Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
I Walk Onto the Lawn.
L. B. Mek said:
I think you gave us all a glimpse at the true attraction of croquet, steeped in all that nature I can only imagine at the serenity it must bring
August 31st, 2020 03:24
L. B. Mek said:
I think you gave us all a glimpse at the true attraction of croquet, steeped in all that nature I can only imagine at the serenity it must bring
August 31st, 2020 03:24
I Walk Onto the Lawn.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Recently though - I stepped outside, then dashed back in, with gloomy black thunder-clouds.
What was the weather in 1066?
August 31st, 2020 02:10
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
Recently though - I stepped outside, then dashed back in, with gloomy black thunder-clouds.
What was the weather in 1066?
August 31st, 2020 02:10
I Walk Onto the Lawn.
dusk arising said:
Long may you continue to bash your balls in such wonderful surroundings.
August 31st, 2020 01:54
dusk arising said:
Long may you continue to bash your balls in such wonderful surroundings.
August 31st, 2020 01:54
I Walk Onto the Lawn.
Neville said:
if there is a single person out there... and I do mean anywhere who can read these words without a smile appearing on their face before they get to the end .. then they must be from another planet ....
August 31st, 2020 01:52
Neville said:
if there is a single person out there... and I do mean anywhere who can read these words without a smile appearing on their face before they get to the end .. then they must be from another planet ....
August 31st, 2020 01:52
Hiss Undone.
dusk arising said:
We all have strange dreams now and again. Our friend Unsub has a panchant for writing poems and songs which can be quite disturbing.
I\'ll have a go one day..... let me see, its sunday isn\'t it.
August 30th, 2020 09:25
dusk arising said:
We all have strange dreams now and again. Our friend Unsub has a panchant for writing poems and songs which can be quite disturbing.
I\'ll have a go one day..... let me see, its sunday isn\'t it.
August 30th, 2020 09:25
Hiss Undone.
Fay Slimm. said:
A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away - thanking you Andy for this positive verse.
August 30th, 2020 05:28
Fay Slimm. said:
A caring assurance that joy lasts forever when demons are chased away - thanking you Andy for this positive verse.
August 30th, 2020 05:28
Hiss Undone.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - God Sunday - Uncle Andy ! Thanks for the VIDEO! I love SKELETONS and have one called FRED (who wears a Top Hat & a Bow Tie) in my OFFICE ! Understanding the Human Skeleton & All its Joints & how they function is a very impotant aspect of my JOB as a PHYSIO! Some of My Clients (recovering from fractures etc) - who have never seen or handled a full size Human Skeleton - are quite surprized at both its complexity & simplicity ! Sometimes if Im going out to give a talk I strap FRED in the Front Passenger Seat! He causes quite a stir if I pull in for PETROL!
We enjoyed UNSUBS POEM & your response. Thanks for re-sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡💙🤎
August 30th, 2020 02:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - God Sunday - Uncle Andy ! Thanks for the VIDEO! I love SKELETONS and have one called FRED (who wears a Top Hat & a Bow Tie) in my OFFICE ! Understanding the Human Skeleton & All its Joints & how they function is a very impotant aspect of my JOB as a PHYSIO! Some of My Clients (recovering from fractures etc) - who have never seen or handled a full size Human Skeleton - are quite surprized at both its complexity & simplicity ! Sometimes if Im going out to give a talk I strap FRED in the Front Passenger Seat! He causes quite a stir if I pull in for PETROL!
We enjoyed UNSUBS POEM & your response. Thanks for re-sharing.
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey 🧡💙🤎
August 30th, 2020 02:12
Mine to Enjoy.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Your positive outlook on life is infectious! You are one of my go to poets on MPS whose work I always refer to when I feel sad; when I question the negatives in my life; when the ‘why me’ syndrome rears it’s ugly head.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 30th, 2020 00:31
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
Your positive outlook on life is infectious! You are one of my go to poets on MPS whose work I always refer to when I feel sad; when I question the negatives in my life; when the ‘why me’ syndrome rears it’s ugly head.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Laura🌻
August 30th, 2020 00:31
Mine to Enjoy.
ZIGGY said:
What a wonderful way to look at life with gratitude and joy thanks for the post x
August 29th, 2020 21:02
ZIGGY said:
What a wonderful way to look at life with gratitude and joy thanks for the post x
August 29th, 2020 21:02
Mine to Enjoy.
