Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
Followed in the Night.
Simple-Man87 said:
That was really well written.. I\'ve had a nightmare like that, a time or two
September 18th, 2017 17:49
Simple-Man87 said:
That was really well written.. I\'ve had a nightmare like that, a time or two
September 18th, 2017 17:49
Followed in the Night.
poetboy123 said:
Wow a brilliant twist, incredible Gold!
September 18th, 2017 17:34
poetboy123 said:
Wow a brilliant twist, incredible Gold!
September 18th, 2017 17:34
Followed in the Night.
orchidee said:
Cooeee, it could be me! You\'ll pinch my porkies and add water to my sherry. That\'ll teach me! heehee.
September 18th, 2017 13:42
orchidee said:
Cooeee, it could be me! You\'ll pinch my porkies and add water to my sherry. That\'ll teach me! heehee.
September 18th, 2017 13:42
Followed in the Night.
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, Goldfinch, no wonder it was published. Congratulations!
With me, the words don\'t seem to follow, we seem to more walk beside each other, sometimes holding hands, sometimes quite far away, but still somehow connected.
September 18th, 2017 13:18
FredPeyer said:
This is a great poem, Goldfinch, no wonder it was published. Congratulations!
With me, the words don\'t seem to follow, we seem to more walk beside each other, sometimes holding hands, sometimes quite far away, but still somehow connected.
September 18th, 2017 13:18
Followed in the Night.
myself and me said:
Those words that followed you right get inside of you.
September 18th, 2017 13:13
myself and me said:
Those words that followed you right get inside of you.
September 18th, 2017 13:13
Followed in the Night.
dusk arising said:
Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you? Those recent fantasy things i wrote were done exactly like that. Any story therein somehow created itself around the phrases - it wasn\'t me. But there again its not you following you home either is it...... who is this clever nay, cunning person who creeps around poeticly? Maybe its that Orchidee the single malt-teaser.
September 18th, 2017 12:44
dusk arising said:
Do you ever push the words out ahead of you and see where they take you? Those recent fantasy things i wrote were done exactly like that. Any story therein somehow created itself around the phrases - it wasn\'t me. But there again its not you following you home either is it...... who is this clever nay, cunning person who creeps around poeticly? Maybe its that Orchidee the single malt-teaser.
September 18th, 2017 12:44
Followed in the Night.
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations well deserved , a wonderful poem
September 18th, 2017 12:36
WL Schuett said:
Congratulations well deserved , a wonderful poem
September 18th, 2017 12:36
Followed in the Night.
malubotelho said:
Words are powerful. Nice writing Gold
September 18th, 2017 12:31
malubotelho said:
Words are powerful. Nice writing Gold
September 18th, 2017 12:31
Followed in the Night.
Michael Edwards said:
Did you hear any wordsteps Andy? Original and a great write
September 18th, 2017 03:42
Michael Edwards said:
Did you hear any wordsteps Andy? Original and a great write
September 18th, 2017 03:42
Followed in the Night.
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. You hearing those word\'s footsteps? It may have been me, the phantom whisky-waterer!
September 18th, 2017 01:48
orchidee said:
Good write Gold. You hearing those word\'s footsteps? It may have been me, the phantom whisky-waterer!
September 18th, 2017 01:48
Singing.
malubotelho said:
Nice write Gold. Sunday is choir day. God bless
September 17th, 2017 21:11
malubotelho said:
Nice write Gold. Sunday is choir day. God bless
September 17th, 2017 21:11
Singing.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ANDY ~ Thanks for sharing ! Love music ~ love to sing in choirs ! If we make a recording it always surprises me tht the final sound is much much better than the sum of the Parts ! At CHRISTMAS our Church Choral Group sing in Sainsbury\'s 2 hours on two separate nights an also at Seniors Homes ! Music makes the World go round. SANTITA and I have started a new FUSION on CLOTHING ~ Please add a POEM ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 17th, 2017 16:48
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
ANDY ~ Thanks for sharing ! Love music ~ love to sing in choirs ! If we make a recording it always surprises me tht the final sound is much much better than the sum of the Parts ! At CHRISTMAS our Church Choral Group sing in Sainsbury\'s 2 hours on two separate nights an also at Seniors Homes ! Music makes the World go round. SANTITA and I have started a new FUSION on CLOTHING ~ Please add a POEM ~ THANKS ~ Yours BRIAN
September 17th, 2017 16:48
Singing.
dusk arising said:
I share your taste in shirts. Actually we do have quite a bit in common. My singing has been solo into a microphone though. Yes singing is very uplifting... i do it very often for the sheer pleasure it brings to me.
September 17th, 2017 16:34
dusk arising said:
I share your taste in shirts. Actually we do have quite a bit in common. My singing has been solo into a microphone though. Yes singing is very uplifting... i do it very often for the sheer pleasure it brings to me.
September 17th, 2017 16:34
Singing.
poetboy123 said:
Ah, brilliant and to the point, nice to see you!
September 17th, 2017 14:25
poetboy123 said:
Ah, brilliant and to the point, nice to see you!
September 17th, 2017 14:25
Singing.
