Comments received on poems by Caring dove



Soft sky missing the clouds
Poetic Licence said:

Its about feeling comfortable and safe and sometimes to get those feelings you have to move, lovely write

March 13th, 2025 10:14

Soft sky missing the clouds
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful.

March 13th, 2025 09:49

Soft sky missing the clouds
Tony36 said:

Excellent write

March 13th, 2025 09:20

Soft sky missing the clouds
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I love this, my friend. Quite creative. I absolutely adore the lines: \"The soft sky is missing the clouds, wrote their colour onto a piece of peaceful paper\". The creativity of those lines deliver and keep one reading; the rest of the poem lives up with rich imagery and really sparks thought. Well done one this! Sometimes the best poems come to us randomly. Glad you followed the muse! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 13th, 2025 07:54

Soft sky missing the clouds
sorenbarrett said:

Very nice and I guess that feeling at home is most important. A lovely write

March 13th, 2025 07:43

Flower and tree
Goldfinch60 said:

Those flowers bring such colour to our world Yellow Rose.

Andy

March 13th, 2025 01:48

Flower and tree
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderful imagery, my friend. Well done! πŸ–€πŸ¦β€β¬›

March 12th, 2025 22:16

Flower and tree
sorenbarrett said:

A most comfortable image created in this poem. It presents a surrealistic view that paints a most colorful and vivid picture in the mind. Very nice

March 12th, 2025 12:26

Flower and tree
Poetic Licence said:

Probably feeling the protection of the tree as well, lovely write

March 12th, 2025 10:43

Purple
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Wonderfully thought-provoking with beautiful imagery. Oh...and the color purple is perfection in my book. Well done, friend! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 5th, 2025 02:08

Purple
Poetic Licence said:

How we wonder what it\'s like to view and experience the world through someone else\'s eyes, would it be better or would be worse, I enjoyed reading this lovely write

March 4th, 2025 16:10

Purple
sorenbarrett said:

Ah to be something we are not and even more something we do not know. A wonderful metaphor for what would it be like to be someone else and to walk in their shoes, to experience their joys, their pain and sorrow to see the world through another set of eyes. Lovely

March 4th, 2025 11:34

Tree and bluebell
Cassie58 said:

That little bluebell may feel small, but what a light she shines in a dark world. Have a beautiful day.

March 4th, 2025 08:12

Tree and bluebell
Goldfinch60 said:

May that brightness shine in your life CD.

Andy

March 4th, 2025 03:07

Tree and bluebell
Tristan Robert Lange said:

It\'s easy to feel small in this world, let alone this universe. But, what of it? Sometimes, small is okay. If we pull away from the tree to the sky, we\'ll eventually see the tree is pretty small too! Such wonderful metaphor that really got me thinking. Wonderful poem, my friend. πŸŒΉπŸ‘

March 3rd, 2025 17:15

Tree and bluebell
orchidee said:

A fine write dove.

March 3rd, 2025 11:44

Tree and bluebell
Tony36 said:

Love it

March 3rd, 2025 10:45

Tree and bluebell
sorenbarrett said:

A wonderful metaphor and well cast to realize that we don\'t see the whole picture and to not judge but to rely on what we believe and accept ourselves for who we are. Very nice

March 3rd, 2025 10:05

Distance
Goldfinch60 said:

You will never be lonely CD, we will always be here.

Andy

February 27th, 2025 02:56

Distance
Cassie58 said:

Loneliness is a curse Caring dove. I know how you struggle at times. Hope you have better days and soon. Your poem tells me you aren’t having an easy time. Take care.

February 27th, 2025 02:35

Distance
Tristan Robert Lange said:

I would imagine it does, my friend. Hoping better days and feelings are ahead for you. Wonderful expression, as always! πŸŒΉπŸ‘

February 26th, 2025 22:40

Distance
sorenbarrett said:

Loneliness the theme for this poem. There is a feeling of isolation and being removed. Sad

February 26th, 2025 15:16

Trapped
Goldfinch60 said:

Those caterpillars my deserve more Yellow Rose but they become those magnificent butterflies.

Andy

February 22nd, 2025 03:00

Trapped
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

February 21st, 2025 19:06

Trapped
Tristan Robert Lange said:

Butterflies will never be without caterpillars...but do all caterpillars get to be butterflies? This poems is profoundly sad, raw, and honest. Wonderfully expressive, my friend. Yes, caterpillars deserve more. Sorry you are feeling this way. β€οΈβ€πŸ©ΉπŸ€—

February 21st, 2025 11:25

Trapped
sorenbarrett said:

Nice and the implication is that metamorphosis will come. A heartfelt write that many can identify with

February 21st, 2025 08:53

Trapped
Cassie58 said:

That β€˜s an unpleasant feeling to experience Caring dove. Butterflies are lovely but I also think they are fragile. Confidence is gift. All creatures deserve to be valued. A sad poem to read. I hope you have a better day today.



February 21st, 2025 07:00

Buttercup
Thomas W Case said:

Beautiful work. You bring it to life.

February 18th, 2025 11:36

Buttercup
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful words Yellow Rose, I am sure she will get to that place.

Andy

February 17th, 2025 02:17

Buttercup
Cassie58 said:

It’s very therapeutic allowing your mind to drift. Sky gazing is my cuppa tea. Lovely imagery here Caring Dove. Hope you are having a peaceful day.

February 16th, 2025 13:41

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