Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Prison Walls
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve visited several prisons in the course of my work and this super sensitive write really brings home the sense of loneliness and entrapment I experienced and which reflects in the situation you so well describe.
November 23rd, 2017 03:29
Michael Edwards said:
I\'ve visited several prisons in the course of my work and this super sensitive write really brings home the sense of loneliness and entrapment I experienced and which reflects in the situation you so well describe.
November 23rd, 2017 03:29
Prison Walls
orchidee said:
Sensitive write Gold. Seems strange climbing back in to prison. I went to a show art a former prison. Had not seen the inside before. Saw Oscar Wilde\'s cell there. Bit ghastly - ground floor was for criminals awaiting execution.
November 23rd, 2017 03:08
orchidee said:
Sensitive write Gold. Seems strange climbing back in to prison. I went to a show art a former prison. Had not seen the inside before. Saw Oscar Wilde\'s cell there. Bit ghastly - ground floor was for criminals awaiting execution.
November 23rd, 2017 03:08
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
FredPeyer said:
Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same thing, but obviously without expressing it as eloquently and beautifully as you did here.
November 22nd, 2017 13:13
FredPeyer said:
Great, great poem, Goldfinch! There are nights where I wonder the same thing, but obviously without expressing it as eloquently and beautifully as you did here.
November 22nd, 2017 13:13
Cupboard Love.
FredPeyer said:
Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving \'help\' from our kids!
November 22nd, 2017 12:49
FredPeyer said:
Love it, Goldfinch! So many times, what for us is a mess, is loving \'help\' from our kids!
November 22nd, 2017 12:49
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
rrodriguez said:
Well, wishing all to have a better night and asking Morpheus to hang around a little longer. Thanks Andy, great poem.
November 22nd, 2017 11:11
rrodriguez said:
Well, wishing all to have a better night and asking Morpheus to hang around a little longer. Thanks Andy, great poem.
November 22nd, 2017 11:11
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
myself and me said:
I guess Morpheus is busy with preparing food for Thanksgiving.
November 22nd, 2017 11:08
myself and me said:
I guess Morpheus is busy with preparing food for Thanksgiving.
November 22nd, 2017 11:08
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Louis Gibbs said:
Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more things to worry about over time?
Good write here, Goldie.
November 22nd, 2017 09:34
Louis Gibbs said:
Yep, been there. More often it seems as time goes by. I guess we find more things to worry about over time?
Good write here, Goldie.
November 22nd, 2017 09:34
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Fay Slimm. said:
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love the image you chose too Goldi - wishing you a better sleep tonight my friend.
November 22nd, 2017 08:52
Fay Slimm. said:
A good question to put to the one who helps us shut down at night - love the image you chose too Goldi - wishing you a better sleep tonight my friend.
November 22nd, 2017 08:52
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve had nights like that too. The mind just refuses to shut down for the night. Great poem Andy.
November 22nd, 2017 05:07
Accidental Poet said:
I\'ve had nights like that too. The mind just refuses to shut down for the night. Great poem Andy.
November 22nd, 2017 05:07
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
orchidee said:
Cooeee Morpheus - where are ya?! Good write Gold.
November 22nd, 2017 03:04
orchidee said:
Cooeee Morpheus - where are ya?! Good write Gold.
November 22nd, 2017 03:04
Morpheus, Where Did You Go?
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this Andy - super piece and even Ovid would plaud it - into favourites.
November 22nd, 2017 02:52
Michael Edwards said:
I just love this Andy - super piece and even Ovid would plaud it - into favourites.
November 22nd, 2017 02:52
Cupboard Love.
myself and me said:
You describe the curiosity of the kids so well.
November 21st, 2017 20:36
myself and me said:
You describe the curiosity of the kids so well.
November 21st, 2017 20:36
Cupboard Love.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY all the Kids ~ I know ~ love cupboards and also love to empty them ! When I have visitors to my Sacred Flat ~ with Kids ~ I lock all the Cupboards and the FRIDGE \"Kids should be seen (keep your eye on them at all times !) and kept out of Cupboards and Drawers ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN. Please check my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink for Celebration ~ and (if your Muse moves !) please add a Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 21st, 2017 18:00
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY all the Kids ~ I know ~ love cupboards and also love to empty them ! When I have visitors to my Sacred Flat ~ with Kids ~ I lock all the Cupboards and the FRIDGE \"Kids should be seen (keep your eye on them at all times !) and kept out of Cupboards and Drawers ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN. Please check my NEW FUSION on Food & Drink for Celebration ~ and (if your Muse moves !) please add a Poem ~ Thanks BRIAN
November 21st, 2017 18:00
Cupboard Love.
