Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Throat Cutting.
myself and me said:
Hahaha, electric razor. You scared me at the beginning of the poem.
A good humor.
September 20th, 2017 15:18
myself and me said:
Hahaha, electric razor. You scared me at the beginning of the poem.
A good humor.
September 20th, 2017 15:18
Throat Cutting.
Louis Gibbs said:
Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.
September 20th, 2017 14:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Certainly a little levity never hurts. Nice chuckle ... thanks, Goldie.
September 20th, 2017 14:34
Throat Cutting.
Christina8 said:
Well, despite what some have said, I thought it was funny! You wrote a good poem here! LOL Christina
September 20th, 2017 10:52
Christina8 said:
Well, despite what some have said, I thought it was funny! You wrote a good poem here! LOL Christina
September 20th, 2017 10:52
Throat Cutting.
malubotelho said:
That is funny Gold. You are being so childish. Be careful, don\'t go too deep. Lol 😂
September 20th, 2017 10:49
malubotelho said:
That is funny Gold. You are being so childish. Be careful, don\'t go too deep. Lol 😂
September 20th, 2017 10:49
Throat Cutting.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ SUICIDE IS NEVER REALLY FUNNY ~ However for many it i just a \"cri de coeur\" A Friend of mine tried to commit by eating 10 packs of TREBOR strong mints ~ funny thing was he nearly died. Another died (accidently) when his electric shaver (plugged in) fell in the bath ~ so you were closer than you thought to \"felo de se\" Thanks for a LAFF we don\'t get many on a WEDNESDAY MORNING ! BRAIN
September 20th, 2017 05:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS ANDY ~ SUICIDE IS NEVER REALLY FUNNY ~ However for many it i just a \"cri de coeur\" A Friend of mine tried to commit by eating 10 packs of TREBOR strong mints ~ funny thing was he nearly died. Another died (accidently) when his electric shaver (plugged in) fell in the bath ~ so you were closer than you thought to \"felo de se\" Thanks for a LAFF we don\'t get many on a WEDNESDAY MORNING ! BRAIN
September 20th, 2017 05:47
Throat Cutting.
Michael Edwards said:
Oh you\'re an amusing blade young Andy - gave me a smile.
September 20th, 2017 04:39
Michael Edwards said:
Oh you\'re an amusing blade young Andy - gave me a smile.
September 20th, 2017 04:39
Throat Cutting.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, this is soooo good! Reminds me of the terrorist who burned his lips on the exhaust pipe, trying to blow up a bus!
September 20th, 2017 03:33
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, this is soooo good! Reminds me of the terrorist who burned his lips on the exhaust pipe, trying to blow up a bus!
September 20th, 2017 03:33
Throat Cutting.
orchidee said:
Doh! heehee. I thought this might be 18+. Now I\'ve told off some people for being naughty, and not putting 18+ when it\'s been needed, e.g. far too swoony poems from some folk! Good write Gold. A sharp write, though not in the razor sense.
September 20th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Doh! heehee. I thought this might be 18+. Now I\'ve told off some people for being naughty, and not putting 18+ when it\'s been needed, e.g. far too swoony poems from some folk! Good write Gold. A sharp write, though not in the razor sense.
September 20th, 2017 01:55
Rainbow of Life.
dusk arising said:
Though a rainbow has no end Goldfinch, I think you found the fabled treasure we all wish for some while ago. Long may the colours radiate in your lives. Lovely writing.
September 19th, 2017 18:06
dusk arising said:
Though a rainbow has no end Goldfinch, I think you found the fabled treasure we all wish for some while ago. Long may the colours radiate in your lives. Lovely writing.
September 19th, 2017 18:06
Rainbow of Life.
Fay Slimm. said:
Love that is long lasting and unafraid shines like the rainbow - - a beautiful tribute here my friend.
September 19th, 2017 15:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Love that is long lasting and unafraid shines like the rainbow - - a beautiful tribute here my friend.
September 19th, 2017 15:39
Rainbow of Life.
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Goldfinch for this beautiful poem. It touched me not only because it is such tender wonderful writing, but because I can see my wife in there. You expressed very beautifully and much better than I ever could how I feel inside. For that I thank you!
September 19th, 2017 11:45
FredPeyer said:
Thank you Goldfinch for this beautiful poem. It touched me not only because it is such tender wonderful writing, but because I can see my wife in there. You expressed very beautifully and much better than I ever could how I feel inside. For that I thank you!
September 19th, 2017 11:45
Rainbow of Life.
myself and me said:
True love like the rainbow in the sky, bring colors to your life. Beautiful writing.
September 19th, 2017 11:11
myself and me said:
True love like the rainbow in the sky, bring colors to your life. Beautiful writing.
September 19th, 2017 11:11
Rainbow of Life.
malubotelho said:
It is very touching your poem and the love you have for your wife. God bless your life with her.
September 19th, 2017 08:55
malubotelho said:
It is very touching your poem and the love you have for your wife. God bless your life with her.
September 19th, 2017 08:55
Rainbow of Life.
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blessed life you\'ve led, Goldie ... troubles and all. Nice tribute poem!
