 03:56
Neville said:
Here there n everywhere.. on ya face n in ya hair ... on da table n on da chair .. on the walls and on ya belly you can even see some on da tag da telly .................. hey Pesto .. nice n sir ..........
Neville
November 23rd, 2020 03:56
With Every Step.
L. B. Mek said:
\'My River had reached out to me
And said “Why are you ignoring me?”
So My River and I became one again.
Its beauty shone for me.
The smooth, clear green water
Giving me the clarity of thought.\'
\'\'Beauty is truth: truth beauty\'\' wrote Keats and your honest works are testament to the veracity of his words,
in the beauty of Joyce you so effortlessly imbue within each syllable of devoted dedication, you unveil the truth that burns immortal your cherished love,
a truly moving write Andy
November 23rd, 2020 03:43
L. B. Mek said:
\'My River had reached out to me
And said “Why are you ignoring me?”
So My River and I became one again.
Its beauty shone for me.
The smooth, clear green water
Giving me the clarity of thought.\'
\'\'Beauty is truth: truth beauty\'\' wrote Keats and your honest works are testament to the veracity of his words,
in the beauty of Joyce you so effortlessly imbue within each syllable of devoted dedication, you unveil the truth that burns immortal your cherished love,
a truly moving write Andy
November 23rd, 2020 03:43
It Is So Easy.
dusk arising said:
Until i read the third line i thought you were going to tell us how to make an egg.
I thought that stuff grew on trees alongside the spaghetti trees in a pasta orchard.
I enjoyed the silyness of this, gave me a good laugh at all the mess u create.... just how far away is Lidl from you?.... they have it in nice neat un-messy bags you know.
I used to be everso messy with home baking.... the bread machine was a boon.... and i\'ve just started buying those part baked french sticks from tesco... great with soup.... from a can.
November 23rd, 2020 03:30
dusk arising said:
Until i read the third line i thought you were going to tell us how to make an egg.
I thought that stuff grew on trees alongside the spaghetti trees in a pasta orchard.
I enjoyed the silyness of this, gave me a good laugh at all the mess u create.... just how far away is Lidl from you?.... they have it in nice neat un-messy bags you know.
I used to be everso messy with home baking.... the bread machine was a boon.... and i\'ve just started buying those part baked french sticks from tesco... great with soup.... from a can.
November 23rd, 2020 03:30
It Is So Easy.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
You go into some Staff Kitchens and it looks like someone has been throwing stuff around the room. Public areas may be immaculate, but staff areas can be horrendous. I mean the washing-up areas - nobody does it until we run out of cups or plates!
November 23rd, 2020 02:51
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
You go into some Staff Kitchens and it looks like someone has been throwing stuff around the room. Public areas may be immaculate, but staff areas can be horrendous. I mean the washing-up areas - nobody does it until we run out of cups or plates!
November 23rd, 2020 02:51
With Every Step.
dusk arising said:
The current is steady but the flow is deep, strong and perpetual. A motion which will not cease until journeys end and ..... just as with a rainbows end.... treasure awaits.
Never allow the temptation which would taint the treasure with impatient haste.
November 22nd, 2020 13:24
dusk arising said:
The current is steady but the flow is deep, strong and perpetual. A motion which will not cease until journeys end and ..... just as with a rainbows end.... treasure awaits.
Never allow the temptation which would taint the treasure with impatient haste.
November 22nd, 2020 13:24
With Every Step.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Sunday Uncle Andy - Thanks for an uplifting Video (love the clarinet) & Country Ode - It complemented the one we have just read from Uncle Steve. Intersted to note that Joyce was a clarinettist ! Loved the Poem !
It is mild Autumnal Day in Essex today so Brian & I will go a (slow) riverside walk to the Lake before Dinner - Brians home made Lamb Lassagne Pleased you feel Joyces presence with You on your walks. Memories are made of this ~ AMEN. We take SMOKEY with us on a long flexible lead - He likes to explore ! Walking a CAT is very different from walking a DOG !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 22nd, 2020 07:14
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Sunday Uncle Andy - Thanks for an uplifting Video (love the clarinet) & Country Ode - It complemented the one we have just read from Uncle Steve. Intersted to note that Joyce was a clarinettist ! Loved the Poem !
It is mild Autumnal Day in Essex today so Brian & I will go a (slow) riverside walk to the Lake before Dinner - Brians home made Lamb Lassagne Pleased you feel Joyces presence with You on your walks. Memories are made of this ~ AMEN. We take SMOKEY with us on a long flexible lead - He likes to explore ! Walking a CAT is very different from walking a DOG !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Angela Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 22nd, 2020 07:14
With Every Step.
orchidee said:
Yes, we may hurry on, and not \'see\' the River. I\'m not walking every day now. It\'s not \'walking season\' really now.
