Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
New Times.
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.
August 20th, 2017 02:13
Michael Edwards said:
Beautiful poem - I live for the tomorrow and no looking back - great words.
August 20th, 2017 02:13
New Times.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about \'new\' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!
August 20th, 2017 01:52
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Wanting the moon to go to a full moon (from crescent to whole), not a new moon (vice versa). Though we could then write about \'new\' times of the new moon. Doh! Sometimes I take analogies too far, and end up in a tangle!
August 20th, 2017 01:52
Struck Down.
burning-embers said:
Oh dear lol he mised the communion wine that day. Nice one
August 19th, 2017 14:48
burning-embers said:
Oh dear lol he mised the communion wine that day. Nice one
August 19th, 2017 14:48
Struck Down.
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m actually laughing pretty hard right now. This is as golden as the Gold in Finch, and speaking of: A round of applause. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 08:47
Nicholas Browning said:
I\'m actually laughing pretty hard right now. This is as golden as the Gold in Finch, and speaking of: A round of applause. Well done.
August 19th, 2017 08:47
Struck Down.
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Louis Gibbs said:
Much appreciated, this one! Well done bit of humor, Goldie.
August 19th, 2017 07:00
Struck Down.
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Accidental Poet said:
\'Tis a good day to start with a laugh. Great write Goldfinch. ; )
August 19th, 2017 04:08
Struck Down.
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Oh lol, a fine write G. I thought I heard a variant on this, where the priest was swearing, but I can\'t recall it. Either that, or I swooned and forgot the ending!
August 19th, 2017 01:48
Struck Down.
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Michael Edwards said:
More than just a bit of a laugh - it\'s great - starts the day off well.
August 19th, 2017 01:40
Reaching Nirvana.
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
myself and me said:
Thank you for the hope and guide. Nirvana still exist and there is a path to it.
To me, here is a place close to Nirvana.
August 18th, 2017 21:26
Reaching Nirvana.
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
WL Schuett said:
I have some peace and some contentment, but nirvana that\'s a long bumpy road I\'m afraid ... nice writing
August 18th, 2017 15:16
Reaching Nirvana.
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
malubotelho said:
Delightful reading this piece. Long time ago I\'ve begun my path on that road. Little baby steps being taken. I feel much, much better today than 20 years ago.
August 18th, 2017 13:10
Reaching Nirvana.
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Louis Gibbs said:
Wish you had dropped some bread crumbs along the way. Your path is beyond my zip code.
This is a classic, Goldie! Thank you for sharing it.
August 18th, 2017 09:53
Reaching Nirvana.
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
burning-embers said:
Oh that it were so simple to achieve nirvana. However this tempts the unaware with the road less travelled one hopes. A path we find ourselves walking into freedom and love. Another piece of your excellence sir!
August 18th, 2017 05:43
Reaching Nirvana.
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
Can you give me map references please - great write
August 18th, 2017 02:30
Reaching Nirvana.
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Nicholas Browning said:
Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.
August 18th, 2017 02:07
Reaching Nirvana.
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Fay Slimm. said:
The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.
August 18th, 2017 01:57
Reaching Nirvana.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.
August 18th, 2017 01:55
Reaching Nirvana.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!
August 18th, 2017 01:52
Dancing with Shadows.
poetboy123 said:
I\'m glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!
August 17th, 2017 20:50
poetboy123 said:
I\'m glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!
August 17th, 2017 20:50
Dancing with Shadows.
sue.evans said:
I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it\'s given freedom to roam!
August 17th, 2017 18:15
sue.evans said:
I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it\'s given freedom to roam!
August 17th, 2017 18:15
Dancing with Shadows.
malubotelho said:
Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.
August 17th, 2017 11:49
malubotelho said:
Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.
August 17th, 2017 11:49
Dancing with Shadows.
orchidee said:
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries.....\"Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.
August 17th, 2017 08:47
orchidee said:
I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries.....\"Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.
August 17th, 2017 08:47
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