Fox said:
So sweet.
I especially liked \"Some have been sad/ But as I look back/ Most have been wonderful.\"
A small reminder that we can\'t have the good without the bad; and that even then, the good moments make it all worth it. Thank you for sharing!
August 29th, 2020 13:50
Fox said:
So sweet.
I especially liked \"Some have been sad/ But as I look back/ Most have been wonderful.\"
A small reminder that we can\'t have the good without the bad; and that even then, the good moments make it all worth it. Thank you for sharing!
August 29th, 2020 13:50
Mine to Enjoy.
dusk arising said:
I\'m thinking that the comment i made to your piece yesterday is just as appropriate today.
There\'s a lot to be learned by many of your readers from your expressed outlook upon life and the beautiful world we walk in.
You are becoming the bard of life on mps.
August 29th, 2020 07:35
dusk arising said:
I\'m thinking that the comment i made to your piece yesterday is just as appropriate today.
There\'s a lot to be learned by many of your readers from your expressed outlook upon life and the beautiful world we walk in.
You are becoming the bard of life on mps.
August 29th, 2020 07:35
Mine to Enjoy.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Sabbath Uncle Andy ~ Gracias for a Cool Jazz Number to kick start Saturday - Very Cool Vocal & Sax - Brains cookin* a Full English with BP ! Saturday Treat & it smells wonderful ! Off to Cowes IOW tomorrow (Sailing ALBACORS) the Weather in Cowes looks *SET FAIR* Mon to Thurs - Home on Friday a Brian is back FT on Monday 7 September - Hes 37 on Tues (8th !). So Uncle Andy CARPE DIEM & ENJOY !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 29th, 2020 01:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Sabbath Uncle Andy ~ Gracias for a Cool Jazz Number to kick start Saturday - Very Cool Vocal & Sax - Brains cookin* a Full English with BP ! Saturday Treat & it smells wonderful ! Off to Cowes IOW tomorrow (Sailing ALBACORS) the Weather in Cowes looks *SET FAIR* Mon to Thurs - Home on Friday a Brian is back FT on Monday 7 September - Hes 37 on Tues (8th !). So Uncle Andy CARPE DIEM & ENJOY !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 29th, 2020 01:51
Mine to Enjoy.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Sabbath Uncle Andy ~ Gracias for a Cool Jazz Number to kick start Saturday - Very Cool Vocal & Sax - Brains cookin* a Full English with BP ! Saturday Treat & it smells wonderful ! Off to Cowes IOW tomorrow (Sailing ALBACORS) the Weather in Cowes looks *SET FAIR* Mon to Thurs - Home on Friday a Brian is back FT on Monday 7 September - Hes 37 on Tues (8th !). So Uncle Andy CARPE DIEM & ENJOY !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 29th, 2020 01:51
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE ~ Good Sabbath Uncle Andy ~ Gracias for a Cool Jazz Number to kick start Saturday - Very Cool Vocal & Sax - Brains cookin* a Full English with BP ! Saturday Treat & it smells wonderful ! Off to Cowes IOW tomorrow (Sailing ALBACORS) the Weather in Cowes looks *SET FAIR* Mon to Thurs - Home on Friday a Brian is back FT on Monday 7 September - Hes 37 on Tues (8th !). So Uncle Andy CARPE DIEM & ENJOY !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love Angela - Brian - Smokey ! ! !
August 29th, 2020 01:51
Twice Taken.
Fay Slimm. said:
A read of such moving love will every lift hearts who themselves wish to find it - and also those who understand that love once found can never die.......... a beautiful number from Elvis too - thank you for sharing with us here Andy.
August 28th, 2020 07:03
Fay Slimm. said:
A read of such moving love will every lift hearts who themselves wish to find it - and also those who understand that love once found can never die.......... a beautiful number from Elvis too - thank you for sharing with us here Andy.
August 28th, 2020 07:03
Twice Taken.
dusk arising said:
You are learning about love in al it\'s reality as you experience it and live it. Learning in a way which is only open to you and we your readers cannot take that learning journey with you. But we are learning from you in ways unexpected, unexperienced that love is perhaps the strongest force known - or partially known - to mankind.
Your path is yours alone. Your goal we know of. And I think collectively we will you on with strength and goodwill.
