Comments on community poems by bernard franklin
- Death... i see (Meadowsprings)
Wow!! pretty powerful stuff for one so young. Your poem is really very...
September 20th, 2010 08:56
- Implausibility (Fran)
Nice one Fran! I think we all have a conviction deficiency when it comes...
September 20th, 2010 08:50
- A FAIRIY'S SMILE (Jvl narasimha rao)
Quite a complex poem Narasimha but I enjoyed it! I think we all see...
September 12th, 2010 08:48
- Giving It Your Best (Fran)
Nice one Fran! I think if we all gave our best the world would be a better...
September 10th, 2010 11:45
- Friends (Nair36)
Hi Rob, what a wonderful poem, beautifully written, I'm sure I speak on...
September 10th, 2010 02:35
- Accept Or Reject (Fran)
I choose to accept you just the way you are Fran ! LOL. nice poetry and...
September 9th, 2010 12:05
- My Brother-in–law (AYESHABEG)
Very Nice Ayeshabeg, A fitting tribute to your brother-in-law, you must...
September 8th, 2010 01:21
- How Thankful (Colly wally)
WOW!!!!! Absolutely brilliant, easily the best poem I have read on this...
September 8th, 2010 01:19
- The lost soul (AYESHABEG)
Hi Ayeshabeg, I really enjoyed reading your poem, It's full of poignant...
September 7th, 2010 10:26
- The Quiet Kid (Nair36)
I knew you were writing about yourself Rob way before I got to the last...
September 7th, 2010 10:17
- awaken the slumbering leaders (Licia)
You write a powerful message Licia, The youth of the world do need to...
September 7th, 2010 10:07
- A Stranger (Colly wally)
Very nice Colly, Tender poignancy and beautifully written. BF
September 7th, 2010 06:18
- Think of you (Ovnissimo)
Very nice! I enjoyed this.
September 1st, 2010 09:47
- I believed in you. (Breexbaby)
Deeply sad and poignant poetry. But it helps to get the grief down on...
September 1st, 2010 09:46
- The Smile that lifts me up (Colly wally)
Very , very good excellent rhyme and rhythm, the poem flows beautifully...
September 1st, 2010 09:42
- When my heart stops beating (Plasticmario)
Hi Chadwick, first let me welcome you to P & P! I hope you enjoy this...
August 31st, 2010 03:58
- Voices (Nair36)
Hi rob, WOW this is one sad and poignant poem! I hope to god your not...
August 31st, 2010 03:50
- Blizzard Of Emotions (Fran)
Quite lovely, short and sweet. A charming poem almost melodic in its...
August 30th, 2010 12:44
- Keeping On (Colly wally)
Another deeply spiritual poem from you. I loved the line " To buy the...
August 30th, 2010 06:22
- my MISSION (Barbara)
You obviously have a mission in life Barbara, but you may have to wait...
August 30th, 2010 06:15
- Thank you Lord (Colly wally)
First let me welcome you to P & P I hope you enjoy the site. You have...
August 29th, 2010 00:01
- goodbye (Barbara)
A sad and poignant piece Barbara, but very well put, you must have loved...
August 28th, 2010 23:56
- Happiness, The Mystery (Fran)
A deeply poignant poem Fran, The mystery of happiness indeed, Is something...
August 28th, 2010 05:42
- "Portrait of a Friend" (Barbara)
What a wonderful poem Barbara! I give you 10/10 for this one. you have...
August 27th, 2010 11:12
- Releasing While Writing (Fran)
I give you 10/10 for this one Fran, " Words flow out, catching fire on...
August 27th, 2010 03:35
- VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS (Dr.Sandhya Tiwari)
Hello Sandhya, I think that these rapid changes in the education system...
August 26th, 2010 11:32
- TOMORROW (Barbara)
This is once again very good Barbara, You've taken a simply subject like...
August 26th, 2010 11:23
- MIND MADE MANACLES (Dr.Sandhya Tiwari)
Hi Sandhya, I really enjoyed reading your poem, and you are right of...
August 25th, 2010 10:58
- I HAVE LEARNT (Barbara)
Very, very good Barbra, I really enjoyed this poem! You have a special way...
August 25th, 2010 10:48
- Surrounded By Stupidity (Fran)
Nice work fran, I agree we are all surrounded by stupidity sometimes. You...
August 25th, 2010 10:44
- Tears (Fran)
Nice work Fran, tears are a great subject, they come into all our lives at...
August 24th, 2010 04:38
- what matters at last (Barbara)
A very nice and moving poem, written with pathos it has good structure and...
August 24th, 2010 04:31
- Joe (Breexbaby)
Hi Bree, You must be going through some serious suffering to have written...
August 23rd, 2010 08:38
- Longing For a Way Out (Fran)
Hi Fran, I'm going to give you 10 out of 10 for this one, I love it!
Your...
August 22nd, 2010 07:53
- The Discovery (Fran)
Hi Fran, I really enjoyed your poem, It flows well and has good rhyme and...
August 20th, 2010 10:32
- Thoughts of a Troubled Teen (Nair36)
Your poetry is pretty good rob, even though i'm old and past it I have two...
August 20th, 2010 10:21