Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Washington Whirligig.
orchidee said:

A fine musical write Gold.

November 29th, 2018 02:41

Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic - For Orchi
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

Signing onto and viewing MPS keeps my abibliophobia at bay! Verbophobia is not one of my afflictions because Iā€™m a logophile ... and proud of it! I enjoyed reading your phenomenal acrostic! Impressive!
Let us know how it went with the Poetry Group!

My love to Joyce and you!

~Laura~

November 28th, 2018 10:17

Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic - For Orchi
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY now you\'ve got us scared of every thing OMNIPHOBIA ! Thanks for a very clever Poem and GLOSSARY ! Love & Blessings to You & JOYCE : Angel & Brian šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§” Please check todays Poem and our latest FUSION : A & B !

November 28th, 2018 06:31

Success in Failure.
Neville said:

the capacity to learn, does not make us uniquely human but the capacity to learn from our own individual mistakes, makes us all individuals... memory is about the storage of information in the correct box and being able to retrieve it when required or necessary.... problems arise when something prevents us from locating the appropriate box when access is required... there is certainly much truth in your final three lines my friend... Neville

November 28th, 2018 06:16

Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic - For Orchi
kevin browne said:

Brilliant;y penned, my friend. Such words i thought never existed. A great poem with goof words of wisdom,
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November 28th, 2018 03:19

Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic - For Orchi
Michael Edwards said:

Just great - some read - I bet it went down well. I have long been familiar with the flocci etc word - it was written in large letters in the Estimating dpt of a company where I worked back in the early 1970s

November 28th, 2018 02:56

Hippowhatsitphobia Acrostic - For Orchi
orchidee said:

If ya had not giving some definitions at the end, I would have said \'Could ya say all that (poem) again, please?!\'
Ahh - so it\'s nothing to do with hippos, that very long word. heehee.
Ohh I knew \'flocci-knocky...\' Think that\'s how you say it.

November 28th, 2018 02:55

FIB Sequence Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI ANDY ~ Could yo please check our FUSION ~ FAVOURITE CHRISTMAS SONGS / CAROLS ? The Video changes to accommodate each new contributor ! The current one is Pavarotti Singing \"You Came from the Stars\" in Italian. Angela has also posted a picture of the 2018 New Zealand Nativity Stamps ~ Not to be missed ! Yours BRIAN

November 27th, 2018 16:33

FIB Sequence Acrostic.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

NICE ONE ANDY ~ Now you are Centre Staging ! A REVERSE FIBONACCI ACROSTIC (Swoon) I thought I was bad enough with my RHYMING ACROSTIC SONNETS etc ~ Well done you have won 2018 MPS Poetry Prize ! MIKE & I will have to go back to the Drawing Board ! Love the Music & the Poem ~ Im going to lie down in a dark room ! Love & Blessings for You & JOYCE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

November 27th, 2018 15:58

FIB Sequence Acrostic.
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

I totally agree with Michaelā€™s comment!
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When I first saw the title of your poem, I thought I was going to read a sequence of lies written in acrostic form! LOL
Silly me!

I enjoyed the video! I learned something new! Thank you for sharing!

My love to Joyce and you!

~Laura~

November 27th, 2018 05:25

FIB Sequence Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:

Great form and a good example - you\'ll impress them with this Andy.

November 27th, 2018 04:04

FIB Sequence Acrostic.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Is it worth me trying the bi-monthly local poets group again? Dunno if it\'s still going, but may meet this evening (last Tues of month bi-monthly).
It\'s rather a muttering and mumbling though. I mutter too. doh!
Lets waffle - FIBS of 13, 21, 34, 65, 99..... - words per line? When to stop?!

November 27th, 2018 03:04

Success in Failure.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Such great advice penned in poetic form. We should all learn from your words, \"Anytime you learn from a failure, it is always a success.\"

Thanks for sharing. :-)

November 26th, 2018 18:14

Success in Failure.
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Thanks UNCLE ANDY ~ For some excellent advice ! If I\'m really honest we only learn by our OWN MISTAKES. Love the music : not many Female virtuoso Horn Players ! Blessings & Love to JOYCE & Yourself
ANGELAšŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”
Please check our latest FUSION : Fave Christmas Songs & Carols : Please add your Fave : Thanks A & B !

