Comments received on poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)



Pink butterfly or line of a rainbow
Neville said:

I really wish I had penned the following words ..

\"a part of a rainbow moves to the blues of another place

travelling to balance by golden smiling sands

she sits one part of a whole
in a new place\" ..

Neville ..................... πŸ¦‹πŸ³οΈβ€πŸŒˆπŸ¦‹


July 31st, 2023 12:58

Blue
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful imagery
if blue and jazz music had words
they would read something like
your poem, I think..
thank you! dear Poet
a soothing read

July 31st, 2023 03:38

A buttercup sits on green grass
L. B. Mek said:

\'leaves live , leaves laugh
somewhere beneath her friendly feet lives the unseen , the unnoticed
and those greens that sensitively sit in cushions
maybe just maybe hold so much more
the world of lighthearted leaves leaves swaying in the breeze\'

\'little buttercup sits on grass
yet really , truly there is so much more than the grass
feeling is what counts sometimes\'

\'She feels the leaves are truly there
even if there simply in the distance
Singing on the tree
for others to see\'
just so beautiful, dear graceful Poet
(I read and learn)


July 31st, 2023 03:34

Blue
peto said:

I always associate blue with sadness
So was good to see the blues tied in to this
Keep em coming Violet
Turned blue to gold

July 31st, 2023 02:10

Blue
Bella Shepard said:

You have used blue in such an artistic way to evoke the feeling of this poem. Beautifully worded dear friend, hope that bright and beautiful blues\' are on your horizon.

July 30th, 2023 14:38

Blue
LIZ said:

Awwww this is beautiful! And yes, we all have those days. It\'s ok. Let it all out. Kisses for you 😘 πŸ’•

July 30th, 2023 13:39

Blue
Teddy.15 said:

Yes I felt the blue, such is a wonderful thing that you can share with others makes it better, we all have days like this especially us girls as hormones can sometimes play havoc I hear this very much and you are never alone. πŸ’–

July 30th, 2023 12:05

A buttercup sits on green grass
orchidee said:

A fine write V. I see them in patches, so not usually just one on its own.

July 30th, 2023 02:02

A buttercup sits on green grass
Bella Shepard said:

You inspire us all, to listen and see so much more in this natural world. Beautiful use of color in bringing the buttercup, the leaves the grass to life. How much we miss if we just walk past it all, staring straight ahead. I loved it!

July 29th, 2023 14:43

A ladybird sits safely on a window
Bella Shepard said:

Here in the states, we call them ladybugs, but I think that ladybird describes the delicacy of these beautiful little creatures so much better. Your love of nature shines through in this charming poem dear friend, simply to notice it makes a day better. Thank you!

July 28th, 2023 13:26

A ladybird sits safely on a window
Neville said:


🐞
quite simply beautiful 🐞
🐞

July 28th, 2023 12:09

A ladybird sits safely on a window
orchidee said:

Good wrote V.

July 28th, 2023 11:44

A ladybird sits safely on a window
Teddy.15 said:

Ah but she was surely seen. Gorgeous imagery dear Rose. πŸ’–

July 28th, 2023 07:14

Yellow butterfly
Neville said:



a beautifully captured .. πŸ¦‹

July 28th, 2023 03:28

A forest talking in greens
Teddy.15 said:

Your scenery is captivating dear Rose. πŸ’–

July 27th, 2023 03:32

A forest talking in greens
Pop64 said:

This read brings to life the imagery you create with your well penned and thought out words. Very well written and so enjoyable - Michael

July 26th, 2023 07:09

Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
Mario Piedra said:

May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly

So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….

July 25th, 2023 20:42

Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
Mario Piedra said:

May your spiritual caterpillar
realizes is already a beautiful
rainbow like butterfly

So fly to eternity to be one
where the sounds of silence
are elocuente and the symphony
of life shows it’s true nature….

July 25th, 2023 13:29

A forest talking in greens
hzugman said:

Very nice pictorialization of trees as a metaphor for life.,

July 25th, 2023 10:03

A forest talking in greens
Bella Shepard said:

This beautiful poem speaks so lovingly of the true essence of trees as living, breathing, sentient organisms. Thank you dear friend, may we appreciate and learn from them.

July 22nd, 2023 12:05

A forest talking in greens
Neville said:


Feels like a nice place to just sit, relax and take it all in while letting the world just slip guiltily on by .. Neville

July 21st, 2023 23:18

A forest talking in greens
orchidee said:

Good write V.

July 21st, 2023 10:13

A forest talking in greens
L. B. Mek said:

I sense a metaphor
for our MPS, poetic forest
a wonderful dedication
thank you! kind Poet
a lovely read

July 21st, 2023 03:02

Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
L. B. Mek said:

\'but today there are tiny feet
under her body
that shine like a green forest\'
so gentle, so beautiful
this a poetry balm, soothing
our aches in life
just lovely, thank you dear Poet
(i always wished I had a younger sibling)

July 21st, 2023 02:58

A forest talking in greens
LIZ said:

Beautiful scenery!! πŸ’›

July 21st, 2023 02:49

Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
Bobby O said:

I really liked this. And how cool are caterpillars?

July 20th, 2023 16:23


Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
sonal monhyung said:

You are a great nature lover and your poems can push anybody fall in love with it .

July 20th, 2023 13:27

Caterpillar sits ( poem with my sister β€˜ rainbow β€˜
orchidee said:

That\'s a lot of pairs of shoes/slippers she needs! Good write V.

July 20th, 2023 13:24

A pigeon sits
Goldfinch60 said:

We hear woodpigeons every morning when we awake, it is an uplifting sound.

Andy

July 20th, 2023 00:39

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