Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
This Day - Haiku.
orchidee said:
A good write Gold.
But what happened to me? I too woke up, but it was all dark. Ahh, it was December though! lol.
If we want to be really gloomy: The nights are drawing in now, ya know!\'
June 22nd, 2018 01:40
orchidee said:
A good write Gold.
But what happened to me? I too woke up, but it was all dark. Ahh, it was December though! lol.
If we want to be really gloomy: The nights are drawing in now, ya know!\'
June 22nd, 2018 01:40
Fitness Holiday.
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
I agree... āRelaxing is the way to goā!
I enjoyed the read and Chopin! Thatās my idea of relaxation!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 19:34
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
I agree... āRelaxing is the way to goā!
I enjoyed the read and Chopin! Thatās my idea of relaxation!
~Laura~
June 21st, 2018 19:34
Fitness Holiday.
Frogspoetry said:
oops,i mean gold.my mind is obviously not here today,although i am blond.lol.
June 21st, 2018 12:10
Frogspoetry said:
oops,i mean gold.my mind is obviously not here today,although i am blond.lol.
June 21st, 2018 12:10
Fitness Holiday.
Frogspoetry said:
great job,Orchi,s always.i look forward to the next uplifting poem from you.
June 21st, 2018 12:09
Frogspoetry said:
great job,Orchi,s always.i look forward to the next uplifting poem from you.
June 21st, 2018 12:09
Fitness Holiday.
Frogspoetry said:
my fitness holiday is on mps spending time with you guys,who are my second family,my spiritual family,and my friends.
June 21st, 2018 12:05
Frogspoetry said:
my fitness holiday is on mps spending time with you guys,who are my second family,my spiritual family,and my friends.
June 21st, 2018 12:05
Fitness Holiday.
SLR said:
I\'ve always loved this piece by Chopin. You can listen to it as you recline by the pool watching them swim. Sounds very relaxing to me. My interpretation of the headline is that they are inviting us to take a break from trying to be fit. :-) :-) Too much exercise is bad for the body! :-) :-)
June 21st, 2018 11:55
SLR said:
I\'ve always loved this piece by Chopin. You can listen to it as you recline by the pool watching them swim. Sounds very relaxing to me. My interpretation of the headline is that they are inviting us to take a break from trying to be fit. :-) :-) Too much exercise is bad for the body! :-) :-)
June 21st, 2018 11:55
Fitness Holiday.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CHOPIN\'S NOCTURN Op 9 ~ Alwyas one of my faves and so so soothing ~ real mood music ~ to calm the troubled breast ~ just what i needed after a hard day @ College ~ its 4 pm in Essex and my last Student for the day has just gone out the door and I can catch up with my MPS Family ! \"FITNESS HOLIDAYS\" BEING ONLY HALF YOUR AGE ~ STILL LOVE THEM ! Beginning of August ~ I am leading a Geology Field trip to the Lake District with our Environmental Studies Students and then @ the end of August to New Zealand ~ Bay of Islands ~ N of Auckland ~ with ANGELA ! This weekend I am looking @ Coastal Erosion on the East Coast ~ lots of Walking etc. However in 2053 ~ when I too will (DV) be a septuagenarian ~ I know \"Activity Holidays\" will be anathema for me also ! Thanks for sharing ~ always a pleasure to ponder ~ Yours BRIAN \"Action Man !\"
June 21st, 2018 10:26
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CHOPIN\'S NOCTURN Op 9 ~ Alwyas one of my faves and so so soothing ~ real mood music ~ to calm the troubled breast ~ just what i needed after a hard day @ College ~ its 4 pm in Essex and my last Student for the day has just gone out the door and I can catch up with my MPS Family ! \"FITNESS HOLIDAYS\" BEING ONLY HALF YOUR AGE ~ STILL LOVE THEM ! Beginning of August ~ I am leading a Geology Field trip to the Lake District with our Environmental Studies Students and then @ the end of August to New Zealand ~ Bay of Islands ~ N of Auckland ~ with ANGELA ! This weekend I am looking @ Coastal Erosion on the East Coast ~ lots of Walking etc. However in 2053 ~ when I too will (DV) be a septuagenarian ~ I know \"Activity Holidays\" will be anathema for me also ! Thanks for sharing ~ always a pleasure to ponder ~ Yours BRIAN \"Action Man !\"
June 21st, 2018 10:26
Fitness Holiday.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. We\'ll be all worn out by the time we get back. It\'ll be more \'work\' than paid work!
June 21st, 2018 09:59
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. We\'ll be all worn out by the time we get back. It\'ll be more \'work\' than paid work!
June 21st, 2018 09:59
Fitness Holiday.
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with you believe me. I saw several people jogging into town this morning - I guess the buses must be on strike - great wrote Andy.
June 21st, 2018 05:54
Michael Edwards said:
I\'m with you believe me. I saw several people jogging into town this morning - I guess the buses must be on strike - great wrote Andy.
June 21st, 2018 05:54
Fitness Holiday.
