Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



The Roar of Silence.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Diamond. Yes I agree ease only comes when you are relaxed and confident in what you are doing.

April 15th, 2017 07:53

The Roar of Silence.
Michael Edwards said:

Just great - a real tribute to this unheard piece.

The silent wind and string

to which I listened

in mute admiration

and eagerly awaited

the next performance

heard in silence.


April 15th, 2017 03:30

The Roar of Silence.
orchidee said:

Erm, could anyone play it? Or do you have to open and close the piano lid at certain times?

April 15th, 2017 01:53

The Roar of Silence.
Garry said:

Very good.
Have you actually seen it performed.?
Great video.
A truly bizarre idea.

April 15th, 2017 01:51

The Roar of Silence.
orchidee said:

Sings: Silence is golden....... Then I ruined it, with a very loud CCOOOOEEEE! lol.

April 15th, 2017 01:41

The Roar of Silence.
orchidee said:

Someone was singing once, and a witty remark was given: \'Is there music to that\'?! heehee. They were out-of-tune!

April 15th, 2017 01:40

The Last Station of The Cross.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WW much appreciated.

April 14th, 2017 14:13

The Last Station of The Cross.
willyweed said:

you did a grand job with this work.

April 14th, 2017 13:03

The Last Station of The Cross.
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed Great write

April 14th, 2017 07:34

The Last Station of The Cross.
WriteBeLight said:

Wonderful job.

April 14th, 2017 05:35

The Last Station of The Cross.
Fay Slimm. said:

Such a vivid reminder here of the deep and lasting sacrifice at that special time - - thank you dear friend for this posting.

April 14th, 2017 05:28

The Last Station of The Cross.
Michael Edwards said:

A stunning piece of writing - worthy of the occasion.

April 14th, 2017 02:56

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

One more comment! This does look almost cross-shaped, this poem!

April 14th, 2017 02:31

The Last Station of The Cross.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks for sharing BROTHER ! The message of EASTER is the ONLY hope for the Human Race ! In AD 33 The Lord Jesus Christ died on a Cross ~ The Just for the Unjust to restore our relationship with GOD ~ AMEN. The Stations of the Cross is a very beautiful and precious reenactment of the last days of JESUS ! Thank GOD ~ Up from the grave he AROSE ~on Easter SUNDAY ~ AMEN. Please check my Good Friday Poem ~ BRIAN

April 14th, 2017 02:30

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

It\'s a shame if some places have nothing at all for some events. Then people may not even have a choice. They have to go elsewhere.

April 14th, 2017 02:12

The Last Station of The Cross.
orchidee said:

Sensitive write. Atmospheric too - darkness at noonday. I feel we should recall the events in some way, even if not going to church, at least in our private memories. Some places don\'t observe the \'church year\' much. But it corresponds to the Old Testament Passover Festival, that they remembered then.

April 14th, 2017 02:06

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
P.H.Rose said:

I have no idea what you
Are saying in the comments
Box but I love the poem..
I\'m afraid I\'m illiterate and
Have trouble with longer
Words, my vocabulary is
A bit basic but I get along.
Spell check and predictive
Text are my savour...

April 13th, 2017 17:56

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Ephraim, much appreciated.

April 13th, 2017 08:38

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Brian. FIBS are great fun to do but the supyllsble count can be frustrating sometimes.

April 13th, 2017 08:05

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks BROTHER ~ great strucure and great content ~ linking the celestial bodies (Sun & Moon) with love ! As I sometimes croon to ANGELA \"Night & Day you are the only one\" I\'ve tried a CARBONARA must also try a FIBONACCI ~ Thanks BRIAN

April 13th, 2017 07:53

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you Tony, much appreciated.

April 13th, 2017 07:47

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Tony36 said:

Great write

April 13th, 2017 07:29

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you WBL romance is never far away in our lives.

April 13th, 2017 07:04

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
WriteBeLight said:

Very romantic write Goldfinch :)

April 13th, 2017 06:30

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Michael Edwards said:

Great piece - you have encouraged me - I\'ve made a note of the form and will try it out sometime.

April 13th, 2017 02:09

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
Garry said:

Very neatly done. Cleverly constructed and flows well. Great ideas.
But, i mean really... A poem structured on the Fibonacci sequence. Jeez I thought I was wierd .

April 13th, 2017 01:52

From the Sun to the Moon - FIBS.
orchidee said:

Good write, and those syllables thought out. Erm.... and then it rained?! No, Porchi, rain is not in this poem! heehee.

April 13th, 2017 01:45

Neighbour Watching
P.H.Rose said:

Ha ha... Absolutly
Spot on GF60

April 12th, 2017 15:53

Neighbour Watching
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Phil, coffee of course is also important. Many is the time when I have sat on the top of a hill watching natures glory around me drinking coffee.

April 12th, 2017 12:44

Neighbour Watching
MendedFences27 said:

Our tongues are going to melt away as we adapt to the external mode of communication. I\'ve seen my Millennials all four of them sitting on the sofas texting one another, not a sound of verbal utterance. My wife and I sat out today and watched the hawks hunting, so much more interesting than life with the Kardashians. Cell phones and all the other et ceteras of electronics, are murdering the language and the culture. I must admit, though, the wife and I did have our coffees. Nice one, this. Loved it.- Phil A.

April 12th, 2017 11:41



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