Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60
From Corncrake to God.
WL Schuett said:
Wow really fine art , this is high poetry
September 11th, 2017 09:23
WL Schuett said:
Wow really fine art , this is high poetry
September 11th, 2017 09:23
From Corncrake to God.
orchidee said:
A more gloomy comment (oh no!). Yet in some places we might think God\'s gone on holiday, or he\'s got bored with our mutterings and mumblings - not everywhere though! Maybe he went on holiday BECAUSE of his boredom with our dull services?! Unhappily, I know some such places.
September 11th, 2017 06:42
orchidee said:
A more gloomy comment (oh no!). Yet in some places we might think God\'s gone on holiday, or he\'s got bored with our mutterings and mumblings - not everywhere though! Maybe he went on holiday BECAUSE of his boredom with our dull services?! Unhappily, I know some such places.
September 11th, 2017 06:42
From Corncrake to God.
orchidee said:
A super write and experience. Glad to have been of help by way of reminder. The second part of this very nearly fits a (Scottish) tune of \'Ye banks and braes\'. It goes with words by John Bell - from Iona. The hymn is \'We cannot measure how you heal\'.
September 11th, 2017 06:39
orchidee said:
A super write and experience. Glad to have been of help by way of reminder. The second part of this very nearly fits a (Scottish) tune of \'Ye banks and braes\'. It goes with words by John Bell - from Iona. The hymn is \'We cannot measure how you heal\'.
September 11th, 2017 06:39
From Corncrake to God.
Michael Edwards said:
I was with you on this journey - some write Andy
September 11th, 2017 03:18
Michael Edwards said:
I was with you on this journey - some write Andy
September 11th, 2017 03:18
The Rules of Cricket.
Jooles said:
Aww I don\'t have a clue about cricket but I do love your work
September 10th, 2017 17:23
Jooles said:
Aww I don\'t have a clue about cricket but I do love your work
September 10th, 2017 17:23
The Rules of Cricket.
myself and me said:
Thank God, both are out at the end. My mind still spin. I would rather watch you play with the words than watching the game.
September 10th, 2017 17:11
myself and me said:
Thank God, both are out at the end. My mind still spin. I would rather watch you play with the words than watching the game.
September 10th, 2017 17:11
The Rules of Cricket.
WL Schuett said:
What\'s Cricket? Just kidding but it\'s true I haven\'t a clue what\'s going on , but I do like the ole in and out , lol
September 10th, 2017 06:51
WL Schuett said:
What\'s Cricket? Just kidding but it\'s true I haven\'t a clue what\'s going on , but I do like the ole in and out , lol
September 10th, 2017 06:51
The Rules of Cricket.
dusk arising said:
OH okey cokey cokey, oh okey cokey cokey ..... I creased with laughter at this.......
Next job? .... explain the off-side rule!
Excellent really enjoyed it and its going into my favourites.
September 10th, 2017 06:47
dusk arising said:
OH okey cokey cokey, oh okey cokey cokey ..... I creased with laughter at this.......
Next job? .... explain the off-side rule!
Excellent really enjoyed it and its going into my favourites.
September 10th, 2017 06:47
The Rules of Cricket.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The INS & OUTS of Cricket are a closed book to ALL Americans and other Foreigners who have not had the benefit of being part of the British Empire ! I went to a Grammar School so we always played according to WISDEN always wore Whites and knew where Silly Mid-on was and also how to Bowl a Maiden Over. My Father was an excellent Amateur Cricketer and we both reported on Cricket for the Local Rag ! If we had Cricket in the Olympics it would guarantee the UK another GOLD ! Please check my Fusion on Where would you like to live ? Yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 03:11
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
The INS & OUTS of Cricket are a closed book to ALL Americans and other Foreigners who have not had the benefit of being part of the British Empire ! I went to a Grammar School so we always played according to WISDEN always wore Whites and knew where Silly Mid-on was and also how to Bowl a Maiden Over. My Father was an excellent Amateur Cricketer and we both reported on Cricket for the Local Rag ! If we had Cricket in the Olympics it would guarantee the UK another GOLD ! Please check my Fusion on Where would you like to live ? Yours BRIAN
September 10th, 2017 03:11
The Rules of Cricket.
orchidee said:
Erm yes - either fully explained, or clear as mud! A fine write G/F.
