Comments received on poems by orchidee



That\'s too Weird!
Saxon Crow said:

Just a hint of water to unlock the flavour of whiskey. Gin is gin.

To be fair you\'ve brought it all upon yourself. (I always knew they were guinea pigs)

May 13th, 2022 02:50

That\'s too Weird!
Neville said:


You know I like it when you decide to deviate, dont\'cha .. I completely forgot today was Friday .. let alone Friday the thirteenth .. one day seems to roll into another when one decides to take a few days off to recuperate from a vicious period of on call ................... hardly slept a wink last night and back to the old grindstone in 25 minutes or so ........ Neville :)


May 13th, 2022 02:35

That\'s too Weird!
blacksparrow79 said:

This is funny. Enjoyed the offbeat rhythm coming back to those final lines! Made me giggle! good write!

May 13th, 2022 02:25

Heavenly Help
arqios said:

Was it meant the be The King instead of He King S1L2?
Wedding hymn and battle cry! Resounding. Would love to worship in a service that uses these hymns. /Rik.

May 13th, 2022 02:05

Heavenly Help
Distant View said:

We could all do with some heavenly help sometimes.

May 12th, 2022 11:10

Heavenly Help
Saxon Crow said:

Sounds like a scene from Jurassic park!

May 12th, 2022 07:54

Heavenly Help
Goldfinch60 said:

You did scare off the enemy but you couldn\'t scare off KP.

Andy

May 12th, 2022 01:55

Heavenly Help
orchidee said:

This story goes on to say that they went out to battle singing and praising the Lord.
There\'s a legend that I was among them, and my singing scared off the enemy! heehee. Probably true.

May 12th, 2022 01:53

Doom And Gloom - KP Days
Goldfinch60 said:

You were warned Orchi! That hymn \' Fight the good fight\' that was chosen for your wedding should have told you and also when she came down the aisle on her witches broom should also have shown you her ways.

May 12th, 2022 00:23

Doom And Gloom - KP Days
Saxon Crow said:

Does KP give you sauce Orchi?

May 11th, 2022 08:11

Relationship Renewed
Rocky Lagou said:

A wonderful refresher Orchi! Your formatted poems truly cast light! Much love!

May 10th, 2022 09:13

Relationship Renewed
Saxon Crow said:

And I\'m holding back......

May 10th, 2022 02:48

Simplicity Serenity
Neville said:


it all reads so very complicated to me sir .................................. Neville :)

May 10th, 2022 01:09

Simplicity Serenity
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

May 10th, 2022 00:48

Shepherd Scene
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

May 9th, 2022 00:12

Shepherd Scene
Bella Shepard said:

Such a lovely, pastoral feel to this poem. The comfort and security of the shepherd and his sheep. That we will always be watched over and loved.

May 8th, 2022 14:13

Shepherd Scene
Fay Slimm. said:

Good write on what being a sheep can mean dear Orchi.

May 8th, 2022 04:53

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (10)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

May 8th, 2022 01:07

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (10)
Bella Shepard said:

Comfort and hope, a wonderful combination, we need it more. Lovely write.

May 7th, 2022 13:54

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (10)
Jerry Reynolds said:

Well written, Orchidee.


May 7th, 2022 10:29

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (10)
Nicholas Browning said:

AAHHHHHHHGHHGHGFHGH YOU USED THE WORD \"BEREFT\"!

Awesome sauce is awarded to this man by order of the Peaky Blinders.

What a wonderful thing it would be,
To know strife no more; or uncertainty.

May 7th, 2022 03:26

Christ the Friend of Sinners
Goldfinch60 said:

good one Orchi.

May 7th, 2022 00:51

Christ the Friend of Sinners
Accidental Poet said:

And what better friend to have than Jesus? 😀

May 6th, 2022 12:15

Christ the Friend of Sinners
Rocky Lagou said:

Wonderful Orchi! Loving the \"E\'en\" you used, I adore the archaic style. Makes me think of \"ne\'er\" and \"thee.\" All beautiful!


May 6th, 2022 09:11

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (9)
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

May 6th, 2022 00:24

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (9)
Neville said:



now that\'s what I call formal ..

May 5th, 2022 08:09

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (9)
Nicholas Browning said:

That\'s one heck of an elaborate name. Really getting to this Old English sky comma stuff. Know what they would\'ve called me back in the day? A \"ne\'er do well\".

May 5th, 2022 01:45

Formal Funerary Prayers Series (9)
Saxon Crow said:

But never lead us to premiere sin!

May 5th, 2022 01:45

Hope Of Help
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

May 5th, 2022 00:32

Hope Of Help
ChrisLyn🕊 said:

✨✨once again a good poem orchidee

May 4th, 2022 11:00



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