Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Hitchhikers Guide.
Suresh said:
Now we know one is telling the truth and the other......
What a punchline 🤗
You can\'t but smile at your post
June 17th, 2019 11:20
Suresh said:
Now we know one is telling the truth and the other......
What a punchline 🤗
You can\'t but smile at your post
June 17th, 2019 11:20
Lady Lost.
Suresh said:
To experience a loved one suffering is tormenting indeed, but what is even worse is our helplessness-
Your strength is truly commendable
June 17th, 2019 11:13
Suresh said:
To experience a loved one suffering is tormenting indeed, but what is even worse is our helplessness-
Your strength is truly commendable
June 17th, 2019 11:13
Hitchhikers Guide.
dusk arising said:
Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are inviting into your car.
Apart from that, when i tried hitching a lift in my younger days i was mostly out of luck... i\'m big guy and probably looked like trouble.
Loved your piece today. I didn\'t see the punchline coming and it did raise a laugh. Thank you.
June 17th, 2019 05:35
dusk arising said:
Hmmm hitch hikers.... i\'m reluctant. You just dont know what you are inviting into your car.
Apart from that, when i tried hitching a lift in my younger days i was mostly out of luck... i\'m big guy and probably looked like trouble.
Loved your piece today. I didn\'t see the punchline coming and it did raise a laugh. Thank you.
June 17th, 2019 05:35
Hitchhikers Guide.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for scaring UNCLE ANDY : Angela here (10pm) after a hard day in the CLINIC ! Love FILM THEME MUSIC ! First time I saw PSYCHO I wouldn\'t shower (n my own !) for weeks ! Love your very elegant verse. HITCH HIKING is a dying profession ! Iam a RED BELT KARATE so when I HITCH HIKED I knew I could take care iof myself. Peple still hitch in NZ and a Young Nubile Senorita like me has no problem in getting a LIFT ! PSYCHPATHS are interesting people and they now provise their own CYCLE PATHS for them ! We dont get many in NZ : AMEN
Thanks for an interesting BEDTIME read & record !
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:16
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks for scaring UNCLE ANDY : Angela here (10pm) after a hard day in the CLINIC ! Love FILM THEME MUSIC ! First time I saw PSYCHO I wouldn\'t shower (n my own !) for weeks ! Love your very elegant verse. HITCH HIKING is a dying profession ! Iam a RED BELT KARATE so when I HITCH HIKED I knew I could take care iof myself. Peple still hitch in NZ and a Young Nubile Senorita like me has no problem in getting a LIFT ! PSYCHPATHS are interesting people and they now provise their own CYCLE PATHS for them ! We dont get many in NZ : AMEN
Thanks for an interesting BEDTIME read & record !
Blessings & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Yours as always ANGELA : 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check POSITIVITY ~ Thanks A !
June 17th, 2019 04:16
Hitchhikers Guide.
Neville said:
Ha ha.. I thought this was going to be a take on Douglas Adams novels... I certainly was not expecting the punchline... I expect the chances would be pretty slim.. but who knows... the most successful serial killers, are those who have not been caught........ we could be surrounded by them..... what a bloomin thought........ N
June 17th, 2019 03:25
Neville said:
Ha ha.. I thought this was going to be a take on Douglas Adams novels... I certainly was not expecting the punchline... I expect the chances would be pretty slim.. but who knows... the most successful serial killers, are those who have not been caught........ we could be surrounded by them..... what a bloomin thought........ N
June 17th, 2019 03:25
Hitchhikers Guide.
Michael Edwards said:
Now this a real grin maker - thanks for starting the day off so well Andy.
June 17th, 2019 02:23
Michael Edwards said:
Now this a real grin maker - thanks for starting the day off so well Andy.
June 17th, 2019 02:23
Hitchhikers Guide.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write Gold. An old joke now? I was a serial killer - I poisoned people\'s cornflakes - or porridge, or bacon and eggs even!
June 17th, 2019 01:58
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write Gold. An old joke now? I was a serial killer - I poisoned people\'s cornflakes - or porridge, or bacon and eggs even!
June 17th, 2019 01:58
Lady Lost.
orchidee said:
I ain\'t seen any \'fireworks\' at many churches - maybe they are asleep?! But better, that they have true understanding of situations.
June 16th, 2019 08:11
orchidee said:
I ain\'t seen any \'fireworks\' at many churches - maybe they are asleep?! But better, that they have true understanding of situations.
June 16th, 2019 08:11
Lady Lost.
Neville said:
I do so hope you are wrong.. but suspect you know far better than me ... I guess those who will be doing the talk are well intentioned but are not adequately equipped with first hand experience... A poem filled to the point of overflowing with both love and understandable frustrations.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 03:56
Neville said:
I do so hope you are wrong.. but suspect you know far better than me ... I guess those who will be doing the talk are well intentioned but are not adequately equipped with first hand experience... A poem filled to the point of overflowing with both love and understandable frustrations.... Neville
June 16th, 2019 03:56
Lady Lost.