September 19th, 2017 08:01
Louis Gibbs said:
Sounds like a blessed life you\'ve led, Goldie ... troubles and all. Nice tribute poem!
September 19th, 2017 08:01
Rainbow of Life.
WL Schuett said:
Lovely poem I always like this song also ... love the rainbow good analogy for a lifelong love , well done
September 19th, 2017 07:43
WL Schuett said:
Lovely poem I always like this song also ... love the rainbow good analogy for a lifelong love , well done
September 19th, 2017 07:43
Rainbow of Life.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for posting a Lovely Singer and a perfect song for a Tiresome Tuesday. Love you poem ~ a tribute to a lovely wife. In my experience too MEN are often just BLACK (suits) and WHITE (Y-fronts ) while our LADIES revel in a 1000 Rainbow Shades ! Thank you GOD fro creating EVE ~ beautiful and colourful in every way ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN Please sample my RICE PEAS \'N CHICK before Steve eats it all ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 03:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for posting a Lovely Singer and a perfect song for a Tiresome Tuesday. Love you poem ~ a tribute to a lovely wife. In my experience too MEN are often just BLACK (suits) and WHITE (Y-fronts ) while our LADIES revel in a 1000 Rainbow Shades ! Thank you GOD fro creating EVE ~ beautiful and colourful in every way ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN Please sample my RICE PEAS \'N CHICK before Steve eats it all ~ Thanks B.
September 19th, 2017 03:37
Rainbow of Life.
orchidee said:
A sort of eschatological (eska-tological) poem there, G/F. meaning \'end times\' or \'looking towards the end times\'.
Darker and lighter colours colours in the rainbow. A fine write.
September 19th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
A sort of eschatological (eska-tological) poem there, G/F. meaning \'end times\' or \'looking towards the end times\'.
Darker and lighter colours colours in the rainbow. A fine write.
September 19th, 2017 01:55
Rainbow of Life.
Michael Edwards said:
A great song to accompany a fine write
September 19th, 2017 01:53
Michael Edwards said:
A great song to accompany a fine write
September 19th, 2017 01:53
Followed in the Night.
Simple-Man87 said:
That was really well written.. I\'ve had a nightmare like that, a time or two
September 18th, 2017 17:49
Simple-Man87 said:
That was really well written.. I\'ve had a nightmare like that, a time or two
September 18th, 2017 17:49
Followed in the Night.
poetboy123 said:
Wow a brilliant twist, incredible Gold!
September 18th, 2017 17:34
poetboy123 said:
Wow a brilliant twist, incredible Gold!
September 18th, 2017 17:34
Followed in the Night.
orchidee said:
Cooeee, it could be me! You\'ll pinch my porkies and add water to my sherry. That\'ll teach me! heehee.
September 18th, 2017 13:42
orchidee said:
Cooeee, it could be me! You\'ll pinch my porkies and add water to my sherry. That\'ll teach me! heehee.
September 18th, 2017 13:42
Followed in the Night.
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, Goldfinch, no wonder it was published. Congratulations!
With me, the words don\'t seem to follow, we seem to more walk beside each other, sometimes holding hands, sometimes quite far away, but still somehow connected.
September 18th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, Goldfinch, no wonder it was published. Congratulations!
With me, the words don\'t seem to follow, we seem to more walk beside each other, sometimes holding hands, sometimes quite far away, but still somehow connected.
September 18th, 2017 13:18
Followed in the Night.
myself and me said:
Those words that followed you right get inside of you.
September 18th, 2017 13:13
myself and me said:
Those words that followed you right get inside of you.
September 18th, 2017 13:13
Followed in the Night.
dusk arising said:
Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you? Those recent fantasy things i wrote were done exactly like that. Any story therein somehow created itself around the phrases - it wasn\'t me. But there again its not you following you home either is it...... who is this clever nay, cunning person who creeps around poeticly? Maybe its that Orchidee the single malt-teaser.
September 18th, 2017 12:44
dusk arising said:
Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you? Those recent fantasy things i wrote were done exactly like that. Any story therein somehow created itself around the phrases - it wasn\'t me. But there again its not you following you home either is it...... who is this clever nay, cunning person who creeps around poeticly? Maybe its that Orchidee the single malt-teaser.
September 18th, 2017 12:44
Followed in the Night.
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations well deserved , a wonderful poem
September 18th, 2017 12:36
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations well deserved , a wonderful poem
September 18th, 2017 12:36
Followed in the Night.
malubotelho said:
Words are powerful. Nice writing Gold
September 18th, 2017 12:31
malubotelho said:
Words are powerful. Nice writing Gold
September 18th, 2017 12:31
Followed in the Night.
Accidental Poet said:
Those footsteps were of your own muse. Very well done Goldfinch. ; )
September 18th, 2017 04:11
Accidental Poet said:
Those footsteps were of your own muse. Very well done Goldfinch. ; )
September 18th, 2017 04:11
Followed in the Night.
Michael Edwards said:
Did you hear any wordsteps Andy? Original and a great write
September 18th, 2017 03:42
Michael Edwards said:
Did you hear any wordsteps Andy? Original and a great write
September 18th, 2017 03:42
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