Comments received on poems by orchidee
Space For Grace
dusk arising said:
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?
June 22nd, 2019 18:05
dusk arising said:
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?
June 22nd, 2019 18:05
Space For Grace
FineB said:
Hello Orchidee.
A lovely poem and so true.
Tis always the challenge of every Christian to find time for God every dau especially with our busy lives.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:03
FineB said:
Hello Orchidee.
A lovely poem and so true.
Tis always the challenge of every Christian to find time for God every dau especially with our busy lives.
Keep writing FineB
June 22nd, 2019 16:03
Space For Grace
dusk arising said:
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?
June 22nd, 2019 14:38
dusk arising said:
re first verse..... and if/when he comes...just how does that happen.... ?
June 22nd, 2019 14:38
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Suresh said:
Well we got wheat for the bread and fruits for jam, what else do we need....
June 22nd, 2019 07:44
Suresh said:
Well we got wheat for the bread and fruits for jam, what else do we need....
June 22nd, 2019 07:44
Space For Grace
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work but is \'thorough\' the right word in the last line?
June 22nd, 2019 01:57
Michael Edwards said:
Fine work but is \'thorough\' the right word in the last line?
June 22nd, 2019 01:57
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
dusk arising said:
Where is this above place then?
June 21st, 2019 12:06
dusk arising said:
Where is this above place then?
June 21st, 2019 12:06
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Michael Edwards said:
Well done Faith but a funny name for her son.
June 21st, 2019 07:42
Michael Edwards said:
Well done Faith but a funny name for her son.
June 21st, 2019 07:42
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Fay Slimm. said:
Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges Orchi - thank you for sharing the need for humility to see good results
June 21st, 2019 03:49
Fay Slimm. said:
Faith can certainly turn into wise ways of dealing with life\'s challenges Orchi - thank you for sharing the need for humility to see good results
June 21st, 2019 03:49
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wisdom fill everyone with the Peace of the World.
June 21st, 2019 03:08
Goldfinch60 said:
May that wisdom fill everyone with the Peace of the World.
June 21st, 2019 03:08
Faith Produces Wisdom - James Series (5)
Neville said:
tis certainly wise if we are talking fruits, to have your five a day.... N
June 21st, 2019 02:33
Neville said:
tis certainly wise if we are talking fruits, to have your five a day.... N
June 21st, 2019 02:33
Remembrance Recollections
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening ANGELA HERE ! Thanks UNCLE STEVE for sharing another GREAT HYMN ! *I am trusting Thee Lord Jesus* : Morning or Evening (Its 8am Friday here !). Sorry you didnt get more takers for your EUCHARIST ! In the Churches in NZ the Communion Services are the same as in SPAIN - THE UK and everywhere in the World (variations with DENOMINATION) : The Catholic Eucharists are identical in the Tridentine (Latin) Mass and very very similar in all languages. Wherever we are in the WORLD : Brian & I attend COMMUNION (even when we are not familiar with the Vernacular) and we are always made very very welcome ! We consider it is very important to *Celebrate the Lords Supper* at least once per week to keep us NEAR THE CROSS : AMEN. It was instituted in order that : when we do it : We focus on JESUS and his ATONEMENT on the CROSS. Please keep up the GOOD WORK of sharing JESUS on MPS every single DAY : AMEN
In BRIANS CHURCH (Evangelical) they have a Portable Communion Set and the Elders (and Decons) can take it out to *Shut Ins* Brian & I have been involved in this Ministry : It is very very humbling !
Blessing & Joy for YOU & FIDOMO !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 20th, 2019 14:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening ANGELA HERE ! Thanks UNCLE STEVE for sharing another GREAT HYMN ! *I am trusting Thee Lord Jesus* : Morning or Evening (Its 8am Friday here !). Sorry you didnt get more takers for your EUCHARIST ! In the Churches in NZ the Communion Services are the same as in SPAIN - THE UK and everywhere in the World (variations with DENOMINATION) : The Catholic Eucharists are identical in the Tridentine (Latin) Mass and very very similar in all languages. Wherever we are in the WORLD : Brian & I attend COMMUNION (even when we are not familiar with the Vernacular) and we are always made very very welcome ! We consider it is very important to *Celebrate the Lords Supper* at least once per week to keep us NEAR THE CROSS : AMEN. It was instituted in order that : when we do it : We focus on JESUS and his ATONEMENT on the CROSS. Please keep up the GOOD WORK of sharing JESUS on MPS every single DAY : AMEN
In BRIANS CHURCH (Evangelical) they have a Portable Communion Set and the Elders (and Decons) can take it out to *Shut Ins* Brian & I have been involved in this Ministry : It is very very humbling !
Blessing & Joy for YOU & FIDOMO !
Love in the Spirit ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 20th, 2019 14:07
Remembrance Recollections
Suresh said:
Well no seat at the table for me again -
June 20th, 2019 12:33
Suresh said:
Well no seat at the table for me again -
June 20th, 2019 12:33
Remembrance Recollections
dusk arising said:
Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?
June 20th, 2019 07:56
dusk arising said:
Come on Orchidee, fess-up, what is this you need forgiving for?
June 20th, 2019 07:56
Remembrance Recollections
Neville said:
I always make a point of remembering the fallen on Remembrance Sunday.. everything else, I regret, I forget..... tis not an age thing....... I respect the message you get across here tho.... Neville
June 20th, 2019 03:10
Neville said:
I always make a point of remembering the fallen on Remembrance Sunday.. everything else, I regret, I forget..... tis not an age thing....... I respect the message you get across here tho.... Neville
June 20th, 2019 03:10
Remembrance Recollections
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Orchi but as you know my faith in the Christian church has gone so I will not be at that table.
