Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Music - FIBS.
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations Goldfinch, you not only nailed the FIB coming and going, you also wrote a great poem. Need to try this one day, but am afraid there is no way it would measure up to yours.
August 12th, 2017 11:39
FredPeyer said:
Congratulations Goldfinch, you not only nailed the FIB coming and going, you also wrote a great poem. Need to try this one day, but am afraid there is no way it would measure up to yours.
August 12th, 2017 11:39
Music - FIBS.
Louis Gibbs said:
I find both form and content quite pleasing, Goldie. Very satisfying to both eye and mind. Thanks for sharing!
August 12th, 2017 07:25
Louis Gibbs said:
I find both form and content quite pleasing, Goldie. Very satisfying to both eye and mind. Thanks for sharing!
August 12th, 2017 07:25
Music - FIBS.
orchidee said:
A fine write, and good FIBS G/F. meanwhile I\'m bothering about metres, if I feel another song (hymn-poem) coming on. Did us two ever meet that Fibby guy?!
August 12th, 2017 02:03
orchidee said:
A fine write, and good FIBS G/F. meanwhile I\'m bothering about metres, if I feel another song (hymn-poem) coming on. Did us two ever meet that Fibby guy?!
August 12th, 2017 02:03
Music - FIBS.
Michael Edwards said:
Having seen some of your past postings in this form I tried my hand at it and did post the result but that was some time ago now. This encourages me to have another go. It\'s great that over the last few days or so suddenly there have been a number of postings in classical and modernist forms - great to see. Thanks for posting this gem Andy.
August 12th, 2017 01:39
Michael Edwards said:
Having seen some of your past postings in this form I tried my hand at it and did post the result but that was some time ago now. This encourages me to have another go. It\'s great that over the last few days or so suddenly there have been a number of postings in classical and modernist forms - great to see. Thanks for posting this gem Andy.
August 12th, 2017 01:39
Rioja - Acrostic.
FredPeyer said:
After reading this one I had to go get a glass of wine immediately! Nice!
August 11th, 2017 11:50
FredPeyer said:
After reading this one I had to go get a glass of wine immediately! Nice!
August 11th, 2017 11:50
My Time.
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great idea. I wish I could be like you, but it takes me about an hour after I get up, just to get my mind working. Some people are wide awake right away, others like me do take time to get going. I like to have time for myself before going to sleep.
August 11th, 2017 11:31
FredPeyer said:
Great writing, great idea. I wish I could be like you, but it takes me about an hour after I get up, just to get my mind working. Some people are wide awake right away, others like me do take time to get going. I like to have time for myself before going to sleep.
August 11th, 2017 11:31
Rioja - Acrostic.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh ANDY I always keep Rioja handy
Rioja Tinta is the best ~ Don\'t spill none down yer vest
When your feelin\' chokka ~ cure it with smooth\' RIOJA
Stands to reason ~ A Perfect Wine for every season
Thanks for slurring ~ please check my CITY GIRLS ~ BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhhhh ANDY I always keep Rioja handy
Rioja Tinta is the best ~ Don\'t spill none down yer vest
When your feelin\' chokka ~ cure it with smooth\' RIOJA
Stands to reason ~ A Perfect Wine for every season
Thanks for slurring ~ please check my CITY GIRLS ~ BRIAN
August 11th, 2017 04:19
Rioja - Acrostic.
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m a wine-waterer too. heehee. Call me the elusive Scarlet Pimpernel II. But wasn\'t he French, not Spanish?!
August 11th, 2017 02:10
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m a wine-waterer too. heehee. Call me the elusive Scarlet Pimpernel II. But wasn\'t he French, not Spanish?!
August 11th, 2017 02:10
Rioja - Acrostic.
Michael Edwards said:
A great one G - love red wine but have been keeping away from it for a few weeks with the waist in mind - I\'ve lost6lbs so seems to be working but hate the withdrawal symptons.
August 11th, 2017 01:38
Michael Edwards said:
A great one G - love red wine but have been keeping away from it for a few weeks with the waist in mind - I\'ve lost6lbs so seems to be working but hate the withdrawal symptons.
August 11th, 2017 01:38
My Time.
burning-embers said:
Thanks Goldfinch. I dont feel much like reading sentimental shlurrp poetry at the moment and i knew yours would be something different because you have a wonderful way of bringing something special out of everyday life observations. Like therapy for me just now. Excellent.
August 10th, 2017 20:13
burning-embers said:
Thanks Goldfinch. I dont feel much like reading sentimental shlurrp poetry at the moment and i knew yours would be something different because you have a wonderful way of bringing something special out of everyday life observations. Like therapy for me just now. Excellent.
