Comments received on poems by orchidee



Peace Placements
Michael Edwards said:

Like the metre - great work O

February 28th, 2018 03:28

Peace Placements
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one yet again Orchi.

February 28th, 2018 03:14

Priest, Judge, King Prophecy
FredPeyer said:

Well done, orchie. This one looks like it was not easy to write.

February 26th, 2018 19:08

Priest, Judge, King Prophecy
Fay Slimm. said:

A wonderful summary of the journey our Lord had to take to reach his true destiny - thanks for the informative stanzas dear Orchi.

February 26th, 2018 12:52

Communion Commitment
Michael Edwards said:

Bread, wine, sherry - no pork pies? - of all the Churches I\'ve visited I\'ve never seen a menu

February 26th, 2018 01:32

Communion Commitment
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write Orchi.

February 26th, 2018 01:29

Communion Commitment
FredPeyer said:

Bread and wine, ever asked yourself why they don\'t serve sherry in Church?

February 25th, 2018 03:53

Flame Of Faith
FredPeyer said:

Faith is all you need. In your case, faith in your God, for others it may be faith in themselves, or faith in whatever they believe.
Oh, nearly forgot, you need love too!

February 25th, 2018 03:25

Flame Of Faith
Goldfinch60 said:

The Light is always there.

February 25th, 2018 02:00

Compassionate Charis (grace)
FredPeyer said:

Well done (again), Orchie! We\'ve got some quiet hills here. They gotta be quiet, being thousands of miles away from the noise and action of the \'real\' world (meaning mainland USA).

February 24th, 2018 14:28

Flame Of Faith
orchidee said:

Thanks Laura, thanks Brian.

February 24th, 2018 07:08

Flame Of Faith
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

THANKS STEVE ~ Love organ music ~ love this one ~ very soothing ! Love the poem and its SUBJECT about our inadequacy and God\'s adequacy for any situation ! A promise we all need to cherish ! I\'m on the BUS this morning ~ please check ~ Yours BRIAN

February 24th, 2018 04:13

Flame Of Faith
orchidee said:

We can hide maybe at times, behind \'we\' and \'us\', though it includes I, me, myself. That\'s one and the same person. There is not three of me!

February 24th, 2018 03:18

Wholly Holy
Michael Edwards said:

Sadly I guess the wicked will always be with us - fine work O.

February 22nd, 2018 03:28

Wholly Holy
Laura🌻 said:

A great write, Orchi!
Thank you for the reminder to sift out the wicked and deal with them!
Enjoyed the read,

~Laura~

February 22nd, 2018 03:26

Wholly Holy
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, may all the wicked be dealt with.

February 22nd, 2018 02:47

Deity Designings
FredPeyer said:

Orchie, and blessings to you too!

February 21st, 2018 10:36

Philadelphia Prosperities
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write, that worship will strengthen all the time.

February 21st, 2018 03:11

Philadelphia Prosperities
orchidee said:

A lot of this is in symbolic language. I don\'t pretend to understand it all, though I aim to keep the poem in simple language. The hymn in the clip is also from Revelation - Chapter 7. You singing it with dignity, as it says? The only undignified singing is mine. heehee.

February 21st, 2018 02:59

Deity Designings
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks STEVE ~ A tonic for TUESDAY ~ I\'m off to work with a sing in my step ! Love the JEWISHNESS of this Tune and your Poem ~ Good to read at a BAR MITZVAH ! When our Liverpool Choir sang \"The God of Abraham Praise\" (in our Blue Robes and the Girls with Blue Hats) we did a Barber Shop Shuffle ~ great tune to slow ~dance to ! There is not enough Dance~Worship in our Churches ~ we need a bit more Whoopi Goldberg ! Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN.

February 20th, 2018 03:42

Deity Designings
Goldfinch60 said:

Blessings to all.

February 20th, 2018 03:21

Patient Persuals
Gary Edward Geraci said:

Nice write Orchidee. I live in a small city in Texas, USA called Temple. We pronounce it it Tem pull. So following closely your rhyme selections I was slightly thrown by the pair: “Temple” and “Call.” But as I try to recreate a British accent in my mind “Temple” is not the problem; it’s the way you and I would pronounce the word “call”. I believe you pronounce it “cull” which would rhyme quite well with Temple!

February 19th, 2018 23:54

21 again?!
FredPeyer said:

I\'ll send over some pretty hula girls to get you leied!!! And before you get too excited, \'leied\' doesn\'t mean what you might think it means, but you do end up with a beautiful birthday flower lei!
Hau\'oli la hanau (Happy Birthday)!

February 19th, 2018 11:30

Patient Persuals
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks STEVE ~ I love College Choirs always FRESH & INNOCENT ! Love \"Now the Day is Over \" not sung much now ~ nice choral number ~ excellent poetry ! Love your Poetic Paraphrase on P 27 ~ Love the surety in the last doublet \"This the word \"On Him wait\" ~ He will help ~ NOT LATE ~ AMEN\" Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN

February 19th, 2018 06:26

Patient Persuals
Goldfinch60 said:

Your patience will not be tried as he is always with you.

February 19th, 2018 04:19

21 again?!
Goldfinch60 said:

Happy Birthday young man, one with a zero in front of it eh. I have that to look forward to this year.
May there be many more years with zero at the end to come.

February 19th, 2018 01:05

21 again?!
dusk arising said:

Glass raised to you sir this jurassic weekend. Didnt we meet in the neolithic comparing cave paintings?
Fine fun writing.

p.s. I\'m one of the brigade on here who won\'t make comments when you include religious items in your work (which is neither a criticism nor apology).

February 18th, 2018 21:58

Wisdom\'s Workings
FredPeyer said:

I guess, orchie, YOU could have used some of that wisdom BEFORE you married KP!

February 18th, 2018 13:52

21 again?!
Laura🌻 said:

Orchi,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY!🎁
...and thank you for
all your great postings
which I enjoy very much!

~Laura~

February 18th, 2018 10:51

Omniscient Observations
FredPeyer said:

Orchie, a fine poem. Love the ending. Don\'t know though if my thoughts are always pure!

February 18th, 2018 06:43



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