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Here Here G
I like your holidays
Great write
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:46
Andrew Charles Forrest said:
Here Here G
I like your holidays
Great write
Andrew
June 21st, 2018 05:46
Fitness Holiday.
Heartwriter said:
Maybe a fitness for the mind through relaxation and the calming blow of an ocean breeze with feet tapping in the sand. Good one.
June 21st, 2018 04:54
Heartwriter said:
Maybe a fitness for the mind through relaxation and the calming blow of an ocean breeze with feet tapping in the sand. Good one.
June 21st, 2018 04:54
Kneading Emotions.
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
How is the bread?
As I was reading your
poem, it made me sooo hungry!
I know nothing beats homemade bread, but we do have some great bakeries in Italy that make delicious bread!
I enjoyed the clip...
Bread and spaghetti...good combo!š
~Laura~
June 20th, 2018 19:32
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
How is the bread?
As I was reading your
poem, it made me sooo hungry!
I know nothing beats homemade bread, but we do have some great bakeries in Italy that make delicious bread!
I enjoyed the clip...
Bread and spaghetti...good combo!š
~Laura~
June 20th, 2018 19:32
Kneading Emotions.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANDY ~ Love Spaghetti Westerns and the theme tunes which is just as well ~ because they haunt one\'s sub-conscious in perpetuo !
The process ~ the scent & taste of primitive home-made bread ~ awesome ! !My MUM is a Confectioner and she taught us all how to make bread & cakes & pies and to cook in general ~ Great asset for a FLAT DWELLER I have Cousin who lives and dies his BREADMAKER ~ looks good ~ smells good but the texture is spongy and the taste commercial not a patch on PAN PRIMATIV ! Thanks for an excellent Confectionery POEM ! Yours BRIAN
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June 20th, 2018 19:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HI ANDY ~ Love Spaghetti Westerns and the theme tunes which is just as well ~ because they haunt one\'s sub-conscious in perpetuo !
The process ~ the scent & taste of primitive home-made bread ~ awesome ! !My MUM is a Confectioner and she taught us all how to make bread & cakes & pies and to cook in general ~ Great asset for a FLAT DWELLER I have Cousin who lives and dies his BREADMAKER ~ looks good ~ smells good but the texture is spongy and the taste commercial not a patch on PAN PRIMATIV ! Thanks for an excellent Confectionery POEM ! Yours BRIAN
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June 20th, 2018 19:00
Kneading Emotions.
SLR said:
My mom made the best homemade bread I\'ve had. I\'ve always loved that smell. I would sit there at the table with her fresh bread warm from the oven and the butter and she\'d always ask didn\'t I want something else to eat it with and I\'d always tell her no. It was wonderful just with butter. Thank you for bringing me this wonderful memory. Great post Gold! Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2018 15:04
SLR said:
My mom made the best homemade bread I\'ve had. I\'ve always loved that smell. I would sit there at the table with her fresh bread warm from the oven and the butter and she\'d always ask didn\'t I want something else to eat it with and I\'d always tell her no. It was wonderful just with butter. Thank you for bringing me this wonderful memory. Great post Gold! Thank you for sharing.
June 20th, 2018 15:04
Kneading Emotions.
Frogspoetry said:
I want to try it,can you send me a slice? Or at least the recipe,I also love to bake,I would love to try to beat it( Ha Ha) and bake it as well as you.Thank you Gold.
June 20th, 2018 11:35
Frogspoetry said:
I want to try it,can you send me a slice? Or at least the recipe,I also love to bake,I would love to try to beat it( Ha Ha) and bake it as well as you.Thank you Gold.
June 20th, 2018 11:35
Kneading Emotions.
Heartwriter said:
That bread should be most tender after that beating. Lol. Good one.
June 20th, 2018 06:16
Heartwriter said:
That bread should be most tender after that beating. Lol. Good one.
June 20th, 2018 06:16
Kneading Emotions.
Fay Slimm. said:
A clear and very readable recipe for proper bread-making - beating out frustration\'s gripes love puts back the dough\'s lie and golden those baked rewards when risen and brown the crust - - wow this read has inspired me to try. Thanks Goldi.
June 20th, 2018 06:04
Fay Slimm. said:
A clear and very readable recipe for proper bread-making - beating out frustration\'s gripes love puts back the dough\'s lie and golden those baked rewards when risen and brown the crust - - wow this read has inspired me to try. Thanks Goldi.
June 20th, 2018 06:04
Kneading Emotions.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. You beating up that dough there?! What has it done to upset you? lol.
I would punch cushions, but not if they had pictures of animals, etc on them.
June 20th, 2018 02:15
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. You beating up that dough there?! What has it done to upset you? lol.
I would punch cushions, but not if they had pictures of animals, etc on them.