You will surely walk together for eternity along the River of Life. :)
November 22nd, 2020 03:06
orchidee said:
Yes, we may hurry on, and not \'see\' the River. I\'m not walking every day now. It\'s not \'walking season\' really now.
You will surely walk together for eternity along the River of Life. :)
November 22nd, 2020 03:06
This Moment.
Neville said:
if we dont make the most of them, they are gone .. maybe not wasted, but almost certainly not enjoyed as much as they might otherwise have been ...
yes my friend a universal truth told totally truly ..
November 22nd, 2020 02:13
Neville said:
if we dont make the most of them, they are gone .. maybe not wasted, but almost certainly not enjoyed as much as they might otherwise have been ...
yes my friend a universal truth told totally truly ..
November 22nd, 2020 02:13
This Moment.
FineB said:
An awesome and good write Andy.
We should live in the moment and take one day at a time.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:14
FineB said:
An awesome and good write Andy.
We should live in the moment and take one day at a time.
Keep writing ✍ and safe during lockdown.
FineB
November 21st, 2020 21:14
This Moment.
dusk arising said:
Some people call what you have described and \'mindfulness\'. As if mindfulness is something new and marvellous. Hmmm... what have we been missing..... in truth nothing... we were always mindful of life around us and how we fit into the scheme of things.... well, that\'s you and me anyhow LOL
November 21st, 2020 08:45
dusk arising said:
Some people call what you have described and \'mindfulness\'. As if mindfulness is something new and marvellous. Hmmm... what have we been missing..... in truth nothing... we were always mindful of life around us and how we fit into the scheme of things.... well, that\'s you and me anyhow LOL
November 21st, 2020 08:45
This Moment.
Michael Edwards said:
Great advice and a super concerto to go with it.
November 21st, 2020 06:06
Michael Edwards said:
Great advice and a super concerto to go with it.
November 21st, 2020 06:06
This Moment.
RDS said:
Is it just me or can everyone over 50 look back to much waiting, hesitancy and formality that inhibit the spirit of expression, limiting the highs and lows we experience. Thanks Goldfinch, for a gentle reminder to go for it now!
I really like this:
Stop waiting for it and make the most,
Make the most of the moment that you are in...
I try and avoid repetition but your use here reinforces the meaning. Neat, thanks for sharing.
November 21st, 2020 05:09
RDS said:
Is it just me or can everyone over 50 look back to much waiting, hesitancy and formality that inhibit the spirit of expression, limiting the highs and lows we experience. Thanks Goldfinch, for a gentle reminder to go for it now!
I really like this:
Stop waiting for it and make the most,
Make the most of the moment that you are in...
I try and avoid repetition but your use here reinforces the meaning. Neat, thanks for sharing.
November 21st, 2020 05:09
This Moment.
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential for peace of mind - live for the Now is the best way to live - thank you for sharing it dear friend.
November 21st, 2020 03:08
Fay Slimm. said:
Yes there is only this moment and the advice your write gives is essential for peace of mind - live for the Now is the best way to live - thank you for sharing it dear friend.
November 21st, 2020 03:08
This Moment.
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice that can\'t be bettered there Andy.
I hope there is, but maybe there isn\'t, a future.
So...you said it.
Take care Dave
PS: more great music I\'ve been introduced to...
November 21st, 2020 03:06
Doggerel Dave said:
Advice that can\'t be bettered there Andy.
I hope there is, but maybe there isn\'t, a future.
So...you said it.
Take care Dave
PS: more great music I\'ve been introduced to...
November 21st, 2020 03:06
This Moment.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna spend this moment in time, telling off people who keep saying \'This moment in time!\' See, they\'ve got me at it now. lol.
I mean, yes, say it sometimes, but basically no need for people to go mad with it! lol. There\'s another thing: \'Well, basically I.....\'
November 21st, 2020 02:46
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I\'m gonna spend this moment in time, telling off people who keep saying \'This moment in time!\' See, they\'ve got me at it now. lol.
I mean, yes, say it sometimes, but basically no need for people to go mad with it! lol. There\'s another thing: \'Well, basically I.....\'
November 21st, 2020 02:46
How Far.
Clara said:
Such a wonderful perspective... Sometimes it\'s like I live in the past while fearing for the future. The journey is sometimes too rough for this weary soul of mine lol. Great poem though and a solid reminder that life is too short!
November 20th, 2020 17:08
Clara said:
Such a wonderful perspective... Sometimes it\'s like I live in the past while fearing for the future. The journey is sometimes too rough for this weary soul of mine lol. Great poem though and a solid reminder that life is too short!
