Comments on community poems by TrystanBehm



  • Knight in shining armour (Heather Harrisson) I really like this write - the allegory is all too familiar to me. I am...
    January 5th, 2019 20:05
  • Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60) I needed this today! Thank you for a great write inspired such great...
    January 3rd, 2019 18:17
  • Still Frame (TrystanBehm)
    November 19th, 2018 13:16
  • Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.) A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual...
    February 8th, 2018 08:36
  • Landlubber (Rrivera138) I don\'t pretend to know the specific pretext of the emotion behind this...
    February 7th, 2018 11:12
  • Gravity (Rrivera138) I really like this. The first two lines could stand all on their own. You...
    February 7th, 2018 11:08
  • EBONY CHILL. (Fay Slimm.) This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the...
    February 7th, 2018 10:29
  • Damn Why Can\'t I Forget (Lorna) I felt the words deep inside me when reading this. Very powerful. Great...
    February 5th, 2018 15:14
  • POKER FACE (Theskyisnotblue) Great write! I know how (at least from my own perspective) this feels. It...
    February 4th, 2018 15:15
  • Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:58
  • Lady Eleanor. (Wallace) Wallace - I really like this. Won\'t pretend to know your specific...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:44
  • Paint Your Wagon (Lorna) I love this - so simple and succinct, but the emotion and thought process...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:41
  • Six Feet Down (LAWLESS) Agree that the structure adds to the delivery of the emotion. Powerful to...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:38
  • Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8) I think all of us in the NE U.S. feel this way, but couldn\'t express as...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:35
  • A Twisted Flow (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) This will rattle around in my head for a long time. Always amazed at the...
    February 1st, 2018 12:45
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