Comments on community poems by TrystanBehm



  • Knight in shining armour (Heather Harrisson) I really like this write - the allegory is all too familiar to me. I am...
    January 5th, 2019 20:05
  • Day of Bach. (Goldfinch60) I needed this today! Thank you for a great write inspired such great...
    January 3rd, 2019 18:17
  • Still Frame (TrystanBehm)
    November 19th, 2018 13:16
  • Behind and Between. (Fay Slimm.) A sentiment I feel strongly about so beautifully articulated - as usual...
    February 8th, 2018 08:36
  • Landlubber (Rrivera138) I don\'t pretend to know the specific pretext of the emotion behind this...
    February 7th, 2018 11:12
  • Gravity (Rrivera138) I really like this. The first two lines could stand all on their own. You...
    February 7th, 2018 11:08
  • EBONY CHILL. (Fay Slimm.) This poem transcended me into a place where I could feel the cold, see the...
    February 7th, 2018 10:29
  • Damn Why Can\'t I Forget (Lorna) I felt the words deep inside me when reading this. Very powerful. Great...
    February 5th, 2018 15:14
  • POKER FACE (Theskyisnotblue) Great write! I know how (at least from my own perspective) this feels. It...
    February 4th, 2018 15:15
  • Too Long. (Fay Slimm.) Simply beautiful. Reminds me of a hours long train ride from Edinburgh to...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:58
  • Lady Eleanor. (Wallace) Wallace - I really like this. Won\'t pretend to know your specific...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:44
  • Paint Your Wagon (Lorna) I love this - so simple and succinct, but the emotion and thought process...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:41
  • Winter\'s Wrath (Christina8) I think all of us in the NE U.S. feel this way, but couldn\'t express as...
    February 2nd, 2018 09:35
  • A Twisted Flow (+3) (Kurt Philip Behm) This will rattle around in my head for a long time. Always amazed at the...
    February 1st, 2018 12:45
  • Hush (Baylee) Love the imagery here. It is magical the mute that befalls the earth...
    January 31st, 2018 08:33
  • Who, When, Where, Why, and How (Little_Write) I wonder this all the time. Not only the hurt that I have experienced but...
    January 31st, 2018 08:30
  • Specialness. (Fay Slimm.) The imagery and analogy of love, loss and seasons is amazing. Such a great...
    January 31st, 2018 08:20
  • Special Table (W c) This created a swell of emotion deep inside of me. What a great write, and...
    January 31st, 2018 08:16
  • Full time dreamer (Aa Harvey) This resonates with me for so many reasons. Thanks for sharing. Needed...
    January 30th, 2018 08:44
  • Music In My Soul. (Goldfinch60) I really like this - I couldn\'t exist without music, or at least not...
    January 30th, 2018 08:43
  • Soft Wind (EmiliasLillith) Great imagery! Love the subtleness of the emotion.
    January 25th, 2018 10:16
  • Clarity (TrystanBehm) Thanks Tony! Just getting started on here, so really appreciate the...
    January 25th, 2018 09:44
  • Anxiety Is (Naeners) I really like this. I associate with it deeply. I often wish anxiety had a...
    January 25th, 2018 09:38
  • What\'s Heaven Sent (Kurt Philip Behm) One day I hope you write like you, Dad.
    January 24th, 2018 14:45