November 26th, 2018 06:13

Success in Failure.
orchidee said:

A good write Andy. We may plunge into the failure at the time, then may sometimes only learn later from it, so it becomes constructive, or redemptive - spiritual word there, meaning it \'saves, helps us somehow\'. Not that we can earn our salvation though.


November 26th, 2018 02:51

Success in Failure.
Michael Edwards said:

The more I learn the harder it becomes to retrieve it - fine write Andy and a great video.

November 26th, 2018 02:25

Old Fashioned? Moi?
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Andy,

Electronic payments...
One of my pet peeves!
I donā€™t like them at all!
I pay by cash wherever and whenever I can! In this case, Iā€™m glad Iā€™m old fashioned!

I enjoyed the clip!
Have you seen the film, ā€œThe Hoursā€? Itā€™s a great one!

My love to Joyce and to you!

~Laura~

November 25th, 2018 19:53

Old Fashioned? Moi?
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HI UNCLE ANDY : LOVE HOURS : very haunting but not soporific ! Loved the STORY ! BRIAN & I are electronic freaks : you are showing your age : but I still like you ! Love & Blessings to YOU BOTH : Angela šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§” Please check my Sunday Poem : SUNDAY !

November 25th, 2018 19:03

Old Fashioned? Moi?
dusk arising said:

What\'s a newspaper?

he he he

November 25th, 2018 11:52

Old Fashioned? Moi?
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. It\'s embarrassing if paying by credit/debit card, and payment is not accepted.
\'What are cheques?\' some people say, as if they went out of fashion around 1066.

November 25th, 2018 07:51

Old Fashioned? Moi?
Neville said:

it seems you have captured here for all eternity something of an increasingly common experience..

a great of the moment social observation.. N



November 25th, 2018 05:28

Old Fashioned? Moi?
Michael Edwards said:

Probably but not alone. I do know the problem - I have been held up in queues several times by someone using the newer \'quicker\' more \'convenient\' technology.

November 25th, 2018 03:06

That Flaming Song!
Michael Edwards said:

I\'ve no idea where they get the inspiration to play Christmas music so early - I\'m with you - I feel like walking out of the shop and sometimes doi.

November 24th, 2018 05:34

That Flaming Song!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WOW UNCLE ANDY : Ella & Summertime ~ Liquid Love ! Don\'t knock the DEAD ! Granddad Bing (b. 1903) I love him and he influenced all the great Ballad Singers that followed : Sinatra NKC Jim Reeves Tony Bennett Tom Jones etc. What I love about WHITE CHRISTMAS is that Bing had the temerity to WHISTLE in it. Bing didnt rate it : but Irving Berlin said to his Secretary after she had stenographed it for Him \"I think weve got a good one here !\" Remember ANDY that we Girls have lots & lots to do @ Christmas and buying Pressies etc really does start on 2nd of JANUARY ! Advent love to Both of You : ANGELA šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”šŸ§”

November 24th, 2018 04:58

Enlightened Way.
Neville said:

There is, without any doubt, something very special about that silvery light she throws... penned to perfection.. N

November 24th, 2018 04:11

That Flaming Song!
dusk arising said:

Bah-Humbug.

The supermarkets are full of christmas goodies. Yep earlier every year. By the time christmas arrives they\'ll be sold out.

I\'m puzz;ing over how i can make a 4 yr old grandaughters christmas a little happier with a present this year... i have no idea at all. I see her busily playing a game on her mum\'s mobile phone and think to myself..... wow!

November 24th, 2018 03:28

That Flaming Song!
orchidee said:

Yes, and did any Christmas catalogues arrive at your place around June, as here?!

November 24th, 2018 02:40

Seasons of Love.
dusk arising said:

I know the experience of the first two verses. The latter two i have missed out on,
Nice reading.

November 23rd, 2018 17:26

Seasons of Love.
Michael Edwards said:

Fine work Andy

November 23rd, 2018 14:08

Seasons of Love.
Fay Slimm. said:

Beautiful tribute to true love Goldi - a pleasure to read.

November 23rd, 2018 06:46



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