Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Cleansing Rain.
WriteBeLight said:

I would agree! Very cleansing Goldfinch!

August 5th, 2017 09:11

Cleansing Rain.
malubotelho said:

Beautiful picture and poem. I will try a cleansing like this next rainfall.

August 5th, 2017 08:19

Cleansing Rain.
Night Owl said:

Lovely Goldfinch! I could almost smell the rainfall-- Beautiful wording...

August 5th, 2017 07:09

Cleansing Rain.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, such a nice metaphor that rain washes away our worries. I think it also washes away our sins. Beautiful writing!

August 5th, 2017 02:58

Cleansing Rain.
orchidee said:

Good write G/F. We may moan - too hot, too cold, too wet, etc. Yet clouds can create an atmospheric feeling - dark clouds, white clouds, etc. You singin\' in the rain there? And can ya hear me singin\' in it? Meowwoo! lol.

August 5th, 2017 01:54

Cleansing Rain.
Michael Edwards said:

Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic ink - if it works I\'ll post it later.

August 5th, 2017 01:48

The Undarkened House.
FredPeyer said:

Great poem Goldfinch, I sometimes wonder how much electricity we squander with all these lights on.

August 4th, 2017 13:03

The Undarkened House.
Fay Slimm. said:

Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine all those extra lights to show the way to making an early morning cuppa eh

August 4th, 2017 05:00

The Undarkened House.
burning-embers said:

I like the peaceful familiarity here. The feeling as the world wakes up around you.

August 4th, 2017 04:02

The Undarkened House.
Michael Edwards said:

Don\'t like dark mornings when it gets late late. Do like this though - I can relate to it. Hope pooter is sorted soon G

August 4th, 2017 02:59

The Undarkened House.
orchidee said:

Not time just yet for dark mornings, but it creeps up a minute or two each day now. A fine write Gold.

August 4th, 2017 02:02

Walking in Space.
WL Schuett said:

Poems about journey small or long interest me well done

August 3rd, 2017 22:39

Walking in Space.
Heather T said:

So much peace wafting from your poem to rest in my shoulders. Lovely.

August 3rd, 2017 18:25

Walking in Space.
P.H.Rose said:

Another very very good
Poem GF60.....
I picture every word

August 3rd, 2017 13:30

Walking in Space.
orchidee said:

Meanwhile, on the sherry - cooeee, I thought ya was literally walking in space. Did ya see E.T.? Or has he gone home. While on the sherry I have to laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does! heehee.

August 3rd, 2017 11:57

Walking in Space.
FredPeyer said:

A very fine poem, Goldfinch, I do like all of it, especially the ending, and also the line \'To the time of the river\'s flow\'. To me that is poesy!

August 3rd, 2017 11:53

Walking in Space.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Kat. I love being with nature.

August 3rd, 2017 07:54

Walking in Space.
Louis Gibbs said:

Your poem takes us on a lovely, peaceful journey to eternity, Goldie. A fine way to start a morning. Thanks for sharing!

August 3rd, 2017 07:04

Walking in Space.
Michael Edwards said:

I read it and I was there - great descriptive writing G

August 3rd, 2017 04:42

Walking in Space.
orchidee said:

All that on a nature walk! A fine write Goldie.

August 3rd, 2017 01:55

Falling into the Night.
FredPeyer said:

As far as I am concerned Gold, you just ponder on and share these wonderful pondering results!

August 2nd, 2017 09:54

Falling into the Night.
Louis Gibbs said:

It would be a shame to squander a good ponder, now wouldn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Goldie!

August 2nd, 2017 07:45

Falling into the Night.
UniquelyMel48 said:

You got me picturing this and pondering too x

August 2nd, 2017 07:35

Falling into the Night.
Fay Slimm. said:

Lovely images of nightfall in this read - thanks for sharing your pondering with us Gold.

August 2nd, 2017 03:39

Falling into the Night.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold. Help! We\'ll wish Summer away, what with:
* oh the nights are drawing in now
* only just under 5 months to Christmas
* it\'s all downhill now until the Shortest Day!

August 2nd, 2017 03:30

Falling into the Night.
Michael Edwards said:

I like this - you certainly can\'t beat a good ponder.

August 2nd, 2017 02:30

Falling into the Night.
whisperingquill said:

\"When the summer evening
was closing its bright eye\"

That\'s a blistering line gold
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bad ass envious actually nicely done

August 2nd, 2017 01:46

A Soldier of the Great War.
Jooles said:

Loved this...
One of my favourite poets is Wilfred owen....you should check him out

August 1st, 2017 19:30

A Soldier of the Great War.
Louis Gibbs said:

War is hell indeed ... as if we need to create more of such unnecessarily. Well done, Goldie!

August 1st, 2017 08:01

A Soldier of the Great War.
burning-embers said:

Yes well done, hard to find words befitting such a thing.

August 1st, 2017 07:23



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