Comments received on poems by orchidee



Preparation Ponderings
orchidee said:

In verse 3 about ritual and rite, I mean it in the sense of not overdoing outward things.
We could be so busy observing rites that miss the main purpose of focusing on the Lord.
Not that ritual is wrong, but I saw one over-doing it. He will be worn out before the service even starts! He was waving arms about, bowing here and there, kneeling every couple of minutes, kissing service books, etc. Much more of that and I would have gone potty!

August 12th, 2018 01:33

Victory Voices
Goldfinch60 said:

Did you mention Alleluia?

August 11th, 2018 23:57

Victory Voices
LaurašŸŒ» said:

Orchi,

We have Christmas in July...
So why not Easter in August!šŸ˜Š

ALLELUIA

A victorious one indeed!

~Laura~

August 11th, 2018 10:33

Victory Voices
Heartwriter said:

A great write! Thanks for sharing.

August 11th, 2018 06:18

Victory Voices
Michael Edwards said:

Did you run out of Alleluias - there isn\'t one in the title. I can send you one in the post if you want. Fine write nonetheless.

August 11th, 2018 02:08

Victory Voices
orchidee said:

Will ya hear me among the multitude? You\'ll know it\'s me - two cats fighting, yes?! heehee.

August 11th, 2018 01:45

Noticing The Needy
Gary Edward Geraci said:

A noble calling we have in raising our concerns (and taking concrete actions) for the poor and needy among us including those living in high dollar, gated communities driving Bentleys and Benzes. And you do exactly that in this poem; well done Orchidee.

August 10th, 2018 23:33

Mercy Mildness
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Interesting to see this peculiar form of ā€œevenā€ where your using it as ā€œeā€™enā€. Youā€™ve got to love these licenses and liberties we take when writing verse! Yes, we are destined for eternity with our Lord who is most merciful...

August 10th, 2018 22:42

Discipleship Daily
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Right on target Orchidee and a clarion call - your poem indeed - that knows no epoch or season.

August 10th, 2018 22:28

Discipleship Daily
w c said:

Such inspiration. You have reached me and give me assurance that He made the ultimate sacrifice for me, a pitiful sinner.

August 10th, 2018 17:00

Discipleship Daily
Michael Edwards said:

Does he get double bubble on Sundays?

August 10th, 2018 16:19

Discipleship Daily
Goldfinch60 said:

The eternal way is there for us all Orchi.

August 10th, 2018 07:56

Discipleship Daily
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks STEVE for a very DROLL ORGAN RECITAL ~ BUT a very apt message about discipleship. \"If any MAN or WOMAN will be my Disciple ~ let them deny themselves (that\'s the first hard bit) take up their cross (that\'s the second hard bit) and follow me (is that really necessary when we have our OWN PLAN mapped out ?) Who would choose to be a disciple ? JUDAS committed suicide and most of the other 11 were martyred ~ do I have a choice ? Thanks for your daily challenge BRIAN & ANGELA

August 10th, 2018 07:46

Discipleship Daily
FineB said:

Thanks Orchidee,

A beautiful poem.

Daily discipleship with the Lord is a challenge but essential to one\'s spiritual development, walk and journey with the Lord and Christ.

Keep writing
FineB

August 10th, 2018 03:28

Discipleship Daily
orchidee said:

I gotta pay this organist guy overtime ya know. I keeps digging him out! heehee.

August 10th, 2018 02:21

Mercy Mildness
Fay Slimm. said:

\"Christ in us\" - a wonderful phrase - love this hymn-poem Orchi dear friend.

August 9th, 2018 16:34

Mercy Mildness
w c said:


Christ is such a blessing for me a wretched sinner. Your poems remind me I am saved. Thank you

August 9th, 2018 15:24

Mercy Mildness
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

GREAT HYMN UNCLE STEVE ~ And as you have given us the WORDS a chance for KARIKROAKY ! Love the poem which reminds us of the BLESSINGS JESUS brings to our everyday lives and is also our Assurance of Eternal Life with HIM in HEAVEN ~ AMEN Your loving NEPHEW ~ BRIAN

August 9th, 2018 10:36

Mercy Mildness
Goldfinch60 said:

Indeed Orchi. Good write.

August 9th, 2018 02:51

Noticing The Needy
Michael Edwards said:

I\'m needy - got any sherry - do you remember that Roman lass came over with Hadrian - Bulbous Boobus - she worked on the wall for a while. She liked Sherry.

August 8th, 2018 14:16

Noticing The Needy
Heartwriter said:

Although we can\'t help all the needy. We can do our part. Great write!

August 8th, 2018 09:37

Noticing The Needy
Goldfinch60 said:

The needy in our streets today are getting more numerous. One came into our Church one Thursday morning while I was there and I had a very good conversation with him for about half an hour and he seemed to appreciate that a great deal, it didnā€™t even cost me a cup of coffee as he had bought that when he first came in. If we had known we would not have charged him anyway.

August 8th, 2018 08:00

Noticing The Needy
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks UNCLE STEVE: Angela here. Your lovely Hymn reminded me that sometimes all we can give is a KISS & a CUDDLE and a cup of cold water in the NAME of JESUS. When Im in the UK I do buy the BIG ISSUE and if someone is BUSKING I always give them something. If someone is just sitting there looking helpless & stoned I pass them by. They could be FRUIT PICKING! I support the YMCA, Night Shelters & Street Pastors & the SOS Bus etc. Thanks for caring love ANGELA XXXX There are Street Beggars in Auckland but mostly People we would regard as Unemployable (for a plethora of factors) in the UK. NZ is a Welfare State and they do care for the Elderly & Disabled & Mentally ill etc. I have never seen a MAORI begging! Fortunately in the N Island it does not get too cold in the Winter for \"Rough Sleepers\".

August 8th, 2018 05:18

Noticing The Needy
Fay Slimm. said:

So many are the needy today dear Orchi - a lovely and caring prayer which readers will appreciate is written from your warm heart.

August 8th, 2018 03:18

Noticing The Needy
dusk arising said:

And long may that light play upon you.
Tough indeed when a relative is needy. There are more than monetary ways to help. Being poor and needy tears at one\'s dignity.

August 8th, 2018 02:21

Noticing The Needy
orchidee said:

Sadly, a close relative is homeless. I see him in town sometimes. I have put a picture of town and canal, as the homeless are among the needy. Though to be wise in whether we give them actual money or not.

August 8th, 2018 02:00

Firm Foundation
Heartwriter said:

A great write!! Thanks for sharing!

August 7th, 2018 05:06

Firm Foundation
sylviasearcher said:

It could be a new hymn.
I love hymns.

There\'s something so awakening about them.

August 7th, 2018 03:13

Firm Foundation
Michael Edwards said:

I looked in too - well writ O

August 7th, 2018 03:05

Firm Foundation
onepauly said:

my father suffered more then
jesus Christ on the cross.
he is my savior.

sorry

August 7th, 2018 02:30



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