Comments received on poems by Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)
Red shoes
Neville said:
glad you changed your mind .. it\'s a woman\'s prerogative or so I\'m told ..
July 18th, 2023 05:33
Neville said:
glad you changed your mind .. it\'s a woman\'s prerogative or so I\'m told ..
July 18th, 2023 05:33
Umbrella
MendedFences27 said:
One umbrella in a rainstorm can only do so much. It can\'t handle the entire deluge.
A very nice poem giving an umbrella life like qualities and a caring heart. I enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 18:18
MendedFences27 said:
One umbrella in a rainstorm can only do so much. It can\'t handle the entire deluge.
A very nice poem giving an umbrella life like qualities and a caring heart. I enjoyed it. - Phil A.
July 17th, 2023 18:18
Umbrella
L. B. Mek said:
we all need to realise such umbrella\'s in our life
a lovely read, intimate and tender
thank you! dear Poet
hope you have a nice break
July 14th, 2023 04:18
L. B. Mek said:
we all need to realise such umbrella\'s in our life
a lovely read, intimate and tender
thank you! dear Poet
hope you have a nice break
July 14th, 2023 04:18
Umbrella
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet the imagery of this poem is priceless. You have described beautifully the interplay between emotional opposites in our lives. We need both to live fully as sentient beings. Incredible!
July 12th, 2023 13:04
Bella Shepard said:
Dear poet the imagery of this poem is priceless. You have described beautifully the interplay between emotional opposites in our lives. We need both to live fully as sentient beings. Incredible!
July 12th, 2023 13:04
A blue chair sits
Pop64 said:
wonderfully vivid, you\'ve made the color-blind man see.
July 12th, 2023 12:32
Pop64 said:
wonderfully vivid, you\'ve made the color-blind man see.
July 12th, 2023 12:32
Umbrella
Neville said:
I often feel like I am an umbrella pretending to be a shield .. trying to protect them .. keeping people warm, safe and dry .. I guess that\'s the nature of my work .. and as far as your authors note is concerned, I think there is a very important message contained within it .. Neville :)
July 12th, 2023 03:03
Neville said:
I often feel like I am an umbrella pretending to be a shield .. trying to protect them .. keeping people warm, safe and dry .. I guess that\'s the nature of my work .. and as far as your authors note is concerned, I think there is a very important message contained within it .. Neville :)
July 12th, 2023 03:03
Umbrella
Teddy.15 said:
At the moment it\'s 40c here in Florence and I shall tell you dear.rose you have cooled me.down with your imagery I could almost feel the soft rain. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:54
Teddy.15 said:
At the moment it\'s 40c here in Florence and I shall tell you dear.rose you have cooled me.down with your imagery I could almost feel the soft rain. 💖
July 12th, 2023 02:54
Umbrella
orchidee said:
I got all wet, cos I didn\'t want the umbrella to get wet. She didn\'t fancy getting drenched. Doh! lol.
July 12th, 2023 02:14
orchidee said:
I got all wet, cos I didn\'t want the umbrella to get wet. She didn\'t fancy getting drenched. Doh! lol.
July 12th, 2023 02:14
Grass sits quietly with friends
peto said:
Knocked another nature write out of the park
Although get completely what Teddy said
Clever
July 11th, 2023 10:39
peto said:
Knocked another nature write out of the park
Although get completely what Teddy said
Clever
July 11th, 2023 10:39
A blue chair sits
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Beautiful colors, Vb. Love the personification as well.
July 11th, 2023 09:07
Garth Rakumakoe said:
Beautiful colors, Vb. Love the personification as well.
July 11th, 2023 09:07
Grass sits quietly with friends
orchidee said:
Good write V.
It\'s a \'snail-saving\' day for me. Well, they come out on damp mornings. I put them on to a piece of grass or garden. It must be like crossing the motorway for them to cross the pavement.
July 11th, 2023 03:54
orchidee said:
Good write V.
It\'s a \'snail-saving\' day for me. Well, they come out on damp mornings. I put them on to a piece of grass or garden. It must be like crossing the motorway for them to cross the pavement.
July 11th, 2023 03:54
Grass sits quietly with friends
Teddy.15 said:
I see a huge metaphor in here. Even having one safe person in our lives is a quality not all have ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:50
Teddy.15 said:
I see a huge metaphor in here. Even having one safe person in our lives is a quality not all have ❤️
July 11th, 2023 03:50
A blue chair sits
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite colour & made me smile too 💙
July 10th, 2023 05:43
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite colour & made me smile too 💙
July 10th, 2023 05:43
Yellow butterfly
L. B. Mek said:
\'a butterfly is made of smiles\'
beautiful imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 10th, 2023 04:13
L. B. Mek said:
\'a butterfly is made of smiles\'
beautiful imagery, dear Poet
thank you!
July 10th, 2023 04:13
A blue chair sits
L. B. Mek said:
we must end chair brutality
i totally agree! lol
(in all seriousness another wonderfully
thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you)
July 10th, 2023 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
we must end chair brutality
i totally agree! lol
(in all seriousness another wonderfully
thought provoking read, dear Poet
thank you)
July 10th, 2023 04:12
A blue chair sits
orchidee said:
I sat on that blue chair - it had just been painted! Doh! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:52
orchidee said:
I sat on that blue chair - it had just been painted! Doh! lol.
July 10th, 2023 01:52
Yellow butterfly
Parisab said:
Beautifully descriptive form, displaying your enjoyment of nature-loved the imagery elements like, “the laughing leaves”
July 9th, 2023 12:52
Parisab said:
Beautifully descriptive form, displaying your enjoyment of nature-loved the imagery elements like, “the laughing leaves”
July 9th, 2023 12:52
Yellow butterfly
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is as beautiful and delicate as the butterfly, such wonderful imagery. The yellow butterfly is vibrant amid the green leaves of the tree, the tone of your words warm and comfortable. Such a fav dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:34
Bella Shepard said:
This poem is as beautiful and delicate as the butterfly, such wonderful imagery. The yellow butterfly is vibrant amid the green leaves of the tree, the tone of your words warm and comfortable. Such a fav dear poet!
July 9th, 2023 11:34
Yellow butterfly
peto said:
If a butterfly is made of smiles
You just put a butterfly on my face
July 9th, 2023 10:26
peto said:
If a butterfly is made of smiles
You just put a butterfly on my face
July 9th, 2023 10:26
A cat sits in white
LIZ said:
Peaceful! Beautiful! I\'m learning to appreciate nature!!! Really enjoyed this one!
July 8th, 2023 10:15
LIZ said:
Peaceful! Beautiful! I\'m learning to appreciate nature!!! Really enjoyed this one!
July 8th, 2023 10:15
A cat sits in white
peto said:
Enjoyed it all though first couple of lines set the tone
The cat sitting among doves
No fighting
What a world it would be if we could all get along like that
July 8th, 2023 08:00
peto said:
Enjoyed it all though first couple of lines set the tone
The cat sitting among doves
No fighting
What a world it would be if we could all get along like that
July 8th, 2023 08:00
Grey cloud
Neville said:
I know its hard when it looks dark, but just remember, every cloud has a silver lining ... 💛
July 8th, 2023 01:02
Neville said:
I know its hard when it looks dark, but just remember, every cloud has a silver lining ... 💛
July 8th, 2023 01:02
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