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one but as there are two with beards and someone on either side of them both I am still none the wiser.
September 17th, 2017 10:17
Michael Edwards said:
Nice one but as there are two with beards and someone on either side of them both I am still none the wiser.
September 17th, 2017 10:17
Singing.
WL Schuett said:
I enjoyed your poem and your choir picture , good stuff
September 17th, 2017 06:54
WL Schuett said:
I enjoyed your poem and your choir picture , good stuff
September 17th, 2017 06:54
Singing.
FredPeyer said:
Nice poem Goldfinch! And you look a lot better than I thought you would! :-)
September 17th, 2017 03:20
FredPeyer said:
Nice poem Goldfinch! And you look a lot better than I thought you would! :-)
September 17th, 2017 03:20
Singing.
orchidee said:
Do u do dreaded \'rounds\', when it seems everyone does not sing from the \'same sheet\'?!
September 17th, 2017 01:47
orchidee said:
Do u do dreaded \'rounds\', when it seems everyone does not sing from the \'same sheet\'?!
September 17th, 2017 01:47
Singing.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Off we go to do some singing again... I can\'t see any idiots in this pic! The guy with the beard on your left looks like an ex-Manager of mine. Might be him - he sings too!
It\'s true, you look like a rather distinguished church member I know. He and his wife have moved away now, but he was involved in the courts, justice, etc.
September 17th, 2017 01:46
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Off we go to do some singing again... I can\'t see any idiots in this pic! The guy with the beard on your left looks like an ex-Manager of mine. Might be him - he sings too!
It\'s true, you look like a rather distinguished church member I know. He and his wife have moved away now, but he was involved in the courts, justice, etc.
September 17th, 2017 01:46
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
myself and me said:
We are so different now from then, and the song sounds different too.
A poem and a song catch the heart. Thank you.
September 16th, 2017 17:53
myself and me said:
We are so different now from then, and the song sounds different too.
A poem and a song catch the heart. Thank you.
September 16th, 2017 17:53
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Billie Holliday ~ An amazing voice that cuts through the mind and goes straight to te heart ~ very moving ! Recorded over 70 years ago (i944) and yet still retains its Power to make GROWN MEN CRY. I give talks (mainly to over 60\'s clubs) on Jim Reeves ~ Nat king Cole ~ Dean Martin etc and often by the end of the evening every one is crying ! Music always has the Power to Move ~ BRIAN
September 16th, 2017 13:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY ~ Billie Holliday ~ An amazing voice that cuts through the mind and goes straight to te heart ~ very moving ! Recorded over 70 years ago (i944) and yet still retains its Power to make GROWN MEN CRY. I give talks (mainly to over 60\'s clubs) on Jim Reeves ~ Nat king Cole ~ Dean Martin etc and often by the end of the evening every one is crying ! Music always has the Power to Move ~ BRIAN
September 16th, 2017 13:57
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, music has the power to speak our hearts for us, to connect with our soul, like nothing else. What a gift!
September 16th, 2017 08:57
Louis Gibbs said:
Yes, music has the power to speak our hearts for us, to connect with our soul, like nothing else. What a gift!
September 16th, 2017 08:57
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, you nailed it. We look, but we don\'t see. We hear, but we don\'t listen. We touch, but we don\'t feel. Unless the heart is involved, it is for naught.
September 16th, 2017 04:20
FredPeyer said:
Goldfinch, you nailed it. We look, but we don\'t see. We hear, but we don\'t listen. We touch, but we don\'t feel. Unless the heart is involved, it is for naught.
September 16th, 2017 04:20
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
dusk arising said:
Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read your piece and listened thinking about your words. i Can only imagine how it made you feel, but for me it was quite moving. Thank you for sharing this.
September 16th, 2017 02:12
dusk arising said:
Needless to say that i\'m familiar with Billie Hilliday\'s work. I read your piece and listened thinking about your words. i Can only imagine how it made you feel, but for me it was quite moving. Thank you for sharing this.
September 16th, 2017 02:12
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
Michael Edwards said:
As we said in another stream - how many of us look at art generally - great write, great singer, great song - I\'ll listen to it again later.
September 16th, 2017 02:01
Michael Edwards said:
As we said in another stream - how many of us look at art generally - great write, great singer, great song - I\'ll listen to it again later.
September 16th, 2017 02:01
I\'ll Be Seeing You.
orchidee said:
A fine and sensitive write Gold. Sometimes things can affect us more than at other times. I mean, you would be more sensitive at the times I add water to your whisky, than when I \'m not around! heehee.
September 16th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
A fine and sensitive write Gold. Sometimes things can affect us more than at other times. I mean, you would be more sensitive at the times I add water to your whisky, than when I \'m not around! heehee.
September 16th, 2017 01:51
Hungry Ghosts
dusk arising said:
Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes into favourites... i love it!
September 15th, 2017 15:59
dusk arising said:
Oh you made me laugh again..... this is absolutely prescious mate. Goes into favourites... i love it!
September 15th, 2017 15:59
Hungry Ghosts
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55
Fay Slimm. said:
Good question -- love the reasoning in this one Goldie.
September 15th, 2017 13:55
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