Comments received on poems by Goldfinch60



Raindrop.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks ANDY ~ \"GOD touched the CLOUDS formed the RAIN from the RAIN formed the SEA ~ from the SEA formed the CLOUDS to give us life abundantly !\" Planet Earth is a very wet Planet and the abundance of liquid water (H2O) is one of the main reasons it is a living planet. The ambient temperature of 16C and the energy of the Sun drives the Water Cycle which is an important design factor to keep Planet Earth functional & fertile. Thanks for your anthropomorphic poem love it ! Please check my Numbers Poem & Fruit Fusion ~ BRIAN

May 4th, 2017 04:21

Raindrop.
orchidee said:

A fine write. Sounds like King Solomon - some of his words. he said, though not his exact words, that life goes on in cycles. I suppose he only had an Old Testament / Old Covenant view, as he called everything vanity - things going round in circles!
Yet the symbol for infinity has no beginning or end - that sideways thingy like an \'8\'. And we\'re both very old - of an infinite age. Since 1066 anyway! heehee.

May 4th, 2017 02:24

Raindrop.
Myjoyisfull79 said:

Beautifully detailed! as I read, the visual played in my mind

May 4th, 2017 01:46

Island of Acceptance.
Jane Frye said:

A fine read. Thank you.

May 3rd, 2017 22:00

Jazz was Born.
Jane Frye said:

Like your style. Good subject too.

May 3rd, 2017 21:59

Island of Acceptance.
Jane Frye said:

A fine read. Thank you.

May 3rd, 2017 21:50

Island of Acceptance.
WriteBeLight said:

Like the metaphor seeing something that looks promising, but as you get closer the wrinkles appear and it is not for you :)

May 3rd, 2017 15:52

Island of Acceptance.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thank you for your comments O, you are so right.

May 3rd, 2017 11:53

Island of Acceptance.
Michael Edwards said:

A dream voyage to a magical destination only found in dreams - now there\'s a poem starter for ten - well expressed -

May 3rd, 2017 04:10

Island of Acceptance.
swingline said:

Let your search not be limited to this world . Just a tiny speck of the cosmos . Reach for the stars as we are already stardust once removed from home .

May 3rd, 2017 01:58

Island of Acceptance.
orchidee said:

Erm, will you have to sail around the world to find it? And will you find it on the trip round the world? A fine write.

May 3rd, 2017 01:53

Covenant Arc.
Michael Edwards said:

Yet another great write.

May 2nd, 2017 11:42

Covenant Arc.
Goldfinch60 said:

Thanks Orchi. I saw it yesterday and saw the complete arc which is very unusual.

May 2nd, 2017 09:09

Covenant Arc.
orchidee said:

Ahh, you saw a rainbow - just when I was recently including it in one of my poems! A fine write!

May 2nd, 2017 08:28

Covenant Arc.
Tony36 said:

Great write

May 2nd, 2017 07:01

Jazz was Born.
Mandi said:

I Love it ❤

May 2nd, 2017 03:11

Covenant Arc.
felio123 said:

Thank you for this

May 2nd, 2017 02:01

Walking Into The Wood.
Fay Slimm. said:

A lovely read and so pleased you have a wood to walk in - such a magical place is found among trees.

May 1st, 2017 11:58

Walking Into The Wood.
orchidee said:

Cooeeee G/F, you home now? Or still in that wood?! heehee.

May 1st, 2017 08:58

Walking Into The Wood.
Tony36 said:

Great write. Living on a farm I take many walks in the woods a lot

May 1st, 2017 06:56

Walking Into The Wood.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GOOD MORNING ANDY ~ The place where I worship is in the heart of Nature ~ Touched by the hand of the LORD ~ The trees of the forest are like pipes of an organ ~ And the wind plays a Hallelujah chord ! I live very close to a Wood with a Lake and I walk there every day ~ either before or after work ! Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN. Please check my poem and Fruit Fusion ~ Thanks B.

May 1st, 2017 05:14

Walking Into The Wood.
Michael Edwards said:

No woodland as such near me but surrounded in countryside where we can get lost. On a walk through meadows and by a stream yesterday we saw a multitude of different wild flowers now showing their colours - magical. I fully empathise with this poem which sums it all up so eloquently.

May 1st, 2017 02:35

Walking Into The Wood.
orchidee said:

There\'s another thing - nature, animals, etc. It makes it even more monstrous when we think of cruelty to animals. There\'s loads of good too though - animal charities, etc.

May 1st, 2017 01:55

Walking Into The Wood.
orchidee said:

The world is enough - enough bad things happening - to make us want to go back into the wood. Know what you mean. Wwe\'ve a wood / nature reserve fairly locally. I often miss the exit I want - not on purpose! I get lost.
I might stand on a bridge over a river a while, or stop along the river, to see a duck and her chicks, etc.

May 1st, 2017 01:54

Awakening.
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Noted! I buy very few things for myself - my wife will attest to this. An exception was made however and I opened just a few minutes ago a handsome, leather bound notebook with the word \"abundance\" stamped on an interior fold. I have sworn to carry and use it with \"vim and vigour.\"

April 30th, 2017 14:22

Acceptance.
vvnrose said:

To have this love together and acceptance of life is so beautiful. All the best.

April 30th, 2017 13:36

Island of Words and Music.
Dave poet said:

Sounds celestial this island of yours. Nice write

April 30th, 2017 06:30

Acceptance.
Aamina said:

That\'s a lovely poem. It can be hard to accept hardships . It\'s a lovely write and I hope everything goes well for you and your wife x

April 30th, 2017 04:35

Acceptance.
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS ANDY ~ FOR THE HUMBLE ACCEPTANCE OF QUE SERA SERA ~ shown in this very moving poem. Godliness WITH contentment is great gain ~ and you and your Lady have both ! Your are always on my Prayer List and for this week I have promoted you ~ and your Lady ~ to the TOP ! Every Blessing BRIAN ~ Please check my Peace Poem and my Fruit Fusion ~ Thanks B.

April 30th, 2017 03:47

Acceptance.
Michael Edwards said:

A humbling poem which illustrates the strength you have in each other - you have my utmost respect and I will be thinking about you as you face this together.

April 30th, 2017 01:53



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