Comments received on poems by orchidee



Sea Story
Jerry Reynolds said:

A fine piece, Orchi.

November 12th, 2022 13:43

Sea Story
Bella Shepard said:

The stormy sea of life! Well done dear friend. words to give us comfort.

November 12th, 2022 13:05

Sea Story
hzugman said:

Nicely done (again), O

November 12th, 2022 11:41

Sea Story
Doggerel Dave said:

Thanks so much for the hymn \'For those in peril on the sea\', orchi.. .Of all the hymns I knew during my Sunday School years, before I faded away, this has stayed with me. Having just heard it again now, it still drags me in...
As a tribute, your piece covers it nicely.

November 12th, 2022 05:06

Sea Story
orchidee said:

I did a poem of the same title previously I think, but these are different words here.

November 12th, 2022 03:28

Heavenly Help
Fay Slimm. said:

A fine read as a reminder dear Orchi.

November 11th, 2022 13:59

Heavenly Help
arqios said:

As we Remember, we call to mind how we need above all else divine aid.

November 11th, 2022 04:49

Heavenly Help
orchidee said:

A \'new\' hymn in the video - phew! Well, 1973. That\'s new-ish for me!

November 11th, 2022 03:33

Big Foot
Goldfinch60 said:

Fido is our messenger but where was he at Hastings in 1066.

Andy

November 11th, 2022 02:18

Big Foot
J.H.Byron-Nuel said:

This a great whimsical piece. And I liked the video especially the guitar part. I have a Fido but he is a real dog and his name is Harley. He tries; when I lose my way, to lead me right. That is literally and spiritually


November 10th, 2022 23:08

Big Foot
Bella Shepard said:

Dear Orchi, you put me in mind of Wallace and Gromit. Gromit, a well read pooch, does seem to keep Wallace on the straight and narrow. I\'m know that Fido does the same for you. I can picture the two of you by the fire; pipe, slippers, contentment. This was so much fun my friend, I just smiled all the way through. I have to say though, that I think you are far wittier than Fido!

November 10th, 2022 14:10

Big Foot
Crystal Hope said:

This is a clever story. I enjoyed your writing :)

November 10th, 2022 13:24

Big Foot
hzugman said:

Shock the neighbors and take the imaginary dog on an imaginary walk but use a real dog leash. Nice work O.

November 10th, 2022 12:21

Big Foot
Doggerel Dave said:

Don\'t give yourself a lashing orchi - nobody\'s prefect (Fido, I\'m referring to).

Great video selection - thank you.

November 10th, 2022 06:17

Big Foot
arqios said:

Big foot, big shoe! And sock.

November 10th, 2022 04:24

Presence Perceived
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.



November 10th, 2022 02:47

Presence Perceived
Bella Shepard said:

I truly enjoyed the beautiful video that accompanies this lovely poem. Very nicely done dear friend.

November 9th, 2022 16:51

Presence Perceived
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice orchidee it reminds me a great deal of Psalms, one of the more beautiful books in the Bible.

November 9th, 2022 16:45

Presence Perceived
hzugman said:

Very nicely done.

November 9th, 2022 15:01

Presence Perceived
Dr. Soma said:

I want to learn the format of your written poems. Good writing, dear poet.

November 9th, 2022 08:36

Presence Perceived
arqios said:

They that live by the sword thus by the sword shall die. How apt! Cheers orchi.

November 9th, 2022 03:53

Gospel Givers
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

November 9th, 2022 02:21

Gospel Givers
Bella Shepard said:

Lovely verse, beautiful musical accompaniment, truly enjoyed dear friend.

November 8th, 2022 14:58

Dwelling Delights
Goldfinch60 said:

Good one Orchi.

November 8th, 2022 02:06

Dwelling Delights
Bella Shepard said:

Another wonderfully inspiring write my friend, worship is in our hearts no matter where the body may be.

November 7th, 2022 14:35

Dwelling Delights
sorenbarrett said:

A hymn indeed. Be careful they will soon draft you to write these for the church. Very nice

November 7th, 2022 10:09

Dwelling Delights
Doggerel Dave said:

Thought from your title that this might conceivably be about having a roof over one\'s head. Alas, no such luck....

November 7th, 2022 03:36

Praises Prepared
sorenbarrett said:

A true hymn of praise. I am glad to see you pointed out the the formal format. I have trouble with formalities and often don\'t notice them. Maybe that makes me autistic. Nevertheless, I do appreciate them and the work they require. Very nice

November 6th, 2022 08:53

Praises Prepared
arqios said:

The kenosis and incarnation are the most wondrous of all divine acts because involved the greatest form of compassion and grace. Thanks orchi!

November 6th, 2022 06:48

Praises Prepared
orchidee said:

Yes, my first attempt of using this hymn\'s format for my \'hymn book\', after all this time.

November 6th, 2022 03:25



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