September 10th, 2017 01:51
orchidee said:
Erm yes - either fully explained, or clear as mud! A fine write G/F.
September 10th, 2017 01:51
The Rules of Cricket.
Michael Edwards said:
So simply explained Andy - really grateful - even as a Brit I have difficulties with things like silly mid on (if he\'s silly why is he playing) and leg before wicket (well of course it is).
This really gave me a chuckle - much appreciated.
September 10th, 2017 01:42
Michael Edwards said:
So simply explained Andy - really grateful - even as a Brit I have difficulties with things like silly mid on (if he\'s silly why is he playing) and leg before wicket (well of course it is).
This really gave me a chuckle - much appreciated.
September 10th, 2017 01:42
The Artist Within.
dusk arising said:
Nice one Goldfinch. I find that i have a serious, a sentimental and a stupid muse. Hopefully theres one or the other lurking around my fingertips when i fire up my laptop but not always.
September 9th, 2017 18:30
dusk arising said:
Nice one Goldfinch. I find that i have a serious, a sentimental and a stupid muse. Hopefully theres one or the other lurking around my fingertips when i fire up my laptop but not always.
September 9th, 2017 18:30
The Artist Within.
myself and me said:
The muse for me is on vacation now. Hope she will return soon.
Nice compose.
September 9th, 2017 14:11
myself and me said:
The muse for me is on vacation now. Hope she will return soon.
Nice compose.
September 9th, 2017 14:11
The Artist Within.
Nicholas Browning said:
Eternal is the harmony,
If only the hand can grasp it.
Well done.
September 9th, 2017 11:19
Nicholas Browning said:
Eternal is the harmony,
If only the hand can grasp it.
Well done.
September 9th, 2017 11:19
The Artist Within.
poetboy123 said:
A feeling we are all too familiar with and you\'ve done a spectacular job of expressing it here Gold!
September 9th, 2017 10:26
poetboy123 said:
A feeling we are all too familiar with and you\'ve done a spectacular job of expressing it here Gold!
September 9th, 2017 10:26
The Artist Within.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for a elegant POEM ~ Beautiful in FORM & FUNCTION ! one\'s MUSE can be fickle but this Morning I had no problem and the 14 lines in Some Enchanted Evening just oozed from my quill. Mainly due to the fact that my True Love Angela was lying sensuously sated at my side \" Love is indeed a Many Splendored Thing\" Yours BRIAN
September 9th, 2017 09:47
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks ANDY for a elegant POEM ~ Beautiful in FORM & FUNCTION ! one\'s MUSE can be fickle but this Morning I had no problem and the 14 lines in Some Enchanted Evening just oozed from my quill. Mainly due to the fact that my True Love Angela was lying sensuously sated at my side \" Love is indeed a Many Splendored Thing\" Yours BRIAN
September 9th, 2017 09:47
The Artist Within.
Louis Gibbs said:
The muse can be elusive, and the artist can be unfocused, but always the two can meet again in the void. I really appreciate the way you relate this, Goldie!
September 9th, 2017 08:25
Louis Gibbs said:
The muse can be elusive, and the artist can be unfocused, but always the two can meet again in the void. I really appreciate the way you relate this, Goldie!
September 9th, 2017 08:25
The Artist Within.
WL Schuett said:
Words to be an artist by I relate , cool poem
September 9th, 2017 07:12
WL Schuett said:
Words to be an artist by I relate , cool poem
September 9th, 2017 07:12
The Artist Within.
Mugsdaddy said:
The sleeper must awaken the dreamer must dream the cow must give the most delicious cream we all have a purpose it\'s good you found yours .
M
September 9th, 2017 03:02
Mugsdaddy said:
The sleeper must awaken the dreamer must dream the cow must give the most delicious cream we all have a purpose it\'s good you found yours .
M
September 9th, 2017 03:02
The Artist Within.
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Well, I don\'t write anything some days. Other days I may write 1,2, or 3 poems. So when I post my poems here, it does not necessarily mean I have written them the same day. Oohh was Kalliope around before 1066?
