Comments received on poems by orchidee



A Childlike Faith
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

September 21st, 2023 01:46

Spirit And Song
orchidee said:

This is a slower pace version of the hymn. There\'s one where they sing at about 500mph. Apparently the fast version is the correct speed.

September 21st, 2023 01:40

A Childlike Faith
Neville said:



this is a fine hymn poem in 6.5.6.5.

September 20th, 2023 05:52

A Childlike Faith
Doggerel Dave said:

It may just be that over time you have gathered that I\'m not much into religion, prayers or God,
But there\'s something really simple and, clear which got to me with this one.
Enjoyed very much, orchi.

September 20th, 2023 04:53

A Childlike Faith
Teddy.15 said:

Is there such a thing? Childlike faith? 💖

September 20th, 2023 02:27

Emotions Expressed
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

Andy

September 20th, 2023 01:15

Emotions Expressed
sorenbarrett said:

Wrath never helped me just got me into a lot of trouble. Try to think that others just do the best they can with what they have to work with (which is not much at times) Pity for others works better for me.

September 19th, 2023 08:55

Emotions Expressed
Neville said:



it is never a good idea to hide your true emotions .. it can cause so much trauma to the self and to others who may otherwise struggle to read you .. Neville


September 19th, 2023 05:37

Emotions Expressed
Teddy.15 said:

Here is some emotion for you 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 💖

September 19th, 2023 04:11

Emotions Expressed
LIZ said:

I rebuke wrath! Very nice piece!!! Where you you been Steven?

September 19th, 2023 03:42

Emotions Expressed
Bobby O said:

The power of envy as suggested in the 5th commandment.

September 19th, 2023 02:26

Emotions Expressed
BlessedbyGod said:

Great piece Steven!!

September 19th, 2023 02:19

Emotions Expressed
orchidee said:

Ahh, another of my wedding hymns to KP - the woe certainly, maybe danger too! lol.

September 19th, 2023 01:58

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Goldfinch60 said:

Glad to see the pork pies back Orchi.

Andy

September 19th, 2023 00:53

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Bella Shepard said:

I\'m laughing and trying to type at the same time. Help! I can\'t stop and it\'s all your fault. \"Pork, pork and more pork\" could have been a Monty Python sketch, on par with \"Spam, spam and spam\". You did it my friend, you made my day, and I ain\'t had my day made in a long time. Thank you!

September 18th, 2023 13:59

Of Mice And Pork Pies
orchidee said:

The pies, the pies!
Oh, I meant, The bells, the bells! Just call me Quasimodo. lol.

September 18th, 2023 10:53

Of Mice And Pork Pies
BlessedbyGod said:

PIES!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
PPPIIIIIEEEESSSSS!!!!!!!!🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

September 18th, 2023 09:49

Of Mice And Pork Pies
sorenbarrett said:

Rubbish can be good You just read my poem. As to those pork pies why not combine it with the story and have mice pies?

September 18th, 2023 08:13

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Doggerel Dave said:

Yeh, well you are getting brave....VC on the way if you continue to serve up more of this codswallop....Champion effort there Sir Orchi NS; haven\'t made the VC yet - go with all your might....

September 18th, 2023 04:30

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Neville said:



I enjoyed the respite considerably sir

September 18th, 2023 03:37

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Teddy.15 said:

LOL well now I really miss home. LoL 🤣 I haven\'t had a pork pie for years, although I prefer sausage rolls lol 🤣 but now you got me thinking pie and mash oh yes. LoL oh orchidear what have you done to me.lol 💖

September 18th, 2023 02:26

Of Mice And Pork Pies
Christina8 said:

You are silly! A great write Orchi!

September 18th, 2023 02:26

Salvation Sure
Goldfinch60 said:

That mystery may never be solved - it may not have happened.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 00:59

Slippery Slanderings
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

September 18th, 2023 00:57

Bold Battlers
Goldfinch60 said:

I put my armour on when I attack the pyracantha bush in my garden Orchi.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 00:56

A Bit Dry - Ramblings
Goldfinch60 said:

You could always go back to writing about pork pies once more Orchi.

Andy

September 18th, 2023 00:54

Prayer Petitioning
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi

September 18th, 2023 00:53

Justice Judgement
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

September 18th, 2023 00:53

Chosen in Christ
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one to your wedding song Orchi.

September 18th, 2023 00:52

Salvation Sure
Bella Shepard said:

What a beautiful poem of unity dear Orchi, would that we could make it be.

September 17th, 2023 11:36



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