Comments on community poems by bernard franklin



  • Death... i see (Meadowsprings) Wow!! pretty powerful stuff for one so young. Your poem is really very...
    September 20th, 2010 08:56
  • Implausibility (Fran) Nice one Fran! I think we all have a conviction deficiency when it comes...
    September 20th, 2010 08:50
  • A FAIRIY'S SMILE (Jvl narasimha rao) Quite a complex poem Narasimha but I enjoyed it! I think we all see...
    September 12th, 2010 08:48
  • Giving It Your Best (Fran) Nice one Fran! I think if we all gave our best the world would be a better...
    September 10th, 2010 11:45
  • Friends (Nair36) Hi Rob, what a wonderful poem, beautifully written, I'm sure I speak on...
    September 10th, 2010 02:35
  • Accept Or Reject (Fran) I choose to accept you just the way you are Fran ! LOL. nice poetry and...
    September 9th, 2010 12:05
  • My Brother-in–law (AYESHABEG) Very Nice Ayeshabeg, A fitting tribute to your brother-in-law, you must...
    September 8th, 2010 01:21
  • How Thankful (Colly wally) WOW!!!!! Absolutely brilliant, easily the best poem I have read on this...
    September 8th, 2010 01:19
  • The lost soul (AYESHABEG) Hi Ayeshabeg, I really enjoyed reading your poem, It's full of poignant...
    September 7th, 2010 10:26
  • The Quiet Kid (Nair36) I knew you were writing about yourself Rob way before I got to the last...
    September 7th, 2010 10:17
  • awaken the slumbering leaders (Licia) You write a powerful message Licia, The youth of the world do need to...
    September 7th, 2010 10:07
  • A Stranger (Colly wally) Very nice Colly, Tender poignancy and beautifully written. BF
    September 7th, 2010 06:18
  • Think of you (Ovnissimo) Very nice! I enjoyed this.
    September 1st, 2010 09:47
  • I believed in you. (Breexbaby) Deeply sad and poignant poetry. But it helps to get the grief down on...
    September 1st, 2010 09:46
  • The Smile that lifts me up (Colly wally) Very , very good excellent rhyme and rhythm, the poem flows beautifully...
    September 1st, 2010 09:42
  • When my heart stops beating (Plasticmario) Hi Chadwick, first let me welcome you to P & P! I hope you enjoy this...
    August 31st, 2010 03:58
  • Voices (Nair36) Hi rob, WOW this is one sad and poignant poem! I hope to god your not...
    August 31st, 2010 03:50
  • Blizzard Of Emotions (Fran) Quite lovely, short and sweet. A charming poem almost melodic in its...
    August 30th, 2010 12:44
  • Keeping On (Colly wally) Another deeply spiritual poem from you. I loved the line " To buy the...
    August 30th, 2010 06:22
  • my MISSION (Barbara) You obviously have a mission in life Barbara, but you may have to wait...
    August 30th, 2010 06:15
  • Thank you Lord (Colly wally) First let me welcome you to P & P I hope you enjoy the site. You have...
    August 29th, 2010 00:01
  • goodbye (Barbara) A sad and poignant piece Barbara, but very well put, you must have loved...
    August 28th, 2010 23:56
  • Happiness, The Mystery (Fran) A deeply poignant poem Fran, The mystery of happiness indeed, Is something...
    August 28th, 2010 05:42
  • "Portrait of a Friend" (Barbara) What a wonderful poem Barbara! I give you 10/10 for this one. you have...
    August 27th, 2010 11:12
  • Releasing While Writing (Fran) I give you 10/10 for this one Fran, " Words flow out, catching fire on...
    August 27th, 2010 03:35
  • VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS (Dr.Sandhya Tiwari) Hello Sandhya, I think that these rapid changes in the education system...
    August 26th, 2010 11:32
  • TOMORROW (Barbara) This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like...
    August 26th, 2010 11:23
  • MIND MADE MANACLES (Dr.Sandhya Tiwari) Hi Sandhya, I really enjoyed reading your poem, and you are right of...
    August 25th, 2010 10:58
  • I HAVE LEARNT (Barbara) Very, very good Barbra, I really enjoyed this poem! You have a special way...
    August 25th, 2010 10:48
  • Surrounded By Stupidity (Fran) Nice work fran, I agree we are all surrounded by stupidity sometimes. You...
    August 25th, 2010 10:44
  • Tears (Fran) Nice work Fran, tears are a great subject, they come into all our lives at...
    August 24th, 2010 04:38
  • what matters at last (Barbara) A very nice and moving poem, written with pathos it has good structure and...
    August 24th, 2010 04:31
  • Joe (Breexbaby) Hi Bree, You must be going through some serious suffering to have written...
    August 23rd, 2010 08:38
  • Longing For a Way Out (Fran) Hi Fran, I'm going to give you 10 out of 10 for this one, I love it! Your...
    August 22nd, 2010 07:53
  • The Discovery (Fran) Hi Fran, I really enjoyed your poem, It flows well and has good rhyme and...
    August 20th, 2010 10:32
  • Thoughts of a Troubled Teen (Nair36) Your poetry is pretty good rob, even though i'm old and past it I have two...
    August 20th, 2010 10:21