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A beautiful, loving write about the love of your life! You are an amazing man!
A great and truthful author’s comment!
My love to Joyce and to you!❤️
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 02:48
Laura🌻 said:
Andy,
A beautiful, loving write about the love of your life! You are an amazing man!
A great and truthful author’s comment!
My love to Joyce and to you!❤️
~Laura~
June 16th, 2019 02:48
Lady Lost.
Michael Edwards said:
Only a person who has seen it at first hand could write such touching words.
June 16th, 2019 02:06
Michael Edwards said:
Only a person who has seen it at first hand could write such touching words.
June 16th, 2019 02:06
Lady Lost.
dusk arising said:
There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance around the periphery of the subject, like they do with everything, making polite \'kindness\' noises for the detail deaf flock (of sheep). I hope you will not be annoyed by them and i hope im wrong in my prejudice in this instance.
June 16th, 2019 01:45
dusk arising said:
There you go Goldfinch. You know already that the church will just dance around the periphery of the subject, like they do with everything, making polite \'kindness\' noises for the detail deaf flock (of sheep). I hope you will not be annoyed by them and i hope im wrong in my prejudice in this instance.
June 16th, 2019 01:45
Imagination Managing.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ The frantic trumpet seems to me to be a good complement to the frantic toungue twisting poem ~ great verbal & aural sensation !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check ANGELAS PAPA ~ Thanks B !
June 15th, 2019 18:43
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ The frantic trumpet seems to me to be a good complement to the frantic toungue twisting poem ~ great verbal & aural sensation !
Blessings & Peace to You & Joyce
Yours as always BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
Please check ANGELAS PAPA ~ Thanks B !
June 15th, 2019 18:43
Imagination Managing.
Suresh said:
It\'s tongue twisting teasers like this that my tongue twistingly twanged - now what was I trying to say😋
June 15th, 2019 12:26
Suresh said:
It\'s tongue twisting teasers like this that my tongue twistingly twanged - now what was I trying to say😋
June 15th, 2019 12:26
Imagination Managing.
dusk arising said:
Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of both double tonguing and circular breathing.
Clever and entertaining wordplaying from you today.
June 15th, 2019 10:51
dusk arising said:
Amazing virtuoso piece and soooo long. Truly proving he is a master of both double tonguing and circular breathing.
Clever and entertaining wordplaying from you today.
June 15th, 2019 10:51
Imagination Managing.
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A wonderful imaginative poem that certainly got me thinking.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:50
FineB said:
Hello Goldfinch60,
A wonderful imaginative poem that certainly got me thinking.
Keep writing
FineB
June 15th, 2019 10:50
Imagination Managing.
Neville said:
ouch... in trying to read this out loud, you just shredded my tongue... or was it me....
a really enjoyed tongue teazer GF60...
June 15th, 2019 04:21
Neville said:
ouch... in trying to read this out loud, you just shredded my tongue... or was it me....
a really enjoyed tongue teazer GF60...
June 15th, 2019 04:21
Imagination Managing.
Michael Edwards said:
Imagine the mendacity of mendicant managers managing menageries begging for monies whilst blowing their horn. Gave me a big grin this fine morning.
June 15th, 2019 02:54
Michael Edwards said:
Imagine the mendacity of mendicant managers managing menageries begging for monies whilst blowing their horn. Gave me a big grin this fine morning.
June 15th, 2019 02:54
Imagination Managing.
orchidee said:
Oh lol a fine write Gold, and a fine write it is, and.... now I\'m waffling.
I dunno about menagerie, but they would have gladly chucked our last manageress out the first floor window, and wished it was on the 20th floor somewhere!
June 15th, 2019 01:55
orchidee said:
Oh lol a fine write Gold, and a fine write it is, and.... now I\'m waffling.
I dunno about menagerie, but they would have gladly chucked our last manageress out the first floor window, and wished it was on the 20th floor somewhere!
June 15th, 2019 01:55
That Wonderful Place.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
God bless you Andy I\'m glad you get our own respite and peace
Have a peaceful weekend
June 14th, 2019 12:41
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
God bless you Andy I\'m glad you get our own respite and peace
Have a peaceful weekend
June 14th, 2019 12:41
That Wonderful Place.
dusk arising said:
This is such an uplifting read coming from you in your circumstance. You know i\'m always positive about \'life goes on\' and here you are living it. Well done - acorns/oak trees.
June 14th, 2019 10:49
dusk arising said:
This is such an uplifting read coming from you in your circumstance. You know i\'m always positive about \'life goes on\' and here you are living it. Well done - acorns/oak trees.
June 14th, 2019 10:49
That Wonderful Place.
Suresh said:
yes, a moment for oneself, helps to hold everything together
Thnx for sharing
June 14th, 2019 10:33
Suresh said:
yes, a moment for oneself, helps to hold everything together
Thnx for sharing
June 14th, 2019 10:33
That Wonderful Place.