Christina8 said:
Good write. I remember that stage when pots and pans were a treasured find for my son!
November 21st, 2017 13:09
Christina8 said:
Good write. I remember that stage when pots and pans were a treasured find for my son!
November 21st, 2017 13:09
Cupboard Love.
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\" their Mom - - great read.
November 21st, 2017 08:32
Fay Slimm. said:
Ha ha - this describes well the intention of young children to \"help\" their Mom - - great read.
November 21st, 2017 08:32
Cupboard Love.
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the innocence of childhood well captured here Andy.
November 21st, 2017 08:22
Michael Edwards said:
Ah the innocence of childhood well captured here Andy.
November 21st, 2017 08:22
Cupboard Love.
Accidental Poet said:
A very nice write Andy inspired from some very thoughtful children. I\'d be crawling inside the cupboard and peeking out to say \"Hi Mom\".
November 21st, 2017 04:55
Accidental Poet said:
A very nice write Andy inspired from some very thoughtful children. I\'d be crawling inside the cupboard and peeking out to say \"Hi Mom\".
November 21st, 2017 04:55
Cupboard Love.
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. So you do work with children and animals?! Are they taboo for actors to work with?
I could do simple hymn-poems I suppose, not even rhyming.
November 21st, 2017 03:06
orchidee said:
A lovely write Gold. So you do work with children and animals?! Are they taboo for actors to work with?
I could do simple hymn-poems I suppose, not even rhyming.
November 21st, 2017 03:06
Lifes Highway.
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the meantime, let\'s follow your advice!
November 20th, 2017 17:20
FredPeyer said:
Love this poem, Goldfinch! There will be a stop eventually, but in the meantime, let\'s follow your advice!
November 20th, 2017 17:20
A New Ending.
Louis Gibbs said:
\'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as experiences\" captures the whole point, to me, of being here. Life is simply a learning process, is it not?
Well done wisdom poem, Goldie, reflecting what you obviously have learned through experience.
November 20th, 2017 09:55
Louis Gibbs said:
\'We live our lives with what we have learned\', indeed! \"Regrets as experiences\" captures the whole point, to me, of being here. Life is simply a learning process, is it not?
Well done wisdom poem, Goldie, reflecting what you obviously have learned through experience.
November 20th, 2017 09:55
A New Ending.
Christina8 said:
Very wise Goldfinch! Lets just say your poem was very helpful to me. Great write!
November 20th, 2017 07:58
Christina8 said:
Very wise Goldfinch! Lets just say your poem was very helpful to me. Great write!
November 20th, 2017 07:58
A New Ending.
dusk arising said:
So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays experience and faith in my spiritual thought i struggle onto face tomorrows challenges. Hopefully wiser but..... \"i\'m only human after all\"
November 20th, 2017 03:49
dusk arising said:
So true.. if only i could turn back time. But armed with yesterdays experience and faith in my spiritual thought i struggle onto face tomorrows challenges. Hopefully wiser but..... \"i\'m only human after all\"
November 20th, 2017 03:49
A New Ending.
kevin browne said:
well said, GoldFinch60, it would be at treasure if we could rectify all our mistakes somehow and to live a life full of jam packed prosperity. I love your written words here. they mean a lot to human life.
November 20th, 2017 02:59
kevin browne said:
well said, GoldFinch60, it would be at treasure if we could rectify all our mistakes somehow and to live a life full of jam packed prosperity. I love your written words here. they mean a lot to human life.
November 20th, 2017 02:59
A New Ending.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I regret my KP marriage, but can\'t do a thing to change it now. Oh woe! I\'m stuck, attached to this ball and chain she put on me, and she\'s thrown away the key! heehee.
November 20th, 2017 02:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I regret my KP marriage, but can\'t do a thing to change it now. Oh woe! I\'m stuck, attached to this ball and chain she put on me, and she\'s thrown away the key! heehee.
November 20th, 2017 02:55
Lifes Highway.
Laura🌻 said:
I say Amen to that, Andy!
I liked this very much.
I hope this journey will last
a while longer without too
many rocks along the way!
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 22:09
Laura🌻 said:
I say Amen to that, Andy!
I liked this very much.
I hope this journey will last
a while longer without too
many rocks along the way!
~Laura~
November 19th, 2017 22:09
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