Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Cleansing Rain.
malubotelho said:
Beautiful picture and poem. I will try a cleansing like this next rainfall.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
malubotelho said:
Beautiful picture and poem. I will try a cleansing like this next rainfall.
August 5th, 2017 08:19
Cleansing Rain.
Night Owl said:
Lovely Goldfinch! I could almost smell the rainfall-- Beautiful wording...
August 5th, 2017 07:09
Night Owl said:
Lovely Goldfinch! I could almost smell the rainfall-- Beautiful wording...
August 5th, 2017 07:09
Cleansing Rain.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, such a nice metaphor that rain washes away our worries. I think it also washes away our sins. Beautiful writing!
August 5th, 2017 02:58
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, such a nice metaphor that rain washes away our worries. I think it also washes away our sins. Beautiful writing!
August 5th, 2017 02:58
Cleansing Rain.
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. We may moan - too hot, too cold, too wet, etc. Yet clouds can create an atmospheric feeling - dark clouds, white clouds, etc. You singin\' in the rain there? And can ya hear me singin\' in it? Meowwoo! lol.
August 5th, 2017 01:54
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. We may moan - too hot, too cold, too wet, etc. Yet clouds can create an atmospheric feeling - dark clouds, white clouds, etc. You singin\' in the rain there? And can ya hear me singin\' in it? Meowwoo! lol.
August 5th, 2017 01:54
Cleansing Rain.
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic ink - if it works I\'ll post it later.
August 5th, 2017 01:48
Michael Edwards said:
Super stuff and I love the picture - might even copy the idea in acrylic ink - if it works I\'ll post it later.
August 5th, 2017 01:48
The Undarkened House.
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Goldfinch, I sometimes wonder how much electricity we squander with all these lights on.
August 4th, 2017 13:03
FredPeyer said:
Great poem Goldfinch, I sometimes wonder how much electricity we squander with all these lights on.
August 4th, 2017 13:03
The Undarkened House.
Fay Slimm. said:
Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine all those extra lights to show the way to making an early morning cuppa eh
August 4th, 2017 05:00
Fay Slimm. said:
Morning will never be dull or dark in your house my friend - can imagine all those extra lights to show the way to making an early morning cuppa eh
August 4th, 2017 05:00
The Undarkened House.
burning-embers said:
I like the peaceful familiarity here. The feeling as the world wakes up around you.
August 4th, 2017 04:02
burning-embers said:
I like the peaceful familiarity here. The feeling as the world wakes up around you.
August 4th, 2017 04:02
The Undarkened House.
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t like dark mornings when it gets late late. Do like this though - I can relate to it. Hope pooter is sorted soon G
August 4th, 2017 02:59
Michael Edwards said:
Don\'t like dark mornings when it gets late late. Do like this though - I can relate to it. Hope pooter is sorted soon G
August 4th, 2017 02:59
The Undarkened House.
orchidee said:
Not time just yet for dark mornings, but it creeps up a minute or two each day now. A fine write Gold.
August 4th, 2017 02:02
orchidee said:
Not time just yet for dark mornings, but it creeps up a minute or two each day now. A fine write Gold.
August 4th, 2017 02:02
Walking in Space.
WL Schuett said:
Poems about journey small or long interest me well done
August 3rd, 2017 22:39
WL Schuett said:
Poems about journey small or long interest me well done
August 3rd, 2017 22:39
Walking in Space.
Heather T said:
So much peace wafting from your poem to rest in my shoulders. Lovely.
August 3rd, 2017 18:25
Heather T said:
So much peace wafting from your poem to rest in my shoulders. Lovely.
August 3rd, 2017 18:25
Walking in Space.
P.H.Rose said:
Another very very good
Poem GF60.....
I picture every word
August 3rd, 2017 13:30
P.H.Rose said:
Another very very good
Poem GF60.....
I picture every word
August 3rd, 2017 13:30
Walking in Space.
orchidee said:
Meanwhile, on the sherry - cooeee, I thought ya was literally walking in space. Did ya see E.T.? Or has he gone home. While on the sherry I have to laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does! heehee.
August 3rd, 2017 11:57
orchidee said:
Meanwhile, on the sherry - cooeee, I thought ya was literally walking in space. Did ya see E.T.? Or has he gone home. While on the sherry I have to laugh at me own jokes, in case no one else does! heehee.