September 9th, 2017 01:38
orchidee said:
A fine write G/F. Well, I don\'t write anything some days. Other days I may write 1,2, or 3 poems. So when I post my poems here, it does not necessarily mean I have written them the same day. Oohh was Kalliope around before 1066?
September 9th, 2017 01:38
The Artist Within.
Michael Edwards said:
So forever may it be - so true and a good read Andy.
September 9th, 2017 01:35
Michael Edwards said:
So forever may it be - so true and a good read Andy.
September 9th, 2017 01:35
Star Trek Now.
myself and me said:
The development of new tech is so fast, beyond our imagination. A lot of things we saw in movie has come true today. We can hardly imagine what life will look like ten years later.
Nice poem.
September 8th, 2017 20:21
myself and me said:
The development of new tech is so fast, beyond our imagination. A lot of things we saw in movie has come true today. We can hardly imagine what life will look like ten years later.
Nice poem.
September 8th, 2017 20:21
Star Trek Now.
Louis Gibbs said:
The future, the past, the now ... all the same ... \"simultaneous time\" ... such a difficult concept to grasp. Yet some visionaries, as you speculate in this poem, have obviously tapped into ... as I\'m sure we all will be able to as we evolve.
A thought-provoking piece, Goldie!
September 8th, 2017 10:39
Louis Gibbs said:
The future, the past, the now ... all the same ... \"simultaneous time\" ... such a difficult concept to grasp. Yet some visionaries, as you speculate in this poem, have obviously tapped into ... as I\'m sure we all will be able to as we evolve.
A thought-provoking piece, Goldie!
September 8th, 2017 10:39
Star Trek Now.
poetboy123 said:
Are you referring to the pen created by UT students that detects cancer? Regardless, though I haven\'t seen Star Trek, still loved this write!
September 8th, 2017 10:17
poetboy123 said:
Are you referring to the pen created by UT students that detects cancer? Regardless, though I haven\'t seen Star Trek, still loved this write!
September 8th, 2017 10:17
Star Trek Now.
WL Schuett said:
Nice writing but not a Trekkie so I probably don\'t get it like some do
September 8th, 2017 09:12
WL Schuett said:
Nice writing but not a Trekkie so I probably don\'t get it like some do
September 8th, 2017 09:12
Star Trek Now.
Christina8 said:
Thought provoking write. It certainly is interesting what technology they thought we\'d have by now. Loved this.
September 8th, 2017 06:59
Christina8 said:
Thought provoking write. It certainly is interesting what technology they thought we\'d have by now. Loved this.
September 8th, 2017 06:59
Star Trek Now.
dusk arising said:
All great sci-fi writers are visionaries. Their huge visions are fantastic and remain so such as time machines, star ships, invasions from space, until they happen... men on the moon etc.
Will Daleks make good poets or exterminate, eradicate, annihilate?
Nice writing Goldfinch.
September 8th, 2017 05:00
dusk arising said:
All great sci-fi writers are visionaries. Their huge visions are fantastic and remain so such as time machines, star ships, invasions from space, until they happen... men on the moon etc.
Will Daleks make good poets or exterminate, eradicate, annihilate?
Nice writing Goldfinch.
September 8th, 2017 05:00
Star Trek Now.
Michael Edwards said:
Almost scary looking into the future but then I still hardly use my mobile and when I do attempt to do so it almost always wants charging.
September 8th, 2017 03:26
Michael Edwards said:
Almost scary looking into the future but then I still hardly use my mobile and when I do attempt to do so it almost always wants charging.
September 8th, 2017 03:26
Star Trek Now.
Frank Prem said:
Ah, Trekkies! A wonderful nostalgia, and, as with most good Sci fi, a capacity to \'feel\' the inevitable future.
Enjoyed GF. Cheers.
September 8th, 2017 03:13
Frank Prem said:
Ah, Trekkies! A wonderful nostalgia, and, as with most good Sci fi, a capacity to \'feel\' the inevitable future.
Enjoyed GF. Cheers.
September 8th, 2017 03:13
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