June 20th, 2018 02:15
Cat Wars.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Have heard the CATS DUET several times but only once in the flesh (or should that be FUR) a great fun piece. In addition to their 100 positive drawbacks even CATS have the odd bad trait ~ and nocturnal singing is one of them. In my book however its reversed with D * * S many more NEGATIVES than POSITIVES ! Thanks for sharing Poem & Purrrrrring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 19th, 2018 10:50
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Have heard the CATS DUET several times but only once in the flesh (or should that be FUR) a great fun piece. In addition to their 100 positive drawbacks even CATS have the odd bad trait ~ and nocturnal singing is one of them. In my book however its reversed with D * * S many more NEGATIVES than POSITIVES ! Thanks for sharing Poem & Purrrrrring ~ Yours BRIAN
June 19th, 2018 10:50
Doing Nothing.
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
I concur with all that Unsub wrote with regard to your writeās content!
As you know, I can empathize with your situation! I know youāre thinking of Joyce every day...how could you not to?! Sheās the love of your life!
Do rest up this week...at least physically!
I know how important it is! My own days with my mom are getting more difficult as each day goes by!
Thinking of you...relaxing, relaxing, relaxing!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 10:13
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
I concur with all that Unsub wrote with regard to your writeās content!
As you know, I can empathize with your situation! I know youāre thinking of Joyce every day...how could you not to?! Sheās the love of your life!
Do rest up this week...at least physically!
I know how important it is! My own days with my mom are getting more difficult as each day goes by!
Thinking of you...relaxing, relaxing, relaxing!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 10:13
Cat Wars.
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
This was really funny!š¹
Watch out for that Orchi guy!
Enjoy your day as much as you can!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 09:33
Lauraš» said:
Andy,
This was really funny!š¹
Watch out for that Orchi guy!
Enjoy your day as much as you can!
~Laura~
June 19th, 2018 09:33
Cat Wars.
dusk arising said:
Personally i adore cats. Such a fine life form.
Very entertaining nocturnal challenges. Keep us posted, will one of them disappear or become a defeated shadow of its former glory.
A great subject for your superb writing.
June 19th, 2018 04:18
dusk arising said:
Personally i adore cats. Such a fine life form.
Very entertaining nocturnal challenges. Keep us posted, will one of them disappear or become a defeated shadow of its former glory.
A great subject for your superb writing.
June 19th, 2018 04:18
Cat Wars.
orchidee said:
Heehee a fine write Gold. Some don\'t believe me if I say they can\'t tell the difference between me and two cats fighting!
Ahh, there\'s a smallish tortoiseshell cat in our road.
Also another one the same, with its companion, a more tabby sort.
Also, a very large but friendly black-and-white one that roams about. Too heavy to pick him up!
June 19th, 2018 02:12
orchidee said:
Heehee a fine write Gold. Some don\'t believe me if I say they can\'t tell the difference between me and two cats fighting!
Ahh, there\'s a smallish tortoiseshell cat in our road.
Also another one the same, with its companion, a more tabby sort.
Also, a very large but friendly black-and-white one that roams about. Too heavy to pick him up!
June 19th, 2018 02:12
Cat Wars.
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess you know what I think about cats - or rather their irresponsible owners. Nevertheless a great fun write Andy.
June 19th, 2018 02:06
Michael Edwards said:
Well I guess you know what I think about cats - or rather their irresponsible owners. Nevertheless a great fun write Andy.
June 19th, 2018 02:06
Doing Nothing.
Christina8 said:
You are in my thoughts and prayers. Take time for you to rest!
June 18th, 2018 14:12
Christina8 said:
You are in my thoughts and prayers. Take time for you to rest!
June 18th, 2018 14:12
Doing Nothing.
ZIGGY said:
hi I don\'t know what gave cause for this write but I got a sense of it with Unsub\'s comment I hope this write helped to throw off those feelings in some way I believe people like you are chosen to care for those in need hope you can find yourself in your free time again kind regards ā¦ā¦ā¦ā¦...zigs
June 18th, 2018 14:03
ZIGGY said:
hi I don\'t know what gave cause for this write but I got a sense of it with Unsub\'s comment I hope this write helped to throw off those feelings in some way I believe people like you are chosen to care for those in need hope you can find yourself in your free time again kind regards ā¦ā¦ā¦ā¦...zigs
June 18th, 2018 14:03
Doing Nothing.
Jane Frye said:
I thought about your write for hours. I, too, lost the love of my life under similar circumstances. I felt helpless, and incredibly sad. The worse part for me is a sense that I failed him. It\'s been four years now, and I\'m still grieving, trying to sort things out in my heart and head. I have not yet found the collateral beauty in his and my tragedy; but, when I do, I\'ll be sure to write about it, as I hope you will. Take care.
June 18th, 2018 09:36
Jane Frye said:
I thought about your write for hours. I, too, lost the love of my life under similar circumstances. I felt helpless, and incredibly sad. The worse part for me is a sense that I failed him. It\'s been four years now, and I\'m still grieving, trying to sort things out in my heart and head. I have not yet found the collateral beauty in his and my tragedy; but, when I do, I\'ll be sure to write about it, as I hope you will. Take care.
June 18th, 2018 09:36
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