August 3rd, 2017 11:57
Walking in Space.
FredPeyer said:
A very fine poem, Goldfinch, I do like all of it, especially the ending, and also the line \'To the time of the river\'s flow\'. To me that is poesy!
August 3rd, 2017 11:53
FredPeyer said:
A very fine poem, Goldfinch, I do like all of it, especially the ending, and also the line \'To the time of the river\'s flow\'. To me that is poesy!
August 3rd, 2017 11:53
Walking in Space.
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem takes us on a lovely, peaceful journey to eternity, Goldie. A fine way to start a morning. Thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2017 07:04
Louis Gibbs said:
Your poem takes us on a lovely, peaceful journey to eternity, Goldie. A fine way to start a morning. Thanks for sharing!
August 3rd, 2017 07:04
Walking in Space.
Michael Edwards said:
I read it and I was there - great descriptive writing G
August 3rd, 2017 04:42
Michael Edwards said:
I read it and I was there - great descriptive writing G
August 3rd, 2017 04:42
Walking in Space.
orchidee said:
All that on a nature walk! A fine write Goldie.
August 3rd, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
All that on a nature walk! A fine write Goldie.
August 3rd, 2017 01:55
Falling into the Night.
FredPeyer said:
As far as I am concerned Gold, you just ponder on and share these wonderful pondering results!
August 2nd, 2017 09:54
FredPeyer said:
As far as I am concerned Gold, you just ponder on and share these wonderful pondering results!
August 2nd, 2017 09:54
Falling into the Night.
Louis Gibbs said:
It would be a shame to squander a good ponder, now wouldn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Goldie!
August 2nd, 2017 07:45
Louis Gibbs said:
It would be a shame to squander a good ponder, now wouldn\'t it? Enjoyed it, Goldie!
August 2nd, 2017 07:45
Falling into the Night.
UniquelyMel48 said:
You got me picturing this and pondering too x
August 2nd, 2017 07:35
UniquelyMel48 said:
You got me picturing this and pondering too x
August 2nd, 2017 07:35
Falling into the Night.
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely images of nightfall in this read - thanks for sharing your pondering with us Gold.
August 2nd, 2017 03:39
Fay Slimm. said:
Lovely images of nightfall in this read - thanks for sharing your pondering with us Gold.
August 2nd, 2017 03:39
Falling into the Night.
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Help! We\'ll wish Summer away, what with:
* oh the nights are drawing in now
* only just under 5 months to Christmas
* it\'s all downhill now until the Shortest Day!
August 2nd, 2017 03:30
orchidee said:
A fine write Gold. Help! We\'ll wish Summer away, what with:
* oh the nights are drawing in now
* only just under 5 months to Christmas
* it\'s all downhill now until the Shortest Day!
August 2nd, 2017 03:30
Falling into the Night.
Michael Edwards said:
I like this - you certainly can\'t beat a good ponder.
August 2nd, 2017 02:30
Michael Edwards said:
I like this - you certainly can\'t beat a good ponder.
August 2nd, 2017 02:30
Falling into the Night.
whisperingquill said:
\"When the summer evening
was closing its bright eye\"
That\'s a blistering line gold
ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ excuse my language but
bad ass envious actually nicely done
August 2nd, 2017 01:46
whisperingquill said:
\"When the summer evening
was closing its bright eye\"
That\'s a blistering line gold
ππΌππΌππΌππΌππΌ excuse my language but
bad ass envious actually nicely done
August 2nd, 2017 01:46
A Soldier of the Great War.
Jooles said:
Loved this...
One of my favourite poets is Wilfred owen....you should check him out
August 1st, 2017 19:30
Jooles said:
Loved this...
One of my favourite poets is Wilfred owen....you should check him out
August 1st, 2017 19:30
A Soldier of the Great War.
Louis Gibbs said:
War is hell indeed ... as if we need to create more of such unnecessarily. Well done, Goldie!
August 1st, 2017 08:01
Louis Gibbs said:
War is hell indeed ... as if we need to create more of such unnecessarily. Well done, Goldie!
August 1st, 2017 08:01
A Soldier of the Great War.
burning-embers said:
Yes well done, hard to find words befitting such a thing.
August 1st, 2017 07:23
burning-embers said:
Yes well done, hard to find words befitting such a thing.
August 1st, 2017 07:23
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