Neville said:
I am so glad you feel able to share these moments... they are very moving indeed, but also inspiring in a way hard to describe in a short space and time.... N
June 14th, 2019 04:06
Neville said:
I am so glad you feel able to share these moments... they are very moving indeed, but also inspiring in a way hard to describe in a short space and time.... N
June 14th, 2019 04:06
That Wonderful Place.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
By all MEANS ~ UNCLE ANDY ~ We all have to preserve our QUALITY of LIFE ! Angela & I have sung in Chiors since we were at School and it is of all things most Cathartic. In NZ ANGELA is in the Church Choir and the MAORI CHOIR which she loves ! As Ive said before I have been giving talks on S & G and the Seniors love them. They were Good Kosher Boys ~ so a lot of their songs (Like SOS & BOTW) are very SPIRITUAL. Its only just 8pm in Essex ~ so this is great uplift for the Morning ! Love this version of SOS !
Blessings & Peace & Love for YOU & JOYCE
Yours through Poetry & Song BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 02:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
By all MEANS ~ UNCLE ANDY ~ We all have to preserve our QUALITY of LIFE ! Angela & I have sung in Chiors since we were at School and it is of all things most Cathartic. In NZ ANGELA is in the Church Choir and the MAORI CHOIR which she loves ! As Ive said before I have been giving talks on S & G and the Seniors love them. They were Good Kosher Boys ~ so a lot of their songs (Like SOS & BOTW) are very SPIRITUAL. Its only just 8pm in Essex ~ so this is great uplift for the Morning ! Love this version of SOS !
Blessings & Peace & Love for YOU & JOYCE
Yours through Poetry & Song BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 14th, 2019 02:03
That Wonderful Place.
orchidee said:
I must come along then. Aww, why ain\'t there any endorphins from folk when I sing? heehee.
June 14th, 2019 02:02
orchidee said:
I must come along then. Aww, why ain\'t there any endorphins from folk when I sing? heehee.
June 14th, 2019 02:02
That Wonderful Place.
Fay Slimm. said:
What a gift is music dear Andy and you describe its effect so well -- thank you for sharing the beauty music brings to your life. A lovely first read of my day.
June 14th, 2019 01:55
Fay Slimm. said:
What a gift is music dear Andy and you describe its effect so well -- thank you for sharing the beauty music brings to your life. A lovely first read of my day.
June 14th, 2019 01:55
Transported from Reality.
dusk arising said:
Vincent\'s work can take me places with little doubt.
Music is marvelous in the many ways it can motivate us and enhance a mood.
We should all arrange a \'meet\' and get Orchi to lead a choir. We shant have the conventional bass, tenor, soprano etc but rather great dane, spaniel and chihuahua.
I would suggest we create an oral rendition of golliwogs cakewalk by Claude Debussy (I\'m a debussy orchestral fan)
June 13th, 2019 06:49
dusk arising said:
Vincent\'s work can take me places with little doubt.
Music is marvelous in the many ways it can motivate us and enhance a mood.
We should all arrange a \'meet\' and get Orchi to lead a choir. We shant have the conventional bass, tenor, soprano etc but rather great dane, spaniel and chihuahua.
I would suggest we create an oral rendition of golliwogs cakewalk by Claude Debussy (I\'m a debussy orchestral fan)
June 13th, 2019 06:49
Transported from Reality.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : Love the Paintings especially STARRY STARRY NIGHT and CHOPIN. For ME he always transports to another Dimension ! So cool : so smooth : so transportational ! Sometimes when I play piano (late at night) to unwind I compose spontaneously and shed all the angst of my Day and play effortlessly in Heavenly Places. RUTH suggests I should record it and transpose it into musical notation for publication ! Who knows I might make CLASSIC FM ! God has created MAN with the ability to creat and enjoy the cathartic nature of the Arts ! Thanks for sharing !
Bleasssing & Peace & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Your Friend in NZ : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 02:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE ANDY : Love the Paintings especially STARRY STARRY NIGHT and CHOPIN. For ME he always transports to another Dimension ! So cool : so smooth : so transportational ! Sometimes when I play piano (late at night) to unwind I compose spontaneously and shed all the angst of my Day and play effortlessly in Heavenly Places. RUTH suggests I should record it and transpose it into musical notation for publication ! Who knows I might make CLASSIC FM ! God has created MAN with the ability to creat and enjoy the cathartic nature of the Arts ! Thanks for sharing !
Bleasssing & Peace & Love to YOU & JOYCE
Your Friend in NZ : ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 02:29
Transported from Reality.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. But aww, why people get transported too, when they hear me sing? They catch the first bus home! heehee.
June 13th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. But aww, why people get transported too, when they hear me sing? They catch the first bus home! heehee.
June 13th, 2019 01:38
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