Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
You Are What You Are.
WriteBeLight said:
Love that last line. One of my favorites! Great job and message.
February 25th, 2017 07:14
WriteBeLight said:
Love that last line. One of my favorites! Great job and message.
February 25th, 2017 07:14
You Are What You Are.
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on - be proud of who you are, walk up straight and always keep our chin up - don\'t look down - look forward - and you go far wrong.
February 25th, 2017 04:30
Michael Edwards said:
Spot on - be proud of who you are, walk up straight and always keep our chin up - don\'t look down - look forward - and you go far wrong.
February 25th, 2017 04:30
You Are What You Are.
orchidee said:
A fine write Goldie. That\'ll be me then - ramblings. Well, when are both in 1066, that is?! Now you know this is me, and not someone false! Only us two are millions of years old. Or should I only speak for myself? heehee.
February 25th, 2017 03:07
orchidee said:
A fine write Goldie. That\'ll be me then - ramblings. Well, when are both in 1066, that is?! Now you know this is me, and not someone false! Only us two are millions of years old. Or should I only speak for myself? heehee.
February 25th, 2017 03:07
The Joy of Old Age
janetaylor said:
I am growing older as well and I can relate to this beautifully penned poem💛
February 24th, 2017 20:07
janetaylor said:
I am growing older as well and I can relate to this beautifully penned poem💛
February 24th, 2017 20:07
The Joy of Old Age
Augustus said:
Welcome. Your free verse flowed nicely and was easily readable. A life well lived. Kudos.
February 24th, 2017 19:52
Augustus said:
Welcome. Your free verse flowed nicely and was easily readable. A life well lived. Kudos.
February 24th, 2017 19:52
The Joy of Old Age
Philip said:
Carry on cherishing the freedoms and do everything while you can. A lovely poem. Phil.G
February 24th, 2017 16:24
Philip said:
Carry on cherishing the freedoms and do everything while you can. A lovely poem. Phil.G
February 24th, 2017 16:24
The Joy of Old Age
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Christina, life is always good.
February 24th, 2017 15:44
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Christina, life is always good.
February 24th, 2017 15:44
The Joy of Old Age
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I like how you take us on a journey through life. Nice to know life gets better with age.
February 24th, 2017 14:28
Christina8 said:
Very nice poem. I like how you take us on a journey through life. Nice to know life gets better with age.
February 24th, 2017 14:28
The Joy of Old Age
willyweed said:
yesterday I was young, today I am getting older, tomorrow I will be dead and some one else will wear my good suit! Nice poem very relatable> ww
February 24th, 2017 13:23
willyweed said:
yesterday I was young, today I am getting older, tomorrow I will be dead and some one else will wear my good suit! Nice poem very relatable> ww
February 24th, 2017 13:23
The Joy of Old Age
ron parrish aka wordman said:
life is just but a journey with many twists and turns,we are like the seasons of time
February 24th, 2017 11:27
ron parrish aka wordman said:
life is just but a journey with many twists and turns,we are like the seasons of time
February 24th, 2017 11:27
The Joy of Old Age
Will Hiltz said:
What a great poem, Goldfinch60, with great sentiments so well expressed.
We\'re at similar stages in life, and it\'s easy to think like Betty Davis, complaining in her famous quote,: \"Growing old is not for sissies!\"
But I prefer, like you, to focus instead on gratitude, and have always loved Kurt Vonnegut\'s quote in Cat\'s Cradle: \"God made mud. God got lonesome. So God said to some of that mud, \'Sit up! See all I\'ve made, the hills, the sea, the sky, the stars.\' And I was some of the mud that got to sit up and look around. Lucky me, lucky mud.\"
Lucky you, Goldfinch60, to have a poem like that in you, and to be able to share it here - lucky us.
Will
February 24th, 2017 11:15
Will Hiltz said:
What a great poem, Goldfinch60, with great sentiments so well expressed.
We\'re at similar stages in life, and it\'s easy to think like Betty Davis, complaining in her famous quote,: \"Growing old is not for sissies!\"
But I prefer, like you, to focus instead on gratitude, and have always loved Kurt Vonnegut\'s quote in Cat\'s Cradle: \"God made mud. God got lonesome. So God said to some of that mud, \'Sit up! See all I\'ve made, the hills, the sea, the sky, the stars.\' And I was some of the mud that got to sit up and look around. Lucky me, lucky mud.\"
Lucky you, Goldfinch60, to have a poem like that in you, and to be able to share it here - lucky us.
Will
February 24th, 2017 11:15
The Joy of Old Age
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GOLDFINCH ~ You will find MPS a very nice site and ~ if you comment on the poems of others (as you have on mine) you will find they will reciprocate (as I am doing now) ! There is a wide age range from Teens to 80+ so your elegant poem is relevant to all ! Every day we are all a day older ! Your poem is very optimistic and a reminder that Retirement is not an early death ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 24th, 2017 09:56
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME GOLDFINCH ~ You will find MPS a very nice site and ~ if you comment on the poems of others (as you have on mine) you will find they will reciprocate (as I am doing now) ! There is a wide age range from Teens to 80+ so your elegant poem is relevant to all ! Every day we are all a day older ! Your poem is very optimistic and a reminder that Retirement is not an early death ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 24th, 2017 09:56
The Joy of Old Age
WriteBeLight said:
Very nicely done about aging. We are all doing that everyday. I like how you appreciate your journey, still ongoing.
February 24th, 2017 06:43
WriteBeLight said:
Very nicely done about aging. We are all doing that everyday. I like how you appreciate your journey, still ongoing.
February 24th, 2017 06:43
The Joy of Old Age
orchidee said:
Cooeee G/F it\'s me! This looks good. I hope to post sometime soon!
February 24th, 2017 04:16
orchidee said:
Cooeee G/F it\'s me! This looks good. I hope to post sometime soon!
February 24th, 2017 04:16
The Joy of Old Age
Michael Edwards said:
It seems as our lives have driven along parallel byways - I could easily have written something similar - a good read and so well written.
February 24th, 2017 02:59
Michael Edwards said:
It seems as our lives have driven along parallel byways - I could easily have written something similar - a good read and so well written.
February 24th, 2017 02:59
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