Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Reaching Nirvana.
Nicholas Browning said:

Hey there Finch. Like the tone, keep it up.

August 18th, 2017 02:07

Reaching Nirvana.
Fay Slimm. said:

The road to sheer bliss and so beautifully described here Gold with both verse and picture. A delight of a read.

August 18th, 2017 01:57

Reaching Nirvana.
orchidee said:

Good write Gold. I travelled some paths less - got lost in woods, and over-shot the particular exit where I intended to emerge! Some trees are tilted over like Pisa. It\'s daft, but I hurry past those ones, thinking they are going to fall at any moment.

August 18th, 2017 01:55

Reaching Nirvana.
FredPeyer said:

Goldfinch, just had to mark this one as a favorite. If everything on that road is like you describe, you might have reached Nirvana, and I would love it if you could draw me a map!

August 18th, 2017 01:52

Dancing with Shadows.
poetboy123 said:

I\'m glad it came because this dance was music to my ears Gold!

August 17th, 2017 20:50

Dancing with Shadows.
sue.evans said:

I enjoyed this - its strange where our mind takes us when it\'s given freedom to roam!

August 17th, 2017 18:15

Dancing with Shadows.
malubotelho said:

Such lovely words. Sweet inspiration speaking to your heart.

August 17th, 2017 11:49

Dancing with Shadows.
Tony36 said:

Great write

August 17th, 2017 10:26

Dancing with Shadows.
WL Schuett said:

Cool poem Just right

August 17th, 2017 08:55

Dancing with Shadows.
orchidee said:

I wrote a poem like this too. It started: \"I lay in a darkened room / Recovering from sherries.....\"Then I did not write any more! Strange that. lol.

August 17th, 2017 08:47

Dancing with Shadows.
Louis Gibbs said:

As we all dance with the shadow-world we see. Well done, Goldie!

August 17th, 2017 08:23

Dancing with Shadows.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

VERY APT ANDY ! I have many Friends & Family ~ in your age group ~Lying in darkened rooms ~ Dancing with Nature\'s Shadows ! Every Blessing ~ DOCTOR BRIAN ! Please check my MIDDLEMAN ~ Yours BRIAN

August 17th, 2017 07:36

Dancing with Shadows.
private poet said:

Your love of nature and beauty shine through. Well written and a good springboard for my thoughts today.x

August 17th, 2017 04:35

Dancing with Shadows.
FredPeyer said:

And I dance with your beautiful poem, Goldfinch!

August 17th, 2017 03:25

Dancing with Shadows.
Michael Edwards said:

It just came and it\'s just great - I do like this Andy.

August 17th, 2017 01:58

Dancing with Shadows.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

August 17th, 2017 01:42

Dancing with Shadows.
Nicholas Browning said:

I like this a lot. The feeling it gives is similar to how it feels outside right now. Good one Finch.

August 17th, 2017 01:07

Quiet City.
Sepala Weliwitigoda said:

A lovely poem.

August 16th, 2017 21:47

Quiet City.
myself and me said:

listening to the peaceful music, reading your poem, the beautiful moment of my day.

August 16th, 2017 20:11

Quiet City.
Heather T said:

The inspiration certainly bleeds through your words with much beauty!

August 16th, 2017 20:02

Quiet City.
burning-embers said:

Aaaaaah so you\'re not a punk fan eh. Funny that, i\'ve pictured you with a lime green mohican scribing away at your poetic niche whilst twiddling the safety pins thru your nostrils. But not really. Amazed at how you create something like this out of the ether.

August 16th, 2017 19:06

Quiet City.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Santita, I am honoured.

August 16th, 2017 12:35

Quiet City.
Michael Edwards said:

If music be the food of poetry write on - and so it is with me - great write.

August 16th, 2017 10:30

Quiet City.
malubotelho said:

Wonderful piece of writing. So soft and graceful. Thanks for sharing.

August 16th, 2017 10:10

Quiet City.
Louis Gibbs said:

Music, as well as anything that stirs emotions, is a great trigger for a poem to emerge. I\'ve shared your experience, Goldie, and can appreciate this poem. Thanks for sharing!

August 16th, 2017 07:24

Quiet City.
FredPeyer said:

This is beautiful, Goldfinch. Am just glad you didn\'t hear rap music!

August 16th, 2017 02:04

Quiet City.
ummbree said:

beautiful!

August 16th, 2017 01:59

Quiet City.
orchidee said:

A fine write Gold.

August 16th, 2017 01:58

Do You Take Sugar?
Heather T said:

This just wrecked me for you, sir. I was extremely close to my maternal grandmother, and it made me think of some of the things she started to say as she got worse. We lost her to pneumonia before she got very bad. I remember the first time she forgot how to turn on the shower. Oh, I\'m just holding the both of you so close in my thoughts and prayers.

August 16th, 2017 00:48

Do You Take Sugar?
WL Schuett said:

This hits home ....

August 15th, 2017 16:42



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