August 28th, 2020 05:49
dusk arising said:
You are learning about love in al it\'s reality as you experience it and live it. Learning in a way which is only open to you and we your readers cannot take that learning journey with you. But we are learning from you in ways unexpected, unexperienced that love is perhaps the strongest force known - or partially known - to mankind.
Your path is yours alone. Your goal we know of. And I think collectively we will you on with strength and goodwill.
August 28th, 2020 05:49
Twice Taken.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Good FRIDAY Uncle Andy ~ This oft recurring Precious theme assures us Younger Members of four important things in LOVE & LIFE !
1. To truly love *The LOVE of our LIFE*
2. For that Love to continue through adversity
3. Death doth Hide but not Divide
4. Assurance of Reunion in the Spirit Dimension
Comfort one-another with these Words ~ AMEN
DV Angela & I expect to have another 50 years together (to 2070) and Children & Grandchildren (like You & Joyce) but Your Poem(s) assures US that Our Love too is ERTERNAL.
Thanks for showcasing ELVIS who transformed Ballad Singing with HIS note perfect 2.5 octave range and a legacy of 850 perfect recordings ! Oft imitated but NEVER bettered ! This is one of our FAVES ~ PERFECTION & a fitting accolade to your Live & Love & Separation with Your Beloved JOYCE ~ An inspiration ~ Absent in the Body ~ but ever present in your Heart ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
August 28th, 2020 05:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN here ~ Good FRIDAY Uncle Andy ~ This oft recurring Precious theme assures us Younger Members of four important things in LOVE & LIFE !
1. To truly love *The LOVE of our LIFE*
2. For that Love to continue through adversity
3. Death doth Hide but not Divide
4. Assurance of Reunion in the Spirit Dimension
Comfort one-another with these Words ~ AMEN
DV Angela & I expect to have another 50 years together (to 2070) and Children & Grandchildren (like You & Joyce) but Your Poem(s) assures US that Our Love too is ERTERNAL.
Thanks for showcasing ELVIS who transformed Ballad Singing with HIS note perfect 2.5 octave range and a legacy of 850 perfect recordings ! Oft imitated but NEVER bettered ! This is one of our FAVES ~ PERFECTION & a fitting accolade to your Live & Love & Separation with Your Beloved JOYCE ~ An inspiration ~ Absent in the Body ~ but ever present in your Heart ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Love to You & Yours
Angela & Brian & Smokey 💛💛💛💛💛💛💛
August 28th, 2020 05:27
Twice Taken.
L. B. Mek said:
moving, in its raw intimacy and bravery
how lucky you are, to have your Joyce waiting - giving, you the perfect excuse to squeeze every last ounce out of life: imagining her delight, when you share your new stories whilst traversing that afterlife, once more and eternally: side by side
August 28th, 2020 04:29
L. B. Mek said:
moving, in its raw intimacy and bravery
how lucky you are, to have your Joyce waiting - giving, you the perfect excuse to squeeze every last ounce out of life: imagining her delight, when you share your new stories whilst traversing that afterlife, once more and eternally: side by side
August 28th, 2020 04:29
Twice Taken.
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold.
Yet in one sense - life is very long, centuries long. Why, we was both there in 1066. Just call us (you and I) Methuselah!
There\'s eternity to spend with my singing - arrggghhh! I will say then: \'I\'m better now!\' lol.
August 28th, 2020 01:42
orchidee said:
A sensitive write Gold.
Yet in one sense - life is very long, centuries long. Why, we was both there in 1066. Just call us (you and I) Methuselah!
There\'s eternity to spend with my singing - arrggghhh! I will say then: \'I\'m better now!\' lol.
August 28th, 2020 01:42
Behind Their Peers!
dusk arising said:
Americanisation of english language useage and unless it\'s slang i hate it. But it\'s the younger generation who are more accepting of it than us old gits and if we\'re hones, it\'s their world now, we have to stay in our \'has beens\' enclosure of \'out of touch\'
My granddaughters are well advanced of their age group because their mum has taken on their home education and i\'m thrilled to see the results. I shall be meeting them again today for the first time in about 5 months. I\'m taking some childish poems I have written which i hope to hear six year old Ruby read aloud.
