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I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 2
Neville said:


This is one of those tales I recall being read aloud during Sunday school .. Lazarus and his resurrection if indeed that is what it was .. is quite a tale innit.... I liked todays offering orchidee ....

August 17th, 2020 02:25

I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 1
Goldfinch60 said:

So why didn\'t he save Joyce!!!

August 16th, 2020 23:49

I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 1
FineB said:

A great write Orchidee.

The Lord is indeed the resurrection in our lives.

Keep writing and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 16th, 2020 13:53

I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 1
Neville said:


Ooh err... I reckon there\'s gonna be trouble ... roll on Monday and part two .. thats wot I say............. :)

August 16th, 2020 03:13

I AM The Resurrection And The Life - Part 1
orchidee said:

I don\'t often put in speech marks, as it can make poems too \'crowded\', I find.
But I have here, so hopefully we can clearly see who is speaking, and when.

August 16th, 2020 02:22

Wholesome Waiting
Goldfinch60 said:

good one Orchi.

August 16th, 2020 00:13

Wholesome Waiting
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

GOOD SABBATH UNCLE STEVE ! Love the HYMN ~ one of my School Hymns ! Close my Eyes and its Bell V 7 *My Salvation & Honour - depend on God ! He is my Mighty Rock & Refuge ~ AMEN ! Thnaks for sharing !

Blessings to You & Your Popular Pup
Spirit Love - Angela - Brian - Smokey Cat ! ! !

August 15th, 2020 10:53

Wholesome Waiting
Neville said:


I guess because I have a thing about always being early.. I sometimes struggle when kept waiting.. but and it is a big BUT ... for somethings it is wholly necessary and write....... Nice one too ................... Neville :)

August 15th, 2020 06:01

Enemy Emancipation
FineB said:

Hi Orchidee,

A good powerful write.

God is at his most strongest at work in us when we are under enemy attack.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 15th, 2020 03:18

Enemy Emancipation
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 15th, 2020 00:04

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
FineB said:

Hi Orchidee,

A brilliant write ✍.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 14:03

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 1
FineB said:

A beautiful write ✍ Orchidee.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

August 14th, 2020 14:02

Enemy Emancipation
Neville said:

the having of enemies is not recommended and when or wherever possible , I would propose setting the free .. but with some caution since once bitten, twice shy...

I like how you seem to have kept the olde terminology and used it to good effect....

... Neville

August 14th, 2020 02:38

Prominent Praise
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 13th, 2020 04:15

Prominent Praise
Neville said:


I know the saying closer my god to thee.. or summat like.. but my idea of prominent praise is when I climbed to the top of Glastonbury Tor and danced a little embu or moving prayer in thanks of something very dear... and I dont mean expensive :)

Neville

August 13th, 2020 02:08

Prominent Praise
orchidee said:

I went out of sequence a bit - verse 3 slightly not rhyming. I realised I only had 7 lines per stanza, not 8 lines.
Also - Verse 4: What rhymes with \'strength\' and \'length\'? I have used \'praise\' instead here.

August 13th, 2020 02:00

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Michael Edwards said:

You are indeed dear Orchi. a good shepherd that is - or is Fido a Shepherd or a German - eeergh !

August 12th, 2020 16:22

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 1
Crowns4Christ said:

great job orchi can\'t wait for pt.2

August 12th, 2020 09:20

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Crowns4Christ said:

great write orchi,we all need to trust in the lord and believe that he always has our backs especially in our times of need

August 12th, 2020 09:10

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Neville said:


Ah\' the shepherd song... You sure that was not Dr. Doolittle Orchidee..

August 12th, 2020 04:10

I AM The Good Shepherd - Part 2
Goldfinch60 said:

Good words Orchi but as you know I am no longer a believer.

Andy

August 12th, 2020 02:21

Quenching Quest
Michael Edwards said:

You on the Corona again Orchi?

August 11th, 2020 11:04

Quenching Quest
Neville said:


a well crafted seasonal poem my friend.. and my thirst, second and third have all been dutifully quenched :)

August 11th, 2020 02:32

Quenching Quest
Fay Slimm. said:

A good use of words and texts here Orchi.

August 11th, 2020 02:32

Quenching Quest
Goldfinch60 said:

Very good write Orchi.

Andy

August 11th, 2020 02:23

Merry.............
dusk arising said:

Leave it out Fido.... I\'ve seen ya cock ya leg up and rattle the tinsel..... no wonder there\'s so many gifts of perfume under the tree each year.


August 10th, 2020 09:53

Salvation Sharings
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Monday Uncle Steve ~ Thnaks for another Great Hymn ~ Tune & Words ! AMEN Thnaks also of reminding us of the TRUTHS in Psalm 69 !

I will praise God\'s name in Song
And Gloriy him with Thanksgiving ~ AMEN

Blessings to You & Your Persecuted Pooch
Spirit Love ~ Brian & Angela & Smokey ! ! !
I am sending you a note re (CON) FUSIONS !
Can you please add a Poem on STYLE to
our Latest Fusion & I will tell you how to write one !

August 10th, 2020 09:46

Salvation Sharings
dusk arising said:

\"By his mercies i shall live\" well lucky you Orchidee, tell that to the children of famine, flood, disease, disability.... all of which are controlled by your omnipotent god.

August 10th, 2020 06:06

Salvation Sharings
Neville said:


Sharing is good for the soul .. and smiled upon by those who follow any faith... and even those of none....

well penned my friend :)

August 10th, 2020 04:06

Salvation Sharings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

August 10th, 2020 02:43



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