June 20th, 2019 02:37
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write Orchi but as you know my faith in the Christian church has gone so I will not be at that table.
June 20th, 2019 02:37
Peaceful Providence
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Love the HYMN and video ! BRIAN tells me Good Poeming requires an infinite vocabulary ! repetition of a line is GOOD but not of a WORD ! I would suggest DECREASE for the last WORD in V 5. You could delete AND to preserve the METRE : OK By removing CEASE in line 4 you can now leave CEASE in line 2 : which i like because it creates Internal Rhyme which ameliorates FLOW. I have been attending a Poetry Class here (dont tell Brian !) where they instruct us in the fine art of POETIC STRUCTURE ! This is why BRIAN & I produce so many PANTOUMS etc etc. I love BRIANS POEM today It is a masterpiece of 15 Rhyming Couplets : awesome !
Thanks for caring & sharing & uplifting !
Blessings for YOU & HOUND DOG
Yours Tout Suite ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 19th, 2019 03:37
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks UNCLE STEVE : Love the HYMN and video ! BRIAN tells me Good Poeming requires an infinite vocabulary ! repetition of a line is GOOD but not of a WORD ! I would suggest DECREASE for the last WORD in V 5. You could delete AND to preserve the METRE : OK By removing CEASE in line 4 you can now leave CEASE in line 2 : which i like because it creates Internal Rhyme which ameliorates FLOW. I have been attending a Poetry Class here (dont tell Brian !) where they instruct us in the fine art of POETIC STRUCTURE ! This is why BRIAN & I produce so many PANTOUMS etc etc. I love BRIANS POEM today It is a masterpiece of 15 Rhyming Couplets : awesome !
Thanks for caring & sharing & uplifting !
Blessings for YOU & HOUND DOG
Yours Tout Suite ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 19th, 2019 03:37
Peaceful Providence
Neville said:
what about..... desist
I enjoyed this poem and the challenge
June 19th, 2019 02:16
Neville said:
what about..... desist
I enjoyed this poem and the challenge
June 19th, 2019 02:16
Peaceful Providence
orchidee said:
Can you help? In verse 5 I have use \'cease\' twice. I need another word for \'noise stopping\' (in line 2).
I have already used \'stills\' in line 1.
Suppose I could use \'stops\' as one option.
June 19th, 2019 01:53
orchidee said:
Can you help? In verse 5 I have use \'cease\' twice. I need another word for \'noise stopping\' (in line 2).
I have already used \'stills\' in line 1.
Suppose I could use \'stops\' as one option.
June 19th, 2019 01:53
Fret Not To Do Evil
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE STEVE ~ Great Hymn ~ Great Tune ~ Great Poem all about Seeking ~ Choosing ~ Being Guided & Witnessing ~ LOVE IT ~ AMEN ! Please check Our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks
Blessings & Joy to YOU & FIDO
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 18th, 2019 10:52
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS UNCLE STEVE ~ Great Hymn ~ Great Tune ~ Great Poem all about Seeking ~ Choosing ~ Being Guided & Witnessing ~ LOVE IT ~ AMEN ! Please check Our BALANCED DIET ~ Thanks
Blessings & Joy to YOU & FIDO
Yours as always ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 18th, 2019 10:52
Fret Not To Do Evil
Neville said:
there is a green hill far away he sat and watched from his ancient wobbly throne....
June 18th, 2019 04:06
Neville said:
there is a green hill far away he sat and watched from his ancient wobbly throne....
June 18th, 2019 04:06
Fret Not To Do Evil
orchidee said:
A fluster I said, not a hot flush! Though I am very old, and may need to look out for them! lol.
June 18th, 2019 02:07
orchidee said:
A fluster I said, not a hot flush! Though I am very old, and may need to look out for them! lol.
June 18th, 2019 02:07
Ageless Advocate
dusk arising said:
In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\".
and i contemplated one of your lines \'so more in you we shall grow\'.
June 17th, 2019 10:14
dusk arising said:
In my mirror today i saw your title - an \"ageing avocado\".
and i contemplated one of your lines \'so more in you we shall grow\'.
June 17th, 2019 10:14
Ageless Advocate
Neville said:
I\'m as old as my tongue and a little bit older than my teeth...... but it means nowt without direction...... Neville
June 17th, 2019 04:40
Neville said:
I\'m as old as my tongue and a little bit older than my teeth...... but it means nowt without direction...... Neville
June 17th, 2019 04:40
Ageless Advocate
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here : Thanks : UNCLE STEVE : for sharing & caring about all of US on MPS ! We all need an ADVOCATE and a PARACLETE to infil us & guide us day by DAY ! Love the HYMN & POEM ! My POEM today *POSITIVITY* is about the NINE FRUIT of the SPIRIT and the THREE Scout Laws in NZ. Such lovely KIDS in the Video ! Its 10:25 pm here so getting ready for BED after a hard days work in the CLINIC & Aquatherapy Pool. l need the Nine Fruit of the Spirit all day in MY JOB : AMEN
Love to You & FIDO (does He like WATER ?)
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 17th, 2019 04:30
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA here : Thanks : UNCLE STEVE : for sharing & caring about all of US on MPS ! We all need an ADVOCATE and a PARACLETE to infil us & guide us day by DAY ! Love the HYMN & POEM ! My POEM today *POSITIVITY* is about the NINE FRUIT of the SPIRIT and the THREE Scout Laws in NZ. Such lovely KIDS in the Video ! Its 10:25 pm here so getting ready for BED after a hard days work in the CLINIC & Aquatherapy Pool. l need the Nine Fruit of the Spirit all day in MY JOB : AMEN
Love to You & FIDO (does He like WATER ?)
Yours as always ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡🧡 + 🧡
June 17th, 2019 04:30
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