November 20th, 2020 17:08
How Far.
Michael Edwards said:
I rarely look back - too busy filling each day and planning for the future but when I do try I realise how far I\'ve come. And it\'s quite sobering.
November 20th, 2020 10:52
Michael Edwards said:
I rarely look back - too busy filling each day and planning for the future but when I do try I realise how far I\'ve come. And it\'s quite sobering.
November 20th, 2020 10:52
How Far.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD FRIDAY ~ Uncle Andy. Love the SEEKERS very eclectic CARNIVAL is one of my Faves ~ A Song for so so many Occasions !
Love the POEM ! Chronologically BRIAN & I are only at the threshold of our lives together. We do look back - BUT - Never in Anger !
Blessings & Peace to you & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
Please check MISTER VACCININE MAN - Thnaks !
November 20th, 2020 06:31
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD FRIDAY ~ Uncle Andy. Love the SEEKERS very eclectic CARNIVAL is one of my Faves ~ A Song for so so many Occasions !
Love the POEM ! Chronologically BRIAN & I are only at the threshold of our lives together. We do look back - BUT - Never in Anger !
Blessings & Peace to you & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
Please check MISTER VACCININE MAN - Thnaks !
November 20th, 2020 06:31
How Far.
Fay Slimm. said:
Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only look back to see how far our journey has taken us -- good and wise thoughts.
November 20th, 2020 05:56
Fay Slimm. said:
Such sound advice dear Andy -- those last two lines say it all - - only look back to see how far our journey has taken us -- good and wise thoughts.
November 20th, 2020 05:56
How Far.
dusk arising said:
Though looking back is inevitable, at our age having something, or the mindset, to look forward is i feel so very important.
Having made it so far we are so lucky. Looking back, if we must, there is a trail of those who didn\'t make it this far. I know you feel that all too readily in your heart everyday. You are quite remarkable. I think of myself as being a very positive person but i don\'t see myself as in the same league as yourself.
November 20th, 2020 05:48
dusk arising said:
Though looking back is inevitable, at our age having something, or the mindset, to look forward is i feel so very important.
Having made it so far we are so lucky. Looking back, if we must, there is a trail of those who didn\'t make it this far. I know you feel that all too readily in your heart everyday. You are quite remarkable. I think of myself as being a very positive person but i don\'t see myself as in the same league as yourself.
November 20th, 2020 05:48
How Far.
L. B. Mek said:
\'reflection is indeed a tool of evolution\', we must recognise our mistakes to have a chance at not repeating them,
another insightful nugget of wisdom Andy
November 20th, 2020 04:55
L. B. Mek said:
\'reflection is indeed a tool of evolution\', we must recognise our mistakes to have a chance at not repeating them,
another insightful nugget of wisdom Andy
November 20th, 2020 04:55
How Far.
orchidee said:
Yes, we know it well, us too. We got plenty distance to look back to. 1066, the dinosaurs even!
My only regret was in 1066 when I.... you know it!
November 20th, 2020 02:58
orchidee said:
Yes, we know it well, us too. We got plenty distance to look back to. 1066, the dinosaurs even!
My only regret was in 1066 when I.... you know it!
November 20th, 2020 02:58
Into Another Place.
Michael Edwards said:
i am also in another world when i read a good novel.
November 19th, 2020 14:53
Michael Edwards said:
i am also in another world when i read a good novel.
November 19th, 2020 14:53
Into Another Place.
Clara said:
Oh this is wonderful and so very true. Books are one of the worlds finest creations... I\'m never without a good book. Always great to stumble upon another book lover like me! Great poem too!
November 19th, 2020 14:29
Clara said:
Oh this is wonderful and so very true. Books are one of the worlds finest creations... I\'m never without a good book. Always great to stumble upon another book lover like me! Great poem too!
November 19th, 2020 14:29
Into Another Place.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy - Love JLT a very cool & delicate Piano ! I have a very good imagination (ask Brian !) and I can easily get lost in a gripping novel. I oten stay up reading til the END !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 19th, 2020 09:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Thanks for sharing Uncle Andy - Love JLT a very cool & delicate Piano ! I have a very good imagination (ask Brian !) and I can easily get lost in a gripping novel. I oten stay up reading til the END !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian & Smokey ! ! !
November 19th, 2020 09:23
Into Another Place.
dusk arising said:
Ah the pleasure of being lost in a good book. Pleasures i reserve for holidays when i can carelessly relax in comfortable frame of mind.
November 19th, 2020 07:34
dusk arising said:
Ah the pleasure of being lost in a good book. Pleasures i reserve for holidays when i can carelessly relax in comfortable frame of mind.
November 19th, 2020 07:34
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