August 10th, 2017 20:13
My Time.
WriteBeLight said:
Good to start everyday with the positive. Great point and poem Goldfinch!
August 10th, 2017 12:14
WriteBeLight said:
Good to start everyday with the positive. Great point and poem Goldfinch!
August 10th, 2017 12:14
My Time.
malubotelho said:
An awesome writing. So serene feeling of happy solitude. I always begin my mornings with a cup of black coffee, half arepa, and a banana. Then of for my 30 min jogging 🏃 before I start working. Today I had to run from the rain. I have a nice day ahead. I can never be so organized. My days are what they are. Love to live and read poems.thanks for sharing a piece of your day.
August 10th, 2017 10:11
malubotelho said:
An awesome writing. So serene feeling of happy solitude. I always begin my mornings with a cup of black coffee, half arepa, and a banana. Then of for my 30 min jogging 🏃 before I start working. Today I had to run from the rain. I have a nice day ahead. I can never be so organized. My days are what they are. Love to live and read poems.thanks for sharing a piece of your day.
August 10th, 2017 10:11
My Time.
Louis Gibbs said:
I whole-heartedly agree ... the first couple of hours in the morning are priceless! Thank you for this beautiful expression of their value, Goldie.
August 10th, 2017 09:05
Louis Gibbs said:
I whole-heartedly agree ... the first couple of hours in the morning are priceless! Thank you for this beautiful expression of their value, Goldie.
August 10th, 2017 09:05
My Time.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The Music of Mozart ~ La Musica de Lacrimosa
Melanacholy Morning ~ but what better way ?
To kick start another \"Ordinary Day\" !
You Michael and I ~ all early Birds
All catching a diverse Poetic Worm
Thanks ANDY ~ please sample a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread ~ and a Glass of my Chianti Classico
Much more healthy than Sausage Bacon & Eggs !
Tu Amico Inglese ~ Brian
August 10th, 2017 01:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The Music of Mozart ~ La Musica de Lacrimosa
Melanacholy Morning ~ but what better way ?
To kick start another \"Ordinary Day\" !
You Michael and I ~ all early Birds
All catching a diverse Poetic Worm
Thanks ANDY ~ please sample a bowl of Ministrone
Crusty bread ~ and a Glass of my Chianti Classico
Much more healthy than Sausage Bacon & Eggs !
Tu Amico Inglese ~ Brian
August 10th, 2017 01:48
My Time.
orchidee said:
A fine write again G/F. Me sherry and pork pies time returns each day too!
August 10th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
A fine write again G/F. Me sherry and pork pies time returns each day too!
August 10th, 2017 01:48
Melancholy.
Nicholas Browning said:
Melancholy is one of my favorite things. It\'s become more of a habit at this point, but all the same.
Thanks for this Finch.
August 10th, 2017 01:12
Nicholas Browning said:
Melancholy is one of my favorite things. It\'s become more of a habit at this point, but all the same.
Thanks for this Finch.
August 10th, 2017 01:12
Melancholy.
myself and me said:
The past sadness brewed with time is now melancholy.
August 9th, 2017 21:12
myself and me said:
The past sadness brewed with time is now melancholy.
August 9th, 2017 21:12
Melancholy.
orchidee said:
I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the battle, if I had not added water to it. Have you seen the tree where we carved \'We Woz Ere\'?!
August 9th, 2017 09:10
orchidee said:
I was only trying to help! They may have been too inebriated to win the battle, if I had not added water to it. Have you seen the tree where we carved \'We Woz Ere\'?!
August 9th, 2017 09:10
Melancholy.
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of melancholy! Well done, Goldie.
August 9th, 2017 05:00
Louis Gibbs said:
\"Sadness that has taken on lightness.\" What a splendid definition of melancholy! Well done, Goldie.
August 9th, 2017 05:00
Melancholy.
Brycycle said:
Quite liked this. Flashbacks do occur often (happy and sad).
Love the last line :)
August 9th, 2017 03:35
Brycycle said:
Quite liked this. Flashbacks do occur often (happy and sad).
Love the last line :)
August 9th, 2017 03:35
Melancholy.
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. Are whisky-watering days a melancholic memory from the past, or deep sadness of the present for you? The phantom strikes (me!). lol.
August 9th, 2017 02:11
orchidee said:
Good write G/F. Are whisky-watering days a melancholic memory from the past, or deep sadness of the present for you? The phantom strikes (me!). lol.
August 9th, 2017 02:11
Man in Orange.
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!
August 8th, 2017 18:56
Christina8 said:
Very nicely written. What a bright wake up call!
August 8th, 2017 18:56
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