August 27th, 2020 04:14
dusk arising said:
Americanisation of english language useage and unless it\'s slang i hate it. But it\'s the younger generation who are more accepting of it than us old gits and if we\'re hones, it\'s their world now, we have to stay in our \'has beens\' enclosure of \'out of touch\'
My granddaughters are well advanced of their age group because their mum has taken on their home education and i\'m thrilled to see the results. I shall be meeting them again today for the first time in about 5 months. I\'m taking some childish poems I have written which i hope to hear six year old Ruby read aloud.
August 27th, 2020 04:14
Behind Their Peers!
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Michael, you make a good point, support at home can make a difference due to wealth.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 04:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Michael, you make a good point, support at home can make a difference due to wealth.
Andy
August 27th, 2020 04:13
Behind Their Peers!
Michael Edwards said:
I fully agree with you. Just a thought though: sadly support at home is often the issue which can make difference - and are those parents with a higher level of education (those generally less poor) better able to provide it?
August 27th, 2020 03:58
Michael Edwards said:
I fully agree with you. Just a thought though: sadly support at home is often the issue which can make difference - and are those parents with a higher level of education (those generally less poor) better able to provide it?
August 27th, 2020 03:58
Behind Their Peers!
Neville said:
Now ya can\'t say much fairer than that can ya folks ...
unfortunately the educational arena is still just one of many areas where money has a greater influence than innate academic ability ... oh\' and rarely have I ever seen the B word used more appropriately ....
Neville
August 27th, 2020 02:44
Neville said:
Now ya can\'t say much fairer than that can ya folks ...
unfortunately the educational arena is still just one of many areas where money has a greater influence than innate academic ability ... oh\' and rarely have I ever seen the B word used more appropriately ....
Neville
August 27th, 2020 02:44
Behind Their Peers!
L. B. Mek said:
\'Are not children due equal education?\' what a pertinent question in any era, but this be an age old lament my friend: \'They are weeping in the playtime of the others
In the country of the free.\' Elizabeth Browning
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4257
August 27th, 2020 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
\'Are not children due equal education?\' what a pertinent question in any era, but this be an age old lament my friend: \'They are weeping in the playtime of the others
In the country of the free.\' Elizabeth Browning
https://mypoeticside.com/show-classic-poem-4257
August 27th, 2020 02:39
Behind Their Peers!
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I was never educated in archery in 1066. Things could have turned out differently if I had been!
August 27th, 2020 01:40
orchidee said:
Good write Gold.
I was never educated in archery in 1066. Things could have turned out differently if I had been!
August 27th, 2020 01:40
Stop Washing.
Michael Edwards said:
Better still don\'t start washing in the first place. Although come to think of it I\'m not sure where the first place is - could it be the maternity ward?
August 26th, 2020 04:33
Michael Edwards said:
Better still don\'t start washing in the first place. Although come to think of it I\'m not sure where the first place is - could it be the maternity ward?
August 26th, 2020 04:33
Stop Washing.
dusk arising said:
Ahhh one of my all time favs \'So what\' by Miles davis even though i used to hate the coltrane solo (on a different planet). For me this is the only tempo for \'so what\' yet miles always played it at double or quadruple time live. Very odd.
Recently i learned a song to sing/play on my little ukelele which has an interesting first verse on the subject of time.. \"Hello friend,.. where you been so long,.. time goes by,... it all seems to drift away,... just like a shadow,.. at the end of the day\". An impressive line.
Re: plug holes and washing.... i\'ve saved the shower water and i\'ll think about washing the car with it (only think about it mind u).... then i was going to water the plants wit it but i\'m sure i could get more use out of it before it just disappears...... this staying young is hard work.
August 26th, 2020 03:46
dusk arising said:
Ahhh one of my all time favs \'So what\' by Miles davis even though i used to hate the coltrane solo (on a different planet). For me this is the only tempo for \'so what\' yet miles always played it at double or quadruple time live. Very odd.
Recently i learned a song to sing/play on my little ukelele which has an interesting first verse on the subject of time.. \"Hello friend,.. where you been so long,.. time goes by,... it all seems to drift away,... just like a shadow,.. at the end of the day\". An impressive line.
Re: plug holes and washing.... i\'ve saved the shower water and i\'ll think about washing the car with it (only think about it mind u).... then i was going to water the plants wit it but i\'m sure i could get more use out of it before it just disappears...... this staying young is hard work.
